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Chapter 1: When Logic and Otome Games Don’t Mix
Izecaiyada had never been someone who fit into predefined molds. At 35 years old, it was hard to guess her actual age. Her appearance was deceptive—many would swear she was between 17 and 22. Smooth skin untouched by time, deep and thoughtful eyes, energetic gestures, and a mischievous smile made her seem much younger, much freer.
Born under the sign of Pisces and in the Year of the Snake, Izecaiyada possessed a rare combination: an almost magical intuition, typical of her astrological sign, and a sharp, analytical mind—strategic and calculating—that allowed her to unravel even the most complex video game plots, no matter how twisted. Her emotional depth led her to live intensely, yet also to question everything, reflect deeply, and search for answers in the most unexpected places.
The Mexican gamer had grown up in a world where the lines between reality and fiction blurred easily. From a young age, she had developed a profound love for video games—but not just any kind: otome games were one of her greatest obsessions. She had played almost all of them, from classics to the latest releases, in English, Japanese, and sometimes even in fan-translated versions with questionable grammar. Every time she discovered a new title, she didn’t just play it—she became part of its world. Her notebooks were filled with route maps, decision trees, and detailed notes about characters. Among her online friends, she had earned the title of expert.
She was the kind of player who wouldn’t settle for what the game offered at face value. Every detail, every option, every word on the screen was analyzed like a secret formula. But despite her skill, frustration was inevitable. And, like any devoted gamer, she never held her tongue when things didn’t make sense.
Although her daily life wasn’t as adventurous as her virtual ones, she felt most alive when immersed in the romance and drama of those stories. Every route was an adventure, every character a mystery, every choice an escape from the monotony of real life. That thrill kept her going.
But at that very moment, tablet in hand, Izecaiyada wasn’t just playing. She was about to face something she had never experienced before: an otome game that would challenge her in ways even her sharpest skills couldn’t anticipate.
Was she ready for what was coming? Or would her unrelenting need to question everything launch her into an adventure the game itself couldn’t foresee?
Pisces Izecaiyada Spends 10 Million on the Black Market
Izecaiyada, as any seasoned otome player, knew exactly what she was doing. She was an expert in these fictional worlds, with years of experience and a passion for uncovering every hidden corner of romantic routes, tangled plots, and complex characters. Her tablet—loaded with the latest trending otome—was her loyal partner in the daily war against reality.
She was on a crucial mission. Everything had gone smoothly up until the black market stage, with Aries by her side. The market, equal parts eerie and intriguing, was where the most dangerous—and expensive—transactions took place. But Izecaiyada wasn’t worried. She had, as always, come prepared.
Aries
(With a confident smile, glancing around as they walked through the market shadows)
"Pick whatever you need. Don’t hold back. I’ve got it covered."
Izecaiyada
(Out loud, eyes locked on the tablet screen, laughing nervously)
"Cover it? Please! You know I’m a math genius. Not a single coin gets wasted. I’ve got this under control!"
In the game, however, the protagonist seemed to have other plans. A few clicks later, the transaction was done. The price the vendor had named for a rare material needed for a crucial upgrade was... outrageous. Izecaiyada froze at the number flashing on the screen.
Ten million.
Ten. Million.
She was stunned. This was peak absurdity.
Izecaiyada
(Eyes wide, hands in the air, staring at the screen in disbelief)
"WHAT?! Girl, no! Why would you pay that much?! This is insane! Aren’t transactions supposed to be strategic?! HAGGLE! Tell him you’re broke, tell him anything—but do something!"
On-screen, the merchants laughed with that smug grin only video game characters could pull off. Aries, unfazed as ever, observed with infuriating calm. The deal was done, and all that remained was his comment—a comment Izecaiyada was definitely not ready for.
Aries
(In the most relaxed tone, as if discussing the price of coffee)
"Relax, sweetheart. With me, you don’t have to worry about things like money. It’s not an issue."
Izecaiyada fell back in her chair, utterly dumbfounded. Not from surprise, but from a mix of rage and disbelief.
Izecaiyada
(Out loud, nearing madness)
"WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY?! Money’s not a problem?! THEN WHY EVEN HAVE PRICES?!"
(Starts tapping furiously on the screen)
"Explain this, game! What kind of logic is this? Who writes these scripts?! Who came up with these ridiculous prices?!"
Aries, calm and composed as ever, offered yet another line—one that, despite the chaos in her head, could melt any woman’s heart.
Aries
(With a disarming smile only fantasy characters could wear)
"The important thing is, you got what you needed. When you’re with me, you can have whatever you want."
Izecaiyada stood from her chair, eyes glued to the screen, armed with a sarcasm sharp enough to cut glass.
Izecaiyada
(Sarcastic tone, glaring at Aries on the screen)
"Oh, wonderful! Just what I always dreamed of—being a reckless heroine funded by a mafia sugar daddy with an unlimited credit card. What a magical world!"
Her sarcasm helped her calm down, but her thoughts kept spinning. As the game moved forward, she stared at the screen with a strange feeling in her chest.
Izecaiyada
(Whispering to herself, fingers tracing the screen, now introspective)
"Why does this bother me so much? It’s just a game, right? But… God, I wish real life were this simple. Spending without fear, no need to count every cent, not stressing about every little detail. Just… free. Like them."
(She sighs deeply, smiling bitterly as she returns her attention to the screen.)
"And here I am, scolding a fictional character for being irresponsible. I’ve officially lost it. Thanks, Aries, for the reminder that real life is definitely not a game."
The glow from the tablet reflected in her eyes. Maybe, just maybe, in that fictional world, the rules weren’t so complicated.
But for now, she had to return to reality.
And reality was far less forgiving.
Notes:
🌟 AUTHOR’S MANIFESTO — Why this is not a conventional isekai
(Notes for Chapter 1 — “Under the Neon Rain”) 04/12/2025
Welcome, reader.
Before you enter this story, I want to share the emotional foundation that shapes everything you’re about to read.
This is not a warning—
it is a statement of intent.
This work was born from a very different place than most isekai, romance fantasies, or Asian-inspired narratives.
Here, you won’t find a confused teen or a naïve twenty-year-old.
My protagonist, Isekaiyada/Beatriz, is 35.
And that changes everything.🌘 1. Emotional age matters
Women 30+ in fiction are often punished, infantilized, or forced to “start from zero” when they enter another world.
As if adulthood erased growth.
As if maturity were inconvenient.
Not here.
Beatriz does not regress, forget her past, or become moldable.
Her age is her narrative strength.
She is an adult who has:
— loved and lost
— faced violence and loneliness
— endured hunger, poverty, and childhood abuse
— learned resilience the hard way
She is not a “golden girl.”
She is someone who became her own shelter.🌘 2. Trauma as truth, not decoration
Trauma here is not a dramatic accessory—it is part of her spine.
But Beatriz has already done much of her emotional work before entering the new world.
She is not here to be fixed, pitied, or “saved.”
She has:
— survived
— healed in her own ways
— built resilience over years
The conflict is not curing her.
The real question is:
How does a grown woman respond when dropped into a world built for an emotionally immature heroine?
The answer breaks genre clichés from the start.🌘 3. Breaking the isekai mold
Beatriz does not enter a medieval fairytale.
She falls into a cyberpunk, post-catastrophe world shaped by crystal technology, politics, and real danger.
Here:
Naivety is useless.
Blind optimism is dangerous.
“Chosen one” logic fails.
Beatriz treats others as adults—and demands the same.
That is why:
— She refuses to let Kael cross boundaries.
— She doesn’t fall for Miguel Ángel’s emotional traps.
— She sees Emil as a sweet younger brother, not a romance route.
— She does not romanticize toxic behaviors.
— She does not behave like the privileged, immature canon MC.
This is not a harem or self-insert fantasy.
This is a story about reconstruction, choice, and emotional intelligence under pressure.🌘 4. The system as symbolism
The “system” is not there for flashy powers.
It exists to explore:
— memory
— context
— informed decisions
— emotional awareness
— the ability to interpret a hostile world
It lets the story question the canon of the original game—its tropes, its toxic dynamics, and the infantilization of its heroine.
It also raises a core question:
What happens when a grown woman steps into a world that assumes she is young, naïve, and impressionable?
This story exists to answer that.🌘 5. What’s ahead
If you’re reading this translated version, the Latin American Spanish version is 30 chapters ahead.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/navigateThere, the full direction becomes clear:
— canon subversion
— romance-trope deconstruction
— adult emotional growth
— themes of abuse, hardship, fear, and resilience
— reframed love interests
— heavy twists and revelations
This project began as fanfiction, but its structure is being shaped to become a novel.
This space is the workshop—the forge where the story takes its true form.
Thank you for reading.
Thank you for embracing a story centered on an adult woman.
Thank you for giving space to narratives that break the mold.
Welcome under the neon rain.
From here on… nothing will follow the cliché.
Chapter 2: Izecaiyada — Between Power and Prudence
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.Hello everyone! 🌟
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At 35, Izecaiyada was far from ordinary. Her life had always been a dance between the extraordinary and the mundane—a constant tug-of-war between her exceptional abilities and the harsh reality of her health. Though her body was "stable," it was far from invincible. She knew she didn’t have a superhero’s physique, and certainly not the kind that could ignore the effects of stress. Inside, her mind ran a mile a minute, but on the outside, she had to be cautious. Every step had to be measured—her body didn’t tolerate excess.
From a young age, Izecaiyada had discovered a peculiar trait: an unusual ability to visualize and replicate any technique or movement she saw. She only needed to watch a few times, and her mind would record and reproduce it as if she had it on instant playback. At first, it seemed like a divine gift—a near-miraculous advantage that allowed her to excel at almost anything she tried. She called it "visualization." But what no one saw was the price she paid for it.
Although her ability to replicate techniques and learn at an overwhelming speed made her stand out in nearly any field, it quickly became clear that her body couldn’t keep up. Her mind was a high-speed train, but her body was far more fragile than she liked to admit. Every time she pushed her ability too far, her health took a hit. Her lungs would suffer, and she would be bedridden for days. Along with the physical toll came sharp migraines—blinding, pulsing pain that left her incapacitated. She tried to normalize the suffering, blaming it on the stress of being bullied at school. But deep down, she knew the truth: the cost was higher than she wanted to pay.
So she learned to be prudent—to measure every use of that ability, every effort, every repetition. She could become unstoppable for brief moments, but if she didn’t pace herself, her body would collapse.
Then there was her other power—one she had learned to control with near-military discipline: the berserker.
Izecaiyada would never forget the day it first emerged. She was only ten years old when her life, and the lives of fifteen other children, were in danger. Something primal awakened in her, and she unleashed a brutal force to protect them. She tore through everything in her path like a raging storm. The adrenaline of that moment had awakened a wild, ferocious energy that, had it gone unchecked, could have destroyed everything around her. The aftermath made it clear: this power came with a steep cost. And not just physical—it left a deep emotional scar.
Whenever she felt that surge of fury building up, she knew releasing it could not only harm others—it could destroy her. Recovering from one of those episodes wasn’t just long and painful; it felt like her body had to rebuild itself from the inside out. After that first time, she was sick for two straight weeks. That was enough to teach her restraint. She learned to hold that rage inside, to never let it fully escape. No one could ever know the true extent of her strength—not even herself.
And yet, the strange part was that both abilities—the "visualization" and the "berserker rage" —were always there, coiled within her, ready to be unleashed. But Izecaiyada knew that if she ever gave in to the temptation of using them too often, her body, her mind, and her soul would pay the price.
That inner conflict became her greatest challenge: how to balance the desire to protect others, to be a hero, with the need to protect her own health. How to manage such destructive powers without becoming her own worst enemy?
This led her to a kind of introspective maturity. While her mind stayed sharp, analytical, always eager to explore her limits, her body reminded her daily that she wasn’t indestructible. She came to understand that wisdom wasn’t just about mastering her abilities—it was about knowing her limits. She couldn’t afford to live recklessly like others. Every decision had to be calculated, especially when the temptation to unleash her full potential became too strong.
Izecaiyada wasn’t just a skilled player or a brilliant strategist in the world of otome games and video games—she had learned to live in the delicate space between fantasy and reality in a way few could understand. Her powers—powers others might admire or even envy if they knew—were both a blessing and a burden. And although her life might seem normal to those around her, no one saw the daily battles she fought, in body and in mind.
Like many Pisces, her emotions often overflowed. But at her core, Izecaiyada was also a cunning Snake—calm, analytical, and capable of assessing every situation carefully. Though she had impulsive tendencies, she always knew how to pause, how to step back and consider the consequences. Sometimes she wished she could be more carefree, less bound by constant inner warnings about her health.
But life was never that simple. Life was never just a game.
The Lesson She Didn’t Want to Learn
Izecaiyada was never the kind of girl who shone in sports. Since she was little, she had always been the “nerd” of the class — the one who hid behind books, the one who got straight A’s without even “trying too hard.” That made her stand out, but not in the way she would have liked. Instead of being admired for her intelligence, she was seen as strange, misunderstood. And, as often happens when someone is different, the bullying began.
She attended a private school on an academic scholarship, which made her even more visible among her classmates — children from wealthy families. Even though she excelled in class, she never truly earned a place among them. Her scholarship status made her a constant target for mockery — sometimes subtle, sometimes cruel.
They would steal her supplies, ruin her assignments, and more than once falsely accused her of things she hadn’t done, simply because she was “the different one.” Not because she fit a stereotype — she didn’t steal because of some cliché, but out of survival. Over time, Beatriz learned how to take back what was hers, how to move unnoticed, how to protect the little she had. It wasn’t cheating. It was defense. It was strategy. It was growing up knowing the rules were always going to be different for her.
In middle school, the teasing got meaner. They called her things like “The weird one,” “The bookworm,” “The one who never does anything in P.E.” They excluded her from everything. When it was time to pick teams, she was always the last one chosen — out of pity, or simply because no one else was left. No matter how hard she tried to fit in, her classmates only looked at her with indifference, or worse, with mockery.
One day, after being picked last once again for a soccer game, something inside her cracked. She looked at herself in the mirror and realized that while her mind was a safe haven and a source of pride, her body was another story. She couldn’t go on like this. She needed something more — something that would make her feel like she belonged, that she was worth more than just her grades. And for a moment, she thought sports could be her way in. If she trained hard enough, if she could prove she was just as good as the others, maybe she’d earn their respect. Maybe they’d stop seeing her as a joke.
So she began training in secret. There was no internet to look up videos, but there were sports programs on TV and a few books. She watched them over and over, analyzing every move. Her first attempts were pathetic — but that didn’t stop her. She used her “visualization” skill, something she had honed for years, to see the plays and movements in her mind and then repeat them. She was alone — and she didn’t care. She just wanted to fit in. She wanted to prove she was capable of something physical, that she was worth it.
Over time, the results began to show. Her body was no longer that of a weak girl, but someone with potential. In endurance races, she began to outperform most of her classmates. In training, her speed and precision started to stand out. Her effort was paying off — or so she thought. But the impact of her achievements turned out to be very different from what she had hoped.
At the next school race, Izecaiyada ran faster than she ever thought possible. She was the first to cross the finish line, and for a second, she believed everything would change. The ache in her legs, the sweat on her forehead — all the sacrifice was finally bearing fruit. She sat down to rest, but before she could even feel the thrill of victory, she heard a voice.
A classmate — one of the cruelest — approached her with a crooked smile, almost mocking. “You’re not human,” he said, looking at her with a mix of disbelief and something else she couldn’t quite name. “What kind of trick was that? How could you run like that?”
It wasn’t a comment of awe or admiration. It was judgment. Condemnation. As if her ability, her effort, had no place in their world. Instead of recognition, what she encountered was fear. That same classmate, who had long ostracized her, didn’t see a girl who had worked to improve herself — he saw a threat. Something that didn’t belong. Izecaiyada felt the air leave her lungs. What she thought would be her moment of acceptance became the moment she realized she could never win — not really — no matter how hard she tried.
That was the beginning of her total isolation. They didn’t just stop talking to her — worse, they began whispering behind her back, and acting aggressively toward her. The murmurs followed her through the halls. The comments, often accompanied by “accidental” bumps and jabs, became crueler. They called her names like “The freak,” “The alien,” “The one who doesn’t belong.”
The bullying she had endured for years morphed into something more visceral, more unbearable.
She no longer just felt invisible — she felt terrifying. Alien. Something others preferred to avoid. Her one attempt to belong, to earn a place in that world she longed for, had failed spectacularly. Not only had they rejected her — they feared her.
In the next P.E. class, Izecaiyada could barely concentrate. Her mind was clouded with her classmate’s words and the fear she had seen in the others’ eyes. “It’s not worth it,” she thought, watching the others enjoy themselves without her. She withdrew again into her comfort zone — the classroom, the books, the math — where her abilities didn’t inspire fear, only “admiration.” Though even that came with the distant stares of those who would never understand her.
It was that day that Izecaiyada gave up sports. Not because she lacked the talent — but because the emotional cost of trying to fit in was too high. And though deep down she still longed for acceptance, she realized that being different didn’t always mean being admired. Sometimes, it just meant being a threat. And she was no longer willing to lose parts of herself for something that was never going to be hers.
No, Izecaiyada never ran in public again. But that didn't mean he'd stopped moving. He'd simply learned to do it in the shadows.
Chapter 3: The Final Circuit
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.Hello everyone! 🌟
Thanks so much for the incredible support! We’ve passed 200 reads and counting! 💖 I’m thrilled to see the story resonating with you.🎯 Next goal: 500 reads!
When we get there, I’ll release an alternate version—with new twists, romantic tension, and game-changing choices. Ready?☕ Want to support my work?
You can do so here (always appreciated, never required):
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Chapter Text
The sun was low, the cool afternoon air brushed her skin as she prepared for one of the hardest exercises she had ever faced. P.E. class was always an emotional battlefield for Izecaiyada. What for others was just another routine activity was, for her, a constant reminder of what she couldn’t achieve—of what she would never accomplish without the effort and discipline her classmates seemed to have naturally.
Every time she lined up for a race or a game, she felt the discomfort or mockery in the eyes of others.
That afternoon would be no different—or so she thought.
The circuit exam was the final challenge of the semester. Each student had to complete a series of exercises: sprinting, jumping over obstacles, doing sit-ups, and more. Everyone went through the motions with no real commitment, just trying to finish quickly so they could go play and get out from under the teacher’s watchful eye. No one took the exercise seriously, as always.
Except her.
Izecaiyada knew she wasn’t fast or strong. She knew she wouldn’t stand out in that field, but something inside her pushed her to keep going. Not for the grade, nor for others’ expectations. She did it because, for some reason, she needed to prove something to herself—as if that was the only way to feel valid. So once again, she stayed until the very last minute, doing every exercise with care, every movement with precision, trying to do well what everyone else was just trying to get over with.
When most of her classmates were already on the soccer field, tossing balls or running without a care, she was still in the gym, sweating, exhausted, but focused. Then came the paired exercises, and the blow hit immediately. She looked around, searching for someone to be her partner for stretches and partner push-ups, but no one looked at her. Everyone was already paired off, laughing, chatting among themselves. Izecaiyada stood still in the middle of the gym, feeling the silence of exclusion grow louder with every second. The teacher noticed her from across the room but said nothing.
However, something changed when she finally finished the circuit. She looked up and saw the teacher’s face—the only one who seemed to notice her effort. He didn’t say what others might have: no “Good job” or “That was fast.” No. His comment went deeper, something that resonated within her, something that gave her a small push in a moment when her world felt like it was crumbling:
“Everyone else might be faster, stronger, more agile than you. But you know what? You have something they don’t—and that’s dedication. And trust me, not giving up will take you far in life, not just here. Never settle.”
Izecaiyada stood in silence, staring at him. It was the first time someone saw what she did, the first time someone recognized that it wasn’t natural talent driving her—it was sheer perseverance. He saw her soul through her efforts, through her struggle to fit in, to be accepted. That left her speechless, but for the first time, made her feel like maybe she wasn’t so wrong after all.
When the teacher finished speaking, Izecaiyada approached his desk with her head down, still blushing from the attention. She knew she wasn’t there to win a prize or to be the star. But when the grades were handed out, her face tensed as she saw what was in front of her: a 10. Perfect.
She was the only one in the class who got it. No one else had completed the circuit with the same dedication, the same care. The teacher explained it in front of everyone, without sugarcoating it:
“This is the only complete work. Everyone else rushed through it, but she stayed until the end, completing every single exercise with care. And for that, Izecaiyada, you get the 10. Not for being the fastest or the strongest, but for showing what really matters: dedication.”
The silence in the room was palpable. The other students looked at each other—some annoyed, others surprised, and some, as always, just silently mocking her. But Izecaiyada didn’t care. She no longer cared what they thought of her. At least someone had seen her. Even if the rest were staring at the floor, she knew that in some corner of her soul, there was something they couldn’t take away: her dedication.
However, that same afternoon, as she left the gym, Izecaiyada realized something else. While the others ignored her or looked at her with indifference, the weight of exclusion still hung on her shoulders. No one had really congratulated her, no one approached her to talk, there were no claps—just cold indifference. It was the teacher who had given her that tiny spark of hope, but otherwise, her world remained the same. The whispers and stares from classmates continued. Still, for the first time, she felt capable of facing them.
Though she still felt the shadow of bullying, though she was still the “weird” or “strange” one to others, something inside her had changed. She no longer needed to be the best at everything. She had learned that dedication, while it might not earn her others’ acceptance, gave her something far more valuable: self-respect.
The Virtual Refuge
Since she was a child, video games had become her sanctuary. There was nothing like the click of the keyboard, the familiar sound of a loading screen, or the satisfaction of defeating a final boss after hours of battle. In a world where acceptance and validation always seemed out of reach, Izecaiyada found comfort in virtual worlds her parents couldn’t provide—a means of escape where real-life problems dissolved and where, at last, she could be good at something.
As a teen, she would retreat to her room with her old PC, which she had earned through her own effort and extra work hours. Even though her family’s financial situation was far from ideal, video games became the only “wealth” she could afford. The screen lit up her face in the dark, a refuge amid economic uncertainty and social isolation.
From Pokémon in its purest form—collecting creatures and forming strategies in her mind while exploring every corner of the Kanto region—to fighting games, where she released her frustration and found in combos and special moves a sense of control her life lacked. Then, without delay, she dove into Final Fantasy , where she not only immersed herself in epic stories, but analyzed character builds, skills, combat mechanics, and asked herself: how could this be improved? She sometimes thought: This ability from one game could be used in another to defeat that villain... the one who isn’t even implemented this way yet...
Saint Seiya captivated her with its narrative of heroism, but also with the complex battle patterns, the techniques, the calculations to predict the opponent’s next move—just like other anime stories and TV series. The same happened with RPGs, where managing resources and characters became a mental challenge, almost like a digital chess game. If anyone had overheard her, they might have caught her muttering softly, like a mantra: “If I switch this ability here, I could beat that boss with minimal damage. Or if I add an area magic, that strategy becomes unstoppable.”
But she didn’t limit herself to RPGs or fighting games. She also dove into shooters, where she became a specialist in control and precision. She had a keen eye for predicting enemy movement, as if everything followed a great pattern she could solve. Card games like Solitaire, Poker, or UNO also became part of her routine. It wasn’t just to pass the time—they were mental training. Every card played was a calculated move, every decision made with the cold mind of someone who thought beyond the obvious.
It was as if, just like in real life—where she felt she had to calculate every step to avoid mistakes—video games offered her a simulation where she could test her abilities without real consequences, without judgmental stares or the expectations of others. There, her worth wasn’t measured by speed or physical ability, but by her mind and strategy. And that, for once, made her feel enough.
And of course, those long nights of gaming also gave her time to theorize. Izecaiyada was fascinated by thinking about the hidden mechanics in video games, the way stories were intertwined with gameplay, how a small tweak could create a major impact. These theories, born in her mind, were her way of taking control in a world where control often slipped out of her hands. Every time she finished a game, she would wonder: How could I have done it differently? What would have happened if...?
Her schoolmates, who ignored or rejected her, would likely never know about her love for video games or the immense satisfaction she felt when solving complex problems in a world free from unfair rules and social expectations. In the world of video games, Izecaiyada found what the real world had denied her: validation, independence, and above all, a refuge where everything depended only on her.
Despite the hardships of her environment, the lack of money for a modern console, or the constant pressure of a family that didn’t understand her hobbies, she remained there. The sound of pixels and virtual characters was her only steady companion, a way to feel she had something of her own—something that didn’t depend on anyone else to exist. Every level reached, every new boss defeated, was a small victory reminding her that she could be good at something, even if it was just in her world.
Chapter 4: The Fourth Place and the Dream of Teaching
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Thanks so much for the incredible support! We’ve passed 200 reads and counting! 💖 I’m thrilled to see the story resonating with you.
🎯 Next goal: 500 reads!
When we get there, I’ll release an alternate version—with new twists, romantic tension, and game-changing choices. Ready?
☕ Want to support my work?
You can do so here (always appreciated, never required):
👉 https://buymeacoffee.com/beatrizdelmar
📚 Prefer to read in Latin American Spanish? More chapters are available here:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
Thanks for being part of this journey! 💫
Notes:
(See the end of the chapter for notes.)
Chapter Text
Izecaiyada was never the best at physical activities—at least not in the way the school system valued them. In sports competitions and aptitude tests, she always landed in fourth place , with such a minimal difference from the top ranks that it seemed almost irrelevant. A 9.7 versus a 10, a 9.8 against a 9.9. The differences were mere decimals, yet in her mind, those numbers didn’t change the fact that she always fell short of the podium.
At first, these results didn’t bother her much. Effort mattered more than the score , she thought. But over time, something began to shift. The rejection, the furtive glances, and the laughter behind her back became part of her daily life. The constant comparison to her peers made her feel that no matter how well she did, she would always be in limbo. Not good enough to be the best, not bad enough to be ignored . Always on the edge, close but never quite reaching the goal.
What hurt her the most, however, wasn’t just finishing in fourth place—it was the comment from one of her classmates on the day she managed to stay in the race with great effort. After a race ended, the boy who always aspired to be first approached her and, without much courtesy, said with disdain:
—"Why are you stealing my fourth place?"
It wasn’t just a competitive remark. It was a clear expression of gendered expectations that highlighted the difference between them. Why? Because he couldn’t accept that a girl had taken what he believed was rightfully his. At first, Izecaiyada thought the criticism was just part of the game—something “sports rivalry” naturally generated. However, over time, she realized something deeper. That comment was laden with sexism . It wasn’t a protest born from healthy competition, but a reflection of a larger idea: women weren’t allowed to stand out , especially in areas society expected men to dominate.
And though he never said it outright, Izecaiyada understood the comment probably came from a deeper place: his mother , who had likely taught him from an early age that there’s only room at the top and that women shouldn’t disrupt that hierarchy . It was a subtle but powerful lesson, mirroring the social pressures and expectations of a patriarchal system that not only sidelined women but made men feel threatened by their success.
Years later, now as a teacher, Izecaiyada was able to reflect on that moment from a completely different perspective. As an educator, she realized the experience of being a student wasn’t unique; it repeated itself constantly in the hallways of her school. As a teacher of Arts Education , trained to teach the four pillars— Visual Arts, Theater, Music, and Dance —Izecaiyada had learned that art wasn’t just about technique, but about a deep connection with the self .
As she observed her students, she began to notice patterns that felt eerily familiar. Many of the young people entering her classroom—especially those from homes with high expectations for academic and personal achievement —showed signs of insecurity. They attended class with a constant need for validation, eager to meet the standards imposed on them. And in subjects like the arts, where creativity and personal expression should be the driving force, this became an almost invisible but deeply limiting barrier .
Even in subjects where there was no direct competition, the obsession with being “the best” had been ingrained in their minds from a young age, like a constant hunger for external approval. Izecaiyada could see it clearly: in their painting gestures, in their timid acting attempts, in how they hesitated to compose music or dance. In each of those moments, she saw the internal struggle of students who, instead of feeling free, felt trapped by their own pressure .
As a teacher of Arts Education, she understood that the true value of these disciplines lay not just in mastering technique, but in allowing students to express themselves , to take risks, to free themselves from external expectations and focus on the process of creation. Art was not a contest. In its truest essence, art was a journey inward , a constant exploration of human vulnerability.
Izecaiyada had never imagined that her ability for “visualization” would take her so far in her career. While she had always been talented at mimicking any movement she saw (at a cost to her health, of course), it was in theater that she discovered her true passion. At first, she didn’t understand why she could portray roles so easily, but she soon realized that her talent for “seeing” and “feeling” every gesture , and then translating it into her own body, became stronger when done through a character. The key was in giving it a personal touch—a unique nuance that made each action feel natural. Instead of forcing her body to imitate something from scratch, she simply saw it as a performance , a role to play. This way, visualization became more fluid, less exhausting , and she could fully immerse herself in the character with ease.
And it was then that Izecaiyada understood something fundamental: as a teacher, she wasn’t just there to teach how to paint, act, dance, or compose music—she was there to allow her students to make mistakes , to see the value in each imperfect step . Through the four pillars of the fine arts, she was teaching them to find their own voice, to break free from those invisible chains that kept them in constant competition. What they needed most was to understand that in art, as in life, perfection is not the goal—authenticity is .
Izecaiyada began to see that her classmate’s comment wasn’t an isolated incident, nor was it directed only at her. It was a reflection of a system that taught boys from a young age to compete aggressively and to feel superior to girls . What seemed like a simple complaint about losing “fourth place” was actually an echo of the education he received at home , from an environment where girls weren’t seen as rivals. In the end, that sexist mindset was something children learned without ever questioning.
Reflecting on this, Izecaiyada realized that the rejection and pain she had felt didn’t just affect her—it also revealed a lot about the pressure boys face to live up to certain expectations of success. Her classmate’s comment stopped being a personal wound and became a point of reflection on how social expectations affect both men and women , though in different ways.
This understanding became one of the foundational pillars of her teaching career. Instead of seeing her students as mere competitors in a race for first place, Izecaiyada now saw them as individuals pressured by a system telling them what to do and how to be. In her work, she began to promote a more holistic approach to education , where personal effort and dedication were valued far more than simple victory. Through her own experiences, she came to understand that it doesn’t matter where you finish—it matters how hard you worked to get there.
As a teacher, Izecaiyada began to teach her students to celebrate their personal effort , to stop comparing themselves to others, and to stop measuring their worth by external expectations. It was her way of healing the wounds she herself had suffered, and of helping others overcome the barriers imposed by the system.
A Virtual Escape: Games, Frustration, and Fireworks
Izecaiyada wasn’t expecting much when she decided to install that popular game. After all, at 35 years old, she was no longer a young woman fascinated by the latest geek culture trends, but someone looking for a bit of distraction after a long workday. She had discovered the game through Pinterest, where she saw numerous fan arts of the protagonist. Although it wasn’t her usual aesthetic, the reviews wouldn’t stop praising it. “Might as well try it,” she thought, and downloaded it.
From the very beginning, something bothered her. The game’s protagonist, a typical female character from an Asian-style visual novel, seemed to be the embodiment of the word "flower gatherer" She bounced from one love interest to another, shamelessly flirting with every guy in the story. Izecaiyada, a Mexican woman through and through, thought she had seen all kinds of flirting in real life, but this level of brazenness felt shocking . In her world, flirting was a more subtle, even playful dance— never so blatant or artificial as what she was seeing on screen.
"Seriously?" she grumbled as she controlled the character, watching her approach the second guy, then the third, the fourth, and then back again to the first. "What’s the point of this?" she muttered, as if the game had nothing more to offer than those superficial interactions. But what really drew her in was one particular character: an Aries man—rich, tall, handsome, and to top it off, a mafia boss .
This Aries, with his white hair and red eyes, captured Izecaiyada’s attention not only because of his elegant and dangerous demeanor, but because of his arrogant, confident attitude—something only an Aries could pull off . And what frustrated her the most was how he treated the protagonist: with far too much patience . He, a mafia boss with the world at his feet, gave her his undivided attention, while she— the protagonist—kept shamelessly flirting with all the others .
"Of course," Izecaiyada scoffed. "You can afford to create all these perfect moments because you’ve got money." She, who had grown up with a more humble mindset, felt deeply uncomfortable with such flashy and superficial displays of luxury . One scene in particular triggered an unexpected reaction.
It was the moment when Aries, in his grand style, invited the protagonist on a romantic date: a walk under the fireworks . On a bridge, in the middle of winter, he took her to enjoy one of those perfect, fairy-tale views. But Izecaiyada’s discomfort was immediate . "Oh, sure!" she shouted at the screen. "You can only do that because you’re rich!" Her frustration boiled over; she couldn’t stand what felt like a hollow scene, just a display of power and money.
She decided to clear her head and, like anyone who needs fresh air after a big dose of frustration, she went to the corner store. Chips and a Coca-Cola became the perfect remedy for her foul mood. As she walked, soda in one hand and crunchy chips in the other, she looked up and saw fireworks in the sky. That night, the colors sparkled above the nearby hill— just like in the game .
But here’s the fun part: Izecaiyada, being the irreverent girl she was, decided to imagine that the Aries character was right there next to her , watching the same show. She looked up at the sky and, with a sarcastic smile, made a mocking gesture. "Idiooooot," she said out loud, as if he could actually hear her. Then, with a defiant tone, she added:
— "Look, I bet you wouldn't dare eat chips and drink Coca-Cola like me. Not everything in life has to be so... pompous."
Turning on her heel, she walked away with determination, as if she had truly won a small battle within herself , mocking the expectations of perfection that Aries tried to impose.
The scene, in its simplicity, reflected her internal process : the fight against external perfection, against those idealized images that society and even the game tried to impose. In her world, simple things—the ones that made you feel good without needing perfect packaging—meant more . Why should she keep seeking validation in a game, when in real life, the small joys—like chips and a soda—could be her true form of freedom ?
This moment allowed Izecaiyada to understand herself a little better. What frustrated her about Aries wasn’t just his arrogant attitude or extravagant gestures, but the way he mirrored what she sometimes expected in real life : a perfect love, a perfect life, with no real effort. However, she knew she didn’t need that kind of perfection. She had already learned that not everything had to be wrapped in luxury to be meaningful.
The game, as frustrating as it was and as much as it made her laugh in exasperation, allowed her to connect with something deeper: the need for self-validation and the joy of simple things, without having to prove anything to anyone . Maybe someday Aries could become part of her in-game story, but her true strength lay in finding joy in the simple and the real .
Notes:
🌸 Author’s Note – About the Term “Flower Gatherer” 🌸
In this fanfiction, the term "flower gatherer" is a metaphorical expression inspired by the Spanish word "picaflor" 🐦(hummingbird). It refers to a girl who flits from one romantic interest to another 💕, charming and flirting freely ✨, without fully realizing (or perhaps caring about) the emotional impact she might leave behind 💭.
Much like someone gathering flowers in a field 🌼—attracted to each one’s beauty and novelty 🌷—she moves on lightly, without settling or committing 🦋.
The term is not meant to imply physical relationships with every character 🚫🍑, but rather a pattern of light-hearted 💌, perhaps careless, romantic attention 🌙.
Chapter 5: The Contrast of Ideal Love – Hades vs. Aries
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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For Izecaiyada , the idea of ideal love was never about what magazines sold or what she saw in video games. Her concept of a true and powerful relationship was closer to Hades , the character from Kamigami no Asobi , than anyone else. Hades, with his firm character and introspective nature , was the perfect Capricorn for her: passionate , strong , yet touched by a melancholy that reflected the depth of his being. His emotional stability , natural power , and connection to the shadows felt like the very essence of what a romantic relationship should be. He wasn’t just the god of the underworld—he was someone with a deep emotional story . He had suffered , and his deep voice echoed with a sadness that only a being like him could hold—an anguished yet strong soul , full of passion, and without the need to shine through extravagance.
Izecaiyada had always seen him as the top of the impossible loves . With Hades, power didn’t come from luxury or physical beauty, but from his backstory , his sacrifice , and that unbreakable strength born from pain and experience. To her, Hades represented a bond of authentic connection , where grand gestures weren’t necessary to prove the depth or strength of love. Her ideal relationship was one that wouldn’t crumble under life’s superficiality .
However, now she had to deal with the reality of Aries in the game. The game’s version of Aries represented the complete opposite of what she considered ideal love. His world was filled with luxury , money , ostentatious power , and an exaggerated ego . While Hades showed his strength through subtlety and sorrow , Aries shone with every display of superiority , reminding Izecaiyada that, even if she despised him, his presence was overwhelming . The contrast between the two was so cosmic , it felt absurd that she found herself so caught up in that dynamic .
What really bothered Izecaiyada about Aries wasn’t so much his power, but his lack of authenticity . Aries played the role of the “ impossible hero ”: rich, arrogant, strong, and always ready to pull off grand acts. But the most fascinating part of the game was that, despite her discomfort with him, Aries was the only one with whom she didn’t feel useless . In the game’s battle system , both the protagonist and the love interest fight enemies together—and even though Aries was clearly the strongest , Izecaiyada didn’t feel completely powerless next to him. As if just standing beside him made her feel stronger .
But even if everything about Aries was over the top , one thing made her keep playing: the dreaded card system . This time, the banner featured a special card . And not just any card— Aries’s card , which came with a story so epic , it felt like it came from an old internet meme .
https://m.cuantarazon.com/991854/papa-noel-ya-se-lo-que-quiero-esta-noche-
When Izecaiyada discovered Aries’s mythical origin , she was absolutely stunned. According to the game, Aries had been a “humanoid dragon” in his past life. In that life, he had met the protagonist, who at the time was a powerful witch . The script, absurd in its own way, started to lean into mythology and ancient folklore , but also the kind of over-the-top story typical of these games, which made Izecaiyada chuckle a bit.
“Oh, of course—a dragon-man who used to be the protagonist’s ancient lover. Now it all makes sense. All that’s missing is some telenovela drama ,” she thought, laughing softly.
Still, she couldn’t deny there was something magnetic about the story. Maybe it was the mythological twist , or perhaps the idea that Aries, despite being arrogant and shallow , had such an intriguing and mysterious origin that made him more than just a rich and powerful man . But to her, the difference remained clear .
While Hades remained her ideal , Aries embodied everything she despised —though she couldn’t help feeling that he was fascinating in a way she couldn’t stop exploring. In the end, the tension between her ideal love ( Hades ) and her attraction to Aries , with his money and flashy power , became the engine of both the game and her inner reflection .
The contrast between Hades and Aries reflected not only her romantic preferences , but also her view of life . Hades, with his pain , steadiness , and deep meaning , gave Izecaiyada something she had always longed for: a love with purpose , seriousness , and genuineness . Aries, on the other hand, represented everything she rejected , but still sparked a curiosity due to the power dynamic he carried.
Through the game, she realized something important: her attraction to Aries wasn’t about the character himself, but about the contrast he created with everything her real life had taught her about love and power . While Hades aligned with her values of emotional depth and self-discovery , Aries was the mirror of everything she saw as empty in the superficial world around her. What would she choose in real life ? That was still clear: Hades was the ideal love . But in the game world , where the rules were different, Aries gave her the chance to experience something unexpected .
Izecaiyada walked through the park, wearing a gray hoodie and tight jeans , a youthful style that made her look younger than she was. The look was comfortable , perfect for reflecting in peace as she strolled beneath the trees. The sun was rising , painting the falling leaves golden, and despite the calm of the place, her mind wouldn’t stop spinning over what she’d discovered in the game the night before.
Aries , the character now intriguing her so much , had everything a dating game player might want in a male lead: handsome , rich , powerful , and of course, a criminal boss with a maddening attitude. He was a black humanoid dragon , and his history with the witch protagonist had left her completely confused . They were something like a Bonnie and Clyde fantasy version—him, the charming “bad guy,” and her, the vengeful witch , using her powers to fulfill her desires. At first, Izecaiyada was taken by the mythic connection , especially since the story suggested they shared a deep bond —one that transcended time and lifetimes .
What frustrated her, though, was that even though the dragon gave the witch everything— power , riches , all the material things she could want—she still tried to kill him . Why? Why would someone so powerful, so generous, so ready to give it all… deserve that fate? It made her reflect on unfulfilled desires and expectations in real life, where sometimes even ideal love isn’t enough. The story of the witch and the dragon made her wonder if, at some point in her own life, she had also rejected something that might’ve been good for her .
“It’s like a trap,” she thought as she walked, “a vicious cycle that never ends well.”
Still, something in her felt drawn to Aries. Not just because of his looks , but also due to the mysterious strength he carried. He was someone whose attitude she couldn’t stand—but whose story she couldn’t stop thinking about. In her mind, Aries was a reflection of all she didn’t want to become—but part of her was tempted by the indomitable power he represented.
“How ironic… I’m like the witch, pushing away what secretly attracts me,” she mused with a soft, knowing smile. “But I don’t want to be that person—the one who has it all and still wants to destroy it .”
The Irony of Power, Money, and Reality
As she wandered the park, Izecaiyada couldn’t stop thinking about how fascinating Aries was in his mythical origin , especially with the idea of his black dragon transformation . His story reminded her of epic tales , sacrifices , and old legends , and she found it amusing how the game’s developers had played with those elements. But what really irritated her was how Aries, with all his superiority and arrogance , still failed to make a real connection with the protagonist during the moments that truly mattered.
What upset her most was the disconnect between his cold demeanor and what his mythical origin promised. Aries could’ve been a fantasy hero —a black dragon who once protected the witch—but here, he just felt like a power doll in a shallow relationship system. “It’s not just the arrogance,” she thought. “It’s the fact that he’s given everything , and still wants more . It’s… unbearable.”
Even so, she was surprised by the chemistry between the two characters during their battle scenes . Izecaiyada was used to fighting mechanics, but something in the way Aries fought beside her , as if they truly shared a bond , made her feel something real —something that went beyond his cocky attitude . In those fights, despite his arrogance , Aries seemed to trust her , and for some reason, she allowed herself to be carried by that feeling.
Izecaiyada sat down on a small bench and stared at the horizon. “It’s so ridiculous,” she thought. “He attracts me, but he annoys me. I know this much: Aries’s power doesn’t interest me. What I really want is something deeper , more sincere .”
To her, Aries was a symbol of strength and power , but also of loneliness . A man who, despite having everything, didn’t understand the real value of genuine connection . And for someone like her, who had lived through painful experiences , those authentic bonds mattered more than power or wealth.
She stood up again, thinking about her own life—how much she had grown and changed . She didn’t need a black dragon or an epic tale to feel complete. What she truly wanted was something real , something without empty expectations or over-the-top luxuries .
The thought of Aries as the “black dragon” faded as she walked further into the park. Her darkest memories came to the surface—moments when she had been abused as a child , part of a tragic statistic far too common in Mexico. It had been horrible . Devastating . And yes, she often wondered why it had happened to her. But over time, she realized the justice system would never bring her peace, nor would the people around her ever fully understand. Still, she had achieved something far greater: she had discovered her own resilience .
Years later, she found closure in something that felt almost cosmic —when the man who hurt her died of a sudden heart attack , less than a year after everything. “Fate did what the law couldn’t,” she often thought. She never rejoiced in anyone’s death—but it gave her a strange sense of cosmic justice , a peace that helped her finally stop carrying the pain every day.
Now, as a teacher , her life was totally different. She had learned to work with her pain and turn it into something productive . In her classes, she felt empathetic toward young people who, like her, were trying to overcome hard situations . Over time, she had found a way to heal , to rebuild herself from the ashes , and make her story into something that could inspire others .
Chapter 6: Inner Peace
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Notes:
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Chapter Text
In the distance, a group of children played in the park. Their innocent laughter made her smile. There was something in their voices that reminded her of what a happy childhood could have been for her, despite everything she had gone through. She knew that now she could look at them without anger , without the sadness of those days, because she no longer felt that pain defined her .
"No, I’m not perfect. But I’ve become something much better: someone who has learned to forgive herself."
Izecaiyada took a deep breath, inhaling the fresh air as she walked slowly. She was no longer the young woman who feared that life would defeat her. Now, she was a woman who had learned to walk at her own pace , without anyone telling her what to do, without being defined by others' standards .
She stopped at a bench, and with a soft smile, gazed toward the horizon. In her heart, the feeling of inner peace she had reached was now always with her. She no longer cared what Aries represented or what others thought of her. She knew the most important thing was how she saw herself . She had found a way to protect her heart , to honor her story , to love herself despite everything . That was her true power .
Final Reflection: The Black Dragon and Izecaiyada’s Inner Journey
As Izecaiyada walked through the park’s paths, she couldn’t help but think about Aries . Despite what she thought of his arrogance , there was something mysterious and captivating about the story of the humanoid black dragon—something that sparked a kind of fascination she couldn’t extinguish. As a child, she grew up surrounded by fantastical stories about dragons — Dragonheart , The NeverEnding Story , those epic movies from the '80s and '90s that spoke of mythical creatures not just as powerful beings, but as deeply connected to emotions and destiny . As if dragons were more than animals— guardians of the soul .
"Aries is like those dragons that used to inspire wonder in the old tales," she thought, as a soft smile crossed her face. "So powerful, yet with a story that makes them more human than they appear."
Curiously, despite his arrogant attitude and overwhelming strength, something in her couldn’t help but feel a deep curiosity about Aries’s dragon form . It wasn’t just his imposing figure or his black scales glowing under the moonlight —there was something in that mythical nature that drew her in . The idea that, in his dragon form, Aries might have a different purpose , one beyond the pride of his human persona, was intriguing . "Maybe if I could see him as a dragon, everything would make more sense," she thought, almost in a whisper.
Sometimes, she imagined herself as the witch , the protagonist of the game, who for some reason, instead of rejecting the dragon, would try to understand him , to get closer in a way beyond power and violence . In that chaotic and conflicted universe, she didn’t feel the need to follow the witch’s destructive path . On the contrary, she felt the true strength lay in peace , in finding a way to coexist with the darkest parts of oneself.
"If I were her," she thought, "I wouldn’t kill him. I’d try to know the dragon, understand him, see what lies behind his power." That reflection didn’t just surprise her—it gave her a feeling of inner calm , as if she had found something more than just a fantasy. In her real life, she had faced so many challenges, so many inner battles , that the idea of trying to get along with Aries, to see something beyond his power, seemed a much more mature and balanced approach than the blind violence of the story. Maybe, just maybe, the dragon had something to teach her .
Ironically, she thought, in a game all about winning, conquering, and fighting , she couldn’t help but see Aries’s story as a sort of mirror of what she had learned in life. Instead of rejecting what seemed arrogant or shallow, she chose to meet it with empathy , to try to understand . That humanity was what she had always looked for—both in video game characters and in the real people she met. That more realistic and reflective perspective made her connect with the character on a deeper level—one beyond physical attraction or the desire for idealized love .
The Dragon, Peace, and Resilience
With the soft wind brushing her face, Izecaiyada stopped at the center of the park and looked up at the sky. The thought of Aries—and how his black dragon story resonated with her—made her reflect even more deeply on her own journey. In a way, Aries’s dragon form represented accepting her own demons : arrogance, anger, pain. The dragons that had fascinated her in childhood, like the ones in the old tales, were not just creatures of strength—they were keepers of secrets . For them, power was not enough ; they needed to be understood, accepted .
"Maybe this is what true peace means," she thought. "It’s not about destroying what I don’t understand. It’s about accepting it, understanding it, integrating it."
Throughout her life, she had fought her own dragons , those dark and painful moments that marked her. But unlike the witch in the game, Izecaiyada never sought revenge . Instead, she had learned to turn her pain into resilience . And now, with her new perspective on Aries’s story, she understood that true power didn’t lie in destruction, but in understanding .
"I am not the witch. I am the one who accepts," she whispered softly, as a gentle sigh left her lips. "I am the one who transforms darkness into something brighter."
With one last glance at the sky, she realized something crucial. In that moment, peace was no longer a wish . It was something she had finally achieved . Aries’s story—his arrogance, his power, his dragon form—was just a reflection of what she herself had accomplished by facing her past and turning it into something that made her stronger, wiser .
"And if I ever met a black dragon in real life, maybe I’d try to understand him too," she thought, smiling with a touch of nostalgia , like a child again, fascinated by the fantasy world she once dreamed of. But now, she saw it with the eyes of a woman who had found peace .
Notes:
Izecaiyada finally reaches a moment of calm—one not defined by anger or pain, but by forgiveness and growth. As she reflects on the figure of Aries, the black dragon, she begins to question what true power means: domination or understanding? Her journey inward reveals that sometimes, the real strength lies in choosing peace over vengeance... and seeing the soul behind the monster.
Chapter 7: Izecaiyada’s Inner Peace: The Black Opal and the Wisdom of the Seven Treasures
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Notes:
(See the end of the chapter for notes.)
Chapter Text
Izecaiyada walked through the park, the
gentle breeze
brushing her face, while her thoughts dove into a sea of
reflection
. She had spent years accumulating a series of experiences that, together, had led her to what she now considered her
inner peace
. She thought about everything she had learned: her
dedication
to work, the
knowledge
gained over the years, her
resilience
in the face of adversity... and how, somehow, those qualities had allowed her to
heal
and transform into something
stronger
, something
wiser
.
“I’m like a
black opal
,” she told herself. “I’ve been through so much
pressure
and
darkness
, but now I shine with my own
light
.”
It was an analogy that came to her mind with the image of
Phosphophyllite
from
Houseki no Kuni
. Though not exactly the same, Izecaiyada saw herself in her own
growth process
, especially in how Phos had to go through countless
changes and transformations
before reaching
enlightenment
. Phos had symbolically gathered
seven treasures
representing the journey toward
spiritual balance
.
Izecaiyada, although she never believed she would reach full enlightenment, felt she had collected her own
treasures
on her path toward inner peace—in her own way, and in a completely different form.
She knew that dedication , knowledge , and resilience formed a strong foundation in her life. But she also believed there was another, deeper component—one just as important, even if sometimes invisible to others: the divine cardinal virtues she had learned to embrace, those that represented power , wisdom , justice , and love . These were the gems she felt she had earned over time—perhaps with sacrifice , perhaps through wounds , but always with the firm certainty that these virtues are not inherited—they are earned .
“It’s funny,” she thought, “that, just like the Sea Shell and Agate Stone in Phos, these virtues are similar—but it’s like they’ve been given to me again with a different coating, representing knowledge and wisdom ... as if every time I needed them, they returned to me more polished , more clear .”
It was like a process of kintsugi , the Japanese technique of repairing broken pottery with gold , creating something new and beautiful from scars . Izecaiyada felt the same: a blend of black opal , marked by the wounds of her past but repaired by the gold of her experiences—by the wisdom acquired through each pain and victory, through every fall that made her rise even stronger.
The Kitchen, Aries, and the Dressing Test
But not everything was harmonious. As if the universe wanted to shatter her inner peace in an instant, the game placed a rather peculiar challenge in her path.
Aries had decided to make her undergo a ridiculous test in his kitchen, quickly putting everything she had gained to the test.
Izecaiyada had already learned that cooking was one of her strengths. She held five technical diplomas , including: tailoring, culinary arts, computer science, flower dehydration, and painting. An arsenal of knowledge not many could boast about. But in this case, the challenge seemed simple: Aries was preparing a green apple and lettuce salad , and he asked her to choose a dressing .
Confident in her skills as a
Mexican chef
, Izecaiyada thought, “This is going to be a piece of cake!”
But as she turned to see the jars,
frustration
overtook her when she saw that none of them had
labels
.
Immediate
anger
was inevitable:
“How can they ask me to choose something when I have
no idea
what I’m picking?!”
Despite all her
culinary wisdom
, this test felt like a
bad joke
.
She decided to try the first one: the dressing turned out to be so
spicy
that she couldn’t help but frown.
“This tastes awful! What kind of joke is this?” she grumbled, noticing Aries coughing slightly as his face turned red.
But
Aries
, with his usual
arrogance
and smugness, was quick to comment:
“I’d give this to my
enemies
to eat. And by the way, this isn’t for you—it’s for me. What are you waiting for?”
Izecaiyada felt her
patience snap
. It was as if the universe were
mocking
her—as if everything she had learned and worked for was meaningless in this absurd test.
Then she noticed some dressing on a lid nearby and
laughed
mischievously to herself—
“I’m going to smear this on his face!” she thought, as her frustration turned into
playful revenge
.
The result was a small
comedy
: in a burst of
anger
, Izecaiyada decided to smear the dressing on Aries’ face.
But what she didn’t expect was that Aries, in typical arrogant fashion, would
catch her hand
and, in a surprising twist, make her put the dressing in her
mouth
.
“No food goes to waste,” he said with that tone that drove her
crazy
, walking away to the
terrace
as if nothing had happened.
Izecaiyada squealed in
indignation
, like a
frustrated child
, kicking her bed back in reality, pillow in her arms, her mind bursting with
rage
and
confusion
.
“This is so annoying!” she thought, exasperated.
In the end, she reflected on the three
dressing options
she had tried (sour, spicy seasoning, and salad coloring).
Upon further meditation, she realized the jars were filled with
Miguelito
(that mix of chili, salt, and sugar she so loved in her
Mexican culture
).
It gave Izecaiyada a bitter laugh:
“This combo is like what they’d give me in any
snack shop
!”
The Mexican Touch: The Mango Theory and Revenge
In her final reflection, Izecaiyada thought that if she were truly in the game, she would have taken control of the situation differently.
If Aries thought he’d won with his arrogant behavior, she was ready to
strike back
.
What if, instead of being consumed by her anger, she owned the moment with a Mexican twist of revenge?
She imagined
peeling a mango
,
knife in hand
, and coating it in
Miguelito
, that iconic
Mexican chili powder
.
She would hold it up and offer it to Aries with a
mischievous smile
, just to see his reaction to the
spicy taste
.
“If he’s going to play with me, I’m going to play too,” she thought.
And there, in that moment of absurdity and frustration, she realized something important:
Life is full of nonsensical tests, unfair moments, and situations that make no sense.
However, not everything in the world can be
controlled
.
What she
could
control was her
reaction
.
In some way, the game had taught her a lesson:
True inner peace doesn’t only come from dedication, wisdom, and resilience.
Sometimes, peace comes when you learn to laugh, to play with the absurd, and to take control, even in the most chaotic of circumstances.
Izecaiyada smiled , and with this new perspective , she got up for a snack—more at peace than ever, but ready to face whatever Aries might throw at her next.
Notes:
Sometimes peace doesn’t mean silence—it means knowing when to laugh, even through the spice of life. 🌶️✨
Chapter 8: "Beatriz" and the Night of Reflection: Between the Game and Reality
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
That night, Isecayiada logged into her game; the name of her account appeared. "Beatriz" lay back on her bed, physically and emotionally exhausted after the intense scene with Aries . She had been thinking about the absurd comedy in the kitchen, her frustration over not being able to choose a dressing , and her impulsive reaction of smearing the dressing on Aries’s face. While her body relaxed under the sheets, her mind couldn’t fully calm down. The echo of her anger still resonated within her, as if the kitchen scene kept replaying in her head.
But then, in the midst of the internal chaos, "Beatriz" began to reflect on the meaning of the name she had chosen for her character in the game—something that had always brought her comfort. In every virtual world she immersed herself in, her name was always the same: Beatriz . The reason behind that choice was quite simple, yet profound: the meaning . Beatriz was a name of noble origin, translated as “the one who brings happiness” or “the one who makes happy.” When she first discovered this, it felt like she had found an emotional anchor in a world full of chaos and rapid decisions.
Moreover, choosing that name was a statement of identity, a way to mark her presence in those universes without compromising her safety . “I’d never use my real name in any of my accounts,” she thought. She knew that in the vast digital world, names held power , and she preferred to hide her true identity to avoid tracking or spells that could alter her real life.
At home, Beatriz’s family had adopted a curious and, to her, somewhat fun dynamic. Her siblings also used fictitious names in all their game profiles. It was like an inside joke, where they called each other by their virtual names and referred to themselves as alter egos they created in each game or online platform. Beatriz found it amusing how they reaffirmed their identities within the virtual space while the family simultaneously took precautionary measures . If anyone ever asked them something personal online, they always knew how to protect themselves.
“True names have power,” she thought, “that’s why we prefer these names. That way, we avoid any kind of tracking or spell some cosmic being or entity might cast.”
There was something ironic about that custom, especially because the emotional connection within the family remained strong and alive through those virtual names. Even if no one said it aloud, Beatriz felt that those moments were essential to her bond with her siblings. It was as if through those names, everyone could be free—have an identity not tied to the expectations of the real world. But still, Beatriz never forgot how important it was to protect herself in that digital universe.
A Strange Dream: The Game Becomes Real
After the chaos in the kitchen with Aries, Beatriz turned, settling into bed, her mind on the verge of collapse. The bitter taste of frustration still pulsed in her thoughts. She couldn’t stop thinking about the humiliation of not being able to choose the dressing like a true Mexican cook, the rage caused by the arrogance of “Lucien” —whom she stubbornly continued to call “Aries” out of spite—and the lack of empathy the story seemed to have for her. All of that tangled in her head like a bomb of thoughts ready to explode.
She settled into bed, staring at the flat, white ceiling, softly lit by one of the two LED strips lining her bed. That small detail was the only thing that gave her room a hint of warmth—a space neither big nor luxurious, but practical. The floor was covered with a raised wooden platform that gave it a rustic touch, but nothing compared to what she was about to experience.
In the solitude of her room, Beatriz closed her eyes, letting the exhaustion of the day envelop her, but a thought began to take shape in her mind. A playful, defiant idea.
—If I were the protagonist … I wouldn’t be wasting time flirting with those guys... I’d make them beg. I’d make Lucien—Aries the unbearable—confess to me… playing by his own rules, just like in ‘Love is War’ ... —she thought with a mischievous smile, imagining the scene as if she had total control.
The night crept into its final hours, and Beatriz, now deep in sleep, didn’t notice how something strange began to happen. When she opened her eyes, she was no longer in her bed. She looked around, confused. The room around her was so different, so sophisticated, that for a second she thought she was still dreaming. Her mind tried to process the information, but all she could perceive was luxury . A large bed with a dark headboard, elegant curtains hanging from rods on the sides, a low bed that gave the impression of being in a palace . The walls were a deep black, almost as if they absorbed light, interrupted only by golden accents that added an air of unreachable sophistication.
—This... can’t be... —she murmured, sitting up in bed while looking around, unable to believe what she was seeing. —An unknown ceiling... is this the game world ?
“The game.” The one she had started weeks ago and had decided to install on her tablet. The Otome theme, with dark cyberpunk tones, the romances and elaborate characters—it all seemed like a fictional and controlled universe. But there she was, in a room with such luxurious details that it felt like she had crossed some kind of boundary between reality and the virtual .
The contrast was immense. She was no longer in her modest room with a white ceiling and LED lights illuminating her space. Now, she was in a place that screamed wealth, luxury, and power . A wave of adrenaline coursed through her body. Like Shinji in Eva , Beatriz understood there was no turning back. She had fallen, somehow, into that world that only existed in her fantasies. And now, she was going to be the protagonist .
Standing up, she realized she wasn’t in her bed, nor in her room. She was in a large, soft bed, surrounded by a luxury so foreign to her daily life it gave her instant vertigo. As she got up, a strange unease overtook her. It wasn’t just that the place was strange—it was that she was no longer the same.
A shiver ran down her spine when her eyes fell on her hands: delicate, with a perfect manicure . Her skin, much whiter than she remembered, almost seemed to glow under the dim light. She touched her hair and noticed how it fell softly over her back— longer than she’d ever had it. At that moment, her face appeared in front of her, reflected in a full-wall mirror . It wasn’t her face.
The reflection that stared back was a stylized version of herself: taller , with skin as pale as the characters in anime she once watched, and longer, darker hair—as if it were an extension of the fantasy itself. Her figure, slightly more refined, fit perfectly into the Otome aesthetic of the game she had installed weeks ago. It was the body of the game’s protagonist, but it didn’t feel like hers.
—This... can’t be... —she murmured, touching her face as if trying to find the Beatriz she knew. But there was nothing familiar. Anxiety gripped her; her chest filled with panic . She was trapped in a strange body , in a strange universe .
The room—with its elegant black walls, grand bed with luxury curtains hanging from the sides—felt too real , too perfect , like she was trapped in a dream or, worse, in an alternate reality . “It can’t be... this is too real...” The panic wrapped around her with each breath.
—What is happening? Is this a dream or an alternate reality? —she asked, looking at her reflection again, as if she could find answers. The only thing she noticed was a beauty mark below the lip, on the opposite side of her real face—the only feature the Appearance System had allowed her to keep. She knew it was the only thing she could add due to the restrictions related to deeply rooted beliefs about the placement of moles on the face.
With her heart racing, Beatriz tried to calm herself, but the panic kept growing. She took a deep breath, but her mind was a whirlwind. She walked with hesitant steps to the door, searching for an exit, a refuge from this feeling of depersonalization . She needed answers. She needed to understand.
Upon reaching the bathroom , she shut the door behind her and approached the sink. The sound of running water gave her a small sense of relief—but it wasn’t enough. With trembling hands, she turned on the faucet and let the water flow.
“ Five, four, three... ” she repeated to herself, dipping her hands in the cold water, trying to regain control. “ Two, one... ” Her breaths deepened, but her mind remained restless. The panic didn’t dissipate, but at least now she had some control over her body , something that allowed her to think , even if just a little.
She knew that if she didn’t control her anxiety , everything could spiral. Something within her told her that this new world—this strange and luxurious universe —was not just any game. It was more. Much more.
Just as she felt she was finally calming down, the bathroom door burst open. Beatriz flinched, quickly raising her eyes, and they met Lucien’s . The man she had started to get to know in the game—the arrogant “Aries” —stood in the doorway with a confident smile and those eyes gleaming with that typical mix of confidence and contempt he always carried.
— Beatriz! Did you like the room? —he asked teasingly, unaware of the distress she still felt.
He approached her with firm steps, ready to joke as usual, but Beatriz, still completely disoriented, couldn’t help but react instinctively . When he raised his hand to give her a playful tap on the forehead, she stepped back quickly, almost tripping on the sink. Her reaction was so sudden she didn’t even realize how far she had retreated.
Lucien stopped in his tracks, eyes widening in surprise, his smile fading for a moment. At that moment, he realized something wasn’t right.
— I’m really sorry, Beatriz. I didn’t mean to scare you, —he said in a gentler tone, stepping back to give her space.
Beatriz looked at him, embarrassed. Her body trembled slightly, and it wasn’t just panic. There was something deeper in that reaction—a mix of confusion and bewilderment she couldn’t explain. She felt like she wasn’t in control, like her body didn’t belong to her in that moment. Her fear had overflowed, and now, instead of being in her world, she was trapped in a completely different one.
—It’s... it’s just that... all this is so weird —she murmured, her voice trembling slightly as she avoided eye contact. The shame made her wish she could disappear.
Lucien, seeing her reaction, frowned, but instead of pushing further, he took a more relaxed posture. He hadn’t meant to frighten her, but something in the air had shifted.
— Take it easy, Beatriz —he said gently, stepping back again. — Do you need a moment alone? If you're uncomfortable... I can wait outside.
Beatriz nodded weakly and, without wanting to explain further, turned and locked herself back in the bathroom . Even with the door closed, the weight of confusion and shame still crushed her. The pressure in her chest didn’t lessen, and now she felt even more lost than before. The reality of what was happening enveloped her like a dense fog .
— Why am I here? —she asked in a low voice, hugging herself as if she could find comfort in that small gesture.
Notes:
Beatriz stops being just a player and crosses the line into becoming the protagonist… inside a body and a world she doesn't recognize. This chapter explores fear, identity, and what it means to wake up in a place that feels too perfect to be safe.
Chapter 9: The Million-Dollar Question
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Thanks so much for the incredible support! We’ve passed 200 reads and counting! 💖 I’m thrilled to see the story resonating with you.
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Notes:
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Chapter Text
The seriousness of the moment returned to her mind when she recalled the recent interaction with Lucien. Even though she had managed to calm down after the bathroom incident, the feeling of being trapped in that world—and even more so, in that strange body—weighed on her like a slab of stone.
After all, what the hell was going on? How had she ended up there? And what the hell did it mean to be trapped in the story of an otome game? Was this a dream , or the worst nightmare of her life?
She needed answers , but something inside her knew she had to be careful . She couldn’t just lose it and start screaming to everyone that she wasn’t the real protagonist. If she wanted to believe she could control the situation, she had to keep her composure.
With a mix of uncertainty and determination , she approached Lucien, hoping to get something that would help her understand her new role in this universe. She looked him straight in the eyes and, without beating around the bush, asked:
—“What exactly are we?”
The question left her lips with more confidence than she felt, but the tone in which Lucien responded caught her off guard.
—“Whatever you want, kitty.”
Beatriz blinked, confused by the response. It was the last thing she expected. So now he could decide what they were, on a whim? Lucien’s mix of arrogance and confidence was… irritating . Despite everything, something inside her told her to stay calm, at least for now.
Frowning, she turned around and headed to her room. She needed to be alone . She needed to think . She needed to process everything.
Once inside, the weight of confusion overwhelmed her again. She quickly began to go through the protagonist’s belongings , looking for any clue that could give her more clarity . That’s when she found the cell phone . Her fingers trembled slightly as she unlocked it, hoping to find something that would help her understand her situation. But, to her surprise, all she found were bland messages and social media posts . Among them, photo after photo of the protagonist flirting with each of the guys from the game.
—“Oh, for crying out loud…” she muttered to herself, reading some of the messages. She was furious . It didn’t seem fair . The guys in the game weren’t objects to be manipulated. In her mind, she had always believed that good men didn’t deserve to be treated that way, and the protagonist, apparently, treated them all like they were just one more option.
But Lucien… with him, things were different . His presence confused her, made her feel overwhelmed , like she didn’t know whether to run toward him or get as far away as possible. He was handsome , rich , and powerful . But it was also clear that his world was full of chaos , mafia , and a dangerous aura she had never felt so close before.
The worst part was that, despite his arrogance , there was something about Lucien that attracted her in an inexplicable way. Like when he brought her that bouquet of flowers , and instead of thanking him, she, with sarcasm as her only defense, made a comment about the local flower shop.
—“At least tell me it’s from a local florist!”
Lucien didn’t seem bothered at all. On the contrary, he smiled at her as if it were all part of a game only he understood. And that made her feel even more uncomfortable.
The climactic moment came when, after Beatriz asked for permission to return to her apartment, Lucien, with his usual cynical smile , said:
— “I'll be waiting in two days.”
Beatriz cursed herself internally . She knew that the last thing she wanted at that moment was to return to that world of luxury and complications . However, a small, treacherous voice in her head whispered that, even if she wouldn’t admit it, she knew perfectly well she would go back.
When Beatriz finally arrived at her apartment, the relief of being home quickly turned into frustration. She dropped onto her bed, covering her face with a pillow as she murmured:
— “Handsome, rich, mafioso…!” The words came out like a stream of muffled curses , drowned by the pillow. The idea of Lucien making romantic gestures drove her crazy , but she couldn’t deny that, in part, it was precisely what unsettled her so much.
She decided to focus on something more productive to distract herself. For some strange reason, she remembered that in the protagonist’s apartment there was no sewing kit , something so basic to her. That led her on an unexpected quest through the city. Traveling to less affluent areas to find something as mundane as a sewing kit reminded her how much she missed the Chinese stores back home in Mexico.
When she finally found the kit, she put it into a military-style bag she carried with her. She used the rest of the day to head to work, where she met Emil.
Emil was the kind of person who, no matter what happened, managed to calm the atmosphere around him. His youthful appearance , with slightly wavy blonde hair and crystal-blue eyes , was soothing. He always had a warm smile , one of those smiles that made others feel at ease , like nothing in the world could disturb him. He had a way of dressing that was simple but refined (when he wasn’t wearing the academy uniform): light-colored shirts that fit perfectly over his athletic build , fitted jeans , and always an elegant watch on his wrist, as if everything about him had been carefully chosen to reflect his calm personality.
Although Beatriz saw him as nothing more than a younger brother , she couldn’t help but notice how easy it was to feel at ease in his presence. Emil wasn’t the kind of person who pushed or rushed anything; his protective nature and his constant pursuit of harmony made conversations with him feel gentle and pressure-free , since Emil never insisted on romantic gestures . He listened more than he spoke , as if always choosing his words carefully before speaking. And although his sweetness was evident, Beatriz suspected that behind his calm demeanor lay an unshakable inner strength , a light that shone even in the darkest moments.
It was an especially hectic day at the academy when Emil approached Beatriz, who, for some reason, seemed more tired than usual. Emil, with his typical calm tone and kind smile, softly asked:
— “Are you okay? You look exhausted.”
Beatriz looked at him, slightly surprised by how genuinely concerned he was. Although the age difference between them was only “a few years,” Emil always seemed to possess a kind of quiet wisdom that transcended time . Beatriz felt a bit uncomfortable , not being used to someone offering her support so openly, especially without expecting anything in return.
— “I’m just… processing all this chaos, Emil,” she replied with a sigh.
Emil nodded, as if he understood more than he was willing to say. His blue eyes glowed with a kind of peaceful light as he spoke:
— “Take your time. We all need a break every now and then.”
The conversation didn’t go much further than that, but Beatriz felt a strange sense of peace simply being near him. It was a bit disconcerting how Emil seemed to have the ability to create a bubble of calm around him, as if everything else disappeared for a moment.
Thus ended her first day without Lucien.
She reflected the next day about Emil. Despite his youthful appearance , Emil possessed a special energy . Beatriz knew he could heal wounds and purify corrupted areas using his light energy . She had seen him use his powers before—with a level of precision and control that didn’t match his age. The way his energy wrapped around people, healing them or bringing them peace , reminded her of someone who, although young-looking, had lived far more than his face revealed.
At times, Beatriz would see him in the hallways of the academy (within the game), quietly observing others with a kind of serenity that felt almost inhuman . He didn’t talk much about his past, but in his eyes , there was a story no one dared to ask about.
Even though she was still confused about everything that was happening, Beatriz couldn’t help but remember her first encounter with Emil in the game. During the mission where she and the protagonist faced off against a "wander" in the form of a Wyvern , Emil had shown remarkable skill . The light emanating from his hands wasn’t just for healing—it could also be used as a powerful weapon . While the protagonist fought alongside him, Emil used his light energy to dazzle the creature, creating blinding flashes that disoriented the Wyvern just enough for them to escape.
Beatriz recalled the vivid image of Emil in action, with a focused expression as he unleashed the force of his power. There was something deeply captivating about his ability to combine a protective nature with such raw strength.
Although that moment of fighting together had been intense, Beatriz also felt strangely comfortable seeing how Emil managed to stay calm even in the most chaotic situations. There was something about him that inspired trust , as if his outer calm was backed by a much deeper inner strength.
However, what Beatriz couldn’t get out of her head was Emil’s backstory , the one she had read on the game forums . She had researched too much—she had spoiled herself —but she couldn’t help it. Emil’s story was far more complex and painful than anyone might guess just by looking at his gentle and quiet demeanor.
Emil was not just a boy with incredible power , but he also carried a huge political burden . According to the forums, Emil came from a planet that had perished. His people had found a way to extend their lives by sacrificing their princess , who used her existence to buy time while they built a ship for a quantum leap.
When they arrived on this world, their mission was to discover answers about their past, but what they didn’t expect to find was “the original protagonist.” Upon seeing her, Emil had been convinced that she was his reincarnated princess , his second chance . This had unleashed a series of events that, according to the spoilers, would turn into a dangerous obsession . Emil’s story, full of obsessive love , jealousy , and a political struggle for power, had started to influence his decisions.
The revelation that Emil, a prince from a vanished world , had so much at stake made Beatriz see him differently. She no longer saw him just as someone with healing abilities, but as a complex figure playing on a much larger board than her own.
The fact that Emil was aware of the political tension involved in his relationship with the protagonist, and how this could change the course of history, made him even more intriguing. How far was he willing to go for her? And most importantly: was Beatriz trapped in something much bigger than she had thought?
When Beatriz saw him at the end of that day at the academy, his gaze was a little more piercing . Emil hadn’t changed much in appearance: his blond , slightly wavy hair was still in place, and his blue eyes reflected that calmness he always carried. However, something in his bearing had changed. Beatriz realized that, despite his relaxed and serene exterior, there was a burden he couldn’t hide. Maybe it was the pressure of his origin, or perhaps the memories of his lost planet, but something kept him constantly on alert, as if his gentle smile was just a mask for a deeper internal battle.
“You seem thoughtful, Beatriz,” Emil commented, in a soft tone as he approached her.
Hearing his voice, Beatriz came back to reality, but her mind kept spinning with the secrets she had discovered on the forums. She knew Emil was not just a kind boy, but a man trapped in a galactic conflict that could change everything. But for now, she simply smiled casually.
“I was just thinking about everything that’s happening... and how it connects to all this,” she said, looking around to give a response that wasn’t too personal.
Emil nodded, not pressuring her. It seemed he understood her more than he let on.
“It’s complicated , but you’re not alone in this, Beatriz. You’re not.”
As Beatriz walked toward her apartment, the sun began to set, painting the sky with warm tones that almost made her forget the mental chaos she carried with her. The weight of the day’s events still pressed down on her, and as her steps echoed on the pavement, her mind wouldn’t stop spinning.
“Why does all this have to be so complicated ?” she thought, staring at the street ahead. The apartment complex buildings rose in the distance, each like an endless tower of concrete and glass . “Here I am, trapped in a story that’s not mine, playing at being a princess … and all for what? Because someone in another universe decided I should be part of this galactic mess?”
She sighed, taking a firmer step as if she could shake off those thoughts with each one. She knew she was emotionally distancing herself from everyone around her, but at the same time, she couldn’t stop thinking that she was acting like a sort of “ protection code .” She didn’t want to get involved in anything that wasn’t under her control . She didn’t want to be just another piece in a game she hadn’t chosen. She didn’t want to be anyone’s princess . No, much less of someone who had “ flirted with the entire cast.”
“I refuse to be part of this intergalactic political circus.”
She had read more than she wanted about Emil’s story and the traps of the game. On the spoiler forums , she had even found comments about his life, about the complicated political struggle he carried with him. Emil was the son of a planet that had perished , and he had had to make decisions no one else could even imagine. “Why should I carry those problems ? I don’t have the time or energy for that.” It didn’t seem fair to play with someone so marked by his destiny and history. But… Emil wasn’t like Lucien, right? He wasn’t a prince , but a mafioso . And while his peaceful nature and calm eyes gave her a certain peace, Beatriz knew she shouldn’t get too involved.
And there was Lucien, the unstoppable Aries , with his arrogant smile and overwhelming attitude . “I’m not the protagonist of this game, so why do they insist on seeing me as such?” Beatriz grumbled mentally as she leaned against one of the columns of her building. She knew it. She had to make a decision , or rather, play “ Love is War ,” like in Kaguya-sama . No false moves. No vulnerability. Not a single misstep, and definitely no showing interest.
Even though Lucien threw her off balance, made her smile , made it impossible to resist when he, with his jokes and arrogance, managed to get under her skin in unexpected ways. “No, no. None of that. I’m not falling into his game. Or maybe… just a little…”
“I’ll wait for you in two days,” he said in their last conversation, and Beatriz had heard it with the tone of someone who doesn’t take no for an answer. But she… she knew how to handle that. She knew how to keep emotional distance . And although she wouldn’t admit it, something inside her said she couldn’t resist the rules of her own war game . A game that, without realizing it, she was beginning to enjoy.
As Beatriz climbed the stairs to her apartment, she wondered again why the universe had decided to give her this second chance, if all she wanted was a quiet life . “You see, the universe always has something planned, but for me, I wish I had just stayed in Mexico . Although, with its potholes and Arab meat tacos…” she thought, smiling slightly, as if that little comfort could soothe the internal storm that troubled her.
Despite her efforts to stay away from all this intergalactic drama , a small spark of doubt had started to ignite inside her. “Lucien doesn’t have hidden agendas … And that bothers me more than anything else.” Because, no matter how much she hated him, something about his sincerity attracted her. And that… was not something Beatriz could easily accept.
“No… I’m not going to let myself get caught in his game,” she whispered to herself, closing the door behind her.
However, she knew that thought wasn’t very solid. After all, the kind of “game ” Lucien proposed, although dangerous , was completely different from what she had imagined. Maybe that was the problem. She no longer knew what to expect , but what she did know was that her peace, the one she longed for so much, was no longer so close.
“Why can’t I stop thinking about him ? About all of them?”
Perhaps she was deceiving herself, but for Beatriz, being realistic about the world she now inhabited meant keeping her distance . After all, she had something bigger to protect: her mental peace .
“So, I better stay away. Being trapped in a story of love and intergalactic politics is not part of my plans.”
With one last look at her phone , where Lucien had left a casual message confirming their meeting, Beatriz collapsed onto her bed.
“And then there’s Emil… But that, I really don’t want to touch.” Emil’s political struggle, the sacrifices of his people, the pain and losses he carried… all of that left her thoughtful, but even more determined not to get involved . After all, if she hadn’t wanted to get involved in politics on Earth, she was even less likely to do it in this universe.
Beatriz couldn’t stop thinking about Lucien as she walked down the stairs of the building, watching the night sky through the gaps. The name Sirius came to mind every time he appeared. It wasn’t just the name of a distant star, but a constant reminder of the disconnection she felt toward others, including herself. Lucien, like that star, was bright , but distant—both in body and soul.
Sometimes, Beatriz wondered if he himself felt that distance . She knew Lucien had his own story , something much bigger than anything she could understand. In fact, in one of the few times she had read the forums, Lucien’s fans had mentioned in a somber tone that his life was " marked by a cycle he hadn’t chosen."
But like Sirius, Lucien’s soul shone brightly, yet was trapped in an empty, distant space . The curse surrounding him had not only stripped him of a true life but had also turned him into a specter—someone who could be admired from afar but never fully reached.
After her hectic day of deep thoughts, Beatriz received a call from Emil while she was in her apartment. He invited her to go out to the roof of the building to watch the stars. She, a bit surprised but intrigued, accepted.
Emil, with a calm voice — “Beatriz? I was thinking… would you like to go watch the stars? There’s a spot on the roof of the other building where the view is incredible, and the night is clear. Maybe it’ll help you disconnect a bit.”
Beatriz, looking at the roof of her apartment, taking a breath — “Well, I don’t have much to do… Why not? I’m a little tired of being inside all the time.”
[Both hang up, and Beatriz climbs to the roof of the other building, finding Emil looking up at the sky.]
“— I was just thinking about how far some things are… you know, the stars.”
Beatriz looked up, observing the lights shining in the sky. The stars seemed so close , but she knew they were really unreachable.
“— Distance, huh?” Emil followed her gaze, interested but without asking too many questions.
“Sometimes I think stars are like people. They shine so intensely, but they’re so far that not even a telescope could get close enough.”
Beatriz, thoughtful — “It’s curious how something so bright can feel so unreachable .”
She sighed lightly, speaking aloud.
“Sometimes I feel there are things you just can’t reach, no matter how hard you try.”
Emil, smiling kindly — “You know? Sometimes it’s better not to try to reach them. Just observe and learn to admire them from afar, without expecting them to come closer.”
“— I think you’re right… Maybe some things have to stay where they are, even if it’s hard to accept.”
Beatriz fell silent for a moment, reflecting.
“It’s just that sometimes, I don’t know if that’s enough for me.”
Emil, with a calm tone — “It’s difficult, but maybe the important thing is to learn to be at peace with what you can’t control. What you can’t reach… is just part of the path.”
Beatriz looked at him, noticing the serenity on his face. She couldn’t help but feel a slight sense of comfort from his words, even though she knew there was still much she didn’t understand. The sky was calm, and she also felt a fleeting peace, although something told her that peace wouldn’t last long.
Beatriz, smiling softly — “Thank you, Emil. I think I needed to hear that.”
Emil, offering a slight smile — “You’re welcome. Being here, watching the stars, reminds us that there’s always something beyond. Sometimes it’s good to just go with what is, without pressuring yourself too much to understand everything.”
Both remained silent for a few minutes, gazing at the stars . There were no more words, just the calmness of sharing a simple yet meaningful moment.
After two days , Beatriz returned to Lucien’s house , bringing along homework to do while she was there. She opted for more mundane tasks instead of exercise, which she didn’t plan to do with Lucien nearby. While studying, something curious happened: one of Lucien’s jackets lost a button . Beatriz, taking advantage of her sewing skills , offered to fix it.
After sewing the button, she confidently headed to Lucien’s room . She knocked three times , as she had been taught at home, and opened the door—without expecting him to be just out of the shower , barely wrapped in a towel . Their eyes met intensely.
Beatriz, far from feeling uncomfortable, burst out laughing . She was used to seeing her brothers and father in similar situations, so the scene didn’t faze her. What did amuse her was noticing that Lucien “ wasn’t wearing sandals” when he entered the bathroom.
— “I just wanted to leave you the jacket. The button’s fixed,” she said between laughs. She quickly excused herself and, still laughing, went back to her work.
Lucien, caught off guard, didn’t know how to react. It wasn’t the response he expected, but something about Beatriz’s naturalness intrigued him. From that day, she began to feel more comfortable in his house, and the relationship between them started to improve.
The Challenge
Lucien was leaning against the doorframe , watching Beatriz as she worked on one of the mundane tasks she had brought with her. The sound of the pen sliding across the paper filled the silence, but something in the atmosphere between them had changed since she came back. It wasn't the same kind of awkwardness that had marked their first encounters. Now there was a subtle tension , a kind of attraction and challenge hanging in the air.
—“Don’t you get tired of doing such… boring things?” Lucien asked, his tone full of that usual arrogance. His gaze was fixed on Beatriz, as if he wanted her to stop what she was doing and pay attention to him.
Beatriz looked up for a moment, said nothing, and went back to her work. “I’m not here to please him,” she thought, but something inside her knew that Lucien wouldn’t leave her alone so easily.
—“Not all of us are made for fighting, Lucien. Not all of us need to prove we’re strong or invincible ,” she replied, not raising her voice, but with a firmness meant to make her stance clear.
Lucien smiled—that challenging smile that immediately put her on alert.
—“Do you think I’m the kind of person who settles for that?” He walked toward her with slow, confident steps, as if he didn’t care that she was busy. —“If you want to survive here, you’ll need to do more than read books and sew buttons, Beatriz.”
Beatriz set her pen down on the table, feeling her pulse quicken at Lucien’s words. She knew what he meant, but she still wasn’t sure if she wanted to face that kind of challenge . The world she was now trapped in was so different, so dangerous , and she still felt like a stranger in it.
—“What are you suggesting?” she asked, a mix of weariness and confusion in her voice as she stood from her chair and gave him a defiant look.
Lucien stopped in front of her, so close she could almost feel the heat radiating from his body. His red eyes shone with renewed intensity.
—“I challenge you to train with me ,” he said, voice deep and confident. “Let’s see if you can handle it. If you don’t, you’ll never know if you’ve got what it takes to survive in this world—or in this game, if that’s what you want to call it.”
Beatriz frowned. The idea of training with him, of physically facing Lucien, made her uneasy—but something inside her rebelled against the idea of being intimidated. She knew this world would demand more than she had imagined if she wanted to find a way out—or at least understand what was really happening.
—“And what if I don’t want to?” she replied, raising an eyebrow and trying to stay calm.
Lucien shrugged, as if it didn’t matter whether she accepted or not—but the smirk on his face showed he knew exactly how to push her buttons.
—“It’s up to you. But remember—every time you run away from me, a part of this game will slip through your fingers. And I happen to enjoy seeing how far you can go.” He stepped back, watching her closely, measuring her response.
Beatriz stared at him, trying to figure out what was behind this challenge. Was he trying to control her? Or was he genuinely interested in seeing how she would evolve? The answer wasn’t clear, but something inside her pushed her forward.
—“I’ll do it,” she said at last, voice steady—even as her mind raced, still unsure what this would mean.
Lucien raised an eyebrow, surprised by how quickly she answered, but his face showed nothing but satisfaction.
—“Perfect. But I’m warning you, kitten… it’s not going to be easy. Get ready for what’s coming.”
Beatriz stared back without flinching. Something inside her had been ignited , though she still didn’t know whether it was anger , fear, or something else.
—“We’ll see who gets tired first,” she replied, with a smile she couldn’t quite suppress.
Lucien watched her for a moment, evaluating her words. She seemed… changed. And though he wouldn’t admit it out loud, that intrigued him even more. The training would begin—but so would something far more complicated: his own fascination with her.
Notes:
In this chapter, Beatriz — a true Pisces born in the Year of the Snake — dives into her most introspective and existential thoughts, questioning her place in a universe she never asked to be part of. As she navigates the political weight of Emil and the chaotic magnetism of Lucien, each of them awakens a different part of her sensitivity. Emil reminds her how distant stars — and people — can be, carrying the heavy burden of the past. Meanwhile, Lucien stirs her fighting spirit, challenging her to stop observing and start acting. Beatriz may not know if she truly wants to play this game, but like any wise snake, she knows when to wait, watch… and strike.
Chapter 10: The Hidden Potential
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
Beatriz put on her training clothes with a mix of anxiety and determination . On the outside, she tried to keep her composure, but deep down, she knew this wasn't what she had imagined. Lucien was already in the center of the gym, arms crossed, watching her with that mocking smile that irritated her so much.
—Come on, kitty —he said in a condescending tone —, you won’t learn anything if you don’t take this seriously.
Beatriz took a deep breath and stepped closer. She tried not to show her discomfort as she got ready for the first strike. Lucien held out his arms, inviting her to hit his wrists.
—Is that all you’ve got? —he said, almost laughing as he watched her.
Beatriz, her face expressionless, tried not to let it affect her. But her blows— soft and calculated —felt almost harmless to him. The way he mocked her , like she was just a toy , made her feel small , like a child who had never learned to fight. The stress began building inside her, pressure she didn’t know how to release.
—Is that the best you can do? —Lucien said, now with an arrogant grin . —I thought you’d give me more of a challenge.
Beatriz’s expression hardened. She tried not to show how she felt, but a knot started forming in her chest. The memories of being seen as some sort of freak for her strength in the past were coming back. She had never been welcomed in the world of sports, and now Lucien's teasing made her feel like that rejected little girl all over again.
The atmosphere grew heavier , and even though she tried not to show it, Beatriz felt her strength crumbling. Shadows from her past stirred in the corners of her mind. Suddenly, a wave of frustration crashed over her, and in a burst of irritation, she gritted her teeth.
Lucien, sensing he was pushing her too fast , threw her a more direct challenge:
—Come on, can’t you throw a real punch? If you’re as strong as you claim, prove it.
Those words made one thing clear: Beatriz was at the edge of her patience. Something inside her snapped , and without thinking, she closed her eyes for a moment. It was as if the gym faded away. The training, the mockery, the pressure… everything blurred beneath the clarity of what she had to do.
🎵 Final Fantasy VII - Let The Battles Begin! (Piano Version) 🎵
Instinctively , images of the fights she’d seen in video games began to flow through her mind . A strange energy wrapped around her, and when she opened her eyes, they burned with a new intensity. Her pupils narrowed, and in a soft, nearly inaudible whisper, she said:
— Tifa Lockhart.
Lucien didn’t get the reference, but something in her eyes shifted. He didn’t recognize her anymore. Her movements suddenly felt natural , as if she was connected to something beyond her own thoughts. It was like her body responded differently , more efficiently . The blow she threw at Lucien was no longer soft or predictable—it was fast , precise , and backed by an unstoppable force .
Suddenly, Beatriz was no longer just a girl trying to train. She was someone with a hidden ability she hadn’t expected to unlock. Her senses sharpened , and her body seemed to sync with the energy coursing through her veins. The punch she delivered was so powerful that Lucien had to step back, visibly surprised .
—What… what was that? —he asked, staring at her with a mix of awe and confusion .
In her mind, Beatriz felt she had crossed a line . The power inside her had changed her , and the mode she’d activated—similar to the "SEED mode" from Gundam SEED —wrapped her in a state of controlled fury . Her muscles tensed, and without hesitation, she took a combat stance , ready for whatever came next.
Lucien watched her in silence, now with a spark of curiosity and respect . Beatriz was no longer just the girl trying to fit in . There was something else inside her now, something he hadn’t anticipated.
The fight between them had just taken a completely different turn.
Beauty and the Beast
Beatriz, already immersed in the mode she had activated without thinking, began to move with unexpected precision . The memories of video games and fights she had watched fused in her mind, and each movement felt more like a choreography than a battle. When Lucien tried to strike, Beatriz dodged effortlessly, as if she had already anticipated his moves.
— Left side, —she whispered to herself, focused.
With a graceful motion , she allowed him to strike from that angle, but instead of defending, she stepped forward with a quick spin. In the blink of an eye, her hands moved like she was conducting a dance , landing blows on Lucien’s pressure points with deadly precision.
— Strike first, strike hard, no mercy… —she murmured, almost like a mantra. The phrase from Cobra Kai echoed in her mind, but what had begun as a simple training match was now turning into something far darker .
With a single hit, Lucien was forced to retreat, his left arm immobilized . Beatriz, feeling the fury inside her growing, acted on pure instinct. With two swift movements, she struck additional pressure points , leaving him disoriented and paralyzed . The gym filled with the sound of blows, but Beatriz didn’t stop. Without thinking, she launched a Tifa Lockhart-style spinning kick , both legs striking Lucien with overwhelming force.
Lucien hit the ground, unable to move from the pain and pressure in the areas she had targeted. Beatriz, in a moment of clarity , looked down at her trembling hands , and suddenly stopped. The feeling of having him at her mercy, completely helpless , made the fury inside her begin to crumble . She couldn’t keep hitting him. Something inside her held back.
She remembered that she didn't hate him. She didn’t want to hurt him. She wanted to understand him—as a player , as a person . The idea of continuing felt absurd , and a wave of guilt hit her. She looked at her fallen opponent and, as she raised her arm for one final strike to the face, her humanity stopped her. She couldn’t. She didn’t want to .
The restraint was automatic. In that instant, she stepped back, stumbling slightly. In a whisper, barely audible, she muttered:
— I’m sorry…
🎵 Valkyrie Profile 2: Silmeria OST - Movement of Distorted Causality 🎵
But anxiety and nervousness overwhelmed her completely. Cold sweat broke out on her forehead. She was hyperventilating , trying to pull herself together. The exhaustion , both physical and emotional, started to weigh her down. The frustration was palpable, but she couldn’t stay there. She couldn’t see Lucien as a true enemy —not entirely.
Without thinking, she stepped back, slapped her own cheek , letting the shame and tension flood her, her cheek flushing red from the blow. Without looking back, she turned, nearly tripping as she rushed out of the gym.
She ran like her life depended on it, until she reached her locker. She changed quickly , and with a broken sigh, tried to calm down , but her mind wouldn’t allow it. Her body , her thoughts , everything was saturated with emotions she had no idea how to manage.
— I don’t know what’s happening to me… —she whispered. Without thinking, she spun around and started running for the exit . The echoes of her rushed breathing filled the hallway. Every step, every breath, was a visceral reaction to the chaos inside her. The gym lights faded from view, but the weight of what she had done still burned in her chest .
Beatriz couldn’t afford to look back. She just wanted to leave it all behind .
She reached Lucien’s apartment, but didn’t stop. With a speed even she didn’t understand, she ran to the stairs, descending without looking, like she wanted to escape from herself . Her feet barely touched the steps while her mind raced , replaying every second of what had happened—every word, every gesture, every silence.
Outside the building, she kept running. The city lights shone around her, but everything felt distant , as if she were trapped in a bubble of confusion . The sensation of being in control of the fight, only to lose emotional control , was overwhelming .
Finally, she reached her home, legs shaking, heart pounding. She didn’t bother to close the door. She just stepped in and collapsed onto the couch . A sob escaped her lips before she could stop it. Then another. And another.
The weight of the situation fully broke her. Emotions she had bottled up for so long finally shattered the walls of her control. Tears flowed freely as she hugged herself, seeking comfort in her own fragility .
— I can’t… —she whispered through sobs, feeling the pressure in her chest become unbearable.
She had been suppressing everything for too long—her fears , her insecurities , her dread of what she could become, and what she had just done. The chaos within her didn’t come just from the fight, but from everything her mind still couldn’t understand.
Alone, with no one around, Beatriz finally let herself break . The tears washed over her like a storm, each drop a small release. But she knew this wasn’t the end.
It was only the beginning of something far greater —something she still couldn’t name.
Notes:
Beatriz’s fight was never just physical—it was emotional, psychological, and spiritual. As a Pisces born in the Year of the Snake, her depth runs far beneath the surface. This chapter explores the raw release of everything she’s repressed: her fear of her own power, her desire to connect, and the chaos of realizing she might be something more than she thought. In the end, she learns that sometimes, the real enemy is not the beast in front of you—but the one within.
Chapter 11: The Weight of Responsibility
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
Her entire body was tense, but what hurt the most was the feeling of having crossed an invisible line —something she had sworn never to do again: to use those abilities . The very ones she had perfected through years of sacrifice , which now brought more pain than pride.
After a while, she forced herself to get up. "I can’t just stay like this," she thought, trying to focus on something more tangible. She stepped into the shower, letting the hot water run down her body, trying to wash away not only the sweat from the fight but also the emotional weight crushing her.
A fleeting thought led her to the idea of regaining strength with something as simple as bread . She went out into the streets wearing a cap, sunglasses , and a face mask covering her face. Even though she knew such precautions were unnecessary, the idea that someone might recognize her and ask what had happened was unbearable.
She walked into the nearest bakery and asked for a baguette . “Grief is lighter with bread,” she murmured to herself, remembering her mother’s words . She clutched the paper bag like a lifeline and began walking down the empty streets.
As she nibbled the bread, her mind couldn’t stop analyzing what had happened. It had been so long since she had used those movements , since she had felt that fluid precision in her body. It reminded her of the days when she trained obsessively , perfecting each technique with a mix of visualization and physical practice . And yet, she had promised herself never to rely on it again. The last time she did, the cost had been too high.
Her thoughts paused briefly on Lucien . She had seen the fear in his eyes, the confusion , the doubt . She couldn’t blame him. What must he have thought, seeing someone so young, so seemingly harmless, defeat him with such meticulous precision? But what weighed on her most was her own reaction : the instinct to stop before truly hurting him, the guilt that had driven her to flee.
"What am I doing?" she asked herself as she finished the last piece of bread. She sat on a bench, hugging her knees. She had spent too long hiding who she was , too long burying that part of her she was afraid to let out. And now, in an instant, it had all resurfaced.
But she also knew this was just the beginning . Something inside her was stirring, awakening , and though she tried to deny it, a part of Beatriz knew she couldn’t keep running forever.
After returning home with her heart still racing and her nerves frayed, Beatriz tried to calm herself. Still, the possibility of retaliation from Lucien haunted her. "I hit the wrong guy... now what?" she thought, feeling the air grow heavy around her.
With her mind restless and her body exhausted, she made an impulsive decision: to request a few days off work. She sat at her desk, grabbed her phone, and dialed her supervisor’s number. Taking a deep breath, she used all her theatrical skill to feign a broken voice:
—“Hi... cough, cough ... This is Beatriz. I’m not feeling well, I think... ugh, I need to rest for a couple of days. I’m sure I’ll be better in three days.”
—“Oh, of course, Beatriz. Take your time. I hope you recover soon.”
She hung up with a sigh of relief. “Good, now at least I have three days to figure out what to do.”
But the feeling of insecurity didn’t go away. She remembered how Lucien had fallen to the floor, how she had humiliated him in his own gym. Even if no one knew her true identity , Beatriz couldn’t ignore that Lucien was far more dangerous than he appeared. And if he decided to come after her—what would she do?
She looked around her small apartment, instinctively searching for a place where she could feel safer. The bed felt too exposed . “No... I need something more closed in, something that makes me feel protected.” Her eyes scanned the room until they landed on the closet .
Without hesitation, she started looking for something to hide in . She searched every corner of the apartment but found nothing but a large plastic box she had bought long ago to store books. She emptied it in a corner and dragged it to the closet.
She climbed inside, hugging her knees and pulling a blanket over the box as if it could somehow offer greater protection. She closed the closet doors and sat in silence, listening to every noise outside. Her breathing was slow, held back, as if even that could betray her presence.
Exhaustion finally overtook her, and Beatriz fell asleep inside the box, in the darkness of the closet. As uncomfortable as it was, something about that closed space gave her the sense of security she so desperately needed.
What she didn’t know was that while she sought protection , Lucien wasn’t thinking of revenge —at least not in the way she imagined. Somewhere in the city, the man replayed the events in his mind, surprised by the strength and precision that woman had shown. A part of him was, of course, humiliated —but another part... was intrigued .
Beatriz had no idea how much time had passed. She only remembered getting inside the plastic box in the closet, wrapped in the blanket, her heart still pounding. “Just for a moment, until I calm down,” she had told herself—but her physical and emotional exhaustion pulled her into sleep before she could reconsider.
She had completely shut off her phone, tossing it carelessly onto the bed. She didn’t want any interruptions , no calls , not even the faintest noise that might give away her hiding place. All she wanted was to disappear .
When she finally woke up, her body was stiff, and her mouth dry like the desert. She staggered out of the box, disoriented. She looked at the wall clock and her stomach dropped: three full days had passed. Three days in which no one had heard from her.
She stumbled to the bathroom, turned on the shower, and let the cold water fall on her body, trying to clear her mind. “How come no one came looking for me?” she thought. But she knew: everyone assumed she was just sick , and her convincing performance on the phone had done the rest.
As the water poured down, the weight of the past few days hit her like a punch. She had faced someone far more dangerous than she imagined, and now she had no idea what Lucien might do next.
The cold water struck her like a slap , snapping her fully awake. As she washed her hair, she thought about Lucien—his dangerous gaze , the blow she had landed on him. She knew a man like him wouldn’t forget something like that easily.
When she stepped out of the shower, her reflection in the mirror showed pale cheeks and soaking wet hair . Wrapped in a towel, she tied up her hair with another and rushed to get dressed. As always, she changed in the bathroom, away from any possible intrusion . It was such a deeply ingrained habit that she didn’t even question it.
She opened the door cautiously, making sure the apartment was quiet before stepping out. She walked toward the kitchen, still with the towel around her head, but something stopped her in her tracks. The air felt dense , almost suffocating , and a faint reddish glow flickered in the center of the room.
Her heart skipped a beat.
The air in the room began to change, growing heavier . A thin cloud of red and black particles appeared in the center of the room, slowly spinning like a vortex. Beatriz turned around just in time to see the cloud morph into a human figure .
Lucien was there, standing with arms crossed and an expression that blended amusement with irritation .
—“You know, it’s pretty hard to find someone who literally vanishes off the map for three days,” he said in a calm voice, though a latent threat lingered in his tone.
Beatriz froze. Her mind raced, debating whether to run, scream, or confront him. But before she could react, Lucien raised a hand, signaling that he wouldn’t come any closer.
—“Relax. I didn’t come to hurt you. I just want answers .”
She took a step back, clutching the towel around her hair tightly.
—“Answers? After what happened? What did you expect—a hug ?”
Lucien let out a dry, low chuckle.
—“No. But I also didn’t expect someone like you to be able to take me down .” His eyes gleamed with more than curiosity, as if evaluating her.
The silence between them was tense, like a rope about to snap. Beatriz felt her heart racing again, but it wasn’t just fear. There was something in the way Lucien looked at her—something that made her feel exposed , like he could see through her entire facade .
—“I don’t know what kind of trick you used, but…” Lucien stepped closer, the air around him buzzing with contained energy —“There’s something about you, and I want to know what it is.”
Beatriz clenched her jaw, trying to hide her fear.
—“And what if I don’t want to tell you anything?”
Lucien smiled—a dangerous smile that didn’t reach his eyes.
—“Then you’ll just have to live with the uncertainty of when I’ll show up again. Because believe me, this isn’t over.”
And with that, his body began to fade once more into red smoke , leaving the apartment just as quiet as before—but now filled with uncertainty , and one clear question echoing in Beatriz’s mind:
“What does he really want from me?”
Emil’s Pain
The next day, Beatriz was walking down the hallway of the academy, but her mind wasn’t in the present. What caught her attention like a bolt of lightning was the image of Emil —so dim and distant, with an empty gaze, as if he wasn’t really there anymore.
It was a gray and cold day, like all those that come before a storm. Beatriz had only recently arrived in this new world and still “didn’t know Emil very well,” but there was something about his energy—or rather, the lack of it—that made her suspicious. She knew something was wrong with him. An instinctive feeling, like the premonition of a Pisces when calm waters suddenly turn dangerous, told her she needed to follow him.
It was as if Emil were fading from reality .
That day, he had been so quiet, almost absent, but Beatriz knew that wasn’t like him. It wasn’t the indifference of someone simply having a bad day; there was something deeper, darker in his eyes , like he was falling apart inside. With a knot in her stomach, she decided she couldn’t leave him alone—and she followed him.
She found him in a small meadow hidden within the forest just outside the academy, a place almost no one knew about. He was standing there, right in the middle of the clearing, his gaze fixed on an invisible point, breathing slowly, but with such an overwhelming sense of emptiness that Beatriz could feel it even from a distance.
What struck her the most was his energy —it was almost completely drained, like he had been pouring out everything he had, down to his last reserve. Something didn’t add up. Emil wasn’t someone who let himself be swept away by despair. He was calm, calculating—but now, he seemed shattered, lost .
She approached him carefully, quietly, but enough to make it known that he wasn’t alone. That’s when Emil, as if he had heard her thoughts, took a step back and looked at her, his eyes reflecting deep melancholy .
—“Beatriz…”—he whispered, his voice so faint she barely heard it.
Without her asking, Emil began to explain—almost in a murmur—what had been tormenting him. The truth he had been hiding, the weight that was crushing him, everything he had kept to himself for so long. He was a prince of a world doomed to destruction .
—“My world… is already destined to collapse. There’s no way to prevent it. The only way to save it is... through sacrifice . And I… I can’t do it.” —Emil closed his eyes with a pained expression— “I’ve tried so many times. I’ve failed every time. And time just keeps repeating itself. I’ve spent 242 years reliving the same cycle. Every time… every time I protect the same person, only for everything to end in disaster again.”
Beatriz looked at him in silence, her heart aching from the sorrow and suffering Emil carried. She didn’t understand everything completely, but she could feel the pressure of his pain, the agony of someone burdened far beyond what any one person should bear. She knew Emil’s mind—so logical and analytical—couldn’t withstand that level of anguish.
Suddenly, Emil began to sway, dropping to his knees on the grass, and Beatriz felt his energy collapse even more. His body began to emit an unstable, almost destructive vibration . Something inside him was about to break completely. The pressure, the stress—everything he had been suppressing for so long—was about to make his own “Evol” power destabilize.
Beatriz didn’t hesitate for even a second. She knew what she had to do. Without thinking, she stepped forward, reaching out her hands to his chest almost instinctively, trying to calm him.
—“Emil… please. Don’t give in to this.” Her voice came out firmer than she expected, but her words were an anchor in a sea of despair .
Emil looked at her with glassy eyes, unable to reply. The void inside him was dragging him down, pulling him toward an abyss with no return. But Beatriz wouldn’t let him go. She couldn’t.
There was something inside her she had never thought to use in moments like this. At that moment, she remembered something she had seen in the story of the original protagonist: the “interdimensional rift,” a source of immense power. Beatriz knew she couldn’t give all of herself without risking her own life, but if she could give him even a little of that energy—maybe she could save him, calm his mind just enough to pull him out of that destructive trance.
With a clear mental image, she felt the energy of the rift she had previously absorbed activate. It was an impulsive act—but filled with sincere kindness. Beatriz placed her hand on Emil’s chest and closed her eyes. In that moment, she transmitted almost all the energy from the interdimensional rift , using her power and experience to channel it through him. She knew it might help stabilize him—but it was also risky. She had no idea how much her power would affect Emil, but she had no other choice.
The light that surrounded Emil was soft, but intense. For a few seconds, it seemed as though all of Emil’s pain faded away , as if the weight of his years of suffering was starting to lift. The vibrations of his power stabilized, and his body stopped trembling.
Finally, Emil opened his eyes. Though his pupils still reflected an inner struggle, something was different. A fragile calm had replaced the storm within.
Beatriz took a deep breath, feeling the connection between them. She smiled softly, but her words were serious and full of compassion.
—“Emil, that’s enough. No more battles for now. You need time to think, to heal. I’m going to help you—but you need to step away from all this for a while. I’m transferring you to the research division . I owe you that. And you owe me the chance to help you.”
Emil didn’t speak at first, but in his eyes, a small spark of gratitude appeared, as if he finally saw a way out—even if just a faint one.
—“Thank you… Beatriz,” he said, his voice now much more stable.
Beatriz looked at him for a long moment before continuing.
—“Take a break, Emil. Think about what you want now. You don’t have to carry everything alone. I’ll be here.”
With that simple gesture, something changed. Emil agreed to step away from combat for a while and join the scientific department , where his skills would be equally valuable—without the pressure of facing his destiny head-on. Beatriz knew that decision would be crucial for his wellbeing. Without realizing it, her act of kindness had opened an entirely new channel—one Emil had never experienced before. A channel that had the potential to turn his possessive, protective love into something purer, something deeper.
The Frustration of Miguel Ángel
Two days passed uneventfully until a message pulled Beatriz out of her "new routine." It was from Miguel Ángel. He was asking her to come immediately —he didn’t know what to do about his creative block .
Beatriz arrived at Miguel Ángel’s studio with the feeling that today would be different. As a teacher, she knew her role in her students’ lives was crucial, but with Miguel Ángel, the relationship had more complex shades. He was her bodyguard, yes, but also an artist with great potential —a uniquely sensitive soul Beatriz had come to appreciate, even if she resisted getting too close.
Miguel Ángel was a Pisces , which meant his emotions often took control, and that always showed in his work. She knew, as with any Pisces, that he had creative highs and lows —and today was clearly one of the lows.
Upon entering the studio, Beatriz found exactly what she had imagined: half-finished canvases everywhere, brushes in disarray, and a heavy atmosphere. Miguel Ángel sat in front of a blank canvas, his expression one of deep frustration, like he was throwing an internal tantrum. The remnants of a long, unproductive day were scattered on the floor and walls, and his face was pure discomfort.
—Everything okay? —Beatriz asked, approaching with a calm smile that had just a hint of mischief.
Miguel Ángel looked up, momentarily confused, but quickly recognized her presence. A sigh slipped from his lips.
—I think I’ve got a horrible creative block. Nothing’s working today —he said with a melancholic tone, as if his art were mirroring his emotional state.
Beatriz leaned over the table, eyeing the blank canvas and the brushes around him. She knew these blocks weren’t just artistic —in his case, there was something personal behind it, too. Sometimes, an artist’s life was so intertwined with their work that feelings and experiences became one. Still, she wasn’t about to give in to Miguel Ángel’s sadness. It was time to shake things up —and she knew just how.
—Well, Miguel, I have an exercise I found that really helps when you hit a creative wall —she said, confident that something so simple could change his perspective. —It’s not complicated, but you need to let go of the pressure.
Miguel Ángel eyed her with skepticism, but something in her tone caught his attention.
—What kind of exercise? —he asked, raising a brow.
—I want you to take a big sheet of paper, and I’ll do the same. You have 30 seconds to draw whatever comes to mind —don’t overthink it, just go with your gut. You can choose between two materials: watercolor or charcoal. When the 30 seconds are up, we’ll exchange papers. Then you’ll repeat the process using the materials I picked. Think you can handle that? —she asked with a confident smile.
Miguel Ángel frowned for a moment, uncertain. Yet something about the challenge seemed to lift a weight from his shoulders—or at least intrigue him.
—Just 30 seconds? —he laughed, almost incredulously. —This is going to be… insane.
—Believe me, it will be —Beatriz replied with a grin as she grabbed her sheet of paper. —It’s more fun than it sounds. The best results usually come when you stop thinking and just let your instincts guide you.
Miguel Ángel settled into his seat, picking up the materials with growing enthusiasm as the idea began to sink in. The heavy air of the studio started to lift, and for a moment, time slowed down. They both got to work.
The 30 seconds were a blend of laughter and intense focus —Beatriz sketching quick, expressive lines, while Miguel Ángel tried to drop the pressure and let his hands move freely. When the timer went off, they looked at each other, knowing the real challenge was just beginning.
—Done —Beatriz said, handing him her sheet without looking at it. The activity was almost like a game, but its purpose was deep: to free the mind from any block.
Miguel Ángel examined the page Beatriz had given him. What he saw in his own drawing was completely unexpected —somewhere between controlled chaos and pure release. He didn’t fully understand the logic behind the exercise, but something in his heart was beginning to get it. The challenge now was to make something meaningful , not just playful.
In the next five minutes, they continued to draw, but in a completely different way. The atmosphere lightened, as if art in its purest form was bringing them together in ways words never could. Miguel Ángel no longer felt pressured to produce a masterpiece; he allowed himself to simply enjoy the act of creating. When they both finished, they looked at their drawings. There was something special in those strokes —something that connected them without saying too much.
—This was… interesting —Miguel Ángel said, observing his work.
Beatriz nodded, a satisfied look on her face.
—See? Art doesn’t always have to be serious. Sometimes, you just have to let go.
Miguel Ángel smiled —a smile that held more than relief. The activity had worked; not only had it cleared his block, it had opened the door to a new way of seeing his own art. Beatriz had done more than free his mind —she had sparked genuine inspiration in him.
After a while, they sat in silence, contemplating the results and reflecting. Beatriz realized something important. Throughout her career, she had worked with many artists —but Miguel Ángel was special. Not just because he was her bodyguard, but because his art had the power to change the world around him. And, without meaning to, Beatriz had started to see him not just as a student, but as someone who truly could reach his dreams.
Inside, she felt a quiet pride. Not the kind tainted by rivalry or jealousy —as it sometimes happened with other colleagues. This pride was pure. She knew what it meant to give everything for a goal. She knew that despite the differences in their stories, their paths crossed in art and hard work —and that made them closer.
Miguel Ángel, however, didn’t seem to interpret Beatriz’s gesture as anything romantic, much to her relief. Their relationship was far more complex. Beatriz didn’t feel drawn to him that way, and he didn’t seem to be seeking anything beyond friendship and creative connection. In fact, she surprised herself by realizing she actually wanted to be friends with him —even if that friendship came with the weight of responsibility over his safety.
—Thank you, Beatriz —he said at last, voice sincere. —I think this gave me exactly what I needed.
—You’re welcome —she replied warmly. —I hope to see you succeed, Miguel Ángel. You have incredible talent.
His gaze reflected genuine gratitude, and Beatriz knew this moment of unspoken closeness —with no expectations— had been an important step for both of them.
Chapter 12: Between Silence and Smiles
Chapter Text
Beatriz had been avoiding him for five days. After the training session in which she had accidentally hit him too hard , her mind couldn’t stop replaying what had happened. Lucien, a passionate and impulsive Aries , wasn’t easy to deal with, but there was something in his nature that made the connection between them inevitable . She, a deep and emotional Pisces, often felt too sensitive for her own good , and those unchecked emotions had exploded in that moment, when Lucien had pushed too hard during training with Beatriz.
The scene was burned into her mind: the instinctive blow, the look of surprise in Lucien’s eyes , the sting of guilt —they had driven her to flee. Beatriz knew she didn’t want that reaction to come between them, even if she couldn’t deny that something still lingered . Despite her pride, she knew something needed to change, though she still didn’t know how to approach it.
Five days of silence had left Beatriz trapped in a kind of emotional purgatory , where regret mixed with the need for things to go back to normal. But Lucien wasn’t the type of man to ask for apologies. She knew she couldn’t demand one either, because she understood that, though his fiery temper led him to confront her bluntly, his heart was different underneath . Lucien didn’t want an apology—he wanted to understand what had really happened, to grasp how Beatriz’s internal conflict had driven her to react that way.
It was him who, unexpectedly, showed up at her house at the end of those five days—a gesture Beatriz hadn’t seen coming, yet couldn’t help but feel marked by his patience . He knew how hard it was for her to deal with her own emotions, but he also knew Beatriz wasn’t someone who acted out of convention. He wasn’t doing this out of obligation, but because he wanted to keep getting to know her , to understand her better—not just as a colleague, but as a person.
Maybe I’ve never told you, Beatriz , Lucien thought as he stood at her door, eyes fixed on the wooden frame. But I understand you better than you think. Sometimes, people like you and me fight what we feel—but that doesn’t mean we don’t care.
Lucien had never been one to give up easily, and though he knew Beatriz could be a complicated woman, he felt ready to understand the part of her that didn’t show easily . He wasn’t expecting her to apologize, but he did want to show her he wasn’t going to walk away just like that. Deep down, he knew she hadn’t wanted things to end the way they did. And that gave him hope—that maybe, over time, their bond could grow stronger, without needing excuses or pressure , just mutual understanding.
When Beatriz opened the door, the brush of their gazes didn’t need words. Inside, both knew that what had happened had left a mark—but they also knew something deeper was starting to unfold between them, something beyond misunderstandings and differences . Lucien, with his Aries energy, didn’t want to push her. He just wanted to understand her, so that, finally, they could move forward together.
— Can we talk? —he said softly, asking nothing of her, as if his presence alone were enough to open the door to a sincere conversation.
Beatriz, though still burdened with doubt, chose not to retreat any further. She wasn’t ready to promise anything, but at least she wanted to understand Lucien better— the way he was trying to understand her . She knew this wouldn’t be just any conversation, and though the words still floated in the air, something deep inside her told her that taking this next step wasn’t as scary as it seemed.
Lucien’s gaze, ever so Aries, made it clear he didn’t want to pressure her—but he was willing to listen.
Beatriz hesitated for a second, but in the end, she took the step. This wasn’t the time to turn back. She wasn’t ready for promises, but she was ready to try to understand what was between them . Something in Lucien’s tone told her this wasn’t just any talk—that not all was lost.
— Yes… —Beatriz replied, her voice a bit lower than usual. With a sigh, she stepped a little closer. — I don’t know what’s going to happen between us, but… I’d like to understand you better. Maybe things aren’t as complicated as they seem.
Lucien nodded with a faint smile, as if Beatriz’s openness was enough to begin rebuilding what had been broken.
— Not everything has to be complicated, Beatriz. I just… I don’t want you to run away. —His tone was honest, no beating around the bush, as it had always been with her.
Beatriz looked down for a moment before lifting her gaze to meet his again. Inside her, something began to relax. Maybe the conversation wouldn’t bring all the answers—but at least they could try.
— I’m not going to run, Lucien —she finally said, with a sincerity that even surprised herself.
The silence between them became comfortable . They didn’t need more words right then. They knew they couldn’t force what wasn’t ready—but at least, there were no more walls between them.
The next day, Beatriz walked into Lucien’s office, letting out a sigh she wasn’t sure was from relief or exhaustion. The air was heavy—not from tension, but from the solemn peace they shared , after those three days of not knowing anything about each other. Lucien sat behind a worktable, arms crossed over the surface and an expression that hovered between seriousness and fatigue .
The atmosphere felt dense, almost as if each of them was waiting for the other to speak first, but neither dared to break the silence. The hum of the air conditioner, the rustle of papers—everything seemed amplified by the stillness of the moment.
Beatriz looked around, trying to focus on something other than the obvious: Lucien’s mood . It was clear he had also been avoiding the topic. But there was something in his eyes, something subtle, that invited her to open up . She didn’t want to feel pressured—but just being in his office, without the weight of the argument hanging over them, gave her a small sense of calm.
Beatriz had been avoiding him for five days. After the training session where she had unintentionally hit him too hard, her mind kept replaying the incident. Lucien, a passionate and impulsive Aries , wasn't easy to deal with, but there was something in his nature that made the connection between them feel inevitable . She, a deep and emotional Pisces , often felt too sensitive for her own good, and those uncontrolled emotions had exploded in that moment—when Lucien had pushed her too hard during their training.
The scene was etched in her mind: the instinctive strike, the surprise in Lucien’s eyes, the sting of guilt —all of it had made her run away. Beatriz knew she didn’t want that reaction to get in the way of what they had, even if she couldn’t deny that something was still there. Despite her pride , she knew something had to change—though she still didn’t know how to approach it.
Five days of silence had left Beatriz stuck in an emotional purgatory , where regret mingled with the desire for things to return to normal. But Lucien wasn’t the kind of man who sought apologies . She knew she couldn’t demand one, because even though his fiery temperament often led him to confront her with brutal honesty , his heart was different. Lucien didn’t want an apology—he wanted to understand what had truly happened, to grasp how Beatriz’s internal battle had led to her reaction.
It was he who, unexpectedly, showed up at her house after those five days—a gesture Beatriz hadn’t anticipated, but one that felt marked by his patience . He knew how hard it was for her to deal with her emotions, but he also knew that Beatriz wasn’t someone who followed conventions. He wasn’t there out of obligation , but because he truly wanted to keep getting to know her—not just as a colleague, but as a person .
"Maybe I’ve never said it out loud, Beatriz," Lucien thought as he stood at her doorstep, eyes fixed on the wooden door. "But I understand you better than you think. Sometimes people like you and me fight what we feel—but that doesn’t mean we don’t care."
Lucien had never been one to give up easily , and although he knew Beatriz could be a complicated woman, he felt ready to embrace that side of her. He wasn’t expecting an apology, but he did want to show her that he wouldn’t just walk away. He knew that in her heart, Beatriz hadn’t wanted what happened between them. And that gave him hope—that with time, their relationship could become stronger , without excuses or pressure, just through mutual understanding .
When Beatriz opened the door, their eyes met in a way that required no words. Deep down, both of them knew the incident had left a mark , but they also knew something greater was unfolding—something beyond misunderstandings and differences. Lucien, with his Aries energy , didn’t want to push her. He just wanted to understand her, so they could move forward—together.
“ Can we talk? ” he asked gently, without demanding anything, as if his presence alone was enough to open the door to an honest conversation .
Beatriz, still carrying her doubts, chose not to retreat this time. She wasn’t ready to make promises, but she wanted to understand Lucien better, just as he was trying to understand her. She knew this wouldn’t be a typical conversation, and even though her thoughts swirled around her, something inside told her that taking the next step wasn’t as frightening as it seemed.
Lucien’s gaze, as Aries-like as ever, made it clear—he didn’t want to pressure her, but he was ready to listen .
Beatriz hesitated for a second, but then took a step forward. It wasn’t the time to retreat. She wasn’t ready to promise anything—but she was ready to try.
—I… don’t know what’s going to happen between us,—she said, her voice softer than usual. With a sigh, she moved a little closer. “But… I’d like to understand you better. Maybe not everything has to be so complicated .”
Lucien nodded with a faint smile, as if her openness alone was enough to start rebuilding what had been broken.
“Not everything has to be complicated, Beatriz. I just… don’t want you to run away .” His tone was honest , direct—just like he had always been with her.
Beatriz looked down for a moment, then lifted her gaze to meet his again. Something inside her began to soften . Maybe the conversation wouldn’t solve everything—but at least she could try.
—I’m not going to run, Lucien,— she said at last, with a sincerity that even surprised herself.
The silence that followed became comfortable . They didn’t need more words just then. They knew they couldn’t force something that wasn’t ready—but at least there were no more walls between them.
The next day, Beatriz walked into Lucien’s office, letting out a sigh she couldn’t quite tell was from relief or exhaustion . The atmosphere was heavy, but not tense—rather, filled with the solemn calm they both shared after three days of no contact. Lucien was seated at a work table, arms crossed, his expression shifting between seriousness and fatigue .
The air felt dense, as if each was waiting for the other to speak—but neither dared to break the silence . The hum of the air conditioner, the rustling of paper—everything sounded louder in that stillness.
Beatriz looked around, trying to focus on anything but the obvious: Lucien’s state of mind . It was clear he had also been avoiding the subject. But there was something in his gaze—something subtle—that invited her to open up . She didn’t want to feel pressured , but just being in his office, without the weight of the past hanging over them, gave her a slight sense of peace .
The Button Battle
Days later, calmer now,
Beatriz
and
Lucien
were sitting in the archive room of Lucien’s office, surrounded by reports and
holographic maps
. They were both working in silence, focused, but every so often Lucien would let out a sigh, clearly uncomfortable with the overly serious atmosphere. Beatriz, for her part, flipped through documents, trying to stay focused… until she remembered.
“The jacket button.”
It was a silly, insignificant detail. But her mind, as treacherous as ever, wouldn’t let her rest. The image of that poor button sliding along the thread as it struggled to withstand the tension popped back into her head. How did it hold on…? A miracle of textile engineering , perhaps?
She tried to focus on the map in front of her, but the scene played out like a movie in her mind:
First, the button as Spiderman , holding Lucien’s pectorals with both arms while a single thread threatened to snap under pressure. Then, the button became Captain America , clinging to the thread on one side and to the fabric on the other, in a near-heroic effort. Finally, she pictured the button bursting in slow motion , like a dramatic explosion in a film.
She couldn’t help it. She giggled.
Lucien looked up from the reports, raising an eyebrow.
—
What’s so funny?
Beatriz shook her head quickly, but a laugh slipped out.
—
Nothing, nothing… it’s… it’s just…
—she tried to hold it back, but laughter betrayed her again. She couldn’t stop thinking about the
epic sacrifice
of the button.
Lucien watched her with a mix of confusion and suspicion.
—
What are you laughing at, Beatriz? You know I can’t stand being kept in the dark.
She tried to calm down, but the smile was still there, completely out of control. At last, she raised a hand in surrender and, between laughs, managed to say:
—
The button.
He blinked, confused.
—
What button?
Beatriz had to bite her lip to keep from bursting out laughing again. She couldn’t tell him the truth — it wouldn’t make sense in his world. How could she explain the mental image of a button turned epic hero , desperately holding on to his pectoral muscles ? It was ridiculous… but hilarious.
— It’s just… well, I was thinking about the button on your jacket the other day —she said, trying to sound serious, although laughter still danced in her voice.
Lucien frowned, clearly feeling a bit attacked, but also a little self-conscious.
—
My jacket? What’s so funny about my jacket?
— Nothing, nothing… just… imagine how much that poor button suffered —Beatriz replied, and that was when she completely gave in to laughter, letting her head fall onto the table as she tried to catch her breath.
Lucien looked at her, incredulous.
—
Are you making fun of my muscles?
— No, no, not at all! —Beatriz exclaimed, raising her hands in peace, though she was still red from laughing—. It’s just… I think that button deserves a medal of valor.
Lucien brought a hand to his face, trying to hide the slight smile creeping in.
—
You’re impossible, Beatriz.
Beatriz gave him an innocent look, though her eyes were still gleaming with mischief.
—
Come on, Lucien. You have to admit it was an epic moment. That poor button sacrificed itself to save us all from a view that was just a little too… revealing.
Lucien let out a dramatic sigh, though he was already smiling.
—
Next time, I’ll just buy bigger jackets.
Beatriz raised a finger, still laughing.
—
Or stronger buttons.
They both ended up laughing together, the tension of work melting away in a moment of pure camaraderie .
Chapter 13: Under the Same Sky, Together Again
Summary:
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Chapter Text
The Coffee Duel
Lucien had been plotting his
revenge
for days. He knew Beatriz always had a
double coffee
in the mid-afternoon—her ritual to stay sharp at work. So, with
Arian precision
, he orchestrated his move: when Beatriz approached the
coffee machine
, she found a
custom mug
waiting for her.
In shiny gold letters it read: "Queen of Drama and Buttons."
She raised an eyebrow and picked up the mug carefully, turning it to see a drawing on the other side—a
broken button
with a
heroic aura
. She couldn't help but smile.
—And this, Lucien? Your big revenge?
Lucien emerged from behind a shelf, arms crossed and wearing a triumphant smile.
—Exactly. A reminder of who’s really in
control
here.
Beatriz looked at him with mock admiration as she brought the mug to her lips.
—How
thoughtful
of you… Although…
—Although what? —Lucien asked, still brimming with confidence.
Beatriz set the mug down, turned to her desk, and pulled out a
small package
wrapped in metallic paper.
—Although I expected a bit more
originality
. I brought something for you too.
Lucien blinked, confused, as she handed him the package. When he opened it, he found a
black T-shirt
with a printed image that left him speechless: a
giant button
holding together a
torn jacket
, with the text:
“I survived Lucien Draekos and all I got was this T-shirt.”
—This... Since when did you plan this? —he asked, staring at the shirt in disbelief.
Beatriz rested her chin on her hand, her
innocent smile
as dangerous as ever.
—Since you told me
“you’ll pay for this.”
What? Did you think I’d just sit back and do nothing?
Lucien couldn’t hold back his laughter.
—You’re a lost cause, Beatriz. But I love how your mind works.
Beatriz stood up and did a playful twirl toward the coffee machine, as if nothing had happened.
—Of course you do. Now, are you going to pour me another
coffee
, or am I doing all the work alone?
—On one condition. —Lucien lifted the T-shirt with a defiant grin— I get to
wear this one first
!
—As you wish, Lucien. But remember: in this war,
whoever laughs last… laughs best
.
They looked at each other, that spark of
rivalry
only strengthening their connection.
Mission: Into the Heart of the Underworld
The
Pleasure District
shimmered with flickering
neon lights
, casting a show of colors over the wet pavement. Beatriz and Lucien moved through the plaza’s hustle, keeping up
casual conversation
to blend in. But behind their fake smiles, both were fully alert.
—They’re close —Beatriz whispered, feeling the grips of her
twin pistols
hidden beneath her jacket.
Lucien tilted his head slightly, hands loose at his sides, ready to strike at any moment.
—How many?
—Four. Three on the
roof to your right
, one in the back by the
“Welcome to Sin”
sign.
Lucien frowned, glancing up at the roof.
—Perfect. I’ll handle the three. You take the lone one.
Beatriz smirked.
—
Trusting me so soon?
I’m flattered, Aries.
Lucien sighed.
—Don’t make me regret it.
Without another word, they split up, moving like shadows through the
chaotic underworld
.
Beatriz advanced swiftly toward her target. The
Wander
—a deformed android with
whip-like arms
—turned its mechanical head toward her. Before it could attack, Beatriz drew her pistols in one fluid motion.
—Time to dance, friend —she murmured, opening fire.
