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The following story is a fictional account of an encounter between a young girl and her father.
The events described are not based on any real events, locations, or people.
If this will offend you or for any other reason be inappropriate for you to read, please go find something else to read.
Again, this is completely fictional, and the author does not condone activities such as this. This is simply for fantasy / entertainment purposes.
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A reader who wrote to me about Angie’s New Swimsuit suggested I retell the story from Angie’s point of view. Well, here it is. I hope you enjoy it.
If you like this story, kudos and comments would be most appreciated.
Feel free to write me at [email protected] .
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Now, let's have a little fun...
ANGIE'S NEW SWIMSUIT – RETOLD FROM ANGIE’S POINT OF VIEW
I was in the shower while Mommy and Joey got ready to go clothes shopping. She opened the shower curtain and reminded me, “Today’s the day sweetie. I’m taking your brother out for new clothes so you’ll have Daddy all to yourself. This is your chance to convince him let you keep that tiny new swimsuit - do a good job!”
“I know, Mommy. I promise I’ll do it just like you told me.”
“You look so sexy in it, there’s no way he’ll be able to resist you!”
I giggled. “Great!” Then she winked at me and closed the shower curtain. I did an extra good job showering, making sure I didn’t miss any parts, especially the important parts. That felt good. I don’t know why, but it felt really good when Mommy winked at me like that. I was really nervous. I wanted to be allowed to wear my new green bikini on vacation this year, but Mommy said that Daddy can be a prude sometimes. She said he probably wouldn’t let me wear it, because I’m only nine, but there was one way I may be able to change his mind. I’ll do what she told me, but if he’s gonna be a prude, he may not even let me do that!
I texted my friend Suzie. “It’s time!”
“I’m so jealous – I hope he lets you.”
“Me too. Kinda nervous.”
“If u r afraid, I’ll do it. He’s hot!”
“I’ll tell ya later.”
“Okay, be a slut!”
I looked at myself in the mirror. My hair was still wet, but I had dried myself off other than that. Mommy is so lucky with her big boobs. I don’t have boobs at all yet, my chest is totally flat. I don’t see how Daddy is gonna want me with a chest as flat as a boy’s. But I guess my legs look okay. I mean, I don’t shave them or anything but they are naturally smooth, and I think the swimming and dancing have made them a little muscular. I think my face is kinda pretty, and my teeth are sparkling white, my eyes are big and blue, and I like my hair. It’s long and dark, almost black. It looks even darker when it’s wet like this. I’m too young to have any hair between my legs, but if I did, I think it would be black, too.
I took a couple of deep breaths, and put my white bathrobe on. I was still nervous, and I started walking downstairs. Then I saw Daddy in his recliner, and it looked like he was falling asleep. I ran down the rest of the way to wake him up.
“Daddy, Mommy got me a nice bathing suit for the trip! Can I show you?”
“Sure sweetie, I’d love to see it!”
“Okay… be right back!” I ran back up the stairs.
In my room, I put on the tiny little neon green bikini. It looked good in the mirror, like it fit perfectly. Then I put the robe back on and ran back downstairs to Daddy. I didn’t want Mommy to be disappointed in me so I couldn’t chicken out. I said, “You ready for my big reveal, Daddy?”
“Yes, sweetie, let’s see that new swimsuit!”
I tried to do it just like Suzie told me. I looked Daddy right in his eyes, and I turned sideways. I kept looking at his eyes while I undid the belt on my robe. I showed him just my shoulder, then I let a little more of the robe drop. I really dragged this part out. Daddy was smiling, but I could tell he didn’t really like the bikini. But most of all, he looked happy, especially when the bathrobe was on the floor. It did kind of look like he was checking out my body, and I think he liked it. I noticed he took a good look at my legs and my butt, and I was really surprised that he was still looking and still smiling.
“Tada… do you like it, Daddy?”
“It’s… it’s beautiful Angie! Did your mom help you pick that out?”
“Yup!”
“Okay sweetie, you look wonderful! Now, why don’t you run back upstairs and put some clothes on before you catch a cold?”
“You don’t like it, do you, Daddy?”
“Oh, don’t be silly, I love it!”
“Mommy said it may be ‘too much’ for you, but I should try to see if I could change your mind.”
“Angie, you look amazing in anything you wear. I’ll be okay with it, I just have to get used to my daughter looking so… grown up, you know?”
“So, you’re not going to make us return it?”
"No, it’s okay sweetie”.
I know daddies don’t know much about clothes shopping, but even I know you can’t return swimwear or underwear. He is stuck paying for this bikini whether he likes it or not, so he may as well like it. But I’m starting to think I can really make him like it. Maybe he’s not such a prude after all.
I jumped on Daddy in the recliner. He still had his robe on from when he had taken a shower before I took mine, and all I had on was the bikini. It was a little chilly wearing so little, but Daddy felt nice and warm when I hugged him.
I put my right arm over his left shoulder. “Thanks! I love you daddy!”
“I love you too, beautiful!”
Oooh, he called me “beautiful”. That felt really good.
