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the love that you gave: Outtakes and Timestamps

Summary:

What it says on the tin.

Notes:

I have several scenes for the original fic that I drafted, but they never made it into the final story, for one reason or another. I thought I'd go ahead and post them (as I punch them up a bit) because people seemed interested, and... they're there, so what the hell... I'll also include some explanation, where pertinent, about why I didn't include a particular piece.

And, also, a few readers asked to see certain scenes that I never really planned to write for the original fic and some of those requests sparked some ideas, so I will draft timestamps if/when they come to me and as I have time.

This first Chapter is for KippyVee, who, after working soooo hard on those last few enormous chapters of 'the love that you gave', lamented that Steve didn't get to hear Danny call himself Steve's fiancé at the very end. I figure, this is the very least I can do to thank her. Since this is a little gift for her, I did not ask her to beta it. All mistakes are mine.

Chapters will be added as I get to them - no schedule or plan or particular order. I'll add tags as I add chapters. I feel like this is going to be an 'I feel like writing something but I don't particularly feel like torturing over it' series, so these chapters might be a little rougher than what I usually post - sorry in advance.

A/N - update:
This fic has grown a little more than I had originally envisioned and the timestamps sort of jump all over the place. So, for those of you who prefer a linear story (like I sometimes do), here is the list of chapters in chronological order, in case you want to read them that way.

Chapter 4 - Timestamp: Danno
Chapter 3 - Outtake conversation
Chapter 1 - Timestamp: Danny says 'yes'
Chapter 8 - Conversations with Mary (this chapter spans a couple years, but the last conversation comes before Chapter 5, chronologically)
Chapter 5 - Timestamp: January 21, 2018
Chapter 9 - Timestamp: September 2018
Chapter 2 - Timestamp: September 2019
Chapter 6 - Timestamp: September 2023
Chapter 7 - Conversations with Lou (this chapter spans several years, but the last part is at the furthest point in the future.)

(See the end of the work for more notes.)

Chapter 1: Timestamp: Danny says 'yes'

Chapter Text

 

(This follows immediately after the end of ‘the love that you gave’.)

 

 

Danny abruptly excuses himself and the giant he was talking to looks confused but just turns and walks away. Danny, meanwhile, is bee-lining toward Steve, jockeying through the crowd and trying not to jostle people, but he’s completely focused on his goal and several SEALs glare at him when he bumps them as he passes. By the time Danny’s half-way there, Steve has already noticed that he is heading his way and is tracking him, eyes darting back and forth between Danny and the two guys he’s talking to. Danny can see that Steve is scanning his face, and his body is tensing, a slight look of concern creeping into his expression; he knows that Steve is wondering if everything is alright. Everything is alright – it’s better than alright, actually.

 

By the time Danny works his way to the bar, he’s a bundle of nerves - jumpy and excited - but conversely, he also feels a sense of calm that he hasn’t felt in years. Steve pauses in what he’s saying as Danny takes the last couple steps toward him and he must register something on Danny’s face because he gives him a bemused smile.

 

“Hey, Danny, is everything…” Steve starts, but Danny steps between Steve and the SEALs he’s talking to and Steve stops, cocking his head in confusion.

 

“Askmeagain,” Danny says hurriedly, the words jumbled together.

 

“What…?” Steve shifts his stance. “Uh, Danny, this is…” Steve gestures with the hand that’s holding his beer to the SEALs who are at Danny’s back now.

 

Danny looks over his shoulder and spares them the briefest glance. “Yeah, hi, nice to meet you…” he mumbles quickly and dismissively and turns a penetrating gaze back to Steve.

 

“Ask me again,” he repeats a little more slowly, staring at Steve with the slightest hint of a smile on his face.

 

Steve blinks a few times, his mind not quite catching up with Danny and what’s he’s saying. “Danny… uh,” Steve bends a tiny bit and lowers his voice. “You’re being kind of rude…” he says, flicking his eyes apologetically over Danny’s shoulder to his friends.

 

Danny rolls his eyes and turns around to face Steve’s friends. “Hi. Danny Williams… nice to meet you,” he says and hastily grabs and shakes both of their hands, then turns back around to face Steve again. “Better? Can we get to this now?”

 

Steve stares at Danny, blinking owlishly. After a few seconds he starts to shift his gaze back and forth between Danny and his comrades, who look as bewildered as Steve.

 

Steven!” Danny barks, interrupting his slow thought process, and Steve shifts his focus back to his partner.

 

“What? Danny…?” Admittedly, he’s had a few beers and his thoughts are probably not tracking as fast as they normally would.

 

Danny reaches out and takes the beer from Steve’s hand and sets it on the bar. Steve looks at Danny and then looks at the beer and then looks back at Danny. “Ask. Me. Again,” Danny demands for the third time.

 

Steve’s full attention snaps to Danny and he stands up straight in surprise, comprehension slowly dawning.

 

Danny nods and twirls his hand in a 'hurry up' gesture. 

 

Steve visibly swallows and then blinks at Danny a few more times before half of his mouth quirks into a – finally – knowing smile.

 

"There you go..." Danny says, as he sees the final pieces slot into place.

 

“Danny…” Steve says a little breathlessly. “Will you…”

 

“YES!” Danny cuts him off before he can even finish.

 

The rest of Steve’s smile materializes, dazzling and exultant and Danny reaches up to grab the back of Steve’s neck, pulling him down into a searing kiss.

 

Steve breaks the kiss after just a couple of seconds. “Yes?” he asks, laughing and seeking confirmation, gripping Danny’s face in both hands and searching Danny’s eyes for the truth of it.

 

“Yeah, babe… the answer is yes,” Danny affirms, and his eyes are shining and Steve’s eyes are shining and they’re both laughing, and Steve bends in and kisses him again while Danny clutches his lapels like he’s never, ever going to let go, and everything is absolutely – utterly - perfect.

 

 

 

A/N: 

Sigh... I know...so sappy!  Can't resist these boys in love...

The reason I didn't write it into the actual story was because I really felt like that moment at the end of the original fic was Danny's moment.  He had gone through this whole emotional journey - and the moment wasn't really meant to be about him SAYING  'yes' - rather, it was about his own personal, internal realization that he had gotten to the place where he WANTED to say yes.  So, as much as I knew people really wanted to see that moment, I just couldn't bring myself to write the ending that way.  I hope this coda (of sorts) satisfies!

I will entertain other timestamp requests - so if there's something in particular you want to see, go ahead and pitch it... but, fyi, sometimes something comes to me and sometimes not, so no promises!