The bullets flew with
surgical precision
, striking the creature’s
weak points
. As it staggered, Beatriz spun, dodging a whip that sliced the air inches from her face. With an elegant move, she fired again, disabling the enemy before it could retaliate.
Meanwhile, Lucien vaulted onto the rooftop, facing the remaining three Wanders . His moves were quick and brutal, each blow packed with raw strength . One android tried to ensnare him with a metal arm, but Lucien broke it with a precise strike, using his body weight to unbalance the others.
From below, Beatriz looked up just in time to catch him in action.
—Always so
loud
, Lucien —she murmured, though she couldn’t help admiring the
precision
in his strikes.
Now fully in control, Lucien pushed the three enemies toward the
edge of the roof
. With an agile leap, he landed on the ground, drawing the androids with him. That’s when Beatriz raised one of her pistols, aiming at the
neon sign
above.
—
Duck!
—she shouted to Lucien.
Without hesitation, Lucien dropped to the ground just as Beatriz fired. The
“Welcome to Sin”
sign
exploded
, sending sparks and debris raining down, disabling the remaining androids.
When the smoke cleared, Lucien got to his feet, brushing dust off his jacket.
—Nice shot, Beatriz. Though I didn’t expect you’d really blow the sign.
Beatriz blew away imaginary smoke from her pistol before holstering it.
—I’m
practical
, Lucien. And
efficient
.
Lucien crossed his arms, eyeing her with a mix of disbelief and amusement.
—Does that mean you’re buying the next
coffee
?
Beatriz grinned.
—Only if you admit I’m the better
strategist
.
As they walked away from the scene, Lucien couldn’t help but chuckle. Beatriz had proven, once again, that working with her was anything but boring.
The Dangerous Bet
Beatriz and Lucien walked through the dark corridors of an abandoned warehouse , searching for a Wanderer who, according to reports, had been stealing energy from the main lines. The tension in the air was palpable, but Lucien couldn’t help trying to break it in his own way.
—Beatriz, you seem very serious today. What’s wrong? Afraid I’ll steal the spotlight? —he joked, adjusting his combat gloves .
Beatriz, with her guns ready , gave him a sideways glance.
—I’m not worried. If anyone’s going down today, it’ll be the Wanderer ... and maybe you, Lucien, if you don’t focus.
Lucien chuckled.
—I see, as confident as ever. How about a bet ? If I take down the Wanderer first, you owe me dinner .
Beatriz paused for a moment, her eyes scanning the surroundings before replying.
—And if I’m the one who defeats it?
Lucien grinned, full of confidence.
—Then dinner’s on me.
Beatriz raised an eyebrow, as if considering the offer, then nodded.
—Deal. But don’t complain if you lose, Lucien.
They moved forward in silence until they found the Wanderer : an imposing android with a glowing core in its chest, surrounded by an energy barrier . It was fast, darting between boxes and firing projectiles that bounced off the metallic walls.
Lucien was the first to strike, dodging the shots with agile movements and closing the distance in a leap. His fists hit the barrier, making it spark, but they couldn’t break through.
—You’re going to need more than brute strength, Lucien —Beatriz commented from her position, aiming with her guns.
—Oh yeah? —Lucien shot back, dodging a blow from the Wanderer and landing one of his own—. I’d love to see your “ great plan ,” Beatriz.
Beatriz smiled, as if she had been waiting for him to say that.
—Sure, but don’t get jealous when it works.
Without warning, she fired a couple of shots —not at the Wanderer, but at the support beams of a stack of boxes above it. The precise shots made the boxes collapse, temporarily disabling the monster’s barrier .
Lucien didn’t waste time. He took advantage of the opening and, with a precise strike , destroyed the Wanderer’s core .
— Point for me! —he exclaimed, turning toward Beatriz with a triumphant smile.
But Beatriz didn’t look upset. In fact, she was smiling.
—Are you sure you won, Lucien?
Lucien frowned, looking at the Wanderer. That’s when he noticed that, amidst the falling boxes, one of Beatriz’s bullets had hit the core just before his final blow.
—That doesn’t count... right? —he muttered, trying to come up with an excuse.
Beatriz shrugged.
—I’d say we defeated it together , but since you were the one who insisted on the bet... I guess you’re paying for dinner .
Lucien sighed, crossing his arms with a mix of resignation and amusement.
—You knew this would happen, didn’t you?
Beatriz grinned widely.
—Let’s just say I have good intuition .
The Private Chef
Lucien decides to surprise her with something more personal , inviting her to his penthouse , where his private chef is already preparing a dinner fit for royalty . Upon arrival, Beatriz takes in the place, impeccably decorated with a breathtaking view of the night cityscape .
—So it wasn’t enough to show off your moves —now you have to show me your house too? —she teases, crossing her arms.
Lucien smiles, leaning slightly toward her.
—What can I say? I like you to see everything I have... to offer.
Beatriz holds back a laugh.
—Do you invite other girls to these dinners too, or am I the exception?
Lucien pauses for a moment, processing the comment, before shaking his head.
—You’re the only one who deserves this treatment. The others can settle for takeout .
The dinner begins, with delicate dishes served in perfect timing, but Beatriz decides to return the favor. As the chef presents a sophisticated dessert , she looks at Lucien and says:
—Did you know this dish was a favorite among nobles in a popular series? Though of course, they didn’t have a private chef as handsome as yours.
The chef, not expecting the comment, blushes slightly and thanks her. Lucien, on the other hand, stares at her in disbelief.
—Are you flirting with my chef in my own house?
Beatriz chuckles softly.
—Relax, Lucien. You’re still the star of this dinner... although you didn’t expect me to enjoy it this much at your expense, did you?
Lucien leans back in his chair, surrendering once more.
—I admit it, Beatriz. You always have a card up your sleeve .
Improvised Training
Beatriz adjusted the wristbands of her training uniform , glancing at Lucien as he stretched. Standing at 1.90 meters with an impressive build, it was hard not to feel like she was about to train against a tank .
—Ready, Beatriz? —Lucien asked with a confident smile, his red eyes full of anticipation.
Beatriz smiled back, relaxed.
—Sure, Lucien. But don’t get too excited. I’m taking it easy this time.
He raised an eyebrow, amused.
—Does that mean you won’t punch me in the face again?
Beatriz rolled her eyes.
—That was an accident... besides, you provoked me .
—Provoking you is part of the training. —Lucien took his combat stance .
Training began. Instead of throwing direct attacks, Beatriz used her visualization skill . She closed her eyes for brief moments, mentally recreating Lucien’s movements and predicting his actions with impressive accuracy.
—That’s new —Lucien remarked as he blocked one of her strikes. —Are you analyzing me, Beatriz?
Beatriz smiled, moving fluidly.
—Let’s just say I’m practicing my “Tifa mode.”
Lucien laughed and counterattacked, forcing her to retreat. Beatriz spun quickly, dodging his movements, and both synced in a dance of attacks and defenses that looked more like choreography than combat.
At a moment of high intensity, Beatriz miscalculated a spin, and her leg tangled with Lucien’s. Before they could react, both lost their balance.
With a loud "thud!" , they fell to the floor. Beatriz landed on her back against the mat , and Lucien, trying to cushion the fall, ended up on top of her .
For a second, only the sound of their heavy breathing could be heard. Lucien stared at her, his white hair slightly falling over his face. Beatriz felt heat rising to her cheeks .
—Um... Lucien, —she said, breaking the silence in a slightly awkward voice. —I don’t want to alarm you, but... you’re heavy .
Lucien blinked, clearly confused.
—What?
Beatriz stuck out her tongue dramatically, like a sticker glued to the mat.
—You weigh like you ate bricks !
Lucien chuckled, but his smile vanished when Beatriz pointed at something with her gaze.
—Speaking of heavy things... would you mind moving your hand ? —she said, her face now completely red.
Lucien looked down and realized his hand was, indeed, on her chest . His face turned bright red , and he quickly pulled away, getting up clumsily.
—Sorry! Sorry! It wasn’t intentional...
Beatriz, now on her feet, brushed off her clothes while trying not to laugh.
—Relax, Lucien. It’s not like it hurt you more than it hurt me.
Lucien ran a hand through his hair, clearly embarrassed but trying to stay composed.
—That was... an accident.
Beatriz patted his shoulder, grinning mischievously.
—Don’t worry, I’m sure we both learned something from this.
—What did you learn? —Lucien asked, still curious.
Beatriz winked.
—That you should never underestimate someone who knows exactly where it hurts .
Lucien stared at her, a mix of amusement and admiration shining in his eyes.
—You’re incredibly unpredictable, Beatriz.
—And you should start worrying. —Beatriz walked away, waving goodbye as he stayed behind, laughing.
Notes:
Author’s note:
Thank you for reading, even in silence. This update was delayed because I was knocked out by a strong migraine and couldn't schedule the posts as planned. It wasn’t due to lack of care or interest—just a moment where health had the final say. I truly appreciate your quiet presence here. 🌙💛
Chapter 14: A Rainy Night and the Story of the Dragon
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
The rain poured heavily against the windows of Lucien’s elegant residence, thunder rumbling in the distance. Beatriz watched the downpour from the living room couch , the sound of the storm creating a tranquil atmosphere, almost contradictory to the tension from their recent sparring session.
She leaned further into the cushion of a sofa that felt a little too luxurious for her taste, as if trying to release the last of the adrenaline. Still, she couldn’t help but smile now and then, remembering her victory . Lucien wasn’t far; in the kitchen , the half-open door revealed his silhouette as he prepared something light for dinner. A comfortable silence filled the space between them.
Beatriz stretched, watching the raindrops slide down the glass , vanishing into a sea of reflections. A flash of lightning lit up the sky, and the storm seemed to grow stronger. Lucien entered the room, lacking his usual boundless energy, but with a thoughtful look in his eyes.
—Looks like the weather’s not going to let up, —he said, his tone more of a statement than a question.
Beatriz raised an eyebrow, letting out a soft laugh.
—I think the rain took its sweet time deciding to fall, but… —she looked toward the window, as if weighing the idea of going out. Then turned to him—. I’d rather not risk being the next person to vanish into a puddle . I’ll stay here, if you don’t mind?
Lucien looked at her for a moment, his eyes sparking with that same mix of amusement and mystery . He knew Beatriz always said exactly what she thought—and that honesty sometimes threw him off.
—I don’t mind at all. —He smiled, more relaxed now, approaching with a steaming cup of soup —. At least you’ve got the perfect excuse to stay a while longer. Aren’t you afraid of being alone here with a “stranger,” Beatriz?
Beatriz took the cup he offered, shrugging.
—You’re not that strange, Lucien. Besides, you’re more talkative than scary.
The aroma of the food seemed to soothe her body after the exhausting training. In the end, her decision to stay wasn’t just because of the rain. Something about the space made her feel oddly comfortable , like she was part of a story she didn’t fully understand yet.
And as the wind howled outside, she settled into the couch, her fingers brushing the rim of the cup. The rain did the rest, creating a sense of shelter that seemed to wrap around both of them. The thunder now felt more like background music to the light conversation that began to bloom between them, as if everything else—even their earlier tension—had been washed away by the storm.
He raised an eyebrow, amused.
—Is that so? Maybe I should tell you a scary story to change your mind.
Beatriz looked at him, a spark of curiosity in her eyes.
—Go ahead. I like good stories .
Lucien sat across from her and began his tale—a dark story about a cursed forest , full of shadows and a vengeful spirit that trapped intruders to steal their souls. His dramatic tone was perfectly calibrated, and every now and then, he paused to watch Beatriz, expecting some kind of fearful reaction.
But instead of being scared, Beatriz leaned forward, fascinated .
—And then what happened? How did they escape?
Lucien blinked, surprised.
—Well... technically... they didn’t.
Beatriz let out a disappointed "oh" and leaned back on the couch, thoughtful.
—It’s a good story, but I think I can tell you a better one.
—A better story than mine? —Lucien asked, raising an eyebrow in disbelief.
Beatriz smiled, adjusting her position to begin.
—Yes. But it’s not a scary one. It’s an epic tale .
With the tone of a seasoned storyteller, Beatriz began narrating the story of Dragonheart . Her words painted vivid images: the noble sacrifice of the dragon, the tragedy of the knight, and the bond that united them despite everything. The room filled with the magic of her voice , subtly shifting to bring each character to life.
Lucien listened in complete silence—a rare thing for him. He had started with a mocking smile, but as the story unfolded, his expression grew serious , even nostalgic .
When Beatriz reached the moment where the dragon gave his life and ascended to the sky , she finished with a line that left Lucien caught off guard:
—I would’ve liked to be friends with...
Lucien, thoughtful, interrupted:
—The knight?
Beatriz shook her head, smiling with melancholy.
— The dragon . So he’d know he had more friends who would miss him and love him for who he was—even after everything.
For a moment, the only sound between them was the storm outside . Lucien looked away, his usual smile gone.
—Interesting story, Beatriz, —he murmured, breaking the silence—. Though maybe dragons aren’t always as noble as they seem in stories.
Beatriz looked at him with a mix of curiosity and empathy , as if she could sense the emotions behind his words.
—Maybe, but I think all dragons have something noble in their hearts . They just need someone to see it.
Lucien didn’t respond, but his eyes—darkened by something deeper—watched her with an intensity Beatriz didn’t quite understand.
She held his gaze, noticing that his usual confident attitude had faded. There was something in his eyes she hadn’t seen before—a mix of nostalgia and sorrow that threw her off.
—Did I say something wrong? —she asked, squinting slightly as if trying to read him.
Lucien stood up with a smooth motion, shrugging. A faint smile returned to his face.
—Not at all, Beatriz. I just didn’t expect you to be such a good storyteller. You caught me off guard, that’s all.
Beatriz tilted her head, unconvinced.
—Mmm, are you sure? Because it feels like I hit you with something harder than one of my pistols .
He let out a short laugh, trying to change the subject.
—Don’t worry so much. Not everyone can keep up with your... Piscean creativity .
She rolled her eyes.
—That’s not even a real expression.
Lucien stretched, faking a dramatic yawn.
—Anyway, it’s late. The storm’s still strong, so you should get some rest. You can use the guest room .
—Oh, are you kicking me out? —Beatriz asked, standing up as well.
—Of course not. I just think if you keep thinking this much, you’ll burn out your two remaining brain cells .
She glared at him, but couldn’t stop smiling.
—You’re insufferable, you know that?
—Absolutely. —Lucien winked and turned toward the kitchen—. I’ll put this away. You go on up and get some rest.
Beatriz watched him walk off, still feeling that strange mix of emotions in the air. Something about the way his light had dimmed for a moment unsettled her, but she chose not to press it.
— Good night, Lucien , —she whispered more to herself than to him, then climbed the stairs to the guest room.
As she settled into bed, listening to the rain tapping on the windows , she couldn’t help but reflect on the story of the dragon. A sting of sadness crossed her chest as she remembered her own words—wishing someone could help Lucien remember that, like the dragon, he still had something noble in his heart .
In the kitchen, Lucien remained still, staring at his empty tea cup . His fingers tapped against the table as Beatriz’s words echoed in his mind.
—“More friends who would miss him...” —he murmured to himself. A faint smile tugged at his lips, but his eyes remained shadowed by the weight of memories he preferred to bury .
The storm raged on outside, but within the house, two souls were beginning to intertwine , despite the secrets they both kept.
Notes:
Author’s note:
Thank you for reading, even in silence. This update was delayed because I was knocked out by a strong migraine and couldn't schedule the posts as planned. It wasn’t due to lack of care or interest—just a moment where health had the final say. I truly appreciate your quiet presence here. 🌙💛
Chapter 15: The Night of Cold Feathers
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
The night was cold , with the winter wind slipping between the academy buildings and the city streets. Beatriz adjusted her coat as she walked toward her motorcycle , rubbing her hands together to warm them up. Her shift was over, and all she wanted was to get back to her room, have a hot drink, and maybe read something before bed.
But as she approached her bike, she saw a small white ball curled up next to the front wheel. She crouched down, squinting, and felt a pang in her chest when she realized it was a white dove , shivering from the cold and visibly malnourished. Its tiny feet could barely support it, and its feathers were dirty and ruffled.
—What are you doing here, little one? —she murmured, extending a careful hand. The dove made no effort to flee, too weak to react.
Beatriz sighed and took off her scarf , gently wrapping the bird to keep it warm. She couldn’t leave it there—not with the temperature dropping fast. Something about the scene reminded her of her life in Mexico , when she often picked up stray animals and someone always scolded her for spending money on them when she couldn’t even keep them. But she had never considered it a waste to help a living creature.
She made a quick decision. She started her motorcycle and rode across the city until she found an emergency vet . The receptionist gave her a curious look when she came in with the dove wrapped in a scarf, but didn’t ask unnecessary questions. Fortunately, there was a vet available who could see the bird right away.
After an examination, the diagnosis was clear: the dove was malnourished and had suffered from the cold, but with proper care, it could recover. Beatriz paid for the initial treatment without hesitation, ignoring the sting in her bank account . While waiting, she checked her phone and realized it was almost eleven at night . A long sigh escaped her lips. She had completely lost track of time.
When she finally left the clinic with the bird tucked in a box, a problem became clear. She couldn’t take it with her. In less than two days, she had to travel to another city for training conferences organized by the academy and the Hunter Association . The dove needed constant attention for at least a week. Who could she leave it with?
Her first thought was a fellow academy member, but she dismissed the idea right away. Most were just as busy as she was. Then another name came to mind—one that made her click her tongue in frustration.
Lucien .
It was a risk, sure, but also the best option. Despite his arrogant attitude and extravagant lifestyle, he had resources and often stayed up all night. And she had to grudgingly admit: deep down, Lucien wasn’t a bad person . Maybe—just maybe—he’d agree to help her.
She pulled out her phone, scrolled through her contacts until she found his name, and hit call , hoping—as usual—that he’d be awake at that hour. She told him she was on her way and asked him to wait at home.
The night was bitingly cold , Beatriz’s breath forming white clouds in front of her fogged-up helmet visor. She parked her motorcycle next to the building and, without thinking twice, took out the key Lucien had given her some time ago. It wasn’t the first time she’d taken refuge there, but this time had a different purpose .
The door clicked open, and the warmth inside wrapped around her, a stark contrast to the icy air outside. She walked down the hall with quick steps, carefully holding the box in her hands, and stopped in front of Lucien’s room . She took a deep breath and knocked.
The seconds dragged longer than usual—until finally, the door opened.
Lucien stood there, dressed in a heavy winter coat , a black turtleneck shirt , and hanging from his neck, a silver necklace with an “L” pendant. Beatriz felt a strange déjà vu upon seeing him like that, as if she’d seen him in that exact outfit before… but couldn’t remember where.
—Hi… I hope I’m not too late, I— —she stammered, but her voice faded when her visor, fogged up by the temperature difference, blurred his face completely.
Lucien, with a mischievous smile, reached out and playfully wiped her visor with the sleeve of his coat.
—You look like you just came back from a war —he joked, his tone half-teasing, half-indifferent.
Beatriz, still feeling that strange sensation in her chest, blinked again, noticing his outfit once more. Something inside her insisted that this image of Lucien wasn’t unfamiliar… but she couldn’t figure out why.
He looked down and noticed the box she was holding. His expression shifted, growing more serious.
—Is that what you need help with? —he asked in a more neutral tone.
—Ah, yeah… Well, it’s just… —Beatriz tried to explain, but before she could say more, Lucien turned around and started to close the door , as if the conversation were already over.
—Lucien, please don’t be like this —she said with a hint of exasperation—. If you help me with this… I promise I’ll go anywhere with you next weekend. Deal?
Lucien stopped mid-motion, and in a flash, with natural grace, grabbed Beatriz’s wrist and pulled her inside.
— Anywhere? —he whispered playfully as the door closed behind them.
Before she could react, he subtly pressed her against the door, using his height and presence to tower over her. Beatriz blinked, slightly startled, caught between the cold wood and Lucien’s dangerous warmth , now far too close.
—Are you willing to make that promise? —his voice was a deep murmur, his warm breath brushing against her skin.
She replied in her usual neutral tone, without hesitation:
—Yes, you have my word. But first, please help me with this little one.
Lucien stared at her for a moment longer, then let out a soft chuckle.
—Always so pragmatic… Fine.
He stepped back and led her to the living room , a space Beatriz had never seen before. There were bookshelves full of volumes, a lit fireplace , and a leather armchair that looked far too elegant for someone who claimed to be from the underworld .
Lucien carefully took the box from her hands and opened it slowly. Inside, the tiny white dove cooed weakly, its feathers fragile and disheveled .
—You have a strange way of asking for favors, Beatriz —he murmured as he examined the dove.
At that moment, a flap of metal wings echoed in the room. Diaval , Lucien’s mechanical raven, descended and perched on the back of the armchair, watching the scene with curiosity. The little dove looked at him and made a faint sound, as if trying to communicate.
Beatriz sighed and sat across from Lucien.
—I found her on the way, she was about to freeze to death . She’s clearly malnourished , and her feathers need to regenerate . They’ve already bandaged her at the vet, but she’ll need care for at least a week. And I leave in less than two days for some conferences , so I need someone to watch over her while I’m gone.
Lucien leaned back in the chair, pulled a coin from his pocket, and began flipping it into the air with practiced ease.
— Philanthropists help others out of compassion, —he said arrogantly—. Is that how you see me?
Beatriz narrowed her eyes slightly.
—I’m not appealing to your sense of philanthropy . That’s why I offered to go wherever you want, so the deal would seem fair to you.
Diaval tilted his head from side to side, watching the exchange between them as if waiting to see who would win this little negotiation duel .
Lucien exhaled slowly and stopped playing with the coin.
—You should’ve said that first. —He smirked—. Very well, I’ll take care of the dove.
Beatriz relaxed her shoulders, relieved.
—I hope you treat her better than poor Diaval —she joked with a faint smile.
Lucien let out a low laugh, somewhere between warm and sarcastic , and gently picked up the dove from the box, holding her with a tenderness that contrasted with his usual arrogance.
—When do you come back? —he asked, still looking at the tiny bird.
Beatriz crossed her arms and studied him.
— Sunday.
—Fine. I expect you here Sunday at 11 p.m. sharp . Not a minute later. —He glanced at the room’s clock.
Beatriz rolled her eyes, amused.
—Such a drama queen. Don’t worry, I’ll be on time.
During the week , Beatriz and Lucien stayed in touch every night . Through video calls , she always asked about the dove , making sure it was well fed and that its bandages were changed on time.
Lucien, of course, never missed the chance to be theatrical.
—She calls me every night and doesn’t even ask how I’m doing —he lamented with fake sadness —. She only cares about the little dove .
Beatriz laughed.
—Don’t be so dramatic. I just want to make sure it’s getting better.
Lucien looked at her mischievously.
—And who’s improving more? The dove , or your sense of responsibility ?
—Ha ha, very funny.
—I have a surprise for you when you get back.
Beatriz raised an eyebrow.
—A surprise? Should I be worried?
—Maybe.
She chuckled and looked at him with a mix of curiosity and suspicion .
—Tell me the truth. Aren’t you afraid you’ll use my absence to pull off some mafia stunt ?
Lucien placed a hand dramatically over his chest, pretending to be offended.
—Oh yes, of course. The most dangerous man in the city is going to unleash chaos while the best police officer is away.
—Exactly —she replied sarcastically.
—Please. If I haven’t done anything while you were here, I’m certainly not going to now that I have to take care of this little one.
—I hope you keep your word.
Lucien smiled with confident ease.
—When I make a promise , I keep it.
The last night before her return, Lucien reminded her with his typical Aries attitude :
—Tomorrow at 11 p.m. sharp . Not a minute later.
Beatriz sighed and smiled.
—You’re so dramatic.
Lucien leaned a little closer to the screen, his smile crooked.
—And you say that like it’s a bad thing?
—See you tomorrow —she said, denying him the satisfaction of a direct answer.
Lucien just smiled before hanging up.
Beatriz arrived at the base a few hours earlier than expected, her motorcycle purring softly before shutting off completely. She hurried inside, rubbing her hands together to ward off the night chill . The living room was dimly lit, illuminated only by the soft glow of a lamp in the corner. Lucien was nowhere to be seen, so she frowned and scanned the room.
Then, without warning, warm breath brushed against her ear.
—Long time no see.
The low, amused tone made her jump and turn sharply, only to find Lucien , staring at her with that signature half-smile , clearly pleased with having surprised her. He wore a dark suit and his usual heavy coat , the kind that looked made for the harshest of winters. Something about that image felt familiar , but the sensation escaped her, like a blurry dream slipping away upon waking.
—You still have the bad habit of sneaking up from behind —Beatriz snapped, glaring at him.
—And you still have the bad habit of leaving the door open —he retorted, tilting his head with theatrical flair—. I hope the little dove didn’t decide to escape.
—That’s not possible —Beatriz replied confidently—. I saw her just yesterday. She didn’t seem like she wanted to fly off.
Lucien clicked his tongue softly before whistling. In response, the dove fluttered in from another room, landing gracefully on his outstretched hand . A moment later, Diaval , Lucien’s black raven, swooped down and perched on Beatriz’s shoulder , watching the scene with curiosity, as if preparing to witness something interesting.
To her surprise, Beatriz noticed that the dove looked radiant , with shinier, silkier feathers and a new burst of energy .
—You always have to make a grand entrance, don’t you? —Beatriz muttered, folding her arms.
Lucien laughed warmly and casually.
—You make it sound too easy.
The dove flapped her wings enthusiastically, as if agreeing with him, while Diaval tilted his head, attentively watching his owners with a questioning gaze.
—Wow, this is the first time I’ve seen a dove act like a raven —Beatriz said, raising an eyebrow—. Maybe spending so much time with you turned her into one.
Lucien, with his typical arrogant flair, replied mockingly:
—You overestimate the adaptability of ravens.
Diaval let out a soft caw , as if asking to be left out of the conversation. Lucien, clearly amused, responded with a cryptic tone:
—Though there’s always the possibility that a raven could turn into a dove .
With that, he closed the door deliberately slowly, making sure the dove wouldn’t suddenly fly out. Then, not missing a beat, he glanced at Beatriz and asked casually:
—So, were you thinking of adopting her as your pet ?
Beatriz shrugged.
—I was thinking of letting her go free after this week.
Lucien observed her for a moment before offering a barely-there smile.
—Maybe the little dove was just waiting for you to come back.
Beatriz felt a subtle warmth creep into her cheeks. His tone was light, playful… but she couldn’t ignore the implication behind his words. Lucien always had that way of saying things that made her wonder whether he was really talking about the dove —or something else.
She looked away and cleared her throat.
—Well, let’s not stay here all night. Let’s go.
Minutes later, the two of them rode on Lucien’s motorcycle , heading toward the outskirts of the city . Snow fell in soft, dancing flakes, covering the streets in a delicate white layer. Eventually, they arrived at a lonely bridge , the scene straight out of a winter postcard .
Beatriz looked around, feeling a faint chill—not from the cold, but from something deeper , more unexplainable .
—Wait a second… —she murmured, surveying the scene—. This feels really familiar… Why do I have a déjà vu feeling?
Lucien leaned against the bridge railing and looked at her with amusement.
—Maybe… because some things are meant to repeat themselves .
Beatriz squinted at him, but the question continued circling in her mind. Where had she seen this before?
A Farewell in the Snow
The winter night wrapped the world in silence, broken only by the soft crunch of snow beneath Beatriz’s boots . The river below the city reflected the distant lights, flickering like trapped stars in the current. She held the box with the dove in both hands, her light blue coat dusted with icy flakes, scarf wrapped around her, and her breath forming tiny white clouds.
Lucien stood beside her, keeping his usual confident elegance . His black coat seemed to absorb the night’s light, as if shadows wrapped around him .
—Why did you choose this place? —Beatriz asked, looking at the river.
Lucien smiled, a mix of amusement and mystery in his expression.
—It’s a good place to let the dove go . Would’ve been a terrible idea to do it in zone N-109 . She wouldn’t have lasted a day.
Beatriz rolled her eyes and let out a soft chuckle.
—Dramatic as always. I know. That’s why I said you chose well.
The dove , still in her box, chirped softly, as if she understood what was being said. Her feathers were now radiant , her energy fully returned. But in her small movements, there was a hint of hesitation , of nostalgia .
Beatriz held her gently, stroking her head with a gloved finger.
—Don’t be sad —she whispered—. You’re healthy now. You’ve got new feathers, a new life .
Lucien watched the gesture and, in his usual mocking tone, asked:
—Is that how you see me?
Beatriz raised an eyebrow, confused.
—What do you mean?
—You say the dove is healed , with new feathers, a new life. What about me? Do I give you the same impression?
Beatriz smiled with a hint of mischief.
—I don’t think so. You’re way too confident. Although… you do have a warm way of taking care of things . In your own way. Maybe a bit rough, but you’re not bad .
Lucien clicked his tongue and looked away, as if the comment didn’t matter.
—You talk too much for someone who’s caring for a simple dove.
—I like living on the edge with you. —Beatriz winked—. Besides, you’re the one who said maybe a raven can become a dove .
—You overestimate the adaptability of ravens —he replied with a crooked smile.
Beatriz chuckled softly.
—And what about the chance of a dove becoming a raven ?
Lucien glanced sideways at her, his smile subtle.
—That would be more troublesome …
In that moment, Beatriz sighed and looked up.
—Well, since you insisted on spending so much time with her this week, I think you should be the one to let her go.
Lucien looked at her silently before agreeing. With gentle movements , he slid a finger under the dove’s body and lifted her carefully. The small creature perched on his hand, fluttering her wings softly, expectant.
—Before we let her go, do you want to say anything? —he asked, eyes still on the dove.
Beatriz took a deep breath.
—Yes… —she paused, the cold night curling around her words—. I’m glad to see you’re better, that your feathers shine again. I hope you find a place where you feel safe , warm … at home . That you fly high, that you live whatever life you’re meant to live.
Silence fell between them, broken only by the river’s murmur and the endless dance of snow.
Lucien looked at her a moment longer than necessary, as if weighing each word, as if there was something in them that belonged to him as much as to the dove. His fingers flexed slightly, then relaxed.
With one last look at Beatriz, he said softly, almost inaudibly:
— Go ahead.
And with a gentle push of his hand, the dove took flight , wings beating against the night sky, vanishing into the vast winter.
Lucien stayed where he was, watching her go.
Beatriz felt her chest tighten with a strange sensation, an echo of déjà vu she couldn’t quite place. Something about this scene, this farewell, the snow falling around them… felt familiar .
As if she had lived it before . As if she were saying goodbye to more than just a bird.
Lucien, eyes still on the sky, whispered without turning:
—Seems like some things don’t want to leave completely .
But Beatriz wasn’t sure if he was talking about the dove . Or something else.
The bird soared, disappearing into the snowlit sky. Beatriz followed her with her gaze until she vanished into the moonlight.
Then, as if fate wanted to make the moment even more surreal, a whistle pierced the air .
Beatriz looked up just as the first fireworks burst in the night sky. Colored lights bathed the heavens, reflecting off the river’s surface.
Her mouth opened slightly, speechless.
She turned to Lucien with an incredulous expression .
—You knew this was going to happen?
Lucien smiled with that unshakable Aries confidence .
—When things fall into place… they fall into place.
Golden and silver lights continued to explode across the sky. For a few moments, only the sound of fireworks filled the silence between them.
Then, Lucien spoke.
—You think too highly of me. I’ve said it before, and I’ll say it again: I’m not a philanthropist . A man’s heart goes where his treasure is.
Beatriz felt a lump in her throat . The words hit her in a way she didn’t expect. She wasn’t sure if it was how he said them or what they implied, but something deep inside stirred.
Before she could stop it, her eyes welled up. Tears began to roll down her cheeks.
Lucien wasn’t looking at her at that moment, but her broken voice alerted him.
—I don’t care —Beatriz muttered, referring to how poorly he thought of himself.
Lucien turned immediately, catching the fragility in her voice.
—What’s wrong?
He pulled out a handkerchief and, in a gallant gesture, used it to wipe away her tears.
—I didn’t think the farewell would hit you this hard —he teased, trying to lighten the mood.
Beatriz let out a trembling laugh.
—With all that snow in your hair… even a black raven can become a white dove .
Lucien let out a soft chuckle, eyes back on the sky.
Beatriz looked down and noticed a small drawing he had scratched into the railing. A simple cat .
—What are you drawing?
—You.
She laughed when she saw it was a cat.
—Nice reference, but honestly… I don’t feel like a cat.
—No?
Beatriz shook her head as she sketched something too, using simple lines .
—If I had to choose, I’d say I’m a snake and an owl . The snake because it’s not venomous—it just sheds its skin and adapts to survive. And the owl… because it’s wise .
Lucien went silent, watching her. He didn’t make a joke. Didn’t change the subject.
For the first time that night, he simply paused to think.
And that pause, in him, said everything.
The two looked away for a moment, as if the weight of their words still hung between them, loaded with meanings they didn’t fully understand. Beatriz, cheeks flushed and heart racing, began connecting the dots in her mind. She now understood the real purpose behind all this. It wasn’t a grand gesture , nor a move to impress her. No.
It was simply his way of showing the warmth within him .
She couldn’t help it. With slow steps, almost afraid to break the moment, she approached and gently hugged him . At first, she felt Lucien’s body tense in surprise, as if he hadn’t expected the gesture. Beatriz closed her eyes, resting her forehead on his shoulder, and whispered softly:
—Let me stay like this for a moment…
Lucien didn’t respond immediately. He stayed still, and Beatriz could feel his breathing slow. Then, with his usual relaxed tone, though with a faint laugh in his voice, he replied:
—What? You want to take our relationship to the next level?
Beatriz smiled without pulling away.
—Maybe we’re just two animals getting to know each other better .
Something in her answer seemed to disarm him. As if she had found the one phrase that could lower his guard. Without another word, Lucien let out a sigh and, as naturally as the air around them, hugged her back .
—Aren’t you cold? —he asked in a murmur.
Beatriz shook her head gently, still holding onto him.
Lucien didn’t insist. Instead, he slid his hand down to take hers, intertwining their fingers with the same ease that fireworks disappear into the sky. Without saying another word, he guided her off the bridge , slowly moving away from the glowing snow and the shimmering lights on the water.
As they walked, Beatriz reflected on everything she had just experienced. In the game, it had all been a pretty cinematic , a scripted moment to charm players. But now… now she saw it with new eyes. There was something beyond what the screen had shown her. Something that couldn’t be understood just by watching from a distance.
In the end, she let out a quiet sigh and, unable to stop herself from smiling, thought:
"Well, now I owe him a date too."
Chapter 16: Reflections in the Consultation
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Chapter Text
Winter had passed , leaving behind only the memory of snow-covered streets and icy gusts that once bit into her skin. Now, the cold lingered only in Dr. Kael’s consultation room , a white, aseptic space where the scent of disinfectant floated constantly in the air.
Beatriz sat on the examination table , arms crossed over her chest as the doctor reviewed her latest test results on a tablet .
Her relationship with him was… complicated . Not bad, but definitely uncomfortable at times.
She admired him—that was undeniable. Kael was a genius in his field, someone who worked tirelessly and had an impressive track record in medicine. If there was any character that initially struck her as charming due to his reliable demeanor and pragmatism , it was him. A textbook Virgo . Serious, meticulous, with jet-black hair and olive-green eyes , and a medical knowledge so vast that he could rattle off clinical facts with zero filter.
At first, that had seemed funny—like talking to Virgo Shaka , but with more human empathy. In a fairer world, Kael would have been the ideal standard of what a doctor should be.
But that didn’t mean she liked him.
With her gaze fixed on the floor, she remembered how it had all begun.
Memories of “Innocent Kael”
Beatriz had first met him in the game as a character who seemed cold and reserved . But there was one moment—brief though it was—that she’d found genuinely adorable: a date at a restaurant .
The protagonist had agreed to go out with him without much expectation. The evening was going smoothly, until Kael got distracted by a stray cat wandering near the restaurant. The problem? He had no idea how to approach it.
—Don’t move so abruptly —Isekaiyada advised with a smile, just outside the game screen.
But it was already too late. The cat gave Kael a suspicious glare and darted off, leaving him with his hand frozen midair, his expression carefully neutral—but tinged with disappointment .
That was when the protagonist noticed it.
Kael, for all his rigidity, had been trying to connect . And when he thought no one was looking, he extended his hand and conjured a tiny ice sculpture in the shape of the cat that had rejected him. It was a detail so subtle it could’ve gone unnoticed—but she saw it clearly.
The rest of the dinner flowed with an unexpectedly warm atmosphere . Kael discreetly pushed all the carrots off his plate, as if no one would notice—but the protagonist did.
—So the great Doctor Kael hates carrots —she teased.
He narrowed his eyes slightly.
—I don’t hate them. I just don’t like them.
The protagonist chuckled softly and, for the first time, saw him in a different light. In that moment, he seemed… sweet .
But everything changed once she delved deeper into his romance route .
When Sweetness Turned Uncomfortable
Beatriz remembered it well. The real issue was the letter-dates .
The initial interactions were pleasant, but as the story progressed, the scenes with Kael became too intense for her liking.
There was one moment in particular—a nighttime tenderness scene —where his tone of voice dropped, his gaze became too deep, his gestures too intimate . The voice acting … was just too much .
So much so that she had to mute the audio .
Beatriz frowned slightly on the exam table. Remembering it still made her uncomfortable . It wasn’t that Kael was a bad person—he definitely wasn’t. But the intensity with which he experienced romance… the way he touched , spoke , and looked at her as if he might lose himself in her at any second…
It was as if Kael—normally so composed— clung to those moments as his only true escape.
It wasn’t for her.
And that had been enough to rule him out .
Back in the Consultation Room
—Beatriz? —Kael’s voice broke through her spiraling thoughts.
She blinked and looked up, meeting his serene gaze. He was watching her with one eyebrow slightly raised, clearly waiting for a reply to something she hadn’t heard.
—Ah… sorry. What did you say?
Kael sighed, setting the tablet down on the table.
—I said your test results are fine. But you seem… distracted .
Too distracted .
Beatriz looked away.
—It’s nothing. Just… thoughts.
Kael didn’t push. He simply observed her for a few seconds longer, then returned to his work. But something in his expression told her he didn’t quite believe her .
Later That Day
The blade sliced through the air with precision before sinking into the creature’s joint , producing a metallic crack followed by a distorted screech . Beatriz pivoted on her heel, narrowly dodging the attack of another Wander that tried to charge her. These entities were more annoying than dangerous , but when they came in large numbers…
They became a serious nuisance .
Especially when the weather turned unpredictable .
The first thunderclap rolled through the sky, and moments later, fat raindrops began to fall over the city. Beatriz sighed, taking brief shelter under a worn-out awning , weathered by time.
She hadn’t prepared for this.
—If only I understood how the weather works here… —she murmured, shaking the rain from her hair .
For some reason, it reminded her of the Valley of Puebla back in her original world. Unstable , fickle , capable of changing without warning. And for someone used to analyzing patterns and predicting behavior , having to adapt to a new system was a real pain.
While waiting for the rain to ease, her mind wandered to recent memories .
More specifically… to Leticia .
Leticia: Her Unexpected "Bestie"
Beatriz had met her in the elevator of the medical complex . Nothing special at first: just two people stuck in the same space, waiting to reach their floor.
But her appearance caught attention .
She had a face that inspired trust and calm —essential traits for a doctor committed to the well-being of her patients. Her skin, warm and even-toned, reflected care and vitality , radiating a sense of comfort that could soothe even the most restless souls. Her eyes held the mirror of her passion for medicine—a mix of deep focus and empathy , capable of discerning a patient’s needs in a single glance.
Her features were balanced and professional : well-defined cheekbones that gave her a quiet air of authority , and a strong jawline that hinted at inner strength and determination . Her expression was usually accompanied by a subtle smile—one that promised understanding and warmth in tough moments.
Her dark, glossy hair was always neatly tied in a functional bun , highlighting her focus on practicality and hygiene in a medical setting. It was a detail that not only reflected her discipline , but also her respect for her profession and her commitment to those who depended on her.
But then, Leticia let out a sigh of exasperation and muttered:
—I hope no one tries to surprise me with chocolates again this year.
The comment sparked Beatriz’s curiosity. She tilted her head slightly.
—You don’t like chocolate?
Leticia gave a dry little laugh.
—I love it. But I buy it for myself. I don’t need Valentine’s Day to enjoy it.
Beatriz smiled. Something about Leticia’s attitude reminded her of her spiritual twin brother , Frateley.
—Let me guess —Beatriz continued—. Your birthday’s on February 14th , and you’re sick of all the clichés?
Leticia looked at her with surprise, as if she’d just read her mind.
—…Yes.
And just like that, the conversation flowed naturally . Leticia talked about how she preferred to celebrate her birthday alone—with a long bath and binge-watching series no one else understood . Beatriz, in turn, admitted she never understood why people assumed that being born on a special date meant you had to celebrate in a certain way.
When the elevator doors opened, Leticia gave her a look of appraisal and approval .
—I like you.
Beatriz blinked, surprised by the sudden statement.
—That fast?
—You’re the first person in years who hasn’t made a cheesy comment about my birthday —Leticia said with a lopsided smile—. So yes. —She handed her a card with her personal phone number .
From that day on, they became besties .
Back in the Storm
The sound of tires splashing through puddles pulled her out of her thoughts. Beatriz looked up just as a dark vehicle stopped in front of her. The passenger-side window slid down with a soft hum, revealing a familiar face .
Kael looked at her with his usual neutral expression, though one arched brow betrayed a hint of displeasure at seeing her like this.
— Get in.
Beatriz blinked.
— Huh?
Kael sighed, as if he were explaining something obvious.
—It’s dangerous to stay out in the rain in this area. I’ll take you home.
Beatriz hesitated. Not because she didn’t trust him, but because she wasn’t used to accepting help so easily. Still, considering the storm wasn’t letting up and her clothes were already soaked...
She opened the car door and slid inside.
Kael didn’t speak at first. He simply adjusted the heating system and started driving. The silence between them wasn’t uncomfortable, but it carried a subtle weight, as if he wanted to ask something but held himself back.
Finally, it was Beatriz who broke the quiet.
— You didn’t have to.
— I know.
His response was so direct it threw her off.
— Then why?
Kael kept his eyes on the road, but his fingers tensed slightly on the wheel.
—Because I’m worried that you don’t know when to accept help.
A chill ran down her spine—one that had nothing to do with the cold.
The sound of the rain pounding on the roof filled the silence. Beatriz stared blankly at the droplets racing down the window , watching how the city blurred beyond the veil of water.
Kael drove in silence, as if trying to find the right words to fill the gap. But Beatriz wasn’t in the mood for small talk. Her mind was still caught in the tension of her own mistake.
She’d sat in the passenger seat .
It wasn’t a big deal, right? Just a car, just a ride, just a heavy rain that led her to accept the lift. But sitting there, in that seat—that wasn’t what she usually did. In any other situation, with anyone else, she would have taken the back seat , keeping a safe distance .
But not with Kael. And now she regretted it.
The flickering lights from the buildings reflected on the car’s dashboard. Kael, for his part, seemed calm, though he occasionally shot brief glances her way, as if trying to read her mood .
—You shouldn’t have waited under that awning until the rain let up —he finally commented, his tone light, almost casual.
Beatriz tried to reply, but her voice didn’t come immediately.
— I didn’t think it’d get worse —she managed, though she sounded far away.
Kael nodded, eyes returning to the road.
—The weather here is unpredictable . Like Puebla , right?
Beatriz blinked. She hadn’t expected Kael to say that. She hadn’t expected anyone here to compare things to her original world .
It didn’t feel natural.
The mention shook her, but before she could spiral deeper into the thought, she felt Kael’s hand rest on her thigh .
It was immediate.
Her mind didn’t register the gesture as one of comfort or care. Her body reacted first .
The weight of the hand—it wasn’t that of a concerned doctor.
It was something else.
Something Beatriz
never wanted to feel again
.
The air turned thick. The pressure of his hand wasn’t strong, but it was enough to drag her back. Back in time. Back into a memory.
It wasn’t Kael.
It wasn’t the rain, it wasn’t the car.
It was an involuntary flashback .
A larger hand. A hand that never should’ve been there. The hand of an abuser —a military man who had left his mark on her during childhood.
Without thinking, Beatriz reacted . She grabbed his wrist forcefully , yanking it away with a strength that came from somewhere deep and wordless .
— Kael… no.
Her voice came out low, barely more than a
broken whisper
, but it was enough.
Enough for him to
feel the rejection
.
The word
“no”
wasn’t just a word—it was a scream from within. A defiance against fear.
Kael froze. His eyes searched Beatriz’s face, trying to understand. He had thought it was a simple gesture of closeness. A clumsy attempt to shorten the distance he’d always felt between them. But what he saw in her eyes wasn’t discomfort.
It was fear .
He didn’t understand it.
But he wanted to.
— I didn’t mean to… —he murmured, withdrawing his hand slowly—. Did I do something wrong?
Beatriz’s breath came in short, sharp gasps, her heart pounding in her chest. The image of another face, another moment, still burned behind her eyes.
— It’s not that… —she closed her eyes, trying to steady herself—. I just… can’t.
I can’t.
Kael stayed quiet, watching her. What he felt wasn’t anger. Not even disappointment.
It was something colder.
Heavier.
Beatriz couldn’t stay there.
Her instincts screamed for space . For air . For distance .
Without another thought, she opened the car door .
— Beatriz.
She didn’t look at him.
She
couldn’t
.
Kael didn’t stop her physically, but his voice reached her before she stepped out.
— Are you really leaving like this…?
The rain hit her face as she exited. It was a relief .
She took a deep breath, feeling the weight of her decision.
— Yes, —she said without turning—. I’m sorry, Kael. I need to be alone.
She didn’t wait for his reply.
She didn’t want to hear it.
The rain
soaked her
in seconds, but the cold didn’t matter.
She needed to
move
. To get away.
From the car.
From the scene.
From the
invisible weight
crushing her chest.
She didn’t know if what she’d done was right.
But she knew she couldn’t stay.
The Talk with Leticia
Beatriz sat in her room, staring out at the storm lashing the city . The rain hit the window in a steady, almost hypnotic rhythm, but her mind was still trapped in the events from just hours ago .
The night’s chill still clung to her skin, mixed with the dampness in her clothes. She’d taken a quick shower—her hair still dripped a little—but the heaviest weight she carried was guilt .
She wasn’t sure if she’d done the right thing.
She couldn’t stop thinking about Kael’s expression—
the moment it all broke
.
Had she been too harsh? Too unfair?
A tight knot formed in her stomach. She couldn’t face this alone… but she wasn’t ready to talk about it openly either.
So instead, she picked up her phone and called Leticia .
— Can you come? —she asked, her voice trembling, too tired to hide it.
Leticia didn’t ask questions. Twenty minutes later, she appeared in Beatriz’s room with a cup of hot tea in hand. Her presence, as always, radiated that comforting calm—like she knew exactly what Beatriz needed , even before Beatriz did.
Leticia placed the tea on the nightstand and sat beside her on the bed.
—I saw you come in soaking wet —she said gently. Since she lived in the same residential complex as Beatriz and Emil, she’d noticed—. Something happened, Beatriz. It wasn’t just the rain that made you run like that.
Beatriz clenched her hands in her lap. She felt vulnerable , but if anyone could understand her, it was Leticia.
—It’s Doctor Kael… —she murmured, a shiver running down her spine as she said his name—. I didn’t mean for things to happen like that. I think I hurt him.
Leticia didn’t speak right away. She just watched her with patient eyes, giving her space to continue.
—It’s… complicated —Beatriz let out a shaky sigh—. He didn’t do anything bad . But when he… touched my leg, even though it was just a gesture… I couldn’t handle it.
Her voice cracked.
—It was like my body reacted before I could think. I didn’t see his hand—I saw something else . Something that shouldn’t have been there. And I pushed him away. Hard. When I saw his face…
She trailed off, her breathing uneven.
Leticia, still silent, handed her the cup of hot tea . Beatriz took it with both hands, the warmth seeping into her skin.
— Did you feel trapped? —Leticia asked softly.
Beatriz nodded slowly.
—I can’t control when it happens. It’s like… I disconnect, and I can’t breathe. But I don’t want to hurt him. I don’t want him to think I hate him, or that I’m rejecting him…
Leticia looked at her with both kindness and firmness .
—Beatriz, what you feel is valid —she said with quiet strength—. You don’t have to justify it. Kael didn’t know how you’d react—but that doesn’t mean you have to endure something just because he meant well.
Beatriz lowered her eyes. Her fingers trembled around the cup.
—I know… but it still hurts to think I might’ve hurt him unintentionally. I don’t know if I did the right thing.
Leticia sighed and took her hand—gently, without pressure.
—Listen to me —she said, waiting until Beatriz looked up—. You didn’t push Kael away. You showed him a boundary . And if he truly cares about you, he’ll learn to respect it. He’ll understand that this isn’t rejection—it’s something inside you that needs time, patience, and understanding .
Beatriz swallowed hard.
— What if I pushed him away for good? —she whispered—. I don’t want to be that person who always ends up hurting others.
Leticia shook her head.
—You’re not that person, Beatriz. What you did wasn’t cruel. It wasn’t rejection. It was self-protection . And the people who truly belong in your life—those who love you—will find a way to come close without hurting you .
Beatriz felt something inside her loosen. She could breathe again.
— Thank you, Leticia… —she murmured—. But can you promise me something?
Leticia smiled.
— Of course.
— Don’t tell anyone. I don’t want to worry anyone more than I already do.
Leticia gave her hand a gentle squeeze.
— I promise.
Beatriz closed her eyes for a moment. There were still emotions left to unravel, but at least now, she didn’t feel alone .
Beatriz closed her eyes for a moment. She knew there were still many emotions left to process, but at least for now, she no longer felt alone in it.
She remained silent after her conversation with Leticia , feeling the weight on her chest becoming more manageable—though not entirely gone. She had managed to express her feelings, but now came the hardest part: facing the reality of her connection with Kael .
She knew he wasn’t a bad person. On the contrary—she admired him, respected him, and deep down, wanted to find a way to mend what had happened without betraying herself . But the sensation of having lost control in that moment still haunted her.
She placed a hand over her chest, trying to understand the difference. With Lucien , she had never felt that stab of fear , nor the instinctive need to pull away . But with Kael… her body had reacted before her mind could stop it .
Perhaps because, in a way, she knew more about him than she was willing to admit.
She knew his other side .
The one that haunted her dreams in the form of "Dawnbreaker" —a twisted version of himself, like a male Ice Queen , loyal to the game’s dark entity . Dawnbreaker wasn’t just an alter ego… he was a latent threat . And in her nightmares, Beatriz had seen how that darker side took over his will and plunged the world into an eternal winter , condemning everything to darkness .
It was then that Beatriz realized something: Zayne’s intensity in romantic moments wasn’t random. It was his desperate way of clinging to the one thing he could still control . Perhaps that was why he was so passionate in his interactions—because he felt the only thing he could truly possess were those fleeting moments of intimacy .
But there was another point she couldn’t ignore: the original protagonist of the game.
The chat logs on the phone made it clear—she had flirted with everyone like they were options on a menu . And while that might have been part of the game’s mechanics , Beatriz couldn’t continue approaching relationships that way.
It wasn’t fair —not to them, and especially not to herself .
She closed her eyes and took a deep breath.
She had made a
decision
.
She picked up her phone, hesitating for just a second before dialing Kael’s number . She wasn’t ready to face him in person, but she also didn’t want to let more time pass.
The dial tone rang a few times before he answered.
— Beatriz.
His voice was calm, but she could hear the subtle tension beneath it.
— Kael… —she swallowed hard—. I need to talk to you.
— I’m listening.
She laced her fingers together in her lap.
—First of all… I want to apologize for what happened. I know I hurt you when I pushed your hand away, and it wasn’t my intention.
There was a brief silence before he replied.
—You don’t need to apologize for that. It was my mistake—for not realizing how you might feel.
—Even so… I want you to know it wasn’t personal . It’s not that I’m rejecting you, or that I see you as someone who could hurt me. It’s just… there are things inside me that I’m still learning to understand.
Kael didn’t respond immediately, which gave Beatriz the courage to continue .
—That’s why I wanted to talk to you. I’ve been reflecting a lot, and I think I used to believe that the best way to connect with someone was the way I used to before, but… I know now that I don’t want that for myself .
Her heart was pounding, but she forced herself to go on.
— I respect you , Kael. And I admire you . But I need to set a boundary . I don’t want interactions of that kind anymore. That doesn’t mean I don’t value our relationship. I just want it to be different .
This time, the silence stretched longer. When Kael finally spoke, his voice was softer .
— I understand.
Beatriz exhaled, realizing she had been holding her breath .
— Thank you.
— Thank you for telling me —Kael replied, with a calmness she hadn’t expected—. And for trusting me enough to talk about it.
Beatriz closed her eyes, feeling a strange peace wash over her. She still didn’t know what would happen next.
But at least she had taken the first step .
— See you soon, Kael.
— See you, Beatriz.
She hung up and set the phone aside. Hugging her knees to her chest, she gazed out the window with a small, quiet smile .
For the first time in a long while,
she felt like she was finally in
control of her own story
.
Notes:
She never talked much about what happened before. Not because it didn't matter — but because it mattered too much.
In a country where too many girls were part of that dark statistic, she had once been one of them.
Not all scars are visible. And not all wounds come from fists. Some come wrapped in sweet words, some wear the face of someone you were told to trust.
And that’s why love, for her, wasn’t a fairy tale. It was a battlefield. One where she’d already survived the worst kind of enemy.
Chapter 17: Lucien’s Invitation
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
After the call with Kael , Beatriz was still deep in thought when her phone buzzed with a message. It was from Lucien .
Lucien: "Beatriz, I hope I’m not interrupting, but I have an interesting proposal for you. Would you like to accompany me to an event tonight?"
Beatriz raised an eyebrow.
An event?
Beatriz:
"Depends. What kind of event?"
Lucien:
"A high-level fashion show. It might be useful for you to get a feel for this world’s trends and, who knows, maybe you’ll find something you like."
She exhaled. Now that did catch her attention. Ever since she arrived, none of the local fashion had really convinced her. The prices were absurd , and although the quality was undeniable , she felt most of what she’d seen didn’t fit her style.
Besides, this could be a good opportunity to distract herself—and to analyze the fashion industry of this world in more depth. She grabbed her notebook and quickly scribbled a reminder:
"Observe cuts, materials, and tailoring techniques."
Beatriz:
"I’m in. But don’t expect me to wear a dress. I’m going in a suit."
Lucien:
"Perfect. I actually think that would suit you very well. I’ll pick you up in two hours."
Beatriz:
"See you then."
She hung up and got moving.
Beatriz knew Lucien was a significant figure, so she had to show up looking impeccable. She searched through her wardrobe for something close to what she had in mind and ended up with a sober yet elegant ensemble: straight-leg trousers , a tailored blazer , and a light blouse .
However, as she got ready in front of the mirror, her mind was already focused on the runway . She wanted to see how designers were adapting fashion to this world—what sewing techniques were dominant, what fabrics were most used.
She opened her small jewelry case, looking for something to match her outfit. She wasn’t used to dressing up so much, but if she was going to a high-profile event with Lucien, she at least needed to look presentable .
As she searched through the accessories, her hand brushed the edge of the box and, before she could stop it, several pieces fell to the floor with a soft metallic clink.
Clicking her tongue, she knelt to gather them, quickly stacking up rings and earrings . But one piece caught her attention immediately.
It was a silver chain necklace with a thick military-style tag . On its surface, engraved in elegant cursive, were the words:
"When U come back."
Beatriz frowned. There was something oddly familiar about those words. Hanging next to the tag was a small silver apple charm , with a red gem set in the center.
For a moment, a vague memory flashed through her mind. She wasn’t sure, but she felt like she had seen something similar in a cinematic scene from the game. The thought faded as quickly as it came.
— "Not the time to think about that," she whispered to herself, tucking the necklace back into the jewelry case and closing the lid.
Through the window, she saw Lucien already waiting in his car. She took a deep breath, grabbed her notebook, and left without looking back.
Her thoughts flickered again toward the necklace with the metal plate as she descended the stairs.
"When U come back."
The phrase felt vaguely familiar , but she couldn’t remember exactly where from. Maybe from some cutscene in the game... though she hadn’t paid much attention to it back then.
There was something about the way certain scenes were crafted that felt too forced , too perfect , as if they were selling a standardized ideal of love . That’s why she had set the story to auto-mode while doing other things.
She only vaguely remembered there being an explosion in that scene—but little else. To avoid the tedium of playing through all the dialogue, she’d preferred reading summaries on the wiki and forums , which meant she had missed out on some details.
She shook her head.
Not the time.
She tossed the jewelry box onto the bed and hurried out. Lucien was waiting.
At the fashion show
Lucien and Beatriz arrived at the entrance of the fashion event, where security was tight. Metal detectors, ID scanners, and impeccably dressed guards ensured only the right guests passed through the golden doors. But for Lucien, it was merely a formality. He pulled out VIP passes from his pocket and, with a confident smile, handed them to the attendant. Seconds later, they were granted access without objection.
Beatriz couldn’t help noticing the elegance of the setup. It wasn’t surprising that Lucien was wealthy—she knew his true nature. She had no doubt about the source of his fortune: his “natural treasure” was made clear in the game’s lore. She knew he could materialize gold with a mere gesture. She’d seen that in one of the few cinematics that actually caught her interest.
“An unlimited fortune… he can summon it in his palm. How convenient,” she thought wryly.
Lucien didn't need theatrics now. A single black card in his wallet—a Centurion-style card normal people couldn’t even touch—covered every luxury he could wish for. Beatriz smirked inwardly at the absurdity. If she didn’t know better, she’d have wondered where all that money came from.
The hall was impressive. A giant chandelier hung at the center, casting a golden glow over the fashion elite. Waiters circulated with champagne trays, and classical music floated in the air. Designers, models, and entrepreneurs mingled in small groups, all impeccably dressed and fully aware of their status.
Beatriz stood poised, hiding how fascinated she was by the scene. She knew Lucien was watching her from the corner of his eye, waiting for any sign of being impressed. But she refused to give him that pleasure.
“Don’t think I’ll fall for your charm, Lucien. This is just another event,” she told herself, remembering lines from Kaguya Shinomiya.
Still, it did captivate her. She’d taken event planning workshops in her past life, and everything here screamed precision. Seat layout, lighting, even the rhythm of the waiters’ steps… it all hinted at near-perfect execution.
Lucien guided her to their seats, in a privileged area right in front of the runway. From there, they had the best view of the show.
— “I hope you enjoy the show,” Lucien said, that same half-smile of his.
Beatriz gave him a brief glance before settling into her seat.
— “I’ll try,” she replied.
And with that, the event was about to begin.
They were seated in the best VIP section. The runway, lit with strategically placed lights, stretched before them like a futuristic stage. Lucien—relaxed and regal—appeared totally at ease. He nodded occasionally at designers or models who recognized him.
Beatriz, however, maintained a reserved posture. Her eyes swept the room with precision, though she feigned disinterest. She didn’t want to give Lucien satisfaction. Silently, she slipped a small notepad from her purse and began writing with quick, discreet strokes.
Lucien noticed immediately. His gaze flicked momentarily toward the notebook, but he said nothing—he simply stored the detail in his mind.
The lights dimmed, and the music shifted to a rich melody that evoked the fusion of metal and technology. The first model appeared, walking with an ethereal air, draped in structured, shining garments that looked almost holographic, shifting color with her movement.
Beatriz watched closely, her eyes roaming across the designs, analyzing colors and textures. Lucien spotted a subtle change in her expression—a slight hint of disapproval, neither surprise nor delight.
“Interesting,” he thought, still observing her.
In Beatriz’s mind, thoughts swirled. The clothes were visually striking, but something felt off.
“They look nice... but who’d wear this on the street?”
It was a fashion show, designed to impress. But she sought wearable pieces she could integrate into real life without losing their essence. As the models marched on, she discreetly jotted:
“Main colors: metallic blues, neon purples, bright white. Textures: synthetic, reflective, structural trend.”
She focused more on tones and materials than cuts—knowing those hinted at next-season trends.
Lucien, silent, crossed his legs elegantly. He didn’t interrupt her, but it was clear he enjoyed watching her as much as the show itself.
The runway proceeded, and Beatriz—unaware—became immersed in her own analysis.
Models moved with precise timing, the music synced with the lighting, everything went as planned. But Beatriz noticed something no one else did.
The lights .
A nearly imperceptible flicker near the top of the stage made her squint. At first, she assumed it was a lighting cue adjustment, but when irregular flashes reappeared at different spots, she realized it was unplanned.
“If those lights fail, they could cast odd shadows… or worse, cause a partial blackout.”
She sighed inwardly. It wasn’t her job, but she couldn’t help mentally calculating the risks.
Without turning to Lucien, she said naturally:
— “I'll go to the restroom.”
Lucien raised an eyebrow but said nothing. He watched as she gracefully rose and slipped through the crowd, moving like one of the runway models.
Once out of sight, her posture shifted. She strode swiftly and precisely toward the lighting structure, spotting a couple of technicians in mild panic with the wrong tools.
She didn’t hesitate—slipped a Swiss Army knife from her pocket, approached covertly.
— “Hand that to me for a sec,” she murmured, easing a loose cable before the technician could react.
The men glanced at each other, surprised by her presence. But when they saw her determined face, they didn’t object. Beatriz worked efficiently—cutting a cable section accurately, tightening a connection with the knife’s tiny screwdriver. Another tweak, and the lights stopped flickering.
The older technician started to speak, but Beatriz was already storing the knife back in her pocket.
— “That should hold until the show ends.”
Before they could thank her or ask questions, she vanished into the shadows, just as silently as she’d arrived.
What she didn't know was that Lucien had watched the entire time.
From his privileged seat, he’d seen her departure and, with his particle-teleporting ability, stayed nearby without interfering. What he saw fascinated him.
“First you spot the design details, now you fix a technical problem without hesitation or credit. Every time I think I’ve figured you out, another piece of the puzzle appears.”
With a slight smile, Lucien leaned back, resting an arm on the seatback as he watched Beatriz return with the same calm expression as before. As if nothing had happened.
But he noticed—and he wouldn’t forget.
When the event ended, applause filled the venue and lights dimmed for the finale. Beatriz remained seated, posture flawless, hands on her lap. She’d shown little visible interest—but Lucien knew she’d been scrutinizing every detail.
— “So,” he said, turning toward her with that relaxed air of his, “what did you think of the event?”
Beatriz didn’t respond immediately—she paused as if measuring her words surgically.
— “Interesting,” she finally replied neutrally. “Though some designs seemed impractical.”
Lucien smiled in that mysterious way he did.
— “Oh, how cruel. What if the designer is listening?”
— “They should be more realistic,” she responded simply, refusing to be baited.
He let out a light laugh, then didn’t press. Instead, he smoothly stood and offered his hand to help her up. She declined but rose naturally, as if the gesture didn’t exist.
— “Shall we go?” Lucien said, guiding her subtly toward the VIP exit.
The private parking lot was nearly empty; only a few luxury cars remained in the reserved spaces. Yet Lucien felt it—that subtle sense of being watched . It wasn’t paranoia, but experience .
He walked beside Beatriz to his vehicle, a sleek black car that looked tailor-made for him. Without showing any hint of concern, he opened the back door and gestured for her to get in.
— “Wait here. I need to speak with a designer before we leave.”
Beatriz raised an eyebrow but didn’t argue. She settled into the back seat while Lucien gently shut the door.
Once he was sure she was inside, his expression shifted.
The air around him vibrated almost imperceptibly as he activated his ability . Like a flicker in reality, his body vanished in a flash of particles .
There he was.
A few meters away, hidden in the shadows of a column, a man held a camera , posture tense.
Lucien appeared behind him in an instant.
— “You know,” he murmured, his voice low and unhurried, “it’s not polite to spy .”
The man spun around sharply, but before he could react, Lucien lifted a finger.
Particles swirled around him with an ethereal glow. The spy felt his body go completely rigid .
No screams. No struggle. Only the soft sound of something beginning to disintegrate .
— “I won’t say anything…” the man whispered, a final attempt to cling to dignity.
Lucien smiled.
— “I know.”
And in an instant, the man’s body fragmented into millions of particles that drifted away like stardust .
The camera fell to the ground with a soft thud. Lucien picked it up and scanned its contents.
Images. All focused on Beatriz .
The light in his eyes dimmed for a moment. Not in surprise, but in confirmation .
“Perhaps the ones closest to you are the ones who want to hurt you.”
The phrase echoed in his mind with the weight of an old wound. One that still hurt .
“ Beatriz ” didn’t remember. She didn’t remember him .
She’d come back to his side, yes. But not with the same gaze. Not with the same certainty.
Lucien shut the camera coldly and crushed it into dust in his hand.
If fate wanted to play with them again, then he would play too. With patience. With cunning. With a mystery as deep and impenetrable as the night itself.
Chapter 18: Under the Frosted Shroud
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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The rain lashed fiercely against the window. A lightning bolt illuminated the corridor as Beatriz walked in silence, her wet boots leaving soft prints on the marble floor. She had come to inspect the facilities after some Wanders attacked the area. The emergency generator hummed low—almost imperceptibly—but what truly unsettled her was the stillness in the hospital. Every corridor felt deserted .
“Kael is still here ,” she thought. She knew , she could feel it.
She walked to a slightly open door. Inside, the doctor sat on a resting bench, his back hunched, breathing hard . His hands, covered in frost , trembled on his thighs. Chunks of ice melted slowly on the floor, forming dark puddles. And on his forearm… the skin was blackened .
— “Doctor Kael…?” she asked in a low, but firm voice.
He barely turned his head, visibly exhausted.
— “Beatriz… you shouldn’t be here.”
— “What happened to you…? Your skin… That’s not normal!”
She stepped closer without waiting for permission. When he tried to pull away, she had already reached him. She took his arm decisively . Kael gritted his teeth, but did not resist.
— “This isn’t new,” Beatriz said, rapidly examining him, “these scars are old. This has happened to you before!”
— “Since I was a child,” he whispered, “the ice… it’s always been like this. It protects, but it also punishes me.”
— “And yet you keep using it like nothing? As if you didn’t care…?” She released him forcefully. — “What kind of person keeps hurting themselves like this?”
— “One who has no choice.” Kael lowered his gaze, defeated.
Beatriz stared at him for a few seconds… then extended her hand.
— “Come with me. I have an idea.”
— “Where…?”
— “To the roof.” She was already pulling him. — “Trust me. I won’t freeze, I promise.”
— “I’m not worried about that. I’m worried you're thinking outside the box again…” he muttered in a faded attempt at humor.
— “Exactly. That’s the point.”
They climbed to the rain-drenched rooftop. The sky cracked with lightning, the city glowed in the distance as if alive. Beatriz spread her arms as though embracing the world.
— “You know what I think, Kael? That your power shouldn’t fear you… nor should it scare others.”**
He looked at her, hair plastered to his face, soaking wet, trembling more from emotion than the cold.
— “Close your eyes.”
— “What are you going to do?”
The rain pounded, the wind roared, and the city barely showed through the flashes. Kael, entrenched in his icy power , looked more like a dying statue than a man. Veins of ice streaked across his neck and arms—black and brittle. His body was about to give in.
Beatriz held him steady, standing before him.
— “Trust me,” she whispered, — “Let it out… toward me.”
Kael shivered. His breath formed frosted clouds.
— “You’ll freeze…”
— “No. I have something that can handle it,” she replied, placing her hand over his chest. — “My ether core can process it, purify it… if you let me.”
He nodded slowly.
Then Beatriz began humming softly. At first almost a murmur, but then clearer:
“Have you heard a wolf howl to the blue moon...?”
Pocahontas - Colors of the Wind (Blu-ray 1080p HD)
The wind carried the melody. She was singing the lyrics from Colors in the Wind —a lullaby of warmth and reclamation. Kael blinked, puzzled, but the tone —it felt warm. Human .
And then it happened.
The ice peeled off his body in glowing flakes swirling between them. The atmosphere became ethereal, as if the world held its breath. Each note from Beatriz shaped the vortex growing between them. The wind twisted like an unseen dragon, charging the sky with pure energy.
The storm did not fade. It ascended .
Kael closed his eyes. He released the fear, the guilt, the pain. The ice exhaled from his chest like a sigh held for years. Beatriz raised her right arm, fingers reaching the sky, her ether core shining like a trapped star .
The icy vortex rose high. Then, as the final flake passed between their hands, she opened her eyes.
— “Now!”
A golden flash burst from her center, cutting across the sky like a wave. The remaining ice evaporated instantly…and a near-sacred silence descended upon the city.
Gradually, the clouds dispersed. And then, as though blessed by the heavens, it appeared:
A perfect halo rainbow framing the rising sun.
The residual ice hovered in the atmosphere, transforming the dawn’s light into an impossible spectacle: a round rainbow , shining above them like a corona of hope.
Kael, kneeling, breathless, stared at the sky with wide eyes.
— “How… did you do that?”
Beatriz, soaked, hair stuck to her brow, smiled tiredly.
— “I just helped you think outside the box.”
Kael remained on his knees, exhaling warm mist. The cold no longer embraced him as punishment. For the first time… it didn’t hurt.
Beatriz lowered her arm, exhausted, and let herself collapse beside him, leaning on the metal railing of the roof. She was drenched, encrusted in sparkling frost, but her face held a serene expression.
The rainbow continued suspended, an echo of the impossible.
Kael looked at her in silence. Not with worship, nor as if she were a deity… but like a scientist who has witnessed an unexplainable miracle .
— “Thank you,” he finally whispered in a low voice.
It wasn’t just a “thank you.” It felt like he had waited his whole life to say it, unaware until now why. It came from that fragile place he always hid beneath logic, responsibility, duty.
Beatriz smiled. She said nothing. She simply offered him her shoulder .
Kael, against all reason, rested his head upon it.
A warm silence settled between them. No longer doctor and patient. No longer ice and flame. They were two beings who, for an instant, found each other amid chaos at a point of perfect balance .
And although Kael did not know it yet… something had shifted within him. As if an unseen teacher had touched his soul with a lesson he didn’t fully understand, but would never forget.
Perhaps he didn’t understand why he could trust her.
Perhaps he didn’t know that “Beatriz was older,” or that she was a teacher.
But what he did know…
…was that this woman had just saved him . Not with power, but with something else.
With presence . With patience . With truth .
And sometimes, that is all the heart needs to begin melting.
Kael still held his trembling hand aloft as his breath steadied. The frost on his skin began to melt, drop by drop, until only a trace of warm water ran down his wrist.
And then he noticed.
Where that
frost mark
always appeared—the sign warning him of a new
outburst
—there was nothing.
Just skin.
For a moment, he thought it was an
illusion
, that he had fallen asleep, that his body was
hallucinating
from the pain.
But no. The
cold
was still there, inside him… only now it didn’t
hurt
. It didn’t punish him. It was as if, for the first time, he had learned to
listen
to it without fear.
And from some distant corner of the universe, among dormant stars and unborn worlds, a soft voice echoed unheard. The voice of
Matter Somniorum
:
“Could it have been a
curse
… or merely a path poorly tread?
How many times do we mistake a
cage
for punishment, when in truth it was a door never pushed?
What is
power
, if not the way the soul decides to embrace
pain
?”
Kael couldn’t hear it. But something had ignited in his chest.
A
gentle warmth
.
A
spark
.
Beatriz remained there beside him, gazing at the
clear sky
and the floating crystals still dancing like frozen stars. She said nothing. No words were needed.
Because there are bonds forged not through speech, nor promises, nor sighs…
But through the
courage
to see another—and not run away.
Beatriz watches the clear sky from the rooftop. The
frosted rainbow
still hovers above them, like a memory refusing to fully melt away.
Kael has already left—at her insistence—wrapped in a
blanket
and coughing like a soaked cat. Beatriz smiles tenderly at the memory of him.
Then... she sighs. She sits at the edge of the rooftop, letting the
wind
toss her bangs.
“Why was it so hard for him…? Why would someone so
brilliant
accept living with a
curse
just to avoid disobeying an unfair command…?”
“Why do we always think love has to
hurt
, that duty means silencing the heart, that our stories must be
tragic
to have worth…?”
She lowers her gaze to her own hands. She still feels the faint
tingle
of ice dissolving between her fingers.
“It’s not just about defeating enemies, nor accumulating power… It’s about
imagining
something different. Something that that entity… that thing that condemned him… could never comprehend.”
“Because no matter how old or wise a deity believes itself to be… None can
imagine
as a human can.”
She smiles. Closes her eyes and lets the breeze caress her.
“Perhaps that’s why… I was able to save him. Because I didn’t come to this world to repeat history. I came to write another.”
She lowers her gaze. There are still traces of frost on her palm—but they don’t
burn
. They don’t hurt.
And right in the center of her hand, as sketched by the last drifting flakes, a
shape
begins to take form. A flower.
A
lotus flower
.
Beatriz blinks, feeling something release.
“I’m not her. I’m not the one from the past, not the one who became ice nor the one who accepted the rules of a cold world. I am another.”
And then she smiles. An old and new smile at the same time.
“Because only a human can imagine a different ending. And that
imagination
… is something no deity can master.”
She sighs, closes her eyes, letting the wind embrace her.
She opens her eyes and murmurs with humor:
—“I already feel ancient like Frieren. I only lack the staff and a half-stubborn disciple…”
She laughs to herself.
But that laugh, though brief, is more radiant than all the ice in the world.
Days passed with relative calm. Beatriz, lying on her bed while reviewing some reports on her tablet, decided to call the hospital to
confirm
her follow-up appointment time.
When she was connected to Dr. Kael’s office, the voice on the other end was low, raspy… and accompanied by a couple of poorly disguised
coughs
.
—“D‑Doctor Kael… are you sick?”
There was an uncomfortable silence.
—“I’m not sick,” he replied with
icy
dignity. “It’s just a slight…
atmospheric reaction
.”
—“Uh‑huh. A reaction to the storm, the wind, exhaustion… or to the fact that someone made you
trust
for the first time?”
Kael didn’t respond.
Beatriz smiled.
—“I’ll bring you something special. And this time you
can’t
refuse it—Dr. Beatriz says so.”
—“…You’re not a doctor.”
—“But I should be.”
The call ended with the promise of a future meeting and the hope of forging new relationships based on a healthier love , like Storge .
[A few days later – Kael’s office]
The clock reads 22:47. Everyone has left, except him.
Kael breathes deeply. His desk is covered with papers, health reports, new ether crystal records, but he isn’t looking at any of it.
In his palm, a
blue frost
accumulates slowly, dancing to the rhythm of his breath. He is
shaping
it. Focused, meticulous. Like a proper Virgo: patient, detail-oriented, obsessed with
control
and symbolism.
—“Just a small
jasmine flower
,” he muses to himself, as if the phrase didn’t carry years of frozen history.
The
particles
gather. The shape begins to emerge… the petals, the center. All is well. Everything is as always.
Until it isn’t.
A subtle breeze sweeps through the room without any window open, and suddenly… the flower is not jasmine. The frost
changes
, without warning, without permission.
A
lotus
blooms.
Kael frowns. He doesn’t understand it. He didn’t want it like that. He doesn’t
know
that shape. Not consciously.
He continues to stare at the small ice lotus floating above his palm.
—“Why…?”
The flower glows softly. It appears to
smile
.
Kael sits down slowly. He doesn’t destroy it, doesn’t alter it. He simply leaves it there, spinning on its own axis as if waiting for him to
feel
before trying to understand.
And for the first time in a long time, he has no answers. Only a question burning on his lips:
“What is
changing
inside me…?”
In the background, the frost on his wall begins to melt on its own.
Chapter 19: The Impossible Escape… and the Unforgettable Song
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Thanks so much for the incredible support! We’ve passed +200 reads and counting! 💖 I’m thrilled to see the story resonating with you.
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Beatriz and Lucien in the Escape Room
The days had passed quietly after the
fashion show
… Beatriz stopped in front of a neon-lit door labeled: "
The Ultimate Escape: The Final Challenge
." She crossed her arms, glancing sideways at Lucien.
—“This is what you call ‘something different to help us unwind’?”
Lucien gave her an amused smile, leaning slightly toward her.
—“What? I thought you’d enjoy using that brilliant mind of yours for something a bit more entertaining than shooting guns.”
She raised an eyebrow.
—“You say that like I wouldn’t beat you here too.”
—“Oh, Beatriz, this isn’t a competition…” he replied with fake innocence, before adding with a mischievous smile, “Unless you want it to be.”
Beatriz scoffed, but couldn’t help smiling at the
implied challenge
.
—“Just open the door, Lucien.”
Upon entering the room, they were greeted by a setting straight out of a
mystery film
: old furniture, crooked paintings, and a
grandfather clock
ticking down from 60 minutes. A robotic voice welcomed them:
—“Welcome to the challenge! Find the clues and escape before time runs out. Good luck.”
—“This is going to be fun,” Lucien murmured, rubbing his hands together.
Beatriz was already inspecting the room. She touched the paintings and flipped through an
old book
on a table.
—“Did you know these places usually follow patterns? There’s always a key hidden in a painting or under some everyday object.”
—“So you’re telling me you’re solving this with clichés?” Lucien stepped closer, picking up one of the books.
—“Don’t underestimate them, Lucien. Clichés exist because they
work
.”
Lucien feigned a serious expression, but the spark of
competitiveness
was clear in his eyes.
—“Alright, Beatriz. Let’s see how good you really are.”
They both started searching for clues . Beatriz, true to her methodical nature, unraveled the puzzles quickly, combining logic with a bit of intuition . She found a code inside the clock and used it to open a hidden drawer. Lucien, on the other hand, did things his way: more instinctive and a bit chaotic—but just as effective.
At one point, Beatriz found a
key
under a rug.
—“See? I knew there’d be something here.”
Lucien smiled and stepped closer, taking the key from her hand.
—“Well done. But I think I’ll be the one to use it.”
—“What? I found it!” Beatriz protested, following him as he approached a locked door.
Lucien turned the key with unnecessary dramatics, opening the door to reveal a
second room
, even more complicated.
—“You lead this time, Beatriz.” His mocking tone only made her roll her eyes.
—“I don’t need your permission,” she replied, already stepping forward.
Their dynamic continued like that throughout the whole session. Lucien kept teasing her with clever remarks, while Beatriz, though pretending to be annoyed, secretly
enjoyed
the challenge. When they finally reached the
final clue
, both tried to solve it at the same time, their hands colliding as they reached for a hidden object.
—“It’s mine,” said Lucien, confidently.
—“In your dreams,” Beatriz retorted, lightly pushing him aside to grab the final piece.
The
grandfather clock
stopped ticking, and a bright light filled the room. The robotic voice declared their victory:
—“Congratulations! You have escaped with 5 minutes to spare.”
Beatriz smiled, crossing her arms as she looked at Lucien.
—“Told you we could do it.”
—“Oh, no doubt about that. But I admit it was fun seeing you so into it, Beatriz. Maybe I should invite you to do things like this more often.”
Beatriz shook her head, but couldn’t help smiling.
—“Only if you’re ready to lose again, Lucien.”
Lucien laughed as they walked out together.
—“I’m starting to like that confidence of yours, Beatriz.”
An Escape… and an Unexpected Secret
The
fresh afternoon air
greeted Beatriz and her group as they left the Academy building. The
combat training conference
had been interesting, but after hours of dense information, they needed a break.
—“God, my brain is fried,” one of her teammates commented, stretching his arms. “Anyone else feel the urge to do something fun?”
—“Fun like what?” Beatriz asked, stretching her shoulders after sitting for so long.
—“We could hit an escape room,” suggested
Samanta
. “A new one just opened in the entertainment district.”
Beatriz was about to reply when a voice, perfectly timed and completely out of place, interrupted them:
—“Well, what a coincidence.”
Everyone turned—and there he was.
Lucien
. Leaning against a streetlamp, wearing his usual air of calculated calm and that
smile
that always seemed to hide secrets.
Beatriz didn’t blink.
—“Oh, Sirius!” she said, as if it were the most natural thing in the world. “What are you doing here?”
Lucien tilted his head slightly, that familiar gesture of his always teetering on the edge of mockery.
—“Business, as always,” he replied smoothly. “But it looks like you all have other plans.”
—“We’re going to an escape room. Want to join?” one of the teammates offered, unaware of the
subtext
in the air.
Lucien raised an eyebrow, amused, and looked straight at Beatriz, as if silently asking:
Sirius? Seriously?
She held his gaze with equal calm and muttered under her breath, just loud enough for him to hear:
—“You showed up first, so deal with the name you got. If you came to me, it means you’re not looking for trouble… right?”
Lucien smiled wider, adding theatrical flair.
—“‘Sirius,’ then. I like it. Has flair.”
Beatriz let out a soft chuckle, like someone who’s just won a
small battle
without drawing a sword.
—“For peace,” she said simply.
And with that, the group headed to the escape room. The activity was a
chaotic delight
of riddles and racing against the clock. Lucien, true to his
dragon
and
Aries
nature, took charge with a barely-hidden air of superiority. But Beatriz, guided by her sharp
intuition
and fast logic, ended up being the one who got them out just in time.
Lucien didn’t say it aloud, but his
wounded pride
was noticeable. Beatriz just smiled at him.
—“Dear Sirius, maybe the next escape will be more… challenging.”
When they finally walked out as
victors
, Lucien gave her a sidelong smile.
—“I admit, I didn’t expect you to be so quick with puzzles.”
—“You underestimate me too often,” Beatriz replied, her expression neutral.
—“Oh no, not at all. I’m just collecting more pieces of the puzzle.”
She frowned, but before she could reply, one of their friends suggested:
—“We should go sing! Karaoke would be the perfect ending for today.”
Lucien smiled as if he’d been
waiting
for this moment.
—“That I can arrange. I own a few private karaoke spots.”
Beatriz eyed him with suspicion.
—“Seriously?”
—“You doubt my entrepreneurial prowess?” he joked, pretending to be offended.
The group agreed immediately, and soon they arrived at a luxurious private karaoke . Beatriz wasn’t expecting much, but at least she figured she could “ unwind a little .”
The night rolled on with songs and laughter. Beatriz, of course, avoided singing, but enjoyed watching her friends take the mic. Lucien, on the other hand, remained discreet…
Until he decided it was
his turn
.
He stood up with the confidence of someone about to deliver an
unforgettable performance
.
—“Alright, prepare yourselves for something special.”
The music began. The melody was
intense
,
dramatic
…
And then Lucien opened his mouth—
Beatriz felt a shiver.
It was
awful
.
It wasn’t just that his voice cracked—oh no, it was worse. His pitch was so off that it felt like he was
reinterpreting the song in a key unknown to mankind
. The worst part? His attitude. He was
completely immersed
in the song, with a passionate expression, as if he were performing at a world tour concert.
Beatriz felt her lips quiver.
No. She couldn’t laugh.
She grabbed her glass and took a long sip,
desperate not to lose composure
. Her eyes searched the group for support, but everyone pretended nothing was wrong. No one dared speak the truth. Of course, Lucien was handsome, charismatic, and had paid for the private karaoke. Who in their right mind would tell him he sang like he was
summoning a storm
?
When the song ended, Lucien gave an elegant bow.
—“What did you think?”
There was an awkward pause. Then, someone gave a hesitant clap.
—“Incredible…” one of Beatriz’s friends mumbled, clearly lying.
Beatriz nodded with a
poker-faced smile
.
—“Yes… very impressive.”
But she felt like she was going to explode.
With a swift movement, she stood up.
—“Bathroom.”
She entered the restroom and locked the door. And then, she collapsed.
The laughter burst out
instantly
.
She tried to hold it back, but it was impossible. She covered her mouth, but the laugh came out like a
pig-snort
, which only made her laugh harder until her stomach hurt.
Lucien. Singing. Badly.
It was a secret she never expected to uncover.
When she finally regained her composure, she looked at herself in the mirror, took a deep breath, and prepared to walk out with her usual neutral expression.
But as she opened the door…
Lucien was there
, leaning casually against the wall with his arms crossed.
—“Feeling better?” he asked, that sly smile dancing on his lips.
Beatriz froze for a second but forced herself to remain composed.
—“What are you talking about?”
He tilted his head.
—“I don’t know… I thought I heard something curious in there.”
Beatriz narrowed her eyes, but didn’t take the bait.
—“You must be imagining things.”
Lucien smiled.
—“Maybe.”
And with that, he turned and walked back to the others, leaving Beatriz with a
slight sense of danger
.
No. She couldn’t let him find out she’d laughed at him.
Because if there was one thing she knew about
Lucien
… it was that he
never
let a move go unanswered.
While everyone kept enjoying the karaoke , Lucien turned his attention to Samanta ’s movements. Her smile looked innocent, but he had already noticed she had taken more pictures of Beatriz than of the event itself . It wasn’t just admiration—there was something more. And Lucien didn’t trust coincidences.
Subtly, he let his
particle-based body
scan the surroundings, pinpointing Samanta’s phone. With pinpoint accuracy, he manipulated the energy in the air, barely altering the trajectory of one of the drinks on the table—a
gesture so subtle
, no one would notice.
—“Ah!” Samanta cried out as a glass tilted right next to her, forcing her to move quickly to avoid being soaked. In doing so, she knocked her own phone off the table. It hit the floor with a dry thud.
—“Oops…” Lucien murmured, hiding his satisfaction behind a surprised expression. He immediately bent down to pick it up, but when he turned it over, the
screen was shattered
.
—“No way…” Samanta took the phone, trying to turn it on—no luck.
—“So clumsy of me. I should’ve caught the glass first,” Lucien said kindly. “But don’t worry—I’ll get you a new one.”
Samanta blinked, surprised by his gallantry.
—“That’s not necessary…”
—“I insist. I wouldn’t feel right otherwise,” he said with a
charming smile
. “Let me take a quick look to make sure you don’t lose your data.”
With a mix of doubt and gratitude, Samanta handed over the phone , suspecting nothing.
Lucien didn’t waste a second. He stepped out to a more private area. While pretending to inspect the damage, he
slid a small tool
into the device, smoothly
extracting the internal memory
without anyone noticing.
In his mind, only one question lingered:
Who was Samanta really working for?
He walked to the parking lot , leaning back against the rear seat of a car, idly playing with the extracted memory card from Samanta’s phone. He wasn’t surprised by what he found: most of the photos were of Beatriz . Not the event. Not the speeches. Not even the other guests. Just her.
He pressed the small card between his fingers, gazing at his reflection in the rearview mirror. His expression was calm, but his eyes burned with that calculated intensity he saved for pivotal moments. Beatriz was surrounded by people who claimed to want what was best for her, but… how many of them were truly pure in their intentions?
He recalled what he had once told his reborn witch in another life:
“Maybe the ones closest to you are the ones who want to hurt you most.”
The irony amused him.
Beatriz didn’t fully remember him yet, but her instinct kept her close—and for now, that was enough. He could wait. After all, he had always been a patient man .
He still needed to confirm what side Samanta was on. His little performance had gone flawlessly: an “accidental” spill, a charming apology, and the promise of a better phone. No one suspected a thing. No one thought that, amid it all, he had secured the information he wanted .
He slid the memory card into his own device and reviewed it calmly. The number of photos pointed to obsession , but beyond that, his instinct told him Samanta wasn’t acting alone. There was a pattern to the images, as if they were taken with a purpose beyond admiration or friendship. He was nearly certain she worked for someone—but not yet clear who . Miguel Ángel , maybe. Or worse… the Grand Spy .
A soft sigh escaped him as he closed the viewer on his device. He wouldn’t confront her.
Not yet.
Information was power, and he preferred to
play his cards at the right time
.
For now, all he had to do was ensure
Samanta kept believing her secret was safe
. That she still thought
no one had noticed
.
He turned on the new phone he had “bought for her” and, with the ease of someone adjusting a watch, installed a discreet tracker into its system. Nothing invasive, nothing that would raise suspicion—just enough to know who contacted her, where she went, and what moves she made .
When he finally returned to the
karaoke room
, he handed her the phone—along with a
new device
. His smile was flawless, his manner
impeccably polite
.
—“I hope you like this model better,” he said, that velvety voice hiding his true intentions far too well.
Samanta, unaware, smiled nervously and thanked him.
Beatriz, oblivious to it all, remained in her own world, unaware of the shadows shifting around her.
And Lucien… Lucien just watched. As always.
Making sure no one else could take her away.
After all… she was his.
Chapter 20: The Force of Attraction
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
A Few Days Later
Beatriz had found her rhythm at the academy—something that surprised no one. From day one, she stood out in every class: from tactical strategy to combat simulations . For someone with her flawless academic record and natural skills , adapting to the demands of the Unicorn Force had been almost effortless.
Instructors often used her as an example, and more than once she’d overheard murmurs of admiration from her peers. However, among them all, Emil , the laid-back young man with steel-blue eyes , seemed to be the most affected by her presence. They had worked together on a couple of missions. He had even suggested she transfer to the scientific division. And though Beatriz maintained a cordial relationship with him, his attitude had shifted.
Once, perhaps in another life, she might have shown a bit more warmth. But after reflecting on the original protagonist and how she toyed with the feelings of every guy she met, Beatriz had made a firm decision: no more mixed signals .
So, even though she got along with Emil and her other peers, she kept a safe distance . If she smiled, it was polite. If she spoke to someone, it was professional. Never more than that.
It was during this steady routine that the invitation to a conference arrived. It was a government-organized event to showcase the training programs of the academy, and Beatriz had been chosen as one of the representatives to speak about her experience.
The Hotel… and the Surprise
The venue was breathtaking: a luxury hotel with architecture that blended modern styles and traditional elements . As she stepped inside, Beatriz couldn’t help but look up in awe at the towering ceilings , crystal chandeliers hanging like cascades of stars , and the golden accents decorating the walls.
While her companions chatted about their roles in the conference, Beatriz wandered slowly through the grand lobby . She ran her fingers along a marble railing , watching the sunlight filter through the vast windows.
—“What an incredible place…” —she murmured to herself.
She took a step back to better admire a painting on the wall, but something—rather, someone—interrupted her movement. It was as if she’d bumped into a solid, warm wall .
Beatriz
quickly stepped forward and turned to apologize.
—“I’m so sorry! I didn’t see—”
The words caught in her throat when she saw who stood before her.
Lucien
, with his usual
relaxed air
and
confident smile
, was there. He wore a
black suit
with the tie slightly undone, as if not even formal events could take away his laid-back vibe.
—“Beatriz?” —he said, a mix of surprise and amusement in his voice.
Beatriz blinked, trying to process the moment.
—“Lucien? What are you doing here?”
Lucien leaned toward her slightly, hands in his pockets.
—“That’s what I was going to ask you. But I’m guessing you’re here to represent the Unicorns, right? Always the star.”
She crossed her arms, hiding her surprise.
—“And you? Don’t tell me you came just to see me.”
He let out a soft chuckle.
—“Don’t worry, Beatriz. I’m not that predictable. I’m here on business. But running into you is a nice bonus.”
Beatriz felt her heartbeat quicken but quickly averted her gaze, focusing on a nearby painting.
—“Well, don’t distract me. I have important things to do.”
Lucien smiled even more, like he could see right through her cool demeanor.
—“Of course, Miss Important. Good luck with your big speech. Though…” —he paused, leaning slightly closer— “try not to get too nervous.”
She narrowed her eyes.
—“I’m not nervous.”
—“Sure, sure,” —he replied, giving her a look that clearly said otherwise.
Before she could respond, one of her teammates called out to her from across the lobby. She seized the opportunity to end the conversation.
—“See you around, Lucien.”
Lucien watched her walk away, the playful smile still on his lips.
—“See you, Beatriz.”
As she made her way back to her group, Beatriz couldn’t help but wonder why she always seemed to run into him at the most unexpected times.
After giving her speech about the academy and how it trained future agents, Beatriz stepped down from the podium with a mix of relief and satisfaction . She’d done her job and received polite applause from the audience, but she had no intention of staying in the main hall any longer. Emil , ever friendly, had tried to approach and congratulate her, but Beatriz had slipped away with a quick smile and an unconvincing excuse.
She didn’t want misunderstandings.
The hotel was massive, and Beatriz decided to take the chance to explore a bit. She walked through hallways lined with soft carpets and gold-framed paintings . There was something fascinating about the hotel’s architecture—as if the modern design was paying homage to a more elegant past.
She spent some time admiring the chandeliers, the ceiling moldings, and the windows overlooking the city’s lights. She paused on a terrace, letting the fresh air brush her face, but couldn’t shake a strange feeling of déjà vu.
“Why do I feel like I’ve been here before?” she wondered, frowning.
She decided to continue exploring, heading up the stairs to the upper floors. As she turned into a quieter corridor, a shiver ran down her spine. A premonition —as if something was about to happen.
And then, it did.
Turning a corner, she once again bumped into someone . This time, the impact made both of them stumble back slightly .
—“You again?” —Beatriz muttered, looking at the man in front of her.
Lucien was there—but his appearance had changed. He still wore dark dress pants, but he had swapped the suit jacket for a knit sweater, the kind that looked simple but was clearly expensive. The light gray of the sweater made his eyes stand out and added to his effortlessly relaxed charm.
—“Beatriz, I’m starting to think you’re following me,” —he said with a mischievous grin.
She crossed her arms, trying to ignore how her heart always seemed to race when he was near.
—“Of course not. This hotel’s huge. What are you doing up here?”
Lucien shrugged.
—“Exploring, I guess. Or maybe it’s fate, bringing us together again.”
Beatriz rolled her eyes, but before she could answer, she felt something strange.
It was as if the air had turned thick, and a pull in her chest made her step toward him unintentionally.
—“What…?” —she said, looking around. She tried to step back—but couldn’t.
Lucien frowned and also tried to move away—but something stopped him.
—“Wait…” —he muttered, glancing down.
They both noticed it at the same time: their bodies were… connected . Not physically, but there was something invisible pulling them together. When Beatriz tried to move sideways, her arm lightly stuck to his. If she tried to pull away farther, the attraction grew stronger , like two magnets locked in place .
—“This can’t be happening…” —Beatriz whispered, her face turning bright red with embarrassment.
Lucien, however, looked more amused than concerned.
—“Well, this is new. Although… I’m not sure I’d mind spending the rest of the night stuck to you.”
—“Not funny!” —she snapped, trying to stay calm as she gave a sharp tug to pull away. Mistake. She ended up stumbling toward him, her forehead nearly hitting his chest.
—“Are you okay?” —Lucien asked, placing a hand on her shoulder to steady her.
Beatriz quickly tried to pull away—or at least, she tried. Whatever force bound them stopped her halfway.
—“Of course I’m not okay! What do we do now? We can’t stay like this!”
Lucien sighed, running a hand through his hair as he thought.
—“We could walk around and look for a more discreet spot. I doubt you want anyone else to see us like this.”
She fell silent, realizing he was right. If someone saw them like this, rumors would be inevitable, and that was the last thing she needed.
— Alright —she finally said, though her tone didn’t hide her irritation.
Walking together was a challenge. Every move one of them made seemed to pull the other in an unexpected direction. Beatriz tried to keep her composure, but every step was clumsy—and it didn’t help that Lucien looked like he was actually enjoying it.
—This is ridiculous —Beatriz muttered as they turned a corner.
—Ridiculous, yes. But also kind of funny. Come on, Beatriz, this isn’t something that happens every day.
She shot him a glare.
—I don’t know what’s happening, but as soon as this ends, I want you to forget it ever happened.
Lucien gave her a sideways smile.
—No promises.
As they continued, Beatriz couldn’t ignore the odd sense of familiarity . It was as if this moment—uncomfortable and absurd—had already been written somewhere. But what truly unsettled her was that, for the first time in a long time, she felt… less alone .
The Impossible Mission of Beatriz and Lucien
Beatriz took a deep breath, trying to stay calm as they awkwardly shuffled through the halls. She felt like anyone who saw them would immediately notice , but miraculously, they’d avoided any awkward encounters so far.
—This can’t last much longer —she murmured through clenched teeth.
Lucien, ever relaxed, smiled as he matched her pace.
—Well, at least you’re a good teammate.
She gave him a death glare, but before she could reply, something important crossed her mind.
—My phone! —she exclaimed, stopping abruptly.
The sudden pull made Lucien stumble forward.
—Hey, careful! What now?
Beatriz frowned, bringing a hand to her forehead.
—My phone, my wallet… everything’s in my room. If I just disappear like this, my roommate is going to worry or start looking for me. I have no choice. I need to grab my things first.
Lucien raised an eyebrow, clearly amused.
—So you’re inviting me to your room? Scandalous, Beatriz.
—Don’t be funny! —she snapped, her face turning red.
—Let’s just go quickly. The less time we’re stuck together, the better.
The Dash to the Room
Fortunately, the hotel corridor was empty. They reached the door of the room
Beatriz
shared with one of her academy classmates. She turned the handle carefully, relieved it wasn’t locked.
—
Lucky me
—she whispered, stepping in quickly.
Lucien
followed, glancing around with curiosity. The room was simple but tidy, with perfectly made beds and everything in place.
—
Always this organized?
—
It’s a habit,
—she replied, already searching the nightstand by her bed. She found her bag, grabbed her
phone
, and made sure she also had her
wallet
.
—
Done. Let’s go.
But just as she turned to leave, she heard footsteps in the hallway.
—Oh no… —she whispered, eyes wide.
Lucien tilted his head.
—Now what?
Beatriz raised a finger, signaling him to listen. The steps were getting closer. Then, a familiar voice called from outside the door:
—Beatriz? Are you in there? —asked her roommate.
Panic
took over.
—
Quick, hide!
—she hissed, pushing
Lucien
toward the only possible place: the
closet
.
He didn’t have time to argue before
Beatriz
shoved him inside. They barely managed to squeeze in before the door to the room creaked open.
—
Beatriz?
—her roommate repeated.
Beatriz held her breath, pressed tightly against Lucien in the narrow closet space. They were so close they could barely move, and the situation was anything but comfortable.
—
Was this really your best idea?
—Lucien whispered, his breath tickling her hair.
—
Shut up!
—she snapped, trying to ignore how
close
they were.
From inside the closet, they heard her roommate humming a song as she moved around the room.
—
I just need my jacket…
—the girl mumbled to herself.
Beatriz closed her eyes, praying the closet door wouldn’t open. But then she felt something strange—the magnetic pull between them intensified , as if their proximity was amplifying the effect .
—
What are you doing?
—Lucien whispered, noticing Beatriz starting to shift slightly toward him.
—
I’m not doing anything!
—she whispered back, desperate to keep her balance. But it was useless. The invisible force was pushing them even closer, and in a clumsy movement,
Beatriz ended up squished against him
.
Lucien
let out a muffled laugh.
—
Well, this is… interesting.
—
Don’t say a word!
—she hissed, her face
completely red
as she tried to stay as still as possible.
After what felt like an eternity, her roommate finally found her jacket and left the room, closing the door behind her.
Beatriz
let out a long sigh of relief.
—
Finally…
—
Does this kind of thing happen often in your life, Beatriz? Because it’s pretty entertaining,
—Lucien joked as he tried to shift within the tight closet space.
— Get out. Now. —she ordered, pushing him toward the closet door.
When they finally managed to get out, Beatriz leaned against the wall , exhausted, still connected to him at the side.
—This is ridiculous. We need to fix this now.
Lucien smiled, crossing his arms as he watched her with amusement.
—And what do you suggest, genius?
Beatriz looked at him, still red from everything that had just happened.
—Let’s go to the top floor. We’ll probably find a quiet spot to figure out a plan without anyone interrupting us.
Lucien nodded, still wearing that mischievous smile.
—As you wish. But I have to admit, I’m enjoying this more than I probably should.
Beatriz shook her head, already knowing this day was far from over.
Notes:
Author’s Note: Well, who said impossible missions couldn’t include awkward closets, intensified magical bonds, and cryptic dialogue? This isn’t over yet…
What happens on the top floor? And how are they going to escape this without embarrassing themselves again?
See you next week, same bat-channel. 😎🔥
Chapter 21: Beatriz’s Theory and Lucien’s Proposal
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Thanks so much for the incredible support! We’ve passed +300 reads and counting! 💖 I’m thrilled to see the story resonating with you.
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Chapter Text
Lucien raised an eyebrow as they continued walking—awkwardly—toward the elevator in search of a more private space on the upper floors.
—Listen, this is getting weirder by the minute, Beatriz. Why don’t we just go up to my room? It’s closer, and I’m sure we could figure this out without anyone interrupting us.
Beatriz stopped cold, shooting him a glare.
—Your room? Do you seriously think I’m just going to follow you in there like it’s nothing?
Lucien let out a low chuckle.
—Well, considering we’ve already been stuck together in a closet, I don’t see why not.
Beatriz brought a hand to her forehead, letting out a deep sigh as she tried to ignore the heat rising to her cheeks.
—This is absurd... But fine, I’ll go. Only because we need to fix this as soon as possible.
—I knew you’d say yes, —Lucien replied with a triumphant smile.
The Core Theory
As the elevator rose,
Beatriz
began to speak aloud, thinking through a possible logical explanation for what was happening.
—
I think I have a theory
, —she said, eyes on the ceiling of the elevator.
—
Our cores...
Lucien tilted his head, intrigued.
—Cores?
—Yes. The energy we use for our powers has a central core within our bodies. It’s like a focal point where everything concentrates. Mine is in the heart, —she said, touching her chest lightly.
Lucien raised an eyebrow, taking that in.
—And mine?
—As far as I know, yours is in one of your eyes. That’s why your energy manifests differently from mine.
—Interesting. But how does that explain why we’re stuck together like two giant magnets?
Beatriz looked at him seriously.
—I think that, for some reason, our cores entered resonance. It’s like they’re synchronized… but unstably. That would explain why we can’t separate—our energy’s trying to stabilize itself.
Lucien frowned thoughtfully.
—So, how do we break this connection?
Beatriz sighed, crossing her arms.
—The only solution I can think of is for one of us to… —she hesitated— fall asleep.
Lucien blinked, surprised.
—Sleep?
—Yes. When we sleep, our energy core goes into a resting state. If one of us disconnects, the resonance should stop.
Lucien leaned back against the elevator wall, a playful smile tugging at his lips.
—And how exactly do you suggest we do that? You gonna sing me a lullaby?
— Don’t be cute. This is serious, — Beatriz snapped, clearly irritated.
When they reached Lucien’s room , Beatriz couldn’t help but look around, immediately noticing how different it was from hers. The furniture was modern and stylish, with warm dark tones that gave the space a sophisticated vibe.
—What? Do you like my style? —Lucien asked as he closed the door behind them.
—I’m not here to admire your room, —she replied, crossing her arms.
—You sure? Because you look a little impressed to me.
Beatriz ignored him, refocusing on the plan.
—Alright. If we’re going to try this, I think you should be the one to sleep.
Lucien let out a quiet laugh.
—And why me?
—Because you were the one who suggested coming here. It’s your room, so it makes sense that you rest.
Lucien sighed and sat on the edge of the bed.
—Fine, Beatriz. I’ll do it for you. But only because I want this to be over quickly.
Beatriz
rolled her eyes, trying to ignore how irritating
Lucien
could be sometimes.
He laid back on the bed, closing his eyes, while
Beatriz
sat nearby in a chair, still
linked to him
by the strange magnetic pull. Minutes passed, and… nothing. He was still awake.
—This isn’t working, —he muttered, opening one eye to look at her.
Beatriz sighed, running a hand through her hair.
—Why can’t you just fall asleep like a normal person?
—Maybe because I have someone staring at me like she’s about to kill me.
—I’m not doing that! —she protested, cheeks flushed.
Lucien chuckled.
—Maybe you should try it instead.
Beatriz stared at him in disbelief.
—Sleep? In your bed?
Lucien smiled, giving her a mischievous look.
—Why not? It’s comfortable. I promise I won’t do anything.
Beatriz scoffed, clearly annoyed—but she was starting to get desperate.
—This is ridiculous...
—Just try it, Beatriz. What’s the worst that could happen?
Beatriz
closed her eyes, trying to stay calm.
This was, without a doubt, one of the
strangest days of her life
.
A Magnetically Uncomfortable Solution
Beatriz
took a deep breath, trying to stay calm as the situation became more absurd by the second.
—
This isn’t working
, —she muttered, running a hand through her hair.
—
What’s not working?
Your brilliant plan of me falling asleep? —
Lucien
replied, his voice full of teasing from where he lay on the bed.
Beatriz shot him a death glare.
—You know what? That’s it! I’ll try it myself, since you clearly can’t manage something as simple as sleeping.
Lucien raised an eyebrow, clearly amused.
—Really? Well then, go ahead, Beatriz. Show me how it’s done.
Frustrated, Beatriz sighed and mentally braced herself for what she was about to do. But the moment she approached the bed, something shifted. A strange sensation coursed through her body, as if an invisible force had suddenly grown stronger.
—
Oh no...
—she murmured, feeling herself being pulled forward without her consent.
Before she could react, she was
literally stuck
against
Lucien’s chest
, like two giant magnets pulled together by an irresistible force.
—Seriously?! —Beatriz cried, cheeks burning as she tried to peel herself off.
Lucien, on the other hand, couldn’t help but laugh.
—Well, this is new. I’ve never had someone stick to me this literally before.
—This isn’t funny! —Beatriz snapped, pushing her hands against his chest to no avail.
—It’s like our pores turned into magnets. This is ridiculous!
Lucien grinned with a touch of irony.
—Maybe our core energy decided we needed to be a little closer, Beatriz.
Beatriz stared at him, somewhere between disbelief and fury.
—Shut up and cooperate!
Resigned, she stopped struggling and took a long, deep breath.
—Fine... I don’t have a choice. But if I’m going to try to sleep like this, you need to
turn on your side
.
—
On my side?
—
Lucien
asked, clearly entertained by the request.
—What, this position isn’t comfortable enough for you?
Beatriz gave him a glare sharp enough to cut metal.
—Lucien, I’m not joking! If you want this fixed, just do it.
Lucien raised his hands (or tried to, considering Beatriz was still glued to his chest) in mock surrender.
—Alright, alright. You’re the boss, Beatriz.
With effort, Lucien rolled onto his side, giving her enough space to settle into a more comfortable position.
—There. Happy now?
—Now hand me a blanket, —she said, still focused.
Lucien blinked, caught off guard.
—A blanket?
—Yes. I can’t sleep unless I’m covered. Can you get it, or do I have to try with one hand stuck like this? —she snapped.
—Fine, here you go, princess, —Lucien muttered, reaching for a nearby blanket and gently covering her.
Despite how uncomfortable the whole situation was, Beatriz closed her eyes and began to focus on her breathing. Her training in self-control and mental relaxation kicked in, and before Lucien could throw in another sarcastic comment, she was already fast asleep .
Lucien
watched, stunned, as she completely relaxed in a matter of minutes.
—How the hell does she fall asleep that fast in a situation like this? —he muttered to himself.
As
Beatriz
slept,
Lucien
began to feel a change in the energy between them. The
magnetic force
slowly weakened, like the bond was unraveling on its own.
—So she was right... —he whispered, looking at her with a mix of disbelief and admiration.
He stayed quiet, patiently waiting as the
magnetic effect faded completely
. With care, he sat up in bed, making sure not to wake her.
—Well,
Beatriz
... —he murmured with a small smile as he adjusted the blanket around her.
—Looks like you owe me one for following your
crazy plan
.
A Dream Bigger Than Reality
Beatriz
walked lightly, as if the world were a simple, perfect place. She was in a well-known park in
Mexico City
, one she recognized from pictures online, even though she’d never been there in person. The blooming
jacaranda trees
filled the air with their sweet fragrance, and sunlight filtered through the branches, casting glimmers over the grass.
—
Look how beautiful this is, Lucien,
—she said, glancing back over her shoulder.
Lucien
walked behind her, his nearly
1.90 meters of height
towering over
Beatriz’s 1.55 meters
. She laughed softly, pointing out little details that caught her attention.
—It’s so simple, but I love it. —Her laughter was contagious, and even though
Lucien
tried to keep a serious face, he smiled slightly. His appearance had changed—his hair was
black
, his eyes a
warm brown
, and he wore a
gray knitted sweater
,
black pants
, and
sunglasses
.
The dream shifted abruptly, and now they were sitting in a
small Mexican fonda
. The aroma of freshly made tortillas and spices filled the air.
Beatriz
insisted
Lucien
try different dishes—soft
tamales
, colorful
gelatins
, avoiding anything even remotely spicy.
—
So?
—she asked, eyes sparkling.
Lucien placed a bite of chilaquiles back on the plate and looked up at her.
—Not bad... but I think I enjoy watching you this happy more.
Beatriz blushed slightly and laughed:
—Of course I’m happy. I’ve got a dragon as a friend—how could I not be?
He looked at her with a mix of tenderness and something that resembled sadness, but before he could say anything, the scene shifted again.
Words appeared in front of Beatriz , floating like an echo:
“Lucien is the only character who loves the protagonist with no hidden motives.”
Beatriz frowned. Where had that come from? She remembered reading something like it in fan forums before she learned the truth about him. But the words now seemed alive, wrapping her in a sudden sense of dread .
Then, the ethereal voice continued:
“They are destined to never be happy. To destroy each other eternally.”
The daylight vanished, and the ground beneath her cracked open. A dark abyss split between her and Lucien , who now stood on the opposite side, watching her in silence. The atmosphere turned somber, with black clouds swirling above as if the sky itself had been shattered.
—
Lucien!
—
Beatriz
cried out, trying to cross, but the chasm widened rapidly.
He simply turned away, slowly walking off. His silhouette blurred in the distance, morphing back into his
in-game form
, and
Beatriz
felt a sharp, aching pain in her chest.
—
No! This can’t end like this!
—she screamed with fury.
She leapt across what stones remained in the gap, fighting her own fear. But she lost her footing and slipped, plunging into the
darkness
.
—
This is a dream!
—she screamed in desperation, eyes shut tight.
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A spark of energy awoke within her, an echo of her true nature. A voice rang out in her mind:
—Materialize.
When she opened her eyes, she wore gleaming sapphire-blue armor , like something straight from the most epic dream. A renewed strength surged through her, and with a battle cry of determination, she sliced through debris and shattered walls that stood between her and Lucien .
— I’m coming for you, Lucien! —she shouted, her voice firm and unwavering.
At last, with one final leap, she reached for his arm. He turned to her, surprised. Their fingers intertwined for a moment, and Beatriz felt something warm envelop her—something that transcended the dream, transcended time itself.
And then, in the midst of the silence,
Beatriz’s voice
, barely a whisper, slipped from her lips as she slept:
—
I love you... Lucien...
He froze. His eyes widened, heart pounding—but his face stayed composed.
Had she meant it?
Was she dreaming?
Or... did she remember something from a
past life
?
Still holding her hand, Lucien smiled faintly, though his thoughts were a swirling storm. For the first time in ages, something had truly shaken him .
Beatriz
woke up abruptly, lying in
Lucien’s bed
, still clutching his hand.
—
What...?
—she murmured, blinking in confusion as she unconsciously let go.
Lucien looked at her from a nearby chair, where he’d been waiting patiently.
—You’re finally awake. It’s been about an hour.
Beatriz glanced at him sleepily, letting go of his hand as she yawned.
—An hour? Well, at least the nap was worth it.
She stretched, muscles relaxing, and looked at him curiously.
—
Did anyone ask about me?
—No, everything seems quiet —he replied nonchalantly.
—
Perfect. Then I’d better go before someone actually starts looking for me.
—She stood up, fixing her clothes and trying to shake off the strange
lingering feeling
from the dream.
—
You remember how you got in?
—
Lucien
asked, pointing toward the elevator.
—Yeah, I’ve got it. Thanks for everything, Lucien... and for the nap. —She smiled, a mix of gratitude and mild awkwardness in her voice.
He nodded, watching her head toward the elevator.
—
Beatriz...
—he called just before she stepped out.
She paused, turning slightly.
—Yes?
Lucien looked at her for a moment, as if about to say something important. But in the end, he just shook his head.
—Nothing. Just... take care.
She offered him one last smile before disappearing down the hallway.
Cultural Considerations and Disparities
As the
elevator descended slowly
,
Beatriz
crossed her arms, still feeling the echo of the dream lingering in her mind. There was something about those dreamlike scenes that left her unsettled—not just because of the emotional intensity, but because they seemed to carry more weight than she was willing to admit.
—
Always the same tragic endings...
—she thought with a sigh.
She had grown up watching Asian dramas , the kind that kept her glued to the screen until the final credits left her with a tight heart. It was cultural—she knew that. In those stories, full happiness seemed like an unattainable luxury, while sacrifice and duty were inevitable.
Maybe that’s why it didn’t surprise her that in this new world—or should she say galaxy ?— fate seemed to play by those same rules.
Philos
.
The name echoed in her mind as if she’d heard it in more than one place, in more than one
life
.
A place where
to love and to rule
were opposite paths.
A place that seemed intent on
writing her ending before she even began her story
.
“Funny... here in Mexico , we like a different kind of ending. Even if they’re not perfect, we at least want them to have hope . Even in the saddest dramas, we always leave a door open.”
Beatriz shook her head, trying to clear her thoughts. She couldn’t blame anyone—it was just a different way of looking at life. But that didn’t stop her from feeling bothered by how certain endings left a bitter aftertaste. A weight that, though small, still hurt.
When the elevator stopped, a sudden twinge of exhaustion hit her back. Yes, she had slept deeply, but her body was still dragging the accumulated fatigue of the past few weeks. Sometimes she forgot how many tricks she had mastered to survive her years as a student and part-time worker.
Sleeping in any corner as long as she had something to cover herself with—even if it was someone else’s jacket—disconnecting just enough to recharge , juggling time without stopping. All of that had become second nature. And now, with the double life she was living, those little moments of rest were worth their weight in gold.
The hallway greeted her with the murmur of familiar voices . As she turned a corner, she ran into Emil —her former battle partner, now working in the lab—with his usual warm smile, slightly messy light brown hair , and that expression in his eyes that always seemed on the verge of asking “Are you okay?” , even if he didn’t say it.
— Beatriz! —he called, with unusual enthusiasm.
She raised an eyebrow, surprised.
—
Me? What’s going on?
—We got cake to celebrate your symposium presentation . You were amazing —he said, almost shyly—. We want to celebrate it.
Beatriz
blinked. She was never one for that kind of attention, but something in
Emil’s
face—almost as if he
needed
that celebration as much as she
deserved
it—made her nod.
—
Well... I guess I don’t have much choice.
The break room was filled with soft laughter and kind conversations. At the center of the table stood a cake, decorated with cream and fresh strawberries , clearly the star of the show. Beatriz looked at the scene with a mix of gratitude and slight discomfort . It was a sweet gesture, sure, but she never quite knew how to place herself in it.
When she finally approached the table, all that remained was a crumpled napkin and a few scattered crumbs.
—
Wow, looks like I got here late,
—she said, trying to sound casual.
Before she could back away,
Emil
appeared beside her and, without hesitation, held out
his own slice
.
—
Take mine. I’m not that hungry anyway.
Beatriz
raised a brow, as if trying to read between the lines.
—
Do you really think I can accept that? You look so happy with your slice, I’d feel guilty.
He shrugged with that graceful,
Libra-like ease
of his.
—It’s just cake. But
you
earned it.
Beatriz
let out a small nasal laugh and shook her head.
—
No heroic sacrifices. Let’s do this fairly.
Before he could argue, she grabbed a knife and sliced the piece in two,
even splitting the strawberry
on top with surgical precision.
—
There. No one goes without cake.
Emil
took his half like it was a treasure. In his eyes was a different kind of
quiet gratitude
. Not for the cake—but for what the gesture
meant
.
—
Thanks… though you didn’t have to.
—
Come on,
—
Beatriz
said, smiling sideways—.
It tastes better this way.
As they ate in silence, she glanced at him. Emil was still a calm, kind presence . Someone she had always tried to keep at a distance—not out of dislike, but out of care. There was a lot of pain behind his smile , and she didn’t want to feed false hopes or become another link in a chain that already weighed on him too much.
He wasn’t a romantic interest. He had never been. But he was important . Like a younger brother you couldn’t fully protect, but could still accompany in silence, in those small breaths of life.
Suddenly, Beatriz noticed movement by the window. Turning her head, she saw Lucien’s “crow,” Diaval —that little mechanical raven he used to keep watch.
— Seriously? —she muttered, trying to hide a smile. He really had nothing better to do than follow her even here?
Emil
noticed her distraction and asked:
—
Everything okay?
Beatriz
nodded quickly.
—
Yeah, everything’s fine. I just… remembered something.
She finished her slice of cake and stood up, sensing it was time to leave.
—
Thanks for the cake. It was a nice gesture, but I should head home before someone notices I’m gone.
Emil
smiled, watching her walk away with his usual gentle energy.
—
You’re welcome! See you later, Beatriz!
She stepped out of the room, and as she walked, her thoughts drifted back to the dream. The image of Lucien walking away still haunted her mind—but now, she felt more determined than ever .
“I don’t care what fate says. If I’m stuck in this game, I’m going to fight to make things end better. Even if I have to break the rules.”
Chapter 22: A Different Sunset
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Chapter Text
When Beatriz stepped out of the building, the sky was already tinged with shadows. Artificial lights dominated the landscape, stealing the spotlight from a sun that barely lingered on the horizon. It wasn’t the warm sunset she remembered from Mexico ; here, the sky had a blue-gray , almost metallic hue, as if the entire city of Luminaria hung suspended between forgetfulness and steel.
She looked up, thoughtful, and her mind settled on the name of this world: Rametal .
There was something about that name that felt... romantic . As if it held a story lost between the folds of time.
What Beatriz didn’t know—what she couldn’t possibly know yet—was that “Rametal” was more than just a name.
It was a scar .
A sign that something—or someone—had already been here before… trapped in a cycle that repeated again and again.
And at last, had made a decision:
Not to keep playing.
Not to keep existing in that role.
That’s why she was here now.
Because someone, before her, had decided not to be part of the board anymore.
As she walked through the streets toward the train, a soft melody drifted from a nearby public speaker. It was a song in French , strangely melancholic, that felt completely out of place in this world of steel and noise.
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"Les dieux se doivent de choisir... L’amour ou l’éternité..."
She didn’t understand the lyrics, nor did she pay much attention. But there was something in the voice , in the rhythm , that clung to her soul like an invisible thread. As if the words foretold a fate that wasn’t hers... yet.
“It’s incredible how something as simple as a sunset can feel so different depending on where you are...”
she thought as she made her way home. Despite everything, she couldn’t help but miss those warm, vibrant sunsets that had left such a mark on her childhood.
The path led her to a modern housing complex , with clean finishes and minimalist structures that glowed under the soft lights of dusk. Despite the futuristic touch , there was something warm in the layout: vertical gardens on balconies, smart panels that shifted tones with the hour, and a main entrance that smelled of freshly polished wood.
Her apartment was on the third floor of the central tower—one of the most spacious and elegant units in the complex. High ceilings , large windows , and a panoramic view of the district that many would envy.
But Beatriz, true to her ways, completely ignored the elevator that slid silently through the center of the building.
She took the stairs.
As always.
Because even if she lived in a luxury capsule suspended in a city of steel, she was still the same girl who had learned to move quickly and quietly through the tile-and-concrete hallways of her childhood.
As she climbed, she noticed some of the neighboring apartments already had their lights on: shadows moving behind opaque glass, muffled conversations , small end-of-day rituals.
She remembered that Emil lived in the adjacent building.
But since the celebration, she hadn’t seen him again.
And deep down, she preferred it that way for now.
When she opened the door to her apartment—a “small” but organized space— Beatriz dropped her bag on the couch and headed for the kitchen. Before she could turn on the kettle, her communication device vibrated with a call. Seeing Dr. Kael’s name on the screen, she raised an eyebrow.
—Doctor Kael? —she answered, holding the device to her ear.
The voice on the other end was clear, though slightly raspy.
— Hello, Beatriz. I’m calling to confirm our appointment for tomorrow. Still on schedule?
Beatriz nodded instinctively, even though he couldn’t see her.
— Yes, of course. I wouldn’t miss a medical checkup. Besides, I have to take advantage of the insurance, right?
Kael let out a small chuckle that ended in a brief but noticeable cough . Beatriz frowned, concerned.
— Doctor, are you still sick?
—It’s nothing, just a cold that won’t quite go away. Don’t worry about me.
— Of course I’ll worry. You should take better care of yourself—especially if you’re still working while sick.
— Says the one who works more hours than she should.
Beatriz couldn’t help but smile at his comeback.
— Touché. But at least I’m not coughing all over the place. Seriously, you should take a break.
Kael shifted the topic gently, as he always did when he didn’t want to get too personal.
— See you tomorrow then. Rest well, Beatriz.
— You too, doctor. And take care of that cough.
After hanging up, Beatriz sighed. Kael had always been easy to talk to, but he was also frustratingly reserved when it came to himself. To her, he was a true saint . His devotion to helping others was admirable—almost as if he carried the weight of the world on his shoulders.
“He’s like Virgo Shaka, but much more human...”
she thought, remembering how the doctor cared about every patient, always offering words of encouragement or a smile that seemed to brighten even the grayest days.
Still, that cough wasn’t something she could ignore. With a new idea in mind, Beatriz started rummaging for ingredients. In a kitchen drawer, she found honey and propolis, two natural remedies she’d always used to treat coughs.
“I can’t force him to rest, but I can at least help with this.”
She prepared a few small honey pearls mixed with propolis, wrapping them neatly in a small box. It was a simple gesture, but she knew it might help him feel better.
When she finished, Beatriz collapsed onto her bed, exhausted but content. Her day had been long, yes, but these small acts of care were what kept her connected to her humanity, even in a world where everything seemed to grow colder and more distant.
Before closing her eyes, her thoughts drifted back to Doctor Kael .
There was something about him that made her feel the world still had hope —as if his presence was a reminder that even in the darkest moments, there were still people willing to light the way.
Game Memories: The "Elsa" of Ice Power
Lying on her bed, Beatriz stared at the ceiling while her mind replayed the call with Doctor Kael . She couldn’t stop thinking about him—not as a romantic interest, but as someone genuinely admirable. She remembered reading on the Spanish-language forums that the doctor was only 27 years old , quite a feat considering his specialization in cardiology.
That had genuinely surprised her the first time she met him in person. At first, she thought his youth might be a disadvantage, but it quickly became clear that Kael possessed both the knowledge and passion for his work far beyond his years. On those same forums, she had also come across comments saying that his choice to study medicine had been influenced not only by his parents, but by something else.
“It must have been the ether core...”
Beatriz mused.
The heart was a vital component in the body of a modified human like her—especially when it housed an ether core like hers. That tiny reactor not only gave her energy but also made her unique in more ways than one. However, that uniqueness came at a high cost.
There was something about Kael that Beatriz couldn’t ignore. From what she remembered of the in-game dialogues , the original protagonist had flirted with him shamelessly. For Beatriz, that behavior had always been uncomfortable to witness—not because Kael didn’t deserve affection, but because he was someone who clearly prioritized his vocation . Flirting with him like that felt unfair.
“I can’t follow that path,” she thought firmly.
Kael deserved respect for who he was: a dedicated doctor , someone who truly cared about his patients, not just someone going through the motions.
As these thoughts passed through her mind, Beatriz looked over at the small jar of honey and propolis pearls she had prepared. Despite the admiration she felt, she couldn’t help but worry about him, just like she would for anyone she genuinely cared for. His cough hadn’t sounded serious, but it was enough to make her want to do something.
“I’ll give them to him before the appointment tomorrow,”
she decided.
She knew Kael would likely reject anything he perceived as a favor, but she was ready to insist. After all, even doctors had to learn how to take care of themselves— especially those as admirable as him.
Before falling asleep, Beatriz remembered something else: the way Kael had been portrayed in the game . He was one of the most popular love interests , and it wasn’t hard to see why. His gentle nature and devotion to his work made him stand out. In the game, the original protagonist had used her charm to get close to him—but Beatriz knew she had no desire to walk that same road.
“I’m not her,” she thought. “I don’t need to flirt to build a connection with someone.”
With that thought in mind, she closed her eyes, letting the day’s fatigue wrap around her. Tomorrow, she would face the medical appointment, but for now, she allowed herself to rest.
As she drifted toward sleep, Beatriz couldn’t help but return to memories of the game and the character of Doctor Kael —or at least, the version the game had crafted. There was something both fascinating and tragic about his story. Among his Évol powers , Kael wielded the gift—or the curse , depending on how one saw it—of ice . Beatriz remembered vividly the scenes where that power manifested.
In one of them, Kael had tried to save the original protagonist during a life-threatening battle. Ice had spread across his entire body, freezing his hands , skin , even his breath . The power was so overwhelming that Kael could barely control it, and the only solution presented in the game was for the protagonist to absorb part of the energy.
The memory stirred a mix of laughter and sorrow in her.
“Wow… they really made him the Elsa of the game... and without the fun ‘Let it Go’ part!”
she thought, half amused, half resigned.
But the worst part wasn’t the comparison—it was the outcome of that scene. The protagonist had absorbed so much of the ice power that she nearly turned into a frozen block , which led Kael to repress his abilities even more out of fear of hurting her . The scene was supposed to be romantic , but Beatriz frowned just thinking about it.
“Seriously? Wasn’t there a better way to resolve that? Channeling the power? Or maybe asking someone like Jack Frost to guide him? That power isn’t a curse—it’s a disguised blessing !”
What troubled her most was how Kael’s sacrifice was framed as necessary , when it actually felt like an injustice . His power was incredible , capable of saving lives and protecting others , yet the game treated it like a curse that needed to be hidden.
The Curse of the Ice God
What Beatriz hadn’t known at first—but later discovered in forums and side stories from the game—was that Kael’s curse had an even darker origin . According to the lore , his curse was rooted in a past life . In that lifetime, Kael had been the loyal guardian of a princess destined to be sacrificed to a merciless Ice God . But Kael , unable to accept such a cruel fate, had rebelled and tried to protect her.
That act of disobedience enraged the deity , who punished him in the most cruel and eternal way: by binding him to a cycle of reincarnations , each one carrying the ice power as a burden that would not only isolate him, but make him fear harming others.