I leaned back against my Daddy’s chest, resting my head on his shoulder. He seemed to like the smell of my hair. I liked how my arm felt on his warm neck. I wanted to feel some more of him, but he had that stupid bathrobe on. I started moving around a little bit, and I could feel my Daddy’s thingy with my butt! I moved my butt a little on purpose, and he felt so warm there! I think he started to get excited! It felt like his thingy was growing!
“Okay Angie, what do you say you go back upstairs and get dressed now, sweetie?”
“I like sitting on your lap, can I stay here?”
“Okay, but just a few more minutes. I want to go get dressed before Mommy and Joey get back, hopefully with some pizza.”
“Okay.” I moved my butt even more, totally on purpose. He was definitely liking this! He didn’t say anything at all. But I could feel that he liked it! Yes, his thingy was really growing now! Mommy had said that if I could get his thingy to do this, I would be able to do whatever I want, plus keep the bikini.
“Mommy’s friends all say she’s so lucky, they think you’re hot.”
“What? That’s silly honey, I’m just an average guy, and I love your Mommy very much.”
“I know.”
I remembered what Suzie had told me, about how once a guy has it in his mind that he wants to “do” you, if you want him to, you can’t let him change his mind. So I said, “But my friends all say it too. They say they’re jealous of me, having such a cute daddy!”
“Oh, well that’s very nice, I’ll take that as a compliment.”
“Suzie said she wishes she could go on vacation with us and see you in a swimsuit…” Then I whispered in my Daddy’s ear “...or even naked!”
I wasn’t sure if he would freak out about that, but I knew for sure he liked it because he was really getting big down there by my butt.
“Ha ha, well, that’s very inappropriate sweetie, and you can tell Suzie I said that.”
“Okay.”
“Okay. Now let’s get dressed for dinner.”
“Mommy and Joey won’t be back for a couple of hours.”
“Okay, so five more minutes, and then we’ll go get dressed.”
“Okay.”
But I didn’t want this fun to end there, so I said, “Daddy, your thing feels nice.”
“What thing, Angie?”
I grinned at him and said, “This thing Daddy!” and I reached into his bathrobe and touched it!
“Okay, well, that’s inappropriate. Daughters don’t touch their daddies like that sweetie.”
“Okay, then can I see it?”
“No! Please, let’s go get dressed.”
“I won’t tell anybody, please, I just wanna see it!”
That’s when I was afraid Daddy was gonna start being a prude again.
“I’m sorry Angie, you can’t see it. Please go get dressed.”
But I noticed his thingy hadn’t gotten any smaller.
“Oh, okay Daddy.”
I decided I wasn’t going to give up that easy. I wondered what Suzie would do. I thought about how disappointed Mommy would be. I really wanted to see what he looked like down there, up close. And I wanted to be able to wear that bikini on the trip. So I just reached out and spread his robe wide open!
“Now Angie, I said you can’t do that!”
I kinda gave him a smirk. And then I touched him right there!
“No, Angie, don’t!”
And I put my hand around it and started to massage it. “It feels nice daddy.”
“You shouldn’t be doing that sweetie!”
“I know.” I looked Daddy in the eyes again, played with his thing some more, and sat back down on top of him in the chair. I got real comfortable sitting on Daddy. I put my face against his face. Even though he had just shaved a little while ago, his cheek felt a little rough against mine. I put my leg up against one of his legs. By this point I was totally playing with his thing. It was so big and warm and hard!
“What’s that stuff?” I asked, pointing to the water that was coming out from where he pees.
“That comes out when a guy is getting excited, when he’s feeling really good.”
“Oh.”
“Yes.”
“So, what I’m doing feels good?”
“Yes.”
I had his robe all the way open. I really concentrated on making Daddy’s thing feel good, moving my hands all over it, nice and slow, up and down, just really trying to make Daddy like it. But my hands were kind of small, and his thing was so big, I hoped I was doing it right. It’s funny, but just doing that made my own thing feel kind of nice. Like, I felt like I was getting excited, too.
Daddy had stopped talking. He just leaned back in the chair and was breathing real deep, sometimes I would see him watching what I was doing to him with my hands.
“Suzie says it’s fun to kiss one.”
“Well, that’s very inappropriate, Suzie is way too young to talk like that!”
Challenge accepted. Now I’m gonna make him let me do it!
“So, can I daddy?”
I think he knew I wasn’t gonna accept “No” for an answer. He’s such a good Daddy, he never wants to hurt my feelings. So I stropped playing with him with my hands. I looked him right in the eye and grinned at him. I lowered my face down there. I kissed him down there, right on his big hard thing! Then I licked the top, just a little. That wet stuff tasted a little salty, but it was okay. I remembered what Suzie told me, to do it just like in those videos we sometimes watched in her room. I opened my mouth nice and wide and put it over the top of my Daddy’s thing. I know I had him – and my bikini – at that point because he actually moaned.
“I know you like it Daddy.”
