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byeast ep.15 critiques + writing advice by eroseye
Fandoms: Cookie Run (Video Game), Cookie Run: Kingdom
17 Mar 2026
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Hello!! Right now, you're looking at a silly and innocuous (I hope) series of constructive criticism for Cookie: Run Kingdom's most recent update. I believe that no further introduction is required./ref
But before you proceed, I would like to apprise you all that:
1. I'm no professional, and the following critique is bound to have TONS of flaws. I wrote this with the plain intention to share the thoughts that have been hedging my brain since the latest Beast-Yeast episode dropped.
2. To those who have not caught up with episode 15 of byeast, prepare to be met with loads of SPOILERS!!!!!I'm always open to feedback and suggestions.