Each time his power manifested, memories of his betrayal and the failed sacrifice would surface again— haunting nightmares , filled with guilt and loneliness.
“If you think about it, it’s all that entity’s fault,”
Beatriz reflected.
“Kael didn’t do anything wrong. Saving the princess should be honorable, not something that damns him forever.”
Beatriz sighed deeply. There was something deeply frustrating about how the game had handled this story. Instead of exploring how Kael might accept and master his power, the writers had placed him on a path of endless repression and sacrifice . It was one of those narratives that Beatriz saw all too often in certain types of Asian media — pessimistic , tragic , and in her view, needlessly cruel.
She also felt a profound empathy for Kael . He wasn’t just an admirable doctor —he was someone who had endured centuries of suffering . It was unfair for him to carry so much pain , and Beatriz longed for him to find peace.
That’s why, following her intuition, she had taken him to the rooftop , hoping to help him “ think beyond the system.”
“If he had at least been given a real chance to explore his power, to use it for more than just meaningless sacrifices… Maybe in this life, he can,”
thought Beatriz.
With that final hope flickering in her mind, she closed her eyes and let sleep take her. She knew the Kael she knew now wasn’t exactly the one from the game… but maybe, deep down, he still carried that burden of ice and loneliness.
Chapter 23: Fire Before the Mirror
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
Lucien was reclining in his chair, watching as his mechanical raven Diaval projected a holographic image before him. The dim glow of the red crystal embedded in the raven’s head cast partial light across his face, while the rest of the office remained cloaked in shadow.
Beatriz
had changed. He’d noticed it the moment she crossed the threshold after those chaotic days, right after he gave her the so-called
“brooch test.”
He remembered perfectly how she had reacted to the resonance between her
ether core
and his during their first clash. That brief, electric spark of power had touched something in him—something he hadn’t felt in years:
vulnerability
.
Of course, he’d never say that out loud. Not to his ravens. Not to anyone.
But that sensation still prowled in the corners of his mind.
Back then, Beatriz had been all impulse and recklessness, acting more with brute force than strategy—like a wild, untamed flame. At times she irritated him; at others, she intrigued him. But never in his life had he imagined that the crow-shaped brooch , the red crystal he once regarded as nothing more than a symbol of his dominion, would become something more .
He had let her steal it.
Or rather, he had
allowed
her to earn it—after putting her through a series of tests that, in hindsight, might seem
cruel
.
But to
Lucien
, those weren’t just games. They were a
filter
, a crucible to measure who was worthy of entering his domain.
That brooch, with its brilliant
red core
, now belonged to
her
.
Or better said—rested in
her hands
.
“I did it for strategy,”
he told himself every time he remembered that moment.
“It was just a pass. A symbol. Nothing more.”
But the change in
Beatriz
since then proved otherwise.
There was something new in her—something deeper.
Not fear
of him
, as it had been in the beginning, but a fear that seemed to stem from a place
within herself
.
As if she were facing something—or someone—that made her question
her own reflection
.
What struck him most was that this change hadn’t made her
weaker
.
It made her
shine
more brightly.
Lucien leaned forward, resting an elbow on the chair’s armrest as he stared at the images his ravens had captured of his last encounter with Beatriz .
“It’s as if she’s been... reforged,”
he thought, recalling the process by which steel, when subjected to intense heat and constant blows, becomes a stronger, more resilient alloy.
Beatriz now had that same essence—a blend of purity and strength, as if her cracks had been filled with something far tougher than before.
It was strange, even for him.
He had spent
lifetimes
searching for her—
the reincarnation of the witch
he once loved—waiting for the moment they would meet again.
But this version of
Beatriz
wasn’t exactly what he had expected.
“She’s... different,”
he admitted to himself—a thought he barely dared to form.
She wasn’t the same girl he remembered.
Nor the one he’d met just weeks ago.
And the worst part—or the best, depending on his mood—was that this difference kept him
tethered
, like a riddle he couldn’t stop trying to solve.
His fingers curled slightly as he remembered their last training session.
She had almost knocked him out.
And her expression in that moment had disarmed him more than the blow itself.
There was something new in her eyes: a
quiet strength
, a
calculated resolve
he’d never seen before.
It wasn’t the impulsive recklessness of the
original protagonist
he’d once known—this was something
more mature
, more
terrifying in its control
.
“What happened to you, Beatriz?”
he murmured, more to himself than to the ravens watching silently around him.
The raven projecting the images tilted its head slightly, almost in response.
He ignored it. He knew he wouldn’t get answers from them.
Because the answers were with her .
“Pure, but not innocent,”
he reflected.
“Fragile, yet unbreakable. As if her cracks are now part of her design. And no matter how much I want to deny it…”
His gaze drifted toward the corner of his desk, where the brooch had once rested.
He remembered it vividly—how she had held it at the end, like a
trophy
or perhaps a
burden
.
That small symbol of his
territory
, his
domain
, now lay beyond his reach.
“…this is no longer just a game.”
The Medical Appointment
The next day, after work, Beatriz arrived punctually at Doctor Kael’s clinic , holding a small wooden box in her hands. Inside were honey pearls with propolis , prepared especially for him. A simple gesture, yes—but a meaningful one. A token of gratitude and support , knowing that Kael was still dealing with a lingering cough .
The waiting room was as tidy and welcoming as always, with soft instrumental music creating a peaceful atmosphere. Beatriz took a deep breath before the consultation door opened and Kael greeted her with his usual gentle tone.
— Beatriz , come in.
She stepped inside and, after sitting across from him, handed over the box with a faint smile.
— What’s this? — Kael asked, raising an eyebrow with curiosity.
—
Just a little something,
—
Beatriz
replied.
—
They’re honey pearls with propolis. I made them for your cough. Thought they might help.
Kael opened the box carefully, revealing the tiny golden spheres that gave off a sweet, subtle aroma. A sincere smile spread across his face.
— This is... very thoughtful of you, Beatriz. Thank you. But you didn’t have to.
—
It’s no trouble at all,
—she answered truthfully.
—
You do so much for others. I figured you deserved a little care in return, even something small.
Kael nodded, placing the box gently to the side while giving her a look filled with both gratitude and professional restraint .
— I appreciate it very much. Now, let’s move on to what matters. How have you been feeling lately?
Beatriz responded with a summary of her recent days, tactfully omitting anything related to her missions . As always, Kael listened intently before picking up his stethoscope and placing it gently on her chest to examine her heartbeat.
—
Your heartbeat is steady, which is good,
—he said after a moment.
—
But... I can’t help but sense something else. You seem to be carrying more weight than you should—emotionally speaking.
Beatriz tensed slightly, but kept a composed expression.
— It’s just stress. Work stuff. Nothing serious.
Kael studied her for a moment longer, as if he wanted to press further—but ultimately chose not to.
— Well, health-wise, everything looks good. But remember, if you ever need support, I’m here.
She nodded, grateful for his genuine concern .
As the appointment was wrapping up, Kael glanced through a few papers on his desk before lifting his gaze again, this time with a small, almost shy smile.
— By the way, a few weeks from now I’ll be receiving an award at a ceremony. It’s for one of my cardiology research projects. There will be a concert beforehand, and I thought... maybe you’d enjoy attending.
Beatriz blinked in surprise. She hadn’t expected an invitation like that. And while she couldn’t commit right away, she didn’t want to seem indifferent either.
— That sounds amazing. If my schedule allows it, I’d love to.
As she exited the consultation room, leaving the now-empty box in the doctor’s hands,
Beatriz
reflected on how far she had come.
The honey pearls had been a
small gesture
, but a reminder that even the
simplest acts of care
could carry deep meaning.
With the mention of the concert and the ceremony , her mind began to spin with possibilities. She’d need to find the right dress —maybe even sew it herself. A small challenge, perhaps, but also a chance to reclaim a fragment of normalcy in her otherwise chaotic life.
With a faint smile, she promised herself she’d think more about it later.
For now, the echo of
Kael’s words
and the sweet scent of
honey and propolis
lingered in her memory like a quiet, lingering melody.
Precise Measurements, Imprecise Reactions
Beatriz walked through the shopping plaza with a pencil in hand and her sketchbook tucked under one arm. She carefully examined the storefront displays, analyzing the futuristic designs and exorbitant prices . Fashion in this world wasn’t exactly her style. The dresses were either too short or too tight, and her mind kept comparing them to what she knew back in Mexico , where the clothes were well-made and affordable—though local designers rarely got the recognition they deserved.
After stepping in and out of several stores, frustrated by both the cost and the aesthetic, Beatriz finally found inspiration in one particularly elegant—if impractical—dress. She quickly sketched it in her notebook, adapting it to her own values and taste .
“If I can’t buy it, I’ll just make it myself,”
she thought, already planning to search for
fabrics and materials
in another district.
As she headed for the exit, still lost in her thoughts, a masculine voice interrupted her.
—
Hey, miss, looking for something?
It was one of
Lucien’s bodyguards
,
Noctis
and
Umbra
, standing by the entrance of an exclusive boutique.
Beatriz felt a shiver of anticipation run down her spine when the man added:
— Mr. Lucien has reserved the entire floor, — Umbra said with a hint of pride, clearly impressed by his boss’s power.
She couldn’t help but tense up, immediately suspecting that this was one of those moments straight out of the video game.
“No way. This is a scripted event, isn’t it?”
she thought, forcing herself to keep a composed face.
And there he was.
Lucien, waiting for her with a mischievous smile, leaning casually against the boutique’s sleek frame.
— Beatriz, what a surprise seeing you here. I happen to need some help. Mind giving me a hand?
Beatriz
stared at him, equal parts resigned and annoyed.
Inside, she was screaming:
“Son of a—”
But outwardly, she forced a polite smile.
— Sure, Lucien. What do you need?
He straightened up with theatrical grace.
— I want you to take my measurements for a new suit. I need something… special for my next appearance.
Beatriz raised an eyebrow.
Really? This is what you’ve got for me?
But if she was going to do this, she would do it right.
—
Alright. But we’re doing this properly. No leaning on furniture, no drama.
—She said as they walked into the boutique.
—
I need precision.
Lucien looked amused, but followed her instructions. He removed his sweater and stood up straight. Even when she used the old trick of sliding a finger down his spine to correct his posture, he only gave a soft gasp of surprise before chuckling quietly.
— You’ve got a firm touch, Beatriz.
— Just doing my job, —she replied neutrally, deliberately ignoring his playful tone.
She took each measurement meticulously —chest ( 109 cm ), abdomen ( 93 cm ), hips ( 85 cm ), legs, neck—even asking his consent before measuring the inseam , maintaining strict professionalism despite the smirk Lucien couldn’t seem to wipe off his face.
When she finished, she showed him the diagram she had drawn, with all the numbers noted down.
— This is the original—for the tailor. But I need a photo for my records. Do you mind?
—
Go ahead,
—
Lucien
said, leaning in to look at the sketch.
—
You’re quite talented at this.
Beatriz
ignored the compliment, took the photo, and handed him the paper.
Meanwhile,
Lucien
turned to a rack with two
suit jackets
hanging side by side.
— Red or blue? Which one suits me better?
Beatriz sighed, too tired to entertain the game.
— Red. Matches your eyes.
Lucien raised an eyebrow, caught off guard by her bluntness, but before he could say anything else, Beatriz was already closing her notebook.
— I think you’ve got everything you need. If you’ll excuse me, I’ve got fabric to find.
As Beatriz left the boutique, she felt a mixture of relief and frustration.
But as she descended the escalators of the shopping mall, she couldn’t help the small smile tugging at her lips.
Lucien could be exasperating, but at least… the moment had been interesting.
Lucien remained on the upper floor, watching as Beatriz disappeared down the escalator with confident strides. Her slender yet steady figure melted into the crowd, her dark hair catching the white lights overhead. He had expected an amusing encounter—but this had far exceeded his expectations.
Beatriz going down the escalator:
“This wasn’t part of my plan… but damn, that was interesting.”
Lucien watching from above:
“And then she walked away, measuring more than just my suit.”
Adjusting the cuffs of his shirt,
Lucien
could still feel the
faint trace
of
Beatriz’s touch
on his lower back—a gesture as professional as it was unexpectedly impactful.
Her unwavering focus, the clarity of her instructions, and her refusal to play into his games had left him… a little disarmed.
— So she doesn’t get intimidated, —he murmured to himself, tone tinged with feline curiosity.
He turned toward the large glass windows offering a clear view of the lower level. From there, he could see her exit through the main doors, clutching her notebook to her chest like a shield .
Far from feeling annoyed by how she had handled him,
Lucien
found himself smiling.
It wasn’t often someone put him in his place so naturally. Most people either tried to
please
him or
impress
him.
But
Beatriz
? She simply did what she believed was right, regardless of his position.
—
A whirlwind. That’s what she is,
—he said, crossing his arms as he leaned against the window frame.
—
She shows up, disarms me, and vanishes like it was nothing.
One of his bodyguards, Noctis , who had remained nearby during the encounter, cleared his throat discreetly.
— All good, sir? —asked Noctis .
Lucien turned his head slightly, still watching the mall’s exit.
— Yeah. All good. Just… more interesting than I expected.
Noctis and Umbra exchanged a look, already used to their boss’s cryptic responses. They didn’t press further.
Lucien finally stepped away from the window, picked up the red jacket , and slung it over his shoulder.
— I wonder what else that whirlwind is hiding inside, —he murmured with a half-smile as he walked toward the elevator, already thinking about how fate seemed determined to cross their paths again and again.
Chapter 24: The Seamstress of Battles
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Thanks so much for the incredible support! We’ve passed +300 reads and counting! 💖 I’m thrilled to see the story resonating with you.
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Chapter Text
“This wasn’t part of my plan… but damn, it was interesting.”
—
Beatriz
The train moved forward with a gentle clatter, while Beatriz stared out the window at the speeding buildings. Even though the futuristic skyline of the commercial district was dazzling, her mind was far from the present.
Lucien
… There was something about him that always seemed to attract trouble, but this time, she couldn’t blame him.
Beatriz had read enough on the game’s forums to know that the
original protagonist
had suspected him of being involved in her grandmother’s death and the destruction of her home.
And yet—something didn’t add up.
— It wasn’t him... —she murmured to herself, closing her eyes for a moment.
Lucien had an intrinsic
darkness
to him, sure—but all signs pointed to
greater forces
at work.
Possibly connected to the
Wanders
, those interdimensional beings that had recently made their global debut.
If Lucien was involved at all, it was more likely through his dealings with
Protocore crystals
, which may have led him to those other forces, rather than being the direct cause himself.
Perhaps the
EVER corporation
, focused on medical research and scientific advancement, was involved.
When she opened her eyes again, her reflection on the train window stared back.
A whirlwind... That’s what I am,
she thought with a faint, ironic smile, remembering
Lucien’s reaction
when she forced him to stand up straight to take his measurements.
Despite everything, something inside her felt
satisfied
.
She hadn’t taken a man’s measurements in years—not since her family still depended on her to sew or alter their clothes.
The thought brought a wave of
nostalgia
, memories of afternoons spent with her brothers and father flooding her chest.
— Dad would’ve looked great in that blue blazer, —she whispered, recalling the moment when Lucien held it up, indecisive between the red and the blue .
Her father had always been impeccable in the way he dressed. Even when things at home weren’t going well, he made sure to look elegant.
Beatriz had always admired that.
Now, though, she couldn’t help but worry.
How were they? Were they still together, still fighting through life like always?
The train arrived at its destination, cutting her thoughts short. Beatriz took a breath and stepped off, determined to focus on the task ahead.
The Sewing District
The place was a
paradise
for designers and seamstresses: streets lined with shops filled with fabric, buttons, tools, and even sewing machines.
Beatriz felt a little overwhelmed—but also excited.
She began by searching for fabric for her dress, browsing several stores until she found one that matched her
vision
:
elegant
, yet
discreet
enough for her taste.
After selecting the main material, she added thread, pattern paper, and other essential items.
— I need a sewing machine... —she muttered while flipping through a catalog in one of the shops.
Although an
overlock
machine would’ve been ideal, her budget didn’t stretch that far.
She settled on a
straight-stitch
machine—compact, simple, but good enough for what she needed.
Before leaving, she also ordered a
folding table
.
She knew working in her living room would be a challenge, but with the table, she could at least spread out the fabric and trace patterns. Everything would be delivered to her apartment in a few days, which allowed her to travel lighter today.
As she walked the vibrant streets of the district, Beatriz found her thoughts drifting again—back to Lucien .
Though his arrogant demeanor often frustrated her, there was something oddly satisfying about having taken his
measurements
with such
precision
.
Even if he had tried to make it into a game, she had handled him with the
professionalism her mother had taught her
.
“Sometimes I wonder if his posture has more to do with not wanting to seem vulnerable,”
she thought, recalling the moment she made him jump off the furniture.
“Or maybe… it’s his way of coping with everything he’s carrying.”
Unintentionally, her mind slipped into older memories—memories of making clothes for her
brothers
.
The
laughter
, the
squabbles
over colors or cuts, the trips to the fabric markets in the city—
They felt like sacred echoes from another life.
For a brief second, Beatriz wished life could still be that simple.
Her memories drifted deeper, to those moments when her brothers would run through the living room of their old house, staging epic battles with invisible swords, imaginary powers , and ultimate attacks drawn from the many video games they played together.
Her eldest brother,
Reyearth
, five years older, always seemed
invincible
.
An
Aquarius
born in the
Year of the Rat
, he had unstoppable energy and a
chaotic mind
.
He had trouble focusing, hopping from one idea to another like a storm of static, but after some therapy, meds, and sheer stubbornness, he learned to
tame his own chaos
.
In their games, he was a
force of nature
. Strategic, fast, unpredictable.
Only
Beatriz
could beat him… and not always.
She,
Beatriz Garnet
, a
Pisces born in the Year of the Snake
, was dreamy, but
tactical
.
She knew how to observe, wait, and
strike at the right moment
.
She had beaten her older brother five times—two during their
imagination wars
, and three in real video games, where
logic and reflexes
were tested with
mathematical precision
.
Her spiritual twin,
Frateley
, just nine months younger, was also an
Aquarius
, born in the
Year of the Horse
.
The shyest of the four. The sweetest.
He grew up burdened by
bullying
and feeling out of place.
He played with creativity, but his
self-doubt
would often cost him the game.
Still,
Beatriz
always believed he had the
brightest spark
of them all—he just hadn’t learned how to light it yet.
And finally, the youngest:
Escat
. Another
Pisces
, but nothing like the stereotype.
Born in the
Year of the Pig
, he was more like a
cat
: independent, unpredictable, a bit self-centered.
Life had made him that way.
He learned to move alone, to not expect much from others, even at such a young age.
In their games, he did his own thing,
unbothered by victory or defeat
.
Beatriz
smiled softly.
There was something
sacred
in those memories.
The battles hadn’t been real.
But… what if they were?
What if every video game match, every round of
freeze tag
, every ruthless
UNO
game where she’d destroy them so thoroughly they eventually
banned her from playing
after she hit the
top 15 worldwide without power-ups
—
What if all of that had been a form of
training
?
Because something in her—in her body, her memory, her instinct— knew how to move , how to calculate , how to adapt .
As if she had already fought hundreds of battles before life itself became one.
With a final glance at the shopping bags in her hand, Beatriz smiled.
At least now she had something to focus on:
finishing her dress
and keeping herself
busy
.
Maybe she couldn’t change the world…
But she could make damn sure she
looked good
while facing it.
Beatriz’s Nightly Routine
“This wasn’t part of my plan… but damn, it was interesting.”
—
Beatriz
Back in her small apartment,
Beatriz
began unpacking the day’s purchases.
She placed her new
sewing rulers
and
scissors
neatly in the designated workspace she had cleared for herself.
There was something deeply satisfying about owning
new tools
—as if they represented small steps back toward
normalcy
.
Her
sewing machine
and
folding table
would arrive in a few days, giving her some time to plan her projects carefully.
She tucked everything away in the corner she had claimed as her workshop space, then made her way to the kitchen to fix something simple for dinner.
As she washed the dishes, the silence of the apartment began to weigh on her.
— I need some music, —she said to herself, scrolling through her device in search of a good playlist.
After sifting through popular tracks and finding nothing that really spoke to her, she defaulted to something classic.
Vivaldi was always a safe haven, and she let his Winter from The Four Seasons begin to fill the room.
The melody flooded the air—but also cracked the shell of strength she’d worn all day.
Beatriz paused, leaning against the sink, letting the music cut through her.
That piece had always been her favorite, but now, far from home, it only brought a torrent of nostalgia.
She glanced at the clock. It was already
10 PM
.
The building rules were clear—no loud music at that hour out of respect for the neighbors.
With a sigh, she slipped on her
wireless headphones
and continued her tasks as the violin soared through her ears.
Still, she couldn’t help it. The combination of the music and the apartment’s silence became
too much
.
She turned everything off, removed the headphones, and walked to the
closet
.
It was a strange habit, but inside that dark, confined space, she could cry without feeling completely exposed.
— Why can’t I have a bit of normalcy? —she whispered, letting the tears fall at last.
She missed her
family
. Her
brothers
, her
father
.
Even with her hands full of projects, the
loneliness
echoed constantly through her chest.
She remembered something she once thought:
“If this really were an otome game, at least I’d have a love interest like Hades from Kamigami no Asobi .”
That perfect Capricorn with melancholy, poise, and a voice that could melt the coldest heart.
—
At least with Hades, I’d
feel
something…
—she said with a sigh.
But in this
cyberpunk world
, no one really seemed to
fall in love
.
Everything was so…
logical
, so
cold
.
“Is it too much to ask for a little warmth?”
Just as she thought the night had nothing else in store, her device began to ring.
She wiped her tears quickly, stepped out of the closet, and answered in the
neutral tone
she had mastered—so no one would detect the sadness in her voice.
— Hello?
The voice on the other end was unmistakable:
Miguel Ángel
, one of the original protagonist’s romantic options.
He spoke with that gentle
Pisces warmth
that always made him sound sincere.
— Beatriz! How are you? Hey, I was thinking... Want to drop by my workshop sometime? We could hang out—what do you think?
Beatriz felt a mix of surprise and resignation.
“Of course, another guy chasing after me,”
she thought, remembering how the original protagonist had shamelessly flirted with him in the forums.
But she had no interest in playing the
femme fatale
.
Instead, she saw an opportunity.
—
Do you have a large table I could borrow?
I’m working on a project and could really use a big space to trace some patterns.
Miguel Ángel , ever the creative soul, agreed eagerly.
— Of course! I’d love to see what you’re working on. Want to come by tomorrow after work?
— Perfect, —Beatriz replied with a faint smile.
Miguel Ángel
had always been
kind
and
attentive
, but
Beatriz
couldn’t help comparing him to what she imagined
Hades
would be.
While
Miguel Ángel
radiated creativity and energy, he didn’t possess that
calm strength
she longed for.
“Maybe I’m idealizing too much,”
she thought as she ended the call.
With the meeting set for the next day,
Beatriz
felt a little lighter.
At least she could get a head start on her dress while waiting for her tools to arrive.
Still, as she got ready for bed, she couldn’t help reflecting on the strange irony of her situation.
“How different would my life be if I really were in one of those otome games I like? Would I be happier? Or just… as confused as I am now?”
Either way, she decided to focus on what she
could control
.
Sometimes, the best way to face uncertainty was simply to take the
next step
, one at a time.
Chapter 25: Between Stitches and Shadows
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Notes:
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Chapter Text
After work, when Beatriz and Miguel Ángel arrived at the workshop, the space looked just like she remembered from her occasional visits: spacious, well-lit, with a kind of organized chaos that revealed the mind of its creative owner.
Miguel Ángel quickly cleared off one of the large tables, pushing aside tools and scattered papers.
— Here you go. Perfect for working on your patterns —he said with a smile, adjusting the nearby lamps for better lighting.
Beatriz
pulled out her tools and the
sketches
she had prepared.
Even though her relationship with
Miguel Ángel
had always been cordial, she couldn’t help but feel a little nervous. It was strange to receive this much
attention
and
support
in a world where most interactions felt
transactional
or
calculated
.
While she worked, Miguel Ángel kept showering her with enthusiastic remarks.
— It’s amazing what you’re doing, Beatriz. You know, a lot of people give up on these kinds of projects halfway through. But you’re really committing. That says a lot about your character.
Beatriz offered a small smile.
“Does he actually see something special in me, or is he just being kind because he’s a
Pisces
?”
Still, she appreciated his support and simply replied with a quiet,
—
Thanks.
After a couple of hours, Beatriz stretched her back, trying to ease the tension in her spine. The lines of her patterns were taking shape, and the satisfaction of seeing her work progress gave her a second wind.
Miguel Ángel, who had been working on one of his light sculptures, walked over to take a look.
— You know, you remind me of someone I met a while ago. Same kind of dedication and passion, —he said, arms crossed, sounding suddenly thoughtful.
— Oh, really? —Beatriz asked, feigning disinterest as she double-checked her lines.
He glanced at her, his tone growing more serious.
— Yeah. Although... I haven’t heard from that person in a long time. Now that I think about it... I wonder if something strange is going on.
Beatriz looked up, intrigued.
— What do you mean?
— Well, several creative people have gone missing lately. Nothing confirmed, of course, but I’ve seen some rumors on the forums. Maybe it’s just a coincidence.
The comment unsettled Beatriz , though she tried to shrug it off.
“Probably just another rumor,”
she told herself.
Still, she couldn’t shake off what she’d heard at work—coworkers who had started missing shifts without explanation.
— I guess it’s better not to dwell on things like that, —she finally said, returning to her work.
When they finished for the day, Miguel Ángel offered to drive her home, but Beatriz politely declined.
— Thanks, but I could use the walk. I need to clear my head.
— As you wish. But if you need anything, don’t hesitate to call me, —he replied warmly, dropping her off a few blocks from her apartment.
Beatriz
stepped out of the car with her bag full of
tools
and
patterns
.
The night was cool and quiet, the neon lights casting strange glows over the deserted streets. As she walked, a sudden
uneasiness
settled in her chest, as if someone were
watching her
.
She stopped, slowly turning her head.
Nothing.
But the sensation didn’t fade.
— Just my imagination, —she whispered, trying to calm herself.
She quickened her pace, pushing away the chill that crept along her spine.
But just as she turned a corner, a figure appeared under a flickering streetlamp ahead.
It was Emil , apparently waiting for her.
— Beatriz? Are you okay? —he asked, concern clear on his face as he approached.
Beatriz , startled, came to a stop.
— What are you doing here?
— I had a feeling. Something didn’t sit right, and I thought I might find you here.
His voice was serious, and his gaze held a mix of unease and calm.
Beatriz felt a wave of relief wash over her—though Emil’s presence was also oddly... out of place.
— Well, here I am. All good, —she replied, trying to sound casual.
— Maybe so, but you really shouldn’t be walking alone this late, —he added, offering to walk with her.
Beatriz
accepted, and as they walked together, she couldn’t help but think back to
Miguel Ángel’s
warning about the
disappearances
.
Something strange was definitely going on, and even though she didn’t want to get involved, she knew that sooner or later, the pieces of the puzzle would start coming together.
After saying goodbye to
Emil
,
Beatriz
finally reached her apartment.
The
fresh air
and
company
had helped calm her nerves a bit—but not enough to distract her from the very
specific craving
now dominating her mind.
She needed something spicy , sweet , and sour .
“Something like Miguelito,”
she thought, recalling the unmistakable flavor of her childhood.
Determined, she checked her pantry and found she had some ingredients , but not enough to replicate the treat.
“Oh well, guess I’m heading to the mall,”
she muttered, grabbing her bag.
The mall was quiet at that hour. Despite its modern look—neon lights, automated systems—the empty aisles felt oddly nostalgic.
Beatriz walked down each row, searching for the essentials: sugar, citric acid, chili powder... each item bringing her closer to the taste that might make her feel a little more connected to home.
She also picked up a couple of jalapeño peppers and a herbal shampoo , or at least that’s what the label claimed.
As she filled her cart, a mischievous smile tugged at her lips.
“What would someone like Miguel Ángel think if he knew I’m here buying stuff to make a candy with his name on it? He’d definitely say something cheesy.”
In her cart she now had what she needed: sugar , citric acid , chili powder , plus the jalapeños and the shampoo .
“Is this enough?”
she wondered, looking over everything.
But then a new thought crossed her mind.
“Would Lucien laugh at me for something as silly as a craving?”
She paused, shaking her head.
Lucien
, with his elegant poise and intense presence, always had a sharp remark ready.
And yet, his presence stirred something strange in her—a blend of
defiance
and...
curiosity
?
Something about him made her feel
vulnerable
, yet also ready to
bite back
if necessary.
Slow Burn, with Rope and Whiskey
🎵 LAS 4 ESTACIONES (VERANO) ANTONIO VIVALDI. 🎵
Somewhere else in the city,
Lucien
was seated in a private lounge of his residence:
high ceilings
,
dark wood-paneled walls
, and a warm light barely grazing the surfaces of
black leather and glass furniture
.
The sound of an antique
gramophone
spinning filled the room with the first notes of
“Summer” by Vivaldi
, selected with surgical precision to match the tone of his evening.
But neither the comfort nor the music could calm the
fire burning beneath his skin
.
The whiskey in his hand—amber and cold—was a cruel joke compared to what boiled inside him.
He was thinking about
Beatriz
.
About
that damn afternoon
.
The memory wouldn’t let him go. His mind kept returning to that one moment—when she, with terrifying calm, slid a single finger down the center of his back to correct his posture.
One gesture. One finger.
And he, Lucien , the one who always controlled the board... groaned .
It wasn’t a lustful groan. It was worse—an involuntary spasm, sparked by the electric shiver that burst beneath his skin like being touched by liquid fire .
But what truly unraveled him wasn’t the touch.
It was her .
The way she did it with such
meticulous detachment
—no blush, no teasing, no room for defense.
As if he were nothing more than
a bolt of fabric
she needed to adjust.
As if she had felt
nothing at all
.
And that… that had him on the edge.
Lucien
set the glass down on the table with a sharp clink.
His eyes narrowed into the darkness as his thoughts kept tormenting him.
“If she only knew what she did to me with that finger...”
His back still remembered the trace.
His whole body, tense ever since,
ached
to feel that contact again.
Only this time—
slower. Deeper.
With
less clothing
.
The fire inside him was no longer just desire—it was wounded pride , obsession .
Beatriz disarmed him. She pulled him off his axis with that maddening mix of professionalism, apathy, and a dangerous intuition that always seemed to know exactly when and how to touch him to set him ablaze.
“I’ll feel that finger again,”
he thought, his inner voice husky.
“But next time, it won’t be so quick. And I won’t stay still.”
A crooked, almost predatory smile curved his lips.
Lucien
was a long-game player.
But what he felt for
Beatriz
?
That was no game.
It was damn spontaneous combustion .
And as the fiery strings of Vivaldi’s “Summer” flared from his gramophone, he imagined Beatriz somewhere calm—perhaps listening to her soft music, wearing that serene expression that both infuriated and fascinated him.
He burned in
summer
.
She collected the
fallen leaves
of a life that had tasted
autumn
more than once.
Two different seasons. Two worlds that weren’t meant to touch.
And yet, they were already
intertwined
.
The Craving and the Potion
🎵 A+música.com A. Vivaldi "El otoño" Joaquín Torre (violín) 🎵
Meanwhile, back at her apartment,
Beatriz
was mixing the ingredients for her
homemade Miguelito
.
The
familiar aroma
began to fill the kitchen, and she couldn’t help but smile as she tasted the mix.
“Now this... this is a little piece of home,”
she thought, licking the spoon.
With the candy resting on the counter, she headed to the bathroom where her green herbal shampoo awaited above the sink.
She grabbed the four
jalapeño peppers
she’d set aside, sliced them carefully to remove the seeds, and tossed them into the blender with a bit of shampoo.
As the motor whirred to life, the sound mingled with the strong but strangely refreshing aroma of
herbs and spice
.
She poured the mixture back into the bottle—now a more intense green—with slow, precise motions, as if she were preparing a secret potion .
—
Perfect,
she murmured to herself.
—
But this isn’t for just anyone... Let’s see if this wakes up this rebellious hair,
—she chuckled.
But suddenly, a strange sensation washed over her.
As if someone, somewhere, was
thinking about her far too intensely
.
She turned to the window, but the glowing city lights offered no clues.
Only the air trembled—like a thought not her own had brushed the room.
Trying to shake it off, she sat by the window to enjoy her
candy
.
Her classical playlist continued in the background, now playing the steady, swelling rhythm of
Vivaldi’s “Autumn.”
Back at his residence,
Lucien
set his glass down on the glass table, the crystal clink cutting the silence.
He had been reviewing recent activity logs on
Beatriz
.
— Seriously? A supermarket? —he muttered with a smirk, leaning back in his seat.
He didn’t know why, but the thought of her doing something so mundane gave him a strange warmth in his chest.
He took another sip of whiskey and let his thoughts drift back to her.
Beatriz always found a way to fill her mind with tasks, even when he knew she shouldn’t be occupying his.
“Maybe I should remind her who’s really in control,”
he thought, a dangerous smile tugging at the corner of his mouth.
Little did he know that, at that very moment...
his
fate was being sealed
with
four jalapeño peppers
.
Notes:
📜 Author’s Note:
And that’s a wrap for this chapter, dear readers! 😈
Will Beatriz suspect the mysterious burning of conscience (and scalp)?
And why can’t that Aries just send a damn text like a normal person?
See you in the next chapter for more drama, candy, and questionable decisions.
✨ Thank you for reading — don’t forget to comment if this made you laugh, rage, or want to protect Lucien from himself ✨
—With love (and chili),
The Author 💚🌶️
Chapter 26: A Hard Invitation to Refuse
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Thanks so much for the incredible support! We’ve passed +300 reads and counting! 💖 I’m thrilled to see the story resonating with you.
🎯 Next goal: 500 reads!
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Notes:
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Chapter Text
The next day, Beatriz was in her office, wrapping up her weekly report while savoring the last bite of her homemade Miguelito. The spicy-sweet flavor brought her comfort—a small pleasure in the middle of routine.
The vibration of her phone on the desk snapped her out of focus.
Seeing the name on the screen, her brow furrowed.
Lucien.
“What does he want now?” she muttered before answering.
—Yes? —she said with a neutral tone.
—
Beatriz, my dear,
—Lucien's voice rang with that trademark blend of politeness and authority—,
I need you to clear three days from your tight schedule.
She almost dropped her phone.
—
Three days? Why? I can’t, Lucien.
I’ve already taken days off this semester—they won’t approve more.
Lucien paused, but she could clearly hear the sound of a glass hitting a table.
—Don’t worry, —he replied with a confidence that made her skin prickle—.
I’ve taken care of that.
—
What do you mean, taken care of?!
—she asked, alarmed.
—Let’s just say I had a talk with your superiors. I informed them I need a
Hunter
for a delicate situation. There’s a
Wander
causing trouble in my zone and naturally, I thought of you.
Her eyes widened.
—Are you telling me you used your influence to get me three days off just because… because…?
—
Because I want you at my house, of course,
—Lucien cut in, utterly shameless—. I’ll pick you up at
eight tonight
. Good night, Beatriz.
Before she could protest, he hung up.
Beatriz ended the call with tense hands and a firm expression. She didn’t need to speak. She needed to act.
Without thinking, she dialed
Miguel Ángel’s
number.
—Hello?
—Do you have space in your workshop today? I need to work... a lot.
He didn’t ask why.
—Sure. Come over. You know where the table is.
✂️
Miguel Ángel’s workshop
was a living chaos. Sketches covered the walls, canvases dried under the sun, sculptures half-finished among piles of plaster, clay, and materials. The air was thick with the scent of oil paint, burnt coffee, and fine dust.
The large table at the back—the one he used for his most complex compositions—was cleared for the first time in weeks.
—
Back to the dress again?
—he asked, one brow raised as he stirred some paint on his palette.
—Yeah. But this time… I need to
finish
it.
Beatriz laid out the fabric efficiently. She didn’t speak. She didn’t smile.
She wasn’t just working—
she was in a trance
.
Miguel Ángel, who had seen her marking a pattern days earlier with surgical precision, remained still for a moment, observing from his corner.
But this time... it was different.
This wasn’t the same Beatriz who’d casually asked to borrow the table as a favor.
This
Beatriz
was drawing lines like they were
emotional architecture
.
She cut with surgical resolve, her scissors going
tzzt
as if slicing through the air between thoughts.
The pins pierced the fabric with an almost obsessive rhythm:
tap, tap, tap
, as the dress began to take shape on the mannequin.
Miguel Ángel watched longer than he intended.
Not out of curiosity... but
recognition
.
He knew that look. That posture. That kind of silence.
From the first movement, it was obvious—she wasn’t making a dress.
She was extracting something from within.
Something burning under her skin.
The fabric—bluish gray and fluid in texture—spilled like a river over the table.
Beatriz began to mark lines with chalk, not hesitating once.
Scissors in hand, she cut with steady rhythm.
Every stroke. Every pin. Every fold. Every seam.
All of it was executed with a fierce decision.
As if she had been designing in the dark for years, and now, finally, had let the light in.
The dress was modest. Structured.
Princess cut, a carefully measured sweetheart neckline, elegant fall down to just below the knee.
Nothing exaggerated. Nothing out of place.
But everything—absolutely everything—had soul.
Miguel Ángel stopped working.
The paint on his canvas remained untouched as he sat silently, elbows on his knees, dirty hands folded before his face.
He couldn’t explain exactly what he was witnessing.
He only knew that something was being revealed.
Something that shouldn’t be there—or something he hadn’t expected to see.
Beatriz
wasn’t an artist. Not officially.
She was a
Hunter
. Tough, pragmatic, composed.
A silent bodyguard with quick reflexes and a sharp gaze.
And yet…
that Beatriz wasn’t here.
The one in front of him now was someone else.
A hidden master behind a functional mask.
A creator in disguise.
—
Who are you, really…?
—he thought, not daring to say it aloud.
A strange tightness twisted in his chest—
a mix of pure respect and an unfamiliar closeness.
It wasn’t attraction.
It was… something else.
Like discovering a forgotten masterpiece in a tool shed.
Beatriz pinned the last needle with surgical precision and took a step back. She looked at her creation. Exhaled.
Miguel Ángel swallowed hard
, unable to joke, comment, or offer technical critique.
For the first time in a long while, words just wouldn’t come.
That wasn’t just a dress.
It was a
silent confession
, stitched between pleats.
An emotional map woven in flowing fabric.
And he had been given the privilege—or the burden—of witnessing it.
And he thought only one thing:
—She’s hidden. She’s hiding in this world… and no one even knows it.
...and he had been given the privilege—or the burden—of witnessing it.
A glimpse of something impossible… that the world didn’t yet know it needed.
Notes:
Author’s Note:
Yeah, I know. Beatriz is in full "I don’t like you, stupid Lucien... but don’t you dare stop looking at me, you infuriatingly hot bastard."
This chapter is that emotional breather where Pisces pride meets Aries intensity.
No one’s confessing anything. This is Kaguya-sama: Love is War mode.
They’re both head over heels, but better to plan psychological warfare than admit feelings, right?
Thank you so much for reading this far — let’s catch our breath before Chapter 27… wrecks us all over again. 😅
Chapter 27: Day 1.5 – “The Board and the Silent Queen”
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
Hello everyone! 🌟
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Notes:
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Chapter Text
When the luxury car stopped in front of the city’s most exclusive building, Beatriz couldn’t help but raise an eyebrow. The entrance lights revealed a lobby straight out of a sci-fi movie — glass walls , floating holographic art , and a concierge that looked like he’d been plucked from a fashion catalogue.
—Welcome, miss, —said the concierge with a bow. Beatriz merely nodded, too focused on not tripping over her sandals.
Lucien stepped out of the car with his usual
"I own the world"
attitude and opened the door for Beatriz.
—We’re heading to the “
penthouse
”, —he said calmly, though his eyes sparkled with a glint Beatriz knew well. He was enjoying her discomfort.
Upon entering the penthouse, Beatriz was momentarily impressed. The main room looked like a museum of tech and design , with a massive window offering a panoramic view of the city, minimalist furniture , and a sound system that probably cost more than her yearly salary.
Despite all the luxury, her attention was quickly stolen by a trio whispering in the corner — Noctis , Umbra , and Raúl . Supposedly Lucien’s “interns,” but really: his bodyguards and blacksmith .
—Is that her?
—Yeah, definitely. Look at her. She's different.
—The boss finally brought someone over. This is historic!
Beatriz shot them a glare cold enough to freeze the sun . The “interns” fell silent, though their faces still lit up like they’d uncovered the greatest secret in the universe .
As a true
Aries
, Lucien ignored the tension and motioned for her to follow.
—Your room’s this way.
Beatriz picked up her bag and walked behind him, catching the continued whispers of the interns. “I’ll deal with them later,” she thought.
When they reached the room, Lucien opened the door and gestured for her to enter.
—You’ve got everything you need here. If something’s missing, just ask.
The room was just as luxurious as the rest of the place, though Beatriz couldn't help but notice how the bed looked ridiculously big. “Of course he’d be dramatic even with this,” she thought.
Before she could toss out a sarcastic remark, Lucien turned to her.
—I’ll let you settle in. Dinner’s at
nine
. Don’t be late. —And with that, he vanished down the hallway.
When Beatriz entered the dining room, the “interns” were already there, now dressed as if they were attending a gala . The table was lined with elegant dishes , but the first thing she noticed was Lucien, already seated, pouring himself a glass of red wine with the composure of someone who knew he was in control.
—Looks like you’re adjusting quickly, —Lucien commented, gesturing to the seat across from him.
Beatriz sat down with grace, head held high, fully aware that the interns were watching her from the corners of their eyes. They were waiting for some kind of awkward moment to gossip about later.
She wasn’t going to give them the satisfaction.
—The place is nice. Though I thought the food would be spicier , —she said with a defiant smile as she tasted one of the dishes.
The interns glanced at each other, startled. Lucien raised an eyebrow.
—Spicier?
—Yeah, you know, something with a bit more... unique flavor . But I get it — sophistication rules here, right?
Lucien let out a short chuckle.
—Maybe tomorrow we can add a little
heat
to the menu, —he replied, though his eyes clearly said he was enjoying the exchange too much.
After dinner, Beatriz returned to her room and collapsed onto the bed, exhausted. She had survived Day One , but knew the next two wouldn’t be any easier.
She glanced at her
black mask
inside her suitcase and smiled. If Lucien tried anything, she had a secret weapon to keep him in check.
—
Three days
, —she whispered to herself as she closed her eyes.
I can survive three days.
Back in her room, Beatriz still felt off. She had survived the interns, Lucien’s intense gaze, and possibly the most awkward dinner of her life, yet something still felt... off.
Determined to relax before bed, she opened the bathroom door — only to find a small, perfectly arranged shelf of personal hygiene products waiting for her. A brand-new toothbrush, fancy toothpaste that probably cost more than a decent meal, and a carved crystal glass that read: “For my special guest.”
Beatriz lifted the glass, baffled, watching the light reflect through the fine-cut details.
—Seriously? —she muttered, knowing full well this wasn’t a thoughtful gesture, but yet
another power move
from Lucien.
But Beatriz wasn’t about to let the smug Aries win so easily.
She reached into her suitcase and pulled out her secret weapon : a black beauty mask , the peel-off kind, perfect for “stressful situations” — and now, for strategic intimidation.
As she applied the glossy substance in front of the mirror, a
wicked grin
spread across her face. The black goo coated her skin, giving her a look that was as
terrifying
as it was
absurd
.
—If this guy thinks he can control me with toothbrushes and expensive glasses, he's in for a surprise tonight, —she muttered, adjusting the edges of the mask with precision.
Just as she was settling in with a book, there came a gentle knock at the door. She didn’t need to ask who it was.
—What do you want? —she said flatly, without getting up.
The door creaked open. Lucien stood there, glass of whisky in hand and his usual confident smile on full display.
—Just wanted to make sure you were comfortable.
Beatriz lowered her book with a neutral expression... but the
black mask
across her face said it all.
Lucien, usually unfazed, froze. For the first time in ages, he looked genuinely confused.
—What... what is that? —he asked, gesturing with his drink.
— Beauty mask , —Beatriz answered coolly, relishing his reaction. —Problem?
Lucien blinked, clearly trying to process the scene.
—No, of course not. I just... didn’t expect you to wear something like that here.
—Oh? You thought I’d use the things you left me? —she said, gesturing toward the bathroom. —Thanks for the toothbrush, but I like using my own stuff. I'm very territorial .
Lucien let out a short laugh, though the tension in his jaw gave him away.
—Fair enough. Well then... good night.
Beatriz watched him walk away, clearly more shaken than he wanted to admit. When the door clicked shut, she snuggled into her bed with a satisfied smile.
“First battle won,” she thought as she pulled the blanket up.
In the living room, Lucien took another sip of whisky, still processing what he'd just seen. He was a confident Aries , but even he had to admit... Beatriz played her cards extremely well .
In her room, Beatriz peeled off the mask carefully, feeling ready. The game had just begun , and she was more than prepared to face it.
Conclusion of Day 1.5: The Door Trick and the Water Trap
After the mask scene , Beatriz thought her night was safe. But as she settled into bed, something kept bothering her. Why didn’t she have a key to her own room ?
—Ugh, even the cheapest hotels don’t pull this kind of stunt —she muttered, eyeing the door warily.
Her family had always been cautious, teaching her little tricks to stay safe. Jamming the door with a chair was a classic—and tonight wouldn’t be the exception.
As she moved a chair into place against the door, a mischievous idea crossed her mind. If Lucien was bold enough to try sneaking in during the night, he deserved a lesson. Beatriz scanned the room quickly for something she could use.
There it was: a small metal bucket in the closet.
—Perfect, —she grinned.
She went to the bathroom, filled the bucket with cold water , and carefully balanced it above the doorframe.
—If this confident Aries thinks he can dominate me, he’s about to get a cold surprise —she said as she adjusted the angle just right.
It was well past midnight when Beatriz heard a subtle movement at the door. Her eyes snapped open, and she listened closely. The sound of the doorknob turning confirmed her suspicions.
On the other side, Lucien was trying to open the door quietly. He’d thought about giving Beatriz a little “surprise,” maybe to continue his tactic of staying in control. But what he didn’t expect was what came next.
—Why is this door blocked? —he murmured to himself, applying more pressure.
Finally, with one forceful push, he managed to crack it open. And then…
Splash!
The cold water came crashing down directly onto his head, soaking him from head to toe. Lucien froze, water dripping down his face and soaking his previously perfect shirt.
On the other side, Beatriz struggled to hold back her laughter—it was impossible. She cracked the door just enough to peek and see him standing there, soaked , with an expression of pure disbelief.
—Feeling refreshed? —she asked with a wicked smile.
Lucien stared, trying to keep his composure.
—Really? A bucket of water?
—And you really thought you could walk into my room unannounced? —she replied, arms crossed. —This is what happens when you don’t give me a key.
Lucien let out a low chuckle, shaking his head.
—Touché, Beatriz. Well played.
Beatriz closed the door with a click , satisfied with her victory. Behind it, Lucien sighed, water still dripping from his hair .
—This woman… definitely not like the others —he murmured as he headed off to change.
Beatriz lay back down, feeling safer than ever. The first battle had been won, and now she could finally sleep.
Meanwhile, Lucien couldn’t help but smile while drying his hair, already wondering what his revenge move would be.
Day 2: “Eye of Fire, Heart in Shadows”
Beatriz and Lucien worked like a perfectly synced machine during the Wander hunt. After hours of tracking and well-executed skirmishes, they finally took it down.
Lucien couldn’t help but admire the way Beatriz moved: confident , strategic , lethally precise .
He didn’t say it out loud, of course. But every time she gave an order, something inside him—something more visceral than rational—aligned without question.
When they returned to the penthouse , the air was thick with sweat, adrenaline , and something else neither of them mentioned.
Beatriz dropped her gear with military efficiency and simply said:
—I’m going to shower.
Lucien nodded, watching her vanish behind the bedroom door. From where he sat, he could already hear her unpacking her toiletry kit with that familiar precision .
Beatriz lined up her three bottles on the sink with surgical order. Dark green, white, cream. 1, 2, 3. Like always.
She checked the water temperature, clipped up her hair, and stepped into the shower with her change of clothes. The sound of water filled the space with steam and routine .
Lucien waited.
When the hum of the water became steady and the sliding door closed, he tiptoed over. He stood in the doorway like a thief about to cross a line.
He stepped in.
The bottles stood like soldiers on guard.
Dark green.
Number one.
He didn’t know why he did it. Maybe just an impulse. Maybe, in his Aries mind , something so personal felt like a piece of her. And he wanted to know what it felt like… even if it was just through her shampoo .
He took it. Rolled it between his fingers.
Smelled it. The strongest one. The most “Beatriz.”
Without another thought, he slipped it into the inner pocket of his coat , like someone stealing a secret.
He made it out just in time—he heard her opening bottle number two.
Minutes later, Beatriz stepped out with her hair wrapped in a towel and clean clothes. She looked lighter, like she’d rinsed off more than just sweat.
Lucien lounged on the sofa, spinning a poker chip between his fingers.
She noticed it immediately.
—Are you playing alone or training for a secret casino? —she asked, one brow raised.
Lucien smirked without meeting her gaze.
—I keep it there to remind myself there’s always one more move.
Beatriz narrowed her eyes, slightly suspicious… but let it go.
—How philosophical. So, was your “move” today to skip your shower?
Lucien shrugged, still spinning the chip.
—Maybe… I’m just waiting for the right turn.
She snorted, an almost invisible smile on her face, and dropped onto a chair.
She didn’t notice the dark green bottle was missing .
Not yet.
A competitive glint lit up in Beatriz’s eyes.
—Do you even know how to play?
—Enough to win when it counts —he replied with Aries-level confidence .
Lucien seized the opportunity to raise the stakes.
—In fact, tonight I could take you somewhere interesting. An underground betting hall . But don’t think you’re just coming to watch me win. If you come, you play.
Beatriz raised an amused eyebrow.
—And what do I get out of it?
—The experience. And if you lose, don’t worry, I’ll cover your losses… though I can’t promise you won’t end up betting more than just money .
—More than money? How dangerous is this bet? —she asked, eyeing him sharply.
Lucien smiled, stepping closer.
—Dangerous enough to make you think twice before saying yes.
Beatriz smirked, clearly intrigued.
—If you’re fronting the money, I’m in. But don’t come asking for it back if I lose.
Lucien laughed softly, clearly pleased.
—Deal. Dress comfortably. Things are about to get interesting.
The Deadly Poker Game
Lucien’s motorcycle roared through the city streets, Beatriz holding tight around his waist. They’d worked together on many missions, but tonight felt different. It had an air of danger and pure adrenaline .
When they arrived, Beatriz looked at the building with interest. Its discreet facade hid the truth: a high-stakes underground gambling den , where the wealthy gambled with far more than just money.
A burly, arrogant man greeted them at the entrance. He wore a wide, unpleasant smile showing off yellow-stained teeth .
—Lucien. Well, well. I thought you weren’t showing up tonight.
Lucien offered a calm smile.
—Couldn’t miss the chance. Brought company, too.
The man looked at Beatriz with a mix of disdain and curiosity.
—A girl? You sure she knows what she’s doing? This place isn’t for amateurs.
Lucien crossed his arms, exuding confidence.
—She’s with me. That should be enough.
The mafioso grunted but didn’t argue.
—Fine. Come in. Just don’t cry when things get real.
Beatriz sat at the table, adjusting her posture while she studied the other players. The atmosphere was thick with tension, and all eyes were on her.
Before the first hand, she closed her eyes and whispered to herself:
— Yumeko Jabami… Patrick Jane…
When she opened them, her gaze had transformed. The warm, casual look was gone. Her eyes now belonged to a predator , analyzing prey. The air around her grew dense. The man behind the table swallowed hard, unsure why he suddenly felt a chill.
—Ready to play, girl? —the dealer asked with a challenging grin.
Beatriz smiled back, cool and confident .
—Always.
Lucien watched from the side, feeling a flicker of nervousness. He knew Beatriz excelled at many things, but this was new territory.
And so, the deadly poker match began.
Conclusion of Day 1.5: The Door Trick and the Water Trap
After the mask incident, Beatriz thought her night was secured. But as she settled into bed, something kept nagging her.
Why didn’t she have a
key to her own room
?
—Ah, not even the cheapest hotels do this, —she muttered, eyeing the door suspiciously.
Her family had always been cautious, teaching her small tricks to protect herself. Wedge the chair against the door—classic. Tonight would be no exception.
As she dragged a chair to block the door, a
mischievous idea
crossed her mind. If Lucien was bold enough to try sneaking in during the night, he deserved a lesson. She quickly scanned the room, looking for something she could use.
And there it was: a small
metal bucket
in the closet.
—Perfect, —she said with a mischievous grin.
She went to the bathroom, filled the bucket with cold water, and carefully placed it above the door, ensuring it was balanced just right.
—If this
overconfident Aries
thinks he can dominate me, he’s about to get a cold surprise, —she murmured, adjusting the angle.
It was past midnight when Beatriz heard a faint movement at the door. Her eyes shot open, ears sharp. The sound of the doorknob turning confirmed her suspicion.
On the other side, Lucien was trying to open it quietly. He’d thought of giving Beatriz a “surprise,” maybe to continue his little game of control. But what he didn’t expect was what was about to happen.
—Why is this door blocked? —he muttered to himself, pushing a little harder.
Finally, with a firm shove, he managed to push it open. But then…
Splash!
The cold water
poured right onto his head
, soaking him from head to toe. Lucien froze, water running down his face and ruining his immaculate shirt.
On the other side, Beatriz struggled to hold in her laughter, but it was impossible. She opened the door just enough to peek and saw him standing there, drenched and stunned.
—Feeling refreshed? —she asked with a
malicious smirk
.
Lucien looked at her, trying to maintain his composure.
—Seriously? A water bucket?
—And you seriously thought you could enter my room without warning? —she shot back, crossing her arms. —This is what happens when you
don’t give me a key
.
Lucien chuckled lowly, shaking his head.
—Touché, Beatriz. Well played.
She shut the door with a click, satisfied with her win. Behind her, Lucien sighed as water dripped from his hair.
—This woman… is definitely not like the others, —he muttered, heading back to his room to change.
Beatriz laid back, feeling more secure than ever. The first battle was won , and now she could sleep peacefully. Meanwhile, Lucien couldn’t help but smile while toweling off his hair, wondering what the rematch would look like.
Day 2: “Eye of Fire, Heart in Shadows”
Beatriz and Lucien worked like a perfectly synchronized machine during the Wander hunt. After hours of tracking and flawlessly executed engagements, they managed to take it down.
Lucien couldn’t help but admire how Beatriz moved:
confident, strategic, lethally precise
.
He didn’t say it out loud, of course. But every time she gave an order, something inside him—
more visceral than logical
—aligned without hesitation.
Back at the penthouse, the air was thick with sweat, adrenaline, and something else neither of them dared mention.
Beatriz dropped her gear with
military efficiency
and said flatly:
—I’m going to shower.
Lucien simply nodded, watching her disappear behind her door. From where he sat, he could hear her unpacking with the same precise rhythm he was beginning to recognize.
Beatriz lined up her three bottles with
surgical precision
on the sink. Dark green, white, cream. 1, 2, 3. As always.
She tested the water temperature, pinned her hair back, and stepped into the shower, change of clothes in hand. The sound of running water filled the space with steam and ritual.
Lucien waited.
When the water’s rhythm was steady and the bathroom door slid shut, he moved with
stealthy steps
. He stopped at the threshold like a thief about to cross an invisible line.
He stepped inside.
The bottles stood there, lined like soldiers on watch.
Dark green.
Number one.
He didn’t know why he did it. Maybe it was impulse. Maybe his Aries mind saw something so personal as a piece of her. And he wanted to know what it was like to have her… even in the form of shampoo.
He picked it up. Twirled it between his fingers.
Smelled it. The strongest one. The most
Beatriz
.
Without further thought, he slipped it into the inside pocket of his coat, like someone stealing a secret.
He stepped out just in time, hearing her open bottle number two.
Beatriz came out minutes later, her damp hair wrapped in a towel and wearing clean clothes. She looked lighter, like she’d washed away more than just sweat.
Lucien lounged on the sofa, spinning a
poker chip
between his fingers.
She noticed it instantly.
—Are you playing alone or training for a secret casino? —she asked, one brow arched, arms crossed.
Lucien smiled without looking at her.
—I keep it there to remind me there’s always one more move.
Beatriz narrowed her eyes, suspicious... but let the comment slide.
—How philosophical. Was your move tonight skipping the shower?
Lucien shrugged, still spinning the chip.
—Maybe... I’m just waiting for the right turn.
She scoffed with a faint smile and dropped into an armchair.
She didn’t notice the absence of the dark green bottle.
Not yet.
The
competitive gleam
returned to her eyes.
—And do you even know how to play?
—Enough to win when it matters, —he replied with confident Aries flair.
Lucien seized the opportunity to raise the stakes.
—Actually, tonight I could take you somewhere interesting. An
underground betting den
. But don’t think you’re coming just to watch me win. If you come, you play.
Beatriz raised an eyebrow, amused.
—What’s in it for me?
—The experience. And if you lose, don’t worry, I’ll cover the costs... though I can’t guarantee you won’t end up
betting more than just money
.
—More than money? How dangerous is this bet? —she asked, locking eyes with him.
Lucien smiled, stepping closer.
—Dangerous enough to make you think twice.
Beatriz smirked, already intrigued.
—If you lend me the money, I’m in. But don’t come crying if I don’t pay you back.
Lucien chuckled, pleased.
—Deal. Dress comfortably. Things are about to get interesting.
The Deadly Poker Game
Lucien’s motorcycle roared through the city streets, Beatriz holding tightly to his waist. They’d been on countless missions together, but tonight felt different. It was danger, pure adrenaline in the air.
When they arrived, Beatriz couldn’t help but examine the building with interest. The discreet facade hid its true nature: an illegal betting center where the rich gambled more than just money.
A burly, arrogant man greeted them at the door, flashing a wide, unpleasant grin with yellowed teeth.
—Lucien. Well, well. Thought you weren’t showing up tonight.
Lucien smiled calmly.
—Wouldn’t miss it. Brought company, too.
The man eyed Beatriz with a mix of disdain and curiosity.
—A girl? You sure she knows what she’s doing? This isn’t a place for amateurs.
Lucien crossed his arms, confidence intact.
—She’s with me. That should be enough.
The thug grunted, but didn’t press.
—Fine. Come in. But don’t cause trouble when things get serious.
Beatriz sat at the table, studying the players as she adjusted her posture. The atmosphere was
tense
, and every pair of eyes locked onto her.
Before the game began, she closed her eyes briefly, whispering to herself:
—
Yumeko Jabami… Patrick Jane…
When she opened them, her gaze had changed. The warm, distracted look was gone. Her eyes were now sharp, like a
predator sizing up prey
. Even the air around her felt heavier.
—Ready to play, girl? —the thug behind the table asked with a challenging smirk.
Beatriz smiled back, cold and confident.
—
Always
.
The table was bathed in a warm light , but the atmosphere was ice-cold . Beatriz, sitting upright with her hands clasped in front of her, carefully watched each player as the cards were dealt.
The dealer , a sharp-eyed man with swift movements, distributed the cards with an almost imperceptible smile. Beatriz noticed how his fingers moved with too much precision , arranging the cards in a way that could easily be missed by an untrained eye.
The fat mobster across from her grinned broadly as he picked up his cards.
—"Hope you’ve got some luck, girl. Things can get... interesting here."
Beatriz returned the smile, but her eyes gleamed with more than simple enthusiasm.
—"Luck? Oh, I don’t believe in that. I much prefer the challenge of playing against people who think they’ve got everything under control."
The fat man raised an eyebrow.
—"You think so?"
The round began, and Beatriz let the others place their initial bets . She barely lifted her cards to glance at them, in a way that gave away nothing . She was utterly unreadable.
But her mind was racing. She tracked the dealer’s hand movements, the subtle twitch in the fingers of a nervous player, the slight shift in posture from another as they checked their cards. Every gesture gave her clues about the cards they held and the strategies they planned to use.
When her turn came, Beatriz calmly pushed her chips toward the center of the table without even looking at the pile. Then, with a playful smile, she said:
—"Don’t you all think this is getting a little… predictable ?"
The other players looked at her, puzzled, and the fat mobster frowned.
—"Predictable?"
—"Yes," Beatriz went on, resting her chin on her hand. "I mean, the dealer is arranging the cards so carefully, it almost looks like he’s doing all the work for us. How boring. I thought this was a game of chance , not a parlor trick."
The dealer froze for a moment, then continued as if he hadn’t heard her. The mobster scoffed.
—"Girl, there’s no room for luck here. This game’s for people who know what they’re doing."
Beatriz tilted her head, as if considering his words, though her eyes remained fixed on the dealer.
—"Oh, of course. It’s just that..." —she leaned forward with a bigger smile—, "if you're going to cheat , you might want to be a little more subtle ."
The silence that followed was crushing . The other players stared at her as if she had committed some unspeakable offense. The fat man clenched his fists, and the dealer accidentally dropped a card to the floor.
—"What did you say?" the mobster asked, his voice now cold .
Beatriz shrugged, laughing lightly.
—"Nothing, nothing. Just thinking out loud. But let’s carry on. I’m still having fun."
As the rounds progressed, Beatriz began to play more aggressively , pushing chips into the pot with every turn, forcing the others to make quick decisions. Meanwhile, she used her keen observation to predict their moves.
When it came time for the fat man’s turn , Beatriz stared him straight in the eyes.
—"You know, you have an interesting face. You get this tiny little twitch every time you draw a good card. It’s subtle, but it’s there."
The man froze for a second, and Beatriz seized the opportunity for the final blow:
—"Or is it that you already knew what card was coming?"
The mobster burst out laughing, but it was clear he was shaken.
—"You’ve got guts, girl. But poker’s not just about observation. It’s knowing when to fold ."
—"Fold?" Beatriz let out a mocking laugh. "Oh, honey… that word’s not even in my vocabulary ."
On the final hand , Beatriz went all in , sliding the rest of her chips into the center of the table. The fat man followed, confident he had already won.
When it came time to reveal the cards, Beatriz flipped hers over with a dramatic flourish. It was a straight flush .
The mobster cursed out loud, slamming his cards down in frustration. Beatriz smiled, leaning in as she gathered her winnings.
—"Thanks for the game. It was more fun than I expected."
Lucien, who had been watching from a dark corner of the room, couldn’t help but smile. That woman didn’t just impress him—she disarmed him completely.
As Beatriz collected her chips, enjoying her victory, she noticed the mobster whisper something to one of his bodyguards . The air in the room shifted.
When the man approached her from behind in silence, Beatriz smiled calmly, as if she had predicted the attack. Without turning, she spoke loudly:
—"Seriously? Attacking from behind? How cliché ."
The guard hesitated, surprised that she was aware. But before he could react, Beatriz kicked her chair back with full force, slamming it into his stomach . The impact knocked him off balance, and the gun in his hand slipped free.
With a fluid, precise movement, Beatriz spun, caught the weapon before it hit the ground, and pointed it directly at the bodyguard, a smile of dangerous confidence on her face.
—"Aw, what a bad little dog . Didn’t anyone teach you manners?"
The man tried to move forward, but Beatriz stepped in, completely neutralizing him. In one swift motion, she dislocated his shoulder with a dry crack, sending him collapsing to the floor with a groan of pain.
Beatriz removed the magazine from the gun and emptied each bullet onto the table, one by one, never taking her eyes off the fat mobster.
—"I think you and your friends need a little lesson in manners . Next time, use words , not weapons."
Lucien, who had been watching from the back of the room, stepped forward, a mix of awe and amusement on his face.
—"Do you always have to make it a show?"
Beatriz gave him a casual glance as she let the empty weapon fall to the floor.
—"Not my fault some people need extra lessons ."
The mobster, clearly shaken, raised his hands in surrender.
—"Fine! You won your chips, girl. But you'd better not come back here."
Beatriz gave a slight, sarcastic bow.
—"Who said I wanted to?"
Lucien and Beatriz walked out calmly, leaving the players and the mobster in tense silence. When they reached the motorcycle , Lucien couldn’t help but laugh.
—"I don’t know whether I should be impressed or terrified."
Beatriz fastened her helmet with a serene expression, though her eyes glowed with satisfaction.
—"You’ll find out soon enough that those are two sides of the same coin."
As Beatriz walked out triumphantly with Lucien, her mind drifted into a distant memory. A soft piano melody , one she always associated with moments of calm, echoed in her thoughts. It was a nostalgic piece she used to play during her more carefree days—before her life had become a whirlwind of missions, secrets, and strategies.
Back then, she had reached 15th place worldwide in an online Uno tournament . Without using any boosters. She remembered clearly how everyone else depended on them, but she had done it through pure wit alone. It had been a quiet victory, one she never bragged much about. After all, she had never taken a screenshot of her ranking—something she now regretted, just a little.
That success, however, had come at a cost. Her siblings , unable to compete with her, eventually banned her from joining family matches . She tried to laugh at the memory, but there was a hint of bitterness in her chest when she thought about how much she missed them. She had left so many things behind in her former life , and those family bonds were something neither her strength nor her intelligence could ever replace.
She glanced at Lucien as she adjusted her helmet . He wore a smile that was both amused and impressed, clearly taken by her earlier performance. And even though it seemed like he’d be willing to listen to anything she wanted to share, Beatriz kept that memory to herself.
— It’s not his problem... and it’s not something he’d understand, she thought as she climbed onto the motorcycle .
As Lucien started the engine , Beatriz hummed the same piano melody in her mind—the one that always brought her peace. There was no room for nostalgia right now. She had to stay focused .
—"Ready for the next adventure?" Lucien asked with a casual tone.
Beatriz smiled, letting her mask of confidence slide back into place.
—"Always."
Shampoo, Pride, and Other Flammable Substances
Back at Lucien’s house , Beatriz was focused on her report in the study, typing with precision and efficiency. The details about the eliminated Wanderer were clear, but her mind wandered a bit. The mission had reminded her how well she used to work in a team with Lucien—though she’d never admit it. "He doesn’t need another reason to inflate his ego," she thought while finishing the last paragraph.
Suddenly, a deafening scream shattered the silence.
—AAAAAAAH! DAMN IT! MY FACE! MY EYES! EVERYTHING BURNS!
Beatriz raised an eyebrow, unbothered. “Another one of his stupid antics?” she mused, sending the file. But the rushed footsteps of the bodyguards Noctis and Umbra made her pause. She decided to follow them to Lucien’s room—only to find a scene worthy of epic disaster.
Lucien was sprawled on the bathroom floor , completely naked and face down , groaning as if he’d been mauled by a pack of wild dogs. His usually pale, porcelain-like skin had turned a vivid reddish tone , making him look like an overripe tomato. His white hair was soaked and clinging to his face, and his red eyes , usually intense, seemed to burn even more—thanks to the shampoo. The bathroom floor was flooded with water and dark green shampoo.
Noctis and Umbra, weapons in hand, froze on the spot. Their expressions screamed, “Seriously?” Some tried to suppress their laughter.
Standing at the door, Beatriz frowned and looked up at the ceiling, visibly uncomfortable.
—Please tell me he’s covered. I’m not turning around until someone confirms I won’t be visually scarred for life.
One of the Umbra guards coughed to hide his chuckle as he handed over a towel.
—Mr. Lucien… do you need assistance?
—NO! GET OUT, ALL OF YOU! —Lucien growled, though his voice sounded more pitiful than commanding.
Still not looking directly, Beatriz crossed her arms and spoke in her usual dry, sarcastic tone.
—Let me guess. You stole something you shouldn’t have, didn’t you?
Lucien’s silence betrayed him. Beatriz sighed.
—What was it this time, Lucien?
—Nothing... —he muttered in a small voice.
One of the Noctis guards , unable to hold it in any longer, pointed to a rolling bottle of dark green shampoo on the floor.
—I think it was this, Miss Beatriz.
Beatriz’s eyes widened, and she gasped.
—YOU TOUCHED MY SHAMPOO 1 ?!
Lucien groaned from the floor.
—Why the hell do you have a shampoo made with chili ?! Were you planning to use it as a chemical weapon?
Beatriz couldn’t help but laugh, though she tried to keep a straight face.
—It’s a natural chili shampoo I made at home. I love it—it makes my hair stronger and shinier. But... oh, right... I forgot to label it with a warning. The internet said it burns like hell for some people.
Lucien turned slightly, still covering himself.
—And it didn’t cross your mind that someone might get confused ?!
—Why would anyone be stealing my shampoo ? —Beatriz replied with a mix of sarcasm and genuine confusion.
Lucien tried to get up but slipped again, landing with a loud thud. Beatriz sighed and turned away, leaving Noctis and Umbra to handle covering him up.
—Once you're done "cooling off" , maybe we can talk about not invading personal spaces , don’t you think? —she said with a smug smile as she walked off.
In her mind, Beatriz knew Lucien would never admit what he did—but that didn’t matter. "This’ll teach him not to mess with my stuff," she thought, heading back to the study.
The sound of three soft knocks on the door pulled Beatriz out of her concentration. She was reviewing some reports when the interruption caught her off guard. "Who knocks at this hour?" she wondered as she got up and opened the door.
There stood Lucien , his white hair still a bit damp and a towel draped over his shoulders. Although he’d regained his usual composure, the shampoo incident still showed on his lightly flushed skin—more from embarrassment than irritation.
Beatriz raised an eyebrow and crossed her arms.
—What now? Coming to steal my conditioner , too?
Lucien shook his head, flashing a small smile that barely hid his discomfort.
—No, I just… wanted to talk.
Beatriz hesitated for a moment but stepped aside to let him in. He walked into the room, observing its simplicity. Everything was neatly arranged: a perfectly made bed, a work desk full of papers, and a bookshelf with manuals and reference texts. Small personal touches stood out, like an old wristwatch and a landscape photo that looked like it came from another world.
Lucien turned to her, resting one hand on the chair next to the desk.
—Your space is more... austere than I expected.
—Were you expecting pink curtains and plush toys ? —Beatriz replied with a sarcastic smile as she took a seat at her desk.
Lucien remained standing, watching her with an intensity that made her a bit uneasy. Finally, he spoke, his tone soft yet curious:
—Beatriz… do you hate me ?
The question caught her off guard. Beatriz frowned slightly.
—What kind of question is that?
—One I need to ask. —Lucien raised an eyebrow, his voice more serious, though his usual arrogance lingered.
Beatriz took a deep breath, looking away briefly before answering.
—I don’t hate you.
Lucien seemed to relax slightly, but Beatriz went on:
—I just… try to understand you.
He leaned in a bit, intrigued.
—Understand me? And what exactly are you trying to understand?
Beatriz looked him in the eye, her thoughts racing. She remembered the game’s interactions—the Lucien who promised to fulfill all the protagonist's wishes, flaunting wealth and power as if that alone could win someone over. To Beatriz, who had grown up with so little, those gestures weren’t impressive—they were empty performances by someone who didn’t know the value of earning things.
—Sometimes, it feels like you’re playing a role. Like this is all a game to you —she finally said, careful not to sound too accusing.
Lucien watched her silently but didn’t deny it. Beatriz continued, her voice gaining strength.
—I don’t hate you, Lucien. But I can’t ignore that... —she paused, choosing her words— a lot of what you do reminds me of how different we are. You have the means for grand gestures, but sometimes it feels like you use them to fill a void . As if what you really want… can’t be bought .
Lucien tilted his head, a flicker of surprise flashing across his face before he returned to a neutral expression.
—And what do you think I really want?
—I don’t know. Maybe not even you know.
Lucien remained silent, his red eyes fixed on her, analyzing every word. Finally, he smiled—but this time, it was different. Less arrogant, more… genuine.
—You’re unique, Beatriz. And I still can’t decide whether that fascinates me or irritates me .
Beatriz rolled her eyes.
—Welcome to the club. Now, if you’re done invading my personal space , maybe I can get back to work.
Lucien chuckled softly, raising his hands in surrender as he backed toward the door.
—Alright, alright. I’ll leave you alone… for now. But don’t think this conversation is over.
—In your dreams.
As Lucien exited the room, Beatriz sank into her chair, feeling the weight of the conversation. "Maybe I’ll never fully understand him. But I can’t bring myself to hate him—not when I see… something more inside." She turned back to her report.
Wandering Fire 🔥
Beatriz closed the door behind Lucien, making sure to turn the lock firmly . She knew no one would dare to enter, but she needed to feel completely alone . She walked toward her bed, left the finished report on the desk, and let herself fall onto the mattress, staring at the ceiling .
The silence of the room, far from calming her, only made it easier to hear the
storm inside her mind
. Without thinking, she rolled over and buried her face in the
pillow
, letting out a muffled scream to release the
mix of emotions
that had been tormenting her for hours.
—“This is all such utter
nonsense
!"—she thought, her face still buried in the pillow.
She raised her head, took a deep breath, and turned onto her side, hugging the pillow tightly. Her mind kept circling back to that absurd story that had frustrated her so much: the
witch
, the
dragon
, the
revenge
, and that strange
bond
that now seemed to follow her even into this life.
"Why the hell did
Lucien
have to be tied to that story? Why?!"
Beatriz clenched her fists, remembering how, in the game, the witch had simply taken everything the dragon had offered—his love, his loyalty, his treasures... everything. The most cruel and ironic part was that, in the end, he had died—because of the witch. And the phrase the protagonist found on-screen after that scene still haunted her:
"My dragon is gone…"
Beatriz sat up in bed, hugging her knees as her thoughts pulled her deeper into her
memories
. Unlike that
selfish witch
, who acted only on
whim
, Beatriz had grown up knowing that
nothing came without effort
. Her family had taught her the value of
hard work
, especially her
father
. He showed her that
wishes don’t just come true
, they’re earned through
sacrifice and determination
.
“That damn witch doesn’t know what it’s like to lose everything and still go on,” she thought,
gritting her teeth
. “She’s never spent a whole week
surviving on rice water
because the money just wasn’t enough. She doesn’t know what it’s like to
study until you collapse
, because if you don’t, your family has no future. That damn witch doesn’t know what it means to truly
want
something.”
What hurt the most was remembering how the dragon , in all his majesty and power , had been reduced to a pawn of the witch’s desires. For Beatriz—who had grown up loving stories like Dragonheart —that act was unforgivable. Dragons were symbols of strength, wisdom, and loyalty . Having one by your side was a privilege , not something to be exploited .
And then there was that voice… The first time she had interacted with Lucien in the game, she had heard something strange—an ancestral whisper:
"Go on, devour him. It’s your power. It’s yours. Devour everything."
At the time, she had ignored it, thinking it was part of Lucien’s powers or just a narrative effect. But now, with everything she knew, she was certain it had been the witch.
“She wanted me to kill him,” she thought, a chill running down her spine. “She wanted me to take everything. How can someone be so... empty ?”
Beatriz sighed, closing her eyes as she
lay back down
.
“I’m not like that witch,” she thought, a strange
knot forming in her chest
. “I don’t want things to come by magic. I don’t want to take advantage of anyone—not even someone like
Lucien
. If there’s something I want in this life, I want it because I
worked
for it. Because I
built it
. Not because someone else
sacrificed
it for me.”
A bitter smile appeared on her lips as she thought of
Tiana
, the Disney princess she had always related to. Tiana didn’t expect a
wish
to fix everything; she
fought
for her dreams, no matter how hard the road. Beatriz was the same.
“I don’t know how this will end,” she thought, staring at the ceiling. “But one thing is certain: if I’m going to undo this cursed story, it’ll be
my way
. No wishes. No shortcuts. And definitely no going back to being that damned
witch
.”
With that final thought, she closed her eyes, trying to calm her mind for the day ahead.
Aimless Fire
Lucien stood in front of a window on one of the upper floors of the building where he was staying. The city, lit by artificial lights, stretched out before him like an endless ocean of life. But his gaze was distant, fixed on a nonexistent point on the horizon.
He had believed he’d seen everything, that no human could surprise him after all he had lived through, and yet… there she was.
Beatriz
.
—
She’s not like the witch,
—he thought, arms crossed. —
She’s… different.
The memories of his former life burned like embers in his chest. The witch, with her calculated smile and her sweet yet poisonous words, had reduced him to a mere tool of power . For a long time, he had carried the weight of that betrayal , convinced he would never trust anyone again.
And then came
Beatriz
—with her stubbornness, her strength, and that way of looking at him that completely disarmed him. There was no trace of manipulation in her eyes, only a
baffling blend
of determination and vulnerability.
—
She doesn’t ask for anything,
—he told himself, clenching his fists. —
She doesn’t try to take what isn’t hers. But she also refuses to accept what I could give her… It’s like she’s rejecting the very idea of depending on anyone else.
It was impossible
not
to compare Beatriz to the witch. The witch had taken everything without hesitation, using him as if his power were something she was entitled to. But Beatriz, for reasons he still didn’t fully understand, seemed to be
fighting against that fate
, even when embracing it might make her path easier.
—
She tries so hard to carry everything alone,
—he thought, feeling a strange pang in his chest. —
As if she can’t allow herself to trust anyone. Not even me.
And that was what puzzled him the most. Because, despite everything, he wanted her to trust him . He wanted to be more than just an echo of his past life, more than a shadow of the dragon he once was.
Lucien closed his eyes, remembering the moment their paths had crossed. He had felt something different in the air, as if her presence awakened something that had slept for centuries. But it wasn’t just that. There was something in Beatriz that pulled him in—
something deeper
, beyond any connection to the witch or his past.
—
She’s fascinating,
—he admitted silently. —
Annoying… but fascinating.
The problem was that fascination came with emotions he wasn’t used to feeling. A desire to
protect her
, to understand her, to make her
smile
. And for someone like him, accustomed to being feared and respected, that was a damn nightmare.
—
What the hell is happening to me?
—he asked himself, running a hand through his hair.
Lucien took a deep breath, trying to organize his thoughts. Beatriz was an
enigma
, a puzzle he couldn’t ignore. But beyond his curiosity, there was something else. Something that made him want to draw closer to her, even knowing she’d probably reject him.
—
Maybe it’s because she doesn’t treat me like a dragon,
—he thought. —
Not like a monster, or a weapon. To her, I’m just… me.
That idea was as
terrifying
as it was
comforting
. For the first time in centuries, he felt like someone
saw him
, not for what he could offer, but for who he was. And as much as he hated to admit it… he was starting to like it.
—
Damn it,
—he muttered, letting out a bitter laugh. —
Is this what it feels like to be human?
He turned back to the window, staring at the city once more. He didn’t know how any of this would end, but one thing was certain:
Beatriz was not like the witch
.
And for the first time in a long, long while… he felt like
staying
, just to find out what that meant.
Notes:
Foreshadowing:
There are flames that light the way.
And there are flames that burn everything in their path.
Lucien, the dragon, is about to learn the difference.
Because to truly love, it’s not enough to burn—
Sometimes, you have to learn to shine without destroying.
Chapter 28: Day 2, Part 2: Where the Light Hurts Him
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
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The night was silent , save for the soft hum of the appliances in the apartment. Beatriz had finally managed to calm down after her emotional outburst, though her eyes still held a hint of redness from holding back tears. She decided to get up and look for some water—maybe something cold would help clear her mind before trying to sleep.
The kitchen was bathed in an almost reverent silence . The faint light of the refrigerator lit up Beatriz’s face as she searched for something to quench her thirst. But before she could grab a bottle of water, a shiver ran down her spine.
She wasn’t alone. As she turned toward the kitchen entrance, she saw him .
Lucien was leaning against the wall, arms crossed and wearing a calm expression—though there was something in his eyes , something she couldn’t quite decipher.
— You? What are you doing here? —she asked, a mix of surprise and irritation in her tone, trying to mask her initial alarm.
Lucien didn’t answer right away. He took a step toward her, his figure casting a long shadow under the dim light.
— I can’t read you, —he finally said, his voice low but steady.
Beatriz raised an eyebrow, crossing her arms. — What’s that supposed to mean?
— Isn’t it curious how darkness always leads us to seek the light? —a familiar voice murmured—soft, yet full of intent.
Lucien , leaning against the doorframe, wore that same lofty, amused look that always threw her off.
— Do you always have to be so dramatic? —she snapped back, trying to hide her discomfort.
He stepped closer, his red eyes glowing with that unsettling intensity that made her feel like she was under a microscope.
— Not dramatic. Persistent, maybe, —he tilted his head— There’s something about you, Beatriz. Something I can’t figure out.
— Maybe because there’s nothing to figure out, —she replied firmly, though her voice had a slight tremble.
Lucien smiled, but there was no amusement in his lips this time. Only a cold, calculated resolve .
— Everyone has a desire. Something dark, something that consumes them. And you... you can't be the exception.
Before Beatriz could step back, Lucien’s right eye began to glow with a crimson light , alive and pulsing in rhythm with his own heart.
Time seemed to stop.
Beatriz felt her mind being invaded, the walls she had built over the years pierced by Lucien’s power. He expected to find something dark—he always did. But what he saw left him frozen.
Warmth.
It wasn’t a selfish or twisted desire. What Lucien saw was infinitely deeper.
A lost home, laughter silenced too soon, warm hands that were no longer there to hold her. And in the middle of those flickers of memory, a longing so pure it was devastating. Beatriz didn’t crave riches or power. Her heart yearned for something simpler, yet infinitely more precious:
The warmth of an embrace. The safety of strong, steady arms that made her feel protected, like nothing in the world could hurt her.
And then, the vision shifted.
In the center of that warmth appeared a blurred figure , but unmistakable. A tall man, serene and majestic, whose arms wrapped around Beatriz with a tenderness Lucien had never felt in his life. Dressed in a black suit that seemed to absorb light itself, this man—who seemed like a deity—stood with a majesty that would rival any god. His dark green hair flowed softly over his shoulders, contrasting with his eyes —one golden, the other a deep red with a hint of black, glowing with an ancient, mysterious power.
A voice echoed—deep and firm, but warm like sunlight.
— True beauty must be like the light; warm, inviting, and making one feel safe in its presence.
Lucien stepped back , as if the voice had struck him. His red eye lost its glow as he tried to process what he had just witnessed.
— What... was that? —he muttered, more to himself than to her.
Beatriz , still reeling, looked at him with suspicion. — What the hell did you do to me?
When Lucien looked up again, he was face to face with a formidable vision . Even though “that deity” wasn’t really there, his presence was tangible —a manifestation of the forces that had always protected and loved Beatriz from the shadows. In those divine eyes, Lucien saw a truth he couldn’t deny: though “he” couldn’t be physically with Beatriz , his love for her transcended any mortal boundary.
Beatriz , feeling the warmth of that presence at her back, knew at that moment she wasn’t alone. Hades would always be there to protect her—even from beyond the grave. For the first time, Lucien felt envy and resentment . Not just for what he couldn’t give her, but for what Hades represented: eternal protection and love.
He didn’t reply right away. He was paralyzed , not only by what he had seen but by what he had felt . That warmth , that light , was something he could never offer. It was something that didn’t belong to his nature.
And he
hated
it.
Not out of jealousy, but because—for the first time in his life—he felt
small
in the face of something he couldn’t control or possess.
— Everyone has a dark desire, —he finally said, his voice sounding almost hollow— But you... you don’t.
Beatriz stared at him, puzzled. — What does that even mean?
Lucien let out a bitter chuckle. — It means you’re a puzzle. One I hate and... can’t stop trying to solve.
She looked at him with suspicion, still feeling the echo of the voice she had heard inside her. Something in her knew that Lucien had seen more than he admitted, but she had no intention of letting him intimidate her.
— Maybe you should accept that you can’t control everything, — Beatriz said, her voice steady—catching him off guard.
Lucien smiled, but this time it was bitter , almost vulnerable .
— Maybe you’re right, —he murmured, more to himself than to her.
And with that, he turned and walked out of the kitchen, leaving Beatriz alone with her thoughts… and with the strange feeling that something had changed between them.
Back in her room that night, after carefully closing the door behind her, Beatriz let herself fall slowly onto the bed, her heart still beating soft but steady. The moonlight filtered through the window, bathing her desk and part of the carpet, as if the night was waiting to wrap her in a whisper .
She closed her eyes for a moment, and in the darkness behind her eyelids, the moment returned. Not Lucien —but the other shadow . The presence of Hades . That strange but warm instant, like a sadness that could embrace you without hurting.
“Why did I think of him just now?” she wondered silently.
But like an inevitable tide , the memory of Lucien also returned. Fear , yes, but not ordinary fear. It was like staring into something immense that didn’t know how to approach without breaking everything. And even so, she couldn’t hate him. Even if he had come too close. Even if she didn’t understand what he saw in her.
“Just... don’t come so close, Lucien. Not at night. Not when I still don’t know what we are. Not when someone else looks at me as if he understands the pain I hide.”
She pulled the blanket over herself, wishing sleep would bring no more questions. Only silence. Only stars .
“I don’t know what that was, Lucien… but I don’t hate you. Just… don’t enter like that, please.” — Beatriz
The Trial of the Blind Guardian
After his encounter with Beatriz in the kitchen, Lucien headed upstairs to the private gym in his residence. Frustration boiled beneath his skin, burning like fire trapped inside a pressure cooker. He knew what he had tried to do with Beatriz was a mistake—but he couldn’t help it. It was as if she brought out the best and worst of him at the same time.
Without bothering to change clothes, Lucien approached the punching bag hanging in the corner. He struck it hard, over and over again, letting each impact echo in the empty room. His knuckles went numb, but the fire in his chest refused to die down.
That’s when an unfamiliar voice broke the silence:
—Well, the saying goes: “play stupid games, win stupid prizes.”
Lucien turned sharply, looking for the intruder. Out of the gym’s dim lighting, a dark-furred Siamese cat appeared, with cream and coffee-colored tones. Its eyes were clouded, but the faint gleam suggested they had once been a vibrant blue. The long fangs peeking from its mouth gave it an almost vampiric look.
The cat leapt gracefully and landed on one of the weight benches.
—Though in your case, it seems that in this life’s
gacha
, you pulled something
unique and valuable
, cabrón. Like finding a golden ring in a candy machine. And now you’re wondering—do you spend everything to get it out, or break the whole machine?
Lucien
stared at him with a mix of disbelief and disdain.
—Who the hell are you?
The cat tilted its head slightly, as if peering into the depths of
Lucien
’s soul.
—Oh, right. How rude of me. Call me
“Pirata.”
Though frankly, I don’t have time for your dumb questions. I’m here because you tried to touch something you shouldn’t have.
Lucien
frowned.
—You have no idea what you’re talking about.
—Oh, don’t I? —
Pirata
let out a mocking laugh.
—I can see right through your tough-guy mask. I know what you are,
dragon
. And I know what you're trying to do with my
Mistress
.
The word "dragon" made Lucien clench his fists, but before he could reply, Diaval , the mechanical crow that followed him, cawed nervously and flapped its wings.
Pirata
continued, ignoring the rising tension.
—Funny, isn't it? You’ve got everything you could want—music, art, gourmet food...
With a fluid motion, the cat transformed into a humanoid figure dressed in a sleek red
Siamese-style jacket
, holding a
can of tuna
. He opened it with a theatrical gesture.
—And yet, you can't
taste
any of it, can you? Everything tastes the same. As if you’ve lost the sense of what truly matters.
Lucien gave him a cold glare but said nothing.
—You made a
pact
with a god or something, right? That would explain a lot. Your humanity is just a
mask
now.
He took a bite of the tuna, speaking irreverently with his mouth full.
—Still, you act like some greedy little kid—
He swallowed.
—My
Mistress
,
Beatriz
, is not a trophy for you to
possess
.
The mention of
Beatriz
made
Lucien
stiffen.
—You have no idea what she means to me.
Pirata
let out a theatrical sigh, setting the empty can aside.
—Of course I do, boy. Your
core
and hers pull toward each other like magnets, but instead of cherishing that, all you want... is more and more.
A dagger of dark energy appeared in the cat’s hand, and he hurled it straight at Lucien . He tried to dispel it with his own energy, but to his surprise, the weapon was absorbed by his skin, leaving a burning mark on his chest.
Pirata
smirked, a mix of arrogance and amusement in his expression.
—Congratulations, you’re
cursed
now. You won’t be able to talk about me with anyone—and trust me, I don’t want you to try. But I’ll leave you with one bit of advice before I go.
The cat vanished into a swirl of red and black smoke , leaving an echo behind:
—Decide what kind of fire you want to be, Lucien . One that destroys everything in its path... or one that gives life and shelter , like the sun .
Lucien
was left alone in the gym, the echo of
Pirata
’s voice ringing in his mind.
For the first time in a long time... he felt completely disarmed.
And he
hated it
.
The Sealed Fire
Lucien stood still in the gym, the burning mark left by the dagger still pulsing on his chest. The sensation wasn’t just physical—he felt the dark energy slithering through his being like a serpent slowly coiling around his soul.
He struck the punching bag with such force that it flew off its hook and slammed into the wall. He was breathing hard, hands trembling—not from fear, but from a rage growing like a wildfire inside him.
—A damn cat? —he growled through his teeth—. A smug, blind cat that acts like it knows everything about me?!
He ran a hand through his hair, trying to calm down, but Pirata’s words echoed again and again:
"Decide what kind of fire you want to be."
The irony made his blood boil. He, someone who
loved cats
, had just been
insulted and cursed by one
. And not just any cat—
Beatriz
’s cat.
As if things between them weren’t already complicated enough, now he had to deal with
that
creature meddling in his business.
He paced across the gym, fists clenched.
—How dare he? Who the hell does he think he is, telling me what I am and what I’m not?
The mechanical crow cawed softly from its perch, as if trying to soothe him—but Lucien ignored it.
—I can’t even talk to
Beatriz
about him! —he shouted, slamming his fist into the wall hard enough to leave a
crack
.
—Damn cat and his damn curse.
He could feel the mark on his chest burn hotter each time he even tried to form thoughts about telling someone what had just happened. It was like an invisible weight crushing his heart, stealing his words before he could speak them.
—That... that bastard made a pact with something . There’s no other explanation —he muttered, narrowing his eyes—. No ordinary cat can do this. He has to be a deity... or something close.
The idea that a mere cat could wield that much power irritated him even more. His pride was shattered . He had always been the strongest, the most feared. And now, a being that by all logic should be beneath him had humiliated him —and the worst part? He couldn’t even fight back.
He slammed his fist against the wall again until it turned
red and swollen
.
—This isn’t over! I don’t care if he’s divine. I don’t care if he’s
Beatriz
’s cat. I’ll find a way to break this curse.
But a part of him couldn’t shake what Pirata had said. The mention of their “cores attracting” , the accusation that he only wanted more and more from Beatriz —it had struck a deep nerve .
He stopped in front of the gym mirror, staring at his reflection. His bare chest revealed the dark sigil , pulsing slowly as if it were alive.
—What kind of fire do I want to be? —he muttered, jaw clenched tight.
Pirata had planted a seed of doubt deep within him—and that only enraged him more. Lucien hated feeling vulnerable , especially over something a damn cat had said.
—Damn you, Pirata . I swear, if you show your face again... I won’t hold back.
But deep down, he knew facing Pirata wouldn’t be so simple. If that energy dagger had been absorbed into his body... what else could that cat do?
One thing was certain: Beatriz was at the center of it all.
He closed his eyes and let out a long, heavy sigh.
—No matter what you say,
Pirata
...
she’s mine.
The gym’s dim light cast his shadow on the wall—tall, tense, as if fighting something much larger than himself.
The Dream Realm
Lucien could do nothing but ease his frustration with a quick shower and crawl into bed. The day had been a whirlwind of emotions, and he just hoped that rest would bring some peace.
Lucien slowly opened his eyes, finding himself in a vast and ethereal space. There was no ground or ceiling, just an infinite ocean of stars and nebulae that seemed to dance with a life of their own. His body felt different—heavier, more robust. He looked down and saw his sharp claws , the black scales covering his arms, and his long tail snaking behind him.
He had returned to his true form , the one he had always considered both a blessing and a burden .
— Where am I? —he growled, his voice echoing like a deep rumble in the void.
A soft blue glow appeared in front of him, growing until it took the form of a tall, majestic figure . Mater Somniorum emerged from the light, wrapped in her cosmic mantle that shimmered like a starry sky. Her gaze, warm and compassionate, rested on him, and for a moment, Lucien felt all the barriers he had built in his life begin to crumble.
— Son of fire and storm , —Mater Somniorum said in a melodious voice that seemed to envelop him in calm—, do not fear . I have not come to judge or hurt you.
Lucien stepped back, uneasy under the gaze of this deity who seemed to see everything.
— Who are you? —he asked cautiously, showing his claws as if expecting an attack.
— I am Mater Somniorum , the Mother of Dreams , guide to those who walk between worlds. And you, Lucien, are lost among the flames of your own heart .
The dragon-man clenched his fists, trying not to give in to the vulnerability he felt at being called by his true name .
— I'm not lost. If you're here to talk to me about that damn cat , I don’t want to hear another sermon.
Mater Somniorum chuckled softly, a sound that filled the space with an unexpected warmth .
— Pirata is no ordinary cat , Lucien. He is a high-level guardian spirit , a soul who chose to protect Beatriz even after death. You cannot defeat him—nor should you try.
Lucien frowned but said nothing.
—I know you are angry, —Mater continued, approaching with steps that left trails of starlight —. Your pride is wounded, and you feel humiliated . But listen well, my son: I did not come to defend Pirata. I came to remind you that he did not curse you out of whim. His words carry a truth that you yourself need to accept.
Lucien looked away, feeling exposed under the weight of those words.
— What truth? That I should stop being myself?
— No. That you must choose what kind of fire you want to be for Beatriz. —Mater looked at him intensely—. Beatriz has survived more than you can imagine. Her soul bears deep scars , yet it still shines with a beautiful light . You, Lucien, are the only one among those around her who has no hidden motives to be by her side.
The dragon-man raised his gaze, surprised by the affirmation.
— But your fire… —Mater gestured toward him, and suddenly, the black flames within Lucien became visible, swirling around him in a furious dance—. If you’re not careful, it might burn her instead of warming her. Do you want to see her suffer more than she already has?
Lucien remained silent, his claws trembling slightly.
—I know you don’t want that, my son. That’s why I’m here. Pirata and I share a purpose : to help you understand that Beatriz does not need more intensity , more dangerous games . She needs a sun , not a fire that will consume her.
Mater Somniorum leaned in, placing a warm hand on his scaled shoulder .
— See her with new eyes, Lucien . Go beyond your desires and recognize who she truly is. A strong woman , worthy of your respect and protection . If you choose to be that sun, you could be her partner , her equal . But if you choose the path of destruction , you won’t just lose her—you’ll make the whole world pay the price .
Lucien swallowed hard, unable to hold the deity’s gaze.
— What do you mean?
— "Khaërôn". —The name echoed like thunder, and the environment changed, becoming darker—. It's a threat you've already sensed, even in your darkest dreams . And, Lucien, we need you . Whether they like it or not, you are a key piece in this cosmic game.
The deity straightened, looking at him with a mixture of tenderness and solemnity .
—But remember this: Beatriz has placed her bet on you . More than anyone else, she believes in what you can become. Do not disappoint her .
The space began to fade, and Mater Somniorum stepped back, leaving behind a trail of starlight . Before disappearing completely, her voice echoed once more:
— Be the sun for her, Lucien. Not the fire that burns her.
When Lucien woke up, his heart was pounding. The mark from the dagger was still there, but something inside him had changed. He closed his eyes, breathing deeply.
— Alright, —he muttered to himself—, let’s try it your way.
Chapter 29: Day 3: “Where Fire Learns to Be Warmth”
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
Lucien woke with the first ray of light filtering through the window of his room. His body still felt heavy, as if the night had left behind a burden he couldn’t shake off. He ran a hand over his face and let out a deep sigh.
Did I really dream of Mater Somniorum?
The name echoed in his mind like a distant whisper. Her words still clung to his chest, especially that phrase: “Be the sun for her, not the fire that burns her.”
He got up slowly, noticing the disarray in his room. His claws had torn part of the furniture during the night, a result of his frustration and rage before falling asleep. On the floor, a small bottle of
chile shampoo
rolled until it tapped against his bare foot.
Lucien picked it up with a grimace, half exhaustion, half irony.
—Damn shampoo. —He muttered, turning the bottle in his hands. His thoughts drifted back to
Beatriz
, to the moment he had entered her room and stolen the shampoo, clueless of the consequences.
He also remembered what came after: the confrontation, his own harshness, and that vision that had completely disarmed him. Beatriz embraced by that
divine figure
, radiating a purity so intense it felt untouchable.
—She’s so... different, —he whispered to himself, closing his eyes for a moment.
But before he could get lost in thought again, a soft knock on the door pulled him back.
—Lucien, are you awake? —Beatriz’s voice came from the other side.
Lucien tensed. Just the thought of facing her after everything made him nervous. What was he supposed to say? How should he act?
He ran a hand through his messy hair and replied in a flat tone:
—Yeah, come in.
Beatriz entered, looking calm but with a gaze that hinted at curiosity, as if trying to read him. Her hair was down, her posture relaxed—such a stark contrast to the tension tightening in Lucien’s chest.
—Did you sleep well? —she asked, setting a cup of
coffee
on the table beside him.
Lucien avoided looking at her directly, focusing on the cup instead.
—Enough. Thanks.
There was a brief silence, and Beatriz, always perceptive, furrowed her brow slightly.
—You seem... different. Are you alright?
Lucien let out a bitter laugh.
—Different? I don’t know what you mean.
Beatriz crossed her arms, tilting her head with a small smile that wasn’t mocking, just genuine.
—Maybe it’s my imagination. Though, after everything that happened yesterday, I wouldn’t blame you for feeling a little off.
Lucien looked up, surprised by how direct she was. Didn’t she feel at least a little uncomfortable after everything they’d been through?
—You’re not... mad? —he asked, letting a bit of his confusion slip.
Beatriz blinked, clearly puzzled.
—Mad? Why would I be?
Lucien clenched his jaw. The memory of his words during the assault, his aggressive tone, and that moment when she had so vulnerably expressed her longing for warmth—everything came back to haunt him.
—For how I treated you... for what I said... —he paused, lowering his gaze—. I wasn’t fair to you.
Beatriz let out a small laugh that only disarmed him more.
—That’s what’s bothering you? Lucien, I’ve dealt with people far worse. You... you were just being yourself.
Her words, simple but sincere, made him feel even smaller. He wanted to tell her about the dream, what
Mater Somniorum
had said, but
Pirata’s curse
held his tongue.
—
I can’t talk about him.
—So instead, he extended the almost empty shampoo bottle.
—This is yours, right?
Beatriz took it, smiling with a playful spark.
—You’re giving it back now? I thought you were keeping it for revenge.
Lucien shook his head, allowing himself a small smile.
—I’m not interested. I’ll just... try not to steal things anymore.
Beatriz looked at him, amused but also curious.
—Why’d you take it in the first place, Lucien?
There was a moment of silence where Lucien avoided answering. Finally, he sighed, resigned to sharing at least part of the truth.
—I don’t know... Maybe because... I wanted to know what it felt like to be close to you, even if just for a second.
Beatriz stopped laughing, surprised by his honesty. The intensity of his words, even spoken begrudgingly, made her look at him differently.
—You’re strange, you know that? —she said at last with a small smile—. But not in a bad way. Just... try asking next time.
Lucien nodded, taking a sip of the coffee to hide his discomfort. Beatriz gently took the bottle from his hand and walked to the door. But before leaving, she turned back to him.
—Thanks for last night, Lucien. I know you’re not always the easiest person to deal with, but... I’m starting to see a different side of you.
She closed the door, leaving him alone with his thoughts. Lucien let out a sigh, resting his head in his hand.
—A different side, huh... —he muttered—. I guess I’ve got a lot of work to do.
As he finished his coffee, the scent of chile lingered in the air, reminding him that maybe it was time to change how he approached Beatriz. He remained seated, staring at the empty coffee cup. Mater Somniorum had been right. He was fire , but he had a chance to be a sun for Beatriz. And he wasn’t going to waste it.
Lucien stayed sitting a moment longer, staring at the empty cup as if it might offer answers. Mater Somniorum had been right... He was fire. But maybe, just maybe, he could learn to be the sun.
The sun was rising slowly, painting the buildings in shades of amber as Lucien stood motionless by the window.
For the first time in years, he wasn’t sure which mask to wear.
He wasn’t plotting a strategic move. He wasn’t thinking about power, results, or his damn mafia business.
He was thinking only about her.
Beatriz.
Her stubbornness. Her surgical clarity. Her way of not giving an inch, but also... the look in her eyes when she thought no one was watching.
As if she didn’t expect the world to hear her. As if she had already given up on being seen.
And yet, he had seen her.
Not as an ally. Not as a piece on the board.
But as something... unique. Unsettling. Real.
He pulled something special from one of his drawers—a keycard . He ran his fingers along the metallic edge. He held it for a moment between his fingers, staring at the emblem of his Onychinus organization as if seeing it through new eyes.
He could offer her a promotion. He could assign her more missions. He could even buy her something expensive.
But none of that was what he truly wanted to give her.
What he wanted to offer... was an open door.
A silent symbol that she belonged in his world—
if she chose it
. Not as a hunter. Not as a subordinate. As an equal.
He didn’t know if she’d accept it.
But for the first time, that didn’t stop him.
He quickly typed a message on his phone:
“Meet me at the central plaza. It’s important.”
And as he turned to pick up his shirt, he left behind more than just a turbulent night.
He left behind the version of himself who believed he had all the answers.
Now, he only had one.
And he was willing to risk it.
The
sun
began to rise through the curtains of
Beatriz’s
room, bathing the space in a warm
golden glow
.
The
events
of the previous night still swirled in her mind: the
gambling house
, the
incident with Lucien
, and, of course, the "
assault
". It felt like each scene was layered over the next, leaving behind a trail of
conflicted emotions
that made her sigh in exhaustion.
After having a latte, she returned to her room and her attention drifted to the small table where her gear rested. She picked up her cellphone, checking notifications as a single thought kept nudging at her:
What is Lucien doing today?
She began to brush her hair , applying styling cream as if those small morning rituals could restore order to the chaos of her life. Just as she was about to put her phone down, it buzzed on the table.
She picked it up and turned on the screen, expecting a routine message—but what she saw made her pause:
"Meet me at the central plaza. It’s important." —Lucien.
Beatriz frowned. No details, just those blunt words.
A part of her wanted to ignore it, but there was something in the
tone
of the message that made her reconsider.
Lucien
rarely asked for anything seriously—and after everything that had happened, maybe this was a chance to set things straight.
With a sigh, she pocketed her phone and left the room, heading to the meeting point.
The city was already coming to life . Vendors were setting up their stalls, and the scent of freshly baked bread floated through the air. Beatriz reached the designated spot, scanning the crowd.
There he was— Lucien , leaning casually against a lamppost with an almost neutral expression , but his red eyes betrayed a mix of nervousness and resolve . When he saw her approach, he straightened up, slipping his hands into his pockets.
— "What’s going on?" Beatriz asked, stopping a few steps away.
Lucien stared at her for a moment, as if searching for the right words.
Finally, he pulled out a
small card
from his pocket and held it out to her.
— "It’s for you," he said, his voice direct, but without the arrogance that usually came with it.
Beatriz blinked, surprised, as she took the card . She studied it, noting the elegant design—it was a keycard bearing the emblem of Lucien’s organization , Onychinus .
— "What is this?"
Lucien took a deep breath, as if the words were difficult to release.
— "Access to my Safe Havens. I’ve got several throughout the city and in my territory. If you’re ever hurt or need to hide… use this. I’ll also install an app on your phone to help you locate the nearest one."
Beatriz looked at him, utterly stunned.
It wasn’t common for someone to offer something so
valuable
with such
sincerity
—especially not
Lucien
.
Lucien gave a small nod, seeming slightly more at ease now that the card had changed hands. He then began to configure the app on her phone, while she slid her fingers over the screen, examining the points marked on the map . Her expression was calm, but the way she bit her lower lip betrayed her vulnerability.
—
"Really… thank you,"
Beatriz said, meeting his gaze. Her tone was
warm
, almost
fragile
, as if the words were too big for her chest. She closed her hand around the card, gripping it like a
talisman
.
—
"This means a lot to me. I promise to only use it if absolutely necessary."
Lucien looked away briefly, scratching the back of his neck with a bit of discomfort, before letting out a crooked little smile.
— "You don’t have to promise anything. I just… want you to be safe. Even if I’m not around."
That confession , so simple and direct, ignited a small warmth in Beatriz’s chest . Like a tiny ember being stirred to life, giving her a spark of comfort she hadn’t felt in a long time.
However, just as she was about to say something else, a peculiar
sensation
ran down her spine.
It felt like an
intangible whisper
, a
warm and teasing voice
that seemed to float between the two of them:
"See, man? You can do it. But don’t think you’re getting rid of me that easily. I’ll still be watching… from time to time."
Beatriz turned around immediately, eyes scanning the street. She searched through shadows and subtle details, as if expecting to find someone there. Finally, she dropped her gaze to the ground, slightly lost.
— "What’s wrong?" Lucien asked, frowning and stepping closer.
— "I thought... I thought I felt the presence of someone I knew. But I guess it was just my imagination."
Lucien observed her quietly, noting the faint glimmer of sorrow in her eyes. He placed a hand on her shoulder—firm, but not forceful.
—
"Maybe it wasn’t your imagination,"
he murmured, almost to himself. Then, clearing his throat:
—
"But it doesn’t matter. If you ever need help, even against the ghosts that haunt you… you know where to find me."
Beatriz looked up at him, surprised by the earnestness in his voice. She wanted to reply, but couldn’t find the right words. Instead, she offered a gentle smile , the kind that seemed to light up even the darkest corners of her life.
— "I’ll keep that in mind."
As they walked away from the street, the sensation of
Pirata’s presence
slowly faded.
But somewhere in the back of her mind,
Beatriz
couldn’t shake the feeling that someone’s eyes still lingered on her—not in
threat
, but in
protective curiosity
.
And though Lucien didn’t mention it, a part of him felt it too—that odd warmth crawling up his back that made him stay on alert.
"Tsk… annoying cat," he thought to himself.
With that, the two of them resumed their path, unaware that this quiet moment had been the
first step
toward something much greater for both.
And as they climbed onto Lucien’s
motorbike
, they set off toward the
next stage
of their journey.
A Breakfast with “Surprises”
The morning air was crisp , with a gentle breeze making the park feel calmer than usual. Lucien parked his motorbike near a promising food truck . Beatriz , still half-asleep but curious about the gesture, followed with light steps.
—
“What kind of morning craving is this?”
she asked, crossing her arms as Lucien checked the menu.
—
“The kind of craving that deserves a strong coffee and a decent breakfast,”
he replied in his nonchalant tone.
They ordered a couple of strong espressos and a breakfast combo with sandwiches and something sweet . Beatriz noticed Lucien was unusually quiet while they looked for a bench to sit on. Her instincts kicked in. Something felt off .
Once seated, she leaned in slightly, flashing that inquisitive look she used when unraveling a mystery.
— “Okay, you didn’t just bring me here for breakfast, right? There’s something else. What’s happening, Lucien?”
Lucien sighed, resting his arm on the bench back.
— “Let’s just say last night’s poker game attracted more attention than we expected. Some people are looking for you.”
Beatriz raised an eyebrow.
— “Oh? So… I won something bigger than I thought?” she asked, blending curiosity with sarcasm.
Lucien gave her the brutal honesty he was known for.
— “You won a contract. For a new weapon.”
Beatriz blinked, processing the words before responding dryly:
—
“Ah…”
she made a dramatic gesture with her shoulders and a wave of her hand.
—
“Honestly, I hoped it was money.”
Lucien smirked, but Beatriz didn’t let her guard down.
—
“There’s more, isn’t there?”
she continued, narrowing her eyes. She glanced around and lowered her voice.
—
“Let me guess. Snipers. At 10, 3, and 6 o’clock. And that guy racing our way… he’s one too, right?”
Lucien let out a low laugh.
— “You’re too perceptive. Seems like you’ve learned from the best.”
Beatriz rolled her eyes.
— “Right, Lucien. So humble. But that explains why we haven’t been attacked yet. You’re a pretty intimidating brick wall, huh?”
Before Lucien could reply, a stray kitten approached them, drawn by the aroma of their breakfast. Touched, Beatriz tore a bit of ham from her sandwich and offered it.
— “Hi there, little one,” she murmured softly.
The cat tentatively took the ham. Lucien reached out to pet it.
— “Not like that,” Beatriz said quickly, noticing the setup.
The kitten hissed and scratched Lucien’s hand before backing away. Beatriz suppressed a laugh, then checked the wound.
— “Told you. Cats have rules. Let me see.”
She pulled a small kit from her military-style bag, cleaned the scratch carefully, and applied a bandage . Lucien watched quietly, surprised by the tenderness in her gesture.
—
“I love cats,”
he confessed suddenly.
—
“They’re... sweet. Harmless.”
Beatriz looked up, startled by his sincerity.
— “You? The guy always ready to kick asses?” she teased with a smile.
Lucien stood up, resolved.
— “Give me a second.”
He walked back to the food truck and asked if they had anything for cats. The vendor handed over some small tuna cans , and Lucien, in his typical flamboyant showmanship, bought them all. When he came back, he began opening the cans, attracting a dozen cats from the bushes.
Beatriz watched, nodding with unusual warmth.
— “So you do know how to get a cat’s attention after all.”
Lucien shrugged.
— “I don’t overthink it. I just do what I feel I need to.”
Beatriz leaned toward one of the cats, whispering softly.
— “To win over a cat, you need to introduce yourself first. Lower your height, let them smell something of yours: a hat, sunglasses. It’s like a business card for them.”
While speaking, a fleeting memory of a past cat passed through her mind. Her tone turned melancholic.
— “I had a cat once. Stubborn. Disobedient... but they were good company.”
She said no more. The memory was buried in a past she couldn’t share.
After they finished the tuna, Beatriz turned to Lucien.
— “And now? What’s the next move?”
Lucien, with a sly grin, replied:
— “Something I know you’ll like: a fight.”
Beatriz scoffed, standing up.
— “Not here. This is a public park. We have to move before there’s collateral damage.”
Lucien nodded.
— “As you say. But you’d better hop on the bike real fast.”
Beatriz handed him her helmet playfully.
— “Hope they don’t hurt you so much you can’t move afterward.”
Lucien laughed, starting the motorbike as she climbed on behind him. The morning breeze wrapped around them again as they sped off toward the next chapter of their chaotic and thrilling adventure.
The Kitten Rescue under the Neon Rain
Rain fell steadily, drenching the streets as Beatriz returned to Lucien’s house. After the confrontation, they had taken separate paths for safety. Her umbrella did little to keep her dry, but she was too exhausted to care. Her mind was still tangled in the events of the past days, especially the unexpected overnight stay at Lucien’s.
Turning a corner, something caught her eye: a tall figure crouched by a fence, arm extended through the bars. Beatriz frowned. It was unusual to see someone so elegant , almost intimidating, over six feet tall, in such an undignified position.
When she got closer, her heart skipped a beat.
— “Lucien?”
He turned, his expression a mix of irritation and surprise.
— “What are you doing here?”
— “That’s what I should ask you,” she replied, raising an eyebrow as she noticed him trying to reach something between the railings. She stepped closer, curious. When she saw what was on the other side, she couldn’t help but laugh.
— “A kitten?”
Lucien exhaled in frustration.
— “It’s not funny. The poor thing is trapped and I can’t reach it.”
Beatriz set her umbrella aside and knelt, bending to look more closely. The small black kitten was curled at the bottom, meowing desperately.
— “Let me try. I’ve got smaller hands.”
Lucien grudgingly gave way, though not without warning.
— “Fine, but be careful. That kitten seems fiercer than it looks.”
She gave him a quick grin before slipping her arm between the bars. The kitten backed off at first, but Beatriz murmured softly, calming it. Finally, she managed to grasp it—though not without outcome: the little one scratched and bit her hand trying to free itself.
— “Ouch!” she complained, but didn’t let go. She gently freed the kitten and held it to her chest.
Lucien rushed over, noticing blood trickling from her hand.
— “Are you okay? You’re bleeding!”
— “It’s just a scratch,” she replied, downplaying it while stroking the trembling animal.
Lucien frowned, clearly upset.
— “Why did you do that?”
The question hit deeper than she expected. For a moment, Beatriz froze, her mind pulling her back to a memory she wished she could forget: a younger version of herself, crying for help in a crucial moment, while silence answered.
— “Are you okay? Hey, look at me!” Lucien’s voice snapped her back, his tone more concerned than demanding.
Beatriz blinked, returning to the present, although something inside her trembled. She forced a sudden smile, trying to redirect the focus.
— “Sorry, dissociated! It’s what I do. I have a soft spot for animals.”
Lucien didn’t seem convinced. His gaze hardened.
— “Sorry? What was that? Don’t throw ‘dissociation’ at me when clearly something happened.”
She sighed, fighting to stay composed.
— “It’s nothing. I’m fine, right? Now let’s focus on the kitten.”
— “Beatriz.” His voice was firm, as if he wouldn’t accept evasions. His red eyes locked on hers intently.
— “Look, I know you don’t want to talk about it, but I’m not going to pretend nothing happened. Why did you go so... distant? What did you remember?”
Beatriz hesitated, clutching the kitten close like a shield. Finally, she chose not to lie completely.
— “It’s just that... no one helped me when I needed it. So I learned to help, even if it hurts me.”
Lucien appeared stunned by her honesty. His usual arrogance softened into something more serious.
— “I don’t fully understand, but…” he exhaled, running a hand through his wet hair— “Okay. Just... don’t ever ignore if you’re hurt, alright?”
Beatriz nodded weakly, surprised by the concern in his tone. As they headed to a nearby store to get something for the kitten, Lucien kept watching her from the corner of his eye, as if unraveling a mystery he’d just stumbled upon.
In that moment, something changed between them—even if neither was willing to acknowledge it yet.
Bait, Towel, and Kitten
They had returned to Lucien’s penthouse , and as Beatriz invited him into the room he had assigned her, a rather playful idea came to her.
Beatriz
held the
kitten
wrapped in a
towel
, her expression serious, though it couldn’t quite hide the
mischievous glint
in her eyes.
—Well, this poor baby is full of
fleas
, so I’ll take the chance to give him a bath... and while I’m at it, I’ll bathe too. You can wait here. Oh, and leave your
wet clothes
outside so they can dry—
She pulled out some towels but, discreetly, also took a change of clothes with a perfectly innocent smile, disappearing into the
bathroom
before
Lucien
could even react.
Lucien raised an eyebrow, staring at the closed door.
—Sure, take your time, but don’t take forever, yeah? —he called out as he flopped down on the
couch
like he had all the time in the world—. Wouldn’t want to catch
pneumonia
out here like an idiot.
He settled in, but his mind began to spiral. Did she just tell me to leave my wet clothes out? Does that mean...? A devilish smile crept across his face as he imagined Beatriz stepping out in a movie-scene moment: damp hair, wrapped in a towel... Wait, what the hell am I thinking? She wouldn’t be that bold... or would she?
He tried distracting himself by looking around the room, but he couldn’t help tuning in to the slightest sound. Every drop of water from the bathroom seemed to stretch out the seconds. By the time he heard the click of the door opening, Lucien had mentally braced himself to stay cool and “act indifferent.”
But then…
Beatriz stepped out of the bathroom.
Fully dressed .
Her hair was neatly wrapped in a towel, and the kitten—now clean and wrapped in a tiny towel—rested peacefully in her arms. Her face was the picture of pure innocence , though her eyes betrayed the amusement she was clearly enjoying.
—All done —she said as if nothing had happened.
Lucien blinked, utterly thrown off.
—What? But… wait… what about the towel? How did you do all that so fast?
Beatriz shrugged, petting the kitten as she gave him a playful glance .
She had actually planned this exact moment. She knew Lucien would fall into the trap of underestimating her , and had rehearsed that line down to the tone. It wasn’t just a reply—it was checkmate .
—What did you expect? Some kind of cheap movie scene? Please, Lucien. I’m practical, not theatrical. Besides, the kitten had priority.
Lucien stared at her, trying to figure out how he had lost in a situation he thought he was controlling . Eventually, he scowled, though his expression couldn’t hide the mix of admiration and frustration .
—You planned this, didn’t you? You knew exactly what I’d think.
—Planned what? —Beatriz replied with a smile that obviously meant "yes."
Lucien let out a snort, crossing his arms.
—Fine. You got me… this time. But be careful, Beatriz. I’m very good at
rematches
.
—Rematch? —she said, holding back a laugh as she cuddled the little cat—. Come on, Lucien. I know you can’t resist someone with this innocent face . Now help me find the kitten a bed before he falls asleep in my arms.
As Beatriz walked into the room to improvise a comfy spot for the kitten, Lucien watched her from the couch. He was still mildly annoyed about falling into her trap, but he couldn’t help but smile . There was something about the way she always managed to surprise him that kept him both intrigued… and on edge.
"Alright, Beatriz. I’ll let you have this one. But next time, I’ll be the one catching you in your own game," he thought, rising to follow her.
And so, while
Beatriz
tended to the kitten like nothing had happened,
Lucien
made a silent promise: next time, the trap would be his.
Though deep down, he couldn’t deny just how much he enjoyed these little battles of
wits
.
Chapter 30: Day 3 – Part 2: The Rematch – “The Spicy Mango”
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Chapter Text
Beatriz
was lazily
drying her hair
, while the sounds from the
kitchen
drifted from the other side of the penthouse. Something was off:
Lucien
hadn’t called her for dinner. That was strange.
—Is he ignoring me on purpose? —she murmured, glancing at the
sleeping kitten
as if he could answer.
—What do you think? —she added, stroking the small feline, who replied with a soft purr . Beatriz sighed and stood up. Only one way to find out, she thought.
When she reached the kitchen , there he was: impeccable, elegant, and—just like always— infuriatingly self-assured . Lucien was preparing something, moving with precision and grace as he sliced what, to her surprise, turned out to be lettuce , spinach , and green apples .
—Well, aren’t you dedicated —Beatriz said, crossing her arms and leaning against the doorframe—. Is the personal chef on vacation or something?
Lucien looked up at her with that
side-smile
Beatriz was starting to associate with trouble.
—He’s sick. Someone has to keep things running, don’t you think? —he replied casually, tossing the ingredients into a bowl—. Want to try?
Beatriz raised an eyebrow as she walked closer. In front of her sat three
jars
. Oh no… here we go again.
—Let me guess, I have to choose? —she said, with a hint of annoyance.
Lucien nodded, that mischievous gleam in his eyes that drove her crazy.
—Of course. Choose carefully.
Beatriz eyed the jars as if defusing a bomb. She picked one, opened it, sniffed it, and with a sigh, poured some over the salad. Upon tasting it, she realized—fortunately—she’d chosen correctly this time. It was a real dressing, tart and exactly the flavor Lucien liked according to their little “game.” But that didn’t stop her from frowning at his satisfied expression.
—What? Were you expecting me to mess up? —she snapped, crossing her arms.
—Let’s just say your record isn’t exactly… flawless —Lucien replied with that mocking tone that blended sarcasm and elegance like no one else.
Beatriz huffed and, without much thought, scooped up some dressing with her fingers, ready to smear it across his face in revenge. But something stopped her. Do I really want to do this?
Lucien, ever observant, noticed her hesitation. Before she could react, he took her hand, slowly brought it to his lips, and… put her finger in his mouth .
Beatriz’s world stopped.
Her face turned a deep red as she took two steps back instantly, clutching her chest.
—What the hell is wrong with you?! —she exclaimed, even redder at his shameless smile.
—What? You shouldn’t play with food if you’re not ready for the consequences. Besides, food shouldn’t be wasted —he replied, leaning slightly toward her, as if savoring her discomfort.
—Don’t touch me like that! —she said, quickly turning away. Her heart was pounding, and she needed to get out before her dignity took any more damage—. And for your information, I have no interest in staying here with you. I’m leaving.
—As you wish —Lucien said, his voice calm but dripping with intent—. If you get lost in the mansion, I’ll be on the terrace enjoying my salad.
Beatriz didn’t answer. She simply left the kitchen, trying to regain her composure.
What the hell was that? Her mind was a mess, but somewhere deeper, she was starting to realize what had really happened. In his twisted way, Lucien had been inviting her to spend time with him. That terrace … wasn’t just a place, it was an opportunity.
Suddenly, an idea sparked in her mind, and a smile curved her lips.
—Finally, a scene worthy of my skills —she murmured, heading toward the
pantry
.
She slipped quietly back into Lucien’s kitchen , avoiding the initial trap. Instead of simply going to the terrace empty-handed, she decided to use her Latina ingenuity to counterattack.
Beatriz found a
mango
and, in her other hand, the
Miguelito seasoning
she’d gone to such lengths to make in this strange world. With the jar in hand, she murmured to herself with a devilish smile:
—You want to play dirty? Let’s see if you can handle the big leagues, my king.
With the mango in hand and the jar of homemade Miguelito tucked under her arm, Beatriz worked with precision. She sliced the mango Mexican-style , coated it in the seasoning, and carefully placed it on a stick with a napkin. One taste, and a spark of pride ran through her.
Perfect… now let’s see how much of a dragon you really are, Lucien, she thought, heading for the terrace.
When she got there, she found him sitting, enjoying his salad, bathed in
moonlight
.
Lucien
looked up, surprised to see her return. But before he could speak, Beatriz lifted the mango.
—I brought you dessert —she said with an innocent smile.
Lucien narrowed his eyes, suspicious.
—Dessert? —he repeated.
—Mango. With a special touch —she replied, offering it to him.
Lucien took a piece with his usual confidence. But the moment he tasted it, his eyes widened. The blend of sweetness , tanginess , and spice hit him like an unexpected explosion. He coughed slightly but didn’t lose his composure. If anything, his smile grew wider.
—What… kind of sorcery is this? —he asked in a rough voice.
—Sorcery? —Beatriz replied with feigned surprise—. It’s just a little treat I made myself. Don’t like it? I can eat it if you want.
Lucien shook his head and, in an unexpected move, took another piece directly from her hand . She froze, her face heating up as he tasted the mango with a calmness that didn’t match the situation.
—It’s got character —he said, looking straight at her—. Just like you.
Beatriz took a step back, crossing her arms like a shield.
—Tch… I didn’t know the great Lucien Draekos was so sensitive to spice .
Lucien chuckled softly and leaned toward her.
—Maybe… or maybe I just like facing challenges worthy of me.
Beatriz shot him a glare, but this time she had no quick comeback. She turned sharply toward the exit, leaving behind Lucien’s low, satisfied laugh.
As she walked away, she heard his soft laughter fade into the
night breeze
. She didn’t look back. She didn’t need to.
One point for me, Lucien. But the game has only just begun.
The King of the Ring and the Queen of Surprises
After dinner, Lucien took Beatriz to his personal gym , a spacious area with state-of-the-art equipment and a training ring in the center. With a confident smile, he gestured for her to step in.
—Look at this. Now you see why they call me the king of this place? —he said, proudly pointing at the weight machines, punching bags, and even an advanced combat simulator .
Beatriz crossed her arms and raised a brow.
—So what? —she replied playfully—. All this means nothing if you don’t know how to move.
Lucien laughed and, without warning, tossed her a pair of
training gloves
.
—Care to prove it? Come on, show me what you’ve got.
Beatriz sighed, but a competitive spark lit up in her eyes. She accepted the challenge and stepped into the ring, adjusting her gloves. She moved with agility, her steps light and precise. She threw a couple of punches into the air before nodding.
—Let’s go, big guy.
Lucien smirked and began the sparring , attacking with calculated movements but not using his full strength. Beatriz, however, dodged and counterattacked with surprising speed. Her style was quick, with unexpected feints and strategic strikes .
—Huh… You’ve got a peculiar style —Lucien commented, blocking a punch—. What do you call it?
— “Tiffa Mode,” I already told you —she answered with a mysterious smile.
When they finished, both stepped out of the ring, breathing heavily but satisfied. That’s when the gym doors opened, and two figures dressed in black made their entrance.
Noctis and Umbra .
The twins walked with almost mechanical precision, their movements perfectly synchronized as if sharing a single thought. Their dark leather suits and raven-beak masks made them look like something out of a sinister fable.
—Do you have it? —Lucien asked without preamble.
One of the twins, Noctis, opened a
briefcase
and revealed a pair of sleek, futuristic
pistols
.
—The
Harrier 700
, latest model —he said in a monotone voice.
Beatriz arched a brow and crossed her arms.
—Uh-huh… and what’s this? Did I win some kind of lottery without knowing?
—You’re going to need them for tonight —Lucien replied, taking the weapons and offering them to her.
She frowned, suspicious.
—For what exactly?
Lucien’s eyes gleamed with mischief.
—We’re going to a
special meeting
. Some military officers are interested in buying the design.
Beatriz sighed, massaging her temple.
—Pff… Can’t you handle that on your own? I’m not in the mood to go looking for trouble for free.
—Not optional, kitten . You won the poker game , remember? And as the rightful winner, you get to collect… by coming with me.
Beatriz eyed him with suspicion.
—…This isn’t just about the sale, is it? You’ve got something else in mind.
Lucien only smiled, neither confirming nor denying.
Beatriz glanced down at the pistols in her hands, then back at Lucien.
—Listen… I don’t want to use you as a shield, nor do I want you to feel like we’re just using each other.
Lucien went silent for a second, his confident smile disappearing for just an instant. Then, with a slight tilt of his head, he replied with unusual calm:
—Huh… I didn’t think I’d see the day someone would tell me that.
Something stirred in Beatriz’s chest at his words. There was something in the way he said it, as if they had touched a chord he didn’t expect.
But in an instant, the mischievous spark returned to his eyes and his smile reappeared.
—Well, well, don’t go getting sentimental on me now. We’ve got work to do.
Beatriz sighed and looked at the weapons again.
—Fine… but if this turns into a disaster, you owe me another dinner.
Lucien laughed.
—Deal.
