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You Got A Fast Car

Summary:

Your car breaks down. A girl with sad eyes and a sharp tongue gives you directions. You fall in love.

It's more complicated than that, of course. But also, it's exactly that simple.

Notes:

This fic is inspired by the song "Fast Car" by Tracy Chapman. I've heard this song before but Tracy's version made me immediately think of Ellie and so I wanted to begin writing a story inspired by the song. The hope, the escape, the struggle and a happy ending that Ellie deserves.

This is a modern AU with no outbreak, no infected, just two people trying to find their way to each other.

Tags will be updated as chapters are posted. Mind the rating.

The best way to read this fic is by listening to the song while reading it. Trust me.

Chapter Text

The engine made a sound like a dying animal before the car gave up entirely.

You guided it to the shoulder of the road, hands tight on the steering wheel as momentum carried you the last few feet. When it finally stopped, you sat there in the silence, watching steam curl from beneath the hood into the darkening sky.

"No," you whispered. "No, no, no."

You tried the ignition. Nothing. Again. The engine clicked uselessly, mocking you.

Outside, the sun was setting over flat fields that stretched endlessly in every direction. You'd passed a town a mile or so back. A nothing town. The kind of place people drove through without remembering.

You grabbed your phone. Two percent battery. Of course.

"Okay," you said to no one. "Okay. This is fine."

It wasn't fine.

You'd left with a bag of clothes, four hundred dollars, and a plan that now seemed laughably naive. Drive until you hit a city. Any city. Find a job. Start over. Leave behind the life that had been suffocating you slowly for years.

You hadn't planned for the car to die in the middle of nowhere.

Grabbing your bag, you started walking back toward town.

 

The convenience store was called "Mel's" according to the flickering sign, though one of the letters had burned out so it just read "M l's" against the purple dusk. A few pickup trucks sat in the parking lot. A dog slept on the sidewalk and didn't move when you stepped over it.

Inside, fluorescent lights buzzed overhead. The store smelled like coffee that had been sitting too long and something artificial, like those tree shaped air fresheners. Country music played softly from speakers you couldn't see.

You needed to find a phone. A mechanic. Somewhere to stay. Your mind raced through the list of problems while your feet carried you down an aisle without purpose.

You turned the corner and collided directly with someone.

Items scattered everywhere. Cans rolling across the linoleum. A box of crackers hit your foot. You stumbled backward, catching yourself on a shelf of chips that crinkled loudly under your hand.

"Shit, sorry, I wasn't..."

You looked up and the words died in your throat.

She was already crouching down, grabbing at the fallen items, a mess of auburn hair falling across her face. When she looked up at you, green eyes sharp with annoyance, something strange happened in your chest. A skip. A stutter. Like your heart had briefly forgotten its rhythm.

"You okay?" she asked. Her voice was rougher than you expected. She stood, arms full of cans, and you realized she was wearing a red work vest. An employee.

"I'm so sorry," you managed. "I wasn't watching where I was going."

"Yeah, I noticed."

She wasn't smiling, but there was something in her expression that wasn't quite unfriendly either. Guarded, maybe. Like she was deciding what to make of you.

"I can help pick this up," you offered, bending down.

"I got it."

You both reached for the same can of beans. Your fingers brushed against hers. She pulled back quickly, like she'd touched something hot.

"Sorry," you said again. You were saying that too much.

She shook her head slightly, tucking the auburn hair behind her ear. You noticed a tattoo on her forearm, something fern like with a moth, delicate lines disappearing beneath her sleeve.

"You're not from around here," she said. It wasn't a question.

"Is it that obvious?"

She looked at you then. Really looked. Taking in your rumpled clothes, the bag on your shoulder, the exhaustion you could feel written across your face.

"Little bit." She almost smiled. Almost. "We don't get a lot of people just passing through. Nothing here worth stopping for."

"My car broke down about a mile up the road. I was hoping to find a phone or maybe someone who knows a mechanic."

She nodded toward the counter at the front of the store. "Phone's up there. There's only one mechanic in town. Old Bill. He's good but he's slow and he's probably drunk by now. Won't be able to look at anything until morning."