I totally went for it now. I closed my lips over that big thing and slid my mouth up and down, up and down, repeating it. Once in a while, I took my mouth off and went at it from the side, looking my Daddy in his eyes. I was really getting into it. I may even have been getting a bit carried away, but I decided to do more, like I always see in those videos, so with my hand I started playing real nice and gentle with his big balls.
Suddenly, it was like nothing else existed or mattered. I’d forgotten about Suzie, and Mommy, and even Joey and his clothes. All I wanted to do was play with Daddy and his wonderful thingy. I may only be nine, but I know how to make a man feel good! All I really cared about at that point was having fun with that huge – as Susie would call it – cock!
I think he really liked what I was doing.
“Okay baby, please stop or I’m gonna shoot in your mouth!”
“Shoot what?”
“The stuff that comes out when I get super excited like this.”
“Oh you mean that white stuff that can make a baby?”
“Yes sweetheart, that’s right. You don’t want that in your mouth. And how do you even know about that?”
“Suzie and I watch videos sometimes.”
I hoped I hadn’t just gotten Suzie into some kind of trouble.
“Okay, so it’s a good thing we stopped.”
“Or else what?”
“Or else you would have been grossed out completely.”
“No I wouldn’t. I promise.”
“No baby, you wouldn’t like it, I know it.”
Mommy is right, he can be a little bit of a prude. But at least he didn’t seem to care about Susie and me watching those videos!
I just giggled. “Okay.”
I sat back on top of my Daddy, with his robe open, and my cute little bikini still on. I put my leg back up over his legs. I held his cheeks and gave him a big kiss. He didn’t even try to stop me when I put my lips completely on his. Then he really shocked me when he sucked my tongue into his mouth! It just felt so good. So as I kept on kissing him, I slid my bottom onto his lap. I remembered what Susie texted me, about being a slut. So I kind of rubbed my thingy against Daddy’s big thingy – I mean cock. I was so happy at this point that Suzie had taught me all about this stuff and watched those videos with me. Yes, I slid my little pussy around on Daddy’s huge cock and it felt wonderful!
I took my hands off my Daddy’s face, and I reached down and pushed the bikini bottom out of the way just enough that Daddy could see my pussy. He had a kind of scared look on his face, but I know deep down that he wanted me to do this. And I knew for sure that I wanted to! So I lifted myself up, put my pussy over Daddy’s cock, and let it go inside me. It took a few times of me sliding up and down, but eventually, I got it all the way in. It felt so nice. And it looked nice too. Daddy was all big and hairy down there, but, being only nine, I was a lot smaller and I didn’t have any hair at all. I felt better than I ever had before, especially down there.
Daddy then closed his eyes while we kept on kissing, and since he was on the chair, he couldn’t move much but I kept moving my body up and down to make him feel really good. Susie is gonna love it when I tell her about this, she’s gonna be so jealous, I’m actually lucky enough to let my daddy inside me like this, fucking me as she would call it!
And Daddy was feeling me all over. His hands felt so big and rough and warm, and it was awesome the way he felt my shoulders, my legs, and even my butt!
“Daddy, this feels so good!” I was starting to breathe kind of heavy, I guess from all the moving around I was doing but also because of how good it felt to have Daddy's cock all the way inside of my little pussy.
"Angie, baby, you're so beautiful and sexy... Daddy loves you so much!"
"I know Daddy, I love you too!"
I was almost getting nervous, I hoped I wasn’t hurting him, but from the way he was acting, it was hard to tell for sure.
I didn’t know what was going to happen next, but I was pretty sure I would like whatever it was.
“You can see that stuff now if you want, Angie baby.”
"Do it inside me!"
And he did.
“Ohhhhhhhhh, ohhhhhh" was all Daddy said when I felt his cock stiffen even more and then I could feel more wet stuff coming out of it inside my little pussy.
I don’t know what happened next, but my entire body shook and felt all tingly, especially down by my pussy. It was amazing, and even better than I’d ever even imagined it would be to have a man inside me, fucking my tight little pussy with his big hard cock!
We then both just said there, holding each other, and catching our breath.
My Daddy’s cock just kind of got small and plopped out of me.
“I better go get dressed.” I told him.
“I told you that twenty minutes ago baby.”
“I know, but this was more fun.”
“It was. Let’s remember to forget all about this.”
“About what?”
Daddy nodded right along with me “Exactly.”
I climbed off Daddy and out of his recliner. Then I looked at him and smiled, and I pulled my bikini bottom back so it was on right.
“Oh look daddy, there it is!” I said, pointing to the wet patch on my bikini bottom. I could even feel a little bit of his wet stuff running down my leg.
He just grinned at me.
An hour later or so, we were all gathered around the kitchen table.
Joey was so glad to be back home from shopping. And Daddy was thrilled that Joey and Mommy had remembered to bring pizza home.
When Daddy and Joey got up from the table to refill their soda glasses, Mommy gave me a quick look, “Well?”
“There won’t be any problem with keeping the bikini.”
“That’s my sexy little girl.”
Then I texted Suzie. “It was soooooo awesome!”
“Lucky bitch!”