Noctis and Umbra remained silent, observing the exchange like expectant shadows. Beatriz holstered the pistols and steeled herself. Something told her this night was going to be anything but peaceful.
Between Bullets and Confessions
The elevator ascended in complete silence. Beatriz leaned against the wall with her arms crossed, glancing sideways at Lucien , who was holding a black briefcase with apparent indifference.
—Tell me something, Lucien… —she murmured, in her most nonchalant tone—. Why exactly didn’t you show me the weapon’s design before we came here?
Lucien tilted his head with a superior smile.
—Oh, that? I figured you’d enjoy the surprise.
Beatriz rolled her eyes.
Ummm… —she shot him a sharp look— …Suspicious.
The elevator chime rang and the doors opened.
The “ abandoned building ” turned out to be anything but. The walls were pristine, adorned with polished marble and warm-lit chandeliers. A long table, surrounded by military officers in immaculate uniforms, stood in the center of the room.
Oh no… this smells like a trap.
The general , a man with a stern face and medals up to his neck, stood with a smile that didn’t reach his eyes. Beside him, a mafia boss with a large belly and gold rings snapped his fingers, ordering his bodyguards to surround the area.
Lucien strode forward confidently and set the briefcase on the table.
—Ah, General, what a pleasure to do business with a man of tradition.
The general nodded condescendingly.
—I hope the gold bars meet your expectations.
Beatriz kept her poker face, but in her mind, she could already see the play unfolding.
Oh no… I think I know where this is going.
Lucien smiled with false enthusiasm.
—Well, you truly are old school! But… before we proceed, aren’t you going to check the merchandise?
The general made a dismissive gesture.
—No need. We wouldn’t pay without doing our prior research.
Lucien tilted his head theatrically.
—How interesting… because I always make it a habit to verify my payments before closing a deal.
The mafia boss chuckled with disdain and snapped his fingers. Instantly, a dozen soldiers raised their weapons and surrounded them.
Beatriz sighed.
Oh no, not again… —she thought, rolling her eyes.
Lucien placed a hand over his chest in feigned shock.
—What?! The honorable general and the crime lord in cahoots? I’m
shocked
!
Beatriz nudged him with her elbow.
—Do you have a plan, or are we just throwing punches at random?
Lucien smirked and, with a quick move, flipped a table for cover.
—Let’s get this party started! —shouted Beatriz like it was a war cry.
Chaos erupted.
Beatriz and Lucien moved like a well-oiled machine. While he blocked bullets with the table, she rolled across the floor and disarmed a guard with a swift wrist twist. Gunfire, shouts, and the crash of shattering glass filled the room.
—Up! —Lucien ordered, grabbing her hand and leading her toward the emergency stairs .
Enemies pursued them as they climbed, but Beatriz and Lucien covered each other, clearing the path with precision. Finally, they reached the rooftop.
The night wind hit their faces.
Lucien turned to Beatriz with his trademark theatrical smile.
—You trust me, right?
Beatriz, adrenaline pumping, looked at him excitedly.
—Wait… are we going to jump?
Lucien raised an eyebrow.
—Are you excited?
Beatriz burst out laughing.
—Of course! We’re going to jump off a building and you’ll make sure nothing happens to me!
Lucien blinked, slightly thrown off by her reaction. But he wasted no more time and wrapped an arm around her.
—Hold on.
And they jumped.
Beatriz screamed with joy.
—WHEEEEE!
Lucien activated his power , transforming into red smoke and particles that cushioned their fall. He landed in the classic Marvel superhero pose , holding her firmly in his arms.
Once they touched the ground, Beatriz felt her legs tremble slightly — but it was from excitement more than anything else.
—Anything else? —she asked with a smile.
Without answering, Lucien pulled out a small device, about the size of a watch.
Beatriz’s eyes widened.
—Whoa, whoa, whoa—wait!
Lucien pressed the button, and an explosion lit up the sky.
Beatriz barely had time to shield her eyes before the building erupted in flames.
—Lucien! —she exclaimed, throwing her arms dramatically between him, the explosion, and the destroyed building—. If you were going to blow up the damn place, you could’ve told me! I would’ve brought sunglasses to enjoy the scene better!
Lucien laughed, clearly enjoying her reaction.
—It was necessary. If they wanted to risk their lives for an empty briefcase, that’s not my problem —he said with typical nonchalance, dusting off his jacket.
Beatriz still felt the adrenaline, but there was also something else. Something about him. In recent days, Lucien had become a piece that didn’t quite fit in her life… and yet, being with him felt strangely natural.
Lucien studied her with a half-smile, resting a hand on his hip.
—You have a unique way of fitting pieces together, Beatriz. Everything you do shows me you’re a completely new kind of puzzle for me. And honestly… I don’t mind. It feels pretty good.
Beatriz blinked, surprised by the sincerity in his words.
—You think so?
—Definitely. I like this dynamic. I feel free to tell you that you can use me however you want for your investigation.
Beatriz lowered her gaze slightly, feeling a faint blush on her cheeks.
—Lucien… I don’t want to keep doing the investigation.
He raised an eyebrow, surprised.
—You don’t?
She shook her head with a shy smile.
—No. It’s not necessary. I don’t need anything from you… I just enjoy being with you.
Lucien was silent for a few seconds. Her answer caught him off guard. He was used to people approaching him for what he could offer, not for who he was. But Beatriz… she simply wanted his company.
Running a hand through his hair, he looked at the sky as if searching for an answer among the stars.
—Wow… —he let out with a low chuckle—. And to think that in the last few days I’ve been told I should be warmer with you. First in a dream… and now you, without anyone asking you to.
Beatriz tilted her head with curiosity.
—They’ve told you to be warmer with me?
—More than once. Seems the universe insists on it —he replied with a half-smile. Then he looked straight into her eyes and added—: Beatriz, you’ve become a very interesting puzzle.
She scoffed, crossing her arms.
—I’m not a puzzle, Lucien. If you have doubts about me, you can just ask me directly. I don’t have much to hide from you.
Lucien smirked with amusement.
—Oh, really?
—Yes. I mean… I’ve already seen you naked, so it’d be absurd to hide anything else.
Lucien blinked, then burst into a genuine, carefree laugh.
—You’re right! —he said between laughs—. I can’t argue with that.
Beatriz looked at him with a satisfied smile.
—So tell me, if you think I’m a puzzle, what kind of person have you put together from all the pieces you have of me?
Lucien tilted his head slightly, studying her with interest before answering in that confident, charming
Aries
tone:
—It’s far from complete, but challenging enough to keep building.
Then, without breaking eye contact, he gently took her wrist and began guiding her through the darkness of the night. Beatriz felt a slight shiver — not from fear, but from excitement.
But she wasn’t someone who let herself be led so easily. With a playful move, she stepped ahead a little and, instead of letting Lucien guide her with just one hand, she intertwined her fingers with his and then took his other hand as well.
Lucien raised an eyebrow, surprised by the gesture.
—And this?
Beatriz smiled, glancing at him from the corner of her eye.
—This way is more comfortable, you know?
Lucien chuckled softly, shaking his head in amusement, but didn’t let go of her hands.
Together, with the city lights behind them and the night as their witness, they walked in silence, enjoying the strange but undeniable connection that had formed between them.
🍽 Milanesas, Manipulation, and a Damn Snake
Midday, fourth day.
Sometimes, the body falls before pride does.
Beatriz didn’t remember the exact moment she surrendered to sleep. She only knew that when she opened her eyes, the sunlight was streaming through the window as if it wanted to shove her back into the game.
The city was still roaring outside, indifferent to her little revolution from the night before. But she wasn’t the same anymore.
Fourth day.
And with it, the certainty that there was more war to fight… though this time, she wasn’t sure against whom.
The air in the base smelled of dampness, dry gunpowder… and
instant noodles
. Beatriz hadn’t said it out loud, but it was time to leave. However, slipping away quietly wasn’t her style. No. If she had learned anything from living among
dragons
,
military men
, and betting houses, it was that the last strike should be the most memorable.
And she had the perfect move in mind.
Kitchen
, Lucien’s penthouse
Beatriz inspected the ingredients like someone assessing a battlefield. Cans without labels, instant soups of questionable flavors, instant rice. She sighed.
—
No way you live like this… How are you going to conquer the world like this?
—she muttered, crossing her arms.
She took out her own money and went to get what she needed. When she returned, Lucien’s underlings were already looking at her as if she were plotting a coup.
Umbra, arms crossed: —What are you plotting?
Beatriz, frying milanesas with a smile:
—Me? Nothing bad… well, maybe a little favor in exchange for a decent meal.
Noctis narrowed his eyes: —What kind of favor?
Beatriz, shrugging:
—A trade. I cook you a paradise meal… you help me with a few errands.
The henchmen glanced at each other. They smelled a trap. But then she lifted the lid from the pan, and the aroma hit them.
Umbra
(eyes lighting up):
—
Is that… chicken? Breaded? Crispy?
—
Milanesa
, said Beatriz proudly.
Refried beans, fresh salad, and a secret touch.
Noctis
, suspicious: —
And what do we have to do?
—
Distract Lucien. Make sure he doesn’t see me. Raúl, send him away with any excuse. And bring me a jug of tap water and napkins. Don’t ask why.
Umbra
, resigned: —
We’re being manipulated, aren’t we?
—
Correct,
said Beatriz.
But with love.
Terrace
(miraculously clean), minutes later
Beatriz set the table like it was a five-star restaurant. She served plates of golden
milanesa
with refried beans and salad. Even napkins folded with little hand-drawn flowers. The underlings looked at her as if she’d just opened the gates of heaven.
Noctis
, sitting down: —
And this isn’t poisoned, right?
—
The only thing poisoning this place is your attitude,
Beatriz replied with a wink.
Just as forks touched plates…
Lucien appeared. Immediate silence.
—What’s going on here? —he asked in a glacial tone, arms crossed.
Umbra, mouth full: —Divine miracle, boss… real food.
Lucien shot them a death glare, then turned to Beatriz.
—
You made this?
—
Who else? You think anyone else here knows what to do with a frying pan?
Lucien walked to the table, took a fork, and tasted a bite. His frown softened by barely a millimeter. He tried to hide it.
—
Not bad…
—
‘Not bad’?
—Beatriz looked at him as if he’d just insulted her grandmother.
—
This isn’t just food. It’s history, it’s culture, it’s technique. This is
milanesa de fonda
, Lucien! Do you know how many wars have been won with a good plate of this?
The underlings nodded intensely, eating as if they were about to be interrupted.
Lucien, on the verge of a smile, watched her. Beatriz, satisfied, began to gather her things with measured elegance.
She slung her bag over her shoulder, cast one last look at everyone present, and said:
—
In my world, when a woman cooks like this, it’s not a gesture… it’s a message.
Lucien crossed his arms, not taking his eyes off her.
—
And what’s the message?
Beatriz stopped, turned, neon light outlining her silhouette:
—
That I can turn your base upside down, leave your men well-fed… and walk away before you can stop me. With style.
She took out a folded napkin and placed it on the table next to Lucien. In black ink, written with precision:
“Don’t worry, Lucien. Sometimes even the Sun needs a shadow to know it shines.”
She turned one last time, and without looking back, finished:
—
Thanks for the three days, Lucien. Now you’ll know what it’s like to miss someone.
Lucien, still holding the fork, stayed silent.
The rookies, choking but happy.
And Beatriz, like any self-respecting queen… left before they could applaud her.
As she passed by him, she stopped just for a second.
Long enough to say, with sweetness as sharp as a blade:
—
Don’t worry, Lucien. Sometimes even the Sun needs a shadow to know it shines.
And she left.
No turning back. No drama.
Leaving behind the scent of home-cooked food, the laughter of the underlings, and the memory of a woman who, without shouting, managed to set the pace.
Lucien stayed still, mouth slightly ajar, with one thought looping in his head:
And now who the hell is going to cook like that again?
From the top floor window, Lucien watched her cross the street with firm steps, without looking back.
She hadn’t taken anything from the penthouse, yet she took all the air. All the warmth. All of him.
The
milanesa
was still warm on his plate. His team was still eating downstairs, between laughter and crumbs.
And he was there… stuck in the shadow of his own reflection, feeling that the light had just walked away.
“Don’t worry, Lucien. Sometimes even the Sun needs a shadow to know it shines.”
The phrase ricocheted in his chest like a slow bullet.
He, who had always been fire, control, intensity.
Now… he felt only a new silence. An uncomfortable one.
Not because she was leaving. But because this time, he didn’t know how to make her come back.
His reflection in the glass looked younger. More human.
Maybe the curse of the guardian cat wasn’t a metaphor.
Maybe he really did need to learn to be the Sun, not a wildfire.
He sighed, narrowing his eyes as she disappeared among the buildings.
—
Damn it, Beatriz…
—
…you left me hungry.
But it wasn’t for food.
Lucien’s thoughts (voice-over, melancholic with restrained humor):
There she goes again… walking like the world owes her answers. Like she could bite fate itself if it doesn’t give them to her.
And yet, she doesn’t even look at me.
Three days locked up together, playing at nothing affecting us. Three days telling me without saying it that she doesn’t need me. But if she only knew what her sleepy “I love you, Lucien” did to me…
Damn my fire.
I promised myself I’d be the Sun for her, not a flame that would consume her. But how do you do that… when everything in me wants to burn with her?
…And now she’s heading straight into a hell I can’t even see.
Beatriz Delmar… if you’re going to face monsters alone, you’d better come back alive. Because if you don’t… I’ll burn this damn world down to find you.
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Chapter 31: The Flower That Refused to Become a Witch
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Chapter Text
The day had passed in an oddly quiet manner. Beatriz , still savoring the chaos she had sown over the past three days —ending with Lucien at the building with the military— had returned to her room to grab her things and leave the building, mentally reviewing her plan to gather more information about Khaërôn , the mysterious cosmic entity threatening to destroy this world.
She knew Khaërôn’s presence wasn’t just a decorative detail in the game’s narrative. Something didn’t add up; it was a lurking threat that shouldn’t be taken lightly. Yet so far, she hadn’t seen it anywhere.
As she walked toward the building’s outer courtyard to leave and hail a taxi, a cold breeze stopped her in her tracks. Everything around her froze, as if time itself had decided to halt. The background noises, the voices, even the flicker of the lights vanished completely.
—This can’t be good…
she murmured, feeling a shiver run down her spine.
Then she saw it.
A small white puppy emerged from the shadows, its long ears drooping softly to the sides of its head and its eyes glowing red like embers. At first glance, it seemed harmless—almost adorable. But Beatriz wasn’t stupid. Her heart skipped a beat as she recognized the figure, and more importantly, what it symbolized.
The animal tilted its head, watching her with an unsettling curiosity.
—Well, well… You’re not like the others, are you?
The voice that emanated wasn’t exactly a voice—it was a whisper resonating directly in her mind.
Beatriz felt her skin prickle. “Don’t listen. Don’t look. Don’t answer,” she repeated to herself like a mantra, quickening her pace and pretending she hadn’t noticed its presence.
—Aren’t you curious?
the creature continued, now gliding behind her without moving its paws. Its voice was oddly melodic, almost hypnotic.
—I could grant you what you desire most… Just a simple contract .
Beatriz clenched her fists, resisting the urge to turn around. “What kind of cruel game is this?” she thought. The mere mention of a contract made her shudder; stories of such entities were always the same—wishes granted in exchange for unimaginable sacrifices.
—How about a way out of this place? A way to go back home?
The creature now stood directly in front of her, blocking her path. Its inhuman smile was almost unbearable.
—Sorry, but I don’t make deals with street vendors.
Beatriz tried to walk past, but the puppy materialized again at her side, as if reality itself couldn’t contain it.
On instinct, Beatriz drew the special weapon she had acquired in this world, gripping it firmly and aiming straight at the being.
—Oh? Planning to shoot me?
it asked, clearly amused. Its red eyes seemed to glow even brighter.
—How fascinating. Go ahead, little one.
Beatriz pulled the trigger, and a puff of smoke with the word “Love” shot toward the puppy. It didn’t even flinch; it merely watched the pink cloud surround it before dissipating into the air.
—Well… That was adorable.
The creature smiled even wider—if that was possible.
—I’ll be watching you, Beatriz Delmar . Don’t forget, humans always fall into the cycle… sooner or later.
With those words, it vanished in the blink of an eye, leaving Beatriz alone in the hallway, trembling with a mix of anger and fear.
—Great… Now I’ve got my own Ku-Bey…
she muttered, trying to steady her breath.
She knew this wouldn’t be their last meeting—and worse, Khaërôn wasn’t acting alone. The story was turning darker by the second, and Beatriz would have to think fast if she wanted to survive and break the cycle these entities imposed.
Beatriz slammed her apartment door shut, leaning her back against the wood as if it could protect her from what had just happened. Her heart was racing, her breath barely under control.
—Why me?
she whispered, covering her face with her hands as she tried to calm down.
—I’m not even a teenager…
The question echoed in her mind like a sentence. She knew she wasn’t your typical magical girl—her body was in its mid-twenties , and her soul, if anyone bothered to ask, was at least thirty-five .
—This makes no sense…
she muttered, pacing the room.
—Why me? Why?
A dark thought stopped her cold. Her gaze drifted into emptiness, a shiver running down her spine.
—What if… they’re looking for the witch ?
The idea chilled her blood.
—No… it couldn’t be that.
But the other possibility was even worse.
—They want me to become one!
Beatriz clenched her fists, trembling at the thought. The logic was starting to fit in the most macabre way: the entity wanted to turn her into a witch , to use her as a weapon to fight Khaërôn , its natural opposite. But if that thing was here…
Her thoughts were interrupted by a memory: the people who had recently disappeared, the casual conversations she’d had with Miguel Angel and Emil about “missing or absent coworkers.” Her stomach sank.
—-Oh God…
she whispered, quickly unlocking her phone.
She dialed the number of one of her few reliable allies in this strange world: Samanta .
—Samanta, good evening. How are you?
she asked, forcing herself to sound casual as she sat on the edge of her bed.
Her friend’s voice came through, cheerful and carefree.
—Hey, girl. I’m good. What’s up?
—Hey…
Beatriz hesitated, trying to find the right words so she wouldn’t sound paranoid.
—This might sound strange, but… have you noticed if any coworkers have stopped showing up lately, without giving notice?
Samanta paused.
—Oh yeah, totally. But it’s only been a few—like five people. Actually, we already talked about them in the academy’s private chat. They’ve been missing work a lot lately.
Beatriz’s world seemed to freeze. Her back tensed, and a cold wave washed over her as if all warmth had drained from the room.
—Five people…
she whispered to herself as the pieces fell into place.
She knew what it meant. She’d seen it in countless stories and games: a witch was hunting humans to feed on them, growing until it became a monstrous labyrinth . And with the kind of powers the entity hunters had in this world, she was almost certain that just a few sacrifices would be enough to unleash chaos.
—Beatriz? Are you okay?
Samanta’s voice snapped her out of her grim thoughts.
Beatriz blinked, returning to the present.
—Oh, sorry. I got distracted changing clothes. What were you saying?
—I was saying the new guy seems like a dream—you know, Emil , the one who gets along with you. I was wondering if you could set me up with him.
Beatriz let out a forced laugh, trying to compose herself.
—Come on, I’m not a matchmaker!
Samanta laughed too, and Beatriz tried to relax. But while her friend kept talking, she couldn’t stop thinking about the puzzle pieces that had just clicked in her mind.
Something terribly dark was lurking in this world, and now she was sure the disappearances weren’t a coincidence. She would have to move fast if she wanted to stop it… or at least survive.
Beatriz hung up and exhaled a long, heavy sigh. The pieces fit together like a grim puzzle, but the final picture was indescribable chaos. If she didn’t act fast, this world—and its people—would be doomed.
Determined, she headed to the bathroom for a hot shower, trying to calm her mind and organize her thoughts. Steam filled the room, but it couldn’t chase away the cold lodged in her chest. When she emerged, she already knew what she had to do.
From her wardrobe, she pulled out what she called her “ceremonial outfit” : a simple white tunic symbolizing purity and humility. She wrapped her hair with a white sheet, improvising a veil, and knelt in the center of her dimly lit living room.
— System God ... —she murmured, closing her eyes tightly as she clasped her hands—. Please, listen to me. I know I haven’t reached out to you since I arrived here... But this is very urgent.
She took a deep breath, feeling her voice tremble as she went on.
—Not sure if you saw the
"Ku-bey"
. I did, and I know what it is. This doesn’t herald anything good for this beautiful world, with its fragile yet hopeful peace. That thing... That thing offers wishes to vulnerable teenage girls, but turns them into warriors doomed to fight until they themselves become the very monsters they face.
The memory of the creature made her clench her fists over her knees.
—And not only that... —her voice cracked—. It has the power to alter
reality
. My weapon... my only defense... turned into a toy the moment I aimed it at him.
Beatriz took a deep breath, trying to regain her composure.
—I suspect there’s already a girl who’s fallen into darkness. She’s already “eaten” five people, and if we let her become a
witch’s labyrinth
, she’ll drag more victims inside. If that happens, not even a magical girl could stop her; she’d just be another sacrifice.
She opened her eyes and looked toward the ceiling, as if searching for some divine sign.
—I need your help. Please, let me access the
skills
I’ve obtained from all the other games. I know it’s not something I should ask... but if I can use those skills, I could enter the labyrinth, stop the witch, and purify the
dark seed
.
Beatriz lowered her gaze, a single tear tracing her cheek.
—Please... We’re talking about hundreds of lives at stake. If there’s anything I can do, I’ll do it. Just give me the tools I need to try.
Absolute silence filled the room. For a moment, Beatriz thought her prayer hadn’t been heard. But then, a faint light appeared in the air before her, forming a bright hologram with streams of code flowing like a living river.
— Request received. Processing... —said an artificial voice, neutral yet authoritative, resonating throughout the place.
Beatriz swallowed hard, her body tense as she waited for the answer.
— Analysis of previous skills completed. Restrictions identified. —The voice paused, as if deliberating—. Special authorization granted. Partial access to user’s skills unlocked. Temporary limit applied: 48 hours.
Beatriz’s eyes lit up, her heart pounding.
—Really...?
The voice continued, sharp and serious:
—
Warning:
success not guaranteed. User must face consequences of choice. Proceed at your own risk.
A sphere of blue light descended toward Beatriz, enveloping her in a warm glow that made her ceremonial outfit flutter gently, as if underwater. She felt a torrent of knowledge and power flood into her, as though a door long sealed had been flung wide open.
The voice spoke one last time before fading:
—Good luck,
User Beatriz
.
When the light vanished, Beatriz was alone in the room. She closed her eyes, clenching her fists as renewed determination filled her.
—Alright... I’m not wasting this chance.
She stood, ready to face the darkness, no matter the cost.
Beatriz rose from the ground, the glow of the blue sphere still pulsing in her mind. She couldn’t waste a single second. If the system skills would only last 48 hours, she had to act fast and ensure she had a backup for when the time ran out.
Suddenly, Beatriz’s communicator vibrated insistently. A familiar icon blinked on her interface:
Human Resources Management System – Tactical Division
.
She clicked her tongue.
“Now they’re really going to hang me for not asking permission...”
she thought, swiping her finger to open the notification.
But what she read stopped her cold.
[
System Notification
]
Operative Beatriz Delmar.
Urban Security Report No. 72-C validated with
98.7% efficiency
.
Result:
Automatic recognition
.
Benefit:
72 hours
of additional leave for exceptional efficiency.
Activation date: Immediate.
She blinked twice. —What...?
Another message came instantly.
[System Message]
Direct Supervisor: Officer Astrae Lyris
"Good work, Beatriz. I won’t ask why you went out without authorization... but make it worth it.
PS: This time, don’t take the risk alone."
Beatriz let out an incredulous laugh. The system was spoiling her. Or someone higher up wanted to make sure she had room to maneuver.
—Perfect... —she murmured, walking again with renewed resolve—. Three days. More than enough to cause a little
functional chaos
.
Beatriz’s Critical Thinking – Decisions before the fight against the witch
Beatriz narrowed her eyes as she reviewed the witch’s energy pattern. It was unstable, vast… and unnatural. I can’t face this as just a hunter , she thought, her fingers tapping the dowsing crystal. And if I accept an external magical ability, I risk playing right into their game.
“They” , the Incubators , the Ku-bey entity , and that whole poisoned system of contracts disguised as miracles. She had seen where that led: corruption, loss of identity, and the slow death of one’s will. Beatriz would not become another pawn.
If the witch is the final boss of an emotional nightmare... What kind of enemy is she really?
The answer came with the brutal logic of her gamer experience: a colossus. Gigantic. Nearly impossible to damage by conventional means. But not invincible.
Shadow of the Colossus.
There was the key. That game had taught her that it wasn’t always about strength or spells. Sometimes it was about persistence, precision, and knowing where to strike. I don’t have to destroy her. Just purify her from the inside.
That idea gave her the tactical framework: think like a hunter, not a mage.
Now came the execution. What tools could harm something not entirely made of physical matter, but of corrupted emotions , embodied laments , and chaos ? Conventional weapons wouldn’t cut it. She didn’t want to rely on sorcery either. And then she thought of a system she had studied and fully trusted: Action Taimanin .
Weapons designed to fight demons. Artifacts already calibrated for interdimensional enemies, with one key advantage: camouflage . The system could disguise them under a neutral format, as if they were standard hunter weapons. Perfect for deceiving magical sensors or Ku-bey’s system interference.
They were technologically superior and morally safe: tools, not pacts.
That solved the weapons issue. Now for the mount.
Beatriz smiled with a hint of nostalgia. If I’m going to fight like a heroine of a Greek tragedy, I need something worthy of that role. So she turned to her strategic memory. What she needed wasn’t just raw power, but something that embodied speed , endurance , and tactical intelligence , especially to limit contact inside the witch’s labyrinth.
And so, the idea of a fusion was born.
Persona 3. A game that had taught her bonds mattered. That fusion wasn’t destruction, but synthesizing the best of each entity. With that logic, she formed her lineup:
Ixion , spirit of thunder: speed, divine charge, purity.
Robot Unicorn , symbol of technological precision and elegance.
Argo , war mare unafraid of giants.
Sleipnir , symbol of transcendence, mount of the gods.
Four distinct aspects. One soul.
And so, her combat mount was forged. Not a mere summoned creature, but an extension of her will, born from memories, strategies, and titles she had earned in other virtual worlds.
Beatriz looked toward the labyrinth’s horizon. In the distance, she felt the witch’s presence.
And she did not fear.
Because, unlike many, she wasn’t bound to the system.
She had created one of her own.
And with that, she quickened her pace. She had a clear first destination: Lucien’s workshop . As the leader of a clandestine arms empire and a key figure in the underworld, he could be her best —and perhaps only— reliable supplier. Despite their differences, there was an unbreakable bond between them, hard to define but impossible to ignore. She didn’t know exactly what she meant to him, but today... she needed him to believe in her, no questions asked. She sent a quick message saying she was heading to the base in zone N109 .
She changed quickly, opting for practical, discreet clothing. She gathered everything she needed: weapon blueprints unlocked by the system, materials she had acquired with one of Lucien’s cards (accidentally, at the start of the game when she was the original protagonist... but what a useful coincidence), and some cash from one of her in-game stashes. She didn’t plan to take advantage without offering something in return.
When she arrived at the base in Zone N109, Lucien was waiting as if he had known she’d come. Leaning against the metal frame of the mansion’s entrance, he watched her with that half-smile that barely lifted one corner of his lips.
—What do you have this time, Beatriz? —he asked in his usual tone: a mix of sarcasm, curiosity... and something else she still didn’t dare name.
Beatriz wasted no time. She entered the workshop like a silent storm, spreading the blueprints on the metal table, letting the rustle of the paper speak for itself. She pointed precisely.
—I need you to copy these
blueprints
or take pictures, whichever you prefer. But this is the priority —she pointed to a specific set—:
special ammunition
.
Elemental bullets
. These are the formulas and the possible catalysts.
Lucien flipped through one of the blueprints and frowned with interest.
—
Magic bullets
? Are you into
urban alchemy
now? Or are you just trying to ruin my reputation as a maker of real things?
—I don’t have time for jokes, Lucien —she said, keeping her voice firm—. This is serious. I’m offering you these blueprints, good pay, and exclusivity if you want it. If this works, you could revolutionize the market. And you know what that means —
power
… and
respect
.
Lucien set the blueprints on the table and looked at her intently. The fire he usually kept restrained behind his eyes burned a bit brighter.
—I already have those. But I’m intrigued… just how much are you hiding to come to me with such urgency… and offer me a fair deal —his voice dropped an octave—. What are you going to do with these bullets, Beatriz?
She held his gaze. She knew lying to him was useless, but she couldn’t tell him the whole truth. Not yet.
—I need them to protect myself —she said without blinking—. And to keep something worse from breaking loose.
There was a moment of silence. Lucien searched her for cracks, but only found steel.
Finally, he nodded, taking his time.
—Alright. I’ll start with the ammunition. But it will be experimental, so I can’t promise perfection. How many do you need?
—Enough to get out alive. Or at least to put up a fight. They need to be compatible with the
Harriet 700
, and if you can also craft me this pair of pistols —she pointed at the blueprint for the
Mariposa Cannons
from
Action Taimanin
.
Lucien smiled with that mix of arrogance and genuine concern only he could pull off.
—Then start praying I don’t get the catalyst wrong.
Beatriz exhaled something almost like a laugh. For the first time since she’d seen
Ku-Bey
, she allowed herself a brief moment of levity.
—I already did. Trust me.
With that matter set in motion, Beatriz moved on to the next phase of her plan. She returned home, opened her device, and began browsing the social media of the “Hunters” , looking for any information on the missing teammates. As she expected, gossip like this didn’t go unnoticed. She quickly got their names and, after checking their profiles, found something alarming: their addresses formed a perfect pentagram .
—This can’t be a coincidence… —she murmured, plotting the locations on a map. In the center of the pentagram was a hospital .
Beatriz’s heart stopped for a second.
—Damn! —she exclaimed, hitting the table. She didn’t want to rush in unprepared, but she knew witches mainly attacked at night. And it was already night.
With time against her, she decided to rely on her summons . She knew she could only do one of quality, and this would be her partner for the entire mission. She needed someone fast , brave , smart , and with area damage capability. After some thought, she formed a four-card combination, Persona 3 style, to create a unique fusion:
- Ixion, the thunder unicorn.
- The Robot Unicorn, a sleek and precise machine.
- Argo, the black mare trained to face colossal foes without fear.
- Sleipnir, Odin’s eight-legged horse.
The fusion was a success, though her Persona 3 money pool was almost drained. Before her stood a majestic creature: a lightning-charged steed with the intelligence of a machine, the courage of a warrior, and the speed of a storm.
—Perfect… —she murmured, softly stroking the horse’s electric mane.
Still, she needed something else to locate the witch. She remembered the
dowsing crystal
from
Lyserg Diethel
in the
Shaman King
PS2 game, a spiritual detective she had unlocked, and decided to claim that item. She decided to test it.
—Is it night? —she asked, holding the crystal—If yes, spin in circles; if no, move side to side.
The crystal spun in circles: yes. It worked.
Beatriz narrowed her eyes, recalling the witches’
energy patterns
. They were unstable, vast… and unnatural, like the proto-fields where
Wanders
were tracked and eliminated.
—I can’t face this as just a hunter, —she thought, tapping her fingers against the crystal—.
And if I accept an external magical ability, I risk walking right into their game.
They … the Incubators . Ku-bey . Contracts disguised as miracles, whispered in your ear when you were most vulnerable. She had already seen what they caused: slow corruption, loss of identity, a fall disguised as ascent.
The image came instantly: a girl with a shadowed gaze, black braids, walking alone against time itself. Homura . She had made a pact with the purest intent: to save the one she loved. And yet, she ended trapped in an endless cycle of repetition, becoming a living weapon of despair.
Beatriz looked away. That story wasn’t fiction. It was a warning.
—I’m not becoming that —she murmured to herself, barely audible.
The system knew she had the Sorceress title from Final Fantasy VIII —a vestige unlocked during a previous phase, an echo of a family pact. But invoking that power meant depending on immense… and dark magic. Magic no longer tied to will, but to intense emotions and, in her case, dangerously volatile ones. She couldn’t afford to channel that, not with the Incubators nearby. It was like opening the door and saying: come in, destroy my soul .
Besides, she knew what it was to face grotesque things without breaking. Her composure wasn’t accidental. She had forged it through encounters where death lurked between polygons and background scores: from the silent colossi of Shadow of the Colossus to the near-impossible titans of Final Fantasy VII . She had defeated Ruby , Emerald , and Ultimate Weapon before turning seventeen. She had survived COVID , mental and real lockdowns, even remembering being trapped in her dreams in endless yellow school hallways, and the pressure of a thesis with cruel examiners. Magic? No, thanks. She already knew what she could do with her own mind.
The difference between her and the system’s victims wasn’t power —it was control.
I don’t need miracles, she thought. I need precision. Strategy. And tools I can dismantle myself if things go wrong.
Thus, as her reflection flickered in the dowsing crystal, Beatriz reaffirmed her decision: she would purify the witch not with borrowed sorcery, but with weapons built on logic , with mechanics she knew , with tactics she could adjust like in any boss fight.
And if the system dared judge her for resisting, so be it.
After all, she wasn’t a heroine chosen by fate.
She was a
player
.
And players … learned to win.
Trusting the crystal to guide her, she began working on her raid gear for the labyrinth. She thought of Molotov-style bombs but with a timer, using the Legend of Mana golem parts system. She remembered having many unused pieces for the automatons’ brains, so she filled them with Aura-element pieces for purification and added an ignition component with Salamander . She called them: elemental fusion bombs .
For her
battle outfit
, she needed something designed to withstand corrupting spells… and dazzle in combat.
One of the
unlockable outfits
had appeared after completing the cycle of tragic endings: the
“Shadow Lotus Mantle”
, an event outfit. She had gotten it unintentionally, after an uncomfortably intense interaction with all the love interests from
Kamigami no Asobi
, where she triggered all the possible “bad endings.”
The system, as whimsical as ever, rewarded her as if that emotional torture had been a test passed.
—An outfit that protects you more the worse your emotional circumstances are…? —she murmured, shaking her head.
But it was beautiful. And powerful. And, for the first time, Beatriz put it on with the confidence of someone who didn’t want to be seen… but to survive.
Beatriz wore an outfit that combined the best of both worlds:
a
black form-fitting bodysuit
of ultra-resistant synthetic fibers, with
Japanese-style floral reinforcements
embroidered with spiritual thread on the shoulders, waist, and ankles. Over it, a translucent
overskirt
of enchanted petals floated with an almost liquid grace, giving the illusion of an ethereal dress without compromising mobility.
The hood remained attached, and when she pulled it up, an
optical filter
allowed her to see magic fluctuations and labyrinth patterns, similar to an
AR interface
.
By her belt, small cartridges for
elemental bombs
rested like rose petals ready to bloom. On her chest, a
lotus-shaped brooch
pulsed faintly: the outfit’s core, a gem that absorbed part of the labyrinth’s corruption to keep it from affecting her mind.
—Alright… now for the weapons —Beatriz murmured, as the system displayed a list so extensive it seemed like an insult to minimalism. It was years of gameplay, achievements unlocked, obsessive exploration, and rare events. She knew she couldn’t carry everything, so this time she didn’t seek the most efficient —but what resonated with the moment.
She placed the guiding crystal on the central table and extended her palm.
—System, deploy
safe forging protocol
. Activate
But Hammer
.
The floor responded with a barely perceptible vibration. Geometric runes lit up beneath her feet, the air crackled with lines of suspended code, and before her appeared the iconic floating workbench shaped like an organic anvil. The legendary forge hammer from Legend of Mana, heavy as the memories of another game, floated before her wrapped in a soft light.
“Welcome, bearer. The souls of steel are listening.”
A list of her weapons projected into the air, with familiar icons and floating stats. Beatriz first touched her old hunter’s short sword —always quick, reliable, but far too modest for a chaotic labyrinth. Then she selected the Kunoichi Blade , a swift dagger recovered during an infiltration event in Action Taimanin . Both weapons floated, spiraling together.
—Combine. Affinity: yes. Stability: 87%. Confirm fusion.
The But Hammer descended with ceremonial slowness. Upon touching the two weapons, a white spark exploded in the air, and Beatriz saw memory fragments from both: a somersault over a demon, a dance of quick cuts in the streets of a Neo-Tokyo under siege. The images blended into a mist, and from it emerged something new:
🔹 Spectral Blade: Kuno no Ame. Elegant. Lethal. Alive.
Passive: +10% evasion. Active: Illusory burst after 5 chained strikes. Aesthetic: satisfactory.
—Next.
She touched the anti-entity claymore , with its elegant engravings and pure white hilt. Then, she selected the Muramasa Breaker , a cursed sword she had obtained after defeating a boss she could barely look at without shuddering. The system vibrated more intensely this time.
“Warning: compatibility rate 62%. Risk of emotional instability.”
—I accept —she replied without hesitation.
The hammer descended, this time with a shockwave that made the lights flicker. Beatriz narrowed her eyes as the fusion revealed a memory: herself, alone in battle, shouting in rage at the system for killing her with an unfair bug. The sword absorbed that emotion… and as she calmed, it stabilized.
🔹 Void Murakumo floated, immense and serene, like a sleeping colossus.
Active effect: Magic break charge. Passive: absorbs restrained anger. Tip: do not argue with love interests while wielding this weapon.
A claymore reinforced with spiritual steel, able to cut both matter and spells. Especially effective against dense magical wards.
Passive: Accumulates “break charge” when blocking attacks.
Active: Releases a discharge that reduces the target’s magical defense for 10 seconds.
Beatriz chuckled softly.
She continued the process with her wand of the wandering mage , combining it with Noah Brown’s Crystal Heart . Both weapons floated, spiraling together.
—Combine. Affinity: yes. Stability: 97%. Confirm fusion.
—I accept —she said firmly, thus obtaining:
🔹 Aether Circuit Scepter, a magical staff that responded to her thoughts, fused with Noah Brown’s technology and the hunter’s staff. The result was an elegant, large scepter adorned with a central heart-shaped blue crystal and two wings. Ready to unleash fire and light with the delicacy of spring flowers.
A tactical staff that channels both magic and pure energy. Adapts to the environment and can link with system sources.
Passive: Reduces mana cost of spells by 15%.
Active: Summons a magical regeneration field for 10 seconds (limited use per battle).
One by one, the weapons took on new forms —forms that could only exist because she knew her games, their limits, and how to make them speak to one another.
When she was done, the system sent one final notification:
“Fusions complete. If you wish to reuse basic weapons, disable them from the armory, or camouflage them with their previous appearance from the menu.”
And there, in the silent room, Beatriz gazed at her new collection. She wasn’t invincible. But she was something more: ingenious. She had learned to survive with style , strategy , and affection for everything she had ever played.
Then she saw it.
A grayish, semi-transparent icon. Not entirely “legal” in the system. It was a beta-phase weapon . She remembered reading in forums that, in a scrapped build of the game, the protagonist could wield bows, but that was removed before the final patch. Yet… she had it.
—No way it’s still here…
Upon selecting it, the system hesitated. No name appeared. Just an untextured render. Beatriz smirked playfully.
—Come on, Rufus, lend me your style…
She extended her other hand and reached for one of her treasures from Valkyrie Profile : Rufus’s bow , the weapon that had allowed her to shoot at the skies as if every arrow carried a prayer. She selected it. The two weapons floated, intertwining with golden particles.
“Compatibility: experimental. Risk: low. Result: unpredictable but stable. Confirm fusion.”
The But Hammer descended with a soft, almost reverent hum. This time there was no explosion nor violent light, but a deep vibration, like the echo of a giant’s step upon sacred rock.
From the fused core emerged a majestic bow, with the curvature of a ceremonial weapon but lethal tension in its string. Part of its structure seemed carved from colossal stone, as if extracted from a being who had slept for eons. On the grip, a luminous mark: the seal of a lost Wander .
🔹 Bow of the Wandering Colossus
Forged with fragments of a fallen Wander, this bow retains the magic of Bond with the Titanic, an enchantment allowing it to affect creatures born of extreme emotions or altered dimensions —in other words: witches, greater specters, or entities born from chaos.
Passive effect: Marks and weakens vulnerable points.
Active effect: If charged with spiritual light (from Ixion or a spell), it can pierce magical defenses for brief moments.
Beatriz lifted the bow carefully, as if afraid to awaken it.
—Perfect for you, witch —she murmured—. Just so you know, I didn’t come unarmed.
The system responded with a short notification:
“Installed. Synchronized. Nice shot, player.”
And with that, Beatriz completed her arsenal. Not the strongest. Not the fastest. But undoubtedly the most dangerous: because each weapon had a story, and each story, a purpose.
—Thank you, But —she said, patting the hammer, which glowed faintly before vanishing. She dressed in her black hooded outfit, the Shadow Lotus Mantle , and headed toward the hospital —the possible epicenter of the witch’s labyrinth.
As she walked through the deserted streets, she felt a presence. She looked up and, high on a building, saw a raven with glowing red eyes. Her heart skipped a beat. She recognized that raven: it was Diaval , “Lucien’s pet.”
—Are you watching me…? —she muttered, clenching her fists, but continued on, knowing the true challenge was only beginning.
Chapter 32: The Symphony That Tried to Devour the Sky
Summary:
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Chapter Text
Beatriz reached the rooftop of the hospital, the icy wind lashing against her face as she held the dowsing crystal . Her breathing was heavy, but her mind was sharp and focused. As she made the inquiry, the crystal tightened like a compass needle, pointing toward a corner of the roof. Just as the thread seemed to "touch" the empty space, a luminous crack appeared in the air, expanding in chaotic spirals until it formed a flickering portal .
In front of the opening, Beatriz swallowed hard and closed her eyes for a moment.
“Well, first the preparations…”
Focusing, she performed Ixion’s special summoning ritual , strengthening her presence to resist the corruptive properties of the labyrinth. The figure of the electric unicorn emerged at her side, its body radiating bursts of pure energy. Beatriz reinforced both Ixion and herself with spells: “Lion’s Heart” to maintain courage, mental barriers to protect against confusion, and a physical enhancement to withstand any unexpected attack.
She reviewed her list of chosen weapons for this incursion:
🔹
Bow of the Wandering Colossus
: ideal for long-range combat and marking enemies.
🔹
Kuno no Ame short hunter’s sword
: fast, perfect for eliminating familiars or lesser foes.
🔹
Aether Circuit Scepter
: channels system spells, perfect for conjuring anything from barriers to energy bolts.
🔹
Kuno no Ame Claymore
: elegant, lethal, heavy but effective for breaking magical defenses or labyrinth structures.
🔹
Elemental fire and light bombs
: crafted items from the golem creation system.
Mounting Ixion, she gripped its crackling mane, brimming with static energy, and crossed the portal.
Inside, the labyrinth unfolded into a parade of surreal, deranged images: walls of blinking eyes that tracked her every move, melting clocks reforming endlessly, and fragments of childlike laughter echoing in the air—sweet yet unsettling. Colors vibrated and shifted with every step, as though the space itself was alive and responding to her presence.
Holding the crystal, Beatriz whispered her question, as if afraid to break the fragile tension of the place:
“Where is the witch?”
The crystal reacted instantly, spinning wildly before pointing in a single direction. Beatriz and Ixion advanced cautiously, avoiding the lesser creatures lurking in the corners: shapeless shadows with razor teeth , paper-folded children weeping black ink , and flowers with blade-like petals trying to ensnare them .
At last, they arrived at the main chamber.
The space stretched vast, like a twisted cathedral that defied all logic. Columns of melted candy rose toward a ceiling filled with dead stars , and the air carried the stench of burnt sugar. At the center floated the witch .
Her name was Euphonia , an entity born from the desire for perfection and the frustration of never reaching it . Her main form was a massive floating torso, her body made of torn and scorched musical scores drifting around her like wings. Her face resembled that of a shattered doll , cracks revealing blinding light within. Her head was crowned with a set of ticking metronomes , marking an irregular, disturbing tempo. She was an unfinished opera , doomed to repeat endlessly without conclusion or applause.
Below her floated her familiars : humanoid figures fashioned from piano keys and wires , dancing to the rhythm of an inaudible song. These creatures hurled musical notes as projectiles , each charged with chaotic energy.
Euphonia drifted in a storm of distorted laughter and a melody that sounded like a broken record, switching between harmony and dissonance. As Beatriz entered, the witch’s face turned slowly toward her, and from the cracks in her mask oozed black liquid dripping to the ground like ink, forming pools that hissed and bubbled.
Beatriz felt a chill crawl down her spine.
“This won’t be easy…” —she muttered, while Ixion neighed, ready for battle.
Beatriz unsheathed the Bow of the Wandering Colossus , one of the few items left unaltered after her encounter with Ku-bey. She fitted one of her special arrows, infused with luminous magic to serve as a marker. As she drew the string, the bow emitted a faint glow and released the arrow straight toward Euphonia. It embedded into the witch’s torso of sheet music, shining with a flash that marked her position.
Euphonia answered with a deafening shriek, her wings of scorched scores unleashing sharp notes like blades toward Beatriz. Ixion neighed and weaved swiftly, zigzagging through the barrage.
“Crystal, do your work!” —Beatriz pulled out the dowsing crystal, her voice sharp with resolve as she dodged.
“Where is her weak point?”
The crystal spun frantically before pointing to a specific spot: a glowing crack at the base of Euphonia’s torso, where the sheets of music overlapped more densely.
“There you are…” —Beatriz murmured, as Ixion charged forward with all his might.
The unicorn thundered forth with overwhelming force, his electric horn tracing spirals of lightning as he trampled the witch’s familiars like shadows scattered by a divine storm. Every hoofstep rang like a suppressed thunderclap, his artificial gaze blazing with determination: the fusion of Ixion, the lightning steed; the precision of the Robot Unicorn; the courage of Argo; and the mysticism of Sleipnir, Odin’s eight-legged horse.
Once the path was clear, Beatriz tightened her grip on her mount.
“Now, Ixion! Activate Bifröst Ascension !” —she commanded.
Bifröst Ascension was not just a technique—it was a legacy . The echo of ancient gods riding between worlds, reborn in a modern warrior.
With a thunderous cry, Ixion-Sleipnir invoked his celestial legacy: under his eight legs unfolded a prismatic path of light , a fleeting rainbow bridge like the Bifröst , weaving through the air as though stitching worlds together.
The steed soared like a thunderstorm galloping across a rainbow, each stride shattering the darkness enshrouding the labyrinth. As they ascended, the atmosphere pulsed with intertwined electricity and myth .
Wrapped in that sacred radiance, Beatriz drew her claymore, and with the final surge, she leapt from Ixion’s back like a heroine descending from the heavens.
“For everything you’ve dragged with you, Euphonia… This ends now!”
Spinning midair with video-game precision and contained fury, she descended like a lightning bolt guided by the gods, aiming directly at the witch’s exposed core to deliver the strike that would seal her fate.
And then, as though the very world scored the scene itself, the echoes of a heroic symphony rose in the air...
🎵 [High Quality] Shadow of the Colossus OST 08 - The Opened Way 🎵
The battle had begun.
—Ixion, I need a distraction!
The unicorn answered with an
electric neigh
that shook the air. From its horn, it released an
arcing discharge
, destroying several
piano familiars
and forcing
Euphonia
to spread her
sheet-music wings
as an improvised shield. The illusory sky of the labyrinth crackled with electricity.
With the claymore raised high, Beatriz executed a diagonal slash that tore through part of Euphonia’s torso and wings , unleashing a rain of burnt notes . The rift widened, visible as a throbbing wound radiating pulses of light and corruption.
But Euphonia roared, and from the center of her body surged a wave of dissonant darkness , dragging Beatriz into the air and hurling her violently against a wall of melted candy .
—Ngh…! —Beatriz spat blood, staggering, while the witch began to absorb the entire environment into her core like a black hole of despair .
—Enough… —whispered Beatriz, sheathing the claymore and unsheathing her hunter’s short sword , designed for surgical precision , anchoring herself to the ground to resist being pulled into the core.
As Euphonia flickered between form and mist, Beatriz seized the opening. From her belt she drew an elemental fusion bomb , assembled mid-battle with Aura essence —to channel spiritual purity— and Salamander essence —to trigger mystical ignition.
—Core fragmentation: confirmed —she murmured.
With steady pulse, she allowed the witch to absorb the bomb into her throbbing rift .
—Light… purify.
She activated the magical timer and cast it into the void.
The artifact detonated with a crystalline sound , like thousands of bells breaking the silence. The magical shrapnel was not physical but ethereal fragments of pure energy , burning away corruption like holy water on cursed flesh.
The explosion erupted in a burst of sacred song mixed with broken dissonances : a final symphony.
Euphonia collapsed to the ground like a puppet with cut strings . Her familiars unraveled like wet origami, but a remnant of her soul emerged in the form of a colossal shadow : a choir of open mouths in lament , beginning to consume the labyrinth toward its center.
To avoid being dragged in by Euphonia, Beatriz was forced to momentarily let go of her sword, plunging it back into the ground while releasing a sharp whistle to call for Ixion’s aid.
Then, from above, a figure descended bathed in light: a magical girl , ethereal in appearance, as if drawn from a forgotten memory. Her silhouette glowed with soft hues, outlined by a crown of floating stars .
—Did you really think you could do this alone? —she said with a melancholy smile, her flower-covered staff beginning to spin like a music box .
—I’m not alone, it seems —Beatriz replied, rising to her feet.
At her steps, the dark waves receded.
Beatriz, panting and wounded, barely held onto her sword. Her legs trembled. The burns of dark energy on her arms throbbed in pain from touching the melted candy wall. But her eyes met those of the newcomer, and something in that gaze held her up. Not hope, but empathy .
Aki stopped beside her, raised her staff toward the labyrinth’s sky, and spun it gently.
— Prayer of the Thousand Petals!
A wave of light bloomed from the tip of the staff, expanding like a visual symphony that swept across the space. The metronomes shattered . The witch’s sheet-music dissolved into ribbons of light. The dark notes were plucked one by one from her body by incorporeal petals.
And with one last flash, Euphonia was purified .
Where once hovered a witch, now only a small, black, gleaming sphere remained: the seed of chaos , pulsing like a sleeping heart. Warm… as if it breathed. As if it waited.
Aki lowered her staff, and from its flower bloomed a second wave of light, softer, more intimate. Beatriz felt her wounds close. The burn on her side faded, the mental poison of the labyrinth vanished, and her life energy was restored.
—You shouldn’t have to carry this burden —Aki whispered, taking the floating seed into her hands. Then, after a pause, she gently placed it into Beatriz’s palms.
—You have good aim… and a strong heart. The system needs you. More than you can imagine.
Beatriz looked at her, stunned, with a thousand questions hanging on her lips. But Aki only smiled sadly, like someone who knows time is not on her side.
—Sometimes purification leaves scars too. But you… can turn them into something beautiful.
She began to retreat, her figure growing more ethereal amidst a current of petals and light.
The horror faded. In its place remained only the gentle fragrance of a nameless flower. Until she spoke:
—My name is Aki.
Then, she was gone.
Only the echo of her presence remained, a flower drifting in the air…
…and the
seed of chaos
, warm in Beatriz’s hands.
But in the air, a flower lingered.
A flower that did not belong to this world.
Chapter 33: The Board Tilts
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
Beatriz arrived at the lake, choosing one of the most tranquil spots where she could perform the ritual at dawn. The Chaos Seed still emanated a faint dark glow, as if resisting. She pulled out an ancient scroll she had claimed during her last session, carefully studying the steps of the dance that would allow her to release the trapped soul. Despite the tension of the moment, she forced herself to breathe deeply and focus, drawing her staff, the "Aether Circuit Scepter" , to better channel her energy and purify the seed.
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The dance began.
Her movements were fluid, precise, as if each step carried a prayer. The seed floated in the air, surrounded by the water of the lake, which rose like threads of liquid light, enveloping it. Beatriz whispered ancient words, invoking purifying energies as the water grew radiant. Finally, the Chaos Seed shifted from its dark hue to a pure white, as though all corruption had been drained.
With a crystalline sound, the seed shattered into thousands of tiny sparkles, ascending into the sky like shooting stars.
Lucien, who had arrived shortly after, observed from the shadows. Though he didn’t fully understand what Beatriz was doing, he was utterly impressed.
—What… was that? —he asked, stepping closer as the dance ended.
Beatriz, still slightly shaken by the effort, gave him a faint smile. —I released the soul of someone who was suffering.
Before they could exchange more words, an ironic voice cut through the moment.
—What a waste… If I’d known you were going to do that, I would’ve attacked you earlier. Adults always ruining everything for kids.
A Magical Girl appeared.
From a nearby tree, a teenage girl of about fifteen jumped down, her stance relaxed yet defiant. Her hair was short, dyed in a crimson tone, and her attitude carried the weight of someone who had seen far too much for her age.
—And who are you? —Lucien asked, frowning.
The girl ignored him and turned to Beatriz with a mocking smile. — Hunters , always sticking their noses where they don’t belong.
Beatriz took a step forward, keeping her composure. —Excuse me, I haven’t introduced myself. I’m Beatriz, from the Unicorn Hunters . We hunt Wanderers . This seemed like a major anomaly. If you know something about it, I’d like to talk with you calmly. How about over a coffee?
The teenager chuckled under her breath, crossing her arms. —Coffee? What’s next? Are you gonna buy me a house? Look, lady, if we’re going to talk, you’d better be ready to pay for whatever I ask.
Lucien took a threatening step toward her, posture rigid and frown deepening. —Who do you think you are to talk to her like that?
—Lucien, enough —Beatriz said calmly, raising a hand to stop him.
She pulled a card from her pocket and handed it to the girl. —This is my contact. If you decide to talk, just send me a red diamond emoji . I may take some time to answer, but I’ll attend to your call as soon as I can.
The teenager took the card with a mocking grin. —Fine, but remember: if the restaurant sucks, I’m out.
With that, she gave a few light jumps back and vanished into the trees, leaving behind a faint echo of laughter.
Lucien was clearly upset as they made their way back home.
—How can you treat her so calmly? That brat needs to learn some respect.
Beatriz smiled faintly. —She’s just a kid. Patience can open more doors than a closed fist.
—Patience… —Lucien scoffed, crossing his arms. —If she’s like that now, imagine what she’ll do later.
Beatriz sighed. —She has a reason to act that way, and that reason might be key to what’s happening. For now, trust me.
Lucien let out a frustrated sigh as they took the turn toward Zone N109 . Beside him, Beatriz kept her eyes fixed on the horizon, as if already arranging every piece of the next move in her mind. The silence between them wasn’t uncomfortable, but heavy with unspoken thoughts.
—So, Beatriz, what was all that at the lake? That seed, the dance… What kind of magic was that? —he finally asked, his rough voice breaking the tension.
She glanced at him sideways, a spark of weariness and a half-smile on her lips. —The kind of magic I can rarely use. But if you want to really understand it… you’ll have to make me a coffee .
Lucien snorted, almost amused. —You’ve earned it.
The armored car stopped in front of the mansion. Leather and gunpowder. Cold marble and steel hidden beneath elegance. Lucien’s base of operations wasn’t just a fortress—it was a message.
Inside, the bodyguards Noctis and Umbra whispered excitedly about the unexpected visitor. Lucien ignored them with the look of someone who had no time for rumors, while Beatriz crossed the threshold as if she already knew every corner of the place.
In the office, with the door closing behind them, the light grew dim. Beatriz spread her cards with precision, as if each one carried a fragment of destiny.
Lucien watched from the shadows, his sarcastic tone quick to return.
—Was the theater really necessary?
Beatriz didn’t respond right away. She finished arranging the cards , taking her time to ensure everything was meticulously placed: the four kings facing the Joker on one side, and the other deck still closed to her left. Finally, she raised her gaze, serious.
—Listen carefully. This is not a game, Lucien. What I’m about to tell you is classified information —she said firmly, without hesitation.
He arched an eyebrow, interested but with a defiant air.
—
Classified?
Great. This is starting to sound entertaining.
Beatriz sighed, already used to his attitude.
—Have you heard of
Khaërôn
?
For the first time, Lucien’s relaxed expression tensed slightly, though he hid it almost immediately.
—Let’s just say it rings a bell.
—Then you know what the legends say," Beatriz continued, while separating the cards of the four kings and placing them before the Joker . "He’s an ancient cosmic being , a threat that appears every cycle of time. And every time he does, heroes rise to face him. They win, and he takes another cycle to regenerate his energy before returning.
Lucien leaned forward, showing genuine interest for the first time.
—Go on.
Beatriz opened the second deck, the Spanish cards, and began pulling out the jokers . Her tone grew heavier, carrying a weight Lucien couldn’t ignore.
Beatriz slid a card across the table, and it sparked with a red light.
—
Khaërôn
is awakening. But this time, he’s not alone.
She drew another card, the
Joker
, which began to break apart into black motes.
—There’s another force. Something that doesn’t respect the
board
. Something that… doesn’t even understand the rules.
Lucien watched as she placed the jokers to the left side of the table, opposite the
Joker
.
—Another cosmic threat? And what’s its trick? Does it also want to destroy the world, or is it a little more creative?
— The Incubators. My grandmother told me about them. Beings that present themselves as adorable, but they are the embodiment of a deadly deception. They approach teenage girls, usually in moments of despair, and offer to grant any wish. In exchange, they become magical girls and obtain powers.
The comment immediately silenced any attempt at mockery from Lucien. His eyes narrowed, searching for any hint of doubt or lies in Beatriz’s expression.
—" Incubators? " he repeated with disbelief.
Beatriz nodded.
—They work as a
hive mind
. They appear as small, harmless creatures—something you’d never suspect. They approach adolescents in moments of despair and promise to grant them any wish in exchange for becoming 'magical girls.
The tension in the air was palpable. Beatriz continued, knowing she had to lay it all out carefully.
—But the price is high. Once they accept, they are doomed to fight to the death against creatures called witches . Every time they defeat one, they obtain an item called a seed of chaos , which purifies the gem that allows them to transform."
Lucien, still skeptical, rested his elbows on the table, intertwining his hands in front of his face.
— And what happens if they don’t get enough 'seeds'?
Beatriz looked straight into his eyes, her voice low and grim.
—They become the very
witches
they are destined to hunt.
Lucien interrupted, unable to hold back:
—Sounds like a classic deal with the
devil
. Just with more 'glitter and sparkles.
—If only it were that simple…
Lucien listened with growing unease, especially when Beatriz mentioned Walpurgis Night , an apocalyptic event that occurs when witches reach a critical level of power.
—Let me guess. This isn’t just a local problem, is it? You’re suggesting we’re trapped between two forces that want to destroy us.
— Exactly. And to make it worse, the Hunters can’t fight these witches. Our energy doesn’t affect them. It’s a system that operates outside our known rules.
Lucien frowned as he heard Beatriz had been approached by one of the Incubators . His expression shifted when she mentioned her weapon had been turned into a toy.
— And what makes you so special to them? Why would they want to recruit you? —Lucien asked seriously.
Beatriz took a sip of coffee, weighing her words before responding.
—I think they want to use me as a piece on their
board
. Someone with my ability could face
Khaërôn
, defeat him, and then fall… giving them the energy they need to win twice.
Lucien leaned back in his chair, frowning, his eyes fixed on Beatriz. The tension in the room was palpable. Finally, in a lower tone, almost as if speaking to himself, he said:
— They’re like
parasites
… using the sacrifice of others to feed their endless war. But I still don’t understand why you accepted to go into this alone.
Beatriz shrugged, with a bitter smile.
—Because there’s no one else who can. And because… I’m not afraid to play my card.
The conversation ended with both in silence, each weighing the burden of the revelations and what it meant for their future.
Lucien let out a long sigh, leaning back again in his chair.
— Fine, let’s assume I 'believe you.' What do you expect me to do? I’m not exactly someone who gets excited about saving the world. I’ve already told you, I’m no philanthropist.
Beatriz shuffled the remaining cards with almost mechanical precision, as if the movement itself helped her organize her thoughts.
— I’m not asking you to save the world. I’m asking for your help to
balance the board.
He arched an eyebrow, clearly intrigued.
—Balance the board? That sounds ridiculously vague, even for you.
Beatriz didn’t let his sarcasm shake her. She paused a moment, choosing her words carefully.
—You know as well as I do that I’m not the only one aware of this. Other groups will appear, interested in the
magical girls
and what they represent. Some will want to control them. Others, eliminate them.
Lucien chuckled lowly, though the tension in his posture was obvious.
—Let me guess, as a
Hunter Unicorn
, you want to 'protect' them, right? How noble.
Beatriz glared at him, but her voice remained calm.
—I want to understand them.
Khaërôn
is already enough of a problem without adding more chaos to the board. These girls are trapped in a cycle they can’t escape. If we can break it, maybe we can find a solution that benefits everyone.
Lucien drummed his fingers on the table, weighing his options. Finally, he tilted his head to the side, as if something had just occurred to him.
—And what if I don’t help you?
Beatriz set the cards on the table and crossed her arms, staring directly at him.
—Then someone else will. But I don’t trust their methods to be… peaceful.
The comment hung in the air, an implicit threat that didn’t need elaboration.
Lucien chuckled under his breath, this time more relaxed.
—You know, I like how you play your cards. Literally and figuratively. Fine, I’m in… for now.
Beatriz nodded, accepting his answer without celebrating.
—Perfect. I expect you to keep your word.
At that moment, a metallic noise echoed from outside, followed by a sharp scream that seemed to come from a nearby alley. Both turned toward the window.
Lucien smiled, a gleam in his eyes mixing excitement and cynicism.
—What were you saying about not being equipped?
Beatriz sighed as she pulled a device from her wrist, deploying a holographic interface.
— Come on. I’ll explain more on the way.
Lucien rose with a fluid motion, his smile widening.
—This is going to be fun.
Chapter 34: Dance of Steel and Shadow
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
The scream from the alley echoed again, this time accompanied by a metallic tear. Beatriz wasted no time, activating her Shadow Lotus armor with a quick flick of her wrist. Her figure was enveloped in a structure of nanobots that formed a sleek yet functional suit.
Lucien, however, showed no urgency. He walked toward a corner of the room, where a pair of combat gloves rested on a workbench cluttered with metal parts and tools. The gloves were thick, with a design that blended functionality and magic. On their knuckles, arcane symbols glowed faintly in a crimson tone.
—So these gadgets work with the theory you gave me? —he asked, sliding the gloves on with precise movements.
Beatriz, still scanning the source of the noise with her interface, didn’t look away from the screen.
—I told you if you didn’t test them, I would. What better test bench than a real threat?
Lucien smiled with that signature cynical air.
—You have a peculiar way of convincing me, you know?
Suddenly, Beatriz’s device emitted a sharp beep.
—It’s a
Wanderer
. High level, but unstable.
Lucien cracked his knuckles—or rather, the metal of the gloves—while a sphere of
dark energy
began to form in his palm.
—Perfect. Let’s break something.
Beatriz opened the door and, in less than a second, they were both on the street. The alley was wrapped in shadows, but not because of the lack of light; it seemed as though darkness itself was concentrating there, taking shape. A tall, elongated, grotesque figure twisted at the center of the alley, its limbs moving unnaturally, as if blindly searching for something.
—Charge, strategist! —shouted Lucien, rushing forward without waiting for instructions.
Beatriz clicked her tongue.
—That’s why I hate working with you! —she muttered, activating the
Harrier 700
, the model of pistols Lucien had given her.
Lucien closed the distance quickly, delivering a direct punch to the Wanderer’s torso. The symbols on the gloves shone intensely, releasing a burst of dark energy that knocked the creature down but didn’t eliminate it. The impact echoed like thunder, making the alley walls vibrate.
—That’s it! Right in the center! —Lucien shouted, clearly enjoying the fight.
The Wanderer rose, more aggressive than before, lashing out its limbs like whips that Lucien barely managed to dodge. In a fluid motion, he formed another sphere of dark energy in his hand and hurled it at the monster, creating a temporary containment barrier.
—Beatriz! Finish this while I hold it down! —he exclaimed, his feet digging into the ground as the creature struggled against the barrier.
Beatriz needed no further instructions. She positioned herself behind Lucien, quickly assessing the situation. She activated the Harrier 700 , began charging energy, channeling the data she had gathered from the Wanderer.
—Step back! —she finally ordered.
Lucien moved aside at the last second, allowing Beatriz to unleash a direct shot at the creature’s core. The bullets’ energy pierced through the Wanderer like lightning, disintegrating it in a burst of darkness that dimmed the alley.
The silence that followed was deafening. Beatriz lowered her pistols, her breathing heavy but controlled. Lucien, on the other hand, let out a laugh.
—I’ve got to admit, girl, your toys are impressive.
Beatriz looked at him, somewhere between tired and exasperated.
--- They’re not toys. And you, do you always have to make everything so noisy?
Lucien shrugged, calmly removing the gloves as the runes glowed faintly.
—Subtlety isn’t my style. But don’t tell me it wasn’t fun.
She shook her head, but a small smile tugged at her lips.
—Whatever. Let’s get out of here before this attracts something worse.
As they walked away from the alley, Beatriz glanced at the gloves Lucien was wearing.
—By the way, those gloves… —she commented, raising a brow.
Lucien smirked, twisting one of them to admire the glowing runes.
—I could get used to this.
And so, the unlikely alliance between them began to take shape, a balance between raw power and calculated strategy.
The improvised armory was organized chaos. Tables filled with tools, unfolded blueprints, and metal parts gleaming under industrial lights packed the space. Beatriz and Lucien stood at a central table, reviewing a set of extended blueprints, while the constant noise of welders and hammers echoed in the background.
—See this? —Beatriz pointed excitedly at a sheet full of notes and schematic drawings. Her eyes sparkled as she explained—. If we combine nano technology with an automatic reload system , we could have a compact crossbow adaptable to any environment. Perfect for enclosed spaces or mid-range combat.
Lucien crossed his arms, nodding slowly.
—Doesn’t sound bad. Though for me, as long as I can throw a good punch and it doesn’t blow up in my face, I’m fine.
Beatriz rolled her eyes but smiled.
—Of course, because you always go straight to the problem. But if we’re going to do this right, we need to think of different scenarios.
She grabbed another blueprint and slid it in front of him, speaking faster as her excitement grew.
—Look at this:
energy ammunition
with piercing effect. We could use it for light weapons, like pistols, but also design something heavier, like a portable cannon.
Lucien looked at her with a raised eyebrow.
—A portable cannon? Do you want me to carry a tank too?
—It wouldn’t be a tank. —Beatriz shook her head, as if it were obvious—. It would be compact. Well, relatively.
One of the interns, Umbra , who was walking behind them, stopped for a moment to observe the interaction. He couldn’t help but listen.
—Did you see how “the lady boss” is getting involved here? —he murmured to the colleague on the other side of the room, pretending to work.
—I’m telling you, the boss is already half-smiling. There’s something there.
—What do you say, coffee for the next meeting?
Both chuckled quietly as they continued whispering.
Meanwhile, Beatriz kept talking, completely unaware of the comments.
—And not only that. I’ve been thinking about a combination of gear. For example, you with those reinforced
gauntlets
, and me with an adaptable
spear
. We could cover both close combat and long-range fights.
Lucien watched her, resting an elbow on the table and holding his chin with his hand.
—You make everything sound like a game.
Beatriz looked up without stopping.
—Because it is! At least for someone like me. —She leaned toward him, resting on the table—. You never played, did you? You lack that sense of
teamplay
, of
synergy
.
Lucien laughed.
—Synergy. Now you sound like an online game commercial.
She gave him a mocking look.
—Says the one who only wants to go around punching things.
Lucien picked up one of the sheets and pointed at a design.
—All right, strategist. If you put up the theory, I’ll test the weapons. But I don’t want anything exploding when I use it, understood?
—I got that clear, “steel fists.” —Beatriz smiled at him, returning to the plans with a sparkle in her eyes.
The whispers in the background grew louder.
—Did you see that? He laughed! The lady actually made him smile for real!
—Do we call her “Boss Lady” or “The Strategist”?
Without even looking their way, Lucien raised his voice.
—Don’t you all have work to do?
The interns jumped, hurrying back to their tasks. Beatriz, however, couldn’t help but laugh.
—I think you’ve got fans.
Lucien shook his head, though a small smile lingered on his lips.
—Come on, Beatriz. If this is going to be teamwork, these weapons better be as good as you say.
She extended her hand with confidence.
—Trust me, boss. I won’t let you down.
Lucien looked at her for a few seconds before taking her hand and shaking it.
—I hope so, strategist.
Beatriz was reviewing the latest blueprints quickly, almost anxiously, glancing at the holographic clock floating over her wrist. There were less than ten hours left before the “Cinderella effect” on her gear began to fade, and she was determined to make the most of every second.
Lucien, meanwhile, was sharpening a set of knives with almost obsessive precision. Despite his focus, his attention was divided between the tools and Beatriz, who wouldn’t stop talking.
—Listen, Lucien. It’s not just about the weapons themselves, but about how to optimize your workshop. —Beatriz slid a tablet in front of him, showing a three-dimensional model of a facility that looked straight out of a futuristic video game.
Lucien raised an eyebrow.
—Are you telling me how to run my business now?
—No, no. —Beatriz quickly shook her head, though her mischievous smile betrayed her—. I’m just showing you how you could turn your workshop into something truly spectacular.
The image displayed modular stations with automated tools, secure compartments for storing ammo, and a quick-assembly system for custom weapons. There was even a section dedicated to miniature field tests.
—This looks more like a movie set than a real workshop. —Lucien tilted the tablet to examine it—. Where did you get these ideas?
—I had drawn it before, and always dreamed of setting it up in a large, spacious place. —Beatriz rested both elbows on the table, smiling proudly—. This was my workshop in one of my favorite games. I designed it myself.
Lucien set the tablet down on the table and looked at her with something close to admiration.
—You’re full of surprises, aren’t you?
—And you haven’t seen anything yet. —Beatriz grabbed a stylus and began pointing at details in the model—. If we set this up here, you could assemble weapons in half the time. And this module... —She leaned a little closer—. It’s perfect for calibrating your gauntlets or anything for close combat.
Lucien glanced at her, a faint smile curving his lips.
—Do you always talk this much?
—Only when I have interesting things to say. —Beatriz smiled back before turning toward the rest of the workshop—. But speaking of interesting things, your interns need to improve their work.
Lucien chuckled low.
—They’re a separate project.
Just then, one of the interns, Noctis, who had been trying to eavesdrop discreetly, dropped a toolbox. The noise echoed through the room, and everyone turned to look.
—Sorry, boss! —he said, quickly picking up the tools while his companion tried not to laugh.
Beatriz sighed, turning her attention back to Lucien.
—Well, if this doesn’t convince you, I can always go back to my
Cinderella effect
and do it myself before time runs out.
Lucien studied her closely, leaning on the table with both hands.
—Cinderella effect?
—What you heard. —Beatriz winked—. I’ve got about ten hours before everything I’m using now disappears. If you want me to set up any of this, you’d better trust me and not ask too many questions.
Lucien shook his head but couldn’t help smiling.
—I trust you, strategist. But there’s something I want to know.
Beatriz raised an eyebrow, curious.
—What is it?
—Why don’t you seem to have a problem with me? —Lucien crossed his arms, his tone more serious—. Most Hunters look at me as if I were the enemy, but you...
Beatriz held his gaze, thoughtful for a moment.
—Because you’ve never given me reasons to hate you. —Her tone was direct but carried a hint of humor—. And honestly, I enjoy contradicting you. Especially about things like
love
.
Lucien let out a low laugh, shaking his head.
—Love? Are we experts in that now too?
Beatriz grinned widely, leaning back against the table.
—I’m just saying it would be fun to see how you handle something as complicated as that.
Lucien tilted his head, a challenging glint in his eyes.
—You’ll have to try harder if you want to catch me in that, strategist.
Beatriz laughed before pointing back at the model on the tablet.
—We’ll see, “steel fists.” For now, let’s get back to the workshop. Time’s ticking, and this place needs a makeover.
As they kept working on the details, the whispers of the interns intensified in the background, with secret bets on whether Beatriz would end up staying longer than she had promised.
The installation confirmation appeared with a discreet ping on the tablet. The workshop vibrated with a deep, heavy hum, like the echo of a ceremonial engine roaring back to life after years of silence.
And then, they arrived.
Three armored trucks stopped in front of the building with surgical precision. The
Taimanin Project
logo barely gleamed under the stealth paint of the vehicles: more of a warning for those who knew how to look. From within descended figures clad in high-grade tactical suits. They weren’t entirely human. Movements too precise, proportions slightly inhuman… as if the system had pulled from elite-class
NPC models
, reserved only for special events.
Lucien straightened, one brow arched. He didn’t bother to hide his surprise.
Beatriz, on the other hand, merely crossed her arms with a satisfied look, as if she’d been expecting this all day.
—What did you do exactly? —he asked, watching as one of the trucks deployed a floating platform loaded with industrial modules for weapon assembly and calibration. Each piece looked designed for a war that hadn’t happened yet.
—I used my favor points . —Beatriz’s smile was anything but innocent—. Many favors, in many corners of this city. Technically, this is a “temporary strategic enhancement facility.”
—And what happens if I sign as guardian of the workshop? —Lucien asked, already anticipating the trap.
—Then the system registers it as a safe zone validated by contract and makes the installation permanent. —She shrugged, as if she hadn’t just described a legal exploit—. It also unlocks access to extended development upgrades. Nothing dramatic.
Lucien eyed her sideways, evaluating. Not just for the cleverness, but for the calm way she laid it all out.
—That sounds like a trap.
Beatriz smiled as if he’d just offered her flowers.
—No. That’s called
strategy
.
The armory began assembling itself, guided by the system’s drones. Floating stations positioned themselves with millimetric precision: one dedicated to magical fusions, another to long-range weapon calibration, a third resembling a sealed spiritual forge. Each module connected seamlessly to the house’s power grid and mana matrix with a polished hum.
A softly lit walkway connected everything like a miniature hangar.
The interns stood at the doorway, jaws slack, too intimidated to step inside.
—Are they... upgrading the workshop? —one whispered.
—No, kid. They’re installing a damn
base of operations
. —muttered the other, already pulling out his phone to snap a picture before it vanished.
Lucien approached the holographic interface floating above the central core. The options were impressive: quick assembly, damage simulator, spell analysis, advanced customization… even a field test option with controlled AI.
—And if I sign here… —Lucien muttered, reading the digital contract hovering before him.
—You get everything. And you give me access whenever I drop by. —Beatriz shrugged like she wasn’t asking for much.
Lucien sighed. —You’re only doing this so you can use my resources without having to ask.
—Yes. But also because I trust you’ll know how to use them better than anyone when I’m not around. —Beatriz looked at him with unexpected sincerity—. You’re strong, Lucien. But if you want to protect what matters, you’re going to need more than strength. You’ll need a system backing you up.
Silence lingered for a moment.
Lucien signed.
The system flashed with an intense green light and issued a notification:
Module Installation: COMPLETED. Advanced Development Lab Unlocked.
Operator Permission: Lucien.
Auxiliary Strategist Access: Beatriz.
And like a post-credits scene from some special game, a neutral system voice added:
"Welcome to the Taimanin Arsenal."
Beatriz exhaled in satisfaction. —I knew it would sound good.
Lucien smiled, crossing his arms as he took in his newly improvised headquarters. —Now it really looks like you’re planning to stay longer than you promised.
—Maybe. —Beatriz turned halfway with a mysterious look—. Or maybe I just wanted to leave my mark.
And as the holographic interface projected the workshop’s new logo onto the wall —a stylized
lotus
wrapped in lines of data—, both of them knew that what they had just installed wasn’t just technology.
It was a declaration of
war
... and of
trust
.
Chapter 35: Love Also Sharpens
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Thanks so much for the amazing support! We’ve just hit 500+ reads in English! 💖 I’m thrilled to see the story connect with so many of you.
🎯 Next goal: let’s also reach 500 reads in Latin American Spanish!
When the Spanish version gets there, I’ll release the new arc—with more twists, deeper drama, and game-changing choices. Are you ready?
☕ Want to support my work?
You can do so here (always appreciated, never required):
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Thanks for being part of this journey! 💫
Notes:
📢 Important Notice to My Readers
First of all, thank you so much! 🙏 My fanfiction has already surpassed 500 reads in its English version, which makes me incredibly happy. 💖 I truly appreciate all your support, your comments, and for joining me on this journey.
However, I want to remind you of something I mentioned before: it’s very important to me that you also support the original version in Latin American Spanish. That’s the foundation of the entire project, and I need both versions to grow together.
Right now, the Spanish version has around 440 reads. My goal is for it to reach 500 reads, the same as the English one. Until that milestone is reached, I won’t begin publishing the next work: the story where Beatriz finally enters the world of Love and Deepspace at 100%, with plot twists and much more complex storylines than what you are reading now.
So, if you’re enjoying the English version and want to keep reading more, please also support the Spanish version: read it, share it, and recommend it. 🌟 Every bit of support helps tremendously!
(See the end of the chapter for more notes.)
Chapter Text
Beatriz glanced at her holographic watch again. Time kept moving forward, but she had achieved what seemed impossible: the armory was updated. Not 100%, but enough for Lucien and his team to notice the difference.
—There you have it, "steel fists." —Beatriz brushed her hair off her forehead with a triumphant gesture—. Tell me I’m not efficient.
Lucien observed the workshop with his arms crossed, pretending to wear a serious expression. The workstations gleamed with renewed energy; the tools were organized, and the weapon assembly looked faster than ever.
—It’s decent. —Lucien finally spoke, though his playful tone betrayed his approval.
—Decent. —Beatriz rolled her eyes, leaning against the table—. I admit I expected more from your ability to express gratitude, but fine.
Lucien smirked, stepping a little closer. —Alright. It’s impressive .
Before Beatriz could respond, a golden flash appeared before her. Her holographic watch projected a message she hadn’t expected:
[ System : Congratulations! You’ve used your "Cinderella Effect" for a noble purpose. We recognize your effort. Embracing love is always rewarded! You’ve unlocked the Titles with Skills system, plus other claimable items. Explore it to obtain unique benefits!]
Beatriz blinked, incredulous. —Embracing love? —she muttered, trying to hide the faint blush that appeared on her face.
—What did you say? —Lucien asked, raising an eyebrow.
—Nothing. —Beatriz waved a hand dismissively. But Lucien’s mischievous smile gave her no escape.
—Sure. Nothing important. —Lucien crossed his arms again, clearly enjoying the moment.
Before Beatriz could retort, a familiar voice echoed in her mind. It was Ixion .
"Beatriz, I need to talk to you."
The voice carried a solemn tone, something completely opposite to his usual combative energy. Beatriz closed her eyes, focusing on the mental link.
"What is it, Ixion? Everything okay?"
"I want to ask your permission to stay with you."
Beatriz’s eyes flew open. Ixion’s voice continued:
"You were kind to me. You protected me when you didn’t have to. Now I know my place is by your side. Besides, I have something to offer you."
Beatriz closed her eyes again, resuming the mental channel.
"What is it?"
"I can strengthen your abilities before entering the Witch’s Labyrinth. With my energy, you’ll become faster, stronger, and your senses will sharpen. I just need your approval."
Beatriz smiled softly. "Does that mean you’ll see me as your master or something like that?"
"No. More like your ally."
Beatriz nodded, more to herself than to Ixion. "Fine. But if you betray me, I’ll make sure you regret it."
"Deal."
At that moment, Lucien leaned closer, breaking the connection. —Are you okay? You seem… too quiet to be yourself.
Beatriz returned to the present, meeting his gaze.
—Yeah, yeah. All good. —She tried to sound casual, though Ixion’s voice still echoed in her mind.
Lucien studied her for a moment before speaking, with a mix of curiosity and amusement. —You know, I’m not used to Hunters being so… multifaceted .
—And I’m not used to "gun-running gangsters" being so useful. —Beatriz shot back with a raised eyebrow.
Lucien let out a low chuckle, shaking his head. —I suppose that makes us a good match.
Beatriz rolled her eyes, but couldn’t help smiling as she gathered the remaining tools.
In the background, the whispers of the apprentices grew louder.
—I swear, did you see the way he smiled at her? —one whispered.
—It’s because he’s plotting something. —the other replied—. Or maybe it’s love.
—What are you talking about? He’s the boss!
Beatriz looked up at them, amused.
—Hey, kids. If you’ve got something to say, say it out loud.
The apprentices ( Noctis and Umbra ) froze, and Lucien let out another laugh.
—You’re a show, Beatriz.
—And you, "steel fists," are a decent audience. —Beatriz tossed a screwdriver, which he caught effortlessly.
Despite everything, something inside Beatriz was beginning to change. It wasn’t just the improved armory or the new title system. It was something more. Something that made her look at Lucien with different eyes.
—"Embracing love," huh? —she thought to herself, letting a faint smile slip.
Beatriz let out a long sigh as she leaned against the armory wall. She had been going at full speed for two days straight, between updates, schematics, and adjustments. Even though her energy seemed inexhaustible thanks to her Cinderella Effect , she knew she needed to recharge before facing the next challenge.
—Lucien. —Her tone was direct, but not harsh.
Lucien, who was reviewing some papers with the schematics she had designed, looked up.
—What? Already tired of being efficient?
Beatriz rolled her eyes, ignoring the tease. —I’m going to need to stay here tonight.
Lucien set the papers down on the table, crossing his arms with a slow smile Beatriz knew all too well.
—Seriously? The great Beatriz, from the Unicorn Hunters , asking to stay at a gangster’s house?
—Oh, please, it’s not the first time. —Beatriz rolled her eyes again—. I just need a place to sleep. I’ve got three days off total since I left your place, and I don’t want to waste one going back and forth.
Lucien chuckled under his breath. —Alright, miss workaholic. You can use the guest room.
—Thanks. —Beatriz started walking toward the armory exit, but something in Lucien’s look stopped her.
—Although… —Lucien paused, savoring the moment—. I think I have something you could wear to sleep.
Beatriz raised a brow, feigning confusion. —Something I could wear?
Lucien leaned slightly toward her, with that smile that always seemed like a mix of challenge and mockery. —A while ago I had a special set made for someone important. You know, something comfortable and… fitting for a night here.
Beatriz looked at him, trying not to laugh. “I knew you’d pull something like this, Lucien. Thanks for the spoilers, game universe.”
With feigned sweetness, Beatriz smiled, hiding her true intention. —How thoughtful of you —she said—, but don’t worry, I brought my own set. Her thought added a malicious note to her words.
Without giving him a chance to reply, Beatriz vanished down the hall, entering the guest room, where the set lay inside a box on the bed.
Inside the room, Beatriz opened her holographic watch.
—Alright, system, time to impress. —She navigated through her “rewards” and accessed her collection of digital outfits. There was one category that never failed: “Cute and casual fashion designs.”
With a few taps, she selected pajamas that radiated both shine and style, but also projected innocence: a white set with pastel star prints and a soft lace trim. Nothing over the top, but enough to surprise.
—Perfect. —She smiled, pleased with herself, and let the system’s magic do the rest.
The next day, Lucien came down to the dining room early, expecting to see Beatriz wearing the set he had commissioned: a mix of red silk and carefully designed details meant to leave a strong impression.
But when Beatriz appeared, his expression was priceless.
Lucien blinked several times, unable to believe what he was seeing. Beatriz wore her pastel star pajamas, her hair adorably messy, and a calm smile on her face.
—Good morning. —Beatriz gave him an innocent look as she sat down—. How did you sleep?
Lucien opened his mouth, but no words came out at first. Finally, he managed:
—What… what are you wearing?
—This? —Beatriz pretended to glance at her pajamas curiously—. Oh, just something comfy I had stored. Why do you ask?
Lucien stayed quiet for a moment, then crossed his arms, pretending to be annoyed. —It’s not what I expected, that’s all.
—Oh, were you expecting something else? —Beatriz tilted her head, savoring every second.
Lucien sighed, surrendering. —You’re impossible.
—Thanks. —Beatriz grabbed a cup of coffee prepared by one of the interns ( Umbra ), and added with sarcastic sweetness—: Always a pleasure to disappoint a gangster.
The whispers of the interns ( Noctis and Umbra ) filled the air again, but this time Beatriz was too busy enjoying her little victory.
Lucien, for his part, couldn’t help but smile. Even if he wouldn’t admit it, Beatriz was a box of surprises he enjoyed opening more and more.
The hours passed quickly, filled with jokes, system updates, and a strange yet comforting shared silence. By the time Beatriz realized it, the world had already resumed its relentless march.
The clattering of the train kept marking time like a broken clock.
Beatriz closed her eyes. She didn’t want to see more empty stations pass by.
That’s when, among the metallic sound of the tracks, a murmur leaked through the old speaker of the carriage. Barely a whisper… a male voice that seemed to sing from another life:
🎵
Love and Deepspace × Mozart, l'opéra rock | Version 2.0 Theme Song Released
🎵
«Mais c’est le prix à payer... Quand on aime...»
A shiver ran down her spine. Not from fear.
But because she understood. Because she accepted it.
To love well, to love truly…
That was the price.
And she had already decided to pay it.
The stations passed one after another, and her mind remained trapped in memories and reflections.
“What are mom and dad doing now? And my brothers? Are they okay? Do they miss me like I miss them?”
A sigh escaped her lips. Beatriz knew there was no point clinging to questions she couldn’t answer, but her heart didn’t understand reason.
Her thoughts returned to the magical girls . There was something in them that resonated deeply in her soul. She saw them fighting, resisting, even when everything was against them. “I know what it’s like to stand at the edge of the abyss. I know what it’s like to be pushed and feel like there’s no way out. But I also know you can survive. You can climb back up, even if it’s crawling.”
Beatriz closed her eyes for a moment, trying to calm the storm of emotions. “Maybe I can’t fix everything, but I can show them there’s something beyond the pain. I can help them find those moments of happiness, even if they’re small.”
When she opened her eyes, the station near her home was already in sight. She stood, grabbed her bag, and got off the train.
The sun was already beginning to set when Beatriz reached the apartment complex. She was about to go up the stairs when she heard a familiar voice behind her.
—Beatriz!
He turned and saw Emil approaching with a radiant smile. He carried a shopping bag in one hand and a book in the other.
—Hello, Emil. —Beatriz returned the smile, a little surprised.
—How was your day? —he asked, stopping by her side.
—Intense, as always. —Beatriz shrugged. —And you? Shopping?
—A little. —Emil lifted the bag. —Basic groceries. You know, the glamour of living alone.
Beatriz let out a small laugh. —Heading upstairs?
—Yes, you too?
—Yes, but… isn’t your apartment in the other building?
Emil shrugged. —I thought I’d walk you first.
Beatriz looked at him, noticing the calm and warmth in his eyes. It was hard not to feel at ease around him, as if all the weight of her day began to fade away.
—Alright. Let’s go.
They went up together, and as they walked through the hallways, Emil started talking about his day—simple but charming anecdotes that made Beatriz forget her worries for a moment.
When they reached her apartment door, Emil stopped, wearing his usual smile.
—Well, this is where I leave you.
Beatriz looked at him, feeling an odd comfort in his presence.
—Thanks for walking me.
—Always. —Emil tilted his head slightly with an elegant gesture.
Before he could leave, Beatriz felt an impulse.
—Hey, Emil.
—Yes?
—Do you want to come in for a drink? I don’t have much, but I could improvise some tea.
Emil seemed surprised by the invitation, but nodded. —Sure, I’d love to.
As Beatriz opened the door, she couldn’t help but think how strange and wonderful her life had been lately. But for now, she decided to enjoy that small moment of normalcy.
Beatriz closed the door behind Emil and invited him to sit in the “small” but cozy space she called home. While he set the shopping bag by the table, Beatriz headed to the kitchen to prepare something.
—Green tea, black, or fruit? —she asked, looking through the boxes of tea she had collected.
—Fruit sounds good. —Emil settled onto the sofa, curiously observing the place. It was modest, but filled with details that reflected Beatriz’s personality: stacked books, small shining ornaments, and even a couple of collectible figures on the shelf.
Beatriz returned with two steaming mugs and sat in a chair across from him, crossing her legs.
—I wasn’t expecting company today, but it’s a nice change of pace. —Beatriz offered him a cup.
Emil smiled as he took his. —I’m glad I’m not a bother. Though… I don’t know if calling me company is entirely accurate.
Beatriz raised an eyebrow, pretending not to understand. —What do you mean by that?
Emil sipped his tea, his expression more serious than before. —You know why I’m here, don’t you?
Beatriz held Emil’s gaze. Of course she knew. “Game spoilers. The whole cliché of reincarnations and intertwined destinies.” But she couldn’t just say that.
—You have an air… of a protector, Emil. —Beatriz chose not to reveal too much. —But I’m not the person you think I am.
Emil looked at her, as if evaluating every word she said. There was something in his gaze that wasn’t of this world, something ancient and almost painful.
—You’re not… entirely —he admitted, with a faint, melancholic smile. —But there’s something in you that reminds me of someone. Her light, her strength, her sacrifice.
Beatriz knew exactly who he meant: the princess Emil had failed to protect, the one who had given her life to save their world. But she wasn’t that princess. She was just Beatriz, a young woman trying to find her place in a chaotic world.
—Emil… —Beatriz began, trying to find the right words. —I’m not a reincarnation or a savior. I’m just me.
He shook his head gently. —That’s what makes you special. You don’t have to be her. You’re you, and that’s enough.
Beatriz felt a knot in her stomach. She knew Emil was speaking from a genuine place, but she also knew she couldn’t let herself get carried away. There were too many secrets at play, too many risks.
—Let’s leave tragic destinies for another time. —Beatriz decided to break the tension with a smile. —Now, are you going to tell me why you were hanging around near my building?
Emil let out a small laugh, relaxing a little. —Just coincidence. But if you want, I can invent an elaborate excuse.
Beatriz rolled her eyes, but couldn’t help smiling. —This time, I’ll believe you.
Notes:
📢 Important Notice to My Readers
First of all, thank you so much! 🙏 My fanfiction has already surpassed 500 reads in its English version, which makes me incredibly happy. 💖 I truly appreciate all your support, your comments, and for joining me on this journey.
However, I want to remind you of something I mentioned before: it’s very important to me that you also support the original version in Latin American Spanish. That’s the foundation of the entire project, and I need both versions to grow together.
Right now, the Spanish version has around 440 reads. My goal is for it to reach 500 reads, the same as the English one. Until that milestone is reached, I won’t begin publishing the next work: the story where Beatriz finally enters the world of Love and Deepspace at 100%, with plot twists and much more complex storylines than what you are reading now.
So, if you’re enjoying the English version and want to keep reading more, please also support the Spanish version: read it, share it, and recommend it. 🌟 Every bit of support helps tremendously!
Chapter 36: The Reluctant Hero
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Thanks so much for the amazing support! We’ve just hit 500+ reads in English! 💖 I’m thrilled to see the story connect with so many of you.
🎯 Next goal: let’s also reach 500 reads in Latin American Spanish!
When the Spanish version gets there, I’ll release the new arc—with more twists, deeper drama, and game-changing choices. Are you ready?
☕ Want to support my work?
You can do so here (always appreciated, never required):
👉 https://buymeacoffee.com/beatrizdelmar
📚 Prefer to read in Latin American Spanish? Help boost it here:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
Thanks for being part of this journey! 💫
Notes:
📢 Important Notice to My Readers
First of all, thank you so much! 🙏 My fanfiction has already surpassed 500 reads in its English version, which makes me incredibly happy. 💖 I truly appreciate all your support, your comments, and for joining me on this journey.
However, I want to remind you of something I mentioned before: it’s very important to me that you also support the original version in Latin American Spanish. That’s the foundation of the entire project, and I need both versions to grow together.
Right now, the Spanish version has around 440 reads. My goal is for it to reach 500 reads, the same as the English one. Until that milestone is reached, I won’t begin publishing the next work: the story where Beatriz finally enters the world of Love and Deepspace at 100%, with plot twists and much more complex storylines than what you are reading now.
So, if you’re enjoying the English version and want to keep reading more, please also support the Spanish version: read it, share it, and recommend it. 🌟 Every bit of support helps tremendously!
Chapter Text
The next day, Beatriz decided to accompany Emil to work. He didn’t seem too surprised by the offer, although there was something in his smile that told her he expected nothing less from her.
—Are you sure you want to see what I do? —asked Emil as they walked together toward his destination. —It’s not exactly exciting.
—The exciting part isn’t the job, it’s the details. —Beatriz glanced at him from the side. —And I’m curious to see how you handle everything.
The place where Emil worked was a mix between a research laboratory and a training center . There was a constant energy in the air, as if everyone there was preparing for something big.
Beatriz couldn’t help but notice how the others looked at Emil: with respect, even admiration. It was obvious he wasn’t just an ordinary employee.
—What exactly do you do here? —Beatriz asked as she followed him through the hallways.
Emil smiled. —I’m something like a strategy consultant .
Beatriz understood the subtext immediately. Emil’s abilities with
light
weren’t just some supernatural power; they were a valuable tool for those working with him.
As Emil showed Beatriz around, his words always seemed to carry a double meaning.
—Sometimes I feel like I’m here to fix mistakes from the past. To protect those I couldn’t save before.
Beatriz looked at him, knowing exactly what he meant. “The quantum leap, his search for redemption… it all made sense. But that doesn’t mean his fate has to repeat itself here.”
—You’re doing well, Emil. —Beatriz spoke with sincerity. —No matter what you lost before, now you have a chance to protect the people of this world.
Emil looked at her, surprised by the depth of her words. There was something about Beatriz that made him feel… at home.
The tour of Emil’s facilities continued. Although he tried to appear professional, Beatriz couldn’t help but think that Emil reminded her of a puppy trying to act like a wolf . His protective and determined attitude was adorable, but it also made him stand out as someone carrying too much weight on his shoulders.
“Definitely the ideal little brother,” Beatriz thought as she watched him coordinate a team preparing a combat simulation .
—So, what do you think? —Emil asked, turning to her after giving a few instructions.
Beatriz leaned against a table, crossing her arms. —It’s impressive. Although… it reminds me of something I saw in an old science fiction series. Does Quantum Leap ring a bell?
Emil tilted his head, intrigued. —Quantum Leap? What’s that?
—A classic gem. —Beatriz smiled, enjoying the chance to talk about something she loved. —It’s about a scientist named Sam Beckett who travels through time to correct mistakes in history. Each time he leaps, he occupies someone else’s body and can’t return home until he fulfills his mission.
Emil looked at her curiously, as if trying to picture it. —And it reminds you of me?
Beatriz nodded with a mischievous smile. —A little. But without the weird body-jumping, of course. Though you do have that same energy of “fixing the world, one step at a time.”
Emil seemed to consider her words, and for a moment, his expression softened. —I suppose that’s not too far from the truth.
Beatriz watched him refocus on his team. “He’s so transparent in his emotions,” she thought. “Like a blank page not yet ruined by life. Even though he carries a heavy burden, he still has hope.”
Later, Emil led Beatriz to a room where they stored the records of their simulations. The place was full of holographic screens and devices emitting a soft hum.
—This is where we analyze the simulations to improve our strategies —Emil explained. —This is the core of everything we do.
Beatriz looked around, impressed. Although she was used to advanced technology, there was something about Emil’s dedication that made everything feel more meaningful.
—Emil, do you ever get tired of all this? —she asked, leaning against a console.
He looked at her, surprised by the question. —Tired?
—Yeah, of being… well, so perfect. —Beatriz smiled to soften the comment. —Always striving to protect others, carrying expectations, even the ones that don’t belong to you.
Emil lowered his gaze, thoughtful. —Sometimes. But I can’t ignore what I feel I have to do.
Beatriz felt a knot in her chest. She knew Emil was serious, and that sincerity reminded her of how she felt when she was younger, trying to please everyone around her.
—Just remember, Emil —she said softly, leaning a little closer to him. —You don’t need to save the whole world to be important. Sometimes, just being yourself is enough.
As Emil refocused on his work, Beatriz took a moment to observe him from a corner of the room. There was something comforting in his presence, something that made her feel there was hope in the world.
“He reminds me of how I saw my brothers when they were little,” she thought with a melancholic smile. “Each one so different, but each so important in their own way.”
She remembered her brothers: the eldest, Reyearth , who seemed like a mad scientist on the verge of a lab accident turning him evil, but with a touch of humor that made it impossible to take him too seriously at times; then the middle one, Frateley , always protective and positive, like Tanjiro Kamado ; and finally, her youngest brother, Escat , with his toughness and unyielding logic, but with a heart he only revealed in unexpected moments. “Sometimes I feel like they pushed me toward the abyss, but they were also the ones who helped me climb out.”
She looked at Emil again. “Maybe that’s why I want to take care of him, even if he doesn’t see it that way.”
—Are you okay? —asked Emil, noticing her gaze.
Beatriz smiled, shaking her head. —Yeah, just thinking. Hey, do they have coffee around here? Because this technology is amazing, but I need fuel to keep up.
Emil laughed, relaxing a bit. —I’ll take you to the cafeteria.
After the break, while Emil reviewed some data projected on a hologram in front of them, Beatriz rested her chin on the palm of her hand, seemingly attentive. But in reality, her mind was far away.
“Five teammates missing… and here I am, playing the
undercover agent
instead of giving the report,” she thought, with a mix of guilt and resignation. “But if I say it, it’ll be like pulling the pin on a grenade: questions will come, suspicions… and then bureaucratic hell. No, thanks.”
She shifted her gaze toward Emil, still absorbed in the charts. “Better to focus my energy on this
shiny pup with a savior complex
.”
An unexpected memory flickered in her mind like a flash of light: an old conversation, a distant laugh, a familiar scent. Something warm, intimate, that didn’t quite belong to this world… nor to this body.
A smile slipped out without permission.
—Is something wrong? —asked Emil, not fully looking away from the hologram.
—Huh? No, nothing. —Beatriz waved her hand with theatrical disdain. —I was just thinking about my… about the people I grew up with.
Emil tilted his head, curious. —Do you have siblings?
Beatriz hesitated for a second, just enough to disguise the truth with a half-smile.
—Let’s say I grew up surrounded by unique characters. One could write you a thesis on how to build a bomb out of a toaster if he had the right materials, another swore the world could be saved with pure
love
, and there was one who seemed like a soap opera villain with a heart of gold. —She sighed. —Chaotic, but endearing.
—That sounds… intense —Emil commented, amused.
—It was. —Beatriz propped her chin on her hand again. —But I guess that’s why none of this surprises me too much. After surviving that
zoo
, this place is a theme park.
Emil let out a discreet laugh. —Maybe I’d like to meet them someday.
—Trust me, you’re not ready for that —she said, half-joking, half-warning.
When Emil returned to his work, Beatriz seized the moment to dive back into her spiral of thoughts. The missing ones, the enforced silence, the secrets that weighed like armor.
“It’s not that I don’t care,” she told herself, almost as if trying to convince someone else. “But there are truths you can’t release without everything collapsing. And I didn’t come here to destroy from within… not yet.”
The screen before her showed a new weapon prototype. Reflexively, she thought of
Lucien
. “He handles the fire. I… make sure the world doesn’t burn.”
Then, in a mental echo, she recalled that phrase that always made her smile, taken from an old video game almost no one knew:
“We know how this story ends, but it’s still worth enjoying the chaos along the way.”
—Are you sure you’re okay? —insisted Emil, glancing at her.
Beatriz smiled, tension-free. —I was just thinking that if I don’t make it back in time, someone’s going to throw my lack of productivity in my face. But meh… I’m used to it.
Emil nodded, half-confused, half-fascinated. Beatriz seemed to live in several planes at once.
And he, unknowingly, was barely scratching the surface.
The rest of the day went by without incident. Emil submerged himself in his simulations again, while Beatriz watched him in silence, like someone contemplating a distant
star
without daring to name it.
When the lights of the center began to dim, signaling the end of the shift, they both left the building together. The outside breeze greeted them with unexpected freshness, as if
Rametal
itself breathed a sigh of relief after a long day.
The sky of Rametal was a mosaic of vibrant colors at sunset, a mix of golden and reddish tones that reflected the sun’s light. Emil and Beatriz walked together toward the housing complex where they both lived. Although Emil held a couple of folders with work information, his attention was completely on her.
—Thanks for coming today —said Emil with a warm smile. —It’s always easier to work when there’s someone to talk to.
Beatriz looked down, kicking a small stone as she walked. —It was nothing, really. Sometimes, being with someone who doesn’t ask too many questions is… relaxing.
Emil blinked, surprised. —You mean me?
—Yes, you. —Beatriz gave a half-smile. —Don’t get me wrong, you’re curious, but you’re not invasive. It’s a rare skill.
Emil laughed, scratching his neck. —I’ll take that as a compliment, I guess.
They crossed the central park of the complex, where some families strolled and children played under the automatic lights that were beginning to turn on. Beatriz observed the surroundings with a mix of nostalgia and melancholy.
“It’s different, but at the same time it feels familiar,” she thought. “Like it could be any neighborhood on Earth , but with an alien touch.”
—Do you feel good here? —Emil asked suddenly, interrupting her thoughts.
Beatriz looked at him with curiosity. —What do you mean?
—On this planet, Rametal. —Emil made a broad gesture, pointing at the sky and the buildings around them. —I don’t know, sometimes I wonder if… if you feel at home here.
Beatriz let out a soft laugh, more ironic than amused. —Let’s just say it’s not the first place where I don’t quite fit in, but at the same time… it’s similar enough that I can get used to it.
Emil nodded slowly, not knowing exactly how to respond. The conversation fell into a comfortable silence as they continued walking.
Arrival Home
When they reached Emil’s building, he stopped at the entrance and turned to Beatriz. —Do you want me to walk you to your building?
Beatriz shook her head, raising a hand. —No need, Emil. I’m just a couple of minutes away.
—Well, if you need anything, you know where I am. —Emil smiled, taking a step toward his building’s door. But before going in, he turned once more. —By the way, Beatriz…
—Yes?
—I’m glad you’re here. —His tone was sincere, almost vulnerable. —This planet needs people like you.
Beatriz blinked, surprised by the seriousness in his voice. Then, she smiled softly. —And this planet needs people like you, Emil.
He nodded, slightly blushing, before disappearing into his building. Beatriz continued her way, reflecting on what he had said.
“Do I fit in here? Probably not,” she thought as she reached her own building. “But that doesn’t mean I can’t leave something good behind.”
She climbed the stairs, letting her mind wander to the parallels between her world and Rametal. As she opened the door to her apartment, a phrase crossed her mind:
“No matter where you are; the fight to survive and find purpose is always the same.”
She closed the door behind her and let out a long sigh. For now, the only thing she could do was keep moving forward.
The Next Day: The Clinic
The medical building of the city of
Luminaria
had a futuristic design, with wide windows and curved structures that gleamed under the rays of the sun.
Beatriz had decided to stop by the clinic where
Dr. Kael Alistair
worked —one of the most respected doctors in the city—, this time not with homemade remedies, but with an invitation.
While she waited for him to finish reviewing some reports on his tablet, her gaze drifted toward a shelf in the office. There, carefully placed among other personal objects, was the small glass jar shaped like a
star
. It still contained some of the honey pearls with
propolis
she had given him days earlier.
“He’s still keeping it…” she thought, surprised. She didn’t know if it was out of courtesy, habit, or something deeper.
—Alistair —she called, using his last name as she usually did when she wanted to catch his attention…
He looked up, and a gentle smile appeared on his face. —Beatriz, what brings you here so early?
She pointed at the small glass jar shaped like a star. —I brought you more of these. —she had brought another batch of honey pearls with propolis— I know they’re not going to miraculously cure you, but at least they won’t leave you voiceless after everything you talk about in a day.
Kael took the pearls carefully, as if they were something precious. —Thank you. You know I don’t believe much in home remedies, but… I admit these have been a relief.
—I know —Beatriz replied with a mocking smile—, but I wasn’t going to let you suffer unnecessarily.
Kael shook his head, amused. —You’re too considerate, you know? Not many would bother.
Beatriz shrugged. —Maybe I’m too Earthly in that sense.
While Kael put the batch of pearls into the pocket of his coat, a colleague called him for a quick consultation. Before leaving, he turned to Beatriz. —Wait here. I won’t be long.
Beatriz nodded and settled into one of the chairs in the nearby break room. From there she could watch how Kael interacted with his patients and colleagues. There was something almost hypnotic in the way he worked: every movement was precise, every word was filled with compassion and determination.
“He’s like a knight from another time,” she thought, remembering Shaka of Virgo , but without his distant air. “He has something… pure, when it’s him.”
Kael returned a few minutes later, a bit more relaxed. —Thanks for waiting.
—No problem. It’s always interesting to see you in action.
Kael leaned against the doorframe, crossing his arms. —By the way, I have something for you.
Beatriz raised an eyebrow, intrigued. —Oh, really?
Kael pulled a small envelope from his pocket. —It’s the invitation to the medical gala event this week. I mentioned it earlier. No pressure, of course, but it would be nice to see you there.
Beatriz took the envelope, feeling a mix of surprise and curiosity. —Thank you, Kael. I’ll attend.
He nodded, satisfied, before saying goodbye to continue his rounds. As Beatriz left the clinic, she couldn’t help but reflect on what had just happened. Kael had a way of making her feel valued, but he also made her aware that there were things she couldn’t fully reciprocate.
“It’s so easy to see him as a saint , but he’s human too. That makes him admirable, but also… complicated.”
Chapter 37: The Workshop, the Gala, and the Hunt
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
Miguel Ángel’s Workshop (City of Luminaria, midday)
Miguel Ángel’s workshop was hidden in one of the quietest alleys of Luminaria’s artistic district, where the buildings looked like living museums. The sun streamed through the dusty windows, illuminating marble statues, unfinished canvases, and mannequins draped with scraps of fabric that swayed with the rhythm of the wind.
Beatriz rang the gatebell softly, but she didn’t have to wait long: Miguel Ángel had already seen her arriving from the upper window. He hurried down the stairs, wearing an apron stained with paint and charcoal.
—Miss Bodyguard! —he exclaimed with his usual smile, though his eyes, a dreamy violet-tinted sky blue, couldn’t hide a trace of sadness.
—Hello, Miguel —Beatriz greeted with a serene smile—. I came for the dress. And the materials… You know, before the gala starts.
He nodded silently, walking toward a box neatly arranged with rolls of fabric, a sketchbook, and a satin cover where the nearly finished dress rested: an ethereal princess-cut design with subtle transparencies, with constellation-inspired details on top. It was clear he had poured his soul into every stitch.
—It’s almost ready, but… I know you’ll finish it. No one else understands this fabric like you do —Miguel said as he ran his fingers reverently over the seam.
Beatriz watched him with a bit of nostalgia. Despite his youth, Miguel had a rare, delicate, and genuine sensitivity. But she also noticed that look that longed for something more… something she honestly couldn’t reciprocate.
—Miguel —she said softly, taking his arm so he would look her in the eyes—, I know this might not be what you expected. But that doesn’t change what we are, nor what I see in you: an extraordinary artist, and someone whom… it’s an honor for me to protect.
He lowered his gaze, and though he said nothing at first, he then let out a short, somewhat melancholic laugh.
—I know, Miss Bodyguard. It’ll only hurt a little. But it makes me happy to know that you’ll wear this… you.
Beatriz nodded. —And I’ll always come back. Not as a muse, but as an ally. Does that sound fair?
Miguel Ángel smiled sincerely this time. —Sounds perfect.
She took the box with her things, gave him a light hug that he respectfully returned, and left the workshop carrying the dress carefully in her arms.
Back at her apartment, Beatriz set the box on the table. The sunset painted the walls in orange tones, and the atmosphere was calm… until the doorbell rang.
—A package? —she murmured, opening the door.
It was a medium-sized box, with the logo of Luminaria’s delivery company. She opened it curiously, and her eyes lit up: a small sewing machine, portable, with metallic pink finishes.
—The one I ordered… but I didn’t think it would arrive today.
At that moment, the interface of her Isekai system unfolded before her, floating in the air like a soft hologram:
⚙️ Synchronization detected!
🪄 Object recognized: Sewing machine (handcrafted version)
✨ Compatible item located: “Magic Sewing Machine – Magic Eva ver. 3.5”
🔧 Do you wish to fuse both objects to anchor permanent skill: “Oneiric Atelier”?
✏️ Unlocked capacity: Design magical outfits with a single sketch, as long as the materials are available in your inventory.
Beatriz blinked. Then she smiled.
—So now I can create my own magical wardrobe just by imagining it? Well… that’s certainly useful for galas —she joked, while accepting the fusion.
The machine emitted a faint glow and transformed: it was still portable, but now it had floating details, colored crystals on the speed dial, and the Pisces lotus symbol engraved on the side.
Beatriz ran her hand over it, as if caressing a sacred artifact.
—Thank you, Miguel —she murmured with a smile—. Thank you, new world.
And she began to prepare the dress to finish it with her final touch, while a shower of musical notes floated from the interface, as if her system were celebrating this new evolution.
The Medical Gala: A Night of Recognition
The medical gala took place in the imposing crystal auditorium of Rametal, a building that seemed to defy gravity with its ultramodern design. Lights shone from within, casting iridescent reflections that illuminated the city. Beatriz arrived punctually, wearing the dress she had crafted with her own hands. It was an elegant design, a simple princess cut but with unique details on the sleeves and waist, giving it a sophisticated air without the need for excessive embellishments.
“It may not be haute couture, but at least I feel like myself,” she thought as she entered the auditorium.
The guests wore impressive suits and dresses, but what truly caught Beatriz’s attention were the conversations. Doctors, scientists, and researchers spoke about technological breakthroughs and revolutionary treatments. Every word seemed pulled from the documentaries she used to watch as a child.
Among the crowd, she spotted Kael. He was impeccable, in a black suit with a dark green tie that highlighted his eyes. When he saw her, he smiled and approached.
—Beatriz, you look incredible. That dress… did you make it yourself?
She nodded, slightly blushing. —Yes. I didn’t find anything that convinced me, so I improvised.
—It’s a great job. It has something… unique, like you —Kael said sincerely.
Before she could respond, an organizer interrupted them. —Dr. Kael, we’re waiting for you for the award announcement.
Kael gave Beatriz a quick glance. —You’d better take a seat. This won’t take long.
Beatriz went to one of the tables while Kael stepped onto the stage. The ceremony began with an introduction about the latest achievements in the field of medicine, and soon it was Kael’s turn.
—The next awardee is a doctor whose dedication and exceptional skills have saved countless lives. This year, Dr. Alistair Kael led an unprecedented surgery involving the simultaneous transplantation of organs into three patients, setting a new standard in multidisciplinary medicine.
The applause was thunderous as Kael walked onto the stage to receive his award. Beatriz watched him with a mix of admiration and pride. “It’s like watching one of those heroes I used to admire in series. But he’s real, and he’s here.”
When Kael began to speak, his voice rang firm and calm. —This recognition isn’t just for me, but for my entire team. Medicine is never an individual effort, and I’m grateful to have colleagues who share the same passion for saving lives.
The humility in his words made Beatriz admire him even more. Although she knew how hard his work was, Kael didn’t let ego cloud his purpose.
After the ceremony, Kael rejoined her at the table. —What did you think?
—You’re a mythical doctor, Kael, but with a better attitude —she joked, though she meant it.
Kael chuckled softly. —I just hope I don’t have to face cases as extreme as the medical articles before the Chronofit. But thank you. That means a lot coming from you.
They spent the rest of the night chatting, while Kael explained details of the medical techniques used in the surgery that had earned him the award. Though to many those topics would be tedious, Beatriz was fascinated. For her, everything Kael did was a reminder of human capacity to surpass limits.
When the night came to an end, Kael offered to walk her back home. As they walked through the illuminated streets, Beatriz reflected on how much she respected Kael, not only as a doctor, but as a person. “He’s someone special, but I don’t think I see him the way he might want. He’s like a beacon, someone who inspires… but I can’t offer him the same.”
Kael, for his part, seemed relaxed as they walked. Although he didn’t say much, from time to time he glanced at Beatriz, as if trying to understand something he still couldn’t put into words.
When they reached her building, Kael gave her one last smile. —Thank you for coming tonight. It was good to have someone to share this with.
—Thank you for inviting me. It was… inspiring —she replied sincerely.
Kael nodded, and before leaving, he placed a small box in her hands. —It’s a thank-you for the “pearls.” I hope you like it.
Beatriz watched him walk away before opening the box. Inside was a star-shaped brooch, simple but beautiful, with a message engraved on the back: “For the one who brings light even to the hardest days.”
She smiled to herself, carefully putting the brooch away. “Sweet, with a bitter touch,” she thought, remembering the words Kael once used to describe the honey pearls.
Kael nodded, and before leaving, he placed a small box in her hands.
—It’s a thank-you for the “pearls.” I hope you like it.
Beatriz watched him walk away before opening the box. Inside was a star-shaped brooch peeking through the dawn, simple but beautiful, with a message engraved on the back:
“For the one who brings light even to the hardest days.”
She smiled to herself, carefully putting the brooch away. “Sweet, with a bitter touch,” she thought, remembering the words Kael once used to describe the honey pearls.
However, as she held it, she felt a faint tingling in her fingers, like a gentle, tempered current. Barely perceptible. An almost invisible glimmer crossed the surface of the brooch, as if an inner spark had ignited for a second.
Beatriz frowned, puzzled. She turned it in her hands, inspecting it, but found nothing unusual. “A trick of the light?”
In the distance, the crow on the power pole tilted its head slightly. As if someone else—something else—was watching through those eyes.
And in a faraway corner, where the city lights didn’t reach, a second Kael, the one who never speaks but sees everything, opened his eyes.
“I already know,” he thought. “That’s not her.”
But even so, he had given her the brooch. A reminder. A marker. An anchor for what was to come.
Beatriz climbed the steps of her building while looking at the star-shaped brooch Kael had given her. It was simple, but there was something deeply special about it. She held it between her fingers, feeling the smooth texture of the metal and the engraving on the back.
“For the one who brings light even to the hardest days.”
She couldn’t help but smile. The message felt ironic and comforting at the same time. “Me, bring light to anything? Kael, if you only knew my daily life is controlled chaos…” she thought. But the genuine gesture touched her.
She sat on her bed, still dressed in her gala attire. She turned the brooch in her hands, remembering how her past experiences had shaped her relationship with valuable objects.
The image of her cousin returning home with a cut on her neck after having her gold chain snatched flashed through her mind like lightning. That helplessness, the fear in her cousin’s eyes, and the awkward silence of her family after the incident had been enough for Beatriz to decide never to wear expensive jewelry again. “It’s not about the money,” she thought. “It’s about the vulnerability you feel when something is taken from you that way.”
Kael’s brooch, on the other hand, wasn’t ostentatious. It wouldn’t draw anyone’s attention on the street, but for her, it was perfect. “A detail that doesn’t pretend to be more than it is,” she thought, feeling a warmth in her chest she hadn’t expected.
“Lucien should learn from this,” she thought, letting out a brief laugh. She remembered Lucien’s gifts, always expensive and flashy. Though she appreciated them, she couldn’t help but feel that each one carried an implicit message, as if he were trying to impose a constant presence in her life. And she, somehow, always found a way to counter him, refusing to wear his gifts or finding creative ways to prevent them from becoming an obligation.
—Looks like this time, Kael beat you without even trying, Lucien —she said softly, as if Lucien himself could hear her.
She stood up to place the brooch in her small treasure box, where she kept objects that truly meant something to her. As she did, she felt a shiver run down her spine, as if something or someone was watching her.
She turned toward the window and pulled the curtains aside slightly. There, atop a power pole, was Lucien’s crow, “Diaval.” Its eyes gleamed with unsettling intensity under the dim glow of the streetlight.
Beatriz frowned. —Lucien? What are you up to now? —she murmured, aware that this crow never appeared without reason.
The bird remained motionless, staring at her, as if trying to convey a message she couldn’t decipher. Beatriz sighed, closing the curtains firmly.
—Well, if you have something to say, you could come yourself instead of sending your feathered spy —she said, more to herself than to Lucien.
She sat back down, this time pulling out a notebook to scribble loose thoughts. As she wrote, she couldn’t help but think about how Lucien always seemed to be watching her, even in her most intimate moments. And though that sometimes irritated her, she knew part of her felt strangely safe knowing someone was watching from the shadows.
“Kael with his star and Lucien with his crow,” she reflected. “One illuminates, the other darkens… and I’m trapped in the middle.”
She gripped the pencil tighter, letting out a deep sigh. Her life would never be simple, but at least that night she had something sweet to treasure: a star-shaped brooch that, somehow, reminded her that even on the darkest days, she could still shine.
An Owl in the Hunt
Beatriz closed the curtains, but the weight of the crow’s gaze still lingered on her. The silence in the room grew denser, as if something or someone had entered uninvited.
—I knew you wouldn’t just keep watching, Lucien —she said quietly, setting the pencil down on the table.
A shiver ran down her spine. She turned slowly, and there, in the dimness of the room, Lucien was leaning against the wall, a shadow with eyes that glowed like embers. His posture was relaxed, but his presence filled the space with a mixture of challenge and curiosity.
—The hunt is a sport that tests your strategies, Beatriz —he began, his voice low and melodious, as if every word were designed to envelop her. He walked toward her with slow, steady steps, the echo of his boots resonating on the floor. —Those who are more patient and have a stronger desire to win will emerge victorious.
Beatriz stared at him without retreating. —And what does that have to do with me? —she asked, crossing her arms.
Lucien smiled, a slight, dangerous curve on his lips. —But with you… heh, hunting is a game, a match in every sense of the word. You storm into my world carelessly and claim my territory as your own… You’re not like any prey I’ve ever known.
Beatriz raised an eyebrow. —Prey? Lucien, if I’m anything, it’s an uncomfortable guest in your game.
—Or maybe you’re better than the average hunter? —he continued, ignoring her comment. He leaned forward slightly, as if studying her. —You used yourself as bait to ruin my plans. You even forced me to do things I never would have done otherwise.
—And does that bother you? —Beatriz asked, a touch of mockery in her tone.
Lucien straightened, a spark of dark humor in his eyes. —Am I admitting defeat? What did I say that gave you that impression?
Beatriz tilted her head, her eyes shining with a mix of defiance and amusement. —I don’t know, but you’ve got something in your eyes that says: “she’s beating me.”
Lucien let out a short laugh, a sound that seemed as rare as it was genuine. —Be patient, darling. This is only the beginning of our hunt. Time will tell who will come out victorious.
Beatriz crossed her arms, her words calm but loaded with meaning. —Did the crow become more like a dove? Or did a peaceful dove transform into a bird of prey?
Lucien stayed silent for a moment, his gaze darkening, as if weighing his response.
Beatriz continued before he could speak. —Oh, I was a bird you didn’t know. Like a barn owl… so common in old churches, but forgotten in a modern world.
The light of her desk lamp barely illuminated her face, and her voice dropped a little, soft but firm:
—And yet, we live. We survive. We adapt. Even if ignorant people believe we are witches, the truth is we are an important part of life.
Lucien watched her with something that might have been respect, or perhaps a new spark of interest. He took a step back, as if to make it clear he didn’t intend to stay any longer.
—An owl, you say… —he murmured, tilting his head as though evaluating her. Then, with a crooked smile that promised nothing, he added: —I’ll have to read more about them.
Without waiting for a response, Lucien disappeared into the shadows of the room, with his signature power of black and red particles, as if he had never been there at all. Beatriz exhaled, closing her eyes for a moment before returning to the notebook on her desk.
“Let him keep reading,” she thought with a slight smile. “This is only just beginning.”
Chapter 38: Beatriz’s Inner Game
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Notes:
(See the end of the chapter for notes.)
Chapter Text
Beatriz dropped into the chair in front of her desk, crossing her legs as she watched the dancing shadows on the curtains. She let out a long sigh, letting her head fall back as she stared at the ceiling.
“I don’t hate him,” she thought calmly. “I never hated him… but God, how he used to drive me crazy when I played with him in the game.”
She covered her mouth with her hand, trying to stifle a laugh that escaped anyway. It was a light sound, sincere, almost childlike, that echoed in the empty room.
—It’s so much fun to disarm him, —she said to herself between laughs. —Before, I was the one exasperated by his romantic gestures toward the original protagonist. And now… now I’m the one making him nervous.
The irony of the situation never stopped fascinating her. In the game, she had chosen Lucien because she didn’t want to be a “Flower Gatherer,” as she used to call it. It had never seemed fair to her to make all the love interests hopeful, even if the game was designed that way. It was strange to live it now in the flesh, and stranger still to feel the same security and power with Lucien in this world that she had felt in the battles of the game.
Even so, it was different. Very different.
—Lucien makes me feel powerful, yes. But… it’s another kind of power. Strategy, control, knowing I can come out victorious with a well-executed plan. It’s like being in a match, a battle I can win… but with Hades…
Her thought stopped cold.
Hades. Remembering Hades from the game Kaginami no Asobi always caused a pang in her chest, a mix of longing and something harder to describe. It was that serenity, that steady, strong melancholy, like a refuge she had been searching for without knowing it—something she had never found in the real world.
—Maybe because it came too late, —she thought, sighing. —Maybe because I’m 35 and time doesn’t stop, even if everyone thinks I’m 19 or 22. Not leaving the house for years, not using makeup until 30… maybe that helped. But even with so much stress, I don’t know how I still look like this.
Beatriz chuckled under her breath, this time with a hint of bitterness. —Or maybe I’m just a paradox, just like here.
Lucien had given her a lot in the game. That feeling of invincibility, of defeating level 60 enemies while only being level 30, with pure strategy and boosters. But she also knew the real reason for his devotion in the game was the “witch’s soul” that dwelled within the original protagonist. That was his goal, his reason for being there.
And now, here he was. Real, tangible, with the same gestures and calculated words, but with a glimmer in his eyes that made him even more complex and human. Beatriz knew she could “play the game” with him, but something inside her wouldn’t allow it.
“I can’t hurt him. I can’t hurt any of them.”
It was a promise she had made to herself since this strange adventure began. In the real world, she had never thought it fair to play with the hearts of such good men. And now, here, in this world that felt so real, that same rule applied more strongly than ever.
She stood up, looking at her reflection in the window. Her expression was calm, but her eyes were full of determination.
—Maybe I’m not the original protagonist, —she murmured, tucking her hair behind her ear. —But I’m me. And that will be enough.
She closed the curtains with a firm movement, letting the darkness envelop her. This world might be a game, but it wasn’t a game for her.
Here it wasn’t about winning or losing. It was about being the best version of herself, and that, she knew, was the greatest challenge of all.
Beatriz watched him from the threshold of the workshop, unnoticed. Miguel Ángel was focused on his work, surrounded by half-finished sculptures, paint-stained canvases, and tools scattered everywhere. The warm light of the hanging lamps lit up his face, highlighting the small beads of sweat that gleamed on his forehead.
It was controlled chaos. And Beatriz was fascinated.
With every movement, Miguel Ángel seemed to have a clear purpose, even though everything around him looked disordered. His hands, firm and steady, shaped a figure of melted glass, the heat of his powers making the material glow as if it were alive.
“It’s impressive,” Beatriz thought. “Not just what he does, but how he does it. With passion, with care… with love for what he creates.”
Without realizing it, she let out a sigh. Miguel Ángel looked up when he heard her and smiled, that carefree smile that always managed to calm her.
—Have you been standing there long? —he asked, setting aside the figure he was working on.
—Long enough to notice you haven’t eaten in hours —she replied, holding a tray of food she had prepared.
Miguel Ángel laughed, scratching the back of his neck with slight embarrassment.
—You know how we artists are. When you’re inspired, everything else takes second place.
Beatriz shook her head, stepping into the workshop and placing the tray on a clean table.
—That’s why I’m here, to make sure you don’t starve yourself while creating your masterpieces.
He looked at her with a mix of gratitude and amusement.
—Always so caring, huh?
—It’s my nature —Beatriz answered as she sat on a nearby stool, watching him return to his work.
As he shaped with fire and precision, she couldn’t help but lose herself in thought.
There was something about Miguel Ángel that made her feel… at peace. He was a breath, a pause from the constant chaos that usually surrounded her. Maybe it was his warm energy, his way of seeing the world through his art, or the way he gave himself completely to what he loved.
He was so different from his younger brother, with whom he shared the same birthday. Where the brother was cold, pragmatic, and straightforward, Miguel Ángel was all passion and warmth, a contrast Beatriz found refreshing.
And yet, his presence brought back memories. Painful memories.
Her first attempt at becoming a professional artist had been a failure. Not for lack of talent, but because of the shadows of bullying that had followed her even into university. She remembered the looks, the whispers, the mockery. And then there were the professors, some of whom had crossed lines they never should have crossed.
She endured as much as she could, until she simply couldn’t anymore. Her father, a man of the Leo sign and born in the Year of the Dragon, always protective, had helped her disappear from that environment, organizing an event that made it clear no one should come looking for her.
“I thought the worst had passed,” she reflected. “But then she came.”
The “famous visual artist” who had promised to take her under her wing ended up exploiting her, using her for her own benefit, and although Beatriz reported her to the authorities, she couldn’t recover her money after a legal battle. It had been a dark time, but also a time that had made her stronger.
“In the end, I found my place,” she thought, remembering the faces of her students. Teaching had filled a void that nothing else ever could. Even if her diploma didn’t say “Visual Artist,” but rather “Teacher in the Arts,” she knew she was one, and that was enough for her.
—What are you thinking about? —asked Miguel Ángel, pulling her out of her thoughts.
Beatriz blinked, realizing she had been staring at him.
—About how you remind me of some people. But more talented, of course.
Miguel Ángel laughed, letting the glass cool.
—Is that a compliment or a critique?
—A compliment, definitely. Especially if I keep taking care of you like this, along with all your creative chaos.
—Well, I’m not complaining. If it means you’ll keep cooking for me, I’m willing to be your guinea pig.
Beatriz smiled, feeling a warmth she didn’t often experience. It wasn’t romantic love—she knew that. It was something deeper, something purer.
It was the kind of connection that didn’t need labels, one that simply existed and felt right.
While Miguel Ángel went back to his work, Beatriz stood up, picking up the empty dishes. Before leaving the workshop, she stopped for a moment at the door, looking at her friend.
“Maybe I was never the artist I dreamed of being,” she thought. “But that doesn’t mean I can’t recognize and support talent when I see it. And Miguel Ángel… he is a work of art himself.”
With one last smile, she left, letting him lose himself again in his world of fire and creation.
Beatriz returned home after her visit to Miguel Ángel’s workshop, feeling unusually light. There was something in the warmth of the atmosphere, in the organized chaos of the artist, that had filled her with a peculiar energy. Inspired, she decided to take out her sketchbook.
“If Lucien has calculated moves, why not hit back?” she thought mischievously as she settled at her desk.
She picked up her pencil and began sketching quick, confident lines. As the design of the ring took shape on the page, she laughed to herself, almost like a child plotting mischief.
“Lucien never misses an opportunity to be theatrical. I’m sure at some point he’ll invite me to an underground boxing tournament. He’ll win, of course… he always wins,” she murmured while outlining a design of an elegant feather wrapping around a finger. “And afterward, he’ll make that obvious move of offering me the champion’s ring, ‘accidentally’ on the ring finger of my left hand.”
She paused for a moment, biting her lip as she pictured the scene she could already imagine clearly.
“But why let him have the last word? Imagine his face if I gave him a ring too. Ah, that would be priceless!”
Beatriz couldn’t stop smiling as she sketched the second design: a rope formed by three loops, intertwined in an elegant frame. “This symbolizes our relationship. Him, me, and the Agape love that binds us… though I doubt Lucien even knows what that means.”
Finally, she began working on a third design: the head of a dragon coiled around the finger, its jaws forming the setting for a small gem. It was powerful, bold, and far too revealing. She stopped halfway through, laughing to herself.
“Maybe this is over the top… but it would have its charm. Though I’d probably save it for another occasion.”
She finished the three designs and leaned back in her chair, contemplating them.
“Well, protagonist, if I ever end up leaving, at least you’ll know you had a unique bond with Lucien,” she thought with a trace of melancholy, closing the notebook with a sigh.
Tired, she got ready to rest. As she turned off the lights, she murmured her usual mantra:
—I don’t want to hurt anyone. But if I leave, or if I stay… I want to leave a mark on this world.
She lay down on her bed, and within minutes she began to fall asleep.
That was when the system activated.
A faint, barely perceptible light filled the room. A monotone, emotionless voice resonated in the air:
—“Love-Meter System activated. Calculating the type of love with each romantic interest. Adjusting to the player’s needs…”
The system’s screen unfolded before her, floating in the air with a warm glow. Beatriz, deeply asleep, didn’t notice anything.
—“Filial love detected. Agape love detected. Eros love in process of shifting to Agape. Preparing new adjustments for visualization.”
The system began projecting holograms of each of Beatriz’s interests, highlighting the dynamics of their relationships.
With Miguel Ángel, the system displayed a palette of warm colors, with golden brushstrokes symbolizing the bond of mutual respect and creative support.
With Lucien, a line of fire pierced through a golden circle, symbolizing the intensity of their connection and how it was evolving into something deeper, more symbolic.
Finally, the system projected a message:
—“Update complete. New interaction routes unlocked. Player priority: emotional balance and authentic connection.”
The voice faded, and the system’s light shut off, leaving the room in complete darkness.
Beatriz, unaware of it all, murmured something in her sleep. A faint smile appeared on her face as she sank deeper into rest.
Somewhere in her subconscious, the spark of an idea began to germinate—an idea that would change the way she perceived her relationships and her purpose in this world.
Notes:
🌸 Author’s Note – About the Term “Flower Gatherer” 🌸
In this fanfiction, the term "flower gatherer" is a metaphorical expression inspired by the Spanish word "picaflor" 🐦. It refers to a girl who flits from one romantic interest to another 💕, charming and flirting freely ✨, without fully realizing (or perhaps caring about) the emotional impact she might leave behind 💭.
Much like someone gathering flowers in a field 🌼—attracted to each one’s beauty and novelty 🌷—she moves on lightly, without settling or committing 🦋.
The term is not meant to imply physical relationships with every character 🚫🍑, but rather a pattern of light-hearted 💌, perhaps careless, romantic attention 🌙.
Chapter 39: Between Planes and Unspoken Promises
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
Beatriz returned to the archives with an air of apparent normalcy, though her mind kept circling around one thing: the ring.
During breaks, she would pull out the notebook where she had sketched the three designs and kept staring at her favorite: the triple cord intertwined with a frame on the sides. There was something powerful about that symbol, something that went beyond aesthetics.
“It’s a message. One that not just anyone would understand… but that he, if he is who I think he is, should catch.”
The triple cord represented more than a romantic bond. It was her, him, and something else: a tacit commitment to what they were building, even if neither of them had put it into words yet.
And yet…
“What does he really feel for me? And why hasn’t he said it?”
She knew that part of her decision was influenced by the “spoilers” from the game system, but the deeper part of herself wasn’t looking for an advantage: she was looking for clarity.
Later, Beatriz went to Lucien’s workshop at the end of the day, under the excuse of checking the progress on her custom orders. As always, the place smelled of hot metal, welding, and residual energy smoke. Several holograms floated with blueprints of weapons and moving prototypes.
Lucien saw her enter from behind a floating console, showing no surprise. His expression was the same as always: controlled, cold, but with a spark that was hard to ignore.
—Well, an unexpected visit —he said without fully looking at her—. Here to inspect or interrogate?
Beatriz raised an eyebrow, in her best diplomatic mode.
—Can’t I do both?
—Depends —he replied, finally looking up to meet her gaze—. What are you after this time, Beatriz?
There was tension beneath his words, as if he suspected something was slipping past him. And he was right.
Beatriz tilted her head and took a step further into the workshop.
—I just want to make sure my “Butterfly Cannons” don’t go flying off too soon. You know, I’m a little picky with the details.
Lucien barely smiled.
—Everything’s under control. As always.
—That’s what you say —she replied, and although her voice was light, her eyes were studying him—. But you seem more distracted than usual.
Lucien crossed his arms, adopting a more casual posture, though his eyes never left hers.
—And you don’t? You’ve been working late for days. You don’t show anyone your notes. And you smile as if you’re hiding a missile under your skirt.
She held back a laugh.
—And if I were?
—Then I suppose sooner or later you’ll want to test it. On me.
Beatriz stepped closer, not answering right away, letting the silence play to her advantage. The game had begun: a tug-of-war in which neither wanted to admit how much they knew or suspected.
Lucien handed her a small device from a nearby table.
—It’s an upgraded version of your watch-armor. You know, for when you decide to run headfirst into chaos. Again.
She took the device with a smile.
—You’re charming when you assume I’m impulsive.
—I don’t assume. I know.
Beatriz turned as if to leave, but stopped with one last comment, delivered with surgical precision:
—You also seem to be preparing something. I guess I’m not the only one with secret plans.
Lucien narrowed his eyes. He didn’t answer right away.
—Maybe you’ll know… when you’re ready to play for real.
She didn’t turn back. She just lifted a hand in farewell, leaving him with the doubt.
Back at her worktable, her heart still beating faster than usual, Beatriz opened the “Titles and Skills” system. Her mind tried to focus on something other than that conversation, but Lucien was firmly rooted in her head.
There were many points accumulated. She opened the tabs for upgrades, equipment, even environment design. All useful… all practical.
She scrolled past, not noticing that lower down there was a small, almost imperceptible tab:
[Bonds / Emotional Relationship]
[Love-Meter]
She didn’t open it. Maybe by accident. Or maybe because part of her didn’t want to know just yet.
—This will be useful at some point —she murmured, closing the system.
She returned home, and before sleeping, she looked at her sketch of the ring again. She brushed it with the tip of her fingers. She didn’t yet know what form all this would take, or whether he would be able to understand what that symbol represented.
But she knew she was ready to move forward.
When she closed her eyes, a neutral robotic voice murmured in her mind:
—Points accumulated: 50. System adjusted.
Relationship progress: 75% completed.
Beatriz didn’t understand what it meant.
But she dreamed of intertwined threads.
And of someone who, someday, would see her heart… without her having to say a single word.
Beatriz returned to Lucien’s workshop with a prepared excuse: she wanted to check a software update on her watch-armor, but deep down she had a much more personal goal in mind. While Lucien was busy adjusting some prototypes, she watched his hands, large and marked by work.
“Well, I can’t order a ring without knowing the exact size, can I?”
When Lucien finished what he was doing and turned toward her, Beatriz feigned a casual air.
—Lucien, have you noticed that our hands are completely different?
He arched an eyebrow, confused.
—Different? Of course, yours are small and delicate, while mine are… functional.
Beatriz rolled her eyes and extended her hand toward him.
—No, not just that. Look. Put your hand next to mine.
Lucien, without thinking too much, obeyed. He placed his hand next to hers, and Beatriz seized the moment to compare the proportions.
—Well… —she said with a mischievous smile—. Funny how they kind of fit in a way.
Lucien looked at her curiously, still not grasping the motive behind the gesture.
—Does this have a purpose, or did you just want to prove something you already knew?
Beatriz pretended to be absorbed in her “analysis” while mentally calculating the approximate size of his ring finger. Then, with a theatrical sigh, she withdrew her hand.
—Maybe I just wanted to distract you a little. But hey, it never hurts to know these things.
Lucien kept staring at her, slightly suspicious.
—You rarely do anything without a reason. What are you planning now, Beatriz?
She answered with an innocent smile.
—Nothing you need to worry about… for now.
Lucien shook his head, but didn’t press further. He went back to what he was doing, while Beatriz felt triumphant. “Objective accomplished. I’ve got the finger measurement. Now, time to work on the design.”
Back at the archives, Beatriz allowed herself a moment to reflect on what she had just done. There was something ridiculously entertaining about planning this little mischief. But at the same time, she wondered if she wasn’t making things more complicated.
“What do I really want from this? Is it just a game, or…?”
She shook her head to clear those thoughts and looked at the sketch of the ring again. “It doesn’t matter. For now, I’ll just focus on the design and make sure it comes out perfect.”
Meanwhile, the system kept recording her relationship progress without her noticing, adjusting every detail in the Love-Meter.
From “Kitten” to “Little Owl”
Lucien, as always, had an insatiable curiosity when something caught his attention. After hearing Beatriz refer to herself as a “barn owl,” he couldn’t help but investigate them. He took a tablet to the workshop and, in a rare moment of rest, began reading articles and looking at pictures of these nocturnal birds.
—Barn owls… —he murmured to himself, scrolling through the screen—. Apparently they’re mysterious, solitary, and have a gaze that can pierce the soul.
He couldn’t help but chuckle softly as he thought of Beatriz. “Yes, that fits. That’s exactly her.”
When Beatriz appeared that afternoon in the workshop, as was her habit, she found him working on the design of a new weapon. Lucien, without even lifting his gaze, greeted her in a teasing tone:
—Hello, little owl.
Beatriz blinked, surprised.
—Little owl? What happened to “kitten”?
Lucien set down what he was doing and looked at her directly, with an amused smile.
—I discovered barn owls are much more interesting. Besides, you yourself said you identified with them, didn’t you?
Beatriz crossed her arms, feigning annoyance.
—I didn’t think you’d take it that seriously.
Lucien shrugged and added:
—Well, it seems owls have some interesting qualities. They’re agile, observant, always alert… And, if bothered, they can be quite intimidating.
—Are you saying I’m intimidating? —Beatriz asked, raising an eyebrow.
—I’m saying you fit perfectly —he replied with a teasing but warm smile.
Beatriz shook her head, but couldn’t help smiling. There was something about how Lucien used the nickname that made it feel less like a game and more like recognition.
Later, while working, Lucien found himself thinking about Beatriz again. There was something about her that fascinated him, something he couldn’t reduce to a simple nickname or a single word.
“Little owl… Not just because she’s unique, but because she’s always looking beyond, planning, observing. And even if she denies it, I think she’s also searching for something, something she doesn’t dare to admit.”
That thought left him with an involuntary smile as he focused on his work.
Workshop Chronicles: Love, Forge, and Gossip
Raúl was Lucien’s master blacksmith, a man already well into his years, with humor as sharp as the weapons he forged. He had the special ability to show up exactly when someone made a mistake or said something they shouldn’t, and he never missed the chance to make a biting remark.
—Ah, Beatriz, the little owl in person! —Raúl exclaimed when he saw her arrive at the workshop—. Are you here to supervise Lucien’s work or to make sure he doesn’t do anything stupid?
Beatriz arched an eyebrow.
—Stupid? That doesn’t sound like something Lucien would do.
Raúl put a hand to his chest, feigning shock.
—Ah, of course! Our dear boss is perfect. He never loses his patience or mutters incomprehensible things when he’s frustrated. No, not at all!
From the other end of the workshop, Lucien let out a low growl.
—Raúl, would you stop clowning around and get back to work?
—Work? —Raúl turned to the apprentices (Noctis and Umbra) nearby, who were already trying to hide their laughter—. Can’t you see I’m working on keeping the atmosphere light? You wouldn’t want our dear boss to get more tense than he already is.
Lucien shook his head while Beatriz tried, unsuccessfully, to hold back her laughter.
As expected, Raúl soon turned the apprentices (Noctis and Umbra) into his accomplices. Together they formed a sort of unofficial club dedicated to analyzing every interaction between Lucien and Beatriz.
—Have you noticed how he calls her “little owl” now? —Raúl said one afternoon, while the apprentices nodded vigorously.
—Yes! And how he always double-checks everything when she’s here, like he’s trying to impress her.
Raúl stroked his chin, adopting a thoughtful expression.
—I say there’s more than work going on here. Nobody puts that much effort into the details unless they have a personal reason.
—Do you think he’s in love? —asked one of the apprentices (Noctis) with bright eyes.
Raúl clicked his tongue.
—I don’t know, but if he is, he hides it as well as a rhinoceros in a china shop.
The Discovery of Barn Owls
One day, while reviewing designs with Beatriz, Lucien let slip a casual comment.
—Did you know barn owls have the ability to fly almost completely silently?
Beatriz looked at him in surprise.
—Where did that come from?
Lucien shrugged.
—I read it. You know, since you said you identify with them. I figured I should know more about what they mean.
Before Beatriz could respond, Raúl, who had been “casually” walking by, cut in.
—Oh, boss, now that’s dedication. Learning about owls just because your little owl identifies with them. How romantic.
Lucien shot him a glare.
—Raúl, don’t you have something else to do?
Raúl gave a mischievous smile and walked away, muttering something about “the boss and his priorities.”
Beatriz chuckled softly.
—I think Raúl loves to annoy you.
Lucien sighed, but a small smile formed on his lips.
—Yeah, but I guess someone has to do it.
Beatriz was walking toward Lucien’s workshop, lost in thought, not realizing how quiet she was being. She had developed the habit during her teenage years: walking on tiptoe, avoiding any noise, so as not to draw attention from her classmates or interrupt her family.
When she entered the workshop, her steps were so silent that no one noticed her presence. Raúl was hunched over a table, whispering with the two apprentices (Noctis and Umbra) about something, while Lucien reviewed a design.
—So, who’s betting the boss will take her to the next boxing tournament to show her off? —Raúl said in a low voice, with a mischievous grin.
—I don’t know, but I’m sure she’ll say yes. Have you seen the way she looks at him? —replied one of the apprentices (Umbra).
Beatriz, unintentionally overhearing, cleared her throat.
The effect was immediate. Raúl jumped, spilling a small toolbox, while the apprentices nearly knocked over the table trying to back away.
—For heaven’s sake, woman! —Raúl exclaimed, clutching his chest—. Are you trying to give me a heart attack?
Beatriz, surprised, raised her hands.
—I’m sorry, I didn’t mean to. I always walk like this.
Lucien looked up from the design, holding back a smile at the scene.
—Like this how? Like a ghost?
Raúl caught his breath, but his sarcastic tone quickly returned.
—A ghost? No, boss, I’d say more like a little owl. You know, those birds that fly without making a sound.
Beatriz blinked.
—Little owl?
Lucien closed the design he was reviewing and, with a glint in his eyes, added:
—Makes sense. Barn owls fly almost completely silently. Now I understand why you identify with them.
Beatriz laughed, slightly embarrassed.
—Well, it wasn’t intentional. I just learned to walk like this when I was younger…
Raúl, who had already regained his composure, didn’t miss the chance.
—Oh, of course. And now she uses that power to scare honest workers. How cruel!
Lucien shook his head, but Beatriz couldn’t help but laugh as well.
Chapter 40: Rings, Secrets, and Boxing
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
A Funny Memory
As Lucien and Beatriz kept working, he couldn’t help commenting on it later.
—So, is walking silently your special skill?
Beatriz smiled.
—Let’s say it’s something I learned over the years. Although, now that I think about it, I used to scare my family too. My grandmother always said I was like an apparition when I walked into the kitchen.
Lucien looked at her, intrigued.
—And you never thought about using that skill for something else?
—Like what? Becoming a professional thief? —Beatriz joked.
Lucien laughed.
—I don’t know, but I’m sure you could find some use for it…
Raúl passed by at that moment and couldn’t resist another jab.
—Use? She’s got one already! Spying on other people’s conversations and giving them scares. A natural talent!
Beatriz shot him a look of feigned indignation, but they all ended up laughing as they went on with their work.
The Bento Box and the Bribe
Beatriz had carefully prepared the bento box that morning. She knew Raúl was chatty when his stomach was full, and after days of watching him and the apprentices (Noctis and Umbra) survive on instant soup, she decided this would be the “perfect bribe.”
When she arrived at the workshop, she found him organizing tools while the apprentices (Noctis and Umbra) argued about something in the back.
—Raúl, do you have a minute? —she asked, with an innocent smile.
Raúl looked up, immediately suspicious.
—What do you need? Because that smile says “I want something.”
Beatriz took out the bento box and set it on the table with a theatrical gesture.
—Let’s say a small curiosity came up, and I thought maybe this could help clear it up.
Raúl arched an eyebrow and looked at the bento box as if it were a lost treasure.
—Is this… homemade food? Seriously?
—Seriously. —Beatriz smiled, crossing her arms—. But only if you cooperate.
Raúl sighed dramatically, as if carrying the weight of the world.
—Good grief, how cruel you are. First you scare me with your “owlish step,” and now you tempt me with food. Fine, what do you want to know?
Beatriz leaned in slightly, lowering her voice.
—The underground boxing tournament. When is it?
Raúl snickered.
—Ah, so that’s it. Let me guess… Lucien hasn’t told you?
—Exactly. —Beatriz sighed, feigning frustration—. And I need to know because I want to pick an appropriate outfit for the event.
Raúl looked at her skeptically.
—An outfit? Right, sure. I’m sure that’s why.
Beatriz rolled her eyes, but her smile gave her away.
—Are you going to tell me or not?
Raúl sighed as if sacrificing himself for the greater good.
—All right, all right. It’s this Saturday night, at the old warehouse in the industrial zone. You know, the usual place.
—Perfect. Thanks, Raúl. —Beatriz slid the bento box toward him.
Raúl took it like a trophy.
—This almost makes up for having to work for Lucien.
—“Almost”? —Beatriz asked, amused.
Raúl looked at her with mock gravity.
—Yes. Because, do you know what it’s like to have a boss who lives in a penthouse with a private chef while I’m ruining my kidneys down here? He doesn’t even send leftovers. Leftovers! I’d ask for those, but not even that shows up.
Beatriz laughed while Raúl opened the bento box and his eyes lit up at the contents.
—Good heavens, is this chicken karaage? You’ve won me over! You can ask me whatever you want whenever you want.
She shook her head, amused, as she walked away to go on with her day.
On her way to work, Beatriz couldn’t help smiling to herself. Now that she had the date, she could plan her “attack.” Besides, the idea of seeing Lucien’s reaction when he received the ring was simply irresistible.
Meanwhile, Raúl, unknowingly, was already involved in the conspiracy. Between bites of the bento box, he couldn’t help thinking Beatriz was plotting something, but he had no idea what it was.
At the other end of the workshop, one of the apprentices (Umbra) looked at him enviously.
—Hey, Raúl, aren’t you going to share?
Raúl looked at him seriously.
—Guys, this is the price of confidential information. If you want homemade food, get your own secrets to sell.
That night, after making sure everything was in order at the workshop, Beatriz locked herself in her small personal space with a cup of tea and her laptop. Although she had learned 3D modeling as part of a design course a while ago, it wasn’t something she used often, but this time was special.
She opened the software and started working on the design of the triple cord intertwined with a frame on the sides, her favorite. The first strokes were a bit clumsy, but little by little she refined the details.
—Perfect… —she murmured to herself, smiling as the design came to life on the screen.
The ring not only had the three intertwined cords as a symbol of her connection with Lucien, but the surrounding frame was designed with a discreet wave pattern, representing the constancy and movement of their relationship. In the end, she added a small engraving on the inside: a word she wanted to mean something special between them, “Fidelis” (faithful in Latin).
After exporting the file, she looked for a nearby workshop that could print the model in wax and cast it in the metal she had chosen: a mix of white and rose gold for a unique touch.
—This is going to be perfect… I hope he doesn’t suspect anything.
The next day, while browsing the system’s skills and shops menu, Beatriz reviewed the tools she already had available. A smile formed on her lips as she stopped at one of her favorites: her magic sewing machine.
Compact, elegant, and decorated with golden filigree, she had unlocked it weeks earlier with a good investment of points. Since then, it had become essential to her creative process. It wasn’t only capable of joining fabrics with impeccable precision, but it could also execute complex designs in seconds, as long as it was given the correct materials and a preset pattern.
Moreover, if special appliqués—such as gems, metal plates, or enchanted textiles—were loaded, the machine could integrate them automatically into the design, optimizing their position according to the type of garment and its functionality. All it took was a drawing, the necessary supplies, and the machine did the rest.
—Definitely one of my best decisions —Beatriz murmured, affectionately stroking the device’s touch surface.
It wasn’t just a tool; it was her silent ally in that blend of art, technology, and strategy she loved so much.
She hurried to sketch what she wanted: an ensemble that mixed elegance and functionality. Something that wouldn’t look out of place at an underground boxing tournament but would also make her stand out.
She sketched her first idea, though it still didn’t convince her: a fitted short black dress with metallic details on the seams and a detachable vest that gave it a more casual air. As a final touch, she added a small embroidery on the top of the sporty jacket: a stylized owl, her new nickname courtesy of Lucien.
—This should be enough to let him know I’m playing his game… but my way… But one shouldn’t always go with the first design… —she went back to her sketchbook and started drafting another design.
While the ring and her outfit were in progress, Beatriz couldn’t help but imagine what the tournament would be like as one of her favorite songs played in her mind, one she had managed to buy and claim from her playlist:
🎵 K/DA - POP/STARS (ft. Madison Beer, (G)I-DLE, Jaira Burns) | Music Video - League of Legends🎵
The scene was crystal clear in her mind: Lucien triumphant in the ring, holding the champion’s ring with a victorious smile, waiting for her to choose which finger he would place it on.
—But this time —she murmured to herself—, I’ll be the one to surprise him, taking inspiration from the visual style to dress like someone worthy of being Lucien’s partner.
The idea of giving him her own ring, designed especially for him, was something she could hardly wait to see.
When Beatriz finished the sketch, she couldn’t help feeling a mix of pride and excitement. She wanted to stand out, but not in an obvious way. The design needed to be functional but also elegant, something that represented who she was now and reflected her personality without the need for words.
She began with the pants. They were made of fine black denim, with a touch of spandex for greater comfort and freedom of movement. The golden seams, in an aged-gold tone, created patterns reminiscent of owl feathers, a detail she had decided to include as a tribute to her new nickname.
To complement the look, she chose black stiletto heels with golden trim that matched the pant details. They weren’t the most comfortable for long walks, but she knew she wouldn’t be running that night, and the design fit perfectly with the rest of the outfit.
The white blouse was fitted, with darts carefully placed at the waist and back to accentuate her figure without being too revealing. The sweetheart neckline, discreet and elegant, sat just below her collarbone, showing just the right amount of skin.
The asymmetrical vest with a single button added a formal yet modern touch, while the key piece of the ensemble was the long white trench coat.
The trench coat had a sporty, futuristic design, with a long collar and black straps that served both as decoration and as adjustments to better fit the garment to her figure. On the front, near the chest, was the embroidered stylized owl, a detail that was quickly becoming her personal symbol. In addition, the spacious inner pockets were perfect for hiding the ring without arousing suspicion.
When everything was ready, Beatriz couldn’t resist spinning once in front of the mirror.
—Not bad at all, right? —she said, admiring how the golden details shone under the light.
Although the magic sewing machine had done much of the work, she had made sure to customize every detail, from the design to the choice of materials.
Beatriz had carefully planned everything. She had the ring in progress, hidden in an inner pocket of the trench coat. Her next task was to make sure no one suspected what she was really plotting—especially Lucien.
The tournament would be her perfect chance to surprise him. Beatriz laughed softly, already planning her next move.
The Underground Tournament: Excitement and Chaos
The improvised arena of the underground tournament was packed to the brim. The lights flickered between warm and cold tones, casting shadows on the rusted metal walls. The stands, though crude, vibrated with the energy of the spectators, who shouted excitedly, frantically betting on their favorites.
Lucien, with his cold, calculating gaze, had already proven his dominance in every round. His boxing style was relentless, with precise movements, as if he were analyzing each opponent like a war machine. Beatriz, from her privileged spot among the crowd, felt her heart race, not just because of the fight, but because of what she had planned.
When Lucien made it to the finals, the cheers reached their peak. The crowd was ecstatic. In the opposite corner, Hares, his opponent, watched him with a mix of respect and challenge. Aries was known for his brute strength, while Lucien was pure strategy.
The event’s commentators, with their trademark dramatic voices, did not hold back.
—Doctor García! This is a true clash of titans! —the main commentator shouted, excited.
—That’s right, my dear Martinoli! Look at Lucien’s stance: firm, confident, as if he already knows the outcome. But watch out for Hares—he’s no rookie.
The bell rang, and the two men lunged toward the center of the ring. Hares attacked with overwhelming fury, throwing punches that seemed aimed to crush anyone who stood in his way. But Lucien was not just anyone.
He moved with an almost supernatural grace, dodging the attacks as if he had memorized Harees’s every move. The crowd held its breath with every exchange.
—Incredible, Doctor García! Lucien is dancing around Hares as if this were a deadly waltz!
—That’s precision, Martinoli! Lucien isn’t just dodging—he’s studying his opponent! This man is a born strategist.
Beatriz watched, her nerves on edge. Lucien had everything under control, but she knew Aries wasn’t someone who would give up easily. In a critical moment, Hares managed to land a direct hit to Lucien’s torso, forcing him back.
—Ladies and gentlemen! Hares has managed to shake the champion!
—But look at him, Martinoli! Lucien doesn’t falter! This won’t stop him!
With a flawless counterattack, Lucien seized the opening and landed a direct punch to Hares’s jaw, sending him to the ground. The bell rang, and the referee raised Lucien’s hand in victory.
While the crowd roared in celebration, Hares, still staggering, approached Lucien with a crooked smile.
—You’ve got guts, Lucien. But tell me… are you really brave enough to commit outside the ring?
The insinuation hung in the air as Hares walked away, leaving Lucien visibly confused. Beatriz, who had been watching everything, knew this was the perfect moment for her move.
The tournament had reached its climax. Lucien, crowned the undisputed champion, stood at the center of the ring, surrounded by a crowd roaring his name. The master of ceremonies approached with a black velvet case and a bouquet of red roses, handing him the champion’s ring.
Lucien lifted the ring toward the crowd, provoking a deafening ovation. His smile was subtle but loaded with confidence. With the bouquet in one hand and the ring in the other, his eyes searched for Beatriz among the crowd.
—Martinoli! There it is, Doctor García! Lucien is the absolute champion and he’s dedicating this moment to someone special!
—That’s right, Martinoli! And it looks like he’s looking for that mysterious young woman! What is he planning now?
Beatriz, from her spot, couldn’t hide her excitement. The way Lucien looked at her made her heart pound. He nodded toward her, inviting her to step into the ring.
—Come here —Lucien said, his tone steady but soft, as if everything were under control.
Beatriz climbed into the ring with a touch of nervousness, but also with a smile she couldn’t hide. The crowd fell briefly silent, expectant for what was about to happen.
—I want to give you something —Lucien told her as he approached.
She assumed it was the bouquet of roses and extended her hands to receive it. But Lucien, in a calculated and surprising move, gently took her right hand.
—Doctor García! I didn’t see this coming! He’s taking her hand! What’s he going to do now?
—Martinoli, this man always has an ace up his sleeve! Look at how he controls the situation!
Lucien raised Beatriz’s hand, showing it to the audience while holding the champion’s ring. With steady movements, he slid it onto the ring finger of her right hand, as if it were a natural gesture, but full of intention.
—This ring —he said loudly enough for everyone to hear— represents my victory, but I want you to be part of it.
The crowd exploded in cheers and applause, thrilled by the unexpected gesture.
Beatriz’s Unexpected Twist
Beatriz was stunned. The warmth of the metal on her finger seemed to burn slightly, not because it was uncomfortable, but because the gesture was so meaningful her mind could barely process it. Still, something inside her urged her to act.
—Doctor García! Look at that young woman’s face! She’s surprised, but… wait! What is she doing now?
—Martinoli, I don’t know! But it looks like this isn’t over yet!
With a mischievous smile, Beatriz took Lucien’s left hand, briefly startling him.
—What are you doing? —he murmured, slightly intrigued.
—Just leveling the playing field, champion —she replied with a spark of confidence in her voice.
She pulled out the small case she had carefully hidden in the inner pocket of her jacket. The crowd, still hanging on every move, fell silent as they saw the gleam of the ring Beatriz held.
—Doctor García! She’s got a ring too! This is taking an unexpected turn!
—Martinoli, this is historic! We’ve never seen anything like this in an underground tournament!
With a calm she didn’t know she had, Beatriz took Lucien’s left hand and, as her fingers intertwined with his, slid the ring onto his ring finger.
—Now it’s your turn to be part of my victory, Lucien —she said with a sincere but firm smile.
Lucien looked at her, clearly surprised. For the first time in a long while, the flawless strategist was out of his comfort zone.
—This… —he said in a whisper only she could hear— I didn’t see coming.
The commentators, unable to contain their excitement, shouted in unison:
—Doctor García! This is incredible! Lucien proposes, but she one-ups him with an epic counterproposal!
—That’s right, Martinoli! This isn’t just love, this is top-tier strategy!
While the audience cheered and roared with euphoria, something else seemed to shift. Beatriz and Lucien looked at each other, and at that moment, the Love-Meter gauge began to glow in a golden hue, filling up by a quarter.
The atmosphere seemed charged with something special, as if the universe itself were celebrating this moment. Beatriz didn’t know what it meant, but something in her heart told her they were building something deeper, something that went beyond strategies and plans.
Lucien, still holding her hand, finally smiled.
—Looks like this time you beat me, little owl.
Beatriz laughed softly, savoring the moment.
—There’s a first time for everything, champion.
The crowd roared again, and the commentators closed the event with a phrase worthy of history:
—Doctor García! The champion and his little owl have made history tonight! We didn’t see this coming!
—Martinoli, this is more exciting than any championship final I’ve ever called!
Chapter 41: The Parking Lot: A Moment of Truth
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
The parking lot was nearly empty, lit only by the cold glow of the overhead lights. Beatriz was leaning against the side of Lucien’s car, absentmindedly playing with the champion’s ring she wore on her right hand. It was clearly too big, spinning freely on her finger, but there was something about that metallic weight that gave her a strange warmth.
The sound of Lucien’s footsteps echoed through the parking lot. His hair was still damp from the quick shower he’d taken, and though he appeared relaxed, his eyes betrayed a mix of tension and something deeper. When he saw her, his pace slowed.
Beatriz looked up as she felt him approach, her face still slightly flushed.
—You’re here… —he said, not quite sure how to begin.
—Of course, I wasn’t going to leave without saying goodbye to the champion —she replied with a nervous smile, trying to hide the whirlwind of emotions churning inside her.
Lucien let out a small laugh, but his attention went straight to the ring on her hand.
—Does it fit you? —he asked, nodding toward it.
—A little big, but it doesn’t matter. It’s a good memory of tonight. —Beatriz spun it on her finger, as if trying to normalize the situation.
Lucien took a step closer, his eyes locking on hers with an intensity that made the air between them feel heavier.
—You don’t do anything without intention, Beatriz.
She stopped spinning the ring, her heart skipping a beat at his words.
—You think so? —she asked, trying to sound casual, but her tone betrayed her nervousness.
Lucien took another step until he was close enough for the light to catch the details of his expression. His jaw was tense, and his eyes were a storm of emotions: confusion, certainty, and something that might have been fear.
—I know so. What you did tonight… —he paused, as if the words were hard to form— isn’t just a gesture. It’s something more.
Beatriz looked at him, her throat dry. She had known this moment would come, but she wasn’t sure how to handle it.
—And if it is… does it bother you? —she asked, her voice soft but steady.
Lucien sighed, running a hand through his damp hair.
—Bother isn’t the word. It’s… —he stopped, searching for the right words— challenging.
—Why? —Beatriz asked, leaning slightly toward him.
Lucien held her gaze, as if making sure she understood the weight of what he was about to say.
—Because this means you’re serious. That you don’t want games, excuses, or detours. And that… —his voice lowered— scares me, because I know I can’t turn back.
Beatriz’s heart was pounding, but she didn’t let insecurity take hold. She stepped closer, her fingers brushing Lucien’s.
—And is that a bad thing? —she asked in a whisper.
Lucien stayed silent for a moment, then let out a low laugh, as if laughing at himself.
—No, little owl. It’s not bad. It’s the best thing that’s ever happened to me.
Before she could respond, he closed the distance between them and cupped her face with both hands, leaning in to kiss her. The world seemed to stop in that instant. It was a slow kiss, sincere, full of raw, unfiltered emotion.
The Love-Meter didn’t need witnesses to react: a golden glow spread across half of its bar, marking a shift in their relationship.
When they pulled apart, Lucien rested his forehead against Beatriz’s, a small smile softening all the tension he’d carried before.
—Now we’re even, right? —he said with a spark in his eyes.
Beatriz let out a small laugh.
—Always competing, champion.
They both laughed softly, and for the first time in a long while, Lucien felt he had found something worth more than any championship.
Lucien dropped her off at the entrance to the housing complex. The sky was clear, the full moon lighting the way. Before she could get out of the car, he gently took her hand, giving one last glance at the champion’s ring she still wore on her finger.
—Think of it as a loan —he said with a playful smile—. But you give it back to me in our next match.
Beatriz let out a small laugh, though the emotional weight of the moment still pressed in her chest.
—I promise not to lose it, champion.
She got out of the car, and as he drove off, she watched him disappear down the street. Her heart was still racing, but she didn’t have much time to reflect. She had barely crossed the doorway of her house when her watch began to emit a persistent beeping sound.
The holographic screen flickered, showing an urgent message: “Anomaly detected. Maximum priority. Immediate response required.”
—Seriously, now? —Beatriz muttered, rubbing her temple.
The message was followed by an incoming call. When she accepted, the red-haired magical girl appeared on the screen, her expression serious.
—Beatriz, we have a problem. A critical anomaly has been detected in sector 108. We believe it’s a mutated Wander. We can’t handle it alone. Can you join us?
Beatriz swallowed hard, feeling a knot of uncertainty in her stomach.
—Of course, give me a few minutes to get ready.
The girl nodded and the transmission ended. Beatriz let out a sigh, closing her eyes for a moment.
—Am I ready for this? —she asked softly.
Before leaving, she decided to check the files for information about the anomaly. Accessing the system, her eyes scanned the records, which had been unlocked as part of her own information network, but a file highlighted in red caught her attention: “Sector 108 – Restricted Access.”
Beatriz didn’t remember seeing that file before. She opened it cautiously, and what she found left her frozen.
The report spoke of a possible dimensional rift detected in a remote location. It was speculated that the Incubators were not just cosmic parasites, but entities that had crossed over from another reality, using that rift as an entry point.
The document was incomplete, full of fragmented notes:
“Closing the rift could eradicate them…”
“High risk: What happens if we alter reality itself?”
“Requires a power source equivalent to…”
One detail in particular caught her eye: the mention of a contract “successfully canceled in another sector.” The case was labeled as experimental, but the procedure was classified.
—So there really is a way to cancel contracts… —she murmured, feeling a spark of hope.
But she had no more time to think. The anomaly message flashed again on her screen, reminding her she had to leave. Beatriz closed the files and headed to her wardrobe.
The Call of Duty: The Altered Wander
Beatriz’s mind was still spinning from the day’s events, but she had no time to settle. She had barely set her things down when she received a call from the office. It was unusual, since weekends were usually quiet, but the voice on the other end sounded alarmed.
—Beatriz, we need you to head to the location I’m sending right now. We found a Wander… but there’s something very strange about it. It seems unstable.
—Unstable how? —Beatriz asked, trying to stay calm, and was surprised to see it was the same location the red-haired magical girl had given her moments ago.
—We don’t know. The team that detected it reported that the energy readings are completely different from the usual. Something is interfering with its structure…
Beatriz accepted without hesitation, though she felt this was no routine mission.
As she donned her armor, she remembered Lucien’s words: “You don’t do anything without intention.” That phrase echoed in her mind, giving her a renewed sense of determination. She couldn’t afford to hesitate now.
With her gear ready, she went to meet her new companion. The night was calm, but deep down she knew something big was in motion. Perhaps this mission wouldn’t just be another battle, but the first step toward discovering how to end the Incubators and their threat once and for all.
On the way to the office, her watch projected an unexpected message. It was a compressed file sent from an unknown source within her system. Beatriz downloaded it cautiously, and her surprise grew when she found it contained classified information.
Among the documents, one name appeared again and again: Khaërôn.
The file spoke of an anomalous energy that was beginning to affect the Wanderers. This energy seemed incompatible with the current reality and suggested that something —or someone— was manipulating the dimensional balance.
Between the lines, there were additional notes handwritten in a style that didn’t belong to any official file. They read:
“The change has begun.”
“These are not accidents; they are tests of a greater power.”
“Khaërôn seeks domination, but not all agree. Beware of the factions.”
At the end of the file, a name: Emil, with a message:
“We are on different paths, but our goals will cross soon. Prepare for what’s coming, Beatriz. This is bigger than we imagined.”
Beatriz closed the documents, her heart pounding. If Emil was right, this wasn’t a simple incident. It was a sign of an imminent war.
The Whale Wander and the Magical Alliance
Beatriz received another call while reviewing the documents Emil had sent her. The voice on the other end was urgent —it was the magical girl who had contacted her earlier.
—Beatriz! We need your help. The Wander that appeared is enormous, and we can’t contain it. It has the shape of a whale… but it’s altered.
Without a second thought, Beatriz activated her armor and headed to the location.
When she arrived, the sight was breathtaking: a colossal whale floated in the air, its body covered in distorted patterns and glowing lines of energy that radiated a palpable sense of menace.
In front of the creature stood two magical girls: one was Aki, holding her staff adorned with glowing flowers, and the red-haired girl she had met earlier wielded a halberd that shifted shape at will. Both were exhausted but still fighting.
—Beatriz! —Aki shouted—. We need to keep it contained, but its energy is interfering with our powers.
Beatriz quickly assessed the situation and joined them.
During the battle, the red-haired halberd wielder, who seemed the more impulsive of the two, created a magical bond with her witch, summoning her to help fight the Wander. An ethereal form emerged at her side, appearing as a warrior with a broken mask and her own halberd.
Beatriz was stunned as she saw the witch perfectly synchronize with the magical girl, amplifying her power without destabilizing her mind.
—What is that? —Beatriz asked as she dodged a blast of energy from the whale.
—That’s my witch —the redhead panted—. We don’t lose our sanity, but it drains us. It’s like an extension of ourselves.
The girl with the staff did the same, summoning her witch, who appeared as a goddess cloaked in flowers and petals in constant motion. The combination of their powers weakened the Wander, but it still wasn’t enough to defeat it.
Seeing the girls at their limit, Beatriz came up with a plan.
—Listen, that whale seems to feed on unleashed energy. If we synchronize our attacks and focus everything on its core, we might be able to neutralize it.
The redhead nodded, though she was clearly exhausted.
—And if it doesn’t work?
—Then we improvise —Beatriz replied with determination.
The three worked together, coordinating their movements while the witches kept the whale restrained. Finally, with a combined strike —the halberd, the staff, and a punch amplified by Beatriz’s armor— they managed to shatter the Wander’s core.
When the Wander disappeared, it left behind a strange object: a small glowing blue cube that seemed to contain fragments of Khaërôn’s energy.
—What is this? —Aki, the staff-wielding girl, asked, eyeing the cube cautiously.
Beatriz took it and remembered Emil’s documents.
—It’s a clue. Something —or someone— is interfering with our reality. This isn’t just a Wander… it’s part of something bigger. It’s a Protocore crystal…
The magical girls exchanged worried looks as Beatriz stored the cube.
—Thank you for your help —Beatriz said, looking at them both—. This is just beginning, but with you, we have a chance.
The three parted ways, fully aware that this battle was only a prelude to something far greater that was coming.
Chapter 42: The Wallet’s Sacrifice
Summary:
📌 Author's note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, with renamed characters and creative twists. It doesn’t strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
It touches on sensitive topics like past trauma and its impact on character growth, though it’s not the central focus. Please keep that in mind—your well-being matters.
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Chapter Text
With the Wander defeated and the strange object secured, Beatriz turned to the magical girls, noticing their exhaustion. The redhead was sitting on the ground, her halberd resting beside her, while the girl with the staff tried to catch her breath.
—You’ve earned a break —Beatriz said with a kind smile—. How about we go get something to eat? Food always helps clear the mind.
The redhead, who had been staring thoughtfully at the horizon, quickly looked up.
—Really? You’re buying?
—I’m buying. But nothing too expensive, okay?
The redhead jumped to her feet with a mischievous grin.
—I know a place. It’s amazing… though maybe not so cheap.
Beatriz put a hand to her forehead, feigning resignation.
—Fine, but it better be worth it.
The place Sora chose turned out to be an international cuisine restaurant in the heart of Luminaria, famous for its elaborate dishes and steep prices. Beatriz sighed when she saw the menu, but said nothing. She knew this moment was important if she wanted to earn their trust.
As they waited for the food, Beatriz took the opportunity to talk to them.
—So, girls, tell me, what do you know about these Wanders and what’s happening?
The girl with the staff, who introduced herself as Aki, spoke up.
—We know the Wanders are manifestations of negative energy, but this last one… it was different. It wasn’t just negative; there was something else. An external force.
The redhead, who said her name was Sora, nodded as she played with a glass of water.
—Yeah. And this isn’t the first time something like this has happened. I’ve felt that energy before, but never as strong as today.
Beatriz frowned.
—And the Incubators? Do you have any idea why they’re so interested in all this?
Sora and Aki exchanged uneasy glances.
—We don’t know much —Aki admitted—. All we know is that they’re always after magical girls, always looking for more contracts, more energy.
Beatriz nodded, thinking about the object they had found.
—Well, it looks like you’re not the only ones with enemies. This is turning into a war between factions, and we need to understand what role we play in all this.
While they ate, Beatriz realized there was something more the magical girls weren’t saying.
—Sora, Aki… I want you to know you can trust me. I’m not a magical girl, but I’m here to help you. Is there anything else you want to share?
Sora, with a piece of meat halfway to her mouth, stopped.
—Well… No one’s ever listened to us like this before. Being a magical girl isn’t easy, you know? We’re always fighting, always alone… until now.
Aki nodded, lowering her gaze.
—I lost my best friend in a battle against a Wander. Since then, I’ve been trying to find a way to stop other magical girls from going through the same thing.
Beatriz felt a knot in her stomach, but gave them a warm smile.
—I’m so sorry, Aki. But you’re not alone. Now we have each other.
Sora raised her glass.
—Let’s drink to that! And to this amazing food Beatriz paid for.
Beatriz laughed, raising her own glass as well.
—To us, then.
When they left the restaurant, Sora looked at Beatriz with a mischievous smile.
—Hey, Beatriz. This was fun. But next time I’ll pick a cheaper place… I promise.
Beatriz sighed but couldn’t help smiling.
—You’d better, Sora. But for now, remember this: no matter what happens, we can always count on each other.
The three said their goodbyes, knowing this moment wasn’t just a pause in their fight, but the beginning of a true alliance.
Sora’s Confession
The mood shifted subtly. Sora, who had been the most animated until then, fell silent, staring at her plate. Aki noticed the change but said nothing. It was Beatriz who broke the tension.
—Are you okay, Sora?
The redhead slowly looked up, her eyes shining with a mix of sadness and determination.
—You know something, Beatriz? I didn’t think any adult could be different.
—What do you mean?
Sora took a deep breath, fiddling with the glass of water in front of her.
—My father was a hunter, like you and your team. He… he was amazing, you know? Always fighting against the Wanderers to protect us. But our life was hard. My mom left when my sister and I were little, and he did everything he could to keep us afloat.
Beatriz nodded, listening intently.
—And what happened?
Sora pressed her lips together before continuing.
—One day, an Incubator appeared before me. It promised me it could help my dad, give him more strength to protect us and hunt better. I… I made the wish. I wished for more power for him. I thought I was doing the right thing.
She stopped, her hands trembling slightly.
—At first, everything was perfect. I became a magical girl and started fighting witches, while my dad kept facing Wanderers with renewed strength. But… one day, something went wrong.
Aki lowered her gaze, knowing what was coming.
—We went into a labyrinth —Sora continued—. My dad wanted to protect me, so he came with me. We defeated the witch, but… the labyrinth affected him. It changed him.
—How did it change him? —Beatriz asked softly.
—He was never the same. He became distant, careless. We lost my little sister in an attack because he wasn’t… he wasn’t in a condition to protect us. And after that, he just… disappeared.
Silence filled the table. Beatriz could feel the weight of Sora’s words, but she also noticed something else: the spark of hope in her eyes when she looked at her.
—For a long time, I thought all adults were like him. That they couldn’t be trusted, that they’d always let us down in the end. But you…
Sora smiled faintly.
—You’re different, Beatriz. I don’t know why, but with you I feel like there’s hope. That maybe not everything is lost.
Beatriz felt a knot in her chest but responded with a warm smile.
—Thank you for trusting me, Sora. And I want you to know you’re not alone in this. If there’s anything I can do to help you, I will.
Sora nodded, this time with a more genuine smile.
—Thank you… really.
Sora stayed for a moment watching the city lights.
—You know, Beatriz, I always thought my story would end badly. That everything I did was a mistake. But now… I think there’s a way to fix things.
Beatriz placed a hand on her shoulder.
—It’s never too late to start over, Sora. And remember, you don’t have to do it alone.
Aki joined them, placing her hands on her hips.
—Exactly! We’re a team now, right?
Sora laughed softly, nodding.
—Yeah… a team.
As they said goodbye, Beatriz felt she had taken a big step, not only toward earning their trust but also giving them something they hadn’t had in a long time: a reason to keep going.
Aki’s Past: A Wish that Shattered Her World
Aki decided to share her story with Beatriz that night. When they arrived at Beatriz’s apartment, she listened closely.
Aki and her older brother, Kaito, had been inseparable after losing their parents during the first Wander attacks. Kaito took on the role of protector, working tirelessly to take care of Aki. The burden was heavy, and Kaito’s health began to deteriorate due to overwork and stress.
One night, while Kaito was gravely ill, an Incubator appeared before Aki. Desperate to save her brother, she made the wish that Kaito would have perfect health forever. The wish was granted, but soon, Aki began to notice a change in him. Recovered, Kaito became distant and eventually stopped taking care of her.
"I can’t live my life because I’m always taking care of you," he told her one day, his words cutting deeper than any physical wound. Devastated, Aki decided to leave home, feeling she had lost not only her parents but also her brother — the only family bond she had left.
Since then, Aki had kept her distance, believing that Kaito had never tried to find her. But in reality, Kaito had spent years attempting to locate her, though his growing success in the business world prevented him from dedicating enough time to the search.
Aki eventually joined Sora, finding in her an ally and friend who understood her pain and struggle. Together, they faced the challenges of being magical girls in a world full of danger and difficult choices, with Aki still carrying the weight of her past.
The New Home of Sora and Aki
After the recent battles and revelations of their pasts, Beatriz decided it was too risky to leave Sora and Aki on their own. So, in an act of generosity and strategy, she offered them her home as a refuge.
"You can be safe here," she told them, "and not only that — you can learn to be self-sufficient." Beatriz didn’t want them to just feel protected but also empowered to face the world, both inside and outside of battle.
Beatriz began teaching them from the basics: how to keep the house, manage their time, and survival skills. But she didn’t stop there; she also encouraged them to enroll in online classes so they could continue their education. "Knowledge is one of the most powerful weapons we have," she reminded them.
Meanwhile, Beatriz kept Emil close, knowing that although he was strong, he might still need backup. She gave Sora and Aki clear instructions: in case of an attack, their priority was to protect Emil and evacuate him from the residential area, drawing the enemy as far away as possible until Beatriz arrived.
This new arrangement not only strengthened their bond but also turned Beatriz’s home into an operations center and a symbol of hope. With each passing day, the girls felt stronger, more united, and more ready to face whatever came next.
Beatriz took a deep breath as she turned the key in the door.
—Welcome to your new home —she said with a smile, inviting Sora and Aki inside.
The two girls, though a little nervous, were visibly excited. It was the first time in a long time they truly felt safe.
Beatriz’s apartment wasn’t big, but it was tidy and cozy.
—You can choose either of the two free rooms —she explained. —And don’t worry about expenses, I’ll take care of everything for now.
Sora and Aki shared a look of relief and gratitude.
—Thank you, Beatriz —Aki murmured, while Sora nodded silently.
—Well —Beatriz continued— there are a few rules. We’re going to keep this place clean and in order. I’ll also teach you some things so you can be independent. And… —her tone softened— I want you to enroll in online classes. I want you to keep learning.
The girls nodded again, this time with more enthusiasm. Beatriz was giving them more than just a roof over their heads; she was giving them a new chance.
That night, Beatriz decided they needed something special to celebrate.
—How about a girls’ night? —she asked with a smile. —We can watch movies, eat pizza, and just relax.
Sora and Aki gladly agreed. Soon, the living room was filled with laughter, blankets, and pizza boxes. As the night went on, the conversations became more personal.
—Hey, Beatriz —Sora began, with a spark of curiosity in her eyes—, the first time we saw you… there was a tall man with you. Who is he?
Beatriz smiled, her cheeks blushing slightly.
—Ah, that’s Lucien —she replied softly. —He’s my partner.
Sora’s eyes widened.
—Your partner?! How come you never told us before?
Beatriz laughed, relieved at their positive reaction.
—It’s something recent —she admitted. —But yes, we’re together.
Aki joined the conversation, encouraged by the news.
—You have to tell us everything! How did it happen?
The night continued full of stories and laughter, with Beatriz sharing details about her relationship with Lucien while Sora and Aki listened intently, happy to see their mentor finding happiness too.
Chapter 43: Art Exhibition: The Night of Transformation
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
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Chapter Text
The week passed with the serenity one only feels after sharing important truths. Since that night of movies and confessions, Aki and Sora had grown even closer to Beatriz. There was something comforting in the complicity that arose from those small late-night conversations, where pizzas were an excuse and smiles, a balm.
It was in the midst of that routine, between work reports and secret sketches, that Beatriz received an unusual notification in her inbox.
A digital invitation on a watercolor background:
“Dear Beatriz:
I would love for you to attend my next art exhibition. It will be an intimate but meaningful event.
I’ve reserved a couple of additional invitations in case you’d like to bring someone important.
Affectionately,
—Miguel Ángel”
Beatriz stared at the screen for a few seconds. She didn’t hesitate long before forwarding the digital passes to Aki and Sora with a small note:
“Up for a night of art? I think it’ll be… interesting.”
They both replied almost immediately with excited emojis and dresses.
The gallery was full of murmurs and praise. Warm lights illuminated the works of art, brimming with vivid colors and bold forms. Beatriz, elegantly dressed, walked among the pieces, accompanied by Miguel Ángel, Aki, and Sora. Everyone was enjoying the event, but Beatriz’s gaze remained alert, as if something wasn’t quite right.
Suddenly, Beatriz noticed a young artist in a corner, surrounded by people who seemed to be speaking to her with disdain. The girl, who should have been happy to exhibit her art, looked tense and dejected. Beatriz drew close enough to catch fragments of the conversation.
—… you’ll never be as good as Miguel Ángel —said a man, probably her father, cruelly comparing her to the talented artist beside her.
The girl clenched her fists; her body trembled. Beatriz noticed how a small stone the young woman wore on a pendant—her Soul Gem—began to darken rapidly. Her heart sank as she realized what was about to happen.
—Aki, Sora, Miguel Ángel! —Beatriz called, drawing her friends’ attention—. Something’s wrong with that girl!
Before they could react, the young artist fell to her knees. Her Soul Gem shattered into a million pieces and, in the blink of an eye, her body began to transform into a witch, her figure distorted by despair and hatred.
The gallery warped around her; paintings melted into dark shadows and the floor turned into a thick pool of black ink. The labyrinth was being born.
Beatriz acted quickly, extending her hands and pronouncing the reinforcement spell “Lionheart”. A golden light emanated from her palms, creating a protective shield around them, keeping the labyrinth from consuming them completely.
—We have to stop her before the labyrinth devours everyone! —Beatriz shouted.
Miguel Ángel stepped forward, his hands wrapped in flames. With a gesture, he materialized a pair of incandescent daggers, ready for battle. Aki and Sora, already transformed, took position at his side, prepared to face the witch.
The creature who had once been a talented young artist now rose as a massive nightmare figure, with giant brushes dripping corrosive ink and eyes full of hatred. The battle for the gallery had begun.
The Birth of the Labyrinth: The Battle Begins
The witch, fueled by suffering and scorn, had gained immense power by consuming her own father and the people closest to her at the exhibition. The labyrinth’s shadows swirled around her, forming a vortex of despair and darkness.
Beatriz felt the weight of the situation. They not only had to stop the witch, but also protect the remaining people at the exhibition. With a firm gesture, she summoned Ixion. The entity materialized in a flash of light, its imposing presence filling the place with an aura of power.
—Ixion, we need your help to contain the people —Beatriz said, her voice resolute—. We can’t allow anyone else to be absorbed by the labyrinth.
Ixion nodded with a low roar, extending its form to create barriers around the people, protecting them from the witch’s corrupting influence. Beatriz reinforced Ixion with her “Lionheart” spell, ensuring it could withstand the labyrinth’s dark onslaught.
—We’re close to the witch —Beatriz said to her companions—. If we act fast, we can keep the labyrinth from spreading further.
Miguel Ángel, fire daggers in hand, led the attack. The flames of his weapons cleaved the air, carving a safe path toward the witch. Aki and Sora, combining their abilities, attacked from the flanks, each strike aimed at weakening the labyrinth’s structure and protecting trapped civilians.
The witch roared, her giant brushes hurling waves of corrosive ink at them. Beatriz raised a magical shield, deflecting the attacks as she directed her friends toward the labyrinth’s center.
—Take advantage of any opening! —Beatriz shouted—. We have to end this before more people get hurt!
The battle raged fiercely, each one playing their role in the fight to save the innocent and stop the witch before her power spiraled completely out of control.
The Assault on the Colossus: The Witch’s Core
Beatriz activated her watch, and nanomachines deployed swiftly, wrapping her body in a gleaming armor, the shadow-lotus mantle, now improved. With a determined look, she analyzed the situation. The witch, a colossus of ink and pain, towered over them, her body covered in a grotesque, nearly impenetrable armor.
—We have to reach her core —Beatriz said, her steady voice resonating in their communicators—. If we can expose it, we can defeat her.
Miguel Ángel shot her a look of understanding, his fire daggers sparking with energy. —Do you have a plan?
—Yes, but I’ll need help to climb her —Beatriz replied, scanning the witch’s weak points—. Once I’m in position, I’ll throw elemental light-and-fire bombs to weaken her shell. I need you to distract her while I climb.
Aki and Sora nodded, ready to cover Beatriz. Miguel Ángel dashed toward the witch, launching blazing bursts that kept her attention on him. Meanwhile, Beatriz used her Mega Man–style boots to propel herself onto the witch’s massive body, gripping the protrusions of her armor.
The climb was arduous. The witch roared and writhed, trying to shake Beatriz off, but she held fast, using the nanomachines to anchor herself. With each movement, she drew closer to the core.
From below, Aki and Sora unleashed a storm of magical attacks, each aimed at weakening the witch’s defenses. Miguel Ángel kept hurling fire daggers, holding her focus on the ground.
—I’m almost there! —Beatriz shouted from above, pulling out the bombs she had prepared.
With a final effort, she reached an opening near the witch’s core. Activating the bombs, she hurled them with precision, each explosion weakening the armor and exposing the pulsating core.
—Now! —Beatriz cried, descending quickly to rejoin her companions.
Miguel Ángel, Aki, and Sora readied for the final strike. Miguel Ángel channeled all his power into a greatsword of flame, while Aki and Sora focused their magical energy into a single devastating spell.
—Combined attack! —Beatriz shouted, signaling to synchronize the strike.
Miguel Ángel’s blade sank into the witch’s core at the same moment Aki and Sora’s combined spell engulfed her in a torrent of light and fire. The core detonated in a burst of energy, disintegrating the witch and dispelling the labyrinth.
The energy slowly dissipated, and the atmosphere returned to a state of tense calm. The witch’s core had left behind a seed of chaos, a dark remnant charged with malignant energy. Still clad in nanomachine armor, Beatriz approached and carefully picked up the seed, making sure no one else at the exhibition saw it.
—We have to purify this —Beatriz said softly—. We can’t let this energy keep corrupting.
Aki and Sora nodded, understanding the gravity of the moment. They formed a small circle around the seed, joining hands, and began the purification process. Soft, warm lights emanated from their hands as they recited a silent chant, powered by Beatriz’s resonance. Little by little, the seed began to glow with a purer light, dispersing the darkness that had wrapped it.
Sora looked at the seed, remembering the first one she had obtained. Now she understood why it was so important to purify them—not only to prevent further corruption, but also to give peace to the souls that had become witches. Her eyes filled with a new determination.
Miguel Ángel, meanwhile, looked at the seed and then at the place where the witch had vanished. His face showed a mix of sadness and guilt.
—She was just a girl… —he murmured, voice breaking—. Her father pushed her into this. How can someone do that to their own daughter?
Beatriz stepped closer to Miguel Ángel, placing a comforting hand on his shoulder.
—It isn’t your fault, Miguel. There are parents who don’t know how to value their children—who harm instead of protect. But you aren’t to blame for their cruelty. You’re here to help, to keep more people from suffering.
Miguel Ángel nodded slowly, finding some comfort in her words. Still, the sadness remained in his eyes.
Aki watched everything in silence, her mind full of thoughts. She remembered her own past, how her brother had abandoned her when she needed him most. Seeing the tragedy of the magical girl made her reflect on the scars she carried within.
—Sometimes the world gives us the hardest trials —Aki said softly, almost to herself—. But we can’t let those trials define us. We have to find the strength to keep going, even when everything seems lost.
Beatriz looked at her with understanding. She knew Aki was wrestling with her own demons, and she promised herself she would be there to support her, as she would for all of them.
With the seed now purified, Beatriz stored the remaining fragment in a safe place.
—We did what we could. Now we need to move forward, learn from this, and prepare for what’s coming.
The group dispersed discreetly, leaving behind the scene of the tragedy. Despite the victory, the weight of reality still hovered over them—but together, they knew they could face anything.
A Trusting Conversation
The night moved slowly, and the city glowed with faint lights. After the exhibition, Beatriz suggested to Miguel Ángel that they go to a quiet café to talk. She still carried the weight of what had happened, and she knew Miguel Ángel also needed answers and comfort.
They sat at a table by the window, from which they could watch the city’s apparent calm. Beatriz ordered a black coffee, while Miguel Ángel chose an herbal tea, looking for something to help him relax.
—Thanks for coming with me —Beatriz began, offering a reassuring smile—. There are some things I need to share with you, things that are important for you to understand what’s going on.
Miguel Ángel nodded, a shadow of sadness still in his eyes.
—What happened at the exhibition… was more than I expected. And now, it seems no one remembers anything. It’s as if that girl and her father never existed.
Beatriz took a sip of her coffee before continuing.
—That’s something I feared. When a magical girl turns into a witch, the world often rewrites reality to erase her existence. It’s part of the cycle maintained by the Incubators. Magical girls, when they fall into despair, transform into witches, and that despair energy is used as fuel to keep the universe in balance.
Miguel Ángel frowned, clearly disturbed by the revelation.
—The Incubators… are behind all this? Are they the ones who make these girls fall into that despair?
—Yes —Beatriz replied seriously—. They’re manipulators. They offer wishes in exchange for becoming magical girls, knowing that most will fall into despair and become witches. And when that happens, everything around that person is erased or altered, leaving few clues about what really occurred.
Miguel Ángel clenched his hands into fists on the table, struggling against anger and helplessness.
—It’s terrible. They’re using these girls, destroying their lives and those of the people around them.
Beatriz nodded.
—That’s why what we do is so important. Helping magical girls, protecting them from falling into despair, and fighting witches when necessary. And now, we need to be more alert than ever. We can’t allow the Incubators to continue their cycle unopposed.
The silence between them was heavy but full of shared understanding. Miguel Ángel breathed deeply, trying to calm his mind.
—Thank you for telling me this, Beatriz. I know it’s not easy to carry this knowledge, but I’m glad you trust me enough to share it.
Beatriz gave him a gentle smile.
—I’ll always trust you, Miguel. And together, we’ll do whatever it takes to protect others and stop the Incubators.
They stayed in the café a while longer, planning their next steps and strengthening their resolve. They knew the battle would be difficult, but with each passing day, they felt more prepared to face the darkness surrounding them.
Beatriz and Miguel Ángel kept talking; the café’s atmosphere provided a sense of intimacy and safety that both of them needed at that moment.
Deepening Trust
—There’s something else I want to ask you, Miguel —said Beatriz, leaning slightly toward him, as if what she was about to say were a very important secret—. I know this is a lot to process, but we need to stay vigilant. If you ever see a girl who seems to be in trouble, who’s struggling with something you can’t quite explain, I want you to tell me. She might be a magical girl in danger, and together we could help her before it’s too late.
Miguel Ángel looked at her, processing her words.
—You want me to become your eyes and ears?
Beatriz nodded.
—Exactly. I can’t be everywhere at once, and your help would be invaluable. Besides, I think you have a special intuition for noticing when someone is going through a tough moment. You could make a big difference, Miguel.
He leaned back in his chair, reflecting on what he’d just heard.
—It’s a lot to ask, but I understand why it’s important. If I can help prevent more girls from falling into despair, I’ll do everything I can.
Beatriz smiled, grateful.
—I trust you, Miguel. And you’re not alone in this. Sora, Aki, and I are here to support you too. In fact, I think it would be good for you to join the group chat we have. We share information and strategies there. It would also be a way to keep us all in constant touch.
Miguel Ángel nodded with a soft smile.
—Sounds good to me. It’ll be nice to have a place where we can talk about this without worrying someone else is listening.
Beatriz took out her phone and added Miguel Ángel to the chat.
—Welcome to the team, then. I promise we’ll do everything in our power to protect those who need it.
—Thank you, Beatriz. —Miguel Ángel glanced at the chat on his phone, seeing Sora and Aki’s names appear in the conversation—. I feel this brings me closer to you all, not just in what we do, but as friends too.
—That’s exactly it —Beatriz replied with a warm smile—. It’s not only about fighting the darkness, but about supporting each other and growing together.
Miguel Ángel felt more connected to the group, noticing a positive change in how he saw himself and his place in this fight. The trust and spirit among them grew stronger with each step.
—So, are we ready to face whatever comes? —Miguel Ángel asked, feeling a new energy from being more connected with the group.
Beatriz nodded, her determination reflected in her eyes.
—More than ready. And with every step, we grow stronger together.
As they left the gallery, the night breeze brushed their faces, still warm with the adrenaline of the battle and the event’s success. Sora and Aki laughed softly between murmurs, commenting on the strangest paintings, while Miguel Ángel tucked Beatriz’s words into his memory as a new commitment.
Beatriz walked a few steps behind, allowing herself a sigh. They had faced a new threat, and although not everything was under control, something had changed. The team had grown. The bond too.
The buzz of her phone pulled her from her thoughts: a notification from the work group reminded her that in a few hours she had to return to routine.
—The war against darkness doesn’t halt everyday life —she murmured with a half-smile—. Nor Emil’s reports.
Chapter 44: Return to the Battlefield (Light Sword System Activated)
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over 500 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
🎉 Let’s celebrate this milestone together!
To thank you, I’m excited to announce that the new fanfic will be available on October 2nd. Get ready for more twists, deep drama, and choices that will change everything. 😎✨
https://archiveofourown.org/works/71705591
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Chapter Text
The next morning, Beatriz was already at her desk, blueprints spread out and her mind focused on another kind of battle: a critical presentation for the company. Emil, her punctual and meticulous colleague, went over the reports with her, as if the night before they hadn’t faced something straight out of a magical story.
—Everything seems fine, but I want to do one last review before the meeting —said Emil, adjusting his glasses and giving her a knowing look.
—Good idea —Beatriz replied, turning the screen toward him—. We can’t afford mistakes today.
The office buzzed with energy, but Beatriz was no longer the same as before. Something inside her had grown stronger, and even if the world didn’t know it, a new version of her had awakened.
Beatriz was focused on her work, reviewing the last details of an important company project. Emil, her coworker, was by her side, checking the data and making sure everything was in order for the presentation later that day.
—Everything looks fine, but I want one last review before the meeting —said Emil, adjusting his glasses and looking at Beatriz with a complicit smile.
—Good idea, we can’t afford mistakes today —Beatriz answered, returning the smile.
The atmosphere in the office was charged with expectation, everyone working at full capacity to make sure the presentation would be a success.
Just when everything seemed under control, Beatriz felt a chill run down her back. A dark energy began to seep into the atmosphere, making her feel that something was very wrong. Her eyes met Emil’s, who noticed the change in her expression.
—Everything okay, Bea? —Emil asked, with a trace of concern.
—Not exactly… —Beatriz murmured, as her gaze shifted toward a corner of the office where the dark energy seemed to be concentrating.
Suddenly, the environment changed completely. The lights flickered and the air grew heavy. The figure of a witch began to materialize, surrounded by a distorted labyrinth that started to engulf the office.
—Everyone, get out of here! —Beatriz shouted, taking a defensive stance.
The employees started running for the exits, but the labyrinth blocked their way. Beatriz knew she had to act fast.
She activated the nanomachine watch, and to his astonishment and confusion, Emil saw at her side as the Shadow Lotus armor quickly unfolded around her.
—What… what is this? —Emil asked, stunned.
—No time to explain now. I need you to help keep everyone safe. —Beatriz gave him a firm look as she prepared to face the witch.
Emil nodded, still dazed but willing to help. Beatriz gave him quick instructions on how to guide people to safe zones within the labyrinth, while she directly confronted the witch.
—Stay calm, Emil. We can get through this —Beatriz said before charging at the witch, her armor glowing with intense energy.
The witch, a gigantic twisted nightmare figure, loomed in the middle of the office turned into a dark labyrinth. Her body was covered with armor as hard as stone, with barely any visible cracks. Beatriz knew she had to find the core to defeat her, but the challenge was how to reach it.
—Ixion, come to my side! —Beatriz called, and the spirit of the Shimmering Unicorn appeared beside her, neighing loudly.
Beatriz closed her eyes for a moment and murmured the spell she had practiced so often: "Lion’s Heart." A golden light radiated from her palms, strengthening everyone’s hearts and dispelling fear. Now, Emil and the others could move with more determination.
—Emil, I need your help —Beatriz said as she prepared to attack—. I’m going to climb the witch like a colossus, but I need you to light up her core with your light.
Emil nodded, still surprised, materializing his Light Sword in his hands.
—I’m counting on you! —Beatriz told him, trusting in his support.
With agility boosted by the nanomachines, Beatriz began climbing the witch’s massive figure. Meanwhile, Emil hurled light blades at the witch, distracting her and creating small flashes that guided Beatriz toward the most vulnerable points.
—Bea, up on the right shoulder! —Emil shouted, spotting a larger crack that could be her target.
Beatriz climbed skillfully, using the witch’s cracks and protrusions as footholds. Upon reaching near the right shoulder, her system displayed a new unlocked item: "Light Sword."
—Light Sword from Shadow of the Colossus, activated! —the system announced on her watch.
Beatriz materialized the Light Sword, a radiant blade emitting a warm glow. But to reveal the core, she needed a more concentrated beam.
—Emil, light up the sword with your power! —Beatriz ordered.
Emil focused his fire energy into the sword, intensifying it with a brilliant glow. The sword’s light pointed directly toward the witch’s chest, revealing the dark, throbbing core hidden beneath the armor.
—There it is! —Beatriz cried, as she raised the sword and prepared for the final strike.
With all her strength and Ixion’s energy roaring around her, Beatriz plunged the Light Sword straight into the witch’s core. A harrowing scream filled the air as the core exploded in a brilliant burst of energy.
The witch’s armor crumbled, and the labyrinth began to fade away. Beatriz and Emil fell to the ground, exhausted but victorious.
Among the witch’s remains, Beatriz found a small dark gem: the Seed of Chaos. She knew she had to purify it so that the magical girl who had become a witch could finally rest in peace.
—We achieved something important today, Emil —said Beatriz, as she stored the seed.
Emil nodded, still processing everything that had happened, but feeling more connected to Beatriz than ever.
The sun was beginning to rise, painting the sky with soft shades of pink and orange as Beatriz and Emil walked through the nearly deserted streets. They had left the company after the battle, still carrying the weight of what they had faced.
In the shared silence, they noticed something strange. Around them, the city kept running in absolute normality. The few people crossing the streets didn’t seem disturbed or confused, as if nothing extraordinary had happened.
—They don’t remember anything… —Emil murmured, frowning.
Beatriz nodded, confirming her suspicion.
—The system protected them. Or silenced them. Only the two of us remember what happened in that labyrinth. It’s part of the protocol, I know.
Emil lowered his gaze, partly relieved, partly uneasy. He had lived this before. Cycles and cycles, 241 years trapped in a cruel loop that always led him to the same result: losing Beatriz. But this time…
This time she was different.
Stronger. Clearer. More determined.
And that unsettled him.
Beatriz noticed Emil’s unusual silence, but she couldn’t tell him everything. She couldn’t confess that she knew about his nature as a returnee, nor that she herself wasn’t who everyone believed. Not without alerting the system that watched every step.
—Emil… —she said softly, breaking the silence—. I need to tell you something, something few know, and it’s important that you trust me.
He looked at her, with that mix of weariness and hope so familiar to her.
—Of course, Beatriz. After what happened, I’m willing to listen.
They stopped in a small park, sitting down on a bench. Beatriz took a deep breath before beginning.
—What we faced today wasn’t just any creature. It was a witch, but before becoming one, that being… was a magical girl. A young woman with a pure soul and a wish so strong it became her downfall.
Emil frowned, taking in every word.
—A magical girl? How can someone like that become something so… dark?
—Magical girls make contracts with Incubators, creatures that grant them a wish in exchange for fighting Wanders. But if they fall into despair, their Soul Gem becomes corrupted. And then… they transform. They are the fuel of the cycle.
Emil clenched his fists.
—That’s… monstrous.
Beatriz nodded gravely.
—And the worst part is that no one else remembers. Everything gets sealed. But you and I… we know the truth.
He looked at her again, this time with a strange gleam in his eyes. It wasn’t just rage or resolve. It was recognition. As if, in some corner of his soul, something stirred upon hearing her words.
—This isn’t like the previous times —he murmured to himself, barely audible.
Beatriz pretended not to hear it.
—If we manage to close the rift where the Incubators come from, we could stop all this. But I can’t do it alone.
Emil watched her in silence for a few seconds. Then, with a resolute expression:
—I’m with you in this, Bea. I won’t let them destroy more lives.
And for the first time in countless repetitions, the cycle faltered.
The sun kept climbing as the first signs of urban bustle began to stir. Emil and Beatriz remained seated a while longer, without needing words. There was something tacit between them, an understanding born from shared combat and the secret they now carried together.
Beatriz looked at the sky slowly clearing, as if the dawn validated that they had done the right thing. But she knew they couldn’t remain in that moment for long.
—We need to inform the others —she murmured, more to herself than to Emil.
He nodded, understanding immediately.
—Are you going to tell them everything?
Beatriz shook her head softly while pulling out her phone.
—Only what’s necessary… for now. Enough so they’ll help us. Enough so we can act before the cycle resets or something worse awakens.
She opened the group chat she had created with Sora, Aki, and Miguel Ángel. Until then, it had been a place to coordinate training, club schedules, or simply share memes during chaotic workdays. But now, that space would take on a new meaning. They would no longer just be companions… they would be allies.
With determination, Beatriz began to write:
Group Chat: Sora, Aki, Miguel Ángel, Beatriz, and Emil
Beatriz: Guys, I just spoke with Emil. He already knows about the witches and the Incubators. We’ve formed a new alliance, and I think we have an idea to make the most of the Seed of Chaos we obtained today.
Sora: That’s great, Bea! What do you have in mind?
Beatriz: Before we purify the Seed of Chaos, I think we could scan it. Maybe we can track the energy signature it emits and find more rifts or even other seeds.
Aki: That sounds interesting. If we manage it, we could get ahead of the Incubators’ moves and prevent more transformations into witches.
Miguel Ángel: I like the idea. Where could we run the scan?
Emil: I have access to some advanced equipment at the company. We could use the lab after hours to scan it without raising suspicion.
Beatriz: That’s perfect. We don’t have much time, so we need to work fast. Also, after the scan, we’ll purify the seed to ensure the magical girl’s soul rests in peace.
Sora: We’re with you, Bea! This could be a big breakthrough.
Aki: I’m ready to help. Whatever it takes.
Miguel Ángel: Me too. We won’t let these things keep happening without doing something about it.
Beatriz: Thanks, guys. See you at the lab tonight. Emil, can you make sure we have smooth access?
Emil: Of course. I’ll take care of it.
Beatriz: Good. Together, we’re going to take the next step toward stopping this macabre cycle.
Collecting the Seed of Chaos
Amid the witch’s remains, a few minutes earlier, Beatriz had found a small dark gem: the Seed of Chaos. It wasn’t bigger than a marble, but it pulsed with dense, almost agonized energy, like a whisper trapped in crystal. Beatriz didn’t dare hold it directly for long; she took from her belt a small Protocore container, sealed with isolation rings and stabilizing runes.
—Rest —she murmured as she placed the seed inside—. I promise, I’ll make sure this pain wasn’t in vain.
The vessel tinked softly as it closed. Emil approached, brow furrowed, watching closely.
—That container…? A protocol Type D? You had it prepared?
Beatriz nodded without looking at him, her expression grave.
—I requested it from the hunters’ system a few days ago. Out of intuition… or fear. Something told me we’d need it.
Emil lowered his gaze to the now-opaque crystal containing the seed.
—I’ve never seen anything like this —he said quietly, though he wasn’t speaking only of the seed.
Inside, his mind spun. In all previous cycles—241 failed attempts, each one a repeated hell with small variations—he had never collected a Seed of Chaos. Much less with Beatriz’s help. Something had diverged. Something was different. And he couldn’t ignore the fact that she… seemed stronger, more determined than in any of his memories.
Beatriz glanced at him sidelong. She knew Emil overthought… but she also knew she had to keep up the façade. Any mistake could betray that she wasn’t the same Beatriz he’d been trying to save in each reset. But perhaps, precisely because of that, this time they’d have a real chance.
—We achieved something important today, Emil —she finally said, breaking the silence and closing the security compartment—. Something that can change the course of this cycle.
It took him a second to nod, but when he did, it was with a strange conviction.
—And this… This is only the beginning.
Unicorns’ Base Laboratory, Night
The lab was silent, with only the hum of machines bearing witness to the clandestine meeting. Beatriz, Emil, Sora, Aki, and Miguel Ángel moved quickly, setting up the equipment needed for the scan.
—This is what remains of a life overflowing with suffering —said Beatriz, holding the Seed of Chaos carefully—. If we can find a way to track this energy, we might prevent more girls from ending up like this.
—Almost ready —Emil replied, adjusting the controls—. This scanner should capture any residual energy signature and project it into the system.
Sora looked at Beatriz with curiosity.
—What do you think we’ll find?
—If my intuition’s right, a network of energy connected to more rifts and seeds like this one. We need to understand how the Incubators are using these energies to maintain their cycle.
—The scan has started —Aki reported, focused on the monitor—. What happens if we find something unexpected?
—We adapt and move forward —said Miguel Ángel, firmly—. We can’t allow this to continue.
The scanner lights flickered as the machine analyzed the seed. A hologram began projecting, showing an intricate pattern of energy lines branching like roots from the seed.
—Look at that… —said Emil, surprised—. It looks like a map. It’s as if this seed were connected to multiple energy points.
—Just what I feared —Beatriz answered, astonished—. This confirms there are more rifts and possibly other seeds. If we follow these connections, we could find the critical points the Incubators are using.
—This is huge —said Sora—. Could we really close these rifts?
—If we find the origin, we can try to seal it —Beatriz said with determination—. But we need more information and more resources.
Aki pointed to a stronger connection on the map.
—Here. This seems to be the largest. Maybe we should start by investigating this point.
—What do we do now? —Miguel Ángel asked, looking to Beatriz.
—We’ll purify the seed so the girl can rest in peace —Beatriz decided—. Then we’ll prepare to investigate these connections. It’s a step toward breaking the Incubators’ cycle.
—We achieved something important today, Emil —Beatriz said, as she stored the seed back in the secure container.
Emil nodded, his gaze still reflecting the intensity of recent events, yet feeling a growing connection with Beatriz and her cause.
Beatriz studied the holographic map closely, watching how the energy lines extended from the Seed of Chaos. Each point blinked intermittently, as if alive.
—There’s something else here —she said, indicating the connections—. These signals… they seem to be moving, like Incubators’ behavior patterns.
—What do you mean? —Emil asked, stepping closer to examine it.
—I think these signals are the Incubators moving to collect the Seeds of Chaos. They probably use them to purify magical girls’ Soul Gems after a certain number of uses, say three. If that’s true, then every time a signal goes dark, it would indicate a magical girl has been purified, but…
Beatriz let the idea settle before continuing.
—At some point, a signal should appear that doesn’t move. That would be the main rift, the origin of all this. Where the Incubators return to collect and regenerate their resources.
Aki nodded slowly, following the logic.
—It’s like searching for a needle in a haystack, but if we find that fixed signal, we could be much closer to stopping them.
—Exactly —said Beatriz, inspired—. It’s like when comic-book heroes figure out how to track the enemy. We need to watch and wait for one of these signals to stay motionless. That will be our target.
Sora smiled, seeing the spark of hope in Beatriz.
—It’s a solid strategy. Plus, if we keep watching, we could anticipate and save magical girls before they become witches.
—How do we proceed? —asked Miguel Ángel.
—We’ll scan these signals continuously —said Beatriz—. And in the meantime, we’ll prepare for the moment that fixed signal appears. That will be our time to act.
Beatriz drew a breath, looking at Emil with determination.
—Emil, could you provide this program view to everyone? —she asked, pointing to the holographic map showing the energy signals—. That way we can keep an eye on the app in our spare moments, without neglecting our activities.
Emil nodded, understanding the importance of keeping everyone connected.
—Sure, I can do that. I’ll share the interface with everyone so you can monitor from your devices.
Beatriz smiled gratefully before continuing, her voice firm but full of concern.
—When we notice a point that doesn’t move or an anomaly, we’ll call the others. Whoever is closest can observe and assess the situation. But remember —she warned, looking at each of them—, don’t rush in blindly. There could be witches, magical girls, or Incubators trying to stop us. Incubators are cunning and can manipulate magical girls with their words. We don’t want to turn this into an all-out battle.
Sora folded his arms, thoughtful.
—You’re right. If we rush, we could make things worse.
Beatriz nodded, her tone gentler now.
—Also… I want all of us to be safe. We can’t take unnecessary risks.
Aki, ever practical, added:
—If we act carefully, we’ll be able to help magical girls more effectively and purify the Seeds of Chaos before they turn into witches.
Beatriz took the Seed of Chaos in her hands, ready to purify it.
—Then, carefully, let’s purify this seed and give this soul rest.
The others nodded, sharing a moment of silence in memory of the girl who had suffered so much.
The laboratory fell quiet. The machines had finished their scan, and the energy map remained floating in the air, suspended like a luminous spiderweb.
Beatriz slowly approached the center of the room, where they had placed a small circular base. Upon it rested the Protocore container, sealed and still vibrating with the seed’s latent darkness.
—It’s time —Beatriz said softly, more to the trapped soul than to those present, as she unscrewed the lid.
Sora and Aki stepped closer when she beckoned them. Beatriz extended a hand to each, and without another word, they formed a triangle, palms joined. In that instant, the air seemed to grow denser, as if the world recognized that something sacred was about to occur.
—Close your eyes… feel —whispered Beatriz, guiding their focus.
The three girls began to glow faintly. Their auras—pale gold for Beatriz, red for Sora, and violet for Aki—began to intertwine in a gentle spiral flowing around them, enveloping the Protocore container as well. The container began to respond with a slight pulse, like a heart starting to beat again.
—We’re here —Beatriz murmured—. Three wills united to grant you rest. May the pain dissipate. May hope return to the light. May your soul find its way back.
A soft crack formed in the crystal. It wasn’t destructive, but liberating. From within emerged a dark, trembling light that slowly began to whiten upon contact with their joined auras.
Then, the seed itself changed color. It shifted from black-purple to pearly white, shining like a new star. It no longer hurt. It no longer screamed.
Beatriz gently squeezed Sora’s and Aki’s hands.
—Thank you for not giving up —she said, voice trembling, addressing the magical girl’s soul—. You did it. You can go now.
The purified seed slowly disintegrated, dissolving into thousands of particles of light that spiraled upward through the lab, as if guided by an invisible breeze. One last spark, in the shape of a translucent white butterfly, fluttered in the air before passing through the ceiling and disappearing into the sky.
For a few seconds, no one dared break the silence.
Beatriz released her friends’ hands gently. Tears glistened in all three pairs of eyes, but there was also an unexpected calm.
—One less in the cycle —Sora said, in a thin voice.
—One more we managed to free —Aki added, looking at the empty place where the seed had been.
Beatriz closed her eyes. For the first time since all this began, she felt they had won something more than a battle. They had given peace.
And that, by itself, was already a miracle.
Chapter 45: The Cold that Heals: Kael’s Awakening
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
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Chapter Text
Beatriz watched Emil while he prepared the program interface to share it with the others. Though he didn’t know it, the “Lov-meter” that measured her relationship with Emil was rising in her abilities menu, logging her Storge love—based on the friendship and connection forming between them.
At a distance, Miguel Ángel, always ready to support, observed the group with a mix of admiration and concern, his filial and agape love toward Beatriz growing stronger with every step they took together. Beatriz, unaware of these dynamics, remained focused on the mission and everyone’s safety.
Sora and Aki, as magical girls, adjusted their devices to integrate into the monitoring system. Aware of the risks, they knew they had to be prepared for any eventuality, especially with the Incubators lurking.
Meanwhile, in the underworld, Lucien dismantled a rival gang with his characteristic cold and calculated style. Beatriz had anticipated these moves, using the opportunity to advance the witch investigation and coordinate battles with her allies. But she always kept an eye on Lucien, sending him a quick message to make sure he was all right.
Lucien, surrounded by the chaos of his own making, smiled when he saw Beatriz’s message. Although he was immersed in his dark world, he couldn’t help but “watch” his Little Owl—as he affectionately called her—through his mechanical raven, Diaval.
In the midst of the takedown, the last gang member, before succumbing, let out a warning with a manic laugh:
—Khaërôn is on the move. He won’t let the Incubators keep the business.
Lucien frowned, processing the information. He knew things were getting more complicated than they seemed, and that he would have to take measures soon to protect not only his territory, but also Beatriz and her team.
While Emil finished installing the interface for the team, Beatriz allowed herself a few seconds of respite. They had taken an important step, but she knew this was only the beginning of a silent war. Her gaze drifted for a moment to the particles of light that still seemed to float in the air, as if the peace just achieved resisted leaving.
In the midst of that stillness, her device vibrated with a notification. Upon checking, she found the message she had been waiting for for days:
“Your attendance at the International Medical Congress is confirmed. We count on your presence at the regenerative biotechnology analysis panel. —Dr. Kael Alistair.”
Beatriz sighed with mild surprise. Despite the recent chaos, Kael hadn’t forgotten his invitation. He had sent it in advance, before all this erupted, as a gesture of professional courtesy… or perhaps as an excuse to see her again.
She then remembered what Kael had told her in their last conversation:
“I don’t usually invite just anyone to these events, Beatriz. But you seem to see beyond the procedure. I want to know what you think, from your unique lens.”
Although deep down she suspected there was more behind that calculated coldness, she decided not to turn down the opportunity. The congress was not only a platform to observe potential moves from the laboratories and infiltrated Incubators, but also a window to help someone.
—Guys —she said suddenly, catching the group’s attention—. Tomorrow I’ll be a bit away. I’ll be attending a medical event I was invited to by Dr. Kael. But I’ll be keeping an eye on the energy map at all times.
—Kael Alistair? That Kael? —Sora asked, one eyebrow raised.
Beatriz only smiled with a blend of resignation and irony.
—Yes. That Kael. But this time I’m not going just out of courtesy… There are signs that something could be happening there too.
As the group said goodnight, Beatriz prepared her uniform discreetly. She was going to need all her sensitivity for the next day. Because among doctors, sharp looks, and rehearsed smiles, a new silent battle awaited her.
Beatriz arrived at the medical congress; a mix of solemnity and bustling activity filled the air. It was an event where the latest medical advances were discussed and presented, and where, unfortunately, those seeking hope in desperate situations also gathered.
Dr. Kael, an oncology specialist, was present, known for his cold efficiency and analytical mind. Despite his reserved nature, he couldn’t help noticing Beatriz, who stood out among the crowd for her determined posture and vigilant gaze.
Meanwhile, a young magical girl was at the congress with her mother. She had made a simple yet deeply significant wish: to be able to eat bread—something her severe allergy had denied her all her life. The wish, though innocent, had been corrupted. Instead of being cured, the girl had developed cancer, and her hope was crumbling quickly.
Beatriz noticed the dark aura around the girl, a sign that her despair was leading her toward transforming into a witch. Without wasting time, she approached Kael, who was about to present his talk.
—Doctor Kael, I need your help to contain a delicate situation —said Beatriz, her voice firm yet urgent—. There’s a threat here that could endanger everyone present, and I’ll need your medical expertise to protect patients and doctors while I handle… the rest.
Kael looked at her incredulously at first, but something in Beatriz’s seriousness convinced him. Together, they followed the young girl into an isolated room, where the environment began to distort, a clear sign the transformation was underway.
—Beatriz, what is happening! —Kael asked, watching reality twist around them.
—You’re seeing how a witch is born, doctor —Beatriz replied, pulling out her watch, ready to release her nanomachine armor—. We need to keep everyone safe and purify this Seed of Chaos before it’s too late.
The girl’s mother, in panic, tried to comfort her daughter, not fully understanding what was happening. Beatriz, with Kael’s help, would have to confront the witch, protect the others, and show Kael the true darkness behind corrupted wishes.
The situation at the medical congress grew increasingly chaotic. The young magical girl stood on the verge of fully transforming into a witch; her mother, desperate, tried to hold her as the atmosphere twisted into a nightmare of ice and despair.
—Doctor Kael, we need to move the mother away before it’s too late! —shouted Beatriz, summoning Ixion, the imposing being of lightning and electricity, to protect the attendees trapped in the labyrinth.
Kael stood firm, but there was evident fear in his eyes. He knew he had the power to intervene, but he also knew the danger his uncontrolled ice could pose. Beatriz drew closer, her voice gentle yet urgent.
—Kael, you can’t fear your power now. We need to channel it to save everyone here. Let me help you.
Kael, a perfectionist, analytical Virgo, was used to absolute control. The chaos and uncertainty of this situation left him overwhelmed, but he also knew Beatriz was right. He nodded slowly, accepting her help.
Beatriz created a rock shell around them to provide privacy, a dome that isolated them from the external chaos.
—Kael, I need you to trust me and your own power. Let it flow into my heart. Don’t fear it; this isn’t only to destroy—it’s to protect and heal. We’re going to channel your energy to invoke someone who can help us balance cold with hope.
Kael closed his eyes, took a deep breath, and allowed the ice to flow from within him. Beatriz felt the cold envelop her, but also a pure energy, full of potential. She concentrated this energy in her heart, calling forth a new ally.
From the icy energy emerged Jack Frost, with an appearance inspired by “Rise of the Guardians.” With a mischievous smile and an air of confidence, Jack Frost took hold of Kael’s ice, transforming it into a force for good—to protect and fight against the darkness.
—Shiva had other matters, but I’m here to help. Cold can be frightening, but it can also be beautiful and protective. —said Jack Frost, winking at Kael.
The witch, now fully transformed, was a grotesque vision of despair and ice. Her form was made of sharp ice crystals, and her voice resounded like the crack of a moving glacier. She had the power to freeze the soul of those who drew too near.
Jack Frost, with Kael and Beatriz’s help, set the stage for a battle that would require both strategy and strength. They had to purify the Seed of Chaos and give rest to the young girl lost to her despair—while Kael faced his greatest fear: the true power of his own heart.
The witch emerged fully transformed, her body a shapeless, twisted mass of blackened bread, covered in mold. The air around her filled with an acrid, rancid smell—a tangible representation of the cancer that had consumed the magical girl before her transformation.
The texture of her body shifted constantly, as if in a perpetual process of fermentation and decomposition. Every movement from the witch sent tiny mold spores drifting through the air, a latent danger threatening to infect everything around her.
Beatriz and Kael stood firm. Kael, feeling the emotional weight of the moment, prepared to channel his icy power.
—This witch is a reflection of her suffering, of her desire to be healed. But her energy is out of control. —said Beatriz, looking at Kael—. We can counter this with your ice, Kael. The cold can halt the spread of decay and bring calm.
Jack Frost, beside Kael, nodded with an encouraging smile.
—We can freeze her pain, calm her fury, and give her peace. Don’t let fear overwhelm you, Kael. The power you have is more than destructive; it can be a beacon of hope.
Kael inhaled deeply, letting the cold flow through him. He visualized ice not as a force to destroy, but as a means to preserve, protect, and heal. With a decisive gesture, he released a wave of frozen energy that began to envelop the witch.
The black bread mass crackled at the touch of the cold, halting its putrid advance. The mold spores froze in the air, creating a spectacle of suspended crystals, gleaming with reflected light.
Beatriz, seeing the opening, channeled Kael’s power through her connection with Jack Frost. The three, united, created a whirlwind of snow and ice that purified the space, advancing toward the witch’s center—the Seed of Chaos.
—This is our moment, Kael. —Beatriz said with determination—. Trust your power, trust us. We’re going to purify her and give her the rest she deserves.
The ice, now a manifestation of compassion and protection, reached the witch’s core, touching her nucleus. The blackened mass began to crumble, transforming into a gentle snowfall that drifted down calmly, leaving behind the purified Seed of Chaos.
The labyrinth slowly dissolved, leaving all the attendees at the medical congress in their places as if nothing had happened. However, their faces reflected a subtle confusion. The clocks showed that time had passed, yet none could remember the minutes—or even hours—that seemed to have vanished.
The magical girl’s mother, still tearful, looked around without understanding.
—What… what am I doing here? —she asked, rubbing her temples, trying to remember.
Murmurs began to fill the hall. Doctors and attendees checked their notes, trying to find a rational explanation for their confusion.
—Has Dr. Kael’s lecture already happened? —one doctor wondered, staring at his watch in bewilderment—. I could have sworn it was just about to start…
Beatriz watched everyone, understanding that the labyrinth had erased the memories of those unaware of magic. Her gaze settled on Kael, who also seemed affected—but for different reasons.
—Doctor Kael, we need to talk in private. —Beatriz said firmly, nodding toward a nearby empty room, while discreetly picking up the Seed of Chaos and storing it in the special container.
Kael nodded slowly, still processing what had happened, and followed her. Jack Frost, in his new outfit—jeans, black hooded sweater, and Converse sneakers—materialized silently behind them, ensuring everything remained under control.
Once inside the room, Beatriz closed the door, letting a silence heavy with tension settle between them. Jack leaned casually against a wall, his expression relaxed, but his eyes reflecting deeper wisdom.
—Doctor Kael, what we witnessed is only the tip of the iceberg. —Beatriz began, crossing her arms—. What we’re facing is a threat from another dimension. Witches are magical girls who have been corrupted, and the Incubators—those creatures that manipulate girls into making contracts—use their life energy as fuel.
Kael frowned, trying to absorb what Beatriz was saying.
—How is it possible for something like this to happen? To manipulate reality itself? —he asked, his voice low but filled with incredulity.
—The Incubators are masters of manipulation. —Beatriz said, her tone somber—. They alter perception, erase memories, and use these girls’ lives as kindling for a bonfire—all to “renew the energy of the universe,” or so they claim. But what they really do is toy with the emotions and hope of the young and vulnerable.
Kael clenched his fists, his frustration and anger evident.
—So, this is some kind of cycle of suffering they perpetuate? —he murmured—. And what can we do to stop it?
Beatriz stepped forward, determination clear in her gaze.
—We can fight. We can protect the magical girls and keep them from falling into the despair that turns them into witches. —she said—. But we need allies, people who understand what’s at stake and are willing to stand up to these manipulators.
Jack Frost intervened, his voice gentle yet firm.
—Kael, your power is greater than you imagine. —he said—. Today you used it to save lives, to bring calm and healing. In time, you’ll learn to master your fear and use it to change the fate of many more.
Kael took a deep breath, letting Jack’s and Beatriz’s words sink in.
—I’m willing to help. —he said at last—. I can’t allow these girls to suffer any more. Tell me more about what we can do to stop these Incubators and protect the magical girls.
Beatriz smiled faintly, seeing a valuable ally in Kael.
—It’s a long and dangerous road, but together, we can make a difference. —she replied.
After the private conversation, Beatriz and Kael returned to the main hall where the others had gathered, still wearing expressions of confusion. Beatriz opened the group chat she shared with the other team members, typing quickly to brief them on the situation.
Beatriz: “Team, we’ve found a new way to track the Seeds of Chaos. I’ve developed a program that can follow their energy signature, but it will require our constant observation to identify patterns. If we notice a repeated signal in the same area, it’s very likely a magical girl. But if we see a massive signal that appears out of nowhere, it could be the manifestation of a witch. This is crucial, because witches are incredibly dangerous.”
Beatriz: “Remember, don’t go alone. Witches can sense the Evol energy of adults with powers like ours, and that attracts them even more, increasing their danger level. I don’t want anyone else to go through what happened to our five Hunter companions… I suspect they were devoured. Sanity is key here, and if we fall into despair, not even the ‘Lionheart’ spell will help us.”
Beatriz: “Please, if you see anything suspicious, call or message immediately. Jack Frost will be with Kael to help him manage his ice power and provide another perspective. Also, we’ve managed to have Jack take a more practical form to stay close at all times.”
Kael looked at Beatriz with a mix of surprise and gratitude when she pulled out a bracelet with a metal snowflake and handed it to him.
—This is Jack Frost. —Beatriz said with a smile—. In this form, he can help you when you need it, offering support and advice. It will also serve as a constant link to learn to channel your ice power better.
Kael took the bracelet, placing it on his wrist. He felt a faint vibration, almost as if Jack Frost were present in tiny form, ready to step in when necessary.
—Thank you, Beatriz. —Kael said, admiring the snowflake’s detail—. I promise not to take this lightly. We’ll work together to protect everyone from this threat.
The chat continued with messages from the others, confirming they had received the instructions and were ready to act with caution. Beatriz knew the road would be dangerous, but with every team member committed and prepared, they had a real chance to face—and defeat—these dark forces.
Chapter 46: The Inventor and the Dragon: The Mirror of the Soul
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
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🎉 Let’s celebrate this milestone together!
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Chapter Text
The night was clear, but in Beatriz’s heart, something stirred like a silent storm.
She still remembered the eyes of that magical girl at the congress. The fear, the broken hope, the inevitable tragedy. She had purified her Seed of Chaos with hands joined once more with Sora and Aki, and for the first time she felt distinctly how fragile the line was between existing… and disappearing.
That night, before her window, the city’s reflection merged with the reflection of her own doubts.
“If I had died today… would Lucien have known who I really am? How much of what he loves is an illusion?”
She had come too far to keep hiding. He loved her. Not only in a passionate way, but with the kind of love that defies systems, that needs no manuals or guides. The kind of love once reserved for the original MC… but that now belonged to her. To Beatriz.
And for that reason, she had to tell him the truth.
She opened her rewards menu with trembling hands. The system flickered with a golden glow. She had accumulated enough points.
She navigated to the “claimable items” section.
There, among gleaming items and fantastic treasures, one called to her with the same clarity as a magical chime:
“Beast’s Mirror — Truth Level: Absolute.
‘Only one who truly loves will be able to see, without breaking, what the soul tenderly hides.’”
Beatriz selected the item. The mirror appeared floating over her palm: ancient, adorned with metallic roses that shone as if they contained the memory of a fairy tale.
—Now or never —she whispered.
Hours later, she arrived at Lucien’s penthouse.
She didn’t carry her usual confidence or playful tone. This time, she came dressed in vulnerability. Determination hid behind her lashes, but it was there, beating hard.
Lucien, a true Aries, noticed immediately. He scanned her with his gaze without saying anything. He took her hand naturally and led her straight to his office, closing the door firmly, keeping Noctis, Umbra, and nosy Raúl—who always seemed to know more than he said—at bay.
Beatriz arrives at Lucien’s penthouse, feeling the pressure of the moment and the weight of what she is about to reveal. When she enters, Lucien notices her nervousness at once; his sharp eyes catch every small gesture. He guides her to his office, closing the door behind them to avoid interruptions from the curious interns (Noctis and Umbra) and the blacksmith (Raúl), always involved in everything.
Lucien, being Aries, faces the situation with a mix of curiosity and concern. He sits across from Beatriz on the couch, his brows slightly furrowed.
—What is it that has you so uneasy? —he asks, his tone direct but softened by genuine concern.
Beatriz takes a deep breath.
—Lucien, I… I love you. There’s no other way to say it. What I feel for you is real, and I want you to know it before… well, before things change any further. Everything that has happened has made me reflect, and I think it’s time to be completely honest with you.
Lucien looks at her intently, trying to decipher her words.
—Change? What do you mean by that?
Beatriz takes out the Beast’s Mirror, adorned with metallic roses.
—This mirror will show you something important. I want you to see who I really am, not just what I appear to be. You need to know the truth, the whole truth.
Lucien, intrigued but skeptical, crosses his arms—a very Aries posture.
—All right, show me. But I hope it’s not some kind of trick.
Beatriz holds the mirror to her chest and makes her request:
—Please, show how my soul appears. —The mirror glows intensely, bathing the room in a warm, gentle light. She hands the mirror to Lucien, face down.
Lucien, still doubtful, flips it over slowly. At first, what he sees is normal, as if looking through a camera. But as the vision lifts, he comes face-to-face with Beatriz’s true face, a face with features he had never seen before, yet strangely familiar.
Lucien took the mirror between his fingers, and as he raised it, the image that emerged was so vivid he could almost hear the breathing of what it showed.
And there she was.
Not disguised by system filters or appearances.
Not as the polished version of a video game heroine or the idealized protagonist of an otome route.
But her, in her most real form.
The face that emerged from the reflection had a beauty hard to classify. At first glance, her features could pass as European: fair skin, delicate structure. But there was something in her physiognomy that didn’t fit neatly into any mold. It was as if memory tried to assign her a nationality and failed each time. Something in her aura said: “I’m not from here, but not from there either.”
Her black hair fell softly, with a fringe combed to the right side that framed her large light-brown eyes, almost amber, where all the emotions the world had once tried to extinguish were reflected. They were the eyes of someone who had lived many lives, even if she didn’t quite remember them.
But what most drew his attention—what made it impossible to forget her—were the beauty marks.
Four, in such a unique arrangement they seemed like personal constellations upon her skin:
One just beneath her left eye, at the edge of the tear duct: like a tear that decided to live there.
Another, subtle, beneath the lower lip on the same side, as if guarding words that were never spoken.
A third on the right cheek, midway between smile and silence: a point of balance.
And finally, one above the left eyebrow, like a star watching over her thoughts.
Lucien felt something inside him stop. As if the image before him were not only true, but also familiar. And yet he couldn’t name it. Not yet.
“Who are you really… Beatriz?”
Lucien’s eyes widen, his mind struggling to understand.
—What is this? How is it that…? —His voice trembles slightly, unusual for him. The image in the mirror triggers something deep within. As an Aries, his reaction is initially disbelief, followed by a surge of intense emotions.
Suddenly, his vision darkens for a moment and, in his mind, the system informs him: “Congratulations, thanks to Agape love at 70%, the special scenario has been unlocked: ‘The Inventor and the Dragon.’”
Lucien clutches his head, memories flooding his mind. Fragments of his past with “the inventor” begin to surface, a mix of confusion and clarity. He sets the mirror aside, his eyes seeking Beatriz’s.
—Beatriz… This is— He can’t finish the sentence, still trying to process the avalanche of information and emotions. But in his gaze there is a new understanding, a deeper connection. Despite the shock, a flash of relief and affection appears in his eyes.
—Thank you for trusting me.
Lucien sets the mirror aside, his gaze fixed on Beatriz, still processing all he has seen and felt. His breathing is a little heavier, as if he had crossed an emotional storm. Beatriz approaches slowly, noticing the intensity in his eyes.
She sits beside him, her fingers softly brushing his hand before intertwining with it. Her touch is gentle yet firm, an anchor for them both in that sea of emotions.
—Lucien, —she whispers, her voice full of tenderness and curiosity— I know you saw more than just my real face. What else did you see? What did the mirror show you?
Lucien squeezes her hand lightly, searching for the right words. His gaze drops to their interlaced hands, as if seeking in them the strength to explain what he just experienced.
—I saw… I saw fragments of memories, of another life, another time. There was a woman… an inventor, and a dragon, a protector, —he says slowly, as if each word were a discovery—. It was you, Beatriz. But also someone else, someone who looked different, yet felt the same.
Beatriz, still surprised by what the mirror has revealed to Lucien, feels the need to understand more about this unexpected connection. With a mix of curiosity and sincerity, she looks Lucien in the eyes and, taking his hand gently, asks:
—Lucien, I know this is a lot and… to be honest, I don’t remember any of this story you mentioned. I never knew about “The Inventor and the Dragon.” —Beatriz pauses, choosing her words—. But if you want… we can use the mirror to see that past event together. We could discover it together, understand more about what binds us. What do you say?
Lucien, still processing what he has seen, nods slowly, intrigued by the possibility of reliving that fragment of the past with Beatriz. His gaze—usually impenetrable—softens as he replies:
—Yes, I want to see it with you. Maybe that way we can understand all this better.
Beatriz smiles faintly, relieved by his answer. Holding the mirror between them, she speaks firmly:
—Mirror, please show us the story of “The Inventor and the Dragon.”
The mirror, held between both their hands, began to glow with a warm, enveloping radiance. It wasn’t an aggressive light, but soft as nostalgia, as if it remembered for them what had been buried for centuries.
The air grew dense, laden with echoes that did not belong to the present. A faint breeze—impossible in a sealed penthouse—brushed Beatriz’s face, carrying the scent of old oil, forged iron, and wilted flowers. Before them, as if a veil were being drawn back, the sleeping story began to reveal itself.
~ Unlocked Fragment: “The Inventor and the Dragon” ~
The lonely girl and the wish for protection
The image in the mirror begins to take shape, revealing a scene that unfolds before Beatriz and Lucien’s eyes. A young woman of solitary aspect appears—she resembles “the other Beatriz”—dressed in a clearly steampunk style: a fitted corset, worn aviator goggles, high boots, and a belt full of tools and mechanical pieces. Her face reflects determination, but also a deep sadness.
The young woman walks along a dusty road toward a dilapidated castle she has adopted as her home. It’s evident she has lived in neglect, scavenging materials from trash for her inventions. As she advances, some townspeople look at her with disdain. “There goes the new witch!” they shout, throwing stones and insults. Despite possessing no magic, her ability to create complex devices has sown fear and distrust among the villagers.
She quickens her pace, ignoring the insults, until she reaches the safety of her castle. Once inside, she shuts the door behind her and leans against it, breathing deeply to calm herself. Her refuge is a chaotic yet cozy place, full of gears, tubes, and half-built contraptions.
Amid her loneliness, the young woman—known as “The Inventor”—feels overwhelmed by the outside world. She fervently wishes for someone to protect her, someone who not only defends her physically, but also understands and values her for who she is. In that moment of vulnerability, an incubator appears before her, a small, peculiar creature with an unsettling aura.
—I can grant you a wish —says the incubator in a serene voice, though this one has little brown paws—. In exchange, you’ll have to comply with certain conditions, but you’ll obtain what you most long for.
The Inventor, tears in her eyes and her heart heavy, answers without hesitation:
—I wish to have someone who will protect me forever, someone so strong they will never be afraid.
The incubator nods, and with a flash of light, the Inventor’s wish becomes reality. Before her appears a majestic white dragon with red eyes, an imposing presence radiating power and courage.
Lucien, in his dragon form, becomes the Inventor’s protector. At first, their relationship is based on the need for protection, but soon it evolves. The Inventor finds in Lucien a confidant—someone who not only defends her but also appreciates her ingenuity and creativity. Lucien, for his part, is fascinated by the Inventor’s brilliant mind and her ability to turn scrap into technological marvels.
They develop a deep bond beyond words. Lucien begins to understand the Inventor’s pain—her loneliness and struggle to be accepted in a world that fears the unknown. And although he is powerful and brave, he learns to value the Inventor’s inner strength, manifested in her perseverance and creativity.
Over time, Lucien’s presence becomes ever more essential in the Inventor’s life. His dragon form is imposing, but it also creates a physical barrier that limits emotional closeness between them. Observing the Inventor’s persistent loneliness and her desire for a more human connection, Lucien makes a crucial decision.
One night, while the Inventor works tirelessly on a new project, Lucien approaches with a thoughtful expression.
—I’ve watched how hard you strive, how fiercely you fight —Lucien says, his deep voice resonating in the room—. I want to be more than your protector. I want to stand by your side in a way you can better understand.
Before the Inventor can respond, Lucien closes his eyes, and his body begins to shine intensely, turning into white and red particles. His imposing draconic figure starts to change. The white scales retract, and his shape becomes slimmer and more human. Finally, before the Inventor stands a young man of ethereal appearance, with bright red eyes and hair almost as white as the moon—still echoing his former form.
The Inventor, stunned, looks at him in silence for a few moments. Her heart races, not only from surprise, but also from the unexpected warmth she feels upon seeing him in this new form.
—Why have you done this? —she asks at last, her voice trembling slightly.
Lucien smiles softly.
—I want you to see me not only as your protector, but as someone who can walk beside you, share your joys and sorrows in a way I couldn’t before. I am not only strength and protection; I want to be your friend, your equal.
Something melts inside the Inventor—a barrier she had built around her heart. Lucien’s closeness, now in a form that allows her to meet his eyes and touch his hand without fear, fills her with a sense of warmth and understanding.
The Inventor’s curiosity
Lucien’s transformation leaves the Inventor speechless—but only for a moment. Her ever-active mind quickly fills with questions. How did Lucien change form? What magical or technological principles underlie that metamorphosis? The desire to understand the unknown begins to bubble inside her.
Without thinking twice, the Inventor steps close to Lucien, her scrutinizing gaze traveling from head to toe. Her expression shifts from amazement to pure scientific curiosity.
—This is incredible… —she murmurs as she circles Lucien, observing every detail—. How did that transformation work? May I touch? May I examine? —Before Lucien can answer, she’s already gently lifting his arm, examining the texture of his skin.
Lucien, surprised, raises an eyebrow, but soon his seriousness breaks into a soft, contained laugh.
—Are you trying to analyze me like one of your inventions? —he asks, amused.
The Inventor, without stopping, answers honestly.
—Of course! This is fascinating. I’ve never seen anything like it. I need to understand it, discover how it’s possible… —Suddenly realizing what she’s doing, she blushes deeply and steps back, biting her lip—. I’m sorry… it’s just… well, it’s impressive.
Still chuckling, Lucien takes the Inventor’s hand between his.
—Don’t apologize. I like your curiosity. It’s one of the things I admire most about you. —His red eyes soften—. But what if I show you something else? Maybe we can understand together how all this works.
Lucien’s kind tone and sincere invitation help the Inventor relax. She smiles, still a bit embarrassed, but excited by the possibility of exploring this new facet of their relationship—both physically and emotionally.
In one of those quiet moments in the castle, as Lucien and the Inventor enjoy their newly discovered closeness, a soft sound interrupts their conversation. Turning their heads, they see a small white creature with long ears and beige little paws, watching them with large, bright red eyes. It is Ku-bey, the silent observer who always appears when least expected.
The Inventor leans slightly, observing Ku-bey with a mix of curiosity and mistrust. Unlike other incubators, Ku-bey seems… different. His beige paws give him a peculiar air, almost as if he doesn’t quite fit with the rest of his kind.
—What do you need, Ku-bey? —Lucien asks, voice firm but kind.
Ku-bey tilts his head and, in a soft, neutral voice, replies:
—There is a witch nearby. It would be prudent to exterminate it before it causes more harm. —His eyes gleam as he adds—. It is also time to service your Soul Gem, Inventor.
The Inventor stands, her gaze hardening at Ku-bey’s words. It’s not the first time she has received such warnings, but they always put her on alert. However, today, something inside her feels different. A new determination kindles within.
With a decisive gesture, she heads to her workshop, where she transforms out of sight into her combat suit. Inspired by a dark steampunk design, the suit combines practicality with an imposing aesthetic. The dark leather corset, high boots, gloves, and protective goggles make her look like a warrior from another era.
She deploys her special parasol, a multifunctional weapon. When closed, it acts as a powerful shotgun; when opened, the parasol becomes a sturdy shield, capable of protecting her from the fiercest attacks.
Lucien follows, ready to accompany her on this new mission. His gaze reflects pride and concern, but he knows the Inventor is more than capable of facing any challenge that arises.
As they prepare to depart, Ku-bey watches them with his inscrutable expression. Though defective, his purpose is clear: to guide and maintain balance in this world of magic and technology.
Chapter 47: The Battle Against the Witch of the Sheets
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
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Chapter Text
The Inventor and Lucien advance toward the place indicated by Ku-bey: an abandoned factory where the air feels heavy and cold, as if the very atmosphere were steeped in despair. As they move deeper into the building, the lights flicker, and the sound of a soft whisper envelops the surroundings, as if hundreds of voices were blending into a senseless chant.
Suddenly, the witch appears. Its form is a tangle of dirty sheets and clotheslines, rising and twisting as if they had a life of their own. The sheets thrash violently, forming limbs that stretch toward the Inventor and Lucien.
—Careful! —warns Lucien, his body tensing, ready to act.
The Inventor deploys her parasol-shotgun and fires a burst of rounds at the witch, forcing its fabric limbs to recoil. The shots strike hard, but the witch seems to reform quickly, as if the damage were superficial.
—We need a different approach —the Inventor murmurs, opening her parasol and taking a defensive stance.
The witch lashes one of its limbs toward them, trying to trap them in a whirlwind of fabric. Lucien, with superhuman agility, leaps and slashes the limb with a swift strike of his claw, freeing the Inventor from the attack.
—Stay close —says Lucien, his voice firm but with a protective tone.
The Inventor nods and activates the shield mode of her parasol, blocking another attack from the witch. With a quick turn, she uses the parasol to deflect a limb into a corner of the room, pinning it there for a moment.
Lucien seizes the opening and unleashes a powerful flame of white and red particles from his hands, incinerating the sheets that form the witch’s body. The creature writhes and screams, but does not vanish entirely.
—This is more complicated than it looks —says the Inventor, frustrated.
Then, she has an idea. The Inventor opens the parasol again and fires toward the ceiling, causing a row of old lamps to fall, engulfing the witch in a rain of sparks and shattered glass. The creature shrieks and begins to fade slowly, leaving behind a seed of chaos that clatters to the floor with a metallic sound.
Ku-bey approaches, observing the seed of chaos with his inscrutable gaze. The Inventor, however, does not feel fully satisfied. Her mind is full of questions, and once Ku-bey steps away, she decides to share her concerns with Lucien.
—Lucien, there’s something I don’t understand —she begins, her voice low and full of curiosity—. Where exactly do witches come from? Why do these seeds of chaos appear, and why can they only be used three times before Ku-bey consumes them?
Lucien watches her, noting the seriousness in her eyes.
—And where do my powers come from? —she continues—. All of this feels so… calculated. As if we were pieces in a game I don’t fully understand.
Lucien nods slowly, understanding her worries.
—Those are important questions —he replies in a thoughtful tone—. But the answers may not be easy to find. What I do know is that you must keep searching for the truth, Inventor. Because in it you’ll find the key to understanding your true purpose here.
A few days after defeating another witch, the seed of chaos lies on the ground, pulsing weakly. The Inventor regards it with a mix of curiosity and disgust, while Ku-bey approaches to collect it. The small being takes it in his forepaws and inspects it for a moment before storing it in his mouth, making it disappear from sight.
—Ku-bey, I need answers —the Inventor says, her voice firm and direct—. Where do witches come from? Why can we only use these seeds of chaos three times? And more importantly, where do my powers come from?
Ku-bey lifts his gaze, his red eyes shining with a cold, calculating light.
—Witches are the result of the negative emotions of magical girls. The seeds of chaos are used to purify their Soul Gems, and when they are depleted, they simply stop being useful to you —he replies with mechanical coldness, as if reciting a manual.
The Inventor frowns, sensing there is more behind those simplistic answers.
—Why me? —she asks, taking a step closer—. I was 19 when we made the pact. From what I know, that shouldn’t have worked. Why did it work with me?
Ku-bey falls silent for a moment, something unusual for an incubator.
—You are… an anomaly —he finally admits, with a slight hesitation in his tone—. The process should not have accepted you, but it did. I don’t know why, and that is… unsettling.
The Inventor is surprised by the honesty—however vague—in Ku-bey’s answer. For the first time, she sees a crack in the perfect façade of the small being.
—And why don’t you want to answer my questions directly? —she presses on, her curiosity still unsatisfied.
Ku-bey averts his gaze, his long ears lowering slightly.
—Because I don’t want to. —His reply is simple, but the tone is different, almost as if there were a trace of emotion, a reluctance that doesn’t fit the typical nature of incubators.
The Inventor steps back, processing what she has just heard. The idea that Ku-bey—a being supposedly devoid of emotions and wholly logical—might be showing something akin to a preference or fear unsettles her.
—I’ll keep looking for answers —she declares, glancing at Lucien, who has been watching in silence, ready to support her.
Ku-bey simply nods and disappears into the darkness, leaving the Inventor and Lucien with more questions than answers.
Research in the Library
Back at the castle, the Inventor heads straight to the library, a wide hall filled with shelves crammed with dusty books and ancient documents. Her fingers trace along the spines, searching for something—anything—that might give her a clue about the origin of witches and her own powers.
At last, she stops at a book that seems unusually well preserved compared to the others. She pulls it out and opens it on a nearby table, her eyes scanning the pages quickly.
—“Star Gate” —she murmurs, reading aloud—. It seems… different from anything I’ve read so far. Maybe there’s something here.
She marks the page and closes the book, setting it aside to read later. She takes out her notebook and writes down her theories.
—Energy has to come from somewhere and transform into something else. If witches are born from negative emotions, where are the magical girls in the story? —she writes with determination—. Humanity’s progress… could it be related? No, that doesn’t make sense. I need more data.
She shuts the notebook with a sigh, feeling that the answers are close yet still out of reach.
She decides it’s time to clear her head. She heads to the kitchen, where she begins to prepare bread dough. As she kneads, she slams the dough hard, muttering under her breath.
—Anomaly! —she growls, delivering a heavy blow to the dough—. This is one riddle after another! Ku-bey and his secrets…! The witches, the seeds of chaos…!
Each word is accompanied by a stronger strike on the dough, which begins to puff up under her spirited handling. As her frustration grows, the blows become quicker and harder.
Lucien, who has been watching from the kitchen doorway, raises an eyebrow—slightly amused but also a little concerned.
—Should I worry about the dough’s safety or yours? —he asks in a light tone, approaching slowly.
The Inventor stops, looking at the dented dough beneath her hands and then at Lucien, letting out a soft laugh.
—The dough is fine. I just needed… to vent a little.
Lucien smiles, taking a seat nearby.
—Did you find anything interesting?
She nods, pulling out her notebook and showing it to Lucien.
—I’m starting to see a pattern, but there are still too many loose pieces. And this “Star Gate”… —she pauses—. Something tells me it’s important.
Lucien watches her closely, admiring her persistence and passion, but also noting the tiredness in her eyes.
—You’re pushing yourself hard. Maybe you should take a break after this —he suggests gently—. And let me help with the bread. I promise not to eat it all before it cools.
The Inventor smiles, grateful for his support.
—All right, but if you knead as hard as I do, there won’t be any dough left to bake.
They both laugh, and the tension in the air melts—if only for a moment.
The Interruption of Calm
The Inventor, in one of her early mornings of work, carefully organizes the products she has created: preserves, fresh bread, and a few small inventions, ready to be delivered to her discreet clients in the nearby village. This modest trade has allowed her to keep the castle in good condition and, more importantly, to legally purchase the land.
As she finishes sealing a box of preserves, a loud knock at the door interrupts her. Lucien, always alert, has already moved toward the entrance to make sure everything is under control.
—Who could it be at this hour? —murmurs the Inventor as she wipes her hands on her apron and approaches.
When she opens the door, she finds a group of men led by a tall, arrogant count, who looks at her with a mix of disdain and superiority.
—I am the Count of Montclair, —he declares in an imperious voice, glancing around the property—. This place is ideal for my plans. I’ve come to claim it.
The Inventor crosses her arms, looking at him with an expression between amusement and defiance.
—The land is mine. I bought it legally, —she replies calmly—. No one claimed it for 200 years, and a century ago it was put up for anyone willing to clean it and pay the taxes. I’ve done all that.
She pulls from her pocket a small clump of soil with a sprouting onion.
—See? It’s even cultivable now.
The Count frowns, clearly irritated by her composure and evidence.
—No woman can own land, —he says disdainfully—. This is absurd.
The Inventor steps forward, facing him directly.
—My father passed the title to me before he died, so go find some other place to wave your ego around. This land belongs to me—legally and rightfully.
One of the Count’s men, feeling humiliated by her tone, attempts to draw his sword to intimidate her. But before he can do anything, Lucien intervenes. With a swift, fluid motion, cloaked in his hooded cape, he grabs the blade and crushes it into pieces as if it were paper, his eyes glowing with an intensity that makes everyone step back.
The Count, clearly frightened, stumbles backward.
—We’ll see each other in court! —he yells, trying to maintain his dignity.
The Inventor smiles coldly.
—Good luck with that. It’ll take at least two years before anyone even looks at your claim.
The group retreats, murmuring among themselves, leaving the Inventor and Lucien behind. They exchange glances and share a triumphant smile.
The Inventor’s Master Plan
The river supplying the village begins to turn dark and strange colors, and soon rumors spread that the Inventor is to blame. Count Montclair, ever eager to seize any chance to discredit her, appears in the village square with an angry mob of townsfolk.
—It’s that witch and her castle’s fault! —Montclair shouts, pointing an accusatory finger toward the hill where the Inventor’s fortress stands—. Her experiments are polluting our water!
The Inventor, who had anticipated something like this, descends calmly to the village with Lucien at her side. She carries with her samples of water from her private well and a plan already in motion.
—That’s impossible, —she responds evenly, holding up a flask of crystal-clear water—. My well is intact, and this water is completely pure. If you wish, I can share it with you until the issue is resolved.
The villagers, seeing the clarity of the water, begin to doubt Montclair’s words.
—Furthermore, —she adds with a sly smile—, this water is still fit for irrigation, giving us time to fix the problem. I’ve found ancient aqueducts that, with a bit of work, could bring us clean water from another source.
Convinced by her willingness to help, the villagers accept her proposal. With Lucien’s help, they begin restoring the aqueducts, working day and night to secure a new water supply.
Meanwhile, the Inventor and Lucien carry out their plan to sabotage Montclair’s dye workshop. Following her instructions, Lucien strategically shatters granite stones upstream. As expected, the alteration in the water’s pH begins to ruin Montclair’s dye mixtures, spoiling his products.
When Montclair returns to town and tries to blame her again, the Inventor faces him with an expression of calculated innocence.
—Oh, Count, how could it have been me? —she says sweetly—. I’ve been right here, supervising the restoration of the aqueduct for the village. Besides, I have detailed records of every day I’ve spent here. —She holds up her notebook, filled with annotations.
Montclair, furious but trapped, has no choice but to accept his temporary defeat.
—By the way, Count, —the Inventor says, pulling out a carefully drafted contract—, I’ve been thinking of an arrangement to supply water to your workshop. With my new water source, we could ensure a constant flow… though, of course, there would be some conditions.
Montclair, desperate to keep his business running, grabs the contract without reading the fine print—where the Inventor has inserted a clause guaranteeing her a perpetual income from the supplied water, binding him financially to her forever.
—Well, Count, would you like to sign this agreement? —she asks with a charming smile.
With few options left, Montclair signs the contract, ensuring his workshop can operate again. But what he doesn’t know is that the Inventor, in true Loid Forger style, has bound him to an agreement that will cost him far more than he imagines.
The Inventor’s Strategy
With the aqueduct’s rehabilitation underway and clean water flowing again to the village, the Inventor now finds herself in a position of power. She knows Count Montclair won’t stay quiet, so she decides to move first.
At a public meeting, with the villagers and the Count present, the Inventor presents a detailed contract—apparently in Montclair’s favor. This document states that, instead of processing contaminated water, Montclair’s dye workshop will receive a direct supply from the restored aqueduct.
The Inventor smiles as the Count skims through the pages. Lucien, standing behind her, keeps a serious demeanor, ready for any confrontation.
—Count Montclair, this contract guarantees that your workshop will receive clean water without interruptions, —the Inventor says in a calm, professional tone—. Of course, there’s a small monthly fee for the use of the aqueduct, but I’m sure you’ll agree it’s a fair price for quality.
Montclair, desperate to restart his business, signs the contract without reading the fine print.
The fine print specifies that:
- The monthly fee will automatically increase every six months.
- Any breach will result in a severe penalty.
- The initial rate is low, but will rise exponentially.
By the time Montclair discovers these terms, it will be too late. The Inventor will have full control over his workshop’s water supply, ensuring a steady stream of income.
The Plan for the “Star Gate”
With funds secured, the Inventor devotes herself to planning the construction of the “Star Gate.” This project, based on the ancient texts she discovered in the castle’s library, promises to be the key to understanding the mysteries of her power and the origin of witches.
Lucien, intrigued by the Inventor’s determination, supports her every step of the way, making sure no obstacle gets in her path.
—With this new resource, we’ll be closer to finding answers, Lucien, —the Inventor says as she reviews the blueprints for the Star Gate—. And Count Montclair… well, let’s just say his workshop will be the first to pay for this advancement.
The Inventor spends her days immersed in the Star Gate’s designs, using her engineering knowledge to build a structure that could change her understanding of the world—and her place within it. But she also knows she must keep her Soul Gem purified, which forces her to hunt witches from time to time.
Each time the defective Ku-bey detects a witch’s presence, his unease becomes more evident. Though he fulfills his duty, something in his behavior suggests he knows more than he’s willing to reveal. The Inventor notices this but chooses not to press him yet, watching closely as she prepares for each hunt.
Lucien always accompanies her on these missions, protecting her and helping to fight the witches. The battles are intense, but the Inventor is determined to keep her Soul Gem in perfect condition.
Between the hunts and the Star Gate’s construction, her conversations with Lucien deepen. They spend more and more time together, sharing ideas, fears, and small moments of calm. Their exchanged glances begin to speak louder than words.
One night, after an especially difficult hunt, the Inventor and Lucien sit on the castle’s battlements, gazing at the stars. The quiet of the moment is broken only by their steady breathing.
—Sometimes I wonder if all this is worth it, —says the Inventor, her voice soft but full of meaning—. The witches, the hunts, this Star Gate project… I feel like I’m running against something I still can’t see.
Lucien, his gaze serious yet warm, replies:
—What you’re doing matters. Not just for you, but for everyone around you. And though the path is hard, I’m here with you. Always.
The silence that follows is full of understanding. Both know their lives are intertwined, facing an uncertain destiny together.
Meanwhile, Ku-bey watches from the shadows, more restless than ever. His defective nature prevents him from acting like the others of his kind, and what he knows about the Inventor and the Star Gate keeps him on edge. He knows a revelation is coming soon—but he’s not ready to face it.
Notes:
📌 Author’s Note:
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Chapter 48: A Breathe of Rest on the Road
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over 500 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
📚 If you prefer to read this story in Latin American Spanish, where there are more advanced chapters already available, you can check it out here:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
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Chapter Text
After weeks of intense work and significant progress in the construction of the “Star Gate,” the Inventor was exhausted. Lucien, always attentive to her needs, suggested they take a few days off before diving into the most complicated tests.
—You’ve done an incredible job, but you need a break, —he told her one afternoon while they reviewed the blueprints in her workshop—. I have a place in mind, somewhere you can truly relax.
The Inventor, somewhat surprised by the suggestion, raised an eyebrow.
—A place? What do you have in mind?
Lucien smiled, a spark of complicity in his eyes.
—Trust me. Pack lightly. We’ll leave early tomorrow.
The Journey to the Field of Flowers
The next morning, Lucien led the Inventor out of the castle.
—Close your eyes, —he asked gently, and she, curious, obeyed.
Without warning, Lucien took her into his arms and spread his wings. They flew high, the soft wind brushing against their faces. The Inventor felt the thrill of flight, her heart racing, yet she trusted him completely.
After a few minutes, Lucien descended gracefully and asked her to open her eyes. Before them stretched a vast and vibrant field of flowers, filled with every color, swaying with the breeze along the mountain slopes. It was a place straight out of a dream.
—This is… —the Inventor was left speechless, mesmerized by the beauty of the scenery—. It’s incredible.
The flowers danced to the rhythm of the wind as if celebrating their arrival. Each color seemed to reflect a part of the Inventor’s soul: the red of her passion, the blue of her solitude, the yellow of her infinite curiosity. Lucien smiled, pleased with her reaction—he had planned this with genuine affection.
—I thought you’d like it. I found this place while… well, running a few errands. I wanted to share it with you.
They spent the day exploring the field, picking flowers and enjoying the tranquility around them. The tension of their responsibilities faded for a while, replaced by laughter and play.
At one point, Lucien, with a mischievous expression, began to chase the Inventor among the flowers, both laughing like children. When he caught her, he wrapped his arms around her, spinning in a motion that sent them tumbling to the ground, laughing and breathless.
The laughter slowly faded, giving way to a silence charged with meaning. Lucien looked at her with an intensity that made the Inventor’s heart beat faster. Slowly, he leaned toward her, and their lips met in a soft but heartfelt kiss.
It was a kiss that spoke of unspoken promises, of feelings that had grown over time, and of a future they now shared more clearly.
When they parted, both gazed at each other, knowing that this moment had sealed what they felt for one another.
—This is more than I could’ve hoped for, —whispered the Inventor, her eyes shining with happiness.
Lucien caressed her cheek, smiling.
—And it’s only the beginning.
While Lucien and the Inventor enjoyed the day in the flower field, Ku-bey, the small defective incubator with beige paws, watched them from afar. His movements were restless, his eyes gleaming with an unease he could not hide. He shifted from side to side, as if an invisible force urged him to act—but something held him back.
Ku-bey knew more than he cared to admit. His natural connection to the incubator hive was broken, but he could still sense faint echoes of their collective thoughts. The romance blossoming between the Inventor and Lucien put him on alert.
—Nothing good ever comes from falling in love with a witch, —he repeated to himself, recalling the ancient stories whispered among incubators.
The bond between the dragon and the Inventor was more dangerous than either of them could imagine. If the other incubators found out, the consequences could be catastrophic. Ku-bey couldn’t allow that to happen—but neither did he have the strength to stop the inevitable.
From his hiding place, Ku-bey watched as Lucien and the Inventor shared laughter, play, and finally, a kiss that sealed their connection. His beige paws moved restlessly, anxious about what that moment meant. The love between them was a spark that could ignite a chain of events beyond his control.
Ku-bey knew he had to stay vigilant. If other incubators discovered this relationship, they might try to intervene in ways even he couldn’t predict. Yet, at the same time, something within him felt a strange admiration for the Inventor’s indomitable spirit—and a part of him wanted to protect her, even if it meant defying his own defective nature.
The sun was already setting when Lucien, carrying a few tools and materials, ventured into the forest near the castle to gather some resources the Inventor needed. The air was crisp, and the quiet of the surroundings was broken only by the crunch of leaves under his feet.
Suddenly, Ku-bey appeared from the shadows, moving quickly to stand before Lucien. His beige paws fidgeted restlessly, and his eyes glowed with a mix of urgency and anxiety.
—Lucien, —Ku-bey’s voice was more serious than usual—, we need to talk… in private.
Lucien frowned, surprised by Ku-bey’s tone. He set the materials down and crossed his arms, waiting for the small incubator to continue.
—Do you remember anything… before being with the Inventor? —asked Ku-bey, his voice now lower, almost a whisper.
Lucien blinked, confused by the question. For a moment, the entire forest fell silent. Even the chirping of the crickets stopped, as if the world itself were holding its breath. Lucien didn’t breathe—he couldn’t. He brought a hand to his head, trying to dig into his memories, but all he found were scattered, blurred fragments.
—Not much… only vague sensations, pain… and a fading light, —he finally replied, his tone heavy with uncertainty.
Ku-bey watched him closely, his eyes reflecting deep concern.
—Because, technically, you should be dead, —Ku-bey said bluntly—. According to what we know, you sacrificed your life to fulfill the wish of ‘the first witch.’ But… we don’t know what you gave her exactly. Something keeps you tied to that moment… and now, to the Inventor.
Lucien fell silent, processing Ku-bey’s words. The idea of having been dead—and something bringing him back—was unsettling, yet something within him resonated with that revelation.
—Why are you telling me this now? —Lucien asked, his gaze fixed on the small incubator. But inwardly, he wondered, “Was I committing a betrayal? Or simply evolving?”
—Because if the other incubators discover your connection with the Inventor, they might intervene in a way none of us would want. Something big is happening, and your presence here is more than coincidence, —Ku-bey answered, his voice heavy with gravity.
Lucien nodded slowly, his thoughts spinning around Ku-bey’s words. He knew he had to protect the Inventor—but now, he also had to protect his own secrets, and uncovering the truth about his existence was becoming more crucial than ever.
The Book of Soul Separation
Ku-bey watched Lucien, as if carefully evaluating his next steps. Finally, he broke the silence with a heavy sigh.
—There’s something else you need to know, Lucien, —he said, his voice low and unusually serious—. You can’t rely only on your fragmented memories to understand your situation. There are ancient techniques that could help you… discover the truth about your past and what keeps you here.
Lucien frowned, intrigued but cautious.
—Ancient techniques? What are you talking about? —he asked, his tone skeptical but curious.
Ku-bey turned slightly and somehow produced an aged book from his small body. The cover had a dent, as if someone had closed it with tears between the pages. He held it up to Lucien.
—This is a book about the ‘Separation of the Soul,’ —explained Ku-bey—. It’s a technique that allows your soul to temporarily leave your body. By doing so, you might explore the parts of yourself that are now blocked—understand your connection to the Inventor, and perhaps… discover why you’re still here when you should be dead.
Lucien took the book, running his fingers over the worn cover. Something in the book’s weight—and in the knowledge it carried—seemed to resonate deeply within him.
—Why didn’t you give it to me before? —Lucien asked, lifting his gaze toward Ku-bey.
—Because this technique is dangerous, —warned Ku-bey, his voice tinged with concern—. If something goes wrong, you could end up trapped outside your body—or worse, lost within the labyrinths of your own soul. But now… I believe we have no other choice. The answers you seek lie beyond what I can offer.
Lucien nodded slowly, understanding the gravity of the situation. He knew he had to proceed with caution, but he also knew he couldn’t ignore the questions that haunted him.
—Thank you, Ku-bey. I’ll use this knowledge wisely, —he promised, carefully storing the book.
Ku-bey nodded, though his eyes reflected a subtle fear. He knew the path ahead would be dangerous—but he also knew Lucien was the key to facing the mystery that was about to unfold.
The First Memory
Lucien plunged into the memory, and instantly the atmosphere changed. He stood in a dark night lit only by the flames of a ruined kingdom. There she was—the first witch, in her human form, her silhouette cut against the fire, her gaze fixed on the ruins with a mix of satisfaction and pain.
When Lucien appeared before her in his draconic form, his presence was imposing, his aura a blend of power and danger. He approached her with a veiled threat, his voice rumbling and deep.
—Your wish has been granted, but all power has a price. —Your soul now belongs to me, and I’ll savor every inch of your being.
She didn’t back down, facing him with the same intensity. There was a spark in her eyes, a challenge he couldn’t ignore. Lucien, in a surge of passion and dominance, marked her shoulder with a bite, a symbol of the debt she had incurred with him.
From that moment on, their relationship became headlong, a whirlwind of emotion and power, under the looming threat that she had three total attempts to end him. The passion between them burned as fiercely as the flames around them, each encounter a clash of opposing forces drawn together with relentless intensity.
Over time, that dark passion began to transform. They came to know each other beyond their initial desires, their souls entwined in a deeper bond. Lucien’s initial threat faded, replaced by a connection that went beyond the physical—a mutual understanding that grew amid the chaos.
The memory cut, jumping to a quieter, more painful moment. The first witch knelt in a field of flowers, tears streaming down her face as she looked at dragon bones scattered all around. Lucien, now aware of her sacrifice, understood that she had given up everything—even him—to stop the destruction they had unleashed together.
That last moment of farewell between them, her crying as she walked away from the flower field, cursing that only she could kill him in order to force a future reunion, left an indelible mark on his soul. Despite everything, their love had been real, and the loss of her still weighed on his heart.
The First Star Gate Test
As Lucien came out of his trance, absorbing the intense memories of his past, the present moved forward in the Inventor’s workshop. With the first functional version of the Star Gate before her, the Inventor was immersed in calculations and preparations for the initial test.
Her plan was simple: open the portal for one minute, send through an organic object, and observe the results. She chose an onion, a simple organism that’s easy to analyze. With precision, she activated the Star Gate. The air crackled as if invisible threads were snapping. The portal emitted a hum that vibrated in the bones, creating a momentary opening that sizzled with latent energy. She tossed the onion through the portal and closed the aperture.
She waited.
Exactly one minute later, something manifested on the table where the onion had been. A gelatinous mass of an intense green appeared out of nowhere. The Inventor watched, intrigued and concerned. The mass was almost liquid, yet it held a texture that hinted it had once been solid.
“This is… unexpected.” She murmured to herself, pulling out her notebook and scribbling frantically. She analyzed the phenomenon: the portal had allowed something to pass, but not in the way she expected. What returned wasn’t the onion intact, but something transformed, reduced to its simplest elements, as if the portal filtered only certain parts of the object.
“The water… it’s the water that’s passing.” she whispered as she noted her deduction. The portal, still in its primitive state, seemed to allow only certain compounds through, decomposing or removing others in the process.
She shut her notebook with a sigh, realizing the danger implied. “Sending something larger or with more mass could be catastrophic without compromising the object’s life or structure.” She considered the possibility that the portal wasn’t only affecting space, but also time, manipulating the molecular structure of whatever crossed.
She concluded she’d need to recalibrate the Star Gate before attempting another test—especially with anything or anyone more complex.
The Second Star Gate Test
After the surprising result with the onion, the Inventor decided to take the experiment one step further. She needed to understand which elements specifically passed through the Star Gate. She chose a methodical approach, selecting a small piece of metal for the next test—copper: common, yet with interesting properties.
Lucien, ever close, watched carefully, offering quiet support. Though the tests might seem mundane at first glance, they both knew they stood on the threshold of something monumental.
—This time we’ll use copper, —announced the Inventor as she carefully placed the small fragment on the portal’s platform—. I want to see which compounds or properties of the metal traverse the portal and which do not.
Lucien nodded, his presence an anchor keeping her focused.
—Do you think it will pass intact? —he asked, though both knew it wouldn’t be that simple.
—I don’t know, but we’ll find out. With a twist of her wrist, the Inventor activated the Star Gate again. The portal crackled open, and gently, she nudged the copper fragment through the aperture.
The portal closed. They both waited.
A minute later—like before—something appeared on the platform. But this time, it wasn’t an amorphous mass. It was a powdery residue, almost like ash, with a faint metallic gleam.
The Inventor leaned in, lifting a sample with forceps.
—This is… —her voice trailed off as she examined the residue under a lens—. Copper particles… but also… traces of other elements. As if the portal had broken the metal down to its basic components.
She jotted her observations quickly.
—What seems to pass are certain electrical pulses or, perhaps, luminous information. Matter doesn’t cross in its complete form, but as a kind of ‘spectrum’ or energy pattern.
Lucien, intrigued, stepped closer.
—So the portal doesn’t merely transport matter—it breaks it down and transmits something more… fundamental.
The Inventor nodded.
—It appears we’re dealing with a form of information transport rather than physical matter per se. This changes everything. Her mind was already forming new hypotheses and tests.
At that moment, Lucien gently took her hand, interrupting her flow of thoughts.
—Maybe we should take a break, —he suggested with a soft smile—. You’ve made great progress, but you need time to process all this.
She looked at him, noting the sincerity in his eyes. She agreed, sensing that, in some way, this pause would not only recharge her mind, but also strengthen the bond between them.
Chapter 49: Between Alchemy and Forbidden Love
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Chapter Text
Ku-bey paced back and forth, his small beige paws trembling slightly as he watched from the shadows. The Inventor was achieving breakthroughs no other human had ever accomplished, and that worried him—not only because of the scientific implications, but because he saw her growing ever closer to Lucien.
The small Ku-bey knew that emotional closeness between a magical being like Lucien and a human like the Inventor was dangerous. “Nothing good ever comes from falling in love with a witch,” he muttered to himself, though he knew she wasn’t a witch in the traditional sense. Yet her connection to the mystical and the unknown was undeniable.
One night, after a long day of experimentation, Lucien suggested they take a walk.
—Come, I want to show you something, —he said, taking the Inventor’s hand with such natural ease that Ku-bey gave a small startled jump.
From his hiding place, Ku-bey watched as Lucien led the Inventor to a clearing in the forest, where the stars shone with unusual brilliance. They sat together on the grass, their gazes meeting, and for a moment, the outside world disappeared.
—I’ve lived a long time, —Lucien confessed in a whisper—, and I’ve seen as many stars as grains of sand on a beach, but none have shone the way you do now.
The Inventor smiled, a mix of shyness and joy.
—And I’ve never felt this kind of connection… it’s as if everything we’ve done together has been leading me to you.
From the shadows, Ku-bey shifted uneasily. This relationship was deepening too quickly, and he felt that the balance of things was in danger.
Another day, while they worked in the workshop, Lucien found an old phonograph and, to the Inventor’s surprise, managed to make it play. An ancient melody filled the room, and before she could protest, Lucien took her hand and led her to the center of the workshop.
—A dance? —she asked, laughing softly.
—Only if you want to, —he replied, bowing slightly.
She accepted, and soon they were moving to the rhythm of the music, their bodies in perfect synchrony. Ku-bey watched from a corner, his unease growing with every step they took together. He wasn’t only worried about the emotional impact, but about what these feelings could trigger in both of them—especially in Lucien, who had already lost someone dear before.
Finally, one night, sitting beside the Star Gate, Lucien could no longer hold back.
—I don’t know what the future holds, —he began, his voice trembling slightly—, but I know I want to be with you through every moment, whatever comes.
The Inventor looked at him, her eyes shining, her heart pounding.
—Me too, —she replied, leaning in to kiss him softly.
From his corner, Ku-bey shuddered. He knew this love could strengthen them, but he also feared it could be their downfall. More than anything, he feared what the other incubators would do if they discovered the magnitude of these emotions and the advances the Inventor was achieving.
The Echoes of the Past in Lucien
Lucien never spoke openly of his first love, but in quiet moments—when the Inventor was absorbed in her work—he sometimes stared into space, lost in thought. There was a melancholy in his eyes, the shadow of a past he still carried.
One night, as they watched the starry sky from the workshop balcony, the Inventor curled up beside him.
—What are you thinking about? —she asked softly, noticing his distant gaze.
—Time, —he answered after a moment—. How it seems to move forward and backward at once. And how some things… some people, never truly leave you.
She didn’t ask further, but she understood he was thinking of someone from before. The differences between his first love and what he now felt for the Inventor were vast. With the first, it had been unrestrained passion, a fire that consumed them both. With the Inventor, it was a deep calm, a connection that transcended flesh and desire—reaching into the spiritual and the intellectual.
Meanwhile, the defective Ku-bey moved restlessly through the workshop. He knew that the Soul Gem of the Inventor, though relatively pure thanks to her constant witch hunts, was beginning to show signs of corruption. Walpurgis Night was a dark legend among the incubators—a catastrophic event triggered when a magical girl accumulated too much power and despair, transforming into a witch of devastating magnitude.
Ku-bey feared the Inventor was approaching that threshold. He knew that no matter how often she purified her gem, corruption was inevitable—and that it accelerated with each hunt. The possibility that she could become the next Walpurgis Night terrified him.
One night, as the Inventor and Lucien worked together, Ku-bey approached them with his characteristic nervous twitch.
—We need to talk, —he said, his voice soft but charged with urgency—. There’s something you both need to know about what happens when a Soul Gem becomes too corrupted.
The Inventor frowned, setting her tools aside.
—What do you mean? —she asked, a hint of worry in her tone.
—Soul Gem corruption doesn’t just lead to ordinary witches, —explained Ku-bey—, but if it continues, it can trigger something far worse: Walpurgis Night. A witch so powerful that her very existence could destroy everything around her.
Lucien’s eyes narrowed, his protective instincts awakening.
—And you’re suggesting that the Inventor could be…?
—I’m not suggesting it, —interrupted Ku-bey—, I’m afraid of it. That’s why we must find a solution before it’s too late.
The atmosphere in the workshop grew heavy under the weight of this revelation. The Inventor, who had always seen herself as a witch hunter, now faced the possibility of becoming the greatest threat of all.
Later, Ku-bey approached Lucien one night, finding him in the workshop while the Inventor rested. The small creature seemed more anxious than usual, his beige paws fidgeting nonstop.
—Lucien, I need to speak with you alone, —he said, his tone graver than ever—. I have an idea that might save the Inventor from corruption, but it’s… risky.
Lucien set down the tools he’d been using and turned to Ku-bey.
—Speak, —he said calmly, though a flicker of worry shone in his eyes.
Ku-bey hesitated for a moment before continuing.
—In the book I gave you, there’s a technique for separating the soul from the body. If we manage to do it before the Inventor’s gem becomes completely corrupted, we could stop the process temporarily. But there’s a problem… or several.
—What problems? —asked Lucien, frowning.
—First, we don’t know what will happen to the Inventor’s soul once it’s outside her body, —explained Ku-bey—. We can’t return it to the gem without condemning her to the same corruption. And second… by doing this, we might glimpse her Wheel of Reincarnation.
Lucien’s eyes narrowed.
—The Wheel of Reincarnation?
Ku-bey nodded.
—Yes, every being has a Wheel of Reincarnation that shows their past lives and those yet to come. If that’s true, we could discover something important about the Inventor and her connection to the past… something that could change everything.
Lucien fell silent, processing the information. If the Inventor was a reincarnation of the first witch—or of someone even older—it could explain much. But it also complicated things in ways he hadn’t anticipated.
—Don’t tell the Inventor yet, —he said finally—. I need to think about this. If we do it, we must be sure we’re not condemning her to something worse.
Ku-bey nodded, relieved to have shared his idea.
—I understand. But time isn’t on our side. We need to act before it’s too late.
The Growing Darkness and the Desperate Strike
The Inventor rushed into the workshop, her breath uneven and her face pale with fear. Her Soul Gem, usually bright, was darkening at an alarming rate.
—Lucien, I don’t know what to do… the gem… —her voice trembled, unable to hide her terror.
Lucien moved quickly, placing a firm hand on her shoulder, trying to offer comfort, though concern shone in his own eyes. Ku-bey, more nervous than ever, hopped back and forth before finally making a decision.
—There’s no time, —said the small creature urgently, activating the Star Gate. The machinery vibrated, humming with dangerous energy. —They’re coming. Lucien, you must strike now. It’s the only way to save her.
Lucien hesitated for a moment, but when he saw the panic in the Inventor’s eyes and the certainty in Ku-bey’s voice, he didn’t delay any longer.
—Close your eyes, —he whispered to the Inventor as she obeyed, before gently striking her chest at the precise point that would separate her soul from her body.
The air filled with an ethereal glow as the Inventor collapsed lifelessly in his arms, and her soul, along with several others, materialized before them. Lucien gasped as he saw the first witch, as vivid as in his memories, followed by translucent forms of other lives.
—There’s no time to hesitate! —shouted Ku-bey, as the hum of the Star Gate reached a crescendo and the shadows of other incubators began to seep into the room.
Lucien extended his hand, quickly taking that of the first witch, which glowed with a dark radiance. Their ancient pact reactivated, forming shackles of dark energy that bound them together—but the bond could not last long. The witch was pulled toward the portal, and with her went the bond and part of the Inventor’s soul.
In seconds, it was over. The Inventor lay motionless on the ground, her Soul Gem intact but serpentine with dark energy, emitting a dying light. The unnerving voices of the incubators filled the workshop.
—Foolish lizard, —mocked a cold, cruel voice. The shadows of the incubators materialized, surrounding Lucien and Ku-bey. —If you were a true primordial dragon—an archdragon—perhaps we would fear you. But you let slip an soul that would have been perfect for Walpurgis Night.
Before Lucien could respond, ethereal chains wrapped around him and Ku-bey.
—Now, you will face a punishment worthy of those who dare defy the incubators.
The Punishment of Lucien and Ku-bey
The landscape of the original planet of Lucien and the first witch was a vast, desolate desert, swept by storms of red dust. Where life and prosperity had once flourished, now only ruin and death remained. Amid the devastation, a dome of air rose, sheltering the coven of incubators as they led Lucien and the defective Ku-bey toward a massive stone at the center of the wasteland.
The defective Ku-bey, chained beside Lucien, spoke with a firm but desperate tone.
—This isn’t right. Look at this world. You claim to renew life in the universe, but there are planets that continue to die. You don’t care about life—you only care about universal balance.
One of the incubators turned toward him with disdain.
—Silence, —it ordered coldly—. Since you liked the lizard so much, you’ll keep him company.
At that moment, something truly surreal began to happen. Ku-bey’s body twisted and transformed, shrinking and elongating until it became a long, dark sword with a red gem embedded in its hilt. The air filled with an oppressive dark energy as the incubators prepared to execute the final punishment.
Lucien was dragged and forced to kneel against the enormous stone, his eyes blazing with defiance, though he understood the inevitability of his fate. The incubators lifted the sword that had once been Ku-bey and, without hesitation, drove it into his chest, pinning him against the rock. The dark blade pierced his body, anchoring him as a cry of pain echoed through the desert.
—We won’t kill you, —whispered one of the incubators with a cruel smile—. That would be too kind. You will remain here, trapped, with no escape and no one to rescue you.
The incubators departed, leaving Lucien impaled upon the stone, a solitary figure in a dead world, their mocking laughter fading into the distance until it was drowned out by the roar of the wind.
The punishment was complete. Eternity stretched before Lucien, condemned to endure the weight of the world that had once been his—now reduced to ashes and painful memories.
The Redemption of Lucien
Time lost all meaning for Lucien. Pinned to the rock—filthy, worn, his body battered by endless dust storms—he stopped counting the days. There was no distinction between day and night, only the ceaseless hiss of wind dragging red sand across the barren landscape. His once white scales turned black again, sealing away the memories of the Inventor.
But then, one day, something changed. The air vibrated differently, as if the universe itself shuddered. A flash of light, a crack in the fabric of reality—and suddenly, a dimensional rift opened before him, caused by the powerful events Khaërôn had unleashed.
From that rift stepped a little girl. Small and frightened, she stared at Lucien with wide, fearful eyes.
—Who are you? —she asked, her voice barely a whisper.
Lucien, his voice tired but steady, replied:
—Do not fear. I need your help. You must pull out this sword.
His words were soft, almost a whisper, yet carried a power that calmed the girl.
With trembling hands, she approached. She hesitated for a moment, but Lucien’s calm gaze gave her courage. With immense effort, she grasped the sword’s hilt and, with a pull that seemed to halt time itself, drew it free.
Blood surged, a dark stream that frightened the girl, making her stumble back and collapse unconscious from shock. The sword, now separated from Lucien, began to transform once again into the defective Ku-bey, who quickly returned to his original form and fled the scene, as if its very existence depended on it.
In that instant, a second dimensional rift swallowed them all, transporting them into a new reality. Lucien, now free, hid quickly in the shadows, watching the unconscious girl lying in the street of an unfamiliar city. There was no time to process what had just happened; the instinct to survive took over.
Meanwhile, Beatriz, reliving this scene through Lucien’s memories, felt overwhelmed with sorrow and compassion. Tears streamed down her cheeks—not so much for the girl who had been left alone, but for Lucien himself, for everything he had endured, for the suffering and sacrifice he had borne in silence. Her heart broke for him—for all he had lost, and for the fragile hope that still lingered within him.
The Comfort of Lucien
Beatriz still had tears in her eyes, her breathing uneven as she tried to process everything she had seen through Lucien’s eyes. Experiencing another’s memories was one thing, but feeling the emotional weight of that suffering was entirely another. The pain, the loneliness, the despair—each emotion struck her with full force.
Lucien watched her anguish, a pang of guilt rising for what she had just witnessed. With soft steps, he approached her, his red eyes filled with a mix of sadness and tenderness. He knelt beside her, placing a gentle hand on her shoulder.
—Beatriz, —he murmured, his voice soft and comforting—, don’t cry for me.
Beatriz shook her head, sobs still shaking her.
—No… it’s just… seeing all that, what you went through… I can’t help it. It was so unfair.
Lucien tightened his grip on her shoulder slightly, his warm fingers grounding her in the midst of her emotional storm.
—I’ve lived more lives than I can remember, and in each, I’ve known both pain and love. This fate was mine by my choices. But you… you don’t have to carry that weight.
She lifted her gaze to him, her eyes glistening with tears.
—I’m sorry for not being… for not being the witch. —Her voice broke, her feelings of inadequacy surfacing.— I wish I could be everything you need, but…
Lucien interrupted her, shaking his head gently.
—Don’t say that. You are more than I could have ever asked for. I want no one else. Your kindness, your strength… you’re unique, Beatriz. You don’t need to be anyone else.
The sincerity in his words touched her deeply. Beatriz fell into his arms, seeking solace in his embrace. Lucien held her carefully, his hands gently caressing her back as he whispered comforting words in her ear.
—What happened before no longer defines the now, —he whispered.— We’re here, together, and that’s what matters.
The closeness between them felt like a balm for both—a silent promise that, though the past had been dark, the future could be different: one where they would stand together, facing whatever came next.
Chapter 50: The Leap of Faith
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📌 Author’s Note:
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Chapter Text
The city seemed to hold its breath.
They had advanced to the outskirts of zone N109, where the streets were little more than concrete skeletons devoured by metallic roots and rotting silence. Beatriz walked beside Lucien, each step ringing with a dull tension. Gusts of wind carried an unmistakable stench: rust, damp, and something else… like old flesh clinging to shattered glass.
—Don’t let what you see consume you —warned Lucien, without looking at her—. But… don’t look away either.
The warning wasn’t casual. Not from him. And that made Beatriz, instead of tensing, prepare her mind as if sharpening an invisible blade. Her Pisces intuition alerted her; her Year of the Snake blood made her feel that what she was about to see was more revealing than dangerous.
They turned a corner… and there they were.
There were five at first, then twelve. Human bodies—or what they once were—covered in crystallizations that sprouted from the spine, spreading like dark quartz flowers across arms, neck, jaw. Their eyes were empty, but their bodies moved with an almost pitiful cadence, dragging limbs distorted by the expansion of Protocore Syndrome, Stage 3… reaching Stage 4…
—They’re Wanders —said Lucien in a low voice—. But they weren’t born like this. They were people. Some animals too. What you’re seeing is the full mutation… caused by direct exposure to the anomaly’s interdimensional crystals.
Beatriz froze for a few seconds. It wasn’t fear. It was understanding.
Because suddenly everything clicked.
The enemies she had faced so naturally in her first missions—the ones the original video game presented as “corrupted creatures from the other plane”—were victims.
Unwilling perpetrators.
People.
Families.
Children, even.
Lucien stopped near one of the motionless figures. The crystal had swallowed its face almost completely. Even so, brown locks remained. A broken bracelet hung from its wrist.
Beatriz struggled to breathe.
—Was it always like this…? Did you always know…?
—Since the first time they made me enter N109 —answered Lucien, not taking his eyes off the creature—. And that’s why I couldn’t tell you the whole story. I couldn’t. Because… you weren’t there.
She slowly turned her face toward him.
—What…?
Lucien turned to her, his black shirt barely reflecting the faint light of the place.
—When they buried the sword in my back, on the day of the Cataclysm, they didn’t just seal my abilities. They sealed my memories… of you. Of what we were. Of what we built. The only thing left was the instinct to look for you.
Beatriz felt as if the ground trembled beneath her feet, but not literally. It was her world that wavered, the floating memories of the video game now tinged with the certainty that she didn’t appear not because she didn’t exist, but because she was erased.
And that turned every heroic act of Lucien, every mission completed alone or on autopilot, into a silent sacrifice, carried out under the shadow of a loss he didn’t fully understand.
—You were the Inventor… —he murmured—. The reason this world still holds. And also the reason they didn’t want me to remember.
Beatriz closed her eyes, clenching her fists.
—Then… —she said barely above a whisper— the Wanders aren’t the enemies. They’re the price of not looking at the origin.
Lucien nodded.
—And that’s why I wanted you to see it for yourself. Because if anyone is going to change this world… it isn’t a heroine fabricated by the universe. It’s you, the one who looked at it with human eyes and still chose to love.
Beatriz looked again at the crystal figures.
And for the first time, she didn’t see them as monsters.
She saw them as echoes of a failure that could still be repaired.
As if the golden grain she had been in another life, buried in soil, were beginning to germinate in this world corroded by oblivion.
What came next was silence. Not the awkward kind, but the kind that opens the door to what’s essential. They returned without speaking. Only when they reached their base, amid ruins bathed in a faint pink neon light, did Beatriz dare to speak.
—Lucien, I think there’s something we need to know… something I’ve been avoiding.
He lifted his gaze, noting the seriousness in her eyes.
—What are you talking about, Beatriz?
She drew a deep breath; her hands still trembled from what she had seen, but her heart no longer wavered.
—I want to know if… if the bond you had with your first love is still there. If it is, I accept it. But if it’s not… I want to know if we’re ready to create a new one.
Lucien approached with slow steps, without the weight of the warrior everyone admired, but with the fragility of the man who had been asleep for too long.
—I don’t know if that bond is still there. But I do know what I feel now —he whispered—. And if there’s a way to prove it, I want to do it with you. Because you’re the one who has changed everything for me.
She nodded. Without words. She simply clasped her hands with his.
They both closed their eyes. A warm light, invisible to the world, began to envelop them. Lucien felt something unravel within him, as if chains were breaking, and in their place, a new bond emerged. A clean one. One that was theirs.
When they opened their eyes, they knew the bond that united them no longer came from another life. It was this one. It was now.
—Lucien —Beatriz whispered, smiling—. I think we’ve created something new.
He looked at her with a tenderness very few had ever seen on his stern face.
—I know. And I couldn’t be more grateful.
And in that instant, among the echoes of the Wanders, the crystals of pain, and the revelation of sacrifice, their lips met. A kiss sealed with Agape love. Not as an escape from suffering, but as an affirmation of the present they both chose.
After everything they had been through, Beatriz’s life finally began to find a rhythm that brought her a certain peace. Every morning, she woke with a renewed sense of purpose, knowing that her work as part of the Unicorn Hunters, that police force dedicated to hunting Wanders, not only kept the city safe but also gave her a deep satisfaction.
When she wasn’t on missions, she devoted her time to Aki and Sora, the young girls she had welcomed into her life as if they were her own sisters. Beatriz, always ready to help, guided them with their studies and chores, transforming her apartment into a vibrant place full of youthful energy. They, in turn, affectionately called her big sister, a sign of the Storge love that flourished among them, though Beatriz was still unaware of the Lov-meter that tracked that emotional growth.
The routine wasn’t monotonous; on the contrary, each day brought new challenges and small triumphs. On one of her missions, Beatriz felt inspired to create a new item: an indestructible ribbon, in the style of “Mami” from Madoka Magica, which she could use to swing between buildings. It quickly became an indispensable tool for her missions, allowing her to move nimbly through the city.
At home, Beatriz kept the rules clear: “No boys and everything tidy,” she would say with a smile, ensuring a safe and structured environment for Aki and Sora. Every so often, she would mention she was going to see Lucien, her partner, strengthening the bond among them and making it clear that, although their paths were different, their love grew day by day.
One night, after a long patrol, Lucien took Beatriz to a discreet bar, almost forgotten by time, yet with a strangely warm atmosphere. It wasn’t a place frequented by hunters nor one that appealed to tourists or travelers. However, Beatriz recognized it instantly.
—This place…? —she murmured, blinking in surprise—. I could have sworn I mentioned it once, but… it was so long ago.
Lucien nodded, guiding her to one of the back tables.
—I remembered. You said you wanted to try a good hot chocolate with mezcal, but you never did.
Beatriz laughed softly, but her eyes fixed on a shelf behind the bar. There, as if waiting for her, rested a bottle of blanco tequila made from blue agave, glowing beneath an amber lamp.
—I can’t believe it… —she whispered, walking up to it—. This bottle… is like the one my dad had at home. He used to say it wasn’t for getting drunk, but to remind us where we came from.
Lucien drew near, watching her with a mix of tenderness and nostalgia.
—I tried it once. It tasted too strong to me —he said honestly.
Beatriz smiled at him, taking the bottle with respect, as if it were a reliquary.
—It’s not about drinking it like water. It’s strong, dry… like my dad. But if you know how to treat it, it becomes warm and comforting. Like a fire that doesn’t burn, but keeps memories.
Lucien watched her in silence, and something in his expression changed.
He said nothing, but slid something along the bar toward her.
Beatriz noticed. It was a small origami lion, made from recycled paper from some old flyer, yet carefully folded. She picked it up gently.
—And this?
—It was under the bottle. The bartender said someone left it a few months ago. They never threw it away because… they didn’t know why, but something told them it should stay.
Beatriz turned it between her fingers, noticing a tiny inscription on one of the back legs:
“Where there is strength, there is heritage. And where there is heritage, there is return.”
Her heart skipped a beat.
That kind of phrase. That kind of sign.
The warmth of that paper…
It wasn’t a coincidence.
She said nothing. But inside her, something awoke.
As if an ancient presence—familiar, loving, protective—whispered to her from beyond time:
Keep going, my daughter. There are still pieces that must fall into place.
Lucien asked no more. He simply stayed by her side, holding her hand while the paper lion rested between them. A sign of what was to come. A silent promise.
The Inventor’s Journey
Beatriz sat at the edge of her bed, her heart pounding. The apartment was silent—Aki and Sora had gone to the museum, giving her the perfect opportunity to do something she had feared for a long time. Before her, the mirror she had named “The Beauty and the Beast Mirror” glowed with a faint light, almost inviting her to ask the question she had avoided for so long.
She took a deep breath and, in a barely audible voice, said:
—Mirror, show me what happened to the soul of the Inventor when it crossed the Star Gate portal.
The mirror’s surface rippled as if made of water, then cleared to reveal a vision that captured Beatriz’s attention instantly. What she saw was fascinating, hypnotic, terrifying—and profoundly mystical.
The Inventor’s soul appeared as a sphere of bright light, traveling through a labyrinth of quantum energy lines. The process seemed unbearably painful; the sphere shone intensely, but as it advanced, it began to fracture like a diamond under immense pressure. Tiny fragments of its essence were absorbed by other quantum lines, tearing it apart little by little.
Beatriz watched, her heart tightening, as the soul—now resembling a golden crystal—struggled to remain whole. Finally, it reached a quantum intersection shaped like a delta. There, the final impact occurred, dividing it into four pieces. A fifth fragment, symbolizing the Witch’s soul, followed closely behind, a silent witness to the harrowing journey.
The largest piece, which Beatriz recognized as the Inventor’s main essence, fell into a strange and merciless reality: her own. There were no words, no thoughts, no body. Only rising pressure. Only heat. Something pulsed within the fertile darkness—and that something was alive. Still formless, it already was the desire to be.
A crystal descended from the sky, slicing through the atmosphere in silence, guided by a purpose older than time. When it reached the seed’s core, the earth shuddered with a sigh.
No plant sprouted.
A figure emerged.
From the world’s womb—humid and warm—rose a flower-serpent. Not born of chants or ceremonies, but of a perfect fracture. Her body was the map of that collision: iridescent scales, flower-shaped veins, liquid eyes not yet seeing. She was feminine, yet inhuman. Alive, yet preexistent. A breath contained for centuries, finally released.
She was the second skin of the soul.
The first had been a broken light in transit between worlds.
This was the creature that emerged when the soul was sown into sacred earth.
The image changed.
Beatriz was swept by invisible currents, as if her consciousness crossed another layer of the mirror. The world turned crystalline, then organic, then… human.
The scene was intimate. A woman with straight black hair, bangs on the right side, gazed at her reflection. She didn’t look ancient or divine. She looked… real.
There was something in her features that defied nationality. A face hard to place, impossible to forget. And above all: her moles—four personal constellations.
A perpetual tear at the corner of her left eye.
A hidden word beneath her lip.
A point of balance on her cheek.
And a star that watched over her thoughts.
She was the third skin—
The one who had lived on Earth, unaware of her origin.
The one who had survived every system that tried to silence her.
The one who grew up hungry, with star-filled dreams, with a silent strength that made her invincible even when she felt broken.
Beatriz watched as that fragment, now in her own world, faced unimaginable trials. Hunger, depression, loneliness, and abuse were part of this new existence. And with each challenge overcome, that essence grew stronger—adapting and surviving.
The mirror vibrated.
A new plane emerged. Beyond time. Beyond language.
Yellow corridors. Endless. Damp carpet, flickering neon lights, clocks without hands. There floated the girl.
Beatriz recognized her, though her face was a blur of shared memories. She wore a school uniform and cried without sound, as if her sadness were too ancient to be heard.
She wasn’t the woman. She wasn’t the creature. She was the in-between skin, the one that existed in the interstice. The mold that didn’t survive intact—but whose essence was never lost.
And at the end of those corridors… a figure behind glass.
It smiled with smoke for teeth, a silver serpent around its neck. It didn’t speak. It didn’t knock. It simply waited.
Beatriz placed a hand on her chest, feeling the connection between what she saw and everything she had experienced in her life. Every trial, every pain—everything fit. She was that fractured essence—the Inventor who had fallen to Earth, a dimension seemingly designed to break her, yet in the end, it had shaped her into the woman she was now.
The vision ended when the Inventor, hardened by her trials, reached 35 years old, ready to return to the place that had always belonged to her. Beatriz, moved and tearful, understood that this resilience gave her a spark of hope, though she knew new challenges would soon test her to the limit.
The last plane was warm. Familiar.
A modest room, with cream-colored walls.
A mirror.
A 35-year-old woman.
Beatriz.
Looking at herself, without fear. Feeling whole for the first time.
She didn’t know it—not yet completely—but all those skins lived within her:
The creator.
The creature.
The human.
The broken child.
And the sleeping fragment.
Each had been a stage. A breath. A blade on the path.
When the mirror went dark, Beatriz finally breathed.
She felt dry tears on her cheeks.
But she wasn’t crying out of sadness.
She cried because she understood.
She wasn’t one.
She was all of them.
And now, she was ready for the next skin.
Beatriz let herself collapse under the shower, the hot water wrapping her in a comforting embrace as she tried to process everything she had seen in the mirror. Though she hadn’t yet found answers about how her soul ended up in the otome game world, something inside her was beginning to fit. She knew she was building a path toward the truth—one step at a time.
Steam filled the room, and Beatriz closed her eyes, allowing herself a few moments to absorb the revelation. The world she lived in now, with all its complexities and challenges, felt more real than ever. It was as if all the pieces of her life were finally coming together, forming a mosaic she couldn’t yet see in full.
But someone else could.
A few days later, Beatriz returned to her usual routine—visiting Aki and Sora’s apartment, missions with the Unicorn Hunters, and late-night computer sessions mapping the positions of the magical girls. With Emil’s help, she had located nearly all of them on the map they created together. However, the pattern she was looking for still hadn’t appeared.
Beatriz sat before the map, her brow furrowed as she analyzed the scattered markers. The dimensional rift from which the incubators emerged seemed to move constantly—a clever tactic to prevent Khaërôn from tracking and destroying them. This constant relocation was a clear sign that the incubators were aware of the threat Khaërôn represented.
—They can’t hide forever, —murmured Beatriz, clenching her fist over the table—. But that means we have to act fast before the rift disappears again.
Lucien, who had been silently watching from the doorway, approached and placed a hand on her shoulder.
—We’ll find a way, —he said firmly—. You’ve already achieved the impossible before, Beatriz. You’re not alone in this.
Beatriz looked up at him, finding in his eyes the same determination she felt in her heart. Though the road ahead was full of uncertainty, she knew that with Lucien and the rest of her allies, she had a chance to succeed.
With a deep sigh, Beatriz nodded, a spark of hope rekindling in her spirit once more.
—Then let’s keep going, —she said—. Because this war isn’t over yet.
Later that night, while organizing her things on the small apartment desk, Beatriz noticed something odd. Her design notebook—the hardbound one with the Van Gogh ribbon she used for her personal sketches—was slightly out of place. It was the same notebook where, weeks earlier, she had drawn the design for the ring she gave Lucien during the boxing tournament.
She frowned. She was sure she had left it properly stored inside the magnetic fabric case. When she opened it, she noticed that one of the central pages had a faint fold, almost imperceptible, as if someone had leafed through it very carefully.
—Aki? Sora? —she asked quietly, more out of habit than real suspicion.
Because there was something in those sketches—geometric forms hidden within the ring’s string details, with the inner engraving “Fidelis”. The dragon-shaped ring design that wasn’t chosen, the second with triple cords, or the last, the black feather encircling the finger—that seemed to have called to someone.
The page with the three designs had a subtle wrinkle at the bottom corner, as if someone had held it tightly. Beatriz frowned, leaning closer, running her fingers across the paper.
—No… I didn’t leave it like this, —she murmured.
The texture was different. As if something heavy—not dirty, but firm—had pressed against it. There were no fingerprints, no stains, no nail marks. Only a faint trace, like the kind left by thick gloves—the kind used by mechanics… or soldiers.
But the most unsettling part was what she found when she turned the page: a faint diagonal crease, made with surgical precision. As if, while holding the sheet, someone had evaluated the design… and then considered taking it.
They didn’t. But they thought about it.
Beatriz set the notebook back in place, closing it slowly.
—Someone was here.
From atop the wardrobe, where she always kept her most important things, something creaked softly. Beatriz looked up, but saw nothing out of place.
And somewhere, between the folds of impossible blueprints, someone was taking notes. Not just of the drawings. But of the intention with which they had been created.
Notes:
🌟 CHAPTER 50 — A Threshold in the Rain 🌟
When I started this story, I never thought I’d come this far… but here we are: Chapter 50 of Under the Neon Rain. 🎉
Beyond being a round number, this chapter holds something special: without planning it, it became the deepest point of convergence between this story and my other two original works, still unpublished.
Here, as Beatriz witnesses the fate of the Inventor’s soul, doors open—across dimensions, memories, and possibilities. If you’ve paid attention to the symbols, you may already feel this goes far beyond a simple fanfic...
This chapter is a gift, a crack in the veil, a reflection of something much larger beginning to manifest.
💬 Thank you for accompanying me this far—for every reading, every comment, every sigh shared with me.
You are not merely reading a story: you are living it with me.
See you on the other side of the neon.
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Chapter 51: Outburst in the Fog: The Vision of the Collapse
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Chapter Text
At dawn Beatriz began to dream
[Fragmented Vision | Early-Warning Dream | RAM ERROR]
Beatriz didn’t know how she got there.
The world around her was dark, as if the air itself were crying in silence. The walls of the place—if they were walls at all—were covered by a bluish-gray fog, made of broken thoughts and echoes of unspoken words. Emil was in front of her. Sitting, hunched, empty. The same boy she had saved now looked irreparable.
His eyes were dull, his hands trembling over his knees. He was murmuring something she couldn’t quite make out, but it broke her heart.
Beatriz took a step toward him. Then another. She reached out her hand gently.
—Emil… I’m here, —she whispered.
But she didn’t touch him.
Suddenly, everything went white.
A mute, blinding, impossible explosion. The world shattered from inside him… and inside her. She hadn’t managed it. She hadn’t been able to calm his pain. And because she didn’t, something inside both of them collapsed. An emotional detonation turned into devastating physical force. They were two poorly synchronized bombs, doomed to set each other off.
A hum in the air. Like a system trying to boot.
[ABILITY: CASSANDRA] — Requirements incomplete.
Preview of ancestral ability activated.
Function: Preventive Vision of Interconnected Emotional Collapse.
Status: Unsynchronized.
Beatriz gasped.
She wasn’t really there. She understood it just before waking, bolting upright in bed. It was a warning. A warning of what would have happened if she hadn’t done it right. If she hadn’t managed to see Emil’s pain in time. The system was showing her the catastrophe she had avoided without even knowing it.
She brought a hand to her chest.
—Thank you… for letting me see this, —she whispered into the void.
And in that instant, the vision faded.
She woke with wet eyes, her heart racing, and an inexplicable certainty:
the real bomb… was love poorly contained.
The afternoon after work had begun lightly.
In the apartment, Beatriz, Aki, and Sora were gathered in front of the TV, sitting on colorful cushions while sharing a bowl of sweet popcorn and laughing at an old recycled idol show. Beatriz had even dared to teach them a clumsy choreography with an empty tea bottle as an improvised microphone.
Laughter filled the space—the kind of laughter that erases, for a moment, everything dark and complicated.
—And now, the dramatic spin part! —exclaimed Aki, mimicking an exaggerated “evil high school rival” pose.
But just as Sora was about to make a snarky comment, the broadcast suddenly changed.
The mood was warm, full of that kind of joy that only appears when it feels like the world can wait a little longer to explode. But then, the TV screen flickered.
A live broadcast interrupted Sora’s program.
—Eh? An emergency? —asked Aki, sitting up straight.
On the screen appeared the crest of Sturm Industries, followed by a golden curtain and an elegant stage adorned with lights and floating magical symbols. A man in an impeccable suit, the smile of a politician and the gaze of a hawk stepped up to the podium. It was Maximiliano Sturm, chancellor and founder of the academy.
—Citizens of Luminaria, we have the honor of presenting to the world the most promising evolutionary talent of our generation: my daughter, Amara Sturm!
Choreographed applause. Clearly rehearsed.
Amara emerged from behind the curtain. She wore a formal uniform with gold embroidery and a ribbon of energy floating behind her like a mist cape. Her dark hair was tied in a perfect braid, her face serene, almost expressionless. She smiled, but it didn’t reach her eyes.
Maximiliano raised a hand and continued:
—Today we take a step forward by revealing that Amara’s Evol is Velocitas Divina. A capacity for quantum dimensional movement. She’s the first bearer in years!
The audience applauded; some stood.
And just when the broadcast seemed to be ending, Amara did something unexpected.
She extended her left hand; on her finger, the Magical Girl ring shone with an intense violet, projecting its symbol into the air like a summoning seal.
Quick camera cut. Silence on set.
Beatriz dropped the popcorn she had in her hand.
Beatriz jolted upright. Her pupils dilated, thinking to herself.
Is he insane? Announcing it live? In the middle of Luminaria, where all data leaks before you can blink? What kind of father pins a target on his daughter’s back?
She couldn’t help thinking that that ring, however discreet, wasn’t part of the technical set.
That wasn’t in the game… or was it?
But what froze her was the smile at Amara’s lip corner right after showing the ring.
It wasn’t a slip. It was a message.
For whom? For the villains? For her?
—That ring… is like shouting to the multiverse that you’re ready to be hunted. Or worse… to be used.
Beatriz stood and walked to her phone, opening her app’s map of the area. The rifts fluctuated. The energy around Amara was changing.
The broadcast ended with the Sturm Industries logo shining over a shower of silver lights.
A voice-over repeated the motto:
“Sturm Industries: the future, now in human hands.”
But Beatriz could only think:
That wasn’t on the forums. It wasn’t in the announcements. It wasn’t… in the script.
And if she’s magical and has an Evol, who else is about to break the board? Since powers usually show up at 18… It’s very rare to appear earlier… Or… not?
—I have two options, —she said without turning—. If Lucien cooperates, we’ll enter that party as guests. We’ll watch from the inside and, if something weird happens, we act.
—And if he doesn’t cooperate? —asked Sora.
Beatriz turned, with a seriousness that chilled the room.
—We infiltrate. And if things get ugly, you two escape. I stay.
She reached into her backpack and, discreetly from her system, pulled out three tiny crystal earpiece communicators (thanks to the “No-Limits Spies” videogame).
—You’re not taking your phones. If something goes wrong, you have an extraction point. Use these only if there’s no other option.
Aki took one, silent. Sora looked at Beatriz with determined eyes.
—Do you really think something will happen to that girl?
—I think… —whispered Beatriz, staring at the ring on the screen— that she already knows. And she’s provoking it.
Sora and Aki exchanged glances. Both nodded.
—Then we’re going with you, —said Aki.
Beatriz lowered her gaze. She smiled, though the tremor in her fingers gave her away.
—Then get your dresses ready… and your minds.
Beatriz blinked, incredulous. She didn’t remember that scene from the game. And she’d dived into every forum—even dead Reddit threads and censored leak versions. So she decided to travel to zone N109, meditating on the way.
Since when were there official broadcasts to announce Evol powers?
Her own awakening hadn’t been recorded. Nor celebrated.
And now Maximiliano, without the slightest shame, was selling Amara to everyone as the new face of speed.
But there was something else.
A small gesture. Precise.
The ring.
A movement too rehearsed to be accidental.
Beatriz noticed.
That hand didn’t tremble.
Amara wanted someone to see it.
And if she wasn’t wrong… what she carried under that white armor wasn’t just plating.
The rain had stopped only minutes before Beatriz arrived at the reinforced door of the mansion in Zone N-109. The voice scanner recognized her immediately.
—Access granted —announced the panel, and with a soft click, the door opened.
Beatriz stepped inside, adjusting her trench coat with one hand while still holding her phone—tuned to the state channel—in the other. Her expression, somewhere between alert and astonished, made it clear she was bringing urgent news. The moment she crossed the threshold, one of the internal corridors guided her straight to the main hall.
Lucien was leaning back in his armchair, flipping through some reports on a tablet, while Noctis and Umbra whispered in the far corner. Raúl, the blacksmith, rested with a hot coffee in hand, one eyebrow raised as he observed the room.
—Lucien —said Beatriz, skipping any preamble—. I need to talk to you… did you see Maximiliano Sturm’s announcement?
Lucien looked up with a weary expression.
—That pretentious man again? I didn’t. I never watch anything he appears in. What did he do now?
—He introduced his daughter. Amara —Beatriz stepped closer and placed the remote on the central table—. And it wasn’t a normal announcement… he showed the magical girl ring. He didn’t say it outright, but he implied it.
The murmurs in the room stopped instantly.
Noctis whistled under his breath.
—The ring? Then it is true what people were whispering about that family…
Raúl straightened slightly.
—He just put a target on that girl’s back —he growled.
—Did you see her? —asked Lucien. His voice was low, controlled. His intense red eyes moved briefly from the frozen TV image to Beatriz. He looked at her like someone who knew her words weren’t a question, but a trigger.
Beatriz didn’t turn her head. She only nodded.
—I saw everything. —Her words fell plain, unadorned, like stones sinking in water.
Behind her, Noctis crossed his arms seriously. His glasses reflected the still frame of the broadcast.
—Maximiliano doesn’t take a single step without leaving a mark. He’s using his daughter as a symbol. But with what’s coming, a symbol isn’t hope… it’s bait.
Umbra let out a low whistle while shuffling his cards with a sharp snap.
—Speed, huh? —he murmured—. Sounds glorious until you realize she doesn’t even know how to brake.
Raúl, the base’s blacksmith, emerged from the side entrance with a rag on his shoulder and glasses dangling from his neck. His walk was steady, but sarcasm preceded him like a luxurious malicious perfume.
—Ah, youth… —he said, dropping a pair of pliers on the table with a perfectly calculated clang—. Always so eager to show their fangs before they’ve even grown in.
No one replied, but Umbra stopped moving the cards for a second.
Raúl tilted his head toward the screen.
—Speed isn’t what worries me —he added, sharpening each word like someone carving obsidian—. It’s the choreography. That presentation was as natural as a swan dancing flamenco. Rehearsed. Strategic. And with a backdrop of blood instead of music.
Lucien drew a deep breath. He stood, crossing his arms.
—Maximiliano has spent years trying to drag me into one of his diplomatic dinners —he muttered—. I’ve never gone. But this time…
—…is different —finished Beatriz, now turning her head slowly toward him—. Do you have a spare invitation?
Lucien held her gaze. Then nodded, slowly.
—I have several. And I knew. Not because you told me… but because I thought it the moment I saw her lift that ring.
Beatriz glanced once more at the screen.
She was no longer surprised.
Only… activated.
The Masquerade Ball
Maximiliano Sturm’s opulent mansion was adorned with an air of decadent elegance. The masquerade ball was the event of the year, gathering the city’s high society under one roof.
Beatriz, dressed the way she knew Lucien liked, wore an elegant mask hiding her identity as a Hunter Unicornio. Her hair was pinned up with hairpins that were, in truth, secret tools perfectly disguised. Lucien, also masked, remained close, keeping an eye on every movement.
The party flowed, elite guests chatting and dancing under the soft glow of chandeliers. Then Maximiliano stepped onto the stage and proudly announced:
—Dear friends, tonight we celebrate not only our prosperity, but also the bright future of our city. My daughter, Amara, will join the academy a year early, showcasing her extraordinary Evol of speed.
Beatriz felt a shiver run down her spine. Revealing a Hunter Unicornio’s ability prematurely was a massive risk, a direct violation of security protocols.
As Maximiliano spoke, Beatriz, Lucien, Aki, and Sora moved closer to the podium, maintaining a low profile but ready for anything.
Suddenly, an armed gang stormed into the party, interrupting the speech with a thunderous racket. Beatriz and Lucien tensed, prepared to intervene. Chaos erupted—
But Amara, with terrifying calm, stepped forward.
Amara (firm voice): —One batch… Two batches… A penny and three-quarters to work.
In the blink of an eye, Amara unleashed her power, moving at blinding speed. Within seconds the gang members were gunned down, and Amara revealed a form-fitting suit similar to an elite soldier’s armor, showcasing total control over the situation.
But her confidence made her drop her guard. One of the gang members, still alive, shouted furiously:
Gang member: —A LONG CYCLE TO THE DESTRUCTION THAT KHAËRÔN WILL BRING!
Before Amara could react, he stabbed a dimensional protocore stone into his chest, transforming into a monstrous stone golem. Two more did the same, mutating into grotesque creatures hungry for chaos.
The party became a battlefield, and Beatriz, horrified by this new threat, realized this was only the beginning of something much greater and darker.
Amid the chaos, Beatriz immediately took control, contacting her allies. The interns manipulated the security cameras, ensuring no footage exposed the truth. They also opened safe routes to evacuate guests, while the blacksmith and weapons expert prepared for combat.
Maximiliano, always calculating, cast a cold look at his daughter.
Maximiliano (cold tone): —I expect results from this battle, Amara. Don’t fail me.
Without waiting for an answer, he walked away to coordinate the evacuation, leaving Amara alone to face the stone golems.
Beatriz, watching closely, used her special ribbon to discreetly bind Amara, suspecting that her “super speed” wasn’t what it appeared to be. Lucien and his team, dressed in black with crow masks, deployed around her, ready to intervene.
The blacksmith, with his Niles-from-The Nanny sarcasm, glanced at Beatriz and her comrades.
Blacksmith (under the table, with an ironic smile): —Well, my brave ones, you can start fighting now. Don’t wait for the monsters to get tired.
Beatriz and her friends activated their armor, ready for battle. The scene escalated as Amara drew weapons, clearly prepared to take on the three monsters.
The Epic Confrontation
Amara, confident in her command of time, moved in to finish off Sora and Aki, freezing the environment to her advantage. But just as she was about to deliver the final blow, a glowing rope wrapped around her arm—Beatriz, guided by her spiritual lazo, had shattered her concentration at the exact instant.
The stopping spell collapsed. With a startled cry, Amara was yanked by the force of the impact and fell through the window—dragging Beatriz with her.
From inside, Lucien stepped forward, alarmed —¡Beatriz!—
As both women plunged through the air among broken glass and suspended bullets resuming their path, Beatriz, eyes fixed on her enemy, seized the moment to speak—her voice firm as a sentence.
Beatriz, swinging across the city with her lazo—
—I'm not your enemy, Amara! We need to talk, but not here. Stop this before someone gets seriously hurt!—
Amara, struggling to maintain her composure, tried to break free as the two moved between buildings, the frozen environment creating a surreal atmosphere.
—You don’t understand anything! This is bigger than you, than me! I won’t let you interfere.
Beatriz, still pulling Amara, moved skillfully through the structures, using the environment to gain ground.
Beatriz, calm but firm—
—Then explain it to me. But first, let’s end this. Lives are in danger.
The tension grew with every movement; the duel was not only physical, but a battle of wills. Beatriz was determined to reach the truth, while Amara fought to keep her mission alive, refusing to yield even an inch.
As Beatriz and Amara clashed in their fierce combat, the very air seemed to fracture with each impact. Bolts of energy, bursts of light, and twisted explosions of molten isomalt carved scars across the sky of that forgotten district. Both women, their powers unleashed, stood at the center of a storm threatening to swallow everything.
Elsewhere in the city, Lucien cut through the remains of the Wanders like a dark meteor, guided by the invisible pull of the lazo that bound him to Beatriz. His thoughts burned as a single flame:
Lucien murmured between his teeth while destroying one of the golems—
—Hold on. Just a little more… I’m almost there.—
Time, which moments ago had been suspended by Amara’s anomaly, snapped back all at once. The bullets trapped in the air continued their path like a deranged symphony. The sky erupted into noise, metal, and light.
Beatriz advanced, gaze locked on her opponent as she dodged.
—Is this what you want, Amara? To destroy everything just so you don’t have to face the truth?
Amara, panting, stepped back slightly. Her eyes—always cold—now flickered between fury and fear. But she didn’t answer. As if words were no longer enough.
And then…
From the top of a half-collapsed structure, a figure emerged through dust and shadow.
A man.
A warrior.
His silhouette, cut against the storm clouds of neon and fire, was unmistakable. Silver armor with crimson edges, a tattered cape in the wind, a helmet as impenetrable as night itself. A Mandalorian, one spoken of only in whispers—those who walked between systems like shadows of final judgment.
His metal boots echoed slowly as he descended the structure, unhurried. He didn’t need to run. He knew exactly when to intervene.
Mandalorian (murmuring on a private frequency as he observed):
—Two unleashed forces, a single nexus trembling on the edge…
(a brief pause)
—…and the dragon hasn’t roared yet.
His sensors registered far more than he showed. He tracked the pulse line of Beatriz’s life force, Amara’s distorted energy, and… something else. A familiar echo. A trace that shouldn’t be there.
Mandalorian (low voice, barely audible):
—What exactly are they hiding? And more importantly… which one of them am I here to save?
From the ground, Beatriz felt a chill crawl down her spine. It wasn’t coming from Amara.
It didn’t come from the battlefield.
It was the deep awareness of being watched.
And that kind of gaze… only someone not of this world possessed.
Or someone who had already survived its destruction.
Lucien, finally finishing the Wanders, turned into red smoke and rushed toward Beatriz, determined to reach her in time to face whatever was unfolding.
The arrival of the Mandalorian cast a heavy atmosphere of mystery and potential conflict. What would his role be in this situation? Would he be an unexpected ally, a new adversary… or someone with his own agenda entirely?
Chapter 52: Kidnapping and Revelations: The Game of the Lost Family
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
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Chapter Text
The battle between Beatriz and Amara had reached a critical point. Every shot grazed skin, every movement resembled a violent dance more than a strategic fight. Beatriz’s Magnums thundered with power, countering the nearly infinite arsenal Amara unleashed. The air was saturated with tension, dust, and light sliced apart by bursts of energy.
In the distance, a metallic gleam. From a dark ledge, the Mandalorian watched the scene, unmoving. His eyes, hidden behind the visor, locked onto the shining clips in Beatriz’s black hair, which glinted briefly in the cold air.
Mandalorian (murmuring, caught between surprise and certainty):
—I knew it… it’s her.
Without waiting another second, he launched an electric net that expanded midair with surgical precision. Amara collapsed instantly, unconscious but unharmed. The discharge was measured, controlled.
Beatriz barely had time to turn. A sphere with cords hit at her feet, wrapping around her firmly but without injury. She froze, unable to stop it. The Mandalorian’s tactic was clear: immobilize, not harm.
Then, emerging from the shadows, Nox Félix made his entrance.
Small, agile, dressed in light black armor with a Mandalorian-style helmet, his feline silhouette moved with unsettling grace. In a single motion, he shot a sedative straight into Beatriz’s neck.
Nox Félix (with a mischievous grin as he checks Beatriz’s vitals):
—Shhh… don’t worry. We’ve got you. Just… take a little cat nap.
With synchronized movements, the Mandalorian gathered both Amara and Beatriz. The ship, until now hidden among the shadows, revealed itself with a subtle hum—an imposing silhouette emerging from the darkness itself.
Nox Félix, walking behind them with his hands clasped behind his head as if this were just another night:
—Who said Mondays couldn’t get better?
The scene was shattered by a red vortex swirling through the air: Lucien, transformed into crimson smoke, landed just as the ship began to rise. The moment he saw Beatriz in the Mandalorian’s arms, his world stopped.
Lucien (shouting, desperate):
—Beatriz! You can’t take her!
He struck the ground with such force that the concrete cracked. The echo of his voice merged with the roar of the engines as the ship disappeared into the shadows.
The Aries Fury Unleashed: The Witch Hunt
Lucien remained standing in silence, his heart pounding with contained rage. For a second, everything around him faded except one thought: get her back.
Lucien (voice trembling with anger):
—It can’t end like this. I’ll find her, no matter the cost!
Without losing a second, he gathered his team. He ensured Sora and Aki were safe, far from the crossfire.
Lucien (to the girls, protective tone):
—Stay here. I’m not losing anyone else. I’ll return with Beatriz… and with Amara.
The instinct of an Aries ablaze guided him. His hunt began: interrogating informants, kicking down doors, unearthing secrets. His presence alone inspired fear.
Lucien (to his team, with an implacable gaze):
—Comb every corner. Alley by alley. No one sleeps until we know who did this.
But deep inside, something didn’t fit. This wasn’t a common kidnapping. That guy… he was a hunter. But not an ordinary one.
The Code in the Bottle
Hours later, a lead took him back to the bar he and Beatriz had visited. On the counter, a bottle of blue-agave tequila gleamed under the dim light. His eyes fixed on it. Something stirred inside him. A memory.
Beatriz, smiling on their date, holding a small glass between her fingers.
Beatriz (back then):
—It’s not about drinking it like water. It’s strong, dry… like my dad. But if you know how to handle it, it becomes warm and comforting.
Lucien swallowed hard and approached.
Bartender (raising an eyebrow):
—Tequila? Isn’t that too strong for a guy like you?
Lucien (with a sad smile):
—It’s not about drinking it like water… It has fire, sure. But also warmth. If you know how to treat it.
The bartender poured him some. Lucien turned the bottle. His fingers felt a different texture under the label: a QR code.
He scanned it. An image appeared on the screen: the sketch of the ring Beatriz had designed. Beneath it, an encrypted number.
Lucien (in a whisper):
—It’s an invitation…
The bartender said nothing and stepped away. Lucien remained alone with the bottle, the image, and a new certainty. This wasn’t just a rescue.
It was a call. A message. A map to the past.
The Father’s Test
The Mandalorian father paced slowly back and forth, hands clasped behind his back, watching Beatriz and Amara—both tied up and wearing noise-canceling headphones that had blocked out everything until now. He stopped in front of them and, with a slow, deliberate gesture, removed the headphones from both.
—One of you is my real daughter —he said in a deep, measured voice—. I ask for your cooperation. First question… —He paused, thoughtful—: What was your favorite snack when you were a child?
Beatriz frowned, surprised by the question, but answered almost immediately.
—Oatmeal cookies with chocolate… homemade.
Amara, clearly confused, didn’t answer, looking at the Mandalorian with disdain.
The father nodded slightly.
—Interesting. Next question for both. From which board game were you permanently banned by the family?
Beatriz couldn’t help a small smile before answering.
—UNO. And it wasn’t my fault I made it to the world top 15 on social media… without buying boosters.
The Mandalorian fell silent for a moment, processing the response. Then, with a hint of surprise and pride, he added:
—Ah, yes… that explains why they never let you play with them again.
Nox Félix, watching with interest from a corner, chuckled.
—That sounds more impressive than scary… though I get why they banned you.
Amara opened her mouth, stunned by the absurdity of the questions, but before she could speak, the Mandalorian continued.
—Well, lastly… —The father paused and motioned Nox Félix to come closer. With an enigmatic smile, he said—: Look at the boy’s face. His reaction will tell me who my daughter is.
Nox Félix approached, his small face lit by innocent curiosity, his feline eyes shining under the dim light.
Beatriz looked at him directly, and her eyes filled with tears instantly. Her mouth opened and closed several times before she could speak. Finally, she whispered, voice trembling:
—Dad?
The Mandalorian smiled softly and, with a signal, untied Beatriz. She threw herself into his arms, still trembling, her heart pounding hard.
Amara, meanwhile, was isolated again with the headphones and blindfold. Even without sight or sound, she sensed the shift in the atmosphere—the previous tension dissolving into a mixture of relief and emotion.
Beatriz, still in her father’s arms, murmured through a small sob:
—I can’t believe it’s you… after all this time.
—I was always close —he replied, voice soft but firm—. I was just waiting for the right moment to intervene.
Beatriz was breathing with difficulty, her emotions overflowing as she stared at her father—the man she hadn’t seen in so long and who now revealed himself as the mysterious Mandalorian. Amara, still tied up and wearing the headphones, looked around, confused and frustrated, but her presence felt almost irrelevant in that moment.
Beatriz’s father, with impressive calm, removed the Mandalorian helmet, revealing a face that, though youthful in appearance, held the depth of experience in his eyes. His dark hair and the firmness of his jaw contrasted with the softness in his gaze as he looked at his daughter.
Beatriz’s voice trembled, and she could barely contain herself.
—You have so many explanations to give me… I don’t even know where to start —she whispered, fighting to keep her composure.
He nodded slowly, as if he understood the whirlwind inside her.
—I know, hija. And I’m here to give you every answer you need. But first, allow me to explain why I’m here… and how.
He sat in front of her, his movements calculated and gentle.
—I’ve been in the body of a Mandalorian for the last four years. It was a strange transition, but a necessary one. I’ve learned that wisdom and strategy are just as vital as strength. I no longer follow the Mandalorian creed strictly. I’ve found a balance… one that allows me to be more than a warrior.
Beatriz stared at him, her wide eyes full of questions.
—How did this happen? How did you get here?
He took a deep breath.
—The Council of Dimensions. It wasn’t an accident. The dimensional collision that brought me here was part of a larger plan—one I chose to risk, hoping to find someone from my family. And when I saw a rift, I took the chance… and I found you.
Beatriz’s voice broke.
—You’ve been watching me this whole time?
He nodded, his gaze warm but serious.
—Yes. It wasn’t easy to stay in the shadows, but I knew I had to intervene only at the right moment.
Beatriz clenched her fists, fighting back tears.
—All this time… I thought I’d lost you.
He extended a hand toward her, smiling softly and reassuringly.
—You never lost me. I was always close, watching, waiting. And now, finally, we’re together again.
Amara, to the side, still not fully understanding what was happening, moved her head, trying to catch a sound or a clue from the conversation. But right now, the connection between father and daughter was all that mattered.
Beatriz could barely contain herself as emotions flooded her. But when she saw Nox Félix watching from a corner, something inside her softened even more. Without thinking twice, she crossed the space between them and hugged him tightly, holding him as if he were a brother she didn’t know she needed.
—Come here, chamaco… you’re one of us now too —she murmured, voice loaded with affection.
Nox, surprised at first, felt the hug envelop him not just physically but emotionally. Slowly, his arms rose to return the embrace, and in that instant, the boy hardened by life crumbled a little, melting into the warmth of a family that accepted him.
Beatriz’s father, helmet in hand and wearing an expression somewhere between pride and annoyance, watched the exchange. Unable to help himself, he stepped toward Beatriz and gave her a playful smack on the head.
—¡Mija, please! —he said with exaggerated dramatic tone—. That guy looks like he walked out of an action movie, and you… you’re neck-deep in it! What did I teach you, huh?
Beatriz rubbed the spot where he’d lightly smacked her, looking at him with a mix of amusement and affection.
—Ay, papá, you know I’m attracted to intense guys… blame my genes —she replied, locking eyes with him, her playful smile softening the moment.
The Mandalorian let out a deep laugh, his booming voice echoing through the room. But regaining composure, he pointed a finger at her, pretending to be serious.
—Don’t think you’re getting off that easy. We’re having a talk about this later.
Nox, from his corner, couldn’t help laughing quietly, enjoying this family dynamic that felt new to him—but made him feel incredibly welcome.
Beatriz let out a nervous giggle and rolled her eyes dramatically.
—Ohhhh, please, Dad. Trust me, if I told you what actually happened for me to end up with him, you’d keep that “miracles like this don’t even happen in La Rosa de Guadalupe” face forever —she said, emphasizing the title with a theatrical gesture.
The Mandalorian raised an eyebrow, crossing his arms as he looked at her with equal parts curiosity and skepticism.
—Go on —he challenged—. After what I’ve lived these past four years, nothing can surprise me.
Beatriz smiled, knowing there were many things she couldn’t tell him… like the fact that Lucien was an arms-dealer kingpin. But for now, she simply returned his gaze, leaving the air thick with mystery.
—We’ll see, papá. We’ll see…
Nox, from his spot, watched the interaction with a mix of amusement and admiration, knowing this was only the beginning of many revelations to come.
Beatriz took a deep breath, preparing to tell her father everything she had lived.
—Everything started a year ago —she said, her voice little more than a whisper at first—. I woke up in a different body, in a luxurious room, completely confused. I didn’t know where I was or why I was there.
The Mandalorian frowned, listening intently as she continued.
—Turns out this universe is… different. Here, there are heroes, and I… well, apparently I’m “the protagonist” somehow. At first, I tried to keep Lucien—my boyfriend—away from me. I thought that if I did, I could protect him from whatever danger I might attract. But he didn’t give up. —A smile formed as she remembered—. I liked his romantic gestures, even when I tried to bounce them away.
The Mandalorian nodded slightly, as if beginning to understand the complexity of the situation.
—Everything changed when we rescued a kitten together. It was a small moment, but it bonded us in a way I didn’t expect. From that moment on, we really began to like each other. Although, honestly, I think he already felt something for me long before —she admitted with a small laugh—. As time went on, I realized that the gestures I once thought were excessive… were genuine.
Beatriz paused, remembering those moments fondly.
—Lucien helped me in more than one way. He put money from his own pocket to fund our operations outside the control of the local “police.” He did it to prevent me from falling under the control of the incubators, those horrible machines that use girls as fuel.
The Mandalorian lifted his head at this, his eyes filled with concern.
—Those incubators… they discovered how to fragment souls and use them as energy. But somehow, in trying to protect me, I ended up finding my way back here. To my place of origin.
Beatriz looked at her father, waiting for his reaction, her heart pounding with the weight of everything she had shared in so little time.
Beatriz took a deep breath, still processing everything that had happened.
—So… I ended up facing Amara —she said, her voice now steadier—. She… she was part of something bigger, darker. I don’t know if you realized this, but you basically put me in the crosshairs for something enormous.
The Mandalorian tilted his head, his sharp eyes observing her closely.
—Are you talking about that cosmic entity? —he asked, his tone serious—. The one that appears every millennium, bringing chaos and destruction, only to be defeated by the heroes and fall asleep again.
Beatriz nodded, clenching her fists.
—Yes. My role as the “protagonist” is to help face it and restore balance. But, Dad… Amara… she wasn’t alone. All of this is part of something much bigger than I imagined.
The Mandalorian fell silent for a moment, a somber gleam crossing his face.
—Beatriz… —he began slowly—. What you’re facing is only the tip of the iceberg. There is more at stake than you think. For some time now, I’ve been eliminating assassins. People coming after you, looking for something inside you.
Beatriz frowned, confused.
—Inside me? I thought my energy was just compatible with all the powers in this world… I assumed that was part of the game’s rules.
Her father looked at her with a mixture of concern and something deeper.
—Doesn’t that seem suspicious to you? —he asked—. Beatriz, check your system. There are things you still haven’t discovered.
With a gesture of his hand, the Mandalorian activated a holographic menu in front of him, displaying his own system.
—Look, this is my menu. You can see it because we’re family. —He smiled slightly, enlarging it to show her how it could be customized—. You can expand and personalize yours.
Beatriz watched in fascination as her father manipulated the system. Seeing the hidden options and submenus made her mind race.
—How…? —she began to say, but her father was already explaining.
—There’s more to this than it seems, Beatriz. You have access to things you haven’t even imagined. It’s time for you to explore and see what you’re truly capable of.
Beatriz nodded slowly, a new determination lighting up her eyes.
—Then let’s find out.
Notes:
📌 Author’s Note:
Thank you so much! 💖✨
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Chapter 53: Rules to Return a Heart
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over +650 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
📚 If you prefer to read this story in Latin American Spanish, where there are more advanced chapters already available, you can check it out here:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
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Chapter Text
The Mandalorian manipulated his system once more, causing a holographic book to appear before them. The cover looked ancient, as if time itself had been etched onto its surface.
—This is your "World History Book" —he said, pointing at the volume—. It updates with every step forward you make here. Each time you accomplish something significant, a part of the world’s story —and yours— is revealed.
Beatriz blinked, leaning closer with curiosity.
—So this shows me what I need to know?
—Exactly. And not only about the world, but about your role in it. It is a guide, but it only reveals itself as you advance. —Her father gave her a meaningful look—. You’d do well to read it. It explains more context than you realize.
Beatriz nodded, opening the book and skimming the first pages. Text and illustrations began to glow, revealing fragments of truth hidden behind the veil of her new reality.
—This is… incredible —she murmured, momentarily lost in the unfolding stories.
The Mandalorian waited silently until she lifted her gaze again.
—Now, about Amara —he said, returning to a more serious tone—. We can’t simply release her after everything that’s happened. But we can’t keep her like this forever either.
Beatriz closed the book, her mind racing.
—We could use her —she suggested—. If she’s connected to something larger, maybe we can make her lead us to them. Put her back on the board— but with us controlling the pieces.
Her father nodded slowly.
—That could work. But we need a solid plan. Something that lets us watch her closely and ensures she can’t betray us again.
Beatriz thought for a moment.
—We could implant a tracker or a restriction tethered to her transformation stone. And at the same time, we could give her a chance at redemption. If she truly wants to change… she could help us.
The Mandalorian smiled, impressed by her strategic thinking.
—Well thought, Beatriz. We’ll do that. But be careful. Amara is dangerous— and trust must be earned.
In the Workshop
Nox Félix and Beatriz worked together on a small device perfectly shaped to embed into Amara’s transformation stone. Nox, skilled with technology, adjusted circuitry with precise hands.
—This should work —Nox said, tightening the last piece—. If she tries to escape or betray us, the device activates. It won’t hurt her— it will just pull her back.
Beatriz nodded, grateful.
—Thank you, Nox. I just hope this keeps her safe… and keeps us safe too.
In the Hall — Lucien’s Call
Lucien and the Mandalorian faced each other in a silent, electric stand-off. Lucien appeared calm, but tension radiated from him. The Mandalorian stared hard before finally speaking.
—I will return Beatriz in a few hours —he began firmly—. But there are conditions.
He removed a list and read:
—If you do not come alone, I won’t return her.
—If you bring authorities or allies, I won’t return her.
—If you carry any weapon, I won’t return her.
—If you attack me or my partner, I won’t return her.
—If you turn into that red smoke, I won’t return her.
Lucien remained composed, understanding the purpose behind every rule.
—Anything else? —he asked, controlled but defiant.
The Mandalorian held his gaze.
—You’re not just what you appear to be, are you?
Lucien inhaled slowly.
—No, I’m not. But I am here for Beatriz. Nothing else matters.
The Mandalorian nodded, satisfied.
—Good. Follow the rules— and you won’t need to worry about anything else.
From Helmet to Lion
While Beatriz and Nox finished the safety device for Amara’s stone, she turned to her father.
Beatriz —Hey, dad… I mean, I can’t keep calling you Dad or Mando forever. We need something more… something ours.
Mando —You’re right. But choosing a name isn’t simple, especially in a world where we can’t use the real ones.
She studied him, memories stirring— and then the answer came.
Beatriz —How about Aslan? Like the lion. Strong, protective… and you’ve always been like a lion to me.
Aslan (smiling) —Aslan… I like it. It has strength— and meaning. Thank you, daughter.
The moment softened the room like sunlight through armor.
Nox tapped the finished device.
—This should encapsulate Amara’s transformation stone. It will regulate when she’s able to transform.
Beatriz —Good. We don't want her panicking or feeling threatened. But we need control.
Aslan —Then everything is set. I’ll handle the meeting with Lucien. No more surprises.
With the device complete and Amara secured, Beatriz, Nox and Aslan prepared to face whatever came next— together. Aslan, now with his new name, feels more connected to Beatrice, ready to face whatever comes.
Danger or Refuge
The meeting point is a clearing in the Forbidden Forest, a secluded place heavy with mystery. Lucien arrives with steady steps, his imposing figure cutting through the trees. He wears a finely embroidered leather jacket, dark denim pants, and a gaze sharp enough to melt steel. Beatriz stands beside her father, who is clad in Mandalorian armor, helmet unreadable—yet even beneath it, his concern is palpable.
Lucien steps forward, and just as he gets close, Aslan breaks the silence, addressing Beatriz in a tone only a father could wield.
Aslan (in Spanish) —Oye, este tipo huele a peligro. Lo puedo oler desde debajo de mi casco mandaloriano. ¿Qué te enseñé, hija? ¿No recuerdas los comerciales de “mucho ojo”?
Beatriz (in Spanish, trying to soften it) —Bueno, también huele a protección…
She’s visibly flustered, knowing her father is one breath away from turning worry into a lecture.
Lucien, understanding none of it, freezes mid-step. Confusion flickers across his face—rare for someone like him. Hidden within the treeline, Nox Félix, rifle in hand, hears everything and can’t help laughing quietly, thanks to his connection to the Storge love channel.
Lucien (under his breath) —What language is that? I don’t recognize it… and that’s unusual.
Aslan leans slightly toward Beatriz, still in Spanish.
Aslan —¿Estás segura de que este es tu novio y no un villano sacado de una telenovela?
Beatriz nods—proud, nervous and absolutely red.
Lucien decides it’s time to intervene, unsure but needing clarity.
Lucien —Beatriz… what are you saying? I’m not following.
Beatriz turns to him, cheeks still warm.
Beatriz —It’s… an ancient language from my world. My father and I use it to… speak privately.
Aslan (in Spanish, amused) —Ahora soy un “idioma antiguo”, ¿eh?
Lucien, still confused but determined, speaks directly to Aslan, who watches him with cautious appraisal.
Lucien —I know I look dangerous—because I am, in a way. But I’m not here to start trouble. I’m here because Beatriz means more to me than words can express.
The sincerity in his tone softens something in Aslan’s guarded posture.
Aslan (in English, finally) —Prove it.
Lucien nods. Words alone won’t be enough.
Lucien —I’ve spent years facing threats I can’t fully explain. I’ve always worked alone—protecting others from the shadows. But when I met Beatriz… everything shifted. I tried to keep her at a distance to protect her, but she isn’t like the rest.
Aslan —And what makes you think you can protect her?
Lucien —It’s not just that I can—it’s that I will. Because she taught me to want more than loneliness. I know I’m not perfect, but I’m willing to face anything for her.
Silence. Aslan’s helm tilts—suspicion still present, but cracked by conviction.
Aslan —Then start by proving you are not only danger… but also her refuge.
A truce is forged—not verbal, but understood.
Between Claws, Tails and Confessions
They walk toward the ship. Forest shadows shift around them; tension gives way to humor—the messy, affectionate kind only families manage.
Aslan (Spanish, dry) —Oye, ¿no es muy grande para ti ese tipo? A estas alturas deberías andar en tus 34 o 35, ¿no? Por cierto, ¿qué edad tiene él?
Beatriz nearly chokes, pushing him lightly.
Beatriz (Spanish) —¡Ay sí, el burro hablando de orejas!
You’re no one to talk about age! You and mom have like ten years between you!
From the Storge channel, Nox bursts into laughter.
Nox —I’m just saying— you two have a lot in common!
Beatriz shoots her father a sharp glare, refusing to yield.
Beatriz —Besides— you already told me how old you and mom were. What, 26? Do the math, ¿recuerdas?
Aslan is struck speechless—then chuckles, defeated.
Aslan —Well… at least admit you’re ahead of your mother already.
Beatriz softens, voice gentler.
Beatriz —At least now you’re more understanding about it…
Aslan exhales, voice reflective.
Aslan —With age comes wisdom. And though I wasn’t always there as I should’ve been… these four years apart made me reflect. I should’ve been more present.
Beatriz —And now you have to trust my judgment. I am an adult. I set the bar high— and he still passed it, just like you taught me.
Pride glints behind the visor.
Beatriz —I think I made the right choice. There's something I learned in that world history book you gave me…
They arrive. The ship decloaks, sleek and metallic under forest light.
Lucien’s eyes widen—then widen a little more when a small boy with cat ears and tail pops into existence.
Nox strolls over and grabs Aslan’s arm like it’s routine.
Aslan —This is Nox, the family’s godchild. Now—let’s board the ship to discuss the terms of our alliance.
Lucien follows, stunned but smiling.
Because nobody told him he would meet a cat child today—
and it is absolutely hitting his weakness. He smiles as he follows them inside the ship. Secretly, he can't help but be charmed by Nox's unexpected appearance, his weakness for cats clearly evident.
Notes:
📌 Author's Note — Chapter 53
Thank you so much for your support — we’ve just crossed 1,035 reads in the English translation!
I still can’t believe it. Seeing you here, reading chapter after chapter, truly means more than I can say. 💖And well...
I know some of you probably didn’t expect the Mandalorian to be Beatriz’s father, right? 👀
Don’t worry — this isn’t a random twist. His presence, his origins, and why he holds power will be explained later through a proper in-story reveal and synthesis. The puzzle pieces are coming, I promise.For now, just enjoy the chaos, the tension, and what’s still waiting ahead…
And if your curiosity is stronger than your patience —
📌 The Latin American Spanish version is 30+ chapters ahead.
Yes, spoilers live there. Yes, it’s dangerous. Proceed at your own risk. 😆🔥
👉 Versión en español latino
https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/navigate
Thank you for being here. Let’s keep going — the real storm hasn’t even begun.
Chapter 54: The Scent of Secrets
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over +660 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
📚 If you prefer to read this story in Latin American Spanish, where there are more advanced chapters already available, you can check it out here:
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Notes:
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Chapter Text
The ship glides smoothly toward a hidden cave, activating its camouflage mode as it enters. The interior is comfortable—futuristic, yet warm. Everyone sits around a small table as the ship stabilizes. Beatriz takes a deep breath, preparing for the introductions.
—Lucien, this is my dad, Aslan. He comes from another dimension, searching for my family and me. He found me, but… there’s something worrying he told me. —Her voice trembles slightly as she clenches her fists on her lap—. Apparently, there are too many people looking for me too. This isn’t a blame or a lecture, Lucien, but...
She pauses, eyes locked on her hands, struggling to find the words.
Beatriz, whispering —I’m a walking atomic bomb, aren’t I?
Silence fills the cabin. Lucien leans forward, eyes shining with a mix of compassion and resolve. He had suspected Beatriz was more important than she believed, but hearing her say it hurts him.
Lucien, in a low, steady voice —Yes, Beatriz. I suspected it. That’s why I’ve always tried to keep you close. Not just to protect you, but because… you’re at the center of something much bigger. But that doesn’t mean you’re alone.
Aslan watches the exchange with a blend of approval and caution, while Nox stays silent, absorbing every word.
Lucien, looking at Aslan and then at Beatriz —I propose a more formal alliance. Clear rules and a plan to protect you, Beatriz, and to face the greater threat. It’s not just the government after you. There’s a bounty hunter group called the “Rainproofs.” —He pauses as Aslan and Nox chuckle softly at the name—. And it seems not everyone who claims to be close to you has good intentions.
Aslan, cutting in with a mocking tone —Yes, the “Rainproofs.” Nox and I have dealt with a few. Not exactly the brightest group, but persistent.
Lucien nods, absorbing the information.
—Let’s share information and resources. We need to work together to keep Beatriz safe. And not only that— we must stay one step ahead of everyone hunting her.
Beatriz lifts her gaze, eyes shining with gratitude and newfound resolve.
—Thank you, Lucien. And thank you, Dad, for coming for me. I know this won’t be easy, but together, we can face whatever comes.
Aslan smiles and nods.
—It’s time to take control of the situation. We’ll make sure those Rainproofs—and anyone else bold enough to look for you—regret it.
Lucien speaks again —Then let’s make it official. A strategic alliance. Together, we’ll be stronger.
With a mischievous grin, Nox suggests an improvised toast.
Everyone raises their rehydration drink cups, sealing the alliance with a symbolic gesture.
Preparing the Hands So the Heart Survives
Aslan reclines in his seat, watching Beatriz and Lucien with a calculating look. The alliance talk had been a solid beginning, but now it was time to think about how to protect Beatriz effectively.
—Beatriz, the first thing we need to do is prepare you better. I want you to train with the weapons I have on the ship. I’ll teach you how to handle yourself in combat—and more importantly, how to think strategically, avoiding direct confrontation whenever possible. We can’t afford mistakes, and your safety is our top priority.
Beatriz nods, though a shadow of sadness crosses her face.
—I understand, Dad. I don’t like fighting, but I know it’s necessary. And I can’t be around… some of the other guys right now. It’s complicated. —Her voice drops, avoiding details.
Aslan watches her with empathy but doesn’t push.
—We also need a safe place to stay. The ship can’t be a resource those bastards hunting you can track. Lucien, do you have a property where Nox and I can stay? Something discreet and defensible if needed?
Lucien rubs his chin thoughtfully.
—I have a couple properties that could work. One is outside the city—isolated and secure. Nobody would suspect that place. We can move there and establish it as our operations point.
Beatriz looks up, worry still in her expression.
—Thank you, Lucien. But I’m still worried about everything we’ve discovered. I can’t be near Emil, Kael, or Miguel Ángel without putting them in danger. Emil could get hurt if I lose control of my energy, Kael already has someone evil after him… and Miguel Ángel… his connection to me is even more complicated.
Aslan watches her with a mix of understanding and concern.
—Beatriz, we’ll do everything to protect the people you care about. But right now, we must focus on keeping you safe. And there’s something else we need to address.
Lucien, curious —What is it?
Aslan, decisive —We need to talk to Amara. Her father isn’t planning anything good, and if we can bring her over as an ally, it could change everything. I can handle that—find her and convince her to help us.
Lucien nods, seeing the strategic value.
—While you work on that, Beatriz and I can move forward with the training and set up the safe house. Pretending to live normally will be key to staying off the radar. Information is our greatest advantage— we must use it to stay ahead.
Beatriz breathes deeply —Alright. We’ll pretend to be normal as much as possible. But I know this is going to be difficult.
Lucien places a comforting hand on her shoulder.
—You’re not alone. We’ll face this together.
Aslan rises —Then it’s decided. Nox and I will stay at that property. Beatriz, training starts tomorrow. Lucien—make sure we have everything we need to keep this plan running.
Aslan & Amara — A Necessary Conversation
Fully equipped in his Mandalorian armor, Aslan approaches Amara, who sits bound, still wearing the noise-canceling headphones. With careful hands, he removes them, letting her hear again.
—Amara, we’re not going to hurt you, but I need you to listen carefully. Your father has put you in far more danger than you realize.
Amara tenses, though her movements are limited.
—Who are you? Why am I here? What does my father have to do with this?"
—I’m “Mando,” the father of the girl you fought, and I’m here to protect her. What your father did by throwing you into this mess was irresponsible. We aren’t your enemies, but if you keep following him blindly, you’ll end up in even more danger. He’s using you— and now, because of him, you’re here, vulnerable.
Amara snarls softly, in disbelief and irritation —My father only wants what’s best for me. I don’t know what you’re talking about.
Aslan, firm —What he wants is control. He put you in our sights— and in the sights of others who won’t be as careful with you. Think about what he’s doing. Do you really believe he’s protecting you? You’re a piece in his game, and because of him, you ended up here.
Amara falls silent, processing his words.
—I’m not asking you to trust us immediately, but consider what I’m saying. We can help you see the truth, but for that, you need to open your eyes to what’s really happening.
Aslan stands, placing the headphones back as he leaves her with those words.
The Thief of Victories
Meanwhile, elsewhere in the ship, Beatriz and Lucien sit in silence, holding hands. Beatriz feels an overwhelming pressure building inside her, as if she’s about to explode. One question echoes in her mind:
—What kind of Otome universe is this?
She tries to calm herself, sensing there must be a way to contain her power—but her thoughts are interrupted when Nox jumps down from a hanging hammock and approaches with a device in hand. He plays a transmission on the screen, revealing the triumphant face of Maximiliano Sturm.
Maximiliano: “The witch hunt conducted by Sirius stands as an example of justice and righteousness. All of this has been possible thanks to my daughter and me, and this is only the beginning of our mission to cleanse this world of threats.”
Beatriz shoots to her feet, furious.
—That malevolent cockroach! He’s taking credit for your efforts, Lucien—turning them into his and his daughter’s!
Lucien’s expression darkens, his jaw tightening as he watches the screen. He stays composed, but the irritation is obvious.
—This was expected. Maximiliano always knew how to twist situations to his advantage. But we’re not letting this go.
Beatriz crosses her arms, taking a deep breath to steady herself.
—We have to find a way to expose the truth—to make everyone see what’s really going on. We can’t let them get away with this.
Lucien places his hand on her shoulder.
—And we will. But first, we need to make sure you’re safe. None of this matters if you’re not protected.
Nox nods, still holding the device.
—We have the advantage of information. If we play our cards right, we can dismantle their façade.
Beatriz and Lucien exchange a look, knowing the path ahead will be difficult—but determined to face it together.
After the transmission, the tension still lingers. Beatriz and Lucien try to regain their composure, but Nox—ever curious—breaks the silence.
Nox, in Spanish, with innocent curiosity —Beatriz, is that “aroma” in Lucien normal?
Beatriz instantly blushes, startled by the question. She turns toward Nox, trying to maintain composure.
Beatriz, still blushing —What exactly do you mean, Nox?
Nox, crafty as any sharp-eyed child, climbs back into the hammock, swinging gently.
—He has several scents: volcanic ash, bird feathers and… blood? Reptile? But it’s not from others—it’s his.
Beatriz breathes in relief at the explanation, though her cheeks remain pink. She tries to deflect the topic, but Nox’s curiosity is undeniable.
Beatriz, asking in English as she looks at Lucien —Could you… tell Nox what you really are? He’s asking about your scent—I guess it’s feline curiosity. She lowers her gaze a bit, still embarrassed. “It reminds him of someone… but it’s better if you explain it yourself.”
Lucien crosses his arms, thoughtful for a moment before he answers.
—Well, Nox, what you smell in me is part of who I am. I’m not completely human, like Beatriz. There’s something in my blood that comes from a… special lineage. That’s why my scent is different—why it’s a mix of what you described.
He leans slightly toward Nox with a soft smile.
—It’s part of what makes me unique. Just like you have your own special traits. And that curiosity of yours is a great virtue. Never stop asking—just remember that some secrets must be revealed at the right time.
Guarded Trust
Amara remains restrained, blindfolded and with her ears covered, as Aslan approaches to speak with her. Still wearing his full Mandalorian armor, his resonant, steady voice fills the room.
—Amara, we know your situation is complicated, but we’re not your enemies. Your father, Maximiliano Sturm, has put you in a dangerous position— and we don’t want to be part of that game.
He leans in slightly, ensuring Amara can hear every word.
—We’re going to release you, but under certain conditions. You have a device built into your transformation stone. If we detect that you try to betray us or transform without our permission, we’ll activate it before you can use your stone. We don’t want to do this— but it’s necessary for our safety.
He pauses, letting Amara absorb the information.
—We’ll take you to the outskirts of the city, to a remote bus stop. We’ll use one of our gliders so you won’t be able to track the engine or the ship. We don’t want to keep you prisoner— but you must understand that we can’t afford to trust you completely yet.
From a corner, Nox adds softly:
—It’s a fair deal, don’t you think? We’re not abandoning you—we’re just making sure everyone stays safe.
Amara takes a deep breath, processing his words. Despite the extreme caution, she senses sincerity—an unspoken promise that they won’t harm her if she cooperates.
—Do you trust us enough to accept this agreement?
Notes:
📌 Author’s Note:
I’m honestly speechless right now — we just passed 1,060+ reads, and with this Chapter 54 update, we’re about to cross 1,070! 😭💖
Thank you SO much for reading, staying, supporting, and diving with me into this chaotic neon universe full of magic, Mandalorians, emotions, and unexpected twists.This sudden growth still surprises me every day.
Every read counts.
Every comment makes my week.
Every new reader reminds me why I love writing this story so much.✨ Thank you for being here.
Thank you for reading.
Thank you for helping this world grow.And if you’re curious, the Latin American Spanish version is about 30 chapters ahead 😏👇
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/See you in the next chapter… it comes with sparks, tension, and revelations.
💜🌃🐍🐉
Chapter 55: A Kiss Before the Steel
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over +680 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
📚 If you prefer to read this story in Latin American Spanish, where there are more advanced chapters already available, you can check it out here:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
🎉 An alternate version is now available—with more drama, romantic tension, and key choices 🐍💖🐉, Remember to show your support to help reach the next translation goal:
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Notes:
📌 Author’s Note — Update Schedule, Milestones & Comment Goals
Hi everyone! 💖✨
First of all, thank you so much for all the love you’ve shown this story.
Today we’re celebrating:🌟 +1120 reads on the English version
🌟 +685 reads on the original Spanish versionSeeing this project grow like this truly means everything to me. Thank you for being here. 🫶
Now, here’s an important update regarding the posting schedule:
📅 Starting today:
📖 Spanish version: 1 chapter per week
📖 English version: 2 chapters per week (for the next 3 weeks)
This will help reduce the gap between both versions while keeping the quality strong.
📚 Starting in January, I’ll be entering an intense study period for an important exam, so:
➡️ Both versions will shift to 1 chapter per weekThis is not a disappearance — just a strategic pacing change to avoid burnout and keep delivering chapters with proper care.
✨ About comments on the Spanish version:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
Global comments will officially be opened once the original version reaches 1000 reads.
We’re currently at 685, so we’re getting closer! 💪💖Thank you for your patience, your excitement, and for walking alongside Beatriz on this journey.
The season finale is coming with big emotional impact… and yes, it will be worth the wait. 😏🔥
Chapter Text
Aslan and Nox escort Amara to a bus stop on the outskirts of the city. The glider moves smoothly, leaving Amara with no way to track the engine. They leave her in a secluded spot, ensuring she has access to transportation but making it difficult for anyone to follow her. Aslan makes sure Amara understands the conditions before freeing her.
Back on the ship, Beatriz and Lucien wait in silence. Beatriz breaks it first, remembering Aki and Sora.
—Lucien, what happened with Aki and Sora? Are they safe?
Lucien nods, his voice calm yet firm.
“I took them to a safe house while I was searching for you. They’re fine.”
Beatriz smiles, relieved.
—Thank you, Lucien. I need to send them a message so they know I’m okay. And I think we should wait a couple of days before going back to my apartment. We don’t want to raise suspicion, right?
—Agreed. We can keep a low profile for now.
Beatriz looks at Lucien, gratitude shining in her eyes.
—Lucien... thank you for everything you do for me. I don’t know what I’d do without you.
Lucien meets her gaze with intensity, his love for her unmistakable.
—Beatriz, I’ll always be here for you. No matter what happens.
In that moment, the tension and fear dissolve, giving way to an intimate pause. They move closer, hands intertwined as their eyes meet. Beatriz feels her heartbeat quicken, and Lucien—usually so serious—softens his expression just for her.
Feeling the deep connection between them, Beatriz leans in slightly. Their lips meet in a soft kiss, full of unspoken promises and restrained emotions. The world melts away, leaving only the warmth of that fleeting instant.
As they slowly part, Lucien whispers:
—For you, Beatriz, always.
Lucien’s Lov-meter rises to 90%, reflecting the growth of his love and commitment.
Lucien decides to take Aslan and Nox to a secure residence—an isolated, fortified place used in high-risk situations. On the way, Aslan and Nox talk about their immediate future and how they can support Beatriz from afar. Lucien arranges their protection and establishes a secure communication system to stay in constant contact.
Upon arriving at the safe residence, they inspect the facilities and begin planning to modify part of the house into a training room. Aslan, an experienced Mandalorian, comments that during his two years of training he learned long-distance combat and technical skills for intervening digital equipment, but now they must focus on close-quarters combat.
Nox, intrigued and eager, listens attentively as Aslan explains the need to synchronize Mandalorian techniques with each person’s natural abilities, emphasizing tactics and strategy.
Aslan also mentions that he brought basic equipment to train Beatriz—to strengthen her self-defense and improve her tactical capacity. He knows Beatriz already has a strong foundation, but now she must adapt to a more tactical, organized combat style—something crucial for the battles ahead.
Meanwhile, Beatriz returns to the building where the interns, the armorer, and the blacksmith greet her with great relief. Her absence had caused deep concern, and seeing her return puts them at ease. The armorer and blacksmith immediately offer their help, ready to provide any equipment or support she needs.
Returning to her familiar environment gives Beatriz a brief sense of normalcy, allowing her to resume her routine—at least on the surface—while mentally planning the next steps and how to keep suspicion away. The concern still lingers, but being back with her people grants her a moment of calm to reflect and prepare for what’s coming.
Lucien drove silently through the winding streets toward the secure residence, a hidden and fortified refuge used in emergencies. Next to him, Aslan looked out the window, analyzing every corner of the route with the gaze of a seasoned warrior. Nox, in the back seat, couldn’t contain his feline curiosity—his golden eyes shining as he observed everything.
—It’s quite a secluded place, Aslan said, still scanning the surroundings.
—It is, Lucien replied, calm but resolute. “You’ll be safe here, and you can focus on what we need to do.”
Nox tilted his head, his feline ears twitching as he asked innocently:
—Are we staying here for long? Or is it just temporary?
Lucien smiled faintly.
—It depends on how things progress. But this place has everything you need to train and rest.
When they arrived, Lucien drove into an underground garage that sealed shut behind them. Inside, the residence was cool and quiet. The walls absorbed sound, and the windows were bulletproof—designed for absolute safety.
Aslan and Nox explored the area, inspecting every corner. Aslan stopped in a large empty room, already visualizing its transformation.
—This space will be perfect.
He pointed at the corners.
—We can install equipment here and there. It’ll be enough to start.
Nox joined him, excitement bubbling in his voice.
—Can we do tactical simulations too? I want to learn more of those!
Aslan nodded, serious but approving.
—Of course. Training won’t be just physical. We need to be mentally prepared for anything.
Meanwhile, Beatriz returned to her usual building. Upon entering, the interns, the armorer, and the blacksmith all paused their work, relief evident on their faces.
—Beatriz! the armorer exclaimed, rushing over. “You had us worried. Are you okay?”
Beatriz smiled, though fatigue was clear in her eyes.
—Yes, I’m alright. Sorry for leaving without warning. There were… complications.”
The blacksmith—broad, rugged, and warm-hearted—stepped forward as well.
—What matters is that you’re here now. If you need anything, anything at all, you know where to find us.
Beatriz nodded gratefully.
Returning to this familiar environment allowed her to breathe again, though she knew the calm was only temporary. In her mind, the next steps lined up clearly: maintain normality, continue her routine, and most importantly—prepare for the storm ahead. Her worries for Aslan, Nox, and everything she still had to face remained heavy on her, but for now, she had to focus on the present.
At the safe residence, Lucien adjusted one last detail in the security system before heading toward Aslan and Nox.
—We’ll stay in constant contact. If you need anything, you’ll let me know.
Aslan nodded, his eyes reflecting the gratitude he didn’t voice.
—We appreciate all of this, Lucien. We’ll make sure we’re ready.
Nox raised a hand, offering a mischievous smile.
—Don’t worry, I’ll take care of Aslan too!
Lucien laughed softly before leaving, placing Aslan and Nox in the safe residence—prepared for the intense training ahead and ready to support Beatriz from afar.
Echoes of a Scattered Bloodline
Beatriz was sitting in Lucien’s living room, watching little Nox—the newly adopted one—play with a spinner, when her thoughts began to wander. It was strange, she thought, how quickly things had progressed between them. From those first interactions full of tension and teasing to that kiss that officially marked the beginning of their relationship, everything had been a whirlwind of emotions.
Beatriz felt good with Lucien—far more than she had ever expected. Even her father, known for being excessively protective, seemed to be handling the situation with surprising calm. Although he still kept Lucien in a “trial phase,” at least he hadn’t threatened him, as he used to do with her suitors in the past. Beatriz smiled at the memory of how her father had changed over the years, partly because of the experience of inhabiting another body and living in a different universe. He was more understanding now, though he still had that protective streak.
Her thoughts drifted to her family—especially her siblings and her mother. She wondered if they had gone through something similar, finding themselves in other bodies in parallel universes. The idea unsettled her, but also gave her a bit of hope; perhaps they were all safe somewhere, facing their own adventures.
Suddenly, Beatriz remembered something crucial:
the original protagonist’s grandmother had adopted a boy, “raising them both.” That boy—now a man—had become a pilot who disappeared long ago. During the original protagonist’s house explosion, his body was never found.
She wondered if he was alright. After all, in theory, he was the only family the original protagonist had left.
This thought weighed on her chest, but also sparked determination: she would find him if possible, and ensure he was safe. Because despite everything, family was still the most important thing to her.
Taking a deep breath, Beatriz decided that, when the time was right, she would talk to Lucien about finding that “lost brother.” But for now, she allowed herself to enjoy the present and the love blooming between them.
The next morning, Beatriz woke feeling renewed. A good night’s sleep and a healthy breakfast were exactly what she needed. Lucien, always attentive, made sure she had everything before heading out.
—Today’s the day, Lucien said with a smile as he put on his jacket. We’re going to see your father, Aslan, and Nox. It’s time for you to begin your Mandalorian-style training.
Beatriz looked at him with a mix of excitement and nerves. She knew that her father, Aslan, was a strong and determined man, and Nox—though only 12—already showed the sharpness and agility of his black-cat race.
—Do you think I’ll be good enough? Beatriz asked, adjusting her belt.
Lucien stepped closer, holding her face gently as he looked into her eyes with an intensity that made her shiver.
—You won’t just be good enough, Beatriz. You’ll exceed every expectation. You’re stronger than you think, and they’ll see it.
That was exactly the encouragement she needed. With a renewed smile, Beatriz nodded. They stepped outside, where a transport awaited them. The trip to Aslan and Nox’s location was short, but long enough for her to mentally prepare.
When they arrived, the scenery changed drastically. A vast, arid terrain opened before them, with structures that looked like remnants of another time, another world. And there, in the middle of it all, stood Aslan and Nox.
Aslan, with his imposing stature, radiated authority. His Mandalorian experience was evident in every movement. Nox, meanwhile—though only 12—already displayed the cunning and agility of a black-cat child, his eyes gleaming with curiosity and challenge.
Lucien made the formal introductions, and after a brief exchange of evaluating looks, Aslan spoke in a firm voice.
—Welcome back, Beatriz. Here you will not only learn to defend yourself, but to understand what it means to be Mandalorian.
Nox added with a playful grin:
—Hope you’re ready to keep up with me. I’m not going easy on you.
Beatriz let out a soft laugh, grateful for the humor in such a tense moment.
—I’m ready, she said with conviction.
And so began a new chapter in Beatriz’s life—a training that would not only strengthen her physically, but transform her into something far greater than she had imagined, with her family by her side.
Beatriz was already familiar with discipline, having trained at the academy and served in the Hunter Unicorn forces. However, Mandalorian training promised to be different—more personal, more rooted in tradition and the teachings her father Aslan had absorbed over the years.
When they reached the training grounds, Beatriz noticed how Aslan maintained impeccable posture even in this harsh environment. His clothes, though simple, were perfectly fitted and reflected his meticulous nature. Lucien, on the other hand, wore a similar outfit but with a more relaxed touch, fitting his impulsive personality.
Seeing them together, Beatriz had to suppress a smile. It was as if a “silent duel” were unfolding between her father—a mature, refined Leo—and Lucien—a young, fiery Aries—competing subconsciously over who had the better style before putting on their armor.
Are they doing this on purpose? she wondered, trying not to laugh.
Despite the seriousness of the training, that small detail felt oddly comforting. The friendly fashion rivalry between them was a reminder of the humanity they still shared, even amidst the intensity of Mandalorian discipline.
Aslan wasted no time putting Beatriz to the test. Training began with a series of exercises meant to strengthen not only her body, but her mind. Unlike the academy, where focus was technical, here it was about adapting, finding her rhythm, and using her innate abilities.
—Remember, Beatriz, Aslan said while watching her perform defensive movements, being Mandalorian isn’t only about wearing the armor. It’s a way of life—a way of understanding the world and our place within it.
Lucien, standing nearby, added with a grin:
—And if you ever need fashion advice, I’m right here. Don’t let Aslan convince you to wear only dark tones.
That broke the tension, earning a laugh from Beatriz, who finally let her amusement surface.
—Don’t worry, I know how to handle myself in both worlds, she said with a wink, returning to her combat stance.
The day continued with a balance of intense training and small comedic moments that eased the tension. Beatriz was learning not only to fight like a Mandalorian, but to appreciate those moments of lightness that made all the effort worthwhile.
Chapter 56: Between the Force and the Blood
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over +680 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
📚 If you prefer to read this story in Latin American Spanish, where there are more advanced chapters already available, you can check it out here:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
🎉 An alternate version is now available—with more drama, romantic tension, and key choices 🐍💖🐉, Remember to show your support to help reach the next translation goal:
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Notes:
📌 Author’s Note — Update Schedule, Milestones & Comment Goals
Hi everyone! 💖✨
First of all, thank you so much for all the love you’ve shown this story.
Today we’re celebrating:🌟 +1120 reads on the English version
🌟 +685 reads on the original Spanish versionSeeing this project grow like this truly means everything to me. Thank you for being here. 🫶
Now, here’s an important update regarding the posting schedule:
📅 Starting today:
📖 Spanish version: 1 chapter per week
📖 English version: 2 chapters per week (for the next 3 weeks)
This will help reduce the gap between both versions while keeping the quality strong.
📚 Starting in January, I’ll be entering an intense study period for an important exam, so:
➡️ Both versions will shift to 1 chapter per weekThis is not a disappearance — just a strategic pacing change to avoid burnout and keep delivering chapters with proper care.
✨ About comments on the Spanish version:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
Global comments will officially be opened once the original version reaches 1000 reads.
We’re currently at 685, so we’re getting closer! 💪💖Thank you for your patience, your excitement, and for walking alongside Beatriz on this journey.
The season finale is coming with big emotional impact… and yes, it will be worth the wait. 😏🔥
Chapter Text
Aslan had always encouraged Beatriz to dress in cheerful colors, a reflection of his own somewhat eccentric yet mature style. When they returned the next day to the training grounds, Beatriz couldn’t help but notice the contrast. Her father, with his vibrant and well-coordinated outfit, and Lucien, maintaining his relaxed, signature style. It was as if both were engaged in a silent fashion competition—something only Beatriz seemed to notice and secretly enjoy.
While continuing her training, Beatriz took a moment to send a message to Aki and Sora through individual chat, warning them:
—For now, keep a low profile. If a witch appears near either of you, tell me immediately. Don’t take risks. Amara Sturm has the power to stop time, so you need to be very careful.
The girls replied with quick nod emojis and messages showing they understood.
Between one training session and the next, Beatriz also pondered how to contain the power of her heart to prevent it from becoming a devastating threat—like an "atomic bomb."
Aslan, always perceptive, spoke to her about a Jedi holocron he had kept—one that might contain the answers Beatriz needed.
—This holocron might help you find balance, Aslan said as he handed it to her carefully. —The Jedi also dealt with powers that could spiral out of control. You might find something useful here.
Later that day, after training was over, Aslan, Beatriz, and Nox decided to have dinner together. Amid laughter and stories, they prepared the meal as if it were a family ritual. The kitchen filled with aromas and laughter, and even though they were surrounded by complicated circumstances, these moments reminded them of the importance of unity and mutual support.
During dinner, Beatriz thought about a possible technique to contain the energy of her protocore heart.
The night ended peacefully, with a renewed sense of hope as Beatriz prepared for what would come next.
Aslan had always encouraged Beatriz to wear cheerful colors, reflecting his eccentric yet mature style. When they arrived at the training grounds, Beatriz noticed the contrast once again. Her father, vibrant and coordinated; Lucien, relaxed and effortlessly stylish. It was still that same silent fashion duel between the two men—entertaining her internally.
While training, Beatriz sent a message to Aki and Sora:
—For now, stay low-profile. If a witch appears near either of you, tell me immediately. Don’t risk it. Amara Sturm can stop time, so be very careful.
The girls reacted with fast nods and emojis of understanding.
Between training sessions, Beatriz meditated on how to contain the power in her heart, preventing it from becoming destructive. Aslan, perceptive as always, mentioned a Jedi holocron he had kept—something that might help her.
—This holocron may help you find balance, Aslan said, handing it to her. —The Jedi dealt with powers that could spiral out of control. You may find something useful here.
Beatriz had her doubts. She knew accessing a Jedi holocron was like playing Russian roulette. While Jedi were often good, much of their doctrine had always made her hesitate. Still, she needed help, and this might be her best chance.
She activated the holocron, and to her surprise, a holographic figure of a Jedi Master appeared. The master, with characteristic serenity, offered her guidance:
—Welcome, young seeker. If you seek to control the power residing in your heart, we must first understand and accept it—not fear it. There are ancient techniques that might help you channel that energy safely.
The Jedi Master proposed several meditations and control exercises that could allow Beatriz to manage her power without it overflowing. Beatriz listened closely, knowing this guidance could mean the difference between control and chaos.
As the holocron projected the Master’s figure, Beatriz felt a strange comfort—as if she finally had someone to share her deepest fears with.
—Master, I need your guidance, Beatriz began. —My heart holds a power called resonance. It’s something I barely understand, but it has already caused problems… There is someone—a boy—that if he gets too close without precaution, my heart could drain all his energy… even kill him.
The Jedi Master listened quietly, nodding with understanding.
—That must be a heavy burden for you, the Jedi said gently. —Resonance is rare and very dangerous when mishandled. But it can also be a force of creation and harmony, if used correctly. Tell me more, young seeker. What brings you here beyond this power?
Beatriz lowered her gaze, gathering strength before continuing.
—There’s something else I must confess. I think the original owner of this body chose to die to summon me—to help her in this life. I don’t know if I can fulfill what she expected of me… And even though I have support, the situation overwhelms me. Too many forces are after me because of this unique destructive power I possess.
The Jedi Master closed her eyes for a moment, as if feeling the weight of the confession.
—It’s understandable to feel overwhelmed, she responded. —You carry not only the power of resonance, but also the legacy and expectations of another life. But remember: power itself is neither good nor evil. How you use it defines its purpose. We will work to understand this power, so it does not consume you or those around you.
She offered Beatriz specific meditations and channeling techniques, along with advice on patience and self-compassion.
—Trust that time will bring clarity. And remember: you are not alone. Accept the support you have, and do not fear seeking help when needed.
Beatriz felt relief at the Jedi Master’s words, knowing this was only the beginning of her journey toward control and understanding.
Despite everything happening around her, Beatriz knew she had to act normal. Her routine as part of the Unicorn Hunters kept her alert, but whenever she could, she discreetly checked the map on her device, searching for any stable signal indicating a dimensional crack where the Incubators might be crossing. It was a delicate balance between duty and hidden threats.
Her sessions with the Jedi holocron became a sort of refuge. The Master offered guidance not only on controlling her resonance but also on staying calm amid chaos. Beatriz was surprised by how much those meditations helped her handle the constant pressure.
Mandalorian-style training with Aslan and Nox was another source of strength. Aslan, with his eccentric yet meticulous style, taught her combat and survival techniques that perfectly complemented what she had learned at the academy. Nox, with his youthful energy, brought lightness and camaraderie to the sessions.
A Duel of Styles
Still, not everything was serious. Each morning, Beatriz noticed her father and Lucien engaging in their “silent duel” of fashion. Both men, with strong presences, dressed with such care that it was impossible not to compare them. Aslan, with his love for bright colors and a slightly eccentric flair, contrasted with Lucien’s more sober and elegant style.
The undeclared competition between a refined Leo and an Aries like Lucien was something that, though neither admitted, kept Beatriz secretly entertained.
At night, after the day’s chaos, Beatriz took time to reflect on everything she had learned—both in combat and in her spiritual development through the holocron. But she also thought of Amara Sturm, knowing this powerful figure who could stop time represented a very real threat. She had given clear instructions to Aki and Sora to keep a low profile and remain alert. No unnecessary risks. Call her immediately if anything happened.
While juggling all these responsibilities, Beatriz couldn’t help but compare how the Mandalorians—especially her father, Aslan—treated her in contrast with her other father, Maximiliano. Aslan gave her freedom and trust that Maximiliano never had. This new treatment, full of expectations but also understanding, gave Beatriz a sense of belonging she had never fully experienced before.
Meanwhile, Amara, accustomed to a very different upbringing, found herself confused by Mando’s approach. The respect and equality she was shown contrasted sharply with her dynamic with Maximiliano, where power and control were everything. The change was refreshing yet challenging, pushing her to adjust to a new way of interacting and leading—one far different from what she had always known.
The sun was just peeking over the horizon when Beatriz got up, getting ready for the most intense day since she had arrived in this new world. Aslan, her father, was already waiting for her at the training field, where the cool morning air seemed to carry a promise of imminent trials.
Aslan, although he didn’t follow the Mandalorian Creed to the letter, was a master in the art of combat and strategy. He knew that for Beatriz it was crucial not only to master physical skills, but also to understand the spirit behind every movement and decision.
Physical Challenges:
Training began with an exhausting endurance and agility circuit, designed to push Beatriz to her limits. Jumping, climbing, and dodging obstacles while wearing armor heavier than what she usually used was only the beginning.
Strategic Challenges:
Later, Aslan presented her with a map of unknown terrain and asked her to plan an efficient ambush. Here, Beatriz had to prove her ability to quickly analyze the land, anticipate enemy movements, and coordinate a surprise attack.
Moral Challenges:
The final challenge of the day involved an ethical dilemma. Aslan posed a hypothetical scenario in which she had to choose between saving a group of innocents or capturing a key target for her mission. This forced her to reflect on the balance between duty and compassion.
At the end of the day, exhausted but satisfied, Beatriz stood before Aslan, who handed her a Mandalorian symbol adapted to her own style, recognizing her as a warrior worthy of the family legacy.
Hunt in the Crystalline Forest
The next day, Aslan gathered Beatriz, Nox, and Lucien for a special mission. Their objective: to hunt a Wander, a gigantic white stag with crystal antlers, whose energy core could be the key to facing future challenges.
Aslan explained:
—This Wander is more than just a beast. Its crystal antlers are not only beautiful, they also contain a pure energy we can harness. But it’s clever and dangerous. We need a plan, Beatriz, and you’ll be in charge of this hunt.
With the map of the terrain and detailed information about the Wander, Beatriz began to draw up the strategy. They had to act quickly and precisely, using Lucien’s knowledge of technology to locate the creature, while Nox offered his agility for fast maneuvers.
During the hunt, they faced multiple obstacles: natural traps, the Wander’s erratic behavior, and other lesser predators that made the mission more complicated.
Finally, Beatriz led the team into a perfect ambush, using her newly acquired skills and her intuition. The Wander was successfully brought down, and they were able to extract its energy core.
Aslan, proud, remarked:
—This energy will be key to adapting our tech and weapons, thanks to Lucien. You’ve proven you’re more than capable, Beatriz.
The forest was dense, sunrays barely slipping through the branches, casting intricate shadows on the ground. The atmosphere was charged with an almost electric energy, as if nature itself knew something was about to happen.
With his firm, experienced voice, Aslan deployed a three-dimensional map of the terrain, projected from his tactical wrist-brace. The holographic figures represented the Wander and its movement patterns.
—Listen, this creature isn’t just fast and resilient, it’s also intelligent. We can’t underestimate it. Here— he pointed to a clearing near the river —is where it usually comes to drink. It’s the best place to set an ambush. Beatriz, you lead. We’ll follow your plan.
Beatriz nodded, her eyes shining with determination as she mentally reviewed the team’s strengths.
The Strategy Drawn
With the map still projected, Beatriz began to outline the plan:
—Nox, we’ll use your connection with nature to immobilize the Wander as soon as it steps into the clearing. Its endurance will be a problem, but with your abilities we can buy time. Dad, you’ll need to be in an elevated position with the sniper rifle and shoot the first antler. It’s vital you don’t destroy it completely, we need it intact. I’ll go for the second antler right after.
She paused, turning to Lucien, who kept his expression calm but expectant.
—Lucien, when it’s weakened, I want you to use that black energy sphere of yours. It’s our final card, and with it we’ll finish the job. Are we clear?
With a unanimous “yes,” the team prepared for the operation.
The team moved silently through the forest, following the Wander’s tracks: deep hoofprints in the mud and crystal shards scattered like pieces of a natural puzzle. Upon reaching the clearing, each member took their position.
Aslan climbed onto a tall rock and adjusted the scope of his rifle, aiming toward the area where the Wander was expected to appear. Nox, with his palms pressed to the earth, closed his eyes and began to murmur softly, as if speaking directly to the forest. Roots and nearby branches seemed to respond to his call, vibrating with latent energy.
Beatriz, weapon in hand, was ready to fire. Her breathing was controlled, but her mind was working fast, calculating every move. Lucien stayed behind, his gauntlet slowly charging a sphere of dark energy that seemed to absorb the light around it.
The sound of branches cracking broke the forest’s silence. The Wander appeared, majestic—its white hide glowing with an unreal gleam, and its crystal antlers reflecting the few sunrays that reached the clearing. The creature stopped by the river, lowering its head to drink.
Beatriz raised a hand, giving Nox the signal. With a fluid motion, he made the roots in the ground surge upward, coiling around the Wander’s legs. The creature bellowed, struggling fiercely, but the roots, reinforced by Nox’s energy, managed to hold it in place—if only for a few seconds.
—Dad, now! Beatriz shouted.
Aslan pulled the trigger with surgical precision. The shot echoed through the forest, striking the Wander’s left antler. A burst of crystals exploded into the air as the stag let out a deafening roar. Without wasting a second, Beatriz aimed for the second antler and fired. Her energy round struck hard, fracturing the crystalline structure but leaving the base intact.
The Wander, weakened but still dangerous, let out a final bellow and charged at Beatriz in a fury. But before it could reach her, Lucien stepped forward, his dark energy sphere now fully charged.
—Time to sleep, big guy, he murmured with a faint smile as he hurled the sphere.
The black orb hit the Wander square in the chest, disintegrating the creature’s remaining energy and dropping it with a crash that made the ground shudder. The forest fell completely silent, as if it were holding its breath.
Beatriz approached the Wander’s motionless body, still cautious. Her father and Nox joined her while Lucien began preparing the tools for the extraction.
—We did it, said Beatriz, holding one of the crystal antler fragments. Her voice was filled with pride and relief. —It was a team effort.
Carefully, the energy core was extracted—a glowing sphere that pulsed like a heartbeat. Aslan held it for a moment before handing it to Beatriz.
—It’s yours. You led everything. This core represents our victory, but also our responsibility.
Beatriz held it in her hands, feeling the vibration of the power inside. She looked at the others—her companions, her family in this war.
—We’ll use it well. But for now, let’s rest. This is only the beginning.
The team collected the antler fragments and left the clearing, leaving the Wander’s inert body behind. Despite their exhaustion, a new energy drove them forward: the certainty that together, they could face any challenge.
Chapter 57: The Blind Cat’s Warning
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over +680 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
📚 If you prefer to read this story in Latin American Spanish, where there are more advanced chapters already available, you can check it out here:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
🎉 An alternate version is now available—with more drama, romantic tension, and key choices 🐍💖🐉, Remember to show your support to help reach the next translation goal:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/71705591
☕ Want to support my work?
It’s always optional, but your support means a lot:
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Notes:
📌 Author’s Note — Update Schedule, Milestones & Comment Goals
Hi everyone! 💖✨
First of all, thank you so much for all the love you’ve shown this story.
Today we’re celebrating:🌟 +1165 reads on the English version
🌟 +720 reads on the original Spanish versionSeeing this project grow like this truly means everything to me. Thank you for being here.
Now, here’s an important update regarding the posting schedule:
📅 Starting today:
📖 Spanish version: 1 chapter per week
📖 English version: 2 chapters per week (for the next 3 weeks)
This will help reduce the gap between both versions while keeping the quality strong.
📚 Starting in January, I’ll be entering an intense study period for an important exam, so:
➡️ Both versions will shift to 1 chapter per week
This is not a disappearance — just a strategic pacing change to avoid burnout and keep delivering chapters with proper care.
✨ About comments on the Spanish version:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
Global comments will officially be opened once the original version reaches 1000 reads.
We’re currently at 720, so we’re getting closer! 💪💖
Thank you for your patience, your excitement, and for walking alongside Beatriz on this journey.
The season finale is coming with big emotional impact… and yes, it will be worth the wait. 😏🔥
Chapter Text
Night had settled in, wrapping Lucien’s house in a calm, quiet dimness. After days of intense training, moving between the academy, work, and the battlefield, Beatriz could finally rest. Lucien had taken her to his home without any protest from her, and now they were curled up together on the couch, wrapped in a blanket as the soft glow of the holoscreen illuminated the room.
Exhausted, Beatriz fell asleep quickly in Lucien’s arms, breathing softly against his chest. Lucien smiled to himself, resting his chin on her head. Though he wouldn’t say it out loud, he felt proud—and something deeper—seeing her like this, so relaxed after everything she had been through.
The silence in the room was broken only by the sound of the movie still running on the screen.
Until they were no longer alone.
A shiver ran down Lucien’s back before he could even see the cause. A light weight jumped onto the backrest of the couch and then walked with elegant steps over the blanket, approaching him with complete confidence.
Pirata had arrived.
The blind Siamese settled on the back of the couch, just above Beatriz’s head. He didn’t meow or show any affection—he simply stayed there, ears perked and his face pointed exactly toward Lucien. He saw him without needing eyes, and whatever he saw didn’t seem to convince him.
Lucien sighed.
—Seriously? Right now, at this perfect moment, you decide to show up? —he murmured without moving his head, careful not to wake Beatriz.
Pirata tilted his head slightly, whiskers twitching.
—I’ll assume you know why I’m here.
Lucien narrowed his eyes.
—Because you love making my life miserable.
The cat made a sound resembling a low, sarcastic laugh.
—I won’t deny that watching you squirm is amusing, but this is serious, Lucien. And I know that deep down, you know it too.
Lucien clenched his jaw. Of course he knew.
Pirata flicked his tail calmly, as if he had all the time in the world.
—Two threats are approaching. Two. And both will test Beatriz like never before.
Lucien felt his body tense but didn’t interrupt.
—One of them will be enough to shake her conviction to keep loving you. The other… —Pirata’s tail stopped moving— could make her leave you.
A chill ran down Lucien’s spine. This wasn’t the first time he’d heard such a warning, but this time… it sounded more real than ever.
—And here comes the best part, Lucien, because you and Beatriz have done something very stupid. —the cat tilted his head, almost amused— You’ve reinforced the curse.
Lucien felt his throat dry up.
—Explain.
—Before, only the witch who cursed you could kill you. Now, there’s a new condition. —Pirata let the weight of his words fall like a death sentence— As long as Beatriz keeps loving you, the curse stays active.
The air felt heavy.
—And if she stops loving me…
Pirata smiled, baring his fangs.
—You die.
Lucien’s heart raced for the first time in a long while. His expression darkened, but the cat wasn’t done.
—And not only that. You can’t imagine how much it will hurt her. When she realizes what’s happening, when she sees you fade or get wounded without being able to heal… She’ll know it’s her fault.
Lucien swallowed. Damn it. Damn it.
Pirata moved closer, enough for his whiskers to brush against Lucien’s face.
—So listen carefully, because this is your only way out.
Silence became oppressive.
—Marry her.
Lucien blinked.
—…What?
—You heard me. —Pirata stretched lazily, as if he hadn’t just dropped a bomb on him— Not with tricks or theatrics. Not with cheap spectacle, the way you love to do things.
Lucien narrowed his eyes.
—What’s wrong with how I do things?
Pirata ignored him.
—A real commitment. Legal. Official. Something that leaves no way to break the bond between you.
The air in the room grew heavier.
—You have all the cards in your favor. Beatriz already trusts you. Her father isn’t hunting you, even though he knows what you are and what you could mean for his daughter.
Lucien exhaled sharply.
—And if she says no?
Pirata laughed again, that dry, mocking sound.
—And if you let this chance pass… and lose her?
Lucien clenched his teeth.
The Siamese turned his head toward Beatriz, still asleep against Lucien’s chest, unaware of the entire conversation. Her relaxed expression contrasted with the storm now forming in Lucien’s mind.
Pirata jumped to the floor, but before disappearing into the darkness, he threw one last warning:
—Be the sun for her, Lucien. Not a flame that burns her.
And with that, he vanished, as if he had never been there.
Lucien remained in silence, staring at the ceiling. His mind raced.
Finally, he lowered his gaze toward Beatriz.
His fingers slid through her hair, softer than usual.
—Marry me, huh? —he whispered to himself, a smile forming.
Maybe… it was time to start doing things right.
Lucien woke up feeling a warm presence beside him. Beatriz slept peacefully, her breathing soft and her face relaxed. For a moment, he simply watched her in silence, memorizing every detail. There was something in the way she unconsciously held onto his arm that suddenly made everything clear.
He didn’t need spectacle.
He didn’t need a grand scene or dramatic display.
He just needed it to be real.
Carefully, he slipped away from her and adjusted the blanket over her. He made sure she was comfortable before getting up. He had work to do.
Lucien walked into the kitchen and began preparing breakfast. Nothing extravagant, but something special. Coffee with the perfect aroma, toast with honey and fruit—something light but meaningful. He wanted it to be a peaceful start, something that would make her smile when she woke up.
When everything was ready, he set the tray on the table and exhaled deeply.
Now came the important part.
He extended his hand and closed his eyes. A gentle wind swept through the room and, in his palm, a black feather took shape. It was his essence, a fragment of his power, but also a symbol of his commitment.
He smiled to himself.
Yes.
This was how it should be.
The Big Moment
Beatriz walked down the stairs with her hair slightly tousled, rubbing her eyes. The smell of coffee guided her, and when she reached the kitchen she saw Lucien waiting for her with a smile.
—Good morning, sleepyhead.
Beatriz raised an eyebrow, eyeing him suspiciously.
—You did this?
—Who else? —he replied, shrugging.
Beatriz approached and looked at the neatly set table with a bit of distrust. It was a beautiful gesture, but coming from Lucien, it was undeniably suspicious.
—But before you eat… I have a little gift for you, —he continued.
She narrowed her eyes.
—What kind of gift?
Lucien smirked, his usual air of mystery present.
—Sit down and you’ll see.
Beatriz obeyed, though she kept her eyes on him. As soon as she sat, Lucien snapped his fingers. In the air, right in front of her, a black feather appeared, floating with a faint ethereal glow.
Beatriz frowned and picked it up carefully. The moment her fingers touched it, a vibration rippled through the air around her.
And then, Lucien disappeared.
It happened in a blink. One second he was in front of her, the next, he was holding her hand firmly. His red eyes looked at her with unusual intensity—a mix of determination and tenderness.
—This is my little gift for you, —he said softly.
Beatriz looked at him, not fully understanding.
And then, he asked:
—Beatriz, will you marry me?
The world seemed to stop.
Beatriz felt the air leave her lungs for an instant. She stared at him, her mind struggling to process what she had just heard.
—Wait… what? —she managed to say, still holding his hand.
Lucien gave a small smile, but this time there was no mockery—only sincerity.
—I know we’ve been through a lot… and I know I’m not always the easiest person to deal with. But if there’s one thing I’m sure of, it’s that I want you with me. Not just today, not just during the battles, but always.
He leaned closer, his thumb brushing the back of her hand.
—No theatrics, no games. Just you and me.
Beatriz’s heart pounded. Not from nerves, nor from shock, but from the truth in his words. Lucien wasn’t promising a fairytale, or a perfect life. He was promising something real.
And that made it even more precious.
For an instant, Beatriz simply stared at him. Her dark eyes widened, reflecting surprise, emotion, and something deeper—something she had held inside for so long.
When she finally opened her lips to speak, her voice trembled, heavy with emotion.
—From the moment you put that boxing champion ring on my finger… —her left hand shook slightly as she lifted it, touching the metallic band she still wore— from then on, I waited patiently for you to ask me formally. I never lost hope. That’s why when I gave you the ring I made for you in return… I also waited patiently.
Lucien felt a knot in his throat.
Damn.
Pirata’s words echoed in his head: “Be honest. No theatrics. No tricks.”
And suddenly, it all made sense. Yes, at the time it had been bravado. A grand gesture, a promise thrown into the wind without fully understanding its weight.
But Beatriz… she had never taken it as a mere game. She had treasured it with patience, with love.
And if he had remained the arrogant idiot he used to be…
He could have lost her.
But he hadn’t. He was here. She was here. Waiting for him.
Before he could react, Beatriz threw herself into his arms, hugging him tightly, burying her face against his chest.
—I love you… —she whispered with a contained sob— I always hoped for this from you. A serious commitment, something real. And even if it surprised me… at least you didn’t do it with some big overwhelming ceremony…
Lucien held her firmly, resting his chin on her hair. He couldn’t see her face, but he knew if he lifted her chin, her eyes would be full of tears.
He had almost ruined it.
But he didn’t.
He took a deep breath and gently pulled her back so he could look into her eyes.
—Don’t worry, —he said, his tone more secure, more mature— in a few days, I’ll give you the engagement ring. I’m not afraid.
Beatriz’s heart flipped.
Lucien smiled—his usual overwhelming confidence, but without arrogance this time.
—I’m going to do everything necessary for us to sign the papers. I don’t want this to be just words. I want to do things right.
The Serpent’s Secret
Beatriz let out a trembling sigh, warmth flooding her chest. This was real. This was him.
And this time, without doubts, without fear, with her soul in her hands—she said yes.
But just when Lucien thought he had survived the emotional storm, Beatriz lowered her gaze slightly, wearing an expression that mixed shyness and mischief.
—Lucien… —she murmured, almost playfully.
He raised a brow.
—Mmm?
Beatriz bit her lower lip, hesitating as if unsure whether to reveal what she was about to say. But when she looked up again, her eyes had a cunning sparkle. A subtle but unmistakable change.
The gaze of a mature serpent that has just cornered its prey.
Lucien felt a chill run down his spine.
—Tell me something, —Beatriz continued, tilting her head slightly— I know you remember who I was in my other life… my other identity, the inventor. I know I was nineteen when… well, when my time in that world ended.
Lucien nodded slowly, still unsure where she was going with this.
Then Beatriz narrowed her eyes with amusement and asked softly:
—Tell me, love… if my mind is the one that reincarnated from the other world, and then we met again… how old do you think I really am?
Lucien blinked.
The information settled in his mind like lightning.
The time.
The calculation.
The difference between her original world and this one.
His eyes widened.
—Wait… what?
Beatriz giggled softly, placing a finger on his lips to silence him.
—Thirty-five years, Lucien. —Her smile was an enigma, a revelation wrapped in a game— You’ve been with a mature woman this whole time.
Lucien opened and closed his mouth like a fish out of water.
—Thirty-five?
His brain short-circuited.
—So all his youthful alpha-male arrogance had been directed at a woman with more experience than him?
Beatriz savored every second of his reaction.
—Oh come on, don’t make that face. —She tapped his nose— What’s with the shock?
Lucien cleared his throat, recovering his composure quickly.
—It’s not shock. Just… data processing.
Beatriz laughed.
—Yeah, sure.
Lucien stared at her, torn between disbelief and admiration.
—I don’t know whether to feel intimidated… or even more attracted to you.
Beatriz smiled sweetly, wrapping her arms around his neck.
—You can feel both.
Lucien narrowed his eyes, his competitive pride flaring instantly.
—You know what? I don’t care about the age difference. You’re mine, and I’m yours. Period.
—I always knew that, —Beatriz whispered, kissing him deeply.
And in that instant, Lucien understood that no matter the age, destiny, or past lives, Beatriz had always been—and would always be—his.
And he would do whatever it took to ensure that bond never broke.
—Lucien… we have to tell my father… that we want to get married…
Lucien, in that moment, experienced true terror.
Chapter 58: The Silent Duel
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over +680 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
📚 If you prefer to read this story in Latin American Spanish, where there are more advanced chapters already available, you can check it out here:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
🎉 An alternate version is now available—with more drama, romantic tension, and key choices 🐍💖🐉, Remember to show your support to help reach the next translation goal:
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Notes:
📌 Author’s Note — Update Schedule, Milestones & Comment Goals
Hi everyone! 💖✨
First of all, thank you so much for all the love you’ve shown this story.
Today we’re celebrating:🌟 +1165 reads on the English version
🌟 +720 reads on the original Spanish versionSeeing this project grow like this truly means everything to me. Thank you for being here.
Now, here’s an important update regarding the posting schedule:
📅 Starting today:
📖 Spanish version: 1 chapter per week
📖 English version: 2 chapters per week (for the next 3 weeks)
This will help reduce the gap between both versions while keeping the quality strong.
📚 Starting in January, I’ll be entering an intense study period for an important exam, so:
➡️ Both versions will shift to 1 chapter per week
This is not a disappearance — just a strategic pacing change to avoid burnout and keep delivering chapters with proper care.
✨ About comments on the Spanish version:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
Global comments will officially be opened once the original version reaches 1000 reads.
We’re currently at 720, so we’re getting closer! 💪💖
Thank you for your patience, your excitement, and for walking alongside Beatriz on this journey.
The season finale is coming with big emotional impact… and yes, it will be worth the wait. 😏🔥
Chapter Text
Lucien remained silent for a moment, absorbing what Beatriz had just said.
—We have to tell my father.
Those simple, direct words made his stomach tighten.
Shit.
Of course, he knew. He knew this moment would come, that sooner or later he would have to face Aslan, the man who was not only Beatriz’s father, but also The Mandalorian.
And the worst part…
He had already accepted this duel a long time ago.
Beatriz looked at him, expectant. Lucien took a moment to respond, but when he finally did, his voice sounded steadier than he felt.
—Yes… I know.
But inside, his mind was racing. He couldn’t just show up with a nervous smile and say:
"Hello, sir, I want to marry your daughter. Will you bless us and not kill me in the process?"
No.
This had to be done with strategy.
With intelligence.
Because even if no one said it aloud, he and Aslan had been locked in a silent duel for a long time.
A duel of clothing.
The Duel of Colors
Beatriz had noticed it before, but now Lucien saw it with unsettling clarity.
If he wore a red suit, Aslan showed up in a darker shade, a deep crimson.
If he chose something casual, like a gray knit sweater, Aslan wore a gray hooded sweatshirt—just as elegant but with a more imposing air.
Lucien had always assumed it was coincidence. But not anymore.
The duel was real. And he was about to enter the true battlefield.
He had to choose carefully what to wear.
Red was out. Too aggressive.
Gray… no. He couldn’t allow Aslan to dictate the tone of the encounter.
He needed a color that showed determination, maturity.
Blue.
Yes, blue was the key. Serene, confident. A color that conveyed balance and clarity.
And not just that. He also had to choose carefully where to talk to him.
He couldn’t do it in the property Aslan had lent him. Not only because it symbolically belonged to Aslan, but because Lucien wanted this conversation in a place where he could stand securely.
Think. Plan. Act.
Lucien knew he couldn’t back down. Not after promising Beatriz he would do this right.
And then, he remembered Pirata’s words:
“Be the sun for her, Lucien. Not a flame that consumes her.”
He took a deep breath.
This was his chance to prove it.
To prove to Aslan that he was the right man for Beatriz.
With his plan finally clear, Lucien lifted his gaze.
—I’ll do it.
And in that instant, Beatriz knew he was already visualizing the final battle.
The image burned into her mind as she watched him walk away, determination etched on his face.
Lucien was going to talk to her father.
And nothing would stop him.
The Dangerous Calm
Lucien stepped out of the vehicle with the poise of someone about to enter the combat arena.
Dark blue suit. Neatly tied tie. Perfectly polished shoes.
Every detail had been calculated.
He wasn’t going to stand before Aslan as an insecure boy. He was going to show he was a man—one who knew what he wanted and was ready to do things right.
But as he advanced toward the place where Aslan waited, a cold truth settled in his chest:
He was terrifyingly nervous.
When he finally arrived, he saw him.
Aslan stood tall, with the relaxed posture of a man who dominates every inch of the ground he stands on.
He wore a sky-blue suit, in a tone that contrasted perfectly with Lucien’s.
Lucien narrowed his eyes.
The silent duel continued.
But it wasn’t just the color choice that caught his attention.
Aslan’s jacket was slightly larger than usual. Not enough to be obvious, but enough for a trained eye to notice.
It meant he was carrying something.
Lucien let his gaze sweep naturally.
Beatriz’s father had a blaster discreetly holstered at his side.
It wasn’t paranoia. It wasn’t exaggeration.
It was experience.
Because Aslan wasn’t just a family man. He was a man who knew danger—and never, ever, went anywhere unarmed.
Lucien swallowed, but didn’t avert his eyes.
This was not the time to show weakness.
When he was within a reasonable distance, Aslan inclined his head slightly in acknowledgment.
—You chose the color well, —he commented in a calm but firm voice.
Lucien kept his composure.
—I thought it was appropriate for the occasion.
Aslan nodded, studying him with feline, predatory eyes.
—So? —he asked with dangerous calm— What did you want to see me for?
Lucien felt the pressure tighten in his chest, but he didn’t falter.
He stepped forward, keeping his gaze steady on Aslan’s.
—I’ve come to ask for Beatriz’s hand.
A dense silence fell between them.
The air grew heavier.
Aslan’s expression didn’t change, but his eyes sharpened slightly.
—Do you really think saying it is enough?
Lucien exhaled slowly, refusing to be intimidated.
—No. And I don’t expect it to be easy. But it’s what I want. And I will do it right.
Aslan held his gaze for a long moment.
Then, without a word, he pulled something from his back pocket.
Lucien felt a cold shiver crawl down his spine.
It was a tablet.
A strange sensation—almost like a premonition—washed over him.
Because if Aslan had brought something to show him, it meant there was information that could change everything.
—Before we continue this conversation… —Aslan said, turning on the screen and fixing his light-brown eyes on Lucien— there’s something you need to see.
And in that moment, Lucien knew that what he was about to witness…
Could change the course of everything.
Chapter 59: The Revelation
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over +735 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
📚 If you prefer to read this story in Latin American Spanish, where there are more advanced chapters already available, you can check it out here:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
🎉 An alternate version is now available—with more drama, romantic tension, and key choices 🐍💖🐉, Remember to show your support to help reach the next translation goal:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/71705591
☕ Want to support my work?
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Thank you for being part of this journey! 💫
Notes:
(See the end of the chapter for notes.)
Chapter Text
The wind lightly stirred the canvas of the wooden canopy, producing a rough, rhythmic sound that contrasted with the tense silence between the two men.
Lucien followed Aslan without saying a word, even though every fiber of his being screamed at him to stay alert. He knew what he was about to see would be no ordinary thing.
When Aslan sat down on one of the benches, the tablet resting in his hands, Lucien mirrored him, settling in across from him.
Beatriz’s father took his time before speaking, as if measuring every word with surgical precision.
—Tell me, Lucien… do you have any idea how you managed to get here without drawing attention? Without having “passed through the deep-space tunnel,” the most heavily monitored entry point in this universe?
Lucien, being an Aries, didn’t hesitate.
—I have an idea.
Aslan raised an eyebrow.
—Oh?
Lucien crossed his arms and exhaled slowly.
—Nothing is impossible if you know how to play your cards right.
Aslan smiled with an unsettling calm.
—Interesting answer. —He turned the tablet in his hands—. But let me tell you something: this file was delivered directly to my system. I reviewed it. I made sure no one else had access to it… And now… —he placed a finger on the screen—. I want you to watch it with me.
🎵 Love and Deepspace | Sylus: Tangible Shackles 🎵
Play.
The screen came to life instantly.
A piercing sound of red alarms echoed through the air.
WARNING… WARNING…
Energy fluctuations detected.
MOST WANTED TARGET IS ATTACKING.
Lucien felt a chill run down his spine.
Lights flickered in the background as a name appeared on the screen.
Target: LUCIEN HDS – 7213.
Location: The Supreme Interstellar Exile Star Ship “Tartarus”.
The video displayed police-style holographic footage, all glowing red with the same blinking word:
WARNING. WARNING.
The image shifted.
A dark corridor.
Bulkhead doors opened one after another, revealing a man seated, shackled, his head lowered.
His black-and-red shirt was torn to shreds.
His face was covered in blood.
But…
His smile…
Lucien felt the blood freeze in his veins.
That smile.
It was his.
God.
The camera zoomed in, showing how the man subtly moved his fingers, releasing the shackles with a simple gesture.
Cut.
A nocturnal cityscape.
A red moon glowing in the sky.
Raven feathers drifting through the air.
The camera turned just in time to capture Diaval, his raven, landing on his shoulder.
He extended his arm, reclaiming the blood particles he had lost.
Lucien’s mouth went dry.
The video shifted again.
A shot of an impossibly tall building.
He jumped.
The camera caught his body dissolving into a cloud of red and black particles, descending in a perfectly calculated fall until he landed on the asphalt in a dramatic stance.
The shot only showed his back as he walked slowly down the street.
And then…
Moonlight illuminated him.
All his wounds vanished in an instant.
Lucien, in the video, turned his face toward the camera, wearing an expression of absolute confidence.
And with a single motion…
He destroyed the camera with his hand.
Black screen.
A final message appeared in cold, definitive letters:
“THE TARGET LOST. OPERATION FAILED.”
“THE MSTW’S COORDINATES HAVE DISAPPEARED.”
Lucien could barely breathe as the image displayed a map of this universe’s solar system, marking the last possible coordinates.
This planet.
Then, his own voice echoed from the tablet.
—Ah… the night is only just beginning. Next time, I won’t let myself be captured so easily.
Lucien felt his skin prickle.
The video stopped.
Silence fell over the canopy like a slab of metal.
Aslan stared at him.
—Tell me, boy… —he said in that feline, calculating tone—, how does it feel to see what I already knew about you… before you even introduced yourself to me?
Aslan turned off the device and leaned back slightly against the bench, folding his hands over his lap.
Lucien remained where he was, unmoving, feeling his heart pound violently in his chest.
Aslan watched him with that same calm, predatory composure before speaking.
—Yes, Lucien. I knew what you are.
Lucien swallowed.
—The most wanted man in this universe.
Lucien clenched his fists.
—Yes. I know how to stop you… dragon.
Oh… no.
Lucien felt a shiver crawl through him. It wasn’t just that Aslan knew his record. He knew more. He knew something Lucien had never shared with anyone in this world.
But before Lucien could process it, Aslan continued:
—Do you know why I haven’t?
Lucien didn’t answer. His instincts screamed at him to run, but he knew that if he did, he would lose more than an opportunity. He would lose the respect of the man sitting across from him.
Aslan studied him like a predator measuring its prey before the final strike.
—Because you make my daughter, Beatriz, happy.
Lucien felt the air grow heavier.
—That alone is why I haven’t hunted you down or turned you over to the authorities.
Aslan’s words fell like a sentence.
—That, and because you’ve fulfilled every one of my little demands. Securing a house for Nox and me. Obtaining the documents so I can move through the city and work without resorting to… Mandalorian methods.
Aslan set the tablet aside and pulled out a document along with two pens.
—But before you assume that I approve of this marriage…
Lucien felt a knot tighten in his throat.
—Beatriz is of legal age, yes. But I want to be sure you won’t run at the first shadow of difficulty. Because believe me, Lucien, it’s going to get worse.
The Lion smiled faintly.
—That’s why… you’re going to sign a contract.
And there they were.
The pens.
Lucien could think of only one thing.
“My God… he knows everything.
Notes:
🌧️ Author’s Note
Thank you for reading this far! Your support truly means a lot.A few major hints were revealed in this section — including how Beatriz’s father was able to reach the game’s dimension and witness events from afar. None of this happened by accident in the writing; these connections will grow into a **roller-coaster of negotiations and tension** between her Mandalorian father and her fiancé Lucien. Big emotional sparks ahead.
Here’s the current posting plan:
📘 The **Spanish version** is updating **once a week** and is on its way to **735/1000 reads**.
Once it hits 1000, I’ll open **global comments** for everyone.📗 The **Latin American Spanish version** is already **30+ chapters ahead** — so if you’re tempted to jump deeper into the story, it’s all there waiting for you.
📙 Until the end of December, I’ll be posting **2 English chapters per week** to help narrow the gap before my study season begins in January.
This isn’t a farewell — just steady progress with intention.Thank you for your patience and enthusiasm. We’re moving forward, one chapter at a time, with purpose and neon-lit heart. ✨
Chapter 60: The Contract with the Dragon and the Lion
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over +735 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
📚 If you prefer to read this story in Latin American Spanish, where there are more advanced chapters already available, you can check it out here:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
🎉 An alternate version is now available—with more drama, romantic tension, and key choices 🐍💖🐉, Remember to show your support to help reach the next translation goal:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/71705591
☕ Want to support my work?
It’s always optional, but your support means a lot:
👉 https://buymeacoffee.com/beatrizdelmar
Thank you for being part of this journey! 💫
Notes:
(See the end of the chapter for notes.)
Chapter Text
Under the dim light of the canopy, the atmosphere grew dense, heavy with expectation. Aslan, with his imposing presence and deep voice, let a phrase escape that resonated with the force of a restrained roar:
—Now this is where it gets good. The moment of truth about the contract.
His eyes, sharp and cunning like those of a Lion, locked onto Lucien, who maintained a cautious expression. Before the young man could respond, Aslan raised a hand, signaling that he was not finished.
With a deliberate motion, he pulled an intricately crafted object from his jacket. For a moment, Lucien thought it was a weapon, but when the light reflected off the carved crystal, he realized it was something far older: a kaleidoscope of a design he had only seen in ancient manuscripts. Aslan held it with respect, turning it with the precision of someone deeply familiar with its mechanism. Instantly, a hologram projected into the air beneath the canopy, forming a clear and unmistakable image: the silhouette of a black Dragon with red eyes.
A shiver ran down Lucien’s spine. Seeing his true form reflected that way disarmed him for a moment. His pupils contracted as he turned his gaze back to Aslan, who held his steady.
—It’s not so much what you are that concerns me, —Aslan began in a grave tone— but what you represent. Your nature is not the problem in itself, but how you grow and how you act as a result.
The kaleidoscope emitted a faint glow as Aslan adjusted its gears, revealing symbols written in an ancient language. Lucien could not fully understand them, but Aslan, with a slight gesture of satisfaction, began to read them softly.
—You are a dragon of greed. —He continued, without taking his eyes off the artifact—. But not as the myths describe. In your case, there is a mutation… a peculiarity among your kind. In times of crisis, when your species faces extinction, some dragons can adopt a humanoid form. It is not merely a matter of individual survival, but of legacy. In this way, they can interact with humans and… leave descendants.
Lucien felt a knot form in his throat. He hadn’t known this. No one had ever told him. And yet, there it was, spoken with the certainty of a man who knew more about his species than he did himself. Aslan set the kaleidoscope aside and crossed his arms, lowering his gaze gravely.
—That is why I want you to sign a contract.
Lucien blinked, confused.
—A contract… for what exactly?
Aslan exhaled, as if he had been expecting the question. He pulled out a small rolled parchment and unfurled it across the table.
—First clause, —he said firmly—. If you are going to marry my daughter, you will not abandon her under any circumstances. No matter what happens, you must be a team. You are her light, and she is yours. As the head of the family, your duty is to protect her before yourself.
Lucien felt the weight of responsibility settle on his shoulders, but before he could fully process it, Aslan continued.
—Second clause. If you ever have to flee, you will do so when I tell you to.
Lucien frowned, but Aslan continued without giving him a chance to interrupt.
—It’s not only the Assassin League of “The Impermeables” that is hunting you because of the clumsy interference of the artist Miguel Ángel. He put her in their sights while searching for something called “The Tome of the Ancient Sea God,” which I suspect is part of something much larger. But there are other threats.
Aslan paused, measuring Lucien’s reaction before dropping the next bomb.
—A “mad scientist” named Carter is also tracking her. Because of Dr. Kael’s research.
Lucien felt a chill.
—Kael?
—Yes. Kael erased all the research from his thesis, but he couldn’t prevent someone from finding traces. Someone suspects Beatriz. They know about the ether core in her heart. And they want to use it… for something very dark.
Lucien clenched his fists. He knew exactly what that meant.
—They want to revive the dead.
Aslan nodded slowly.
—And Beatriz is the key.
Silence stretched between them. Lucien looked at the contract on the table. It wasn’t a simple signature. It wasn’t just an agreement. It was an oath to protect the most valuable thing he had.
—If you accept this, —Aslan said seriously— you accept everything that comes with it. If you have to flee this planet, you will do so. And you will do so with her.
Lucien inhaled deeply. His eyes returned to the hologram, where his dragon form still hovered in the air. There were many things he still didn’t understand about himself. But there was one thing he knew for certain: he was not willing to lose Beatriz.
With a firm exhale, he took the pen and held it above the contract.
—Tell me where to sign.
—
—Before you sign, I want you to understand one final detail. The Eye of the Dragon still has something to reveal to you.
Aslan picked up the kaleidoscope—the “Eye of the Dragon”—and with the delicacy of someone handling a sacred object, turned it once more to read another section. A beam of light projected an image onto the canopy: an imposing creature, humanoid, with black scales and red eyes like embers. Lucien felt his stomach churn as he saw himself reflected in that other, more primal form.
Aslan declared, pointing at an ancient linguistic fragment in the projection:
—You are a dragon of greed. Your instinct drives you to accumulate, protect, and please your partner at any cost. However, this carries consequences. Once you possess your partner and manage to produce offspring, there is a risk that the dragon, in a fit of greed, will kill her to prevent anyone else from having her. Despite this, I trust the primordial nature of all dragons: “A dragon will never harm what it truly loves.”
Lucien looked away from the hologram. He understood what Aslan meant. Everything finally made sense: his obsession with pleasing the witch, his need to give her whatever she demanded… and his final decision to deceive her, sacrificing himself. He had accepted his own destruction to prevent her from becoming his ultimate target. But the witch, blinded by her own greed, had cursed him with immortality until she herself returned to kill him.
And now Beatriz… she was different. She asked for nothing. Only his company.
—That’s why it’s important you understand this clause, —Aslan continued—. You cannot abandon her for the riches you have accumulated here. If the moment comes to flee and you look back, if in that instant you see not Beatriz first, but everything you are leaving behind… then you will die.
A chill ran down Lucien’s spine.
—It is a curse, —Aslan added with stone-cold severity—. Like Lot’s wife. You will turn into a pillar of salt and die…
Lucien clenched his jaw. He knew it wasn’t an empty threat. The contract he was about to sign was not a simple agreement. It was a pact with real weight.
—And there is one last condition, —Aslan said, his tone even darker—. You cannot have relations until all of this is over.
Lucien let out a dry laugh.
—Why the hell are you getting involved in our intimate life?
Aslan didn’t answer immediately. Instead, he placed both hands on the table and looked him straight in the eyes.
—Because if those who are hunting her discover that Beatriz is pregnant with your child, it will be the end.
The dragon fell silent.
—That mad scientist following Dr. Kael’s research isn’t after just anything, Lucien. Remember, he wants to revive the dead using ether cores. You already have one in your right eye. And Beatriz has one in her heart… Now tell me… what do you think they would do if they discovered your child inherited that same ability?
Lucien felt the weight of the warning. Suddenly, what he had endured in prison seemed like a simple game compared to the horror of what they could do to Beatriz.
—You yourself know what they tried to do to you. But if they capture her… —Aslan stopped, his gaze darkening—. I will not see my daughter subjected to that fate.
Lucien ran a hand through his hair, exhaling heavily.
—You can’t control everything, —he muttered.
—No, but I can warn you, —Aslan replied—. I know what it is to lose children. Beatriz’s mother lost her first set of twins. I will not allow my daughter to go through that, especially not because of your negligence.
Lucien felt the harshness of his words, but also the truth behind them.
—And there’s more, —Aslan continued—. I discovered something else.
He leaned in slightly, lowering his voice.
—The clinic where Dr. Kael is located is under surveillance. Not for security, but because they’re waiting to find the patient with the ether core. They are not implanting contraceptive chips… They’re implanting trackers. And they’re placing them only in women.
Lucien tensed.
—Because they already suspect the bearer is a woman, —he concluded.
Aslan nodded.
—If Beatriz falls into their hands, there will be no turning back.
The silence between them grew heavy. Finally, Aslan slid the pen toward him.
—To sign, you’ll need an DNA signature. My ink will absorb a small sample of your blood.
Lucien looked at the pen, then at the contract. He knew that by signing it, he was sealing his fate alongside Beatriz… for better or worse.
He took a breath, grabbed the pen, and held it firmly, injecting a small amount of his blood particles into the ink.
—Very well, —he whispered—. So be it.
And he signed.
Lucien felt the weight of the contract in his hands. His fingers tensed slightly as he watched Aslan unroll it with the same solemnity with which a king would seal an unbreakable pact.
For an instant, when the man closed his eyes and pressed the seal with his signature, a fleeting image projected itself behind him. Something ancient, powerful, almost divine. A golden Lion with a blazing mane, whose gaze reflected absolute authority.
Lucien blinked, feeling a chill run down his spine.
The air in the park seemed to grow heavy, as if an ancient force were marking that moment in history. And then Aslan put away the pen, closed the contract with the precision of a judge delivering a sentence, and without haste, rolled the document back up with the same meticulous care with which he had begun.
—Now it is your burden —Aslan said, sliding the parchment toward Lucien—. Do not fail.
The young man swallowed, feeling the contract weigh more than it should have.
“A lion,” he thought. “That man is a damn lion.”
Aslan calmly picked up the small device he had used to deactivate the Eye of the Dragon and, with the same care, slipped it into his backpack, along with the tablet that contained Lucien’s video. A tacit message: the pact had been sealed, and now he would protect that information until it was time to act.
Lucien knew that man did not make promises lightly.
He also knew that Aslan would not lift a single finger for him if he faltered.
And for the first time in his life, he understood that too many forces wanted to drag her, shape her, corrupt her, or claim her.
Aslan sighed, resting his forearms on his knees. His gaze drifted into the night breeze stirring the leaves of the trees.
—Beatriz needs more than simple protection —he said in a grave tone—. She needs a true safety net. Something more than a false name or a shadow to hide in.
Lucien frowned. He knew Aslan never spoke without reason.
—You think someone else is following her.
Aslan nodded.
Lucien swallowed.
—So you want us to give her a story to protect her from that unknown threat?
—Not only for that. —Aslan looked at him again—. Also for her own sake. Beatriz needs a place to return to. A real home. It’s not enough to have allies. She needs a safety net that no one can destroy simply by deleting a file or altering a record.
Lucien tightened his grip on the contract. He knew Aslan was right. Beatriz was strong, but even the strongest needed something to hold on to.
—Alright —he finally said—. How do we do it?
Aslan allowed himself a slight smile.
—I already have a story prepared. Legally, Beatriz will be my daughter. The official version will be that she was kidnapped when she was a baby or very young, and that I have been searching for her ever since. The Cronofith Catastrophe will serve as our excuse for the missing records. If we do it right, any investigation will only find a desperate father who finally found his daughter after years of searching.
Lucien narrowed his eyes.
—That sounds… too convenient.
—Exactly —Aslan replied calmly—. The best part is that it has just the right dose of truth and tragedy so that no one will want to dig too deeply.
Lucien sighed and ran a hand through his hair.
—Alright, it sounds solid. But there’s a problem. Nox.
Aslan smiled faintly.
—I’ve covered that too.
Lucien raised an eyebrow.
—How do you plan to pass off a beast-child with ears and a tail as human?
Aslan pulled a small watch from his pocket and showed it to him.
—I worked on this. It projects a full-body hologram. To anyone’s eyes, Nox will be a normal human boy. It’s the same principle they used in my dimension, only I applied it here.
Lucien studied the device with a mix of amazement and caution.
—That’s… too convenient again.
Aslan let out a short laugh.
—Learn something, Lucien. The best way to hide a lie is to make sure it’s as comfortable as possible for everyone involved. I want the story to be irrefutable. A father who recovered his missing daughter and, in the process, also found his other lost son. A broken family that finally reunites after years of suffering.
Lucien shook his head and let out a breath.
—A story too good to question.
Aslan nodded.
—Exactly. And if everything goes wrong…
The patriarch rose calmly, his shadow stretching in the faint light of the park lamps.
—…I will help you escape.
Lucien looked at him steadily. Aslan did not smile, nor did he offer words of encouragement. He had simply given him an exit, and the choice of taking it or not was now in his hands.
With a slight nod, the man turned and walked away.
Lucien finally released the breath he had been holding.
And, for the first time, he knew with absolute certainty that he was not allowed to fail. He truly understood Pirata’s warning. His warning about those who were coming after her was not only a matter of purity for the future of their children… but now he understood that the world was watching Beatriz. That too many forces wanted to drag her, shape her, corrupt her, or claim her.
Notes:
🌧️ Author’s Note
Thank you for reading this far! Your support truly means a lot.A few major hints were revealed in this section — including how Beatriz’s father was able to reach the game’s dimension and witness events from afar. None of this happened by accident in the writing; these connections will grow into a **roller-coaster of negotiations and tension** between her Mandalorian father and her fiancé Lucien. Big emotional sparks ahead.
Here’s the current posting plan:
📘 The **Spanish version** is updating **once a week** and is on its way to **735/1000 reads**.
Once it hits 1000, I’ll open **global comments** for everyone.📗 The **Latin American Spanish version** is already **30+ chapters ahead** — so if you’re tempted to jump deeper into the story, it’s all there waiting for you.
📙 Until the end of December, I’ll be posting **2 English chapters per week** to help narrow the gap before my study season begins in January.
This isn’t a farewell — just steady progress with intention.Thank you for your patience and enthusiasm. We’re moving forward, one chapter at a time, with purpose and neon-lit heart. ✨
Chapter 61: Echoes of the Past
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
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Chapter Text
“Between the Lion’s gaze and the edge of time”
Lucien exhaled heavily, still weighing the contract in his hands. Aslan waited patiently, giving him space to process it.
—Alright… —Lucien murmured—. But having just an identity isn’t enough. We need something more solid if we want to avoid uncomfortable questions in the future.
Aslan smiled faintly.
—Exactly what I was thinking. —He pulled out a small USB and set it on the table in front of Lucien—. Here are all my certifications and work records. Once we have Nox’s identity and mine established in the system, all of this will validate without a problem.
Lucien raised an eyebrow and took the drive with caution.
—What exactly is in here?
—Degrees, licenses, and trainings I earned throughout my life. —Aslan crossed his arms—. Engineering, advanced mechanics, programming, high-level electronics… enough not only to open a business, but to consolidate my identity as an independent contractor.
Lucien turned the drive between his fingers, considering the weight of what that implied.
—So… you want me to help you find a place?
—House, workshop, and tools. —Aslan nodded—. The whole package. If I’m going to make this believable, I need the business to be real.
—I understand. —Lucien pocketed the drive—. And Nox?
—We’ll enroll him in a local school.
Lucien blinked.
—What?
—It won’t only help him adapt better to this world —Aslan explained calmly—, it’ll also serve to gather information.
Lucien rested an elbow on the table and rubbed his temple.
—Tell me you’re not planning to use a kid as bait.
—Not directly. —Aslan smiled with ease—. But if someone is watching us, the school will give us a good clue as to who might be behind it.
Lucien clicked his tongue and ran a hand through his hair. All of this was scaling into something far bigger than he’d expected. And still, Aslan didn’t look the least bit shaken.
But Lucien did.
Because suddenly, a phrase crossed his mind like an echo of the past—one he himself had once said.
“Maybe the people closest to you are the ones who want to hurt you.”
His fingers tightened. The image came like lightning in his mind: a cold, violet stare.
Lucien clenched his teeth, feeling his pulse spike. Not now. Not here.
The sensation of his body frozen by that damn gravity. The betrayal. The murderous edge in that disdainful gaze.
That damned space Colonel.
Lucien drew a slow breath, but rage bubbled in his chest. The weight of the restraint cuffs on his wrists. The pain of every blow when they dragged him toward the ship. But he had taken advantage of the Colonel’s absence. He had provoked it on purpose.
He knew the shackles couldn’t do anything against his killing particles.
And that was why, when another officer struck him… he broke free.
Lucien closed his fists over the table, nails digging into his skin. All of this… was it coincidence? Or part of something bigger?
The red eye of Aries flashes on instinct when danger is near. And he felt something burning inside him, a premonition he couldn’t ignore.
But for now, he had to stay quiet.
He let out a controlled sigh and glanced sideways at Aslan, who remained calm, ignoring the storm inside him.
Fine. Let’s play this game.
Beatriz paced back and forth in her apartment, biting her lip in a nervous gesture she couldn’t control. Anxiety consumed her. She knew her father far too well. Aslan didn’t need to raise his voice or make direct threats. His mere presence commanded respect… or terror, depending on the occasion. And when it came to suitors, the scale always tipped toward the second.
She thought of all the times her father had scared off boys before she even had time to learn their intentions. She clearly remembered the incident with her older brother, Reyearth, when a poor girl went into shock after hearing Aslan say that all those family gatherings were nothing more than an excuse to talk about marriage. Reyearth had simply smiled with that calm so typical of Aquarians, while one of his two younger brothers, Escat, covered his face with a hand, embarrassed by the scene.
And now it was Lucien’s turn.
Beatriz gripped her phone in both hands, took a deep breath, and decided to call him. She checked the time: 10:00 p.m. Perfect. She knew Lucien hated daylight and that his activity increased at night, so there would be no issue contacting him at that hour.
The ring sounded once, twice, three times… until finally there was a click, followed by Lucien’s deep voice—though with an undertone Beatriz couldn’t quite identify.
—…I survived.
Beatriz let out a breath she hadn’t realized she was holding.
—And? —she asked, trying to sound casual, though the knot in her stomach tightened.
There was a pause before Lucien let out a snort, followed by a low, almost ironic laugh.
—Your father is a lion. But you already knew that.
Beatriz frowned, biting her tongue to keep herself from snapping back.
—So? —she pressed, a little impatient.
—So —he replied, his tone heavy with exhaustion but also determination—, now I understand what it means to be at the center of a storm. But if you think I’m going to take a step back… you’re wrong.
Beatriz’s heart lurched. She felt a mix of pride and worry, as if everything were about to spill over.
—Lucien… —she whispered, almost breathless.
—I’m going to be your sun, Beatriz —he cut in, with a firmness that left her speechless—. Even if the whole world is against us.
The silence that followed was heavy—a silence that devoured the space between them, making everything more real, more imminent. And before she could react, the call ended.
Beatriz stared at her phone screen, pulse racing and heart pounding. Lucien hadn’t lost. He hadn’t run. He hadn’t hesitated. And that, more than anything, made him more dangerous than ever.
Then reality swerved completely. As she let the echo of the conversation fade in her mind, a notification in her virtual inventory caught her attention. She’d been reviewing the rewards and items she’d obtained throughout her stay in this world without much interest, until her gaze stopped on a specific object: Lyserg Diethel’s dowsing crystal from Shaman King. The same one she had used to navigate the labyrinth of the first witch. How had it gotten there, when she’d thought it had vanished after her first mission? It was an item from another level—something she hadn’t even registered at the beginning.
Intrigued, she kept exploring her inventory, fingers sliding quickly across her system screen. She stopped when she discovered a box of items she didn’t remember acquiring: the Item Box. At first she thought it was a mistake, but when she investigated further, she realized it was a special space—granted by the AliExpress shop—something that couldn’t be compared to normal item bags. Though the slots were limited, what fascinated her was that any object stored inside became undetectable to external forces. No being—not even the most powerful—could trace its contents.
And best of all, the objects inside the Item Box didn’t deteriorate. She could store food, medicine… anything. In a way, time inside the box stopped. It was the perfect tool to hide important things without anyone being able to track them.
But the biggest surprise came when, while checking claimable items, she saw something that made her freeze. The Miraculous of Creation. The famous Ladybug earrings. She remembered downloading the mobile game as a trivial pastime, never imagining she’d obtain something as valuable as this after buying the full version. At first she thought it was nothing more than a decorative item or something insignificant, but now… now she knew it could be a powerful tool—maybe even a game-changer. She went to rest, because the next day she’d have to go to the academy early.
The sun had barely begun to filter through the academy windows, illuminating the marble hallways Beatriz walked in silence, lost in her thoughts. Despite the hours of sleep she’d missed, her eyes were sharp, and her mind was still circling the conversation with Lucien from the night before. She couldn’t stop thinking about his words, the determination in his voice, and what that meant for them.
But there was something else gnawing at her—something not even her conversation with Lucien had managed to soothe. That meeting with the principal was what unsettled her most right now.
She stepped into the principal’s office, a tall, serious man with a penetrating stare that never seemed to relax. Beside him, Emil—her partner-in-arms—greeted her with a faint smile, but quickly fell into silence, as if he too could feel the tension in the air.
—Beatriz, sit down —the principal instructed with a firm gesture, pointing to the chair across from his desk. When she settled in, he crossed his arms, watching both young people with that assessing look that always made it clear he was about to drop important news.
—I have a surprise for you —the principal began, pausing to give his words more weight—. We’ve decided that Amara Sturm will be joining our academy in a few days.
Beatriz couldn’t help the frown that tightened her face. Amara Sturm. The same one who had defeated the Wanders on her own at last month’s party. The same one who, according to rumors, possessed abilities on another level. And worst of all, the same one who—if it came to a clash—could endanger even the most experienced hunters. The principal seemed to notice the unease in her expression, but he kept talking.
—Her father, as you know, made a generous donation to the academy. As part of that agreement, we’ve decided to incorporate Amara into the team. And from what I’ve been told, she’s more than willing to test her skills with us. In a few days, she’ll be one of our new members.
Beatriz nodded slowly, but the knot in her stomach didn’t loosen. She knew what was coming next. The principal stared at her directly.
—I want you to be the one to face her in a combat demonstration. Or if not you, then Emil. But I think you’re the best option. After all, you’re our most outstanding student.
Beatriz’s face hardened. Facing Amara in combat was a far greater challenge than the principal realized. She couldn’t allow Emil to fight her—not when Emil knew so little about the scope of Amara’s powers. Beatriz couldn’t tell the principal everything she knew about her, not without revealing more than she should.
Beatriz inhaled deeply, thinking fast, while her mind wrestled with information she couldn’t share.
—I understand —she said at last, choosing not to give a rash answer—. But before I accept, I need a few days to think about it. I want to talk to Emil and discuss how to approach this confrontation. I can’t make a decision this important without analyzing every option.
The principal studied her for a moment, weighing her words. He knew Beatriz wasn’t the type to ask for time without a solid reason. Finally, he nodded with a faint smile.
—Alright, Beatriz. I’ll give you two days. Talk to Emil, do what you need to do. But don’t forget the confrontation must take place as soon as Amara returns. And I want every detail ready.
Beatriz stood, offering the principal a slight nod of thanks before leaving the office, with Emil following in silence.
Once outside, in the empty hallway, Beatriz let out a breath of relief—though she was far from calm. She had two days to devise a plan. Two days to find a way to face Amara without everything turning into disaster. She knew she couldn’t do it alone, and she’d have to involve Emil in the planning, even though she hated the idea of putting him in danger.
—I have to protect Emil… —she murmured to herself—. I need time to find a way to win. Because facing her won’t be simple.
And so time passed at the academy—between training classes and mundane tasks—until the day was nearly over.
The sun began to sink slowly, painting the sky a warm orange. Beatriz walked toward the top of the academy building, where she suspected Emil would be waiting. The cold afternoon breeze brushed her face, clearing some of the doubts that had piled up in her mind. She knew the conversation she needed to have with Emil wouldn’t be easy, but it was necessary. She needed him to understand how serious this was. And more importantly, she needed him prepared for what was coming.
When she arrived, Emil was already there, leaning against the railing and watching the horizon. His expression, as always, was calm—almost distant—but Beatriz knew Emil well enough to recognize that, inside, he was processing everything at a surprising speed. Emil always felt like an enigma to her, but that was precisely why she’d chosen him as a partner in so many missions. His ability to analyze any situation from every angle made him unique.
—Emil —Beatriz said, her voice steady but threaded with a faint note of concern.
Emil turned slowly, his expression as composed as ever, but his eyes—those deep blue eyes full of analysis—watched her with intensity.
—What is it? —he asked, as if he already sensed something important was coming.
Beatriz stepped closer and leaned against the railing too. She stared ahead for a moment, searching for the right words. She didn’t want to alarm him, but the situation was too severe not to be direct.
—Emil, I need you to listen to what I’m going to say with your full attention —Beatriz said seriously—. Amara Sturm isn’t a normal student. She’s a magical girl, one of the most powerful ones.
Emil raised an eyebrow, but didn’t speak, waiting for her to continue. He knew Beatriz hadn’t come all the way up there to talk about nothing.
—She has a very dangerous ability —she continued, never looking away from Emil’s eyes—. She can stop time. Like one of those “magical girls” you’ve already heard about. And that’s not all. She has a… weapon well—almost unlimited weapons—and she knows how to use them.
Emil’s brow furrowed slightly. For a moment, his eyes darkened, as if he were processing the implications.
—So we’re not talking about just magic… —Emil said quietly, thoughtful—. We’re talking about a completely different level of power.
Beatriz nodded, drawing a deep breath.
—I know. I already faced her. It was at the party. After she defeated the Wanders. She was in the middle of the dance floor like it was nothing… —she paused, remembering the intensity of that night, the sense of danger that had surrounded her—. That was when her father made the donation to the academy. Amara wasn’t part of the initial deal, but after that incident, the principal decided to bring her in. And now, the principal wants someone to face her in a combat demonstration.
Emil studied her, his expression still calm, but his eyes shone with an intensely calculating focus—like he was analyzing every possible angle.
—So… the solution is for you to face her? —he asked, doubt edging his voice, but not surprise. He knew Beatriz could stand against anything, even the impossible.
Beatriz nodded slowly, but it wasn’t that simple.
—Yes, but… I need time. I can’t just jump into a fight without a plan. That’s why I asked the principal for two days. I need to design the best strategy without being found out. I don’t want them to know I was the one who faced her at the party. No one can know.
Emil fell silent for a moment, staring at the horizon while his mind processed everything. As a Libra, he tended to reflect before making decisions. He wasn’t impulsive—he was meticulous, always seeking balance between what was right and what was logical. Finally, he spoke calmly, though his tone carried contained unease.
—So what you’re saying is Amara not only has the ability to stop time, but she has an arsenal of weapons we don’t know how she’ll use. And still, the principal wants you to face her.
Beatriz nodded, hoping Emil understood just how massive this was.
—What worries me most is that no one knows how far her power goes. And if the fight is real… it could put all of us in danger. And if something goes wrong, the consequences could be… serious.
Emil looked at her, and for the first time Beatriz saw a flicker of worry on his face. Even though he tried to stay calm, it was clear he saw what she saw.
—So what do you propose? —Emil asked at last.
Beatriz turned, watching the city lights beginning to flicker on below them. She knew she couldn’t face Amara without a backup—something beyond strength and skill.
—I need us to trust each other —Beatriz said firmly—. I need us to work together to find a way to neutralize her abilities—especially the time control. I can’t do this alone. And if you’re not the one facing her, then I will be.
Emil watched her for a moment longer, then smiled with that expression so characteristic of him: calm, almost carefree.
—Alright. If that’s the only way to face her, then there’s no turning back. We already fought a witch together, Beatriz. And we’ll do it again. But this time, we need a better plan. Much better.
Beatriz nodded, relief spreading through her chest as she realized Emil was with her. She knew that together they could find a way to face Amara—but time was running out, and the tightness in her chest didn’t ease.
—Then let’s get to work —Beatriz replied, as they both stared at the horizon, knowing their fight was about to begin.
The breeze on the rooftop grew colder, and Beatriz closed her eyes for a moment, thinking about what she had just said. Everything was in her hands now, but there was still so much to do. She needed something more—something that could give her the edge over Amara without exposing too many of her own resources. While Emil reflected, Beatriz allowed herself a few seconds to think about the only thing that could make the difference. A “miracle,” as she’d once called it.
Then she remembered.
The Ladybug Miraculous. That small jewel that had appeared as a reward in her inventory. She couldn’t use it directly in combat—it was too risky. But if she could find a way to use it to get a clue on how to defeat Amara… maybe she still had a chance.
Beatriz couldn’t tell Emil about the Miraculous. It was far too dangerous. But she knew she had to make it work somehow.
She sighed, letting out the air she’d been holding. Emil watched her with the same calm as always, but something in his expression suggested he understood Beatriz had more on her mind.
—I think I already have an idea —Beatriz said at last, without looking him directly in the eyes. She knew Emil wasn’t stupid, and he could read her expressions easily, but for now she needed him to be patient and trust her.
—Really? —Emil asked, lifting an eyebrow. His tone remained relaxed, but there was a spark of interest in his gaze. He had always admired Beatriz’s ability to come up with creative solutions.
Beatriz nodded with a faint smile.
—Yes, but I still need to fine-tune some details. What I told you earlier, Emil… I’m going to need you to keep going with your training while I… work on this. I don’t want anyone to know yet what I’m planning.
Emil looked at her for a long moment, like he was trying to read her, but he didn’t ask more questions. He knew enough to trust that Beatriz always found a way forward—even in the most complicated situations. Still, there was something else in his demeanor, a warmth that wasn’t usually so obvious.
—I’ll leave it to you, Beatriz —he said, his voice calm but edged with an affection that only surfaced when things truly mattered—. You know I’m here for whatever you need. And when you have the plan, you tell me. I trust you.
Beatriz smiled, grateful for the trust Emil always gave her. It was rare to find someone like him—someone who not only saw things logically, but also carried that quiet loyalty.
—Thank you, Emil. Seriously. Don’t worry about anything, everything will be fine. I’m going home—I need a few minutes to organize my thoughts and figure out how to apply my idea. But I’ll contact you as soon as I’m clear on everything.
Emil nodded without another word, his eyes serious but never losing that familiar warmth. Before Beatriz could take a step toward the exit, he stopped her with one last sentence.
—Beatriz… don’t forget this isn’t just a fight. It’s more than that. Don’t let anything make you doubt yourself. You’ve won before.
Beatriz looked at him, eyes locked on his. Her heart gave a small lurch at his words, and for a moment she wondered if Emil understood more than he let on.
—I won’t forget, Emil. Thank you.
With one last look, Beatriz turned and walked toward the exit. She knew what she was about to do could change everything forever, but she couldn’t stop. With every step, her mind filled with ideas and strategies. The Ladybug Miraculous could be the key to unlocking the solution she needed—and if everything went well, Amara wouldn’t even know what hit her.
Chapter 62: When Empathy Opens the Forbidden Box
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over +745 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
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Chapter Text
Night fell over the city, and Beatriz was getting ready to head back home, where she would put the final touches on her plan. She was more determined than ever. She only needed one last miracle.
Beatriz walked down the academy hallway, but her mind wasn’t in the present. Her thoughts drifted—unwillingly—into the past, to that day engraved in her memory with an intensity that never faded. The image of Emil—so dim and distant, his gaze empty, as if he wasn’t even there—cut through her mind like lightning.
It had been a gray, cold day, like all those that come before a storm. Beatriz had only recently arrived in this new world and she still didn’t know Emil well, but there was something in his energy—or rather, the lack of it—that made her suspicious. She knew something wasn’t right with him. An instinctive feeling—like a Pisces premonition when calm water turns dangerous—told her she had to follow him.
It was as if Emil was disappearing from reality.
That day, he had been so quiet, almost absent, but Beatriz knew that wasn’t normal for him. It wasn’t the indifference of someone simply having a bad day; there was something deeper and darker in his eyes, like he was crumbling from the inside. With a knot in her stomach, she decided she couldn’t leave him alone, and she followed him.
She found him in a small meadow inside the academy’s forest, a place almost no one knew about. He was there, in the center of the clearing—Emil stood still, staring at an invisible point, breathing slowly, yet with such a vast emptiness that Beatriz could feel it even from a distance.
What shocked her most was his energy: it was almost drained, as if he had been pouring out everything he had—down to his last reserve. Something didn’t add up. Emil wasn’t the kind of person who let himself be dragged into despair. He was calm, calculating… but now he looked broken, lost.
She approached carefully, silently, but close enough to let him know he wasn’t alone. That was when Emil—like he had heard her thoughts—took a step back and looked at her, his eyes reflecting a deep melancholy.
—Beatriz… —he whispered, his voice so hollow she could barely hear it.
Without her even asking, Emil explained—almost in a murmur—what had been tormenting him. The truth he had been hiding, the weight crushing him, everything he had kept silent for so long. He was a prince from a world doomed to destruction.
—My world… it’s already destined to collapse. There’s no way to stop it. The only way to save it is… by sacrificing myself. And I… I can’t do it. —Emil closed his eyes with a pained expression—. I’ve tried so many times. I’ve failed every single time. And time keeps repeating itself. I’ve been repeating the same cycle for 242 years. Every time… every time I protect the same person, only for everything to end in disaster again.
Beatriz watched him in silence, her heart tightening with Emil’s sorrow and suffering. She didn’t understand every detail, but she could feel the crushing pressure of his pain—the agony of someone carrying a burden far heavier than any one person should ever endure. She knew Emil’s mind, so logical and analytical, couldn’t withstand that amount of anguish.
Then Emil began to sway, and Beatriz felt his energy collapse even further. His body started to emit an unstable, almost destructive vibration. Something inside him was about to break completely. The pressure, the stress, everything he had been accumulating for so long—was about to make his own Evol destabilize.
Beatriz didn’t hesitate for even a second. She knew what she had to do. Without thinking, she stepped toward him, extending her hands to his chest almost instinctively, trying to calm him down.
—Emil… please. Don’t let it take you. —Her voice came out firmer than she expected, but her words were an anchor in that sea of desperation.
Emil looked at her with glassy eyes, unable to answer. The emptiness inside him was dragging him—pulling him toward an abyss with no return. But Beatriz wasn’t going to let him go. She couldn’t.
She had something inside her that she had never thought of using in a situation like this. In that instant, she remembered something she had seen in the original protagonist’s story. The interdimensional hole, a source of energy with immense power. Beatriz knew she couldn’t give everything without risking her own life, but if she could give him some of that energy, maybe she could save him—steady his mind enough to pull him out of that destructive trance.
With a clear mental image, she felt the energy of the hole she had previously absorbed activate. It was impulsive, but filled with sincere kindness. Beatriz placed one hand on Emil’s chest and closed her eyes. In that moment, she transmitted almost all the energy of the interdimensional hole, using her power and experience to channel it through him. She knew it could stabilize him, but it was also dangerous. She didn’t know how far her power would affect Emil—but she had no other choice.
The light that wrapped around Emil was soft, but intense. For a few seconds, it looked like all of Emil’s pain was fading—like the weight of his years of suffering was beginning to dissolve. The vibration of his power stabilized, and his body stopped trembling.
Finally, Emil opened his eyes, though his pupils still reflected the inner struggle. Still, something about him had changed. A fragile calm had replaced the storm.
Beatriz drew a deep breath, feeling the connection between them. She smiled gently, but her words were serious—full of compassion.
—Emil, enough. No more battles for now. You need time to think, to heal. I’m going to help you, but you have to step away from all of this for a while. I’m going to transfer you to the research division. I owe you that—and you owe me the chance to help you.
Emil didn’t speak at first, but a small spark of gratitude lit his eyes, as if he finally saw an exit—blurry, but real.
—Thank you… Beatriz —he said, his voice now much steadier.
Beatriz held his gaze for a long moment before continuing.
—Take a break, Emil. Think about what you want now. You don’t have to carry everything alone. I’ll be here.
With that small gesture, something shifted. Emil agreed to step away from battles for a while and join the scientific area, where his skills would be just as valuable, but without the pressure of confronting his fate head-on. Beatriz knew that decision had been crucial for his wellbeing. Without realizing it, her act of kindness had opened a completely new channel—one Emil had never experienced before—one with the potential to turn his protective, possessive love into something purer, something deeper.
Now, remembering all of that, Beatriz couldn’t help feeling guilty for asking Emil not to get directly involved in this new battle. She didn’t want to drag him back into that spiral, that emotional weight. She didn’t want him to get lost in that abyss of despair again.
She couldn’t be responsible for his emotional burden. She couldn’t allow Emil to destroy himself again just to protect her.
Beatriz slid her fingers through her system menu, reviewing the unclaimed rewards she’d accumulated. With so many screens and notifications, it was easy to get lost among them. But this time, something caught her attention: “Miraculous of Creation: Ladybug Earrings. Claim.”
Her gaze sharpened. She selected it without hesitation.
She knew the confrontation with Amara was right around the corner, and if there was anything she needed against someone who could stop time, it was strategy. Not necessarily the suit, nor the full weight of Ladybug’s heroism—but a clue. A spark that would give her an advantage.
She hurried back to her apartment. Inside, Aki and Sora were waiting with dinner already served. The evening passed between laughter and trivial conversation, as if they weren’t standing in the eye of the storm, as if destiny wasn’t about to shift. Beatriz enjoyed their company, knowing that soon everything would be different.
When night deepened and the girls went to sleep, she made sure everything was calm.
It was time.
With a gesture, she materialized her Item Box in her hands—the one she’d obtained through the mini-games on that strange AliExpress page. She examined it carefully: 20 storage slots, immunity to decay, and—most importantly—undetectable to forces of evil. Nothing and no one could track what was inside.
She took a deep breath and opened it.
Inside rested the Ladybug earrings. A red-and-black glow pulsed in the darkness like a restrained heartbeat. Beatriz picked them up carefully, and the moment her fingers brushed the jewel, a warm light wrapped around her.
The energy vibrated in the air, and in front of her, Tikki materialized.
Her big, shining eyes looked at Beatriz with a mix of curiosity and recognition.
Beatriz smiled. The war was close, but now she had an ace up her sleeve. She watched with fascination as the tiny creature floated before her. Tikki, the kwami of Creation, stared at her with curiosity and recognition.
—Beatriz! —she exclaimed happily—. I knew you would come for me.
Beatriz smiled back, but there was a depth in her eyes she rarely let anyone see.
—And I know who you are, Tikki. I’ve followed your story—I know what you represent. But… —she paused, choosing her words carefully— I need you to know something before we take the next step.
The kwami tilted her head, expectant.
—I am not a teenager. I do not have the age I appear to have —Beatriz confessed calmly—. I am 35, and believe me when I say I fully understand the responsibility that comes with using a Miraculous of Creation, especially one as powerful as Creation itself.
Tikki observed her in silence for a few seconds. Beatriz didn’t need more to know the kwami had already sensed it.
—That explains a lot —she finally replied with a smile—. And I’m glad to know my new bearer is someone responsible.
—I'm not sure bearer is the right term —Beatriz said honestly—. Because, to be clear… I am not going to activate the Miraculous of Creation.
Tikki blinked, stunned.
—Then why did you call me?
—Empathy. And a clue.
The kwami floated closer, intrigued.
—I’m facing a girl who is being manipulated by her father —Beatriz explained, her voice growing grave—. A situation that reminds me far too much of Gabriel Agreste and Adrien Agreste.
Tikki grimaced, clearly uncomfortable.
—The problem is that she has the ability to stop time, and if I want to solve this without letting it escalate into something worse… I need one solid clue on how to defeat her without ending in tragedy.
Tikki nodded, serious.
—I understand what you're trying to do. But you must know… not even I can predict the effects of activating a Miraculous in a universe that is not its own.
—I already know that —Beatriz said, steady—. That is why I won’t use it conventionally. I only need the clue. The earrings will return to where no evil force can detect them.
She pointed at her Item Box. Twenty slots. No deterioration. Undetectable.
—Inside this, no malignant force can find you… or the earrings.
Tikki studied her approvingly.
—You’re… different from any bearer I’ve known.
—Maybe age does that —Beatriz smiled tiredly—. But thank you. I'm glad you're on our side.
For a moment, only silence existed. Respect shared without words.
Beatriz inhaled, extending her hand.
—Tikki, spots!
A warm surge rolled through her body. The Miraculous activated not from heroism… but empathy. Her clothes dissolved, replaced by a flowing mantle of red with black spots, ceremonial like the armor of Mai-Otome Zwei, yet refined to fit an adult body. Her hair reshaped into a blue bob cut, modern, sharp.
She met her reflection in the mirror and smiled.
—Lady Astrid was a lie, but Lady Astrid can exist for a moment. But for now… let me have a name. —She whispered—. Lady Astrid.
The name echoed in the room. Stellar. Real. Dangerous.
She raised her hand again.
—Lucky Charm.
A shower of reddish sparks swirled before forming a small object: a lightning-shaped keychain. Beatriz took it gently, analyzed it, photographed it, recorded a short video.
—The clue… is me. Emil. My father’s gift. Bonds. Past. Present. Now. This is how I win without destroying her.
She let the transformation dissolve.
—Spots off.
The mantle scattered into motes. Tikki materialized beside her again, serene.
—Thank you —Beatriz said softly—. Thank you for letting me find a solution born from empathy, not destruction.
—And I’m glad to have seen such a responsible bearer —Tikki replied—. But…
Beatriz glanced at her.
—But…?
—Scroll down. To the very bottom of your system menu. There is an option you still haven’t noticed.
Beatriz frowned, intrigued, storing the earrings carefully, placing them back into the Item Box.
—Let’s hope activating the Miraculous from empathy has no terrible consequences —Tikki murmured.
—I hope so too —Beatriz whispered.
The earrings clicked shut inside their small box. Into the Item Box they went. The air turned light again.
Then a sharp pain stabbed her temple.
—What…?
A notification blinked in her interface, long hidden.
[Passive skill reactivated: Vision of Cassandra]
Beatriz froze. Her face drained of color.
—No, no, no, no, no, no, no… —she whispered in a trance of horror.
Silence swallowed the moment.
Notes:
🌟 Author’s Note
Happy New Year Eve, legends.
Since it’s Dec 31 here in Mexico, you’ll be getting two chapters today (61 + 62 in English).
Yes, for you it may already be Jan 1 — time zones are wild like that.Chapter 62 ends on a chef-kiss cliffhanger, so buckle up.
If you’re itching for spoilers, remember: the Latin American Spanish version is 30+ chapters ahead and waiting for you.And a tiny wink without spoiling too much:
The next “vision” isn’t future-sight… it’s past-sight.
Cassandra drops the biggest foreshadow yet — hint: someone tied to the letter C.
Not tagged in older chapters because everyone assumed he was dead, not living his best telenovela era.Beatriz didn’t get here by destiny, but by choice + intuition + narrative spite-for-good.
Even Cassandra is like: “Girl, remember your past before you roast the timeline.”Thanks for reading.
Thanks for waiting.
Thanks for screaming internally.
Drop your theories anytime — I love reading them.
Chapter 63: Title of the vision: —Shadows in the Warmth of Home
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over +765/1000 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
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Notes:
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Chapter Text
63 Title of the vision: —Shadows in the Warmth of Home
The afternoon light filtered warmly through the old lace curtains of a house forgotten by time. The door opened with a faint creak, and Beatriz, heart still pounding fiercely, found herself pulled into a memory that wasn’t hers… yet felt like her own.
It wasn’t her home. It wasn’t her time. And still, everything felt so vivid it hurt.
—Grandma, I’m home!— a voice chimed that was not her own. Softer, younger, filled with hope.
From the end of the hallway, a silver-haired woman peeked out, eyes shining though her gaze held the calm of age.
—So soon? I thought you’d still be in class, little Hunter. —Her voice sounded like a river that already knows its course.
—I left early… I needed some air— the girl replied, smiling a small smile that fooled no one.
The home smelled of spices, fresh soup, and old memories. But what truly split the moment was the figure emerging from the kitchen: tall, quiet, eyes violet like storms hiding behind a calm sky. He wore a mix of athletic training gear and casual armor, as if he’d stepped straight out of a combat drill.
—Caleb? I thought you’d come tomorrow… for the last time.
The young man tilted his head, smirking with an effortless confidence.
—And what’s wrong with having dinner with you and grandma? Go wash your hands. I’ll serve.
Dinner was quiet. At least, on the surface. They talked about small things: grandma’s migraines, classes, flowers in the garden… but something in Caleb’s gaze was different. His eyes kept drifting, not to his plate, but to grandma’s face, as if weighing the moment.
Then, he dropped the bomb.
—I've already turned in the papers to move her to an assisted residence.
The spoon froze mid-air. The room stilled.
—What!? Since when do you make decisions for her… without telling me anything? —The protagonist felt her blood boil.
Grandma, calm but resigned, murmured softly:
—Maybe he’s right. The clinic could do me good… but I wouldn’t have lunches with Kael… or his letters.
—He’s been busy lately. Wouldn’t it be nice to invite him for dinner? —Caleb interrupted, smiling a smile that held a sting of something deeper.
The name Kael eased the tension. They laughed lightly… until the television snapped the calm again.
Explosions. Residential zones. Twenty-two incidents. The looming threat of the Wanderers.
Caleb’s eyes locked on his sister’s. Doubt and fear danced in them.
—Do you really think they have them under control?
—Of course— she replied, thumbs up, smile wide though inside, unease took root.
Grandma told her to be careful. The protagonist answered like every idealistic apprentice:
—I'm paired, I have Resonance, and they never send us alone. I’ll be fine.
—No matter how strong you are— Caleb said, voice low— your life comes first. Always. If you see real danger… run. No one can protect you if you insist on risking yourself for everyone.
A faint buzz came from her wristwatch. The protagonist blinked. A time fluctuation. A presence that should not be there.
—I have to go. Hopefully it's nothing.
—You’re not going alone without me— Caleb said, already standing.
—I'm not a kid anymore for you to guard!
—I'm not guarding you. I just need to buy vinegar… coincidentally with you.
They stepped out into the golden dusk, the air carrying orange blossoms and warnings.
—We split here— she said by the store entrance— I’ll check the perimeter. You grab the vinegar. Don’t forget the snacks.
Caleb nodded, watching her as if it were the last time.
—Meet me at the exit. And if it’s calm… double dinner.
The second half of the vision still unfolded in the dusk. Last gold rays slipped between buildings as she stood by a convenience store like Seven Eleven. The watch showed no more fluctuations, but her instinct said something still moved. So she followed a trail only she could sense.
It didn’t take long for the sensation to intensify: a presence. The trail led her to a lone man in a dim corner. His energy felt irregular, unsettling. When she stepped closer, sword ready, he moved faster than expected: drew a blade and attacked without warning.
She barely dodged, steel grazing her right arm. She staggered back, stunned.
—A power of Evol… or something worse?
The man didn’t wait. He forced distance, screamed he’d never be caught, and fled inhumanly fast, swallowed by shadows.
The protagonist froze, trying to understand what had happened. Before she could consider chasing, footsteps came behind her.
It was Caleb.
She said nothing. That truth belonged to hunters.
Caleb, half-smile mocking, asked if she found the big Wander. She lied: the fluctuation vanished. False alarm.
—A false alarm? —Caleb echoed, brow raised as he gripped her right arm where the strike landed—. Then what is this?
She looked away. Bad liar.
—A cat. The scratch of a cat.
Caleb watched her, suspicion and worry mixed.
—A cat, huh? Then you won’t mind if I find it and make it pay.
—No, Caleb— she rushed, voice tense—. Not needed. Let’s go home. Grandma will worry. It was an accident. Really.
Caleb sighed. He said he understood what she was trying to do. Hiding things wasn’t wise when grandma was already fragile.
Then, more accusation than calm, he asked:
—Why can’t you trust me? Just because you’ve grown?
The protagonist frowned. Hurt at what he said… and what he didn’t say. He’d only be here days. Missions pulled him away. No idea if he’d return. She’d grown too. Couldn’t rely on him forever.
They leaned side by side on a pedestrian bridge railing.
—It’s not you— Caleb said, forward-facing, voice serious—. It’s the chance you’ll become like… —he laughed a little, but eyes sharp.
—Like what? —she asked, unease rising.
—You wouldn’t understand. Forget it.
He ruffled her hair gently, like when they were kids. Said it was time to go back before grandma felt worry again. They walked.
She whispered he was doing it again. Locking himself in. Leaving her outside.
—Maybe— Caleb answered, then added—. Just… cover your wrist. We don’t want Grandma to get scared over something silly.
When they reached the door, Caleb paused with his hand on the doorknob. Without looking at her, he said:
—Yeah, I know you’re grown up. But this time… I won’t cover for you.
She lowered her gaze and rubbed her wrist carefully.
And then…
An explosion!
The blast threw her backward. Her body hit the asphalt, her vision blurred. The pain was overwhelming. She barely made out her own trembling hands as the air filled with smoke and the smell of fire.
Grandma’s house burned.
Stone fragments and rubble were everywhere. Stunned, breathing unevenly, she saw something in front of her: Caleb’s necklace. The one she had given him years ago. The one she hadn’t remembered in months.
She crawled weakly until she reached it. She gripped the chain with blood-stained fingers. The message engraved on the pendant glowed faintly:
—“When U come back.”
A small silver apple with a red gem rested beside the inscription.
Then… blackness.
The Cassandra Vision ended.
A forgotten memory is also a betrayal.
The darkness still pulsed behind her eyelids, as if the vision had been torn away by force. Her breathing was ragged, sweat slipping down her temple. For a moment she couldn’t tell if the burn on her wrist was real or just a ghost of the memory. It took her a second to recognize her surroundings. She wasn’t standing in front of the burning ruins anymore. She was back in the present, trapped in that strange limbo where Beatriz and she coexisted in a body that didn’t fully feel like her own.
She touched her forehead with shaky fingers. Her heart hammered with dizziness and something heavier… guilt?
—Was that a vision…?— she whispered, barely audible.
Her mind, still caught in the echo of the flames, pieced everything back together. Months ago she had thought of Caleb. Of Grandma. Of the explosion. Of how no one had found their bodies. And how, absurdly, she had simply… let it slide. As if it hadn’t mattered. As if there were always other things to handle. She had set the game to auto-mode, literally. While she “handled her stuff.”
The truth struck her chest with brutal weight: she had stopped looking.
—Of course… Casandra— she muttered, a sad, ironic laugh stinging her voice—. You again.
She remembered the strange dreams she had as a child. Confusing warnings that saved her from trouble. Especially with bullies. Little things she could never explain. Dreams with repetitive yellow hallways and the smell of humidity. She used to think it was luck. Or that she was just good at reading people. But now she understood: that was always her. She had always had the power. A sleeping, silent vision.
And now… it had returned.
—How much did I miss…?— she murmured, eyes clouded not by the vision itself, but by the regret.
Because if that vision wasn’t a possibility but a memory, then everything she thought she had been advancing… might’ve been just a façade. A programmed path. A prefab route. Like the clichés she despised.
She had read about Caleb on the game’s wiki. She thought he was an interesting side character. But she didn’t look deeper. Yes, rumors said he might be a future love interest. But her first impression of him had been terrible.
She didn’t get angry because of the supposed death itself.
She got angry because the devs were pushing the idea that he was dead.
As if they didn’t want more questions.
As if they wanted her to close the book without reading the last pages.
Beatriz clenched her teeth.
—They want me to believe it was a farewell— she hissed—. But there were no bodies. No Caleb. No Grandma Josephine. Only ruins and fire. Nothing conclusive.
She breathed and stood straighter.
In games, that meant one thing:
They’re not dead. Not really.
So why pretend they were?
Why insist so much on “goodbye”?
Why bury Caleb’s story before it even started?
Something didn’t add up.
Something more was happening.
And Beatriz was going to find it.
Notes:
🌧️ Author’s Note — Update Schedule
Dear reader, thank you for being here.
I want to share an important update about the posting rhythm as we approach the Season 1 finale.Starting January 8, both versions — English and Latin American Spanish — will resume a steady pace of one chapter per week. This is a purposeful, sustainable choice that allows the story to keep moving forward without burning me out.
A little context:
The Latin American Spanish version is the original forge of this work and is already 30+ chapters ahead.
We are officially closing Season 1, which is planned to conclude around March 2026.
From January onward, I’ll also begin studying intensely for a major professional exam scheduled for June/July 2026. This shift is not a goodbye or neglect — it’s a strategic narrative breath so I can prioritize my studies while preserving the heart and quality of the story.
Milestone update:
The Spanish version is currently at 765 reads.
Once it reaches 1,000 reads, I will open global comments for everyone — on both versions.
Even though the English version is already over 1,300 reads, comments will remain limited until the Spanish milestone is achieved. This ensures anyone who shares their thoughts does so with full context, not rumors or fragments.
Finally:
Season 2 is already written in draft form — carefully planned, emotionally rich, and ready for future editing. I promise you: what’s coming will be worth the wait. The twists, reveals, and emotional impact will hit harder, deeper, and smarter than any cliché.
Thank you for your patience, your support, and your energy.
We continue forward, one chapter at a time, with intention and heart.With love and purpose,
Beatriz Delmar — AO3 Author ✨
Chapter 64: Safehaven
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over +800 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
📚 If you prefer to read this story in Latin American Spanish, where there are more advanced chapters already available, you can check it out here:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
🎉 An alternate version is now available—with more drama, romantic tension, and key choices 🐍💖🐉, Remember to show your support to help reach the next translation goal:
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Notes:
Global comments will officially be opened once the original version reaches 1000 reads.
We’re currently at 800+/1000, so we’re getting closer! 💪💖
Thank you for your patience, your excitement, and for walking alongside Beatriz on this journey.
The season finale is coming with big emotional impact… and yes, it will be worth the wait. 😏🔥
📚 If you prefer to read this story in Latin American Spanish, where there are more advanced chapters already available, you can check it out here:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
Chapter Text
“Where the calm hides the storm”
Morning was settling with a lukewarm light filtering through the windows of the new land. The air smelled of fresh metal, turned earth, and newly installed cables. The structure was still under construction, but the foundations of what would become a home were already rising: a modern house with solid ground, well placed at that perfect point between the urban and the discreet. In that geographical in-between, nestled between Beatriz’s residence, Doctor Kael’s home, and the silent domains of Lucien.
Lucien inspected the place with the calculating gaze of a war architect. He carried blueprints under his arm, and smudges of earth marked his gloves. His hair tied back, sleeves rolled up. Beside him, Aslan surveyed the scene with a serious expression, though in the depth of his eyes flickered a hint of satisfaction: this was more than construction, this was a fortress. A safety net. An anchor in a world that seemed on the verge of turning upside down.
—Thanks for the files —Lucien murmured while flipping through one of the holographic documents—. The system accepted them without blinking. Now, according to digital bureaucracy, you always lived here. Model citizens.
Aslan nodded, crossing his arms. His gaze drifted toward the structure for a moment.
—I want all of this to be shielded —he said—. Not only physically. I want this story to be undeniable. That they can’t touch Beatriz without collapsing an entire wall of data, testimonies, and legal frameworks.
Lucien smiled sideways, barely a gesture.
—We already did it. In fact, for the official registry, you will be her adoptive father for a year now. All the paperwork matches. School records, medical files. No crack.
In a corner, Nox hopped with excitement, browsing a catalog of decorations for his new room. Though his real form was carefully camouflaged, thanks to the clock and the collar, his eyes shone with the pure joy of a child who would finally have a home in the residential zone. A chance to be normal. Or at least, to seem so.
—And him? —Aslan asked, glancing at Nox—. Does the disguise work?
—More than I expected —Lucien replied—. It not only hides his form, it also softens his shadow. It doesn’t reveal his origin anymore. But… —he lowered his voice, locking eyes with his partner— that doesn’t mean we are out of danger.
Aslan nodded gravely.
—I feel it too —he said—. Like pressure at the back of my neck. There is someone else. Watching from a higher plane. They haven’t approached, but they’re not inactive. They’re waiting.
Lucien exhaled slowly, as if he already assumed it.
—I have eliminated all the lesser watchers —he said—. The ones circling the perimeter, the ones trying to infiltrate the files. Clean. But I know there is something beyond that. Something unseen.
—I also did some clean-up —Aslan said quietly—. In my case, they were traces of the League. Too clumsy to be his messengers… but too close to be ignored.
Lucien set the blueprints aside and stared with seriousness.
—What’s coming will be big. Beatriz senses it. You and I feel it. The structure is moving, the pieces are shifting. All that’s left is to ensure that when the storm arrives… she is ready.
Aslan looked toward the sky. A passing cloud dimmed the sun briefly.
—Then we won’t build a house —he said firmly—. We’ll build a bastion.
And the two men, different as day and night, stood in silence for a few seconds. Watching. Planning. Preparing the land for the inevitable.
Because they knew the enemy’s eyes would open again soon.
Silence in the training hall was thick, dense as fog. Beatriz knelt, breathing slowly before the activated holocron. The projected figure —the former Jedi Master with serene eyes and steady voice— hovered before her like a spiritual beacon, guiding her beyond technique and toward the core of her own essence.
—You don’t fight Amara —the Master said calmly—. You fight the shadow around her. But you, Beatriz… you’ve already walked in shadows. You fear nothing. Just remember who you are.
Beatriz closed her eyes. Her breath slowed further. A thin thread of energy pulsed within her center. Emil’s power would not consume everything this time. Just a fraction. Just enough to even the field and create the distraction she needed.
In her mind, the plan rehearsed again and again: let Amara’s shield half-activate. Fire the hook with surgical precision. Embed it before the time-stop deploys. Gain those seconds. Then release a blinding flash of Emil’s light —contained, focused— to dazzle her.
Then, hand-to-hand.
Beatriz stood, testing the tension of the high-torque hook and reinforced cable around her wrist. The sensors hummed in approval. She would shorten the gap, keep Amara moving, unbalance her. Disarm her one weapon at a time until only fists remained. Until they faced each other without interference.
That was phase two.
Resonance.
A dangerous ability. Nearly forbidden. Designed to draw the opponent’s life-energy into weakening threads. Not to kill —though it could— but to exhaust, to force surrender. Every strike, deflection, and contact pulled another thread from Amara. Until she had no strength left. Until her body gave in or her will collapsed.
—This is not revenge —Beatriz murmured—. This is justice. For me. For what she forced me to see, remember, be.
The Master’s projection dissolved with one last whisper:
—Go with clarity, and the dark will have nowhere to hide.
Beatriz stepped toward the door. Outside, the battlefield waited. Outside, Amara waited.
And this time, she would not retreat.
[Preparations —Training in light with Emil]
The training hall air thrummed subtly when Beatriz entered. Emil waited with arms crossed, that half-smile of pride and surrender.
—So you’re ready to use my technique —he said, calm but serious.
Beatriz nodded.
—I don’t need all your energy. I need to understand it… resonate with it.
Emil arched a brow.
—Copying by resonance? Interesting.
They sat facing each other. Emil’s palm hovered near Beatriz’s chest; hers mirrored. Energy waves strummed between them, soft as tuned strings. A quiet hum filled the room.
Beatriz closed her eyes and let Emil’s light flow through her inner channels —not to absorb, but to register, understand, replicate with her own essence. A perfect spark-copy built from within.
A flash of light sparked and died instantly.
—There —Emil said, impressed—. Not as strong as the original, but enough to blind.
Beatriz opened her eyes and breathed.
—Enough. —She strapped the high-torque hook and reinforced cable for strategy.
—The core has a delayed microcharge —she recalled—. If I fire it directly into the shield mechanism, it should lock it for at least five seconds. Enough for what I’m planning.
—Perfect —testing the weight of the hook on her wrist.
—I don’t plan on withdrawing from the battle.
[Main Training Field – Official Evaluation Battle]
The dome’s spotlights illuminated the combat area with precision. A circle defined by pulsing energy markings. The stands were silent, expectant. This was not an ordinary battle.
In an elevated booth, the academy director watched in silence. Beside him, dressed formally and with a cold gaze, Amara’s father crossed his arms, analyzing every movement before it happened.
Beatriz, in her modified uniform, took a deep breath. The adaptive light armor gleamed at key points, reinforced specifically to withstand light bullets and allow maximum mobility. On her right wrist, the retractable propulsion hook, with a reinforced cable designed to absorb kinetic energy.
Across from her, Amara activated her field shield. Her gaze was serious, focused… and proud. She was 17 years old, but fought with the conviction of someone carrying a surname and a legacy.
—Ready? —the referee asked.
—Always —Amara said, powering up her sidearm.
—Go ahead —Beatriz replied calmly.
The battle began.
Amara moved first, fast and precise. Controlled shots, aiming for weak points. Beatriz rolled, deflected, and waited. She waited for the right moment.
Flash.
A white light burst from Beatriz’s palm—pure resonance. Amara narrowed her eyes, disoriented.
—Now —Beatriz murmured.
The hook shot out—not to wound, but to entangle. It embedded itself directly into the shield anchor. The cable coiled, wrapping around Amara’s arm. The shield emitted a hum… and locked.
Amara cursed, trying to free her arm. Beatriz closed the distance, fast as lightning.
The close-quarters duel began.
Beatriz disarmed with every movement: a kick to the magazine, a turn that knocked the pistol aside, a wrist twist that released the second hidden magazine. With each strike, her energy entered resonance with Amara’s, absorbing small portions—not to hurt her, but to drain her stamina.
Amara panted, but did not yield.
Beatriz held her by the cable-wrapped arm and looked at her directly.
—You don’t need to prove anything anymore, Amara. You fought incredibly.
Amara looked at her, legs trembling. She tried once more to reactivate the shield, but had no strength left.
—Then why don’t you defeat me? —she asked.
—Because I didn’t come to crush you. I came to recognize you. You already won something more important.
Silence.
Amara lowered her gaze, then lifted her head. There was pride in her eyes… and a spark of respect.
—I surrender.
A soft hum signaled the end of the match. The cable released automatically.
The stands erupted into applause. The director nodded slightly, satisfied. Amara’s father remained silent, but his expression shifted—not to pride… but to acknowledgment.
Beatriz stepped forward and offered her hand.
Amara hesitated… then took it.
—Thank you —she murmured.
—Thank you —Beatriz replied with a calm smile.
[Moments After the Battle – Observation Platform]
Silence still weighed heavily after the voluntary surrender. Not everyone understood what they had just witnessed… but the director, carrying years of experience, did.
He stepped to the edge of the platform, his gaze fixed on Amara as she left the field alongside Beatriz. He spoke clearly, for all to hear:
—Amara Sturm… Not all battles are won with strength. Today you showed us that it also takes courage to recognize when enough is enough. I am proud of your growth.
The entire auditorium thundered with sincere applause. Amara lowered her head for a moment—not in shame… but holding back tears.
Beside her, her father said nothing. No smile. No gesture. Only the marble hardness of a man who saw everything as an investment… even his daughter. But Amara no longer saw him the same way.
When she reached him, she felt the abyss between them. Something had changed.
—You did… acceptable —her father murmured, turning away.
But Amara did not respond. She only watched his back retreat… and for the first time, she felt no guilt for not running after him.
From a prudent distance, Beatriz noticed everything.
[Rear Hallway – Locker Area]
Beatriz removed her training gloves when a peculiar sound vibrated within her visual interface.
Notification! New value added to Lov-meter: “Emerging filial love – Amara Sturm.”
—Huh? What the hell was that? —she murmured.
Her eyes blinked once, and a holographic panel unfolded before her, visible only to her retina. A menu with hundreds of subcategories floated in soft blue. She dragged two fingers downward until, at the very bottom, she found something hidden:
Lov-meter: Multidimensional Affective Bond System.
Active categories: Filial, Storge, Agape, Eros, Platonic…
Beatriz narrowed her eyes.
—Tikki… you told me to check it when I was ready —she whispered, a faint smile forming.
Colored bars lit up next to familiar names: Lucien, Kael, Amara, the holocron master, even Emil and Miguel Ángel. Each glowed with a different color, pulsing according to intensity.
—So… I’ve been cultivating bonds all this time? —she asked softly.
A small floating light flickered briefly over her shoulder. Invisible to others, its warm energy gave her the answer: yes.
Beatriz closed the panel with a gesture. Her expression was serene, but firm. She had won without crushing. She had taught without humiliating. And now she knew she was leaving a deeper legacy than any other student in the Academy.
Zone N-109 — Perpetual Night
Zone N-109 had always been a place of mystery, a perpetual void where day never arrived. A place with heavy air, where stars hid behind a layer of endless night. Lucien advanced cautiously toward the secret base, the same one that had witnessed the chronofit catastrophe that fractured the barriers between dimensions.
As he crossed the street before reaching his porch, something distracted him. A small figure emerged from the darkness, light and almost ethereal. It was familiar… but different. With white-and-bright-green skin, its dark red eyes gleamed like bottomless wells. A Ku-bey, but with colors he had never seen before.
It approached Lucien silently, as if the darkness itself had swallowed it, stopping directly in front of him.
—Lucien? —the creature said in a syrupy voice, tinged with irony—. I’ve been watching you. It’s curious that you still trust what you see. Do you really think she is the witch you were looking for?
Lucien frowned, but did not answer immediately. The Ku-bey watched him with a twisted smile, clearly enjoying the inner conflict beginning to cloud his thoughts.
—I don’t know… should I? —he replied, aware he was being tested—. Beatriz is not the original witch. I know that. I even discovered how her essence was separated from the original. She… is another person. Different. But it doesn’t matter. I… I love her for who she is now.
The Ku-bey laughed softly, a sound that echoed through the shadows, deepening the gloom.
—Oh, but what you don’t know is that she is not your true witch. Have you ever considered that perhaps your “dear Beatriz” is not who you think she is? The real witch… is much closer than you imagine. Why not get rid of her and free yourself from all your problems at once? After all, she isn’t the original.
Lucien clenched his fists. He didn’t like what he was hearing, but he had learned not to fall for manipulation.
—I’m not falling for your games. —His tone was firm, carrying the conviction of someone who had made an irreversible decision.
He unleashed his energy particles, engulfing the Ku-bey in a burst of black and red particles, disintegrating it in the air. However, the creature did not disappear. As always, Ku-beys were immortal, and their interdimensional nature allowed them to exist beyond the laws governing space and time. Another appeared atop a nearby post, as if everything were part of its game.
—Very well, Lucien. I’m impressed. Not only are you strong, but also wise. You’ve passed my test. You know how to distinguish what is real from what is not. —The Ku-bey’s voice grew slightly friendlier, though still wrapped in mystery—. Because of that, I’ll give you a clue. Something… to help you in your search.
Lucien watched it warily. The Ku-bey stepped closer, its eyes shifting between green and white, as if changing form with each blink.
—If you wish to find the hiding place, the place where the dimensional door is concealed, you must think of the Ku-bey… with brown-colored little paws. That is what you need. Remember that image. It’s the only clue I’ll give you. And remember—I’ll be waiting on the other side of the rift.
With a flash of light, the Ku-bey vanished, leaving behind a lingering discomfort. Lucien, now alone, stared into the darkness, his mind processing the creature’s words.
—What did it mean by “Ku-bey with brown-colored little paws”? —At that moment, he remembered the sword embedded within him.
Chapter 65: Beatriz, the Unexpected Ally
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
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The sun was setting, staining the sky in shades of orange and purple, as Beatriz walked through the academy corridors, lost in her thoughts. The battle against Amara still echoed in her mind, but something within her had changed. She had discovered Amara’s humanity, that part she had not seen before—the one that fought with her entire being for something more than victory. Though she had been a rival, Beatriz couldn’t help feeling somewhat close to her. It was strange, but the fight had been revealing. And now that she had confirmed Amara had a “filial love” bar in her Lov-meter, the idea of a connection between them felt closer than she had imagined.
On impulse, Beatriz pulled out her phone and sent Amara a text message:
"Hey, I think we could talk later, if that’s okay with you. Not everything in life is just battle, right?"
A moment later, the reply arrived:
"I’ll be busy, but I wouldn’t mind sharing a coffee after all this. See you tomorrow?"
She smiled when she read the response, knowing she had made a small but meaningful step forward. Amara was not just a rival; perhaps she could become an important ally. And if the incubators attempted any incursion, having her nearby would be a strategic advantage.
Before she could reflect much further on the friendship beginning to form, her phone vibrated with a new message. It was from Lucien. She couldn’t help but blush slightly as she read it.
"Beatriz, head to Zone N-109 as fast as possible. If you prefer, I can come pick you up. What I discovered can’t wait."
Lucien always had a direct way of doing things, but this time something in his tone told her it was urgent. Without thinking twice, Beatriz replied quickly:
"I’ll wait for you outside. Don’t be late."
As she headed toward the exit, she couldn’t help wondering about Lucien’s message. What had he discovered that couldn’t wait? What connection could it have to the secrets Lucien was now beginning to uncover?
When she reached the parking lot, Lucien was already there, inside an elegant black car that looked almost designed for the moment. She approached quickly, got in, and without saying much, Lucien started the engine.
—Everything is connected, Beatriz, —Lucien began after a few seconds of silence—. The brown-pawed Ku-bey is not just a clue, it’s the anchor between dimensions. It’s because of that small detail that the incubators have been able to act the way they have. It’s no coincidence they’re invading our world… everything has to do with that Ku-bey.
Beatriz looked at him, absorbing his words.
—So if the incubators are using this Ku-bey to access this dimension… how do we stop them?
Lucien glanced at her as he took a sharp turn.
—That’s what we have to figure out. The brown-pawed Ku-bey doesn’t just have the key to those portals… it also holds the means for them to keep moving forward. If we can dismantle its bond with that entity, maybe we can do something to stop them.
The tension pulsed in the air. Beatriz knew the future of everyone was in their hands. But at the same time, the feeling that something more was about to be revealed kept her alert. And now, with Amara and Lucien at her side, the battle ahead might be far more complex than she had anticipated.
Meanwhile, Lucien, after receiving the clue from the green-and-white Ku-bey, reflected on the implication of the “brown paw.” Remembering past events and the role of the sword transformed into the Ku-bey, he realized that the sword that struck down the original witch had actually been the key to releasing the energy that connected the dimensions. The brown-pawed Ku-bey was no longer just a simple contract or a manipulative being, but an anchor, the linking point between realities, something Beatriz could understand due to her own contact with parallel dimensions.
—If we think about it… the Stargate portal didn’t just separate the essences of the original witch and the inventor… it also opened a dimensional rift. The Ku-bey… is the key. The sword, the contract… the anchor, —Lucien reflected as he studied more deeply the fragmented memories he had recovered.
Beatriz, listening to Lucien, also connected the dots.
—It’s not just the Ku-bey. What happened in the planet’s dimension… he was the bridge between us and them. Somehow, the chaos of Cronofit unleashed something far greater… and the sword was the catalyst.
With this revelation, both understood that the invasion of their world was not just an accident. The dimensional rift, the creatures—everything was tied to the brown-pawed Ku-bey, who had been the initiator of it all, connecting realities and causing the separation of the entities’ essences.
When Love Measures More Than Strength
Classified File — Emotional Core of Beatriz
[Access restricted by emotional affinity]
Name of the legendary passive effect:
Latin Novel Mode Activated
(Mystic Passive Class S — Non-cancelable)
General Description:
When Beatriz fills her three Lov-Meters (Storge, Filial, and Agape), this emotional–magical–cultural state activates automatically.
Emotional energy is reconfigured, shifting away from tragedy and replacing it with elements of Latin domestic drama, pious humor, theatrical phrases, and providential interventions.
Effects:
—Immunity to “heavy Asian drama” (emotional manipulation, absurd sacrifices, romantic mind control, or cursed contracts).
—Dangerous situations are resolved through emotional strength or telenovela-style scenes (iconic phrases, soul-slaps, appearance of the “spiritual aunt/grandmother”).
—Enemies may enter a “emotional confusion state” when confronted with Beatriz’s sincerity or intensity.
Activation phrases (spontaneous, random style):
—“Here we suffer, but we enjoy it! And you will not see me cry, bastard!”
—“Love is not begged for, it is shared. And you don’t know how to love, my dear.”
—“You think you can manipulate me? My grandmother prepared me for this since I was born!”
Passive Abilities Associated with Filled Lov-Meters
- Anchor Heart (Agape)
—Total immunity to contracts, possessions, or magical temptations.
—Beatriz can anchor the soul of an ally who is emotionally losing themselves simply by touching them or speaking from the heart.
- Network of Warmth (Filial)
—Protective figures in the environment (family members, adult allies, even redeemable enemies) sense when Beatriz is in danger.
—Occasionally activates “Astral Chancla” (unexpected cosmic maternal/familial intervention).
- Soul Connection (Storge)
—Sharing energy, abilities, or states with her closest friends.
—Detects when a loved one is lying or experiencing internal conflict, even if they don’t say it.
- Unbreakable Harmony (Triple synergy active)
—Beatriz becomes an “emotional beacon.” Her presence can purify cursed places, dissipate dark magic, or halt invocations if they are driven by hatred.
—Her spells change depending on the type of love she invokes.
Additional notes from the file (crossed out and rewritten in cursive pen):
This power doesn’t seem very useful for direct combat…
Too emotional. (crossed out)
But if the Final Enemy is built from pain, betrayal, and hopelessness…
Then Beatriz will be its perfect antithesis.
Lyserg Diethel’s Dowsing Crystal
Type: Adapted spiritual channeler | Reconverted artifact
Origin: Shaman King universe (recovered by unknown means during a failed dimensional synchronization)
General description:
The crystal was originally used by the shaman Lyserg Diethel as a dowsing tool to detect spirits, spiritual energy, and locate people with millimetric precision. However, after being discarded in a dimensional anomaly, it was granted to Beatriz during her loss of PS2 memory files due to the intervention of her older brother Reyearth, and upon coming into contact with her fully charged Lov-Meters, the crystal emotionally adapted to her.
Effects in the current world (reconverted by Beatriz without realizing it):
- Original function: Precise energy detection
It can be used as a pendulum to locate entities, hidden objects, sources of energy, or trapped spirits.
It vibrates or glows faintly when it detects hidden threats or dimensional doors.
- Spontaneous adaptation to Beatriz: Emotional Support Bubble
Being in sync with Beatriz’s Lov-Meters (especially the Storge-type), it developed an automatic defense protocol.
If Beatriz is about to fall into a K.O. state or loses consciousness, the crystal spins on its own, creating a brief emotional defense field.
This field absorbs a percentage of the impact (based on the level of accumulated Storge love) and prevents her from instantly losing consciousness.
The defensive energy takes the form of pale green threads of light with pink reflections, as if weaving a momentary net around her.
- “Residual Spiritual Awareness” effect
It is believed to retain a small resonance of Lyserg’s guide spirit, or of his will as a shaman, which allows the crystal to:
Detect malicious energies or emotional manipulations.
React to non-physical spiritual attacks (such as induced nightmares, suggestion, or symbolic trauma).
Subtly guide Beatriz, moving toward a direction if there is something she “should feel.”
Limitations:
It is a relic from another universe; therefore, it cannot be consciously recharged by Beatriz. Its activation depends on a combination of extreme situations + stable emotional charge.
It does not respond if Beatriz is in a state of emotional blockage or total affective denial.
Location: Underground base, strategy room
The room was lit only by the cold, white light of the upper panels. Lucien closed the door with a sharp “click,” leaving behind the footsteps and murmurs of the hallway. Beatriz already had the map spread across the large holographic table, the city lines and peripheral zones marked with surgical precision. Emil had helped her create it months earlier, thinking of a tracking system for dimensional anomalies. They never thought she would use it like this.
Beatriz took a deep breath and carefully placed the dowsing crystal at the front, on top of the map. Lucien looked at her with raised eyebrows.
—And this is…?
—A dowsing crystal. —she replied without looking at him—. Don’t make fun of me, okay? I need total concentration.
Lucien raised both hands and took a step back.
—Alright. Just… is this really going to work?
She turned and looked at him with a tired half-smile.
—Did you see me survive in heels against a demolition robot with an ego problem? Have a little faith.
She took the crystal out of its case: an almost pure quartz, slightly imperfect, that gleamed as if it were breathing. She tied it with thin black thread, forming a pendulum, and let it sway slowly over the map.
—My dad taught me this when I was a kid. With rods, to look for water underground. —she murmured—. It’s the same principle… but more refined. Emotional energy. Connection. Will.
She closed her eyes. Inhaled. Exhaled. Repeatedly.
Then she formed the question, in a low voice, barely audible to Lucien:
—Where will the next rift open… the one that will take us to the brown-pawed incubator?
The pendulum trembled. Then it began to move. Slowly. Beatriz wasn’t forcing it—Lucien could see it: her hand was completely relaxed. The crystal drew a wide circle, then reduced its radius. And it drifted… one, two, three zones farther… until it stopped and oscillated directly over a point.
Lucien swallowed.
—It can’t be… that’s…
The pendulum began to swing, first imperceptibly, then with growing conviction. It spun, traced circles, and finally shifted clearly toward a region of the map:
The Cursed Forest.
Lucien swallowed.
—There? Are you sure?
Beatriz nodded.
—I know. It’s not the best place, but it makes sense…
She paused, and her eyes clouded briefly with memories.
—That forest… Emil purified a Wander there with his light. A scene that felt like something from another world… She said the darkness there was alive. As if the forest was breathing on its own. My dad and I had our reunion in that place. But never… never anything as clear as this.
Lucien stayed silent. Beatriz now spread a physical calendar across the table. Carefully, she held the crystal over it and formed a second question:
What day will the rift open?
The pendulum swung. It took longer this time, as if something resisted giving the answer. Finally, it stopped over a specific date. Beatriz marked it with a red pen and put the crystal away.
—That gives us some time. I need to contact Amara —she said as she quickly rolled up the calendar—. If things go wrong, we need an ace up our sleeve. Her power can give us an escape route, even stop an incubator. I don’t want to risk it without her.
Lucien nodded, already without comments.
—We’re going to need Aki, Sora, and any other magical girl willing. And I’ll take dad, Nox, and you. Emil, Miguel Ángel, and Kael stay here, ready in case hell breaks loose outside. I don’t want to tell them anything yet, not until it’s absolutely necessary. If a Walpurgis-style creature got out… no, I can’t even think about it.
As she organized the materials, her mind flew to the past. To that disaster at “grandma’s house,” three years ago. The explosion, the silence, the chaos. Caleb.
Caleb… where are you now?
She doesn’t know if he’s alive. Nobody knows. But she still remembers those brief moments of strangeness: the objects he could move effortlessly, like the necklace he made float, and that intense look that seemed to see beyond matter.
—Was it telekinesis? Some kind of psychic ability? Not even the wiki said his power… or his zodiac sign, or his exact age.
She does the math mentally.
—If he were alive… he’d be 25. I was 19 when it all happened. He must’ve been 22, maybe 23.
She closes the pendulum case and slips it into her pocket.
—If Caleb is still alive, maybe he knows it. Maybe… he feels it.
Notes:
🌧️ Author’s Note
This chapter quietly plants one of the deepest roots behind Beatriz’s future anger.
Sometimes it’s not just the betrayal that hurts — it’s the time:
the prolonged silence, the years of absence, and everything a person has to rebuild while believing someone is truly gone.
There’s a difference between losing someone briefly…
and learning how to live for years without them.
Keep this detail in mind.
Its weight will become clear later on.
Chapter 66: Silent Coven
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
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“Choosing to unite does not always mean choosing safety, but the strength of standing together.”
Scene: Beatriz’s apartment, at night
The city slumbers beneath a clouded sky. The fan spins lazily on the ceiling while steam from the tea drifts through the air. The clock reads almost midnight. Beatriz, still wearing her jacket and with tension weighing on her shoulders, sits across from Aki and Sora at the small kitchen island.
Both girls—now her roommates, in an apartment improvised as a safe haven—watch her with serious eyes. There is no need for empty words between them. What they are about to discuss tonight is no ordinary mission.
Beatriz breaks the silence gently:
—I found something. Or rather… something found me. And I think it’s time to stop running.
Aki frowns. Sora tilts her head, curious.
—I’m going to enter the core of the incubators’ dimension. Or at least… the rift that will open toward their world —Beatriz continues—. It’s a dangerous place, and I have reasons to believe something big is forming there. There is an Incubator they call “the one with brown paws”… and it’s more than just a messenger or collector.
She takes out a calendar page and marks the day with a thick red X. Aki and Sora exchange glances.
—That’s the day the rift opens —Beatriz says—. And that’s when I need your help.
Sora speaks first:
—Are you saying that… that we’re going to enter their world?
—Yes. But first you need to know something else —Beatriz replies, taking a breath—. They… are not from this world. The incubators are interdimensional parasites. And the one with brown paws is a kind of anchor. Thanks to it, they were able to establish a constant presence here. Like a signal beacon for others like it.
Aki lowers her gaze, processing the information. Beatriz leans on the table, never taking her eyes off them.
—That’s not all. According to what I discovered… there is an entity behind all of this. Khaërôn. It is… pure chaos. It is not an incubator. It is something older. Something that doesn’t even belong to the normal rules of worlds. It is supposed to always be defeated, trapped, sealed. That’s how cycles work. But… the Cronofith disaster… was not a simple anomaly. Something went wrong. Very wrong.
Sora swallows.
—And if… this time they didn’t seal it?
Beatriz nods slowly.
—It’s possible. Maybe the seal broke, or was never fully completed. Or maybe something worse: maybe the cycle… was interrupted.
She stays silent for a moment. Then she speaks to them firmly, but with warmth.
—I’m going. I already have people who will go with me: Lucien, my dad, Nox. But I want to ask you for something, not as a leader, but as a companion. I want to ask for your strength. If things go wrong in there… if Khaërôn is awakening, if its influence is growing… I won’t be able to handle everything alone.
Aki looks at her steadily.
—And if we don’t come back?
—That’s why I want this to be your decision. You’re not obligated to come. But if you decide to do it… I trust you like no one else.
Sora exhales, then nods.
—I’m in. If that brown-pawed one is at the center… I want to crush the other Incubators with my own hands. You know why.
Aki, more reserved, looks out the window. Then she turns slowly.
—I’m tired of hiding. If there’s something I can do… I’ll do it. But I want one thing.
Beatriz raises an eyebrow.
—Tell me.
—That no one else dies. That this time… at least we try to save everyone.
Beatriz swallows and nods.
—That’s my wish too.
Then she lowers her voice.
—And if you know any other magical girl willing to fight… tell her. Carefully. Without any incubator noticing. This has to be silent. But the more of us there are… the better chance we’ll have.
Aki lifts her tea cup.
—Then the silent hunt begins.
Sora chuckles softly.
—Like witches gathering their coven.
Beatriz smiles, for the first time all night.
—Or like heroines preparing the final act.
Scene: The next morning – Amara’s family mansion
Large windows let in soft light, but the atmosphere inside the house is cold, as if the sun could not warm the walls. Amara’s father—imposing, with a calculating gaze—sips his coffee while reviewing reports on a tablet with an air of bored superiority.
Beatriz, wearing a practiced smile and the composure of someone stepping into a predator’s territory, waits to be announced by the domestic assistant.
—Beatriz, correct? —the man says, barely looking up—. What brings you here so early?
—Good morning. I’m here for Amara —she replies, with measured courtesy—. I’ve spoken with the best Hunter in the squad, and she believes it’s a good idea to train with her directly. One-on-one. It would help her adapt more quickly to missions.
He looks at her now, with some interest.
—Personalized training? Isn’t that already done at the Academy?
—Yes, but… not at this level of technique. And it’s something that requires privacy. The idea is to take her to the Academy today, where we have more equipment available and, above all, space for controlled practice. No interruptions.
She pauses briefly.
—And of course… it’s a good opportunity for her to build confidence.
The man watches her as if trying to decipher a hidden trick. Then he sighs.
—Very well. But she returns at the usual time. I don’t want unnecessary distractions.
Beatriz nods respectfully, though inside her stomach twists.
Scene: On the way to the Academy – nearby café
Beatriz and Amara walk along a tree-lined sidewalk until Beatriz suggests:
—Would you mind if we stop for breakfast first? I know a place that makes the best vegan nikuman in the city.
Amara raises an eyebrow, surprised.
—Vegan nikuman?
—Trust me. They don’t taste like grass —Beatriz says, with a knowing smile.
A short while later, they sit at a small outdoor table, with two cups of hot tea and freshly served plates. There is a strange calm in the air. The city’s bustle feels distant.
Beatriz waits for Amara to take the first bite before speaking. She does so gently:
—I wanted this moment with you. Alone. Not just to talk about fights or strategies.
Amara looks at her, somewhat puzzled.
—So… what is this about?
—About you —Beatriz replies, without detours, but warmly—. I know that lately everything revolves around what you can or can’t do. Around what’s expected of you. But I don’t want that between us.
She pauses, looking at her tea.
—I want you to know that I’m not seeking you out just because you’re strong. I want to count on you because I believe in you. As a person. As someone who can decide for herself, without always having to obey.
Amara stays silent for a few seconds. Something in her expression softens. Perhaps a bit of distrust beginning to give way.
—Is this about the “trip”?
—Yes —Beatriz admits—. But it’s not just that. We’re going to a dangerous place. To face something that looks like nothing we’ve ever seen. And I know you need to decide whether you want to be part of it. No one will force you. And if you tell me no, I’ll understand. Truly.
Amara watches her closely, as if trying to find a lie in her eyes. But she finds none.
—You’re strange —she finally says—. But… I like you.
Beatriz laughs, relieved.
—I’ll take that as a “maybe.”
—Take it as a “we’ll see” —Amara replies, smiling faintly—. But thank you. For treating me like a person.
Scene: Training courtyard – Academy
(private outdoor area, behind the main building)
The sun is high, but a soft breeze keeps the atmosphere cool. Beatriz has prepared a training circuit: hand-to-hand combat, evasion drills, and a kind of simulated mini “protofield” that generates visual distortions.
—Let’s go step by step —Beatriz says while Amara adjusts tactical gloves—. I don’t want you to overexert yourself. This is about getting to know each other, not breaking records.
—Don’t worry. I can take care of myself —Amara replies, with a more defensive tone than she intended.
Beatriz doesn’t respond, just nods with a smile, and starts the first round.
The morning passes between blows, dodges, posture corrections, and laughter between gasps for breath. At first Amara remains rigid, but little by little she loosens up. Beatriz isn’t invasive or authoritarian. She corrects with patience. She celebrates with sincerity.
When they finish, they sit on the grass, sweaty, sharing a bottle of water and a bag of energy bars.
Amara watches her in silence for a few seconds.
—You’re strange —she says, with a small laugh—. But I like you.
—You’re strange too —Beatriz replies—. So we’re even.
A few seconds of silence pass. Amara breaks it.
—Bea… can I ask you something?
—Of course.
—On the last mission… the terrorists we stopped. They were shouting things. “The cycle will not stop.” “Khaërôn will awaken.”
And then… they buried those crystals. They turned into Wanders right in front of us. I’d never seen that before. And no one talked about it afterward. It was as if… it never happened.
Beatriz tenses slightly, but she doesn’t evade the question.
—Yes… I’ve been investigating that too.
Amara looks up. Beatriz lowers her voice, as if even there unwanted ears might exist.
—There are no official records of that name: Khaërôn. But in many ancient documents—fragments that were confiscated or erased—it appears mentioned as an “interdimensional chaos entity.” A force that has never won… but always returns. As if the universe were trapped in a loop.
—And what do the crystals have to do with it? —Amara asks, more serious now.
—We don’t know for sure. But there are patterns. When crystals mutate something, they don’t just affect the body. They affect the environment. They create a protofield that distorts reality. Some Unicorn Hunters have described seeing ruins that don’t exist, or deserts with impossible skies. Snowfields where there should be concrete.
Amara lowers her gaze, recalling similar images.
—The Wanders… —she murmurs—. Were they human?
Beatriz nods very slowly.
—Maybe they were. Maybe they still are, on some level. But the crystals seem to alter the soul itself, not just the body.
—That’s what bothers me the most —Amara says, clenching her fists—. That we don’t really know anything. That everything important is hidden. Like what happened at that party… —she stops herself in time—. I heard rumors, I mean. That that event confirmed the crystals didn’t come from here.
Beatriz nods, without pressing.
—That’s one of the darkest theories. That the crystals are fragments of something that broke beyond our dimension. Something that might be trying to rebuild itself… or break free.
—And Khaërôn? Could it be using the crystals to awaken?
—I don’t know, Amara. But it’s the only thing that makes sense to me. And you’re the only person I’ve told this to. Because… I trust you.
Amara stays silent. Then she takes a deep breath.
—Then tell me what you need from me. Seriously.
Beatriz smiles, this time with emotion in her eyes.
—That you come with me. To where the incubators are. That you help me stop what’s coming. Not because you have to. But because you choose to.
Amara remains silent for a few seconds, then nods firmly.
—Count on me.
Scene: Late afternoon at the Academy – Training, loyalties, and shadows
Training has ended. Beatriz and Amara rest seated under a tree near the edge of the practice field. The intermittent hum of the security sensors fails to break the sense of peace that has formed between them.
Beatriz watches Amara from the corner of her eye. There’s something about her that reminds her of someone. No… of something.
“She’s like Homura, before breaking. Before understanding that every effort can be useless if you fight alone…”
Beatriz lowers her gaze. Her thumb brushes against the ring hanging from a thin chain around her neck. It doesn’t belong to her. It belongs to someone who never managed to escape the cycle.
“Emil has been trapped for 241 years in this loop. And yet, this time… he didn’t fight. This time he chose the scientific branch. Why? Is it because of the incubators? Because of me? Or because I’m no longer an intruder, but a new variable in this story?”
She stops. Looks at Amara.
“I don’t want him to be lost like the others. I don’t want another Adrien Agreste. No more absurd sacrifices for unreturned affection. This time… this time I want to do it right.”
Meanwhile, Amara plays with a small pebble between her fingers. She looks distracted, but her gaze is focused, as if she were meditating on something deeply personal.
—You know? —she finally says—. I always wanted my father to tell me he was proud of me. But I think it doesn’t matter to me as much anymore.
Beatriz looks at her gently.
—That’s growing up, Amara. Choosing your own goals… even when they hurt.
—I want to be worthy on my own. Not because he says so. Not because they need me. But because I choose it.
Beatriz nods. She softly extends her fist toward her.
—Then you’re on the right path. And I’ll be here. Not to guide you. But to walk beside you.
Amara smiles faintly and returns the gesture with a knuckle tap. A silent bond is sealed between them.
But from the second-floor window of the Academy, a shadow watches.
Perspective: Samanta
The lens of her phone captures a sequence of images: Beatriz smiling, Amara relaxed, the knuckle contact. Samanta clenches her teeth.
"So now with the spoiled little girl of the high command. Interesting choice, Beatriz..."
She sends the images to an encrypted address. She doesn’t really know who she works for. Only that the pay is good and that the “senior spy” always has bigger plans.
What she doesn’t know… is that she is being watched too.
Perspective: Lucien
From his office, a faint notification buzz interrupts his reading. The tracker implanted in Samanta’s phone has detected unusual activity: encrypted transmission, blind-spot location, camera active.
Lucien stands up with his usual elegance, adjusts his black gloves, and leaves without haste. But his eyes, behind tinted glasses, are as cold as blades.
Scene: Parking lot – Elegant intervention
Samanta descends the emergency stairs at a brisk pace. She thinks she’s done enough for today. But as she crosses the threshold into the underground parking lot, she feels a presence behind her.
—Are you in a hurry, Samanta?
Lucien’s voice is soft, almost melodic. Like the tone that precedes an execution.
Samanta turns around, startled. He is leaning against one of the pillars, wearing a half-smile.
—Ah… Sirius. I didn’t see you. I was just—
—Yes, of course. “Just” —he interrupts her with venomous kindness—. Sometimes I also feel like looking through windows while pointing a lens at someone else.
She takes a step back. Her phone vibrates. Lucien walks toward her with the calm of a ballroom dancer.
—You dropped your phone, didn’t you?
And before Samanta can understand the movement, Lucien tosses a coin to the ground. The metallic sound distracts her, and in that second, the phone slips from her hands as if torn away by a magic trick.
Lucien picks it up, gloves on.
—Allow me to help you.
He extracts the phone’s memory in a blink, stores it in a black capsule in his pocket, and inserts a new one.
—Oops. It was defective. I fixed it.
He hands the phone back to her. Samanta barely manages to regain her composure.
—Why are you following me?
Lucien smiles, but this time there is no warmth in his gaze.
—Because mistakes tend to repeat when they aren’t corrected in time. And I hate mistakes.
—Don’t do things that make you irreplaceable… in the wrong way.
He turns and walks away without waiting for a reply.
Final cut: Beatriz, still under the tree
She looks toward the building. For a moment, she thought she saw a reflection in the glass. Maybe it was just the sun.
She sighs. Then looks at Amara.
—Ready to meet someone else from the team?
Amara nods with a confident smile.
—We’re going to kick ass together, right?
Beatriz laughs.
—Always.
Chapter 67: Echoes of Trust
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
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On the way to the apartment – Beatriz and Amara
In the outer hallway of the academy, Beatriz takes out her personal communicator. The touchscreen is minimalist, functional. She selects the contact “Sturm” and waits while Amara adjusts her backpack.
—Hello? —her father’s voice sounds deep, a little hoarse from work.
—Mr. Sturm, it’s me. Hey, I’m going to take Amara to my house. I want to show her how I organize my things… you know, the usual.
Discipline, consistency… no mess.
—Is she part of the team? —he asks, straightforward.
—Not yet, but I think she can contribute a lot. I want her to feel part of it before the official presentation.
There’s a brief pause.
—All right. But remember that being a leader is not the same as being her friend.
You’ll know.
Beatriz smiles with satisfaction.
—I know. Thank you, Mr. Sturm.
She ends the call and turns to Amara.
—Ready to meet my two favorite secrets?
—Favorites? Now I’m under pressure —Amara jokes, easing the tension.
—Just be yourself. They don’t bite… well, Sora sometimes does, but only if you’re too close when she wakes up.
The two girls laugh as they walk away, the afternoon sun tinting their figures with golden tones.
Samanta’s room – The double face of Gemini
Samanta locks herself in her rented room. It’s an aseptic space, as if it were temporary. The bluish light of her terminal illuminates her tense face. She checks her cellphone, opens the gallery… and turns pale.
—What…? —she murmurs.
The photos of Beatriz and Amara are gone. Not a trace. She tries to access the automatic backup. Nothing. She searches the hidden folder. Empty.
—No… it can’t be…
She drops onto the bed, and for an instant she looks like a normal girl, overwhelmed by something far bigger than her.
But the tone of the communicator makes her sit up immediately.
[Incoming message: 𝘜𝘯𝘬𝘯𝘰𝘸𝘯 (𝘌𝘭𝘭𝘪𝘱𝘴𝘦 𝘍𝘳𝘦𝘲𝘶𝘦𝘯𝘤𝘺)]
Where are the images? You said you would send them all. Don’t fail me, Samanta. You know it’s not convenient for you.
She swallows.
[Samanta]
I already sent them earlier. Maybe the file got corrupted in transit. But I don’t have them anymore. Really. I CANNOT repeat them… Not now.
Silence. Then, the reply.
I suggest you find a way. Or maybe… someone you want to protect will stop being safe.
Samanta closes her eyes in anger. She grips the communicator tightly, as if that could stop the words from seeping into her skin.
“Damn him…”
It isn’t evil what moves her. It’s fear… and a contract that still cannot be broken. But inside her, a part doubts. And that part has been growing for weeks.
“And what if Sirius already knows? What if he’s testing me?”
But for now, her façade remains intact. At least on the outside.
Zone N109 – Lucien and the black capsule
Under the city’s underground, in a covert base with triple biometric security, Lucien removes his gloves with surgical precision. The room is completely isolated: no external connection, no incoming or outgoing signals. Everything here is offline.
He places the black capsule on the table. The interface recognizes his genetic signature and opens with a soft mechanical click.
Inside, the micro memory card from Samanta’s phone.
—Let’s see what you really had…
He connects it to a specific reader, isolated. A personal algorithm —designed by him— begins to reconstruct fragmented data, copies invisible to the normal operating system. Residual images, geolocation traces, encrypted names.
The screen fills with green lines while Lucien adjusts his glasses. One of the icons blinks.
“The sender…”
He opens the shipping log. The origin of the address is camouflaged, but the key sequence reveals something older. Something that does not belong to the academic network.
—I found you —he whispers, and his eyes shine intensely.
A coded signature appears. One he had seen long ago in classified reports. The codename: 𝙊𝙧𝙗𝙞𝙩 𝙎𝙖𝙘𝙧𝙞𝙛𝙞𝙘𝙚.
Lucien intertwines his fingers and smiles with sinister calm.
—So you were the one fishing in deep waters…
And now, he also prepares his net.
Beatriz’s apartment – Magical girls’ night
Beatriz’s apartment is surprisingly tidy and cozy. It has shelves full of books, a small display case with replicas of ancient artifacts, and an impressive view of the night district, illuminated with neon lights and distant patrol drones.
In the center of the living room, a huge blanket covers the floor. There are pillows, warm lights in pastel tones, and on the low table: pizza boxes, tall glasses with ice and fizzy soda.
Aki is already there, wrapped in an oversized hoodie, eating a slice of pizza without worrying about her appearance.
—So she’s the new one? —she asks, looking Amara up and down.
Amara is a bit stiff, but smiles politely. She wears a loose T-shirt with a retro design and sweatpants.
—Yes —Beatriz answers—. She’s Amara. She comes from the upper zone. And she has a stronger heart than she seems.
Sora nods with a slight smile, sitting cross-legged. She looks calmer, observing the environment with patient eyes. She wears a soft robe with star patterns and her hair tied in a long braid.
—Hi —Aki finally says, with a gentle voice—. Beatriz has told us good things about you. Well… what she could say, without breaking protocols.
—She didn’t say that much! —Sora jumps in, with her mouth full—. But if you’re here, it’s because she saw something.
Beatriz laughs, relaxing the atmosphere.
—It’s not an interrogation either —she jokes—. I just wanted us to meet, as a team… or as friends.
She pours more soda into the glasses and sits cross-legged.
—I’m not a magical girl, in case you were wondering —Beatriz begins—. I started as a Wander Hunter on behalf of the unicorn force. I was looking for clues about the disappearance of “my family,” one thing led to another, and that’s basically how I ended up discovering the existence of the incubators and met Sora first and then Aki.
Sora lowers her glass slowly.
—I didn’t think anyone else knew about that… especially an adult who decided to take care of us…
—In my case, Beatriz and I —Aki continues— I helped her defeat a witch, especially when I noticed she was an adult who could “walk” inside the labyrinths without losing her sanity.
Aki laughs with a proud hint.
—Beatriz was well equipped for a confrontation, like a well-prepared heroine. But she wasn’t afraid of me. And that seemed… cool.
Amara watches them, curious and cautious.
—And you, Sora?
Sora plays with the edge of her glass.
—I made my wish when I was little and naïve, I carry this with me. Or at least I think so. I always knew something was waiting for me. Sometimes I heard a melody before important things happened.
And then… the witches appeared. The dark seeds. And when Aki found me, we realized we could share part of that connection.
Amara lowers her gaze, as if she feels she is not at their level yet.
Beatriz notices it and places a hand on her shoulder.
—It’s not about having incredible powers. It’s about having a purpose. About having something to defend. That also makes you powerful.
Aki stretches like a cat.
—And having good aim helps, of course.
They all laugh, even Amara, who begins to loosen up a bit.
Sora, in a soft voice, asks:
—And you, Amara? What brought you here?
Amara hesitates for a moment. But the intimate tone of the evening invites her to be honest.
—I… don’t want what happened to my mom to happen to anyone else.
I never had the chance to fight for her. And I wanted my father’s recognition because of that, from the power of being able to defend him, and that’s how my power was granted. But if I can fight for someone else and with purpose… then all of this is worth it.
The room falls silent for an instant. Then, Sora nods. Aki lowers her gaze, as if that had touched a corner she didn’t want to show.
Beatriz, meanwhile, smiles with contained pride.
—Then we are four. And each with a reason.
They toast with glasses of soda held high.
—To what’s coming —says Beatriz.
—And to what we’ll leave behind —adds Sora.
—And to the pizza —Aki finishes, stealing another slice.
They laugh. United by something more than a mission: by a shared promise on an ordinary night.
Amara’s farewell – Night at Beatriz’s apartment
The night has gradually slowed its rhythm. Between the leftover pizza and shared laughter, the atmosphere has grown warmer, like an invisible blanket woven among the four.
Amara stands in a corner of the living room, carefully folding the blanket she used. She places it on the couch, as if she didn’t want to leave a trace, but Beatriz gently stops her with her gaze.
—You don’t have to tidy everything up like you’re a guest —she says, half joking—. This is already your home too, whenever you need it.
Amara lowers her eyes, almost embarrassed, but smiles with sincere sweetness.
—Thank you. It’s been… one of the calmest nights I remember.
Aki stretches and tosses a cushion into the air.
—And we didn’t even bring out the karaoke.
—Or the forbidden card games —adds Sora with a slight smile.
The digital clock in the dining room blinks. Amara checks her personal communicator. A message: “Your driver is already waiting for you. Exterior Zone C2.”
—My dad sent the driver —she says, a bit resigned—. Sometimes I forget he’s still trying to protect me… even from a distance.
Beatriz approaches, noticing that tone mixed between affection and pressure she knows so well.
—And it’s okay for him to protect you. But today… you saw that you can protect yourself too. And that you’re not alone.
Amara nods, her eyes shining slightly. She walks toward the door, but before leaving, she hesitates.
Aki gets ahead of her, and without warning, gives her a tight hug.
—I don’t like saying goodbye —she grumbles—. So consider it a “see you later, battle sister.”
Sora also approaches and gently takes her hand.
—If you ever hear that song only you recognize again… you know who to call.
Beatriz stays with her at the entrance for a moment. She tucks a strand of hair behind her ear.
—You’re taking a part of us with you —she says—. And this door will always be open. Literally, I haven’t fixed it properly since Aki’s last battle with the oven.
—It wasn’t my fault!! —Aki shouts from inside.
Amara laughs. Truly laughs.
—See you soon.
She crosses the door, and in the background, the elegant figure of the driver can be seen next to the dark and spotless vehicle waiting for her. She turns one last time, looking at the three girls now framed in the doorway, waving goodbye.
She gets into the car, and it glides smoothly through the elevated streets of the complex.
Beatriz closes the door slowly. For a moment, silence settles in. Until Aki, with a mischievous smile, asks:
—So now can we bring out the karaoke?
Sora shakes her head, but laughs. And Beatriz, still with the echo of the farewell in her chest, just says:
—Yes, but this time I choose the first song.
Amara’s reflection – Inside the car
The car slid smoothly through the illuminated streets of the complex. Amara, leaning against the leather seat, kept her arms crossed, her gaze fixed on the reflection of the lights on the window.
Her fingers lightly drummed on her communicator, without her noticing. Inside her, an uneasiness beat like a clock that no longer obeyed common time.
“You’re changing, Amara.”
It wasn’t an alien voice. It was her own, more honest than ever.
“Stopping obeying isn’t betrayal. It’s growing.”
The night at Beatriz’s apartment had been simple. Too simple, perhaps. But it was real. For the first time in a long time, no one expected something from her. She didn’t have to be the model daughter, the excellent student, the heir to a corporate shadow. She could just be Amara… and still be valuable.
She took out her cellphone. Held it for an instant before unlocking it.
The pieces were starting to fall into place. Aki. That energy, that way of speaking. That involuntary gesture when raising her eyebrow when something confused her. She was identical to the young businessman she had briefly met months ago at a charity gala. The same one who was desperately searching for a sister who had disappeared years ago.
Amara hadn’t forgotten him. And thanks to her ability to slow time, she had perceived details others didn’t notice.
She slid her finger across the screen, activating an encrypted line.
—Detective Barros —she said in a low voice, on the other side of the secure line—. I have a possible match regarding the case you mentioned… The missing sister of Leo Arimori. Can you receive me tomorrow?
—Match or certainty?
—I don’t know yet. But I have a name: Aki. And I assure you this story… will need proof before breaking someone’s heart.
She ended the call. Stayed silent for an instant.
“I have to do something with this power. Something that has nothing to do with orders or inherited duties.”
She closed her eyes and let herself be carried by the sway of the car, with a decision beginning to take shape. A new version of Amara was being born. No longer an obedient child. But someone who would choose whom and how to protect.
Beatriz prepares – Strategy for the future
Beatriz had been awake since before dawn. Sitting at her small desk, with a notebook open in front of her, she began to outline something more than a plan. It was a long-term move. An act of faith… and of love.
“I won’t let them devour her.”
She looked at Amara’s name written in clean letters, followed by two words:
“Early succession.”
Beatriz knew the system did not forgive idealists. Adrien Agreste was proof of that. An heir without a voice, a name without autonomy, swallowed by the decisions of others. She would not allow Amara to end the same way.
She took a breath and began to write the request letter for a formal meeting with Amara’s father. She drafted it with a business tone, with the correct terms so it would look like a strategic proposal, not an emotional plea:
Dear Mr. Sturm,
I respectfully request an in-person meeting, in my capacity as external advisor and current provisional tutor of your daughter Amara Hoshino. The purpose is to establish a symbolic succession protocol in the management of corporate image, as well as in the delegation of brand representation.
The current situation and the risks we face demand that we think about the future with coldness but also with vision. Your daughter’s youth, combined with her public profile, makes her the ideal figure to lead this new stage.
I propose not only to establish a trust fund under her name, but also to register the main assets for the future in order to avoid any external manipulation, whether political or financial. In addition, I offer my services as an image, logistics, and security advisor for this new role.
As you well know, social contracts are won first in the public’s heart rather than at desks. Let us make the Hoshino surname mean more than power: let it represent hope.
Sincerely,
Beatriz Delmar
Chapter 68: The Pact of the Sun and the Storm
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
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Chapter Text
Café Sol de Menta — 9:48 a.m.
The sun poured in through the café’s tall windows, reflecting golden glints across the white porcelain. The city was only just beginning to wake, but at the table in the back—where they always met—everything was already in motion.
Beatriz walked in with a steady step. A light coat draped over her shoulders, her notebook tucked under her arm, and a tense calm in her eyes. She knew something would change today. She felt it in her chest, like a storm approaching—but not the kind that destroys… the kind that cleanses.
Aslan rose the moment he saw her. Tall, steady, like a lighthouse amid the noise.
Lucien was already arranging a folder with almost surgical meticulousness.
Nox, in his own way, scribbled a symbol with crayons on a napkin: concentric circles, like an invisible net.
—You got here right on time —Lucien said, with a soft smile, as if he’d known it beforehand.
—We already ordered your cappuccino —Nox added without looking up, but with a voice more serious than usual.
Beatriz sat down. Across from her, Aslan placed the legal folder.
—Here are the papers —he said in a deep but warm voice—. The surname can be Solane Delmar or Delmar Solane. You decide. What matters is that this is clear. And firm.
Beatriz opened the folder. She saw her name written in elegant ink, like a declaration. She stayed silent for a few seconds, letting the weight of the moment settle into her body. Then she looked at each of them: at Nox, still drawing; at Lucien, attentive but without pressure; and at Aslan… who watched her with protective patience.
—Beatriz Solane Delmar —she said at last—. That’s how it should be. Delmar for what I fought for. Solane for what I choose to be.
Lucien nodded, taking her hand beneath the table with a firm, silent gesture.
Aslan offered her the pen. She signed. Then he did. And finally Lucien.
—And me? —Nox asked, with a half-smile.
Aslan slid another sheet forward.
—You too. This is for everyone. Not only to protect, but to build.
The name said everything: Nox Félix Solane Delmar.
When he finished signing, Beatriz wrapped her arms around him and whispered:
—Welcome home, little brother.
The moment became almost sacred. But then Lucien spoke again, this time in a different tone. Lower. More focused.
—Now that everything is legal, we can move. You have a secure residence near the perimeter, full access to protected files, and a new encrypted contact network. It’s not just a name change, Bea. It’s a new position.
—And why now? —she asked, still moved, but alert.
Nox stopped drawing.
—Because things are moving. And you… you’re a key piece. This isn’t only about affection. It’s strategy too.
Aslan held her gaze.
—With this identity, no one will be able to erase you. Starting today, you’re protected. And visible. It’s the safest way forward. For you. For us. For what’s coming.
Beatriz nodded slowly. Not everything had been said, but what mattered was clear.
A network had activated. A story was beginning. And for the first time, she wouldn’t have to hold everything alone.
Aslan raised his cup.
—To the family we choose. And to the future we’re going to defend, no matter what.
The cups lifted. Outside, the world kept turning. But in that corner, at that hour, the present became firm. Strategic. And luminous.
Sturm Group Headquarters, Floor 53 — Private Meeting Room
Black marble gleamed under indirect light. Smoked-glass walls offered a partial view of the city—enough to impose without revealing too much. At the head of the table, Mr. Maximiliano Sturm watched with coldness as he read the dossier he’d just been handed. His long, perfectly groomed fingers turned pages one by one, without making a sound.
Beatriz stood at the other end of the table. Her posture was impeccable. Her clothing sober but elegant. The minimalist designer wristwatch reminded her of every passing second, but she didn’t flinch. Beside her, Lucien didn’t speak, but his presence was steady, with the aura of someone used to negotiating millions without blinking.
—So… —Maximiliano Sturm said, finally lifting his eyes—. Beatriz Solane Delmar?
—Yes, Mr. Sturm —she answered, steady.
—Adopted a month ago by Aslan Solane… —he repeated, as if savoring the information. His eyes evaluated every microgesture, searching for weakness. He found none.
—My father and I agreed to make it official after I reunited with him following the Cronofit incident. The story is already ready for the press, with the necessary legal and social backing. I’m not only a survivor. I’m the heir to a new business network being born with strategic vision and transparency, something I believe your daughter Amara could also represent.
Maximiliano Sturm narrowed his eyes, interested. He didn’t interrupt. Beatriz continued.
—Amara is not only brilliant, she’s magnetic. She has the elegance, intelligence, and character to lead a new era… But in the real world, talent isn’t enough if it isn’t armored. What I propose is simple: let’s secure her future—now.
She handed him a red folder. Inside, a carefully crafted proposal: a symbolic transfer of share participation in the future joint company “Sturm-Solane” in Amara’s name, early enrollment in the Private Academy of the Unicorn Hunters Force in the Science and Politics division, and a strategic advisory role by Beatriz, acting as her legal protector and public guide until Amara reaches the legal age of majority to inherit fully.
—If you allow me to speak frankly —Beatriz added calmly, but with fire in her eyes—. I know you see the world as a board. Pieces that don’t move, die. Amara cannot be a piece. She has to be the player. And you know you won’t always be able to protect her from the shadows.
Aurelian closed the folder. The silence that followed was dense as lead.
—So you propose yourself as her shadow.
—No, sir. As her lighthouse. And if you wish… as her sword.
Lucien smiled—barely. It was a small gesture, but enough for Maximiliano to understand this wasn’t improvisation. It was long-term strategy. A master move.
Finally, the magnate leaned back in his chair.
—Amara has changed a lot since she started spending time with you. She speaks more, doubts less. I wonder if I should fear you… or thank you.
—With all due respect —Beatriz said— doing both is usually the most sensible option with people like us.
Maximiliano Sturm let out a brief, dry laugh, but not unpleasant. Then he pressed a button on the table.
—I’ll prepare the first trial contract. I only want one thing.
—Whatever is necessary.
—I want you to draft the first statement. I want to see how you sell my daughter to the world… as if you already owned her.
Beatriz nodded without blinking. She had it.
Sunset in the elevated garden of the Sturm Building — soft wind, jasmine scent
Amara sat on the edge of the central fountain, playing with a rose petal between her fingers. She wore a light jacket, her hair pulled into a rushed braid. Beatriz arrived silently, with a cup of jasmine tea in one hand and a thermos of hot chocolate in the other.
—Did I bring you the chocolate you like, or the one I like? —she joked softly, sitting beside her.
Amara smiled.
—If you brought it, I’ll like it either way.
Beatriz handed her the cup, and for a moment, only the fountain’s running water could be heard, and some distant thrush.
—Amara… —she began, not looking at her directly—. I need to tell you something important. But before you get scared or think something’s wrong, I want you to know I did all of this because I care about you so much. Not as a heroine, or as a partner in my madness. As you. As my friend.
Amara lowered her gaze, more attentive than ever.
—I know the adult world is a strange place —Beatriz continued—. Sometimes cold, full of rules no one explains, and traps no one warns you about. But you’re not going to face it alone. Because I’m not going to allow it.
She took a breath. This part was delicate.
—A month ago, I signed the papers to be adopted by Aslan. Not only to have a home, but because I needed a strong surname. A solid story. A base to move in this world without getting torn apart for being just another girl lost among ruins. And… I also did it for you.
Amara frowned, curious.
—For me?
—Yes. Because this world doesn’t forgive magical girls when they stop shining. Because you’re powerful, yes, but you’re also young, bright, and… dangerous to certain interests. And I’m not going to let them devour you while you’re still learning to fly.
She looked into her eyes.
—I know you might not understand it completely right now, but I’m making legal and strategic moves so you’ll have a shield. So that, if one day your powers go away… or if something changes too fast, like it’s been happening lately, you’ll have a safe place to return to. A name with weight. A plan. A life they can’t take from you.
Amara blinked, as if she were aiming each word. She didn’t understand everything, but she felt every intention. Every heartbeat.
—And where will you be in all of that? —she finally asked, in a very small voice.
Beatriz smiled tenderly.
—Right where you need me. I’m not your shadow, Amara. I want to be your lighthouse. The one who lights your way when everything else turns confusing or goes out. The one who reminds you you’re worth more than any system, more than any power. Because you’re not just a magical girl… you’re you. And that is already enough.
Amara set the cup down, her eyes a little glossy. Beatriz hugged her without more words, letting the moment speak for itself. That hug was a silent pact. Of love. Of protection. Of true friendship.
Sturm Group meeting hall — black marble, discreet chandeliers, an unbeatable view of the city.
The board members were lined along each side of the long oval table. All dressed impeccably, with data tablets and evaluator expressions. At the head, as was customary, sat Amara’s father: flawless, observant, sharp as a scalpel.
Then the double doors opened.
—With you… —the secretary announced in a diplomatic tone— Miss Beatriz Solane Delmar, accompanied by Mr. Lucien Draekos.
The murmurs among those present did not take long. Not because of her—still new to that circle—but because of him. Lucien. One of the most mysterious and generous patrons of the last decade. The restorer of the Museum of Classical Art, the anonymous donor who had financed the last symphony of the North Port Philharmonic. Owner of an empire of fine imports and several charitable foundations… with a reputation as spotless as it was difficult to trace.
Beatriz walked in confident, elegant, with the composure of someone who wasn’t asking permission to be there, but offering the courtesy of introducing herself. Lucien walked one step behind, like a knight in shadow, in his signature black suit and cane with an antique silver handle. His smile was subtle. His eyes, forbidden reading.
—Thank you for receiving us —Beatriz began, her voice firm but cordial—. I come to you as the adoptive heiress of the House of Solane Delmar, with a legitimate interest in establishing future alliances with the Sturm Group.
One of the advisers cleared his throat.
—House Solane Delmar? Only a few weeks ago?
Beatriz didn’t flinch.
—My father, Aslan Solane, formalized my adoption a month ago. The legal documentation is available for review. This is not a whim, but a consolidation of ties that have existed for a year. I was recognized not only by law, but by a network of trust we built from reality. And the truth… —she smiled— is a language the press loves when it’s told well.
Amara’s father lifted an eyebrow, amused.
—And what is your interest, Mr. Draekos?
Lucien stepped forward calmly, resting both hands on his cane.
—My interest is talent. Projection. And the stability of our young promises. Miss Solane Delmar has proven she has vision, courage, and an uncommon understanding of the modern world and the future we face. I have decided to support her initiatives. That includes ensuring that no disproportionate power strips her of the ability to decide her own path.
Silence.
A few seconds later, someone whispered into the director’s ear: “He donated the east wing of the neurotechnology hospital…”
—And what do you want in return, Mr. Draekos? —another executive asked.
Lucien narrowed his eyes with a half-smile.
—A world where we don’t have to bury geniuses in orphanages or turn pearls into dust out of distrust. And, if you’ll allow me… the chance to see this generation bloom without vultures suffocating it before its time.
A contained murmur followed. Amara’s father laced his fingers and looked at Beatriz.
—Interesting. Very interesting. It seems we are not dealing with a simple adolescent with aspirations, but with a well-executed project.
Beatriz dipped her head with a slight smile, aware of the impact.
—It isn’t only about me. It’s about protecting what matters most. And making sure that, when the change arrives, it doesn’t take us by surprise. Because it will arrive.
Sturm Group private offices – Legal Contracts Room.
The light was warm, the windows covered by heavy opaque linen curtains. A smaller, intimate table of noble wood. Only present were: Beatriz, Amara, Lucien, the group’s notary, and two trusted witnesses. Amara’s father had delegated the process with a smile, believing his signature was enough. He didn’t know how far the networks Beatriz wove could reach.
—Are you sure, Beatriz? —Amara asked, with a mix of emotion and nerves in her voice—. You’re doing so much for me…
Beatriz held her gaze with sweetness. Her expression was firm, but it carried a tenderness she reserved only for her.
—Of course I am. I’m not doing it out of duty… but because I want to. This isn’t a burden, Amara. It’s a promise. Until you turn 21, I will make sure no one uses you, no one pressures you, and you have the power to decide your own life. That’s what you deserve.
Lucien nodded from his seat as he slid an elegant fountain pen toward Beatriz.
—You will have my financial backing for whatever you decide to do in that time. If Beatriz is the lighthouse… I will be the shield.
Amara blinked, speechless. The notary asked for both of their attention.
—We will proceed with the signing. It is declared under oath that, by the express will of the parties, Miss Beatriz Solane Delmar assumes the legal and administrative guardianship of Amara Sturm, partial heiress to the assets of the Sturm Group, under the direct supervision of the trust structured by Mr. Lucien Draekos.
A pause.
Beatriz signed. Her hand was steady. Not only because she had clarity… but because deep in her chest, something beat hard: a premonition she could not ignore. Like a faint vibration in the marrow, as if an unspoken word brushed her soul.
The notary passed the papers to Amara. She signed. Her handwriting trembled a little, but when she lifted her gaze, there were already tears held back.
—Thank you —she whispered.
Beatriz only smiled.
You have no idea what I’m saving you from yet…
Lucien, from his corner, only murmured to himself:
—And with this… the board begins to move for real.
Inner garden of the building. Afternoon.
The ceremony was over. The notary had left. Amara, still moved, had been taken by an assistant to rest. Beatriz, without a word, excused herself and walked into the building’s inner garden. Her boots echoed softly over the marble, while a light breeze—too cold for the time of day—brushed her face.
She stood in front of an artificial pond with white lilies.
She felt a sharp pain behind her eyes. Not physical… it was as if the air pressure changed only for her. As if the world bent for an instant around her.
And then, the flash.
FLASH.
Black cracks spreading across the walls of an endless corridor. Cables hanging from the ceiling, flickering. Echoes of a human scream… a distorted one.
FLASH.
Amara’s father’s face, for just a second: his pupils were spirals. He had something living stuck to his chest. A black stain, pulsing like a strange heart.
FLASH.
A boardroom in ruins. Broken screens. Shadows crawling over shattered glass. A hooded figure falling to her knees. Her face can’t be seen, but Beatriz knows it’s Amara. And she is alone.
FLASH.
A tower collapsing into the void, swallowed by a crack the size of the sky. In the depths, a laugh: not human, not alive, but mocking. A laugh that remembers her.
END.
Beatriz gasped. She dropped to her knees in front of the pond. She braced herself with her hands on the stone. Her heart slammed hard in her chest, and her pulse throbbed in her temples. There were no tears… only certainty.
—He… —she murmured, still trembling—. He’s already lost. He doesn’t know it yet… but he’s not himself anymore.
She breathed deep, fixing her eyes on her reflection.
—I don’t care if this makes me the enemy of half the world… I’m not going to let them drag you down with him, Amara. Not you… not anyone else.
From the shadow of the threshold, Lucien watched her in silence. He didn’t need to see her fall apart to know she’d just had a vision. He only placed a small wooden box on the nearby bench, with a discreet solar symbol engraved on it. His way of reminding her: you are not alone.
Chapter 69: Promises Under the Eternal Night
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
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Chapter Text
Closed night. Lucien’s residence.
The room was immersed in a soft penumbra, barely lit by the bluish light slipping between the heavy curtains. Lucien slept, his brow faintly furrowed, as if his mind could never fully lower its guard, not even in dreams.
The air grew lighter.
The sound of a wind chime that didn’t exist echoed subtly in the background, as if crystals from another plane were brushing against each other.
Then the figure appeared. She didn’t walk or float… she simply was there.
Mater Somniorum.
Tall, wrapped in veils that unraveled into stars as she moved. Her face, invisible, yet maternal, present, flooded the room with an ancient stillness.
Lucien opened his eyes slowly, without startle. In his chest, something beat differently.
—...It’s you. —It wasn’t a question. It was recognition.
The goddess did not answer with human words. Her voice did not sound—it was as if someone blew truths directly into the soul.
“Thank you... for being her sun.”
Lucien felt a soft pressure in his chest, as if a warm invisible hand touched him.
“You anchor her. You hold her without trying to bind her. That is why I choose you to know what is coming...”
Then Mater’s veils opened for an instant.
And Lucien saw.
As if an invisible hand drew with chalk on a blackboard, figures appeared: him and Beatriz, joined in a moment of love, then a belly, then a newborn...
And then those eyes.
Ruby eyes. Intact, impossible, reflecting every form of truth: the intention behind every word, the desire behind every gesture, the probable futures, the hidden lies... Everything.
Lucien held his breath.
“If this child comes too soon… if he is born before the world is ready… he will be cursed for his gift. Hunted. Feared. Like you once were… but with no way to hide.”
The images changed: the child in a courtroom, a possible girl alone before an army, surrounded by masks... and then in silence, watching worlds unravel, knowing what would come… unable to change it.
Mater spoke then more softly, like a whisper in a dream you don’t want to forget:
“Do not fear loving Beatriz. Do not fear desiring her. But… protect her even from yourself until the marked hour arrives. After the signature. After the oath. Not before.”
A pause. The goddess seemed to look straight into his soul, even without eyes.
“Your descendance will be a bridge. But it cannot be born on trembling ground.”
Lucien closed his eyes. He nodded without saying a word, as if the soul answered for him.
When he opened them again… he was alone.
But the air still smelled of night lilies. And in his chest, he still felt the voice of a mother who was not his, and at the same time had been, from before time.
Lucien’s underground base. Midnight.
The silence was thick as ink.
Lucien stood before the reinforced window, watching the sleeping city as if he could decipher its sins from the gloom. His hands were behind his back, tense, and the gleam of his right eye revealed that sleep had not reached him that night.
On a shelf of dark marble, the cat stretched with the slow ease of someone who had lived more lives than he should. Pirata, the eternal blind one, licked a paw with the arrogance of someone who knows his presence is a curse… and also a compass.
—Did you have a visitor? —he purred in a rough, ancient voice.
Lucien didn’t answer immediately.
—Yes —he finally admitted, voice low—. She showed me. What could come.
Pirata snorted, a mix of mockery and understanding.
—Ah… the ruby eyes. The gift that tears all veils apart. I saw it too, long ago, when I could still look. —He paused, fixing his blind eyes on Lucien as if he could still see his soul—. That’s why you can’t touch her yet. Not until everything is written. Sealed.
Lucien closed his eyes for an instant, feeling the weight of that truth like a yoke tempered by hope.
—I already promised her —he whispered—. But now I understand.
The feline approached, purring with a hint of sarcasm.
—And you’re going to obey without growling? That truly is love, my favorite criminal. But remember what her father asked of you: real names, a signature in blood ink if necessary, and no shadows when the day comes. Are you ready to strip yourself of all your disguises, Lucien Montbrun? The philanthropist, the ghost, the king without a crown…?
Lucien looked at him, his face carved by decision.
—For her, yes.
A solemn silence wrapped the room. Only the faint tick of the old clock on the wall could be heard.
—You still haven’t given her the ring —Pirata grumbled, turning away—. Good. Give her the promise later. When the world has stopped trembling and she can receive it without carrying another battle. Then, and only then… let the joy last a week.
Lucien sketched a very faint smile, more tired than happy, but real.
—A week… before the abyss.
—That’s how you build the future, idiot —Pirata replied with a yawn. Then he curled up on top of classified papers, as if he hadn’t just spoken about the fate of two worlds.
Lucien did not speak again. But that night, in his solitude, he began to write a document by hand. One that carried his real name. One meant to seal a promise, not with immediate passion, but with eternal purpose.
Because when you step into the rift… you’d better have left your heart in good hands.
A few nights before entering the rift. Temporary shelter.
Rain tapped softly against the window glass, as if someone were knocking on the door of the world without wanting to enter all the way. Beatriz sat on the edge of the bed, wrapped in a blanket that couldn’t quite warm the anxiety twisting in her chest.
It wasn’t fear. It was something else. A kind of echo.
She closed her eyes.
And she felt it.
As if an invisible, warm thread brushed her heart.
As if someone, somewhere else, were thinking of her with a devotion that transcended words or acts. As if the universe whispered: “You are not alone. He knows it. And he is doing something for you. For both of you.”
Beatriz tightened the blanket between her fingers, very slowly.
The world had not changed yet. Nothing in the room was different.
But she was.
Her gaze lifted to the window, to the storm outside. And for a second, she thought she saw a blurred figure reflected in the glass, with eyes glowing like embers, covered in shadows… and light.
Lucien.
It wasn’t a vision, not the kind the gift of Cassandra gave her. It was more intimate. More real. Something born from the bond they had built through silences, wars, and tenderness out of time.
—You’re choosing me —she whispered to no one.
And for the first time in a long time, she felt that the greatest decision wasn’t facing the abyss… but learning to accept herself as worthy of that kind of love.
The stillness before the echo
Amara sat alone in the base’s improvised greenhouse. Someone had left her a small box of old watercolors, and she had been painting in silence for over an hour. She didn’t speak. She only wet the brush, chose a color, and let it flow over the paper.
Beside her, a blue butterfly perched on the edge of the table. It didn’t move.
Amara didn’t either.
Only her eyes kept tracing lines and shadows. Sometimes she drew the outline of a girl. Sometimes a faceless silhouette. Sometimes an abyss… and on the other side, a golden thread.
—“I’m not going to lose myself,” —she murmured to herself—. “Not this time.”
She lifted her gaze when she heard someone’s footsteps approaching. It was one of the detective’s assistants, a neutral type, with no memorable features, but with eyes that missed nothing. He carried an envelope.
—“It’s about what Miss Beatriz requested,” —he said, handing it to her with respect—. “It took us longer than we expected.”
Amara received it with small, steady hands. She opened the envelope.
Inside, a single photograph.
Her.
Not as she was now.
Younger, different… but those eyes were unmistakable. She knew it was Aki. She knew with a certainty that crossed her chest like a forgotten heartbeat.
—“I knew it…” —she whispered.
But then, something on the back of the photograph caught her attention. A mark. Barely visible. A serial number. Codes she didn’t fully understand, but that… she felt had meaning. As if someone else, too, were following the same trail.
Cut: parallel scene – Amara’s father
In an office adorned with glass statuettes, floating screens, and a single bonsai obsessively cared for, Amara’s father studied a digital map of the restricted zone.
—“Interesting…” —he murmured, scrolling through the records.
A holographic assistant blinked.
—“Sir, you do not have authorization to enter that area. A breach has been registered recently. The protocol is—”
—“Silence.”
The man narrowed his eyes. He had seen the patterns. He still didn’t know what he was looking for… but something in his blood told him the key was there.
—“You were always special, Amara… too much. And what is special, is valuable.”
He took a small metallic case from the drawer. Opened it. Inside, a small capsule of genetic resonance serum. He held it under the light.
—“I won’t let them take you before I see what you’re made of. That rift… belongs to you. But I will be there to claim what is mine.”
Click.
The screen displayed a silhouette in motion. Amara.
He smiled, as if he already knew the end of the game.
But he knew nothing.
Scene: In the quantum calibration room, near dawn.
The hum of the stabilizers was barely audible, like a prolonged sigh. The soft lights of the scientific area cast amber reflections over the metallic walls, and the projected constellations’ light turned slowly across the ceiling dome.
Beatriz approached with quiet steps. She wore a lab coat over the pilot suit, her hair loose, her eyes large and dark as if they had seen beyond the stars… yet still warm.
Emil, as always, was reviewing floating graphs with serene concentration. The kind of focus you only achieve when you’ve lived too many lives without allowing yourself to stop. Until she spoke:
—Emil… do you have a moment?
He turned his face slightly. His expression, calm. —Of course.
Beatriz came closer, with a faint smile, but not a polite one: it was one born from contained emotion.
—I’m not here to ask you for answers. Just… a promise.
Emil tilted his head, curious.
—Some time ago, when we talked more often, you mentioned something… Maybe you don’t even remember it anymore, because your timeline and mine don’t always line up. —She sat beside him, calmly, letting her words find their rhythm—. You told me you’ve repeated this loop for… 241 years, right?
The silence that followed wasn’t uncomfortable. Only deep.
Emil lowered his gaze for a moment. —Yes. I remember.
—I’m not judging you. —Beatriz hurried to clarify, her voice gentle—. In fact… I think you did what you could with what you had. And that’s already far more than many would do.
Her fingers played with the edge of her sleeve. Then she looked up at him with tenderness.
—I know that’s why you preferred to move to the scientific area. And I’m glad. Maybe… it was also time for someone else to fight, right?
He nodded, as if there was no need to add words.
—But precisely because of that, I want to ask you something —she continued—. If someday… I’m about to do something horrible, something that feels like a mistake you’ve already seen before... or that you sense as one of those moments you don’t come back from…
She looked at him with the serene strength she had learned to build in the middle of chaos.
—I want you to tell me. Not like an oracle. Not like someone who’s lived this again and again. But as you. As Emil.
The boy drew a deep breath. His voice came out steady, but with a shade of astonishment. —No one has ever asked me that with so much honesty. As if you truly trusted me beyond the cycle.
Beatriz smiled. —Because I do.
He looked at her in silence a few seconds longer. Finally, he nodded.
—I will. I promise you. If I ever see you about to fall… I’ll be the one to extend a hand before you break. Not as a duty. As… a new beginning.
Beatriz laughed softly, and stood up.
—Thank you, Merlin.
—Merlin?
—Nothing. It’s an old story from another line. —She winked and walked away.
He watched her go.
And for the first time in centuries, he felt that maybe tomorrow wasn’t written.
Scene: Miguel Ángel’s workshop. Cloudy afternoon, the scent of metallic oil, and engravings in progress.
Beatriz pushes the workshop door open without a sound, letting the wind’s noise announce her arrival. The place smells of copper, ink, and that strange mixture of static energy that always surrounds Miguel Ángel. He lifts his gaze from one of his handcrafted drones and smiles immediately when he sees her.
—Bea! I’m so glad you came. I was just finishing one of the new models. Want to see it?
Beatriz nods, but her expression is different: it isn’t disinterest, it’s the weight of having to talk about something important with someone you care about.
—Sure. But… before that, can I tell you something?
Miguel Ángel sets the screwdriver down and blinks, attentive. —Everything okay?
Beatriz crosses her arms, walking slowly between shelves full of sketches, parts, and prototypes. Then she stops and looks at him, straight on.
—I heard something weird. A little yellow bird told me.
He frowns, feigning confusion. —A bird? Yellow?
—You know… the kind that wears a raincoat and has no filter. —She smiles briefly, but her eyes stay firm.
He swallows. —And what did that little bird tell you?
—That there’s someone out there saying you and I… are a couple.
The silence turns thick, and Miguel Ángel lowers his gaze for a second. Then he shrugs, like someone who knows the truth already slipped out of his hands.
—Bea… it was only once. I was dealing with complicated people. I thought if they said you were with me, they wouldn’t touch you. It was stupid, but it was that or put your name on their list. I didn’t want them to hurt you.
Beatriz nods, understanding.
—I know. And that’s why I’m not here to scold you or yell at you or give you a lecture. —She pauses and takes a deep breath—. I just want you to know I understand why you did it. But also… I need you to know something else.
She steps a little closer, her voice softer.
—You matter to me. A lot. And I feel safe with you. But not in that way.
Miguel Ángel tries not to show it, but something breaks a little in his gaze.
—It’s not because you aren’t worth it —she continues, sincere—. In fact, you’ve been my shield many times. But what we have, if it ever existed, was always from that place: care, friendship. And I don’t want to deceive you or make you think this could go somewhere else.
He nods slowly, without looking at her.
—And don’t tell me you already knew —she adds with a faint smile—, because you and I both know that sometimes the heart waits for things in silence.
Miguel Ángel lets out a small laugh, with a bit of sadness. —Yeah, I guess so.
Beatriz looks at him with tenderness and places a hand on his shoulder.
—You’re doing well. But I don’t want you to keep using my name as protection. You have your own worth. You don’t need to invent a story for people to respect you.
Miguel Ángel lifts his gaze, and this time nods more firmly. —Promised.
—Thank you. —She starts to walk away, but before leaving, she turns and winks at him—. And don’t worry. If one day I sign something more serious, you’ll be among the first to know. But only after it’s sealed, so nobody swoops in.
He finally lets out a genuine laugh, and the air relaxes.
—Deal, General.
—I like that better. —And with that, Beatriz disappears through the door, leaving only the echo of her perfume and the promise that, despite everything, she still takes care of her people… even when she can’t love them the way they hope.
Chapter 70: Pulse of Frost
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
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Chapter Text
Scene: Kael’s office. Dusk. Window half-open, curtains dancing with the wind.
Kael reviews data on a tablet, while his medical instruments emit soft beeps. The atmosphere is scented with eucalyptus and lavender, as always when she visits. Beatriz enters without making a sound, as if she were part of the wind.
—Do you have five minutes, favorite doctor?
Kael looks up and smiles immediately, setting the tablet aside. He stands with that calm demeanor of his that always soothes her.
—There’s always time for you, Beatriz. Everything alright?
She sits on the examination table, like someone who already knows the ritual. She sways a little, not looking at him directly.
—Yes… and no. —She pauses—. Physically I’m fine. Sleeping, eating, functioning… everything in order. But I wanted to see you because, well, I don’t know when I’ll have time again.
Kael frowns slightly, noticing the tension beneath her voice. He approaches and leans against the desk, watching her attentively.
—Is something happening?
Beatriz shrugs, looking toward the window.
—Let’s say there are things in motion. Big things. Old ones. That are waking up.
Kael breathes deeply, as if recognizing that tone in her. The same one she had the first time she came, broken inside but still standing.
—You don’t have to tell me everything if you don’t want to. But you know you can count on me. Always.
She nods. Then she gives him a gentle but deep look.
—I didn’t come to confess secrets… not yet. But I did want to ask you something.
Kael says nothing. He just listens.
—Don’t stop watching. Even if I say nothing. Even if I look strong. Even if it seems like I have everything under control. If things get complicated… I need to know there’s someone who can see beyond my words.
The silence stretches for a few seconds. Then Kael straightens and takes her hand with firmness and softness at once.
—I’ve always been alert with you, Beatriz. And not out of obligation. Because I want to.
She swallows, and her gaze softens.
—Thank you, Kael.
He smiles a little, but doesn’t let go of her hand.
—And I also have something to tell you.
Beatriz raises an eyebrow, curious.
—I’ve been sleeping better. Not perfect, but… the nightmares aren’t as frequent as before. —He pauses—. And I know it’s not because of me.
Beatriz looks at him intently. He lowers his voice a little.
—It’s because of you. Your presence puts me in order, even if you don’t say anything. And I know you do it without meaning to.
She remains silent, unsure whether to thank him or apologize for not being able to respond to him beyond that space.
—I don’t know what’s coming, Beatriz —he continues—. But if there’s something threatening to open out there… I want you to know there are also things inside me that can open if it protects you.
Beatriz presses her lips together. The air grows heavier for a moment.
—That… that’s exactly what I don’t want. —She squeezes his hand a little tighter—. I don’t want you to break because of me. I don’t want to awaken anything in you that you already fought to close. That’s why… that’s why I came to see you. Because I trust you. And I know you also know how to contain what burns.
Kael nods slowly.
—Then let’s make a deal: you keep shining the way you know how, and I’ll make sure no one puts you out.
She smiles, her eyes a little damp but steady.
—Deal, Doctor Virgo.
Sometimes, when the wind blows icy and dark thoughts threaten to become destiny, that is when we most need to remember that even the cruelest ice can shine with its own light. That is why it was no coincidence that Jack Frost —the invisible guardian of joy and forgotten memories— remained by his side.
Beatriz knew she had left Kael, the doctor, Virgo sign, sharp mind and disciplined heart, but also vulnerable, in good hands. He, who had devoted his life to protecting and healing, now wore on his left wrist a discreet leather bracelet with an engraved snowflake: Jack’s last gift. It was not only a symbol, but a connection.
Because even if no one else could see him, Jack was still there.
He had taught him not to fear becoming a cursed ice queen, slave to dark forces. No. He reminded him, with that mischievous smile and voice that seemed to blend with the air, that the future is not written in fire, but in choice. That ice can also be refuge, shield, beauty. And above all, freedom.
Jack, always invisible to those who have stopped believing, became a constant presence for Kael. An unexpected guardian. And even more: his secret emotional compass.
As the days move toward the imminent opening of the Rift, and the world rearranges itself behind the scenes, Jack has begun to help Kael investigate that mad scientist —the one who still chases the shadows of an ancient forbidden research. Kael, of course, would not do it alone. Jack, with his playful yet profound nature, took it upon himself to leave him clues, to play with the data, to ease his soul on the nights when the nightmares still lurk… though no longer as often.
And when the day comes when the Incubators execute the memory erasure, when many forget, Jack will not.
He will persist.
Perhaps then his form will change, transforming into a small artificial intelligence that will appear like a spark of frost upon Kael’s screen, whispering advice, sustaining his composure, preventing him from sinking under the weight of what has been lost.
Because sometimes, heroes wear no cape or uniform.
Sometimes, they only leave a snowflake… and a promise.
[Interlude: Invisible Ice]
When the wind swirls with an icy whistle, something breaks within the soul… or perhaps something is rebuilt. Kael, the doctor of serene gestures and steady hands, had begun to notice that his nightmares were growing fewer. Not completely gone, but softer, as if the edge of his dark memories had been filed down by a presence he could not explain… nor see.
On his wrist, a simple leather bracelet with an engraved snowflake.
And though he would never say it out loud, he knew that symbol was not merely decorative. It was a bond. A promise. A reminder that he was not alone.
Jack Frost —yes, that Jack Frost— had stayed by his side.
Beatriz had made that decision some time ago, leaving him under the protection of the Guardian of Winter, not only for his powers, but for his free spirit and intimate understanding of pain and choice. It was he who taught Kael that even the cruelest ice can be shaped with tenderness. That his future, no matter how much some wish to dictate it, still belongs to him.
Jack, invisible to all except those who still believe, became that silent witness. He helped Kael meditate, regulate his breathing on the nights when memories overwhelmed him, to keep his mind cold without turning to ice. And above all, he showed him he was not destined to repeat the mistakes of those who played at being gods in the laboratories of the past.
Now, with the opening of the Rift drawing ever closer and the secrets of the old world seeping through like an echo in the wind, Jack does more than accompany him. He helps him investigate. To protect without hurting. To observe without overflowing.
And when the day of the memory erasure arrives —that day approaching like an inevitable storm— Jack will still be there.
Perhaps not as a mischievous spirit, but as a spark of frost in the interface, a minimal, almost imperceptible artificial intelligence that will bloom at the edge of Kael’s screen. A voiceless voice that will whisper among algorithms:
—“You are not alone. You can still choose.”
Because sometimes, guardians wear no cape. They raise no swords. They do not shout their names to the wind.
Sometimes… they only leave a snowflake.
Chapter 71: Transition – The Breather Before the Rift
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
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Chapter Text
Beatriz woke up earlier than usual that day.
Perhaps not out of nerves, but because of the invisible weight of the decisions that were approaching.
The clock did not lie, but her reflection in the mirror did:
—“Nothing’s happening,” it told her.
—“It’s just another week.”
She took a breath, sat in front of the terminal and wrote to her boss. The words were measured, like steps on a fragile floor:
—“Good morning.
I need to request three to five days off, ideally starting this Thursday.
These are family matters and important personal commitments that require my presence and attention.
I greatly appreciate your understanding. I will leave all deliveries scheduled and remain available in case of any emergency.”
Brief. Careful. Unquestionable.
She knew her boss was not insensitive, but neither was she naïve.
There was no need to say more.
What came next could not be put in an email.
The team had to be gathered. Discreetly. Without alerting the wrong entities.
And above all, she had to prepare for the ceremony.
Amara had not yet reached the age of majority.
That meant someone had to appear as her temporary guardian in the legal scope of the Council.
And that someone… was her.
It would not be a lavish event.
But it would be strategic.
A symbolic and political act:
it would mark that Amara was not alone, that she had someone to answer for her.
And at the same time, that Beatriz was assuming a new responsibility.
One that could not be sealed only with words, but with conviction.
So while the Rift pulsed like a sleeping monster,
the city prepared for two seemingly different events,
but inevitably intertwined.
A discreet ceremony…
and a war that no one should notice until it had already begun.
The Silent Ceremony
The secondary headquarters of the Sturm family was not open to the public.
Nor would it ever be.
Located at the oldest edge of the city, the black marble of its façade seemed to absorb the midday light. Inside, the stained glass filtered cold colors over the polished floor, giving the place the atmosphere of a secular cathedral, where no gods were worshiped, but oaths.
Beatriz wore midnight blue, with silver embroidered details barely perceptible, as if she carried the winter sky over her shoulders.
Amara wore white, her hair gathered in a circular braid that evoked the eternal symbol of return.
The ceremony was not meant to be remembered by the world, but by the lineage.
Emil was seated at the back, on one of the cushioned benches. Serious, restrained…
And yet, his eyes could not hide that slight tremor of genuine emotion.
He knew Beatriz did not love him as he once thought she might,
but he also knew that being there, as a witness,
was a place of honor he would not trade for anything.
The family notary, a slender figure with a calm voice and an unpronounceable accent,
read the statutes with a ceremonial rhythm.
—“Beatriz Solane Delmar is appointed as temporary guardian of Amara Sturm,
until she reaches 21 years of age or the Council considers that she possesses
full autonomy in extraordinary matters.”
Beatriz placed her right hand on the Legitimization Tablet, a special device that reacted to true bonds. The crystal glowed with a faint but firm light. That was all that was needed. There was no applause. Only the sound of subtle music, barely audible, like a thread of wind inside a grotto.
On the way out, Emil approached and offered her a small box.
—It’s a protection amulet —he said without looking at her directly—. I’m no mage,
but it was made by someone who believes in you.
Beatriz smiled with an almost imperceptible gesture.
—Thank you, Emil. From the heart.
Amara remained silent, more introspective than usual.
Already in the side garden, where the guests drank tea and distracted themselves with soft conversations, she made a sign to Beatriz to speak alone.
—About the detective… you know —Amara said—. He found something.
That Aki’s brother is looking for her. For real. It’s not a false lead.
Beatriz said nothing for a few seconds. She looked at the sky between the trimmed branches of the garden trees. Everything seemed calm. But it was nothing more than the echo of the chaos to come.
—We won’t tell her yet.
—Why? —Amara asked, though she already sensed the answer.
—Because if something goes wrong —Beatriz replied, with a serenity that hurt—, I don’t want either of them left with broken promises. Nor with a heart more shattered than the one they already carry. If we make it out of this, we’ll tell her. But not before.
Amara nodded. She didn’t like it, but she understood.
And then, without the need for words, both of them looked at the rift in the sky that no one else seemed to notice, as if destiny were contained in a fragile crystal that had not yet shattered.
The Serpent and the Promise
The apartment was silent, except for Aki and Sora’s laughter in the living room, watching a movie. Beatriz closed her bedroom door carefully, leaning her back against the wood for a moment. She breathed deeply. Her system floated in front of her in the form of a holographic panel.
—There’s no turning back now —she murmured, selecting the Rewards Bag.
With a flash of green light, a hexagonal box in red and black appeared. Beatriz took it in her hands, feeling its almost symbolic weight. Upon opening it, an emerald glow filled the room, and from it emerged Sass, the Kwami of the Second Chance.
—So it’s you —said Sass, his voice deep but curiously calm—. We are not in Paris, nor in the universe I know.
Beatriz nodded and introduced herself formally.
—I am Beatriz Solane Delmar. This is not your world, I know, but I need your power. Here there are creatures that play with people’s destiny… and this time I intend to bend destiny first.
Sass floated near her face, his eyes shining like two small emeralds.
—You know what it implies. —His tone became serious—. Every time you use my power, you will be the only one who remembers the pain of each mistake. The others will live in ignorance of those timelines. Can you carry that?
Beatriz held his gaze without wavering.
—I’m Pisces, born in the year of the Serpent. I am not a child playing at being a heroine. I have 35 years of experience in my soul and I know the weight of what I’m doing. I’d rather carry all the memories of horror if that means no one else has to.
Sass watched her for an instant that seemed eternal. Then he nodded slowly.
—Very well. But I warn you of something else, Beatriz: this universe is not mine. I don’t know the exact consequences of rewinding again and again. You could alter things beyond your control.
A determined smile curved Beatriz’s lips.
—It’s a risk I accept. If I’m going to enter the heart of the Incubators, I want every possible advantage. If I have to lose myself a hundred times, I will do it until the right timeline emerges.
Sass sighed, but a spark of respect shone in his eyes.
—Then prepare yourself. Place the first marker in the moment just before the incursion. And remember… —he floated around her arm, positioning himself like a glowing bracelet— every rewind is a price you will pay alone.
Beatriz closed her eyes, took a deep breath and let Sass’s energy synchronize with her pulse. When she opened them, determination burned within.
—I won’t be alone —she whispered—. Not while I have the strength to try again.
Just after Sass synchronized with her and the bracelet remained on her wrist, Beatriz heard Aki and Sora’s laughter from the living room. The scene made a cut: she opened her bedroom door and her silhouette in the frame looked firmer, more determined.
—Girls —she said with a small smile—, I need you to help me do something big.
Aki and Sora looked at each other, catching the seriousness in her voice.
—Something big like what? —Sora asked, already standing up.
—Like saving this world —Beatriz replied, without beating around the bush.
Cut to black → transitions to the scene at Lucien’s Safe House.
The Cursed Dragon and the Love He Doesn’t Feel He Deserves
A few days earlier. He had just left Beatriz asleep. He is alone, probably in front of the mirror or under the rain, with the fire burning in his chest. His emotions are overflowing. His voice breaks between pain, rage, and repressed love.
[Lucien reflection before the final battle]
— I don’t understand… I don’t understand how you can look at me with such tenderness. How you can hold me… with these hands stained with blood. What kind of heart do you have… to love me like that, knowing what I was?
You… who carry her face. Her voice.
You… who share the same soul that condemned me.
…but you are not her.
You don’t hurt me. You don’t manipulate me.
You don’t fear me.
And that… hurts more than the sword.
Because you make me want to live.
Do you understand?
I… who have begged for centuries to be killed. For someone to end this broken existence.
—I loved you! —he shouts with his eyes closed, fists clenched, the seal burning in his chest—. Why… if I loved you… did you curse me with not being able to die?!
Why did you do that, witch?
What was it that you saw in me to condemn me in that way?
Did you know it would end like this?
Did you know that one day, another you… more human, more free… would look at me again as if I were something good? —pause. he breathes deeply. looks at his hands with contempt.
I don’t deserve it.
Not after what I did.
Not after what I was.
And yet…
here I am.
By your side. Pretending I’m whole… when every night that curse roars inside me.
Because I cannot die…
and you…
you make me want to live… Beatriz.
Previous Scene – The Dragon’s Premonition
The night wind of Rametal smelled of electricity and ozone, as if the city were breathing before a storm.
From the window of his office, Aslan Solane contemplated the horizon filled with neon lights. His reflection blended with that of the city: an aged warrior, dressed in shadows and memories.
In the silence, something inside him tightened.
A sharp pang, as if the soul remembered before the mind.
The past returned with the force of a heartbeat —a call, a child’s voice, a sick body rising only by faith, and a human monster escaping unpunished—.
Aslan clenched his fists, his golden eyes flickering with a draconic glow.
The roar of the Lion of Aslan echoed inside him, deep and distant.
—“Guilt is a chain, but the fire of the heart can melt it.”
He closed his eyes, breathing deeply.
—Not again —he murmured in a grave voice—. I will not let the shadows touch my daughter. Not while I am still breathing.
The air seemed to tremble.
For a second, he thought he saw in the reflection of the glass something —a shadow with human shape, elongated, with the eyes of the one who once stole his peace—. He blinked, and the image vanished.
Then, a child’s voice pulled him out of the trance.
—Dad —Nox called, peeking through the half-open door—. Everyone is already gathered at the safe house. Beatriz said we should wait for you there.
Aslan turned slowly, the hardness of his face softening before the boy.
—Well done, son —he said, placing a hand on his shoulder—. Today something big begins.
—Is something wrong? —Nox asked, tilting his head.
Aslan smiled, though his eyes were still fixed on the horizon.
—Just a premonition… The kind of premonition an old dragon has when the sky becomes too still before the storm.
Nox looked at him without fully understanding, but nodded.
—Then let’s not let the storm start without us.
The man let out a light laugh, tired but genuine.
He took his Mandalorian helmet, placed it under his arm, and walked toward the door.
Thunder roared in the distance, as if the world itself answered his steps.
Chapter 72: The Forging of the Threshold Wing
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over +935 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
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Chapter Text
Lucien’s safe house was silent, barely illuminated by discreet lamps. In the center, Beatriz unfolded the magic ribbon she had woven with her own hands.
—Before entering the rift, I want all of us to know each other. —Her voice was firm, yet warm—. Here there are no secrets: we are one single team, so here you will see who brought whom and how we are connected.
The ribbon extended like a golden bond, slowly linking each of them. One by one, they began to speak.
🔹 Beatriz Core
Beatriz Solane Delmar (22 years old)
Sign: Pisces, year of the Snake
Personality: Empathic, strategic, resilient
History: Traveler between worlds, with a system that grants her titles, abilities, and items. She possesses the Miraculous of the Ladybug and the Miraculous of the Snake.
Natural ability: Visualization and Berserker Fury.
Magical weapons: Her enchanted ribbon, which can anchor the entire team when time is stopped, the weapons of the Unicorn Hunters that she modified, and the Miraculous of the Snake with which she can rewind time up to 5 minutes.
Role: Leader and anchor of the squad.
Visual design: Black uniform with golden edges, the ribbon manifests as an ethereal veil.
🔹 Foundational Trio
Aki Tsukino (15 years old)
Sign: Pisces, year of the Rabbit
Wish: Perfect health for her brother Kaito.
Power: Purification and healing with a floral staff.
Trauma: Her brother, healthy but distant, abandoned her.
Role: Healer and barrier.
Bond: Best friend of Sora.
Design: Blonde with pigtails, white uniform with flowers in blue tones.
Sora Alcaraz (16 years old)
Sign: Sagittarius, year of the Dog
Wish: To give power to her hunter father.
Power: Magical halberd that manipulates will.
Trauma: Her father changed and she lost her sister.
Role: Offensive and field control.
Bond: Loyalty to Beatriz and to Aki.
Design: Short-haired redhead, red uniform with inverted crescent symbol.
Amara Sturm (17 years old)
Sign: Capricorn, year of the Horse
Wish: To be able to protect her father so he would see her.
Power: Stop time and unlimited arsenal.
Trauma: Her father’s emotional manipulation.
Role: Tactical infiltrator, second in command.
Design: Jet-black hair, black uniform with silver engravings.
🔹 Amara’s Guard
Yume Tanaka (14 years old)
Sign: Virgo, year of the Rat
Wish: To be invisible to escape from the Wanderers.
Power: Illusions and collective camouflage.
Trauma: The fear of truly disappearing.
Role: Infiltration and espionage.
Bond: Close to Aki, protector of Mika.
Design: Straight black hair, gray uniform with lilac sparks.
Renée Cazeneuve (16 years old)
Sign: Taurus, year of the Rooster
Wish: Absolute precision in combat.
Power: Floating blades mentally controlled.
Trauma: Her obsession with control isolates her.
Role: Sniper and coverage.
Design: Ash-blonde hair, dark blue uniform.
Valentina Cruz (15 years old)
Sign: Libra, year of the Dog
Wish: To protect her friends no matter the cost.
Power: Shields that strengthen allies and weaken enemies.
Trauma: Guilt for not saving her first squad.
Role: Tank and strategic defense.
Design: Dark-skinned, emerald green uniform with runes.
Lilith Muñoz (16 years old)
Sign: Scorpio, year of the Tiger
Wish: To see what others hide.
Power: Illusory mirrors that reveal truths.
Trauma: Seeing more than she could bear.
Role: Counterintelligence and detection.
Design: Short black hair, purple uniform with broken mirrors as ornaments.
🔹 The Technical Pair
Mikaela “Mika” Von Stein (13 years old)
Sign: Gemini, year of the Dragon
Wish: To never be alone.
Power: Summoned toy-creatures.
Trauma: Her family abandoned her after she became “strange.”
Role: Communications and technical support.
Design: Light brown hair, yellow uniform with playful details.
Irina-Lys Kovalev-Németh (15 years old)
Sign: Aquarius, year of the Goat
Wish: To save her sister from the coma.
Power: Technological manipulation and dimensional hacking.
Trauma: Her sister was trapped in digital limbo.
Role: Tactical analyst.
Design: Silver hair, electric blue uniform with the Nexus Orb floating.
🔹 The Bonds of Pain
Irene Vasco (16 years old)
Sign: Leo, year of the Rabbit
Wish: That her father would forget the pain of loss.
Power: Emotional blue fire.
Trauma: Her father also forgot who she was.
Role: Area offensive.
Design: Dark red hair, black-blue uniform with flames.
Nami Torres (15 years old)
Sign: Cancer, year of the Boar
Wish: To save everyone during a magical plague.
Power: Blood control (healing/damage).
Trauma: Every cure costs a life.
Role: Emergency healer.
Design: Long brown hair, crimson uniform with a blood moon.
Aline Kojiro (17 years old)
Sign: Aries, year of the Snake
Wish: That her voice would reach the whole world.
Power: Magical sonic waves.
Trauma: She can never stay silent.
Role: Sonic support and enemy dispersion.
Design: Lilac hair, white uniform with floating musical waves.
Beatriz’s ribbon lit up softly as it touched all of them. The bond was sealed.
—Now we are Threshold Wing. —Beatriz said—. Not because of the destiny they gave us, but because of the one we are going to forge.
The silence was broken by Mika, who raised her hand as if in school:
—And if we survive?… What comes next?
Beatriz smiled with melancholy.
—Then… we will build a world where none of you will ever have to make a wish like the ones you made.
Male Characters Who Participate:
🦁 Aslan Solane — The Lion of the Regent Sun
Age: 44 years (72 real)
Sign: Leo | Year of the Dragon
Origin: Earth (reincarnated in Mandalorian body)
Aslan Solane was an ordinary man before being marked by miracle and pain. Pastor and spiritual guide in his native world, he dedicated his life to faith and service, until an illness left him at the edge of death. In that border between life and beyond, a divine force granted him a “miraculous blessing”: the power of the worlds he had loved —the Lion of Aslan, the Regent Sun Dragon, knowledge of the dragons of Berk and the Warrior of the Stars.
He was reborn in a Mandalorian body, half flesh, half legend, with the mission of finding his daughter Beatriz, lost between realities.
For four years he wandered through different universes —two of them in Star Wars— rescuing a child from the race of the black cats, whom he named Nox Félix Solane Delmar. Aslan gave him not only a home, but also a code: loyalty, faith, and courage.
Today, Aslan is the moral and spiritual anchor of the team. Although he carries the guilt of not having been able to protect Beatriz in her childhood, his paternal love is the flame that drives him. His Archdragon Regent Sun form only emerges when his family is in danger.
🐾 Nox Félix Solane Delmar — The Dragon’s Son
Age: 12 years
Sign: Aries | Year of the Monkey
Origin: Star Wars (race: “black cat”)
Nox is the reflection of hope in the midst of chaos. Rescued by Aslan after witnessing the death of his mother and grandmother at the hands of the Empire, he became his adopted son and the heart of the Solane clan.
With black hair and light brown eyes, he is a child of free spirit, playful but disciplined, educated under a Mandalorian code adapted to human love. His natural power —the control of nature— links him to the Force, although he rejected the Jedi path to follow his father.
In combat, he fights with two daggers and a feline agility that recalls the hero Zidane from Final Fantasy IX. When he is not camouflaged, he uses his tail as a third arm in battle.
His greatest motivation is loyalty: to protect his family, especially Aslan and Beatriz, whom he considers his true home.
Chapter 73: The Forging of the Threshold Wing – Part 2
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.Hello everyone! 🌟
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Chapter Text
Lucien’s safe house was lit with warm lights, just enough to drive away the silence weighing on every corner. At the center of the room, Beatriz had unfurled her magic ribbon: a golden, radiant strand woven from her own energy. The ribbon was not decoration, but an oath. Connecting everyone meant binding their destinies together.
—Now we’ll continue with each of our introductions.
🔹 Beatriz Solane Delmar
- Age: 22 (35 in truth, reincarnated soul)
- Sign: Pisces, Year of the Snake
- Wish / Gift: A system of titles, skills, and items.
- Powers: Visualization, Berserker Fury, Snake Miraculous, and Ladybug Miraculous.
- Weapon: Magic ribbon capable of anchoring the team when time is stopped.
- Trauma: Carrying two lives: her own and the original protagonist’s.
- Role: Leader and strategist of the Threshold Wing.
- Design: Black uniform with golden edges, the ribbon manifesting like an ethereal veil.
—“We are not a group of broken wishes… we are the Threshold Wing, and we will write our own destiny.”
🔹 Foundational Trio
Aki Tsukino (15 years old)
- Sign: Pisces, Year of the Rabbit
- Wish: Perfect health for her brother Kaito.
- Power: Purification and healing.
- Weapon: Floral staff.
- Trauma: Her brother abandoned her after being “cured.”
- Role: Healer and frontline shield.
- Design: Blonde twin-tails, white uniform with blue flowers.
Sora Alcaraz (16 years old)
- Sign: Sagittarius, Year of the Dog
- Wish: To give more strength to her hunter father.
- Power: Will manipulation through her halberd.
- Trauma: Lost both her sister and her father.
- Role: Offense and field control.
- Design: Short red hair, red uniform with an inverted crescent moon.
Amara Sturm (17 years old)
- Sign: Capricorn, Year of the Horse
- Wish: To protect her father so he would finally see her.
- Power: Time stop and unlimited arsenal.
- Weapon: Arcane hexagonal shield.
- Trauma: The manipulative control of Maximiliano Sturm.
- Role: Second-in-command, tactical infiltrator.
- Design: Jet-black hair, black uniform with silver details.
🔹 Amara’s Guard
Yume Tanaka (14 years old)
- Sign: Virgo, Year of the Rat
- Wish: To be invisible.
- Power: Illusions and collective camouflage.
- Trauma: Fear of truly fading away.
- Role: Stealth infiltration.
- Design: Straight black hair, gray uniform with lilac glimmers.
Renée Cazeneuve (16 years old)
- Sign: Taurus, Year of the Rooster
- Wish: Absolute precision.
- Power: Floating magic blades.
- Trauma: Her perfectionism isolates her.
- Role: Sniper and offensive containment.
- Design: Ash-blonde hair, dark blue uniform.
Valentina Cruz (15 years old)
- Sign: Libra, Year of the Dog
- Wish: To protect her friends.
- Power: Shields that strengthen allies and weaken enemies.
- Trauma: Guilt for losing her original squad.
- Role: Defensive tank.
- Design: Brown skin, emerald green uniform with runes.
Lilith Muñoz (16 years old)
- Sign: Scorpio, Year of the Tiger
- Wish: To see what others hide.
- Power: Illusory mirrors that reveal truths.
- Trauma: The burden of unbearable truths.
- Role: Counter-espionage and detection.
- Design: Short black hair, purple uniform with broken mirrors.
🔹 Technical Pair
Mikaela “Mika” Von Stein (13 years old)
- Sign: Gemini, Year of the Dragon
- Wish: To never be alone.
- Power: Summoned toy-creatures.
- Trauma: Abandoned by her family.
- Role: Communications and tactical support.
- Design: Light brown hair, yellow uniform with playful accessories.
Irina-Lys Kovalev-Németh (15 years old)
- Sign: Aquarius, Year of the Goat
- Wish: To save her sister from a coma.
- Power: Technological manipulation and dimensional hacking.
- Weapon: Nexus Orb (techno-magical disc).
- Trauma: Her sister trapped in a digital limbo.
- Role: Tactical analyst.
- Design: Silver hair, electric blue uniform.
🔹 Bonds of Pain
Irene Vasco (16 years old)
- Sign: Leo, Year of the Rabbit
- Wish: For her father to forget the pain of loss.
- Power: Emotional blue fire.
- Trauma: Her father forgot who she was as well.
- Role: Area offense.
- Design: Dark red hair, black-blue uniform with flames.
Nami Torres (15 years old)
- Sign: Cancer, Year of the Boar
- Wish: To save everyone during a magical plague.
- Power: Blood control.
- Trauma: Every cure costs another life.
- Role: Emergency healer.
- Design: Long brown hair, crimson uniform with a bleeding moon.
Aline Kojiro (17 years old)
- Sign: Aries, Year of the Snake
- Wish: For her voice to reach the whole world.
- Power: Magical sonic waves.
- Trauma: She can never stay silent.
- Role: Sonic support.
- Design: Lilac hair, white uniform with musical notes.
🌙 Closing – Birth of the Threshold Wing
Beatriz took a deep breath.
The golden ribbon binding their wrists and hearts pulsed like a single heartbeat. Within that warm glow lived the determination of fourteen souls willing to defy the impossible.
—Now we are Threshold Wing —she declared solemnly—. Not because of the wishes that broke us, but because of the future we are going to forge.
A murmur of agreement spread across the room. Even Mika, the youngest, stopped trembling.
The raid was ready.
🎯 Mission Objective
Main goal: rescue the brown-pawed Incubator, a being that is not an enemy but a dimensional anchor. The greater Incubators use it to keep their connection to the Rift open.
Purpose: not to destroy, but to restore balance and free what was corrupted.
💎 Operational Plan
Dowsing Crystal: will serve as an emotional compass.
It resonates with the group’s bonds.
If anyone yields to fear, betrayal, or doubt, the crystal will lose direction and the group’s unity will break.
Temporal Marker:
Beatriz will activate the Snake Miraculous, establishing a five-minute quantum save point.
Then, Amara will stop time to allow them to advance while preserving the rewind.
When the freeze is released, the Incubators will detect the intrusion; that will be the point of no return.
Contact with the irregular Incubator:
Beatriz will attempt to communicate with it to disconnect it from the greater system and free it.
If it cooperates, it may guide them toward the exit before time resets.
🪶 Cover and Official Excuse
Beatriz requested support from Amara’s father, Maximiliano Sturm, under the pretext of a tactical exercise in the Forbidden Forest, an area infested with minor Wander-type rifts.
She asked for “adult supervision” and security escorts, which made Maximiliano accept without suspicion… at least on the surface.
Amara senses her father is pretending disinterest, but Beatriz perceives something else: that man plans to watch from the shadows, waiting for the moment to enter the Rift himself.
⚔️ Tactical Formation
Vanguard: members with heavy offense or defense.
Midline: mid-range attackers and terrain control.
Rear guard: healers and tactical support.
All will wear Hunter Academy trainee disguises to avoid suspicion about the true purpose of the operation.
— The Threshold Wing Strategy
The sound of rain striking the windows filled the room. The lights were dim, and the golden ribbon connecting all members of the Threshold Wing pulsed softly over the round table. Beatriz stood, the Snake Miraculous still hidden beneath her sleeve. Her gaze moved across every face: Aki, Sora, Amara, Renée, Valentina, Nami, Irina… all waiting for her words.
—Listen to me carefully —she said firmly, in the tone of someone used to making difficult decisions—. What we’re about to do isn’t a simple drill or hunt. It’s a planned incursion to recover a trapped soul and break the Incubators’ control over this world.
On the table, the dowsing crystal glowed faintly as she placed it down. Beatriz rotated it gently.
—This crystal is our compass. It reacts to the bonds that unite us. If one of us hesitates, feels fear, or breaks synchronization… we’ll get lost inside the dimensional labyrinth. So keep your minds clear and your hearts aligned.
Aki looked up, worried.
—What do we do once we’re inside?
—First, we locate the brown-pawed Incubator —Beatriz projected a three-dimensional map from her hunter watch system—. It isn’t an enemy, it’s a prisoner: an anchor keeping the Rift open. Freeing it will destabilize the greater Incubators’ connection to this dimension.
She paused.
—We’re not going to destroy. We’re going to restore.
Amara crossed her arms, attentive.
—And time control?
—I’ll handle it —Beatriz replied—. I’ll activate the Snake Miraculous to set a five-minute temporal safety point. After that, you stop time, Amara. We’ll keep the rewind active only while your field lasts. The moment you release it, the Incubators will feel us. That’s when the countdown begins.
The girls nodded, aware of the risk.
Beatriz inhaled deeply before adding the final part of the plan:
—I already sent a message to Amara’s father, Prosecutor Sturm. I asked for support for a “tactical training exercise for Hunter Academy candidates” in the Forbidden Forest. That gives us official cover and adult escorts guarding the perimeter. No one will suspect.
—And if he notices something? —Valentina asked.
—He will —Beatriz admitted calmly—, but he’ll pretend not to. He knows Amara wouldn’t take risks without reason.
Silence lingered until Sora lifted her halberd.
—Then there’s no turning back.
Beatriz nodded. The golden ribbon shone brightly, as if the air itself acknowledged the pact.
—Exactly. From this moment on, we are Threshold Wing. Not because of the wishes that broke us… but because of the future we’re going to forge.
And when the echo of her words faded, the dowsing crystal began to beat in unison with their hearts.
Chapter 74: Echoes of the Threshold
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over +975 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
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Notes:
(See the end of the chapter for notes.)
Chapter Text
The rain had stopped, but the air was still heavy.
Dawn over Rametal filtered through the workshop windows of Aslan Solane, tinting the metal surfaces with a mournful gold. Pieces of armor rested in silence, scattered across the workbench. Only the faint hum of the power system broke the stillness.
Aslan watched his reflection in the visor of his Mandalorian helmet.
A dragon. A lion. A man. Three faces of the same fractured soul.
The roar of the past still vibrated in his chest.
Sometimes he thought he could hear his daughter’s voice when she was little, when he could still lift her in his arms without the weight of the world standing between them.
Other times, he heard her crying, that muffled scream that had marked him forever.
—I didn’t make it in time… —he whispered.
His fingers pressed against the table. The memory was an old wound, but it still bled.
That day, his body had been broken, and his faith wavering. He could barely move when the phone rang.
Beatriz’s voice — then just a child — trembled on the other end.
And when he heard her, something inside him rose. He got out of bed, dragging a body that shouldn’t have moved, driven by a strength only a desperate father can summon.
He found her. He took her out of that cursed house. But he couldn’t punish him.
The monster had power, money, influence.
And he… only had his daughter’s love and the helplessness of a man of faith who couldn’t break human laws.
Now, so many years later, that memory still stalked him like a silent shadow.
He closed his eyes. His breath faltered, and for an instant, a draconic heat ran down his spine. His human body could barely contain it.
The Lion of Aslan roared within his soul, warning him that something was coming.
—Beatriz… —he murmured, lifting his face toward the ceiling, where the lights flickered.
A vibration passed through the air, almost imperceptible, like an echo of energy that didn’t belong to this plane.
Aslan extended his hand over the desk and activated the holographic map. The signal came from the Forbidden Forest.
His instinct roared.
“Something is moving… something that doesn’t belong to the natural order.”
The Regent Sun Dragon spread its wings deep within his spirit, sensing the earth itself was about to tremble.
He walked to the window. Below, Nox Félix Solane trained with his daggers under the lingering rain, spinning with feline precision.
The boy looked up and smiled, waving at his adoptive father.
Aslan returned the gesture, but his gaze was different: the gaze of a man who senses the storm.
—Stay close, son. I don’t want to lose you too.
⚖️ Elsewhere in Luminaria City…
Maximiliano Sturm’s office smelled of leather, gunpowder, and ambition.
The blinds barely let light through, creating a sepulchral atmosphere where only the hum of monitors interrupted the silence.
The man watched his building’s security feed on the screens.
Images of the Forbidden Forest, containment suits, the young girls who would soon become his experiment.
—“Tactical training exercise, huh?” —he muttered with a dry smile—. Very clever, Miss Solane.
His voice dripped with irony.
He picked up a glass of whiskey, slowly swirling it.
Every movement was measured, calculated, like a chess player who already knew his opponent’s move.
Behind his desk, the banner of Sturm Industries dominated the wall. Its logo — a fractal eye inside a golden gear — seemed to watch everything.
Maximiliano was a man used to wielding power with invisible gloves.
Prosecutor. Businessman. Visionary.
And deep down, a monster disguised as a benefactor.
He opened a file on his monitor:
Project Wander//003-A — Controlled exposure to distortive energy.
Technical reports unfolded: psychic radiation levels, emotional field synchronization tests, resistance to space-time fractures.
The final line read:
“The energies inside the rifts affect human perception. Adults lose their sanity. But the girls… the girls can adapt.”
He smiled.
—And if they can adapt… they can be controlled.
The elevator chimed. An assistant entered with a tablet and a tense expression.
—Mr. Sturm, the suits are ready. Surveillance units too.
Maximiliano nodded.
—Excellent. Send the first batch to the Forbidden Forest. Say it’s a field test under my direct authorization.
—And the girls?
—Just observe. Don’t interfere, unless I order it.
The assistant hesitated.
—Do you really trust that Beatriz Solane?
Maximiliano laughed softly.
—No. But I’m interested in seeing what a woman who defies protocol-field rules is capable of.
He stood. His figure commanded respect, like a general who doesn’t need to shout to be feared.
In the window’s reflection, his gaze seemed to glow amber, almost inhuman.
“Power always seeks a new vessel. If these girls can walk into the abyss and return sane… then they’re not merely human. They’re the next frontier.”
He closed the file and activated the security system.
On the screen, the Forbidden Forest spread out in full view, covered by a pulsing mist.
At the center, a luminous point blinked: the latent Rift portal.
—The Threshold… —he whispered, caressing the rim of his glass—. If power is born from chaos, then chaos is my inheritance.
His tone resembled Gabriel Agreste’s: restrained, venomous, melancholically cruel.
He glanced at a portrait of his wife, lost during the Cronofit catastrophe, and let out an icy smile.
—Don’t worry, my dear. Soon, our daughter will be the perfect weapon.
Back with Aslan
The magical vibration intensified.
Aslan felt a pull in his chest, as if something in his bond with Beatriz had resonated.
The Dowsing Crystal had begun emitting pulses that reached even his workshop.
He turned on the communicator.
—Lucien, can you hear me?
The dragon’s voice replied, deep, with a distant echo.
—Yes. The girls are gathered at the Safe House. They’re finishing preparations.
Aslan frowned.
—Did they already activate the crystal?
—A few minutes ago.
The silence that followed was heavy.
Aslan leaned on the table, closing his eyes.
—Something feels wrong… There’s a shadow moving between the lines.
Lucien understood the tone.
—What kind of shadow?
—A human one. With too many hands pulling too many strings.
The Mandalorian activated the central projector. A three-dimensional image of the Forbidden Forest appeared: the rift, the sensors… and a red mark that didn’t belong.
—He’ll be there too… —Aslan whispered, recognizing the energy signature of Maximiliano Sturm.
Contained rage burned behind his once-brown eyes, now turning gold.
—If that man touches even one of them, I swear by the Regent Sun there won’t be stone left upon stone.
Nox entered just then, his black hair still wet.
—Something wrong, Dad?
Aslan masked his concern with a paternal smile.
—Nothing, son. Just a hunch.
But when the boy left, his expression changed.
The dragon roared in silence.
He knew what omens meant: a magical storm loomed over them, and the next time he saw his daughter… she might not be the same.
Meanwhile, inside the Sturm Industries facilities
The main hangar vibrated with activity.
Rows of technicians adjusted graphite-colored containment suits, with blue visors and the corporation’s emblems.
The project, officially, was presented as a psychic resistance prototype against Wander energy.
—Bring me the compatibility reports —ordered Maximiliano, walking down the corridor—. I want to know what percentage of exposure an adult subject can withstand without losing coherence.
A nervous technician replied:
—So far, subjects lose their sanity after three minutes inside the rift. But emotionally trained teenage girls… they can endure almost fifteen.
—Fifteen minutes? —Maximiliano repeated, smiling with fascination—. Fifteen minutes to stare into the abyss and return sane. Isn’t it beautiful?
He stopped in front of a containment capsule, where a full suit waited behind the glass.
He placed his hand against the surface.
—The world doesn’t need redeemers… it needs tools.
He let out a low, almost inaudible laugh.
—And I’m forging them.
He turned his head toward his assistant.
—Make sure my men are ready to enter the rift the moment they cross. I want to observe the experiment from the inside.
—You… will enter too, sir?
—Of course. —His amber eyes gleamed like steel—. How could I resist witnessing the birth of a new era?
That night, two men watched the same sky from opposite ends of the city.
Aslan, bearing the weight of guilt and the protective instinct of a father.
Maximiliano, with the cold ambition of someone who has forgotten the meaning of love.
One prayed in silence, asking that his daughter return alive.
The other raised a toast, imagining how he would use her to conquer the unconquerable.
And somewhere in between, the Forbidden Forest throbbed, as if an ancient heart were awakening.
The air distorted, sensors began to fail, and a deep sound — like the cracking of reality itself — echoed beneath the earth.
The Threshold Rift was opening.
Notes:
📌 **Author’s Note**
We’ve reached an important turning point in the story.
After this chapter, I’ll be taking a short break for two weeks — specifically the weeks of **March 30** and **April 6**.
Regular updates will resume on **April 15–16** (Wednesday night / Thursday release schedule).This pause has a purpose.
First, I want to make sure this chapter — especially its warning — is fully read and understood.
Second, I’ll be focusing on my upcoming teaching certification exam, so I can return with full clarity and energy for what comes next.📖 The **English version will continue updating as usual**, since it follows behind as a translation of the original work. This will also help reduce the gap between both versions to around **25 chapters**.
Take this time to catch up if needed.
Because what comes next…
won’t be light.
It won’t be comfortable.
And it won’t play by the same rules.
Prepare yourselves.
**Caleb is coming.**
Chapter 75: The Order of the Fallen
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
The story touches on sensitive topics such as past traumas and their impact on character growth, though this is not the main focus. Your well-being is the most important thing.
Hello everyone! 🌟
Amazing news! We have reached over +990 reads in Spanish as well. 💖 I’m beyond grateful for all the love and support you’ve shown.
📚 If you prefer to read this story in Latin American Spanish, where there are more advanced chapters already available, you can check it out here:
👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/chapters/168237325
🎉 An alternate version is now available—with more drama, romantic tension, and key choices 🐍💖🐉, Remember to show your support to help reach the next translation goal:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/71705591
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Chapter Text
🔒 STURM INDUSTRIES — CONFIDENTIAL FILE
Access level: EXECUTIVE DIRECTOR
Classification: Top Secret / Internal / Do not disclose to the Unicorn Hunter Association
File No. 47-Ω
Subject: Maximiliano Sturm
Position: CEO of Sturm Industries / Attorney General of the Central District of Luminaria City
Date of birth: January 12 (Capricorn)
Age: 42 years
Iris color: Amber
Hair: White
Complexion: Tan
Height: 1.88 m
Marital status: Widower (public record), unofficial partner: Unknown
Executive summary:
Maximiliano Sturm combines the political talent of a prosecutor with the relentless vision of an entrepreneur. Considered one of the “guardians of civil order” in Rametal, his influence extends through the Defense Council, the Department of Justice, and the magical innovation sector.
His personal motto: “Controlling chaos is the purest way to create peace.”
Psychological analysis (Internal Evaluation 7B–INH):
- High stress tolerance.
- Absence of genuine emotional empathy.
- Functional narcissism, utility-oriented.
- Obsession with structural perfection.
- Ethical risk level: critical (Category 5 of 5).
Active projects:
- Project Wander 003-A: Trials of exposure to dimensional distortive energy.
Objective: create suits that allow non-magical individuals to resist madness induced by Wander rifts. - Project PSY-KAIROS: Integration of psychic technology to replicate “Evol powers” in adult subjects.
Dimensional contamination risk: 97% undeclared.
Covert associations:
- Unauthorized contact with entities classified as “Incubators” (uncertain record).
- Manipulation of Ethics Council records.
- Use of his daughter Amara Sturm as an operational asset in experimental psychic fields.
Ethics Committee observations:
“Mr. Sturm demonstrates an exceptional capacity to turn personal tragedies into political tools. However, his fixation on the concept of ‘order’ borders on scientific fanaticism. His recent interest in dimensional rifts and Wander experiments suggests a possible breach of the principle of non-direct magical intervention.”
Internal conclusion:
Dangerous but indispensable subject. His fall would represent a collapse of Luminaria City’s economic order. Continuous surveillance recommended.
Signed: Dr. Alaric Veyron, Chief Ethical Auditor – Sturm Industries
TRANSITION — THE DAWN OF THE INCURSION
The sun had not yet crossed the horizon when the dawn air began to vibrate.
An expectant silence covered the improvised camp at the foot of the Forbidden Forest, where armored Sturm Industries convoys waited like sleeping beasts.
The ground, damp and covered with metallic leaves from the artificial mist, reflected bluish flashes from the energy fields surrounding the area.
Beatriz Solane Delmar stood at the center of the clearing, her explorer’s cape folded over her shoulders. The cold air brushed her skin as she checked her companions’ systems: the purified Soul Gems shone like small moons on each chest.
Aki, standing before the group, held her floral staff; a faint fragrance — lilies mixed with ozone — perfumed the air.
—Before we go in, pray —Aki said, her voice trembling between faith and fear—. Not for miracles… but so our hearts remain our own.
The girls closed their eyes. Their gems’ light pulsed in unison, releasing a faint vibration that dispersed the impurities in the air.
Beatriz watched them with silent pride. Even though they were young, each carried a reason to fight; that sincerity was their best shield against the psychic corruption waiting beyond the rift.
Sora, faithful to her comic relief role, broke the silence:
—Can I call first dibs on cracking skulls? I don’t want my halberd getting rusty.
Yume let out a restrained laugh.
—With that ego, rust would be afraid of you.
Lucía snapped her fingers and adjusted the gravitational field beneath her feet.
—Come on, if we keep joking, the enemy’s going to hear us from another dimension.
Beatriz smiled; keeping humor alive was a form of resistance. Yet her gaze drifted toward Amara Sturm, who stood apart, shield folded, staring at the horizon where the forest seemed to breathe.
—My father will be watching —Amara whispered, almost to herself—. I can’t fail… not again.
Beatriz stepped closer and placed a hand on her shoulder.
—You’re not alone, Amara. This time, we fight together.
The roar of military engines cut through the air.
Three armored convoys began advancing along the abandoned road leading to the edge of the Forbidden Forest.
The vehicles bore the golden Sturm Industries emblem, while the members of Threshold Wing wore black-and-blue training uniforms with false insignias: Elite Hunters Academy, Unicorn Division.
A perfect cover.
Inside the main convoy, Beatriz reviewed the protocols on a holographic tablet. Beside her, Aki synchronized the Dowsing Crystal, floating above her palm and emitting a faint pulse. Each beat matched the group’s emotional frequency.
—All Soul Gems purified —Aki confirmed—. If we maintain emotional sync, the crystal will guide us to the core.
—Good —Beatriz nodded—. Let’s remember the phases.
🜂 Phase One: “Lion’s Heart”
Beatriz stood and extended her staff.
—Listen up, girls. Before entering, we reinforce our will. —Her voice carried maternal authority—. Reinforcement Spell: Lion’s Heart.
The solar symbol of the Solar Regent Dragon glowed briefly on her chest. A golden aura expanded, covering everyone.
Fear — that primal vibration the Incubators used to fracture minds — dissolved like mist before the spell’s warmth.
—This bond will keep us steady. Courage isn’t the absence of fear, but moving forward with it in your heart.
They felt the pulse in their souls: strength, faith, unity.
🜂 Phase Two: The First Marker
Beatriz unrolled a golden ribbon, its magical texture reminiscent of Mami Tomoe’s, yet woven with the thread of her own Visualization.
She called it the Anchor Ribbon.
She extended it solemnly, linking the girls of Threshold Wing and the three men waiting aside: Lucien, Aslan, and Nox.
—As long as this ribbon lives, no one gets left behind. —Beatriz looked at each of them—. We are one heart.
Lucien placed his hand over hers; Aslan bowed his head in a silent blessing; Nox tightened his dagger, nervous but determined.
The first marker was sealed.
🜂 Phase Three: Transformation and “Second Chance”
The air changed.
The Snake Miraculous awakened, and emerald green wrapped Beatriz in a vortex.
Her silhouette merged with light; her cape transformed into a spiral of crystalline scales.
When the energy stabilized, the name echoed through the dawn:
OUROBELLA.
The second marker — the temporal seal — ignited as the Anchor Ribbon fused with the flow of her power.
The hourglass hum began to run: exactly five minutes.
🜂 Phase Four: Time Freeze
Amara raised her shield. The clock engraved on its surface spun backward.
The air cracked with an inaudible click, and the entire world froze.
Dewdrops suspended midair looked like stars trapped in a single instant.
Only the group, bound by the golden ribbon, remained conscious within the halted flow.
The Dowsing Crystal began to spin, marking an invisible path between the trees.
Beatriz felt it vibrate with a living pulse:
Patitas Café’s soul was calling them from the other side.
Meanwhile, outside the rift, Maximiliano Sturm watched from his command convoy.
His amber eyes reflected the spectral glow of the phenomenon.
—Excellent. Just as I planned.
—Shall we activate the second phase, sir? —his assistant asked.
Maximiliano barely smiled.
—Not yet. First, let innocence open the way.
The rift opened like a luminous wound in the fabric of the forest.
The air bent, and the horizon breathed.
Threshold Wing took their first step into the heart of the Incubators.
Chapter 76: The heart in the fracture
Summary:
📌 Author’s Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring renamed characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the game’s events. Any resemblance to real-life situations is purely coincidental.
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Chapter Text
—INSIDE THE INCUBATORS’ RIFT—
The air folded in on itself when Threshold Wing crossed the border of the known world.
The first step felt like sinking into an invisible current: color, gravity, even sound seemed dragged toward a formless point.
The Forbidden Forest vanished behind a membrane of viscous light.
What awaited on the other side was not darkness, but an unnatural clarity, white and pulsing, like the inside of a living organism.
The Radiesthesia Crystal floated ahead of Beatriz, turning slowly, radiating a green-blue pulse that expanded in waves.
Each vibration was a safe step in the middle of that impossible territory.
🜂 Incursion formation
The vanguard advanced in a tight line:
Beatriz at the center, her harp deployed and the Miraculous shining like a living serpent around her arm.
To her right, Lucien, alert gaze and crimson eyes glowing with burning determination; to her left, Aslan, walking steadily, the golden energy of the Lion of Faith rippling around him.
Sora Alcaraz held her halberd in dispersion mode; Aline Kojiro maintained an ultrasonic vibration that repelled mental interference, and Amara Sturm carried her shield extended, marking the boundary of stopped time.
The midfield moved a few meters behind:
Renée Cazeneuve guided the floating blades, carving corridors through the viscous matter.
Valentina and Lilith covered the flanks with crossed barriers; Mika left small light-drone spheres behind to map the surroundings.
Irene Vasco projected blue flames shaped like protective runes, and Nox advanced in silence, his daggers faintly glowing, attentive to any anomalous vibration.
In the rearguard,
Aki Tsukino held the second healing layer;
Yume Tanaka maintained active camouflage;
Irina-Lys Kovalev-Németh, with her techno-magical visor, analyzed dimensional readings;
and Nami Torres, with blood vibrating in her veins, kept the group’s vital signs synchronized with the Crystal.
It was a perfect alignment:
vanguard, core, and rearguard moving as a single body — the kind of coordination only achieved when the collective soul has been woven with shared love and fear.
The landscape transformed with every step.
Translucent columns rose like gigantic ribs. Through them, lights resembling neurons traveled at impossible speeds.
The ground was solid, yet it breathed.
From time to time, a pulse crossed the terrain, making everyone’s feet vibrate.
Sora murmured, holding back the tension:
—This feels… alive.
Aline answered in an almost inaudible tone:
—More than alive. It’s adapting to us.
Beatriz never took her eyes off the Crystal.
—Follow the frequency. Don’t think about anything the Incubators can read.
Lucien, low but firm:
—If this is a mind, then we’re walking inside a thought that doesn’t belong to us.
Aslan smiled faintly without looking away from the surroundings.
—And yet it was made by creatures who fear the chaos of the soul. What irony, isn’t it?
After fifteen minutes of marching, the environment began to change texture.
The translucent white turned pearl gray; the walls seemed to twist toward a central point.
Metal fragments floated in the air: clocks without hands, broken cages, mirrors reflecting memories that didn’t exist.
Aki recognized one.
—That… that’s my music classroom.
Beatriz raised a hand.
—Don’t look at it. They’re echoes of the mind. If you touch them, they could absorb you.
The Radiesthesia Crystal tilted sharply to the east.
Its luminous needle pointed toward a corridor where the light bent like water.
—That way —said Beatriz—. We’re close to the core.
The group adjusted formation.
Renée’s blades spun at high speed; Irene’s runes burned with blue strength.
Each breath was measured.
The air grew heavier.
At the end of the corridor, a colossal structure emerged:
a floating glass dome suspended over a bottomless abyss.
Organic cables stretched from its base, pulsing with white light.
At the center, chained by filaments of energy, floated a small white silhouette: the Brown-Paws Incubator.
But they weren’t alone.
Right behind the anchor, on a semi-transparent platform, there was another object.
A gem the size of a human heart.
Intact.
Black and blue at the same time, as if made of mourning and lightning.
Beatriz felt a chill run down her spine.
Her soul recognized the echo before her mind.
—…The Inventor’s Soul Gem.
Amara, who until then had kept her shield vibrating in silence, stepped forward, eyes wide, drawn by a vision emanating from the Soul Gem even though time was still stopped.
—The Inventor…?
Beatriz raised her arm decisively, stopping her while regaining composure and shaking her head slightly.
—Don’t get close. I can’t explain yet, but that gem isn’t simple residue. It’s a living fracture. If you touch it, the entire rift could react.
Lucien frowned.
—What does “living fracture” mean?
Beatriz looked at him with a mix of pain and certainty.
—That what was divided… is trying to reunite.
The group fell silent.
Aki pressed the staff against her chest.
The hum of stopped time grew stronger; the air began vibrating with an invisible tremor.
Beatriz took a deep breath.
—We have to talk to the Incubator before the balance breaks. Amara, when I give the signal, release time control. Only then can we communicate with him.
Amara hesitated.
—And if they detect us when I do?
—Then trust me —Beatriz repeated, with the same calm as before—. If everything goes wrong, we still have the five minutes of Second Chance. It’ll be enough.
Lucien looked at her.
He knew she was lying, or at least hiding the magnitude of the risk.
But he stayed silent.
Not out of obedience, but out of love.
🜂 The lifting of Time
Beatriz gave the signal.
Amara closed her eyes and undid the temporal seal.
The world breathed again.
Sound returned in a vibrating wave.
The lights surrounding the chamber reactivated, and at the center of the dome, the Brown-Paws Incubator lifted his head with a curious blink.
His ears twitched once, twice, as if sniffing something familiar in the air.
—Oh… —his voice sounded soft, almost lazy—. So in the end you came back, huh?
—What did you say? —Beatriz asked, confused.
The small being tilted his head, with an almost imperceptible smile in the shine of his eyes.
—Don’t play dumb, Inventor. That energy pulse… that weave intertwined with the lines of reality… only you would use it in such a human and messy way.
Beatriz felt her heart tighten.
—I’m not the same one you knew.
—And yet —the Incubator replied playfully— here you are, trying to fix what you once broke. Tell me, is it guilt, or curiosity?
Lucien frowned, but Beatriz raised a hand to stop him.
—We came to free you. We know they’re using you as a dimensional anchor.
—Oh, I know —he said, twitching his ears as if bored—. It’s a rather… immobilizing experience. But I’m not the only one holding this fissure.
Beatriz nodded slowly.
—The other source… the Soul Gem.
The Incubator tilted his head toward the fractured gem.
—Mmm, yes. That. Your little creation. It’s very upset with you, by the way. It’s been screaming ever since they brought it here.
Amara, confused, looked at Beatriz.
—Creation? What is he talking about?
Beatriz lowered her gaze, a shadow of sadness crossing her face.
—Not now, Amara. Later.
The Incubator clicked his nonexistent tongue.
—Always so sentimental, Beatriz. And to think you were the human who best understood the equations of the soul.
Lucien stepped forward.
—Can we remove you without touching the gem?
—Possibly. Though, to be honest, the gem and I are… intertwined. If you remove one, the other suffers. It’s as if our existences were sewn together with the same temporal thread.
Aslan crossed his arms.
—Any suggestions?
—Oh, of course —the Incubator replied lightly, as if talking about the weather—. Use the Radiesthesia Crystal as a catalyst. But not as a compass — as a scalpel.
—Scalpel? —Nami repeated from the back.
—Yes. Cut the psychic field, don’t break it. If you break it, all of this will collapse. And I don’t think you want to know what happens when the consciousness of a dimension decides to bleed.
Beatriz studied him carefully.
—So you’ll help us?
The small being tilted his head, almost charmed.
—Of course. After all, I like you. I’ve always enjoyed watching humans try to fix the impossible.
—Thank you… —Beatriz whispered.
—Don’t thank me yet —the Incubator said, his voice lowering to an almost affectionate murmur—. Time always collects its price. And you, Inventor, should know that better than anyone.
“THE WHISPERING FRACTURE”
04:17
Freed time sounded inside the Miraculous like an insect trapped in glass.
The dome throbbed. The white light breathed. And the silence —that false surgical-room silence— hid a choir that wasn’t human.
—Listen carefully, Inventor —murmured the Brown-Paws Incubator, his soft voice edged with sadness—. They already feel that we’re awake. Don’t ask long questions. Think in clean lines. Cut, don’t break.
—How long do we have before…? —Beatriz didn’t finish the sentence.
—Less than a blink, if that blink were a universe. —Small irony. Small tenderness—. And before you say something pretty: yes, I recognized you. Even with another face. Even after choosing another life.
04:12
The Radiesthesia Crystal spun, tuning itself to the finest pitch it had ever shown. A needle of light narrowed as if trying to pierce the air.
The group was bound by the Anchor Ribbon: gold woven into moving geometry, a living bond between wrists, chests, waists. A shared heartbeat.
—Formation, keep breathing in threes —said Beatriz—. One… two…
She never reached three.
The world tilted.
Not like a tremor. Not like a shove.
It tilted inward, toward a point that could contain every doubt a soul can swallow without breaking.
First came a whisper.
Not with a voice. Not with tone. An impulse scraping inside like sand in the lungs:
Devour it… Consume it… Eat it…
Beatriz blinked. Her heart shrank like a muscle plunged into icy water.
—What…?
—Eat it. It’s yours. It always was. It will be again. Its power belongs to you, witch.
The shadow didn’t come from the front. It came from behind.
It rose like thick smoke, gripping her neck, sinking fingerless nails into the base of her skull. A barely outlined feminine shape, made entirely of hunger and borrowed memory.
The laughter was broken glass.
Beatriz understood.
Not with her mind. With her skin. With the place where shame keeps its nest.
—You are not me! —Her voice came out broken, ancient—. You are not love!
—Without me, you wouldn’t exist. Only I can protect him. Only I can possess him. He loves me.
The smoke licked her jaw like a symbiote. The pulse of the Miraculous vibrated under her skin, trying to remind her the clock stops for no one.
Beatriz knelt at her own center. Inside.
And she said the prayer that weighs the most when it isn’t spoken with the lips:
—Love is patient. It is kind. It is not jealous. It does not boast, it is not arrogant.
It does not behave indecently. It does not seek its own interests. It is not easily angered. It keeps no record of wrongs.
It does not delight in injustice, but rejoices with the truth. It bears all things. Believes all things. Hopes all things. Endures all things. Love never fails.
The smoke shrieked —not with sound, but with temperature.
It twisted like ink burning in holy water.
—And you don’t fit that! —it screamed—. You are not love, you are obsession! You are rot!
She tore it away.
Not with hands — with her soul.
And hurled it back outside, where the Anchor Ribbon burned brighter for a second, holding her so she wouldn’t fall.
03:10
To her left, Nox covered his ears, but he wasn’t hearing anything from here.
The rift projected red sabers dancing where home once existed.
A kitchen.
A scream.
A shadow with a mask and mechanical voice.
—Mom! —The boy’s voice was a thread—. Grandma!
Subjective time stretched.
Ash suspended like snow.
A smell of iron.
Beatriz touched the Anchor Ribbon where it connected him to her.
—Nox, look at me —she didn’t raise her voice; she held it with a sister’s calm—. Breathe in three. One… two… come home.
The boy blinked.
The tears didn’t fall; they clung to the edge of the blink.
—I’m… here.
The ribbon vibrated. The emotional compass corrected course.
03:06
To the right, Amara saw an office that wasn’t there and yet filled the entire dome.
A clock stopped at twelve.
A father whose face was sealed like wax.
—You will never mention your mother again —that voice said—. Your future is here.
—Why…? —Amara whispered—. Why did you take my time away?
The office vanished before she could touch it.
The rift knew how to retreat exactly one second before comfort.
The wound remained open, polished. Shining.
The Anchor Ribbon kept Amara from collapsing inward.
—Formation —Beatriz called—. With me.
The Brown-Paws Incubator spoke as if he didn’t want to interrupt a mass.
—Here comes the part I don’t like. —Small pause—. I never liked it. Not the first time, not the others.
—What part? —Sora asked, knuckles white, stepping out of the trauma zone.
—The part where what you love is used against you —he said softly—. The part where affection becomes a knife edged with guilt.
Chapter 77: Operation: Disconnected Soul
Summary:
📌 Author's Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring well-known characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the events of the game.
The story addresses sensitive topics such as the characters' past and emotional growth. Your well-being is our top priority.🌟 Thank you for over 1020 reads! 💖
Every read helps this universe grow.✨ Thanks to your support, global comments are now enabled with moderation.
Everyone is welcome to comment, including readers outside of AO3.
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👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/navigateThank you for joining us on this journey.
From this point on… everything begins to change. 💫
Chapter Text
2:59
And then the others came.
Not as creatures.
Not as shadows.
As reversible decisions that had become irreversible.
As unsent letters that suddenly began to read themselves aloud.
The whisper fractured into thousands of whispers.
They settled into ears, tongue, eyes.
—Why did you come?
—No one called you.
—You were safer without them.
—What if they don’t believe you when this ends?
—He was mine first.
—You didn’t let her investigate.
—You didn’t protect them.
—You didn’t save her.
—You don’t deserve to be saved.
The Ribbon screamed.
The Miraculous vibrated like a string stretched to its limit.
The hum of the quantum system filled the chamber like a metallic chant, a lifeline she now needed.
Beatriz inhaled deeply. In front of her, the Radiesthesia Crystal (Lyzerg) floated above the holographic interface-table, radiating blue and golden sparks. Lines of energy connected it to the Soul Gem, trembling like veins of living light.
—Remember —warned the Brown-Paws Incubator, voice soft but firm—: each node is a connection between worlds. If you cut out of time, the Soul Gem will collapse… and so will you.
Beatriz nodded. The golden ribbon binding all the dreamers glowed on her wrist. She felt Amara’s, Aki’s, Sora’s pulses like shared heartbeats.
At the other end, the others remained asleep, trapped in visions already beginning to dissolve through their combined effort.
Aki channeled an almost maternal warmth.
Amara moved fast, steady, guiding the weakest out of the mental chaos.
Sora, intuitive, acted as a beacon: her inner voice rang clearly through the corridors of the nightmare.
Only two presences remained chained. Beatriz recognized them instantly: Lucien… and Aslan.
Her heart lurched, but she could not stop.
—Lyzerg, guide me with your Crystal so I can cut —she whispered—. First node.
Her Visualization assumed the young shaman: precise fingers, perfect focus. The crystal rotated; a green beam located the first quantum junction. Beatriz raised the holographic glove; the interface (Shuri) opened before her. With surgical precision, she traced severance lines, separating negative energy from positive.
Each node cut left an echo in the crystal: a restrained scream from the system.
The ribbon tightened… then loosened, sending relief.
Through it, Beatriz felt another mind awaken: one more dreamer freed from the labyrinth.
2:42
The Incubator perched on her shoulder, barely freed from containment.
—You’re almost halfway. But the last nodes are the most dangerous. They’re rooted in the memories of your loved ones.
Sweat at her temple.
Lights flickering; a dark field attempting to engulf the Soul Gem.
Beatriz clenched her teeth and extended her hand toward the next node.
—I won’t lose anyone. I promise.
The crystal vibrated.
A golden explosion crossed the chamber.
For a second, Beatriz saw Lucien’s and Aslan’s silhouettes trapped in a sea of shadows.
With one final surge, she cut the bond.
Silence.
Then, a soft radiance filled the space.
The Incubator lifted its head, surprised.
—…You did it.
Beatriz fell to her knees. The golden ribbon still pulsed on her wrist.
—Now… —trembling— we’ll pull them out of the dream.
Then something changed.
A different vibration crossed the quantum network; the floor of the mental plane began to crack; the dome darkened in an instant.
A tremor echoed through the depths of the network, with a roar so deep it made the circuits tremble.
—That… isn’t coming from the system… —said Beatriz.
The sky —that false firmament— shattered like glass.
🎵 天来~Divinity I~ 🎵
The Ascension of the Black Dragon
First, a tremor.
Then, the roar.
The roar that makes bones, memories, hope tremble.
Lucien clutched his head.
His breathing became ragged.
His right eye burned: ether core.
An inner fire spread from his chest to his arms.
It happened.
Black wings emerged, tearing through reality.
Blood red. Obsidian.
Arched horns.
Spiral scales, covering arms, shoulders, back.
Human skin fractured like porcelain, revealing a structure of power and pain.
Lucien screamed, and his voice was no longer human.
A scarlet flash split the sky; magical pressure crushed the air.
Before Ala Umbral, there was no longer a man.
There was an ancestral beast whose shadow covered the horizon.
The Great Black Dragon.
The ground sank beneath his weight.
Each breath ignited storms of fire.
—Why…? —his distorted voice thundered—. Why… if I loved you… did you condemn me to never die?
The fire did not burn with anger, but with despair.
Tears of magma fell from his eyes.
—You said you loved me!
—What kind of love… condemns someone to eternity?
The earth trembled.
The girls stepped back, barely maintaining their spells.
Valentina tried to seal with shields, but crimson devoured the air.
Beatriz stepped forward, knowing she could not reach him.
—Lucien… this isn’t you…
—You are not her! —he roared—. You’re better… and because of that… I want to live. And that’s what hurts the most!
Red lightning tore the sky apart.
The roar of the Black Dragon shattered the foundations of the plane.
The Dawn of the Regent Sun
First, a flash.
Then, the silence that precedes judgment.
Golden light spreads like a verdict.
The heat does not destroy: it purifies through pain.
From the center of the radiance, a gigantic figure emerges.
A body of molten gold; wings whose beating unleashes hurricane winds.
Each step leaves behind footprints of solar fire.
Dragons do not cry.
This one does.
—I… was the one who brought her to that place —the father’s voice thunders—.
—I was the one who presented her to the beast with the face of a man…
—I was the one who failed to protect her.
Ala Umbral falls to their knees under the pressure.
The heat burns souls.
—She was only a child.
I… her father.
And yet… her indirect executioner.
A golden flare erupts, melting part of the field.
The sky bends beneath the weight of that confession.
—I had no courage. No health. No power.
And still… she never blamed me.
That is what hurts the most.
The solar mark upon his forehead blazes.
Each word shakes the plane.
—How do you explain to the universe… that the only person who still forgives me… is the one I failed in the worst possible way?
Flames engulf his body.
The human figure disappears: Archdragon. Regent Sun.
Dragon of guilt and purification.
He shines so brightly no one can approach.
He does not attack out of hatred.
He consumes himself.
—I’m sorry, my daughter…
If there exists a hell that redeems…
…let it consume only me.
The field trembles as gold and crimson collide.
Two dragons —father and son— roar in opposite directions, with the same pain:
one burns for being unable to die,
the other for being unable to save.
The earth becomes embers.
The Dragons Strike
The dragons attack at once.
The Black Dragon opens its jaws: an inverted sun.
The Golden Dragon releases a tear–grenade.
Ala Umbral breaks apart into a constellation:
—Sora advances and receives the impact in a cross stance;
—Lucía bends gravity so the fire becomes a curve, not a line;
—Irene writes a rune–bridge and burns her hands;
—Lilith opens a mirror and shatters it so the blade wounds “guilt,” not “flesh”;
—Aki cries names without voice and keeps Nox here;
—Mika releases a swarm that absorbs a blast and dies;
—Yume casts a veil over Valentina;
—Nami and Aline maintain the rhythm;
—Irina-Lys recites numbers: sutures like lines of code.
The field, smoking from the chaos of the Black Dragon, becomes scattered with bodies.
They regroup. The breath lasts only a heartbeat.
An even more suffocating heat spreads: sorrow that burns to the bone.
Amara, bleeding, arm broken, crawls toward Beatriz.
—You… have to leave… now…
Beside her, Nox trembles, hands against the sterile ground.
—I… I can’t do anything…
Where is the life in this world…?
She does not scream.
She does not cry.
She observes.
Her companion’s body.
The face of her helpless brother.
The sky covered by the dragons who loved her…
And she feels the thick mist cover reality: not fog, but crystallized guilt.
The end.
Second Chance
The Snake Miraculous flickers: less than 10 seconds.
—It isn’t fair…
They didn’t deserve to become monsters.
You didn’t deserve that curse…
And you… dad… you only tried to protect me…
Her fingers tremble.
She activates it.
The air fills with ash and light.
Red dragon and golden dragon charge toward each other: the collision that would erase the plane.
An invisible snap cuts the universe.
The Miraculous activates.
A green radiance coils, spiraling upon itself.
The clock of the cosmos reverses.
Flames invert.
The roar becomes an echo.
The Regent Sun dissolves into particles.
Beatriz falls to her knees, gasping, eyes glassy.
She had seconds. She used them.
Everything freezes.
Fire suspended mid-path.
Tears suspended.
Time broken between her hands.
Beatriz clenches her fists.
The tears finally fall.
She knows that when she awakens… only she will remember.
The lost battle.
The dragons consumed.
The fallen friends.
The mist trying to cross the portal.
Everything will live only in her memory.
—This time… —she whispers, staring into the glow— …this time I won’t let them fall.
The reset consumes her completely.
Fade to white.
(End of Episode.)
Chapter 78: The Lion’s Heart
Summary:
📌 Author's Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring well-known characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the events of the game.
The story addresses sensitive topics such as the characters' past and emotional growth. Your well-being is our top priority.🌟 Thank you for over 1035 reads! 💖
Every read helps this universe grow.✨ Thanks to your support, global comments are now enabled with moderation.
Everyone is welcome to comment, including readers outside of AO3.
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👉 https://archiveofourown.org/works/63011326/navigateThank you for joining us on this journey.
From this point on… everything begins to change. 💫
Chapter Text
Beatriz opens her eyes with a gasp, as if she had emerged from the bottom of a frozen lake.
The air still burns with the scent of inverted fire; embers float backward, dissolving into green motes that rise toward the sky like fireflies.
The Second Chance has been fulfilled.
Only a few seconds gained.
But enough so the world does not collapse yet.
Amara holds her by the shoulders, confused by the tremor still shaking the ground.
—Bea? What happened?
The Inventor shakes her head slightly, and with a broken voice replies:
—Don’t ask… just listen to me. We need to reorganize before we enter.
Her tone leaves no room for argument.
She stops Amara before she activates her power to stop time again.
Beatriz detransforms; the small Sass rests exhausted on her hand, his tail slowly turning as if the effort has completely drained him.
The Snake clock goes dark, marking the end of its temporal miracle.
The group moves a few meters farther from the rift, to a zone where the ground still holds firm.
The air there vibrates with an invisible tension, as if the universe were breathing with them.
The portal remains open, a bright wound in reality: its edges pulse, twisting, distilling light and darkness in equal parts.
—“The rift is stable… for now.” —one of Sturm’s operators reports, checking the equipment.
No one dares approach too closely.
Beatriz breathes deeply, her hands trembling.
I already lived through all of this… but they don’t know.
The echo of the dragon and the sun still vibrates in her memory. Her body aches as if the entire history of two broken bloodlines had passed through her.
Behind her, Lucien steps forward.
The silence between them weighs more than any word.
He knows something has changed. He feels it in her gaze.
He takes her hand.
—Let me go in with you.
—No.
—Bea, please… I can’t stay here doing nothing.
She lifts her gaze. And she sees it: the red glow still lingers, a vestige of the dragon inside him.
Her voice is soft, but firm.
—Lucien, what I saw inside you… would kill me if it happens again.
I don’t want to lose you. Not there.
—But I can—
—No. —she interrupts, and this time her eyes tremble—. Trust me to protect us. This battle isn’t only against them. It’s against everything we once were.
Lucien lowers his gaze. His fingers cling to hers one last time.
It is not a farewell.
It is a silent promise.
Aslan approaches, wrapped in his Mandalorian cloak, his eyes glowing with a light that does not belong to this world.
At his side, Nox watches attentively, the small protection symbol still suspended over his forehead.
The father stops before the gathered girls and smiles, with that mixture of sadness and pride only a man who has survived guilt can show.
—I can stop fire with fire, my daughter… —he says, his voice deep and calm—.
But you want to stop darkness with light.
Only you can do that.
He extends his hands, and a silent roar crosses the air.
Golden energy begins to flow from his chest, swirling around the group.
It is warm, alive, but it does not burn.
It shines like dawn over a battlefield after war.
—Hear my words, —declares Aslan solemnly—.
May your hearts burn, but never break.
May your steps doubt, but never stop.
May hope not be a flame… but a roar.
The wind blows and above them a leonine silhouette appears, formed from golden constellations.
The stars themselves seem to bow to its presence.
—Lion’s Heart —he proclaims—: immunity to despair. Steady mind. Free spirit.
One by one, the girls feel that energy settle into their chests.
Their breathing synchronizes.
Amara looks at her hands: a golden claw-shaped mark glows upon her skin.
Beatriz feels the warmth merge with her own ether.
For an instant, the fear disappears.
Her father’s blessing does not only strengthen them: it unifies them.
They are a single will facing the abyss.
(Just after Aslan’s blessing, before activating the Miraculous)
Beatriz breathes deeply; the air tastes like ash and compressed fear. The Lion’s Heart still vibrates in her bones, warm, protective… but not enough.
She approaches Amara, almost whispering so her voice’s tremor won’t betray her.
—Amara… I need a protocol crystal container. A reinforced one. The kind used to store unstable Protocore.
The time-girl looks at her as if Beatriz had just asked her to bring a piece of the sun.
—Right now? —she blinks—. Bea, those containers are omega-class. They only come in the armored convoys from the mobile base.
—I know —Beatriz clenches her fists—. But we’re going to need one in there. If we can isolate a fragment of the Protocore… we could cut one of the Incubators’ anchors without triggering their mental defense. It’s our only advantage.
Amara freezes for a second. Then she nods.
—I have one. Well… I had one ready “just in case.” —she bites her lip—. It’s in Convoy Beta-03, the one we left farther back. I’ll take a few minutes to bring it.
Beatriz touches her shoulder.
—We’ll buy those minutes. Bring it.
Amara runs. Her steps disappear among the debris and the wind of the rift.
Most of the team remains finishing weapon adjustments, tightening bracers, verifying containment seals.
Father Aslan still projects part of his blessing in golden waves that take time to dissipate.
All of this —equipment adjustments, calls to the operators, Sturm squad checks—
fills precisely those valuable minutes…
Lucien watches in silence.
He cannot approach.
But his lips move in a silent prayer:
Come back.
The minutes Maximiliano needed.
Meanwhile — Maximiliano
(A parallel scene while Beatriz coordinates the group)
A few meters away, Maximiliano watches.
Pretending to check the Sturm squad sensors.
His breathing is different.
Calculated.
His face is covered by the tactical mask, but his eyes betray something darker… a determination far too sharp to be caution.
While everyone is distracted —between the container Amara went to retrieve, the blessing still fading, and the tactical orders Beatriz is giving—
he moves.
He walks toward the experimental armor module.
Sweat runs down his forehead as he opens a metallic capsule on his belt.
He unlocks it with a code no one should know.
And yet he knows it.
Inside: a dark suit, sealed with silver lines and an augmented reality visor.
One of the prototypes of the mental resistance suits.
—“This isn’t approved yet,” —a technician whispers.
Max only answers with a murmur:
—That’s precisely why it will work.
He slips away discreetly among the vehicles.
The chaos of regrouping gives him the margin he needs.
While the others prepare for the official entry, he activates the suit’s sealing mechanism.
A cloud of vapor rises around him.
His figure distorts, covered by the armor.
The visor projects codes and warnings.
—Brain frequency adjusted. Synapses protected.
—Estimated mental risk: extreme.
Max smiles faintly.
—I’ve faced worse hells.
The suit he takes is not a common one.
It is one of the mental resistance exosuits, a clandestine prototype designed for missions of extreme psychoactive contact.
A suit prepared for what he believes is a Wanderer dimension… and that will not protect him at all from the real horror awaiting him:
an Incubator dimension.
Behind him, ten more soldiers —the most loyal ones, those he personally trained— follow him without asking questions.
—Sir, is this authorized? —one whispers.
Maximiliano adjusts his helmet.
His voice, muffled by the breathing filter, sounds almost… empty.
—We don’t need authorization. We need answers.
The soldier swallows.
—Will we enter before Threshold Wing’s team?
—Yes —he says—. They will enter with light. We will enter with shadow.
And we will see… which one answers first.
The ten men nod.
Not like a squad following a commander.
But like sheep following him to the slaughter.
Maximiliano advances toward the rift.
The distorted energy of the portal reflects on the visor of his helmet like a twisted ocean.
No one notices him.
Not with the urgency of the preparations.
Not with Amara still far away searching for the container.
Not with Beatriz focused on her team of girls.
And then… Maximiliano takes a step inside.
The rift devours him without a sound.
Ten shadows follow him.
One after another.
And the portal ripples again, as if it had just swallowed something too large…
and were saving it for later.
Beatriz raises her gaze. The rift pulses more strongly.
The wind changes direction, as if the universe were inhaling.
—It’s time. —she says clearly.
The girls nod.
Aslan lifts his rifle, and from the ground rises a golden circle with spiral runes.
One by one, the girls enter formation.
Amara closes her eyes, her time power pulsing through her veins.
Beatriz casts one last glance at her father.
—I love you, Dad.
He nods.
—And I love you, little star. Go and make the universe remember the light.
The air trembles.
The Snake Miraculous shines once again.
Beatriz activates it with determination.
—Sass, Second Chance.
The serpentine clock turns once more, only now it is not a reset:
it is an extension of the miracle, a crack of time within time.
A parallel path to enter the impossible.
Amara stops time.
Everything freezes: particles, sound, even heartbeats.
Only the chosen move forward, wrapped in the glow of the Lion’s Heart.
They cross the rift.
And the world goes dark behind them.
Outside, Lucien, Aslan, and Nox remain before the portal.
The roar of the wind blends with absolute silence.
The rift beats like a wounded heart, swallowing light and returning echoes of distant voices.
Aslan kneels, hands clasped in prayer.
—Protect them, Lord of all ages.
If my flames are not enough, let their love be.
Lucien clenches his fists.
Something twists in his chest, an ancient and dangerous sensation.
The dragon’s soul within him feels the pull of the rift.
The desire to follow her.
To protect her.
To never leave her alone again.
But Aslan’s blessing stops him, like an invisible hand upon his shoulder.
—Not yet, son. —the father murmurs—. If you enter now, you will not save her. You will only repeat the tragedy.
Lucien nods through clenched teeth, fighting against his own fire.
At that same moment, at another point inside the rift, Maximiliano awakens.
The environment resembles nothing known: a landscape of liquid mirrors and impossible forms.
The sky has no direction, and the voices… the voices are not human.
—Wanderer dimension… no. —he whispers, while the suit’s sensors flicker with errors—. This is something else.
A chorus whispers in the distance.
Soft voices, almost kind.
Too kind.
—Welcome, outsider. We have been observing your thoughts.
Max feels a blow inside his head, as if a thousand чужые memories were trying to filter into his mind.
He activates the suit’s mental lock.
—Not so easily. —he growls.
But the world distorts, and a second later everything turns white.
Outside, Beatriz and her team are already inside the domain.
The silence there is absolute.
No wind, no true light.
Only the reflection of their own fears projected around them.
She breathes deeply.
The lion’s mark still glows on her chest, guiding her.
We already lived this once, she thinks. But this time… I won’t let them fall.
And somewhere beyond the distorted horizon, a golden roar answers,
as if the Lion’s Heart were beating within the universe itself.
Chapter 79: Last Heartbeat Before the Core
Summary:
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Chapter Text
The Forbidden Forest vanished behind a membrane of viscous light. What awaited on the other side was not darkness, but an unnatural clarity, white and pulsing, like the interior of a living organism. The Radiesthesia Crystal floated before Beatriz, turning slowly, radiating a green-blue pulse that expanded in waves. Each vibration was a safe step within that impossible territory.
Beatriz raised her hand to stop the group.
—Before we move forward, listen to me. When we enter the Main Chamber and Amara deactivates the time lock… we will only have five minutes before the system performs its next rollback. That’s our margin. No more.
A silence spread, heavy with tension.
—And there’s something else. —The Snake Miraculous glowed faintly on her arm—. The core isn’t made of a single anchor. There are two elements quantum-entangled: the Coffee-Paws Incubator… and a Soul Gem. One belonging to a magical girl.
A murmur ran through the formation.
—First we must disconnect the gem. If I separate it outside the correct time window, it will collapse. And if it collapses… so will I.
She turned toward Amara.
—that’s why I needed the armored protocristal container. The strongest one.
Amara nodded.
—I anticipated it. As soon as we reach the threshold corridor, I’ll run for it.
—Good. But listen to me carefully. —Beatriz narrowed her eyes—. DO NOT remove the time seal until I give the direct order. No matter what you hear, what you see, or what the Chamber projects.
The tension thickened in the air.
—Because once we are inside —she continued— the Incubators will activate the psychic resistance system. They will show us our fears. Our deepest nightmares. The things we refuse to face.
She looked at Sora, Aki, and Amara.
—You three will be my emotional anchor. Pull the others out of any vision that traps them. Don’t let them fall, not for a second.
She breathed deeply.
—I trust my father’s Lion’s Heart will give us the strength to break those mirrors. But even so… this will not be easy.
She tightened her grip on the Miraculous.
—When I cut the last quantum node, Amara, you remove the seal, hand me the container, we store the two elements, and we run. Because I warn you… the system will chase us from the very first minute.
Beatriz inhaled, lifted the floating Crystal, and gave the signal.
—Formation. We enter together. We finish together. And when we leave the rift… I hope the Incubators will finally accept negotiation.
🜂 Incursion Formation
The vanguard advanced in a compact line:
Beatriz at the center, the Miraculous coiling light around her arm while the Radiesthesia Crystal guided them like a bubble through the labyrinth. Sora Alcaraz held her halberd in dispersion mode; Aline Kojiro maintained ultrasonic vibrations repelling mental interference; Amara Sturm marked the boundaries of frozen time with her foldable light shield.
The midfield moved several meters behind:
Renée Cazeneuve guided the floating blades, clearing the path; Valentina and Lilith covered the flanks with crossed barriers; Mika released drone-spheres to map reality. Irene Vasco projected blue-flame runes to maintain cohesion.
In the rear guard, Aki Tsukino sustained the healing layer; Yume Tanaka maintained camouflage; Irina-Lys analyzed readings through her techno-magical visor; Nami Torres synchronized the team’s vital signs with the Crystal’s pulse.
It was a living unit.
One single body.
A soul woven together by love, fear, and shared mission.
The landscape transformed with every step.
The translucent white of the dimension began to ripple as if it breathed. Organic columns rose and twisted in impossible directions; lights like neurons traveled inside them, pulsing with alien life. The ground vibrated with each heartbeat. At times, it seemed the dimension itself was trying to remember its own dreams.
Sora murmured, tightening her grip on the halberd:
—This… this feels alive.
Aline replied without lifting her gaze:
—Not just alive. It’s responding to our presence.
Beatriz held the Radiesthesia Crystal high.
—Follow the frequency. Don’t think of anything the Incubators could read.
The group advanced as a single unit, breathing in rhythm with the Crystal’s blue-green pulse.
And then the light began to change tone.
It darkened.
It grew dense.
The corridor converged toward a floating dome suspended above a bottomless abyss. Organic cables descended like roots, pulsing white. And in the center, chained by filaments of energy, floated him:
The Coffee-Paws Incubator.
At the far end, on a semi-transparent platform, another object slept.
A gem.
Dark.
Blue and black like an endless mourning.
The Inventor’s Soul Gem.
Beatriz felt the hairs on her skin rise. That was the heart of the system.
—Amara —she whispered—. Bring the armored container. You know which one.
—Of course —Amara replied, pulling the container from the rear compartment of her shield, thanks to the infinite armory she stored within her own temporal pocket dimension.
The formation readjusted.
Barriers in place.
Renée’s blades spinning.
Irene’s runes blazing.
Everything was ready.
Beatriz stepped forward and heard the Incubator’s weakened voice.
The Incubator spoke:
—Careful… this core… does not forgive mistakes.
She nodded and raised Lyzerg’s Crystal above the holographic interface table. Light emerged like a precision scalpel. Quantum lines unfolded around the Soul Gem: veins of living light, vibrating, tense.
—First node —Beatriz whispered.
She cut.
A metallic echo resonated through the entire chamber.
Second node.
—Beatriz… —the Incubator’s voice trembled— the last ones are anchored in memories of those you love…
The ribbon of the Dreamers tightened on her wrist. A pulse from Sora. Another from Aki. And the iron calm of Amara returning with the container under her arm.
Beatriz clenched her teeth.
Third node.
Fourth node.
The environment trembled.
Fifth node.
The air vibrated.
Amara released the temporal freeze with a swift gesture, restoring the natural flow of the chamber. The Soul Gem pulsed once, like a heart remembering it had once been human.
Beatriz raised the Crystal for the final cut.
—Last node… —she said, her voice trembling but firm.
The beam descended.
The quantum bond shattered.
Snap.
The link collapsed with an echo that froze the entire dimension.
The Coffee-Paws Incubator fell to its knees, free.
The Soul Gem remained floating, loose, suspended by a dying thread of light.
Amara extended the container.
—Bea, here. Quickly!
Beatriz released the Crystal for a single second to grab the Soul Gem—
That single second was enough.
A shadow detached itself from the depths of the corridor.
As if it had always been there, invisible, synchronized with the white distortions of space.
Maximiliano emerged from the translucent columns.
He… and ten soldiers.
Their visors glowed red.
They had been touched by the dimension.
No one saw him coming.
His mental suit camouflaged itself with the pulse of the core. And they had arrived through an alternate corridor… one opened by the previous temporal rollback.
Maximiliano spoke with monstrous calm:
—That artifact is far too powerful for inexperienced hands.
Amara went pale.
—Dad… don’t do this.
He ignored her.
With a brutal movement, he tore the container from his daughter’s hands.
Beatriz turned, but it was already too late: Maximiliano shoved the Soul Gem inside.
He touched it.
The Soul Gem was not healthy.
It was a wound.
A mourning.
A life breaking.
A shattered soul.
When his fingers brushed it—
CRACK.
Five fractures flared at once, like open scars.
Maximiliano stepped back, fascinated.
—With this… I too will be able to…
He never finished the sentence.
Beatriz felt the impact like a psychic dagger: a life breaking.
—DON’T TOUCH IT! —her scream trembled with horror—
It’s corrupted! It’s going to—!
Too late.
From the fractures burst a black light.
A hungry spiral.
A power that absorbed the very clarity around it.
The Incubators screamed.
The chamber trembled.
The rift opened another centimeter, breathing like a mouth.
It was the birth of something forbidden.
Maximiliano was the catalyst.
“A Walpurgis-level Witch was being born.”
The black light coiled around his arm like a demon.
The first soldier’s helmet exploded.
Another twisted without a sound.
Beatriz reached out toward the shattered gem—
But there was nothing left to save.
End of Episode 79
Chapter 80: THE BARON WHO DEVOURED TIME
Summary:
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Chapter Text
Part I — The Fracture That Became a Man
The CRACK still reverberated inside my bones when the black light erupted from the Soul Gem.
It was not a normal explosion, but a silent one, as if the air had forgotten how to vibrate.
The Sturm Industries soldiers fell first: one arched backward without a sound; another shattered like poorly blown glass.
Around me, the Chamber became a storm of reflections.
—Back! —I shouted.
But the order came too late.
The core’s pulses spiked like a heart in sudden cardiac death.
The organic cables that held the Coffee-Paws Incubator thrashed wildly, as if trying to escape the system itself.
Aline stepped back with a whimper.
—Bea… the mirrors… they’re appearing out of nowhere.
They weren’t mirrors.
They were open wounds in the light.
The Soul Gem, that painfully living thing, still floated in the air… split into five blazing fractures.
Maximiliano had touched it.
He had claimed it.
And now, something was claiming him.
The fragments reacted like a swarm.
They licked his arm.
Then his chest.
Then they clung to his back like hungry parasites.
—Dad, drop it! —Amara screamed, running toward him— Dad, no!
He didn’t even hear her.
His body arched, veins surfacing like black cables beneath the skin.
His breathing stopped.
The air vibrated, uncomfortable, suffocating.
A sharp edge of light cut reality around him and drove into his torso, as if the dimension itself were claiming a mold for something new.
Coffee-Paws raised his head in horror.
—Oh… no.
No, no, no… it wasn’t meant for a human!
Lucien would have said something.
Aslan would have stepped forward.
But neither of them were there…
The transformation completed.
✦ The Baron of the Fracture is Born
Maximiliano fell…
but he never struck the ground.
He was suspended by an invisible force, like a puppet held by strings of black light.
Mirror fragments burst from his skin, and each one showed a different scene:
Amara, five years old, holding a music box.
The Sturm Industries office during an economic collapse.
A laboratory destroyed by a calculation error.
Trembling hands silently cleaning blood.
An empty cradle.
—What… is… that? —Sora murmured.
I already knew the answer.
Not because I understood it.
But because I felt it.
A warlock.
Not just any warlock.
A Baron.
A Walpurgis-level being that should never have existed.
The voice emerged from the mirrors.
Not from his mouth, but from the cracks.
—I always…
(echo)
…was enough.
It was Maximiliano’s voice.
And at the same time, it was the voice of all his resentments.
The white glow of the dimension stained its edges with a sickly blue.
Then the mirrors opened like jaws.
The Incubators initiated their emergency protocol:
—Corrupting object confirmed.
—Causality broken.
—Rewrite in progress, level 7.
—System extinction risk: high.
—Retreat recomm—
The Baron interrupted them.
A hand covered in mirror plates moved toward them.
The Incubators were trapped inside shining structures:
small cubes, tiny chambers vibrating like quantum cages.
Coffee-Paws screamed:
—No! Don’t touch their refle—!
Too late.
One of the Incubators disappeared into its own reflected labyrinth.
The image of its body stretched, compressed…
until it became a blink.
Then the blink extinguished.
The mirrors absorbed its emotional energy…
as if it were food.
Aline let out a choked cry.
—It’s devouring their minds!
The Baron extended another hand.
He searched for more victims.
The fragments moved toward Amara first.
It was logical.
She was his weakness.
She was his most painful mirror.
But when the fragments touched Amara…
they shattered.
The golden ribbon of Mami Tomoe that bound the entire Threshold Wing flickered on my wrist.
Coffee-Paws noticed instantly.
—That’s why he can’t trap you!
You are not separate souls.
You are linked… like a single emotional entity.
Unreadable!
Indecipherable!
The magical girls looked at one another.
Aki placed a hand on her chest.
—The Lion’s Heart… it’s still active.
It’s protecting us from the inside.
Lilith opened her sensitive mirrors.
—They’re not mirrors… they’re quantum traps.
They reflect and fix an individual soul.
But one… woven together by a golden ribbon…
—He can’t trap it —Aline finished, trembling.
And that was when I understood.
He had never been the target.
We were.
✦ Collapse of the Main Chamber
The Baron raised his arms.
The entire Chamber groaned.
The floor tilted forward and to the left at the same time.
The organic columns creaked like enormously old bones.
The dome split open in seven directions simultaneously.
The Radiesthesia Crystal in my hand trembled as if alive.
—Bea… —Yume whispered, her voice broken— is the dimension…?
—Bending its own rules —I answered.
—Yes.
The white lights turned black.
The translucent walls filled with hexagonal fractures.
The filaments of the core melted like plastic over fire.
The Baron floated at the center of it all.
Majestic.
Terrible.
Motionless.
Like a god newly awakened.
The Incubators tried to retreat to their escape chambers…
…and every chamber turned into mirrors.
Coffee-Paws shrieked in panic.
—WE CAN’T GET OUT! HE’S—
The Baron closed his fist.
The mirrors trembled as if about to collapse.
And then, the core stopped beating.
✦ The Incubator Error (The Revelation)
Coffee-Paws spoke with the gravest voice I had ever heard from him.
—We made a mistake.
An unforgivable one.
S-she… the Inventor… her darkness was too heavy to purify.
We could not destroy it…
so we tried…
to contain it.
I looked at him, feeling a chill run down my spine.
—You sealed her.
Inside a Soul Gem.
Without purification.
Coffee-Paws nodded.
—It was arrogance.
It was… miscalculated efficiency.
We thought… that asleep… her darkness would become an almost infinite emotional battery.
But she was only…
waiting.
—Asleep… —Irene whispered.
—Like a seed?
Coffee-Paws confirmed it.
—The Inventor was… half alive.
And now he…
—he looked at the Baron—
he has taken her pain.
Aline stepped back.
—And what does that mean?
—It means… —I took a deep breath—
that he is using her darkness as fuel.
And he is multiplying it with his own.
✦ Time to Negotiate
The Baron took a step forward.
The mirrors behind him rearranged themselves like an obedient swarm.
The Incubators were now completely cornered, unable to escape.
Coffee-Paws began emitting red light.
Red.
I had never seen him like that before.
—Beatriz Solane Delmar…
only you can face him.
We… cannot.
It was a surrender.
A confession.
A plea.
I knew exactly what I had to do.
Not out of ambition.
Not out of rage.
But because it was the only path to get my girls out alive.
—Very well —I said, lowering my head slightly—.
Then we’re going to make a deal.
The magical girls tensed behind me.
Sora tightened her grip on the halberd.
Renée raised her floating blades.
Valentina activated the seals.
Aki inhaled deeply, holding the healing light steady.
The Baron watched us.
His eyes were two blue fractures.
Empty.
Broken.
Painful.
—Contract —I repeated.
—Clear conditions.
If you want us to destroy your monster…
you abandon this dimension.
You cancel the contracts.
You deactivate your emotional conversion system.
And you leave Rametal.
Coffee-Paws trembled.
—Beatriz… that is an irrational request.
—No —I replied.
—It is the only option.
And I pointed at the Baron.
—Because if you refuse…
we’ll let him devour you as well.
Silence.
Deep.
Absolute.
Tense.
The Incubators entered a network silence:
a kind of collaborative trance —their version of “debate.”
Fourteen seconds later…
Coffee-Paws’ light flickered on again.
—We accept.
Sora released a broken exhale.
Renée murmured:
—What the hell… you just negotiated with a quantum alien species.
I nodded.
—Now —I looked at the Baron, while the Crystal pointed to a flash in his chest—
we bring down this fractured colossus.
The Baron roared.
The mirrors ignited like a thousand eyes opening at once.
His body revealed three weak points, each pulsing like a living wound.
I tightened my grip on my light blade.
—Threshold Wing.
With me.
And we ran.
The Colossus that Reflects Pain
The Baron roared.
But it was not a physical roar — it displaced no air and shook no ground.
It was a mental roar, an explosion that made the skull vibrate from the inside, as if fragments of чужые memories were trying to slip into my eyes, my tongue, my veins.
The Radiesthesia Crystal in my hand darkened for a second, then released a violent blue pulse.
And then I noticed it.
The Miraculous counter, frozen at 3:59.
Frozen.
Not a tick.
Not a blink.
—It’s not moving… —I murmured.
—The temporal fracture he’s generating… is blocking my “Second Chance.”
Yume, her face pale:
—That means… we’re outside of time.
—Yes.
—I said—
We’re standing on borrowed ground. And if we fall here… there will be no rewind to pull us out.
Sora tightened her grip on the halberd.
—Then we don’t fall. Period.
Amara stepped forward, trembling, but with the iron shine of someone who has decided that her fear will not be greater than her love.
—Bea… with you.
—With you.
—I replied.
And the battle began.
Chapter 81: The Daughter of the Fractured Colossus
Summary:
📌 Author's Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring well-known characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the events of the game.
The story addresses sensitive topics such as the characters' past and emotional growth. Your well-being is our top priority.🌟 Thank you for over +1123 reads! 💖
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Chapter Text
Part II — First Phase: “Testing the Waters”
The Baron rose like a fractal colossus.
The mirror plates forming his torso slid, rearranging themselves into large shining segments.
Three points of light flickered briefly:
One on the collarbone.
One beneath the left rib.
One at the center of the back, hidden among mirrors spinning like helices.
The Crystal reacted immediately.
Its light pointed to the first one.
—Climb! —I shouted.
Renée hurled her floating blades toward the walls.
The blades embedded themselves like mountaineering stakes, creating an improvised bridge.
Sora ran first, halberd over her shoulder, leaping from blade to blade.
Aline followed, projecting sonic vibrations to stabilize the surfaces.
Valentina opened a tilted shield, allowing Amara to propel herself into the air.
Amara jumped.
Her temporal shield —a golden plate of living geometry— unfolded like a fan of light.
Her legs trembled, but she kept climbing.
The Baron turned his head toward her.
—My daughter…
(distorted echo)
…you always climb where you do not belong.
Amara clenched her teeth.
—Shut up.
She raised her shield and struck the first glowing point.
CRACK.
The mirror exploded.
The Baron stepped back.
Not from physical pain…
but emotional.
A memory projected behind him:
A young Maximiliano, kneeling, holding shattered financial documents.
The Sturm Industries logo nearly burned away.
His defeated voice:
“I am not enough for this world.”
The memory shattered like glass.
Amara fell backward, but Sora caught her by the suit.
—Nice work, rookie! —she said with a wink.
Amara didn’t smile.
Her eyes were wet.
But not from fear.
From rage.
Valentina shouted:
—Second point, under the left rib!
We ran across Renée’s improvised bridge.
Each reflective plate was unstable; they shifted with every step, as if the Baron were trying to shake us off him, swatting us like flies.
Irene and Nami reinforced the platforms with runes and pulses of blood magic that temporarily solidified the surface.
Aline pointed with her vibration.
—Bea, up!
I jumped.
The light sword answered my hand as always: with a sharp hum, like lightning turning to look at its master.
The Radiesthesia Crystal marked the exact point.
A trembling green line.
Weak.
Barely visible.
My sword came down.
CRASH!
An explosion of blue and black light threw us all backward.
The Baron screamed.
Another memory burst from the shattered mirror:
Maximiliano holding a broken music box.
A little girl crying in the doorway.
And him murmuring:
“I couldn’t save her…
and I won’t be able to save you either.”
Amara covered her mouth as if the image were a physical blow.
—I… I didn’t know that…
I stepped in front of her.
—Amara.
—I said firmly—
Don’t look only at what he was.
Look at what he became.
And remember: you are not the echo of his failure.
Her eyes widened.
And for the first time…
I think she truly saw me as who I will become for her:
not just a leader, not just a teammate.
Her future mentor.
Her borrowed strength.
The strength her father never gave her.
As we moved toward the Baron’s back, Coffee-Paws materialized on my shoulder.
He looked exhausted, trembling with fear.
—We confirm the promise… the conditions… —he said breathlessly—