Your stomach sank. "Is there somewhere to stay? A motel or something?"

"There's the Pine Lodge about half a mile down Main Street. It's not much but it's clean. Barb runs it, she's nice."

"Thank you." You meant it more than the simple words could convey.

She shrugged, balancing the cans against her hip. "Phone's free for local calls. Long distance costs extra but nobody checks."

She started to turn away, then paused. Looked back at you over her shoulder.

"I'm Ellie, by the way."

"Y/N."

Something flickered in her eyes. Recognition, maybe, though that made no sense. You'd never been here before. Never met her before. You would have remembered.

"Good luck with your car, Y/N."

She disappeared down another aisle, leaving you standing there among the scattered crackers you'd failed to help pick up, your heart doing that strange stuttering thing again.

You made your way to the counter. An older woman sat behind it, reading a magazine, barely glancing up when you approached.

"Phone's there, honey. Local's free."

"Thank you. Um, do you have the number for Old Bill? The mechanic?"

She scribbled it on a napkin and slid it toward you. You dialed. It rang six times before a gruff voice answered, clearly irritated at being disturbed.

The conversation was short. Yes, he could look at it. No, not tonight. Tomorrow morning, earliest. Could be a quick fix, could be a few days depending on the problem. Hard to say without seeing it.

A few days.

You had maybe enough money for three nights at a cheap motel, plus food, plus whatever the repairs would cost. The math wasn't working in your favor.

"Bad news?"

You turned. Ellie had appeared at the end of the counter, arms now empty, watching you with an expression you couldn't quite read.

"Could be worse," you said, which wasn't really an answer.

"Pine Lodge is that way." She pointed left out the window. "Tell Barb that Ellie sent you, she'll give you the good room."

"There's a good room?"

That almost smile again. "There's a less bad room."

You laughed despite everything. It surprised you, the sound of it. You couldn't remember the last time you'd laughed.

Ellie's expression shifted. Softened slightly at the edges.

"Store's open until midnight if you need anything," she said. "I'm here most nights."

"Most nights?"

"Every night, actually." She said it flatly, like a fact about the weather. "Someone's gotta be."

There was a story there. You could feel it, heavy beneath the surface of her words. But you were a stranger and she owed you nothing and you had your own problems to deal with.

"Thank you, Ellie. Really."

She nodded once, already turning back toward the aisles.

You pushed open the door, the little bell above it chiming your exit. The night air was cool now, carrying the smell of grass and distant rain. The dog still slept on the sidewalk. The flickering sign buzzed overhead.

You started walking toward Pine Lodge, toward a lumpy mattress and an uncertain tomorrow.

But something made you glance back at the store. Through the window, you could see Ellie behind the counter now, the older woman gone. She had a book open but she wasn't reading it. She was looking out the window.

Looking at you.

When your eyes met, she looked away quickly, down at her book, and even from this distance you could see the slight color rising in her cheeks.

Your heart did that thing again.

You turned and kept walking, the weight of your bag on your shoulder and something new sitting in your chest alongside all the worry and exhaustion. Something small and warm and entirely unexpected.

You didn't believe in fate. You didn't believe in signs or destiny or things happening for a reason.

But standing in that parking lot, looking back at a stranger through a dirty window, you felt something shift. Like a key turning in a lock you hadn't known existed.

Like the beginning of something.

 

The Pine Lodge was exactly as advertised. The "less bad" room had a bed that sagged in the middle, a TV that only picked up three channels, and a bathroom where the hot water took four minutes to arrive.

But the sheets were clean and Barb had smiled when you mentioned Ellie's name, something knowing in her eyes that you were too tired to examine.

You lay in the dark, listening to trucks pass on the distant highway, thinking about green eyes and auburn hair and the way she'd said your name like she was testing how it felt in her mouth.

Tomorrow you'd deal with the car. Tomorrow you'd figure out the money. Tomorrow the panic would set back in and you'd have to be practical.

But tonight, just for tonight, you let yourself wonder about the girl in the convenience store who worked every night because someone had to.

You fell asleep without meaning to, your last thought not about your broken car or your empty bank account or the life you'd fled from.

Your last thought was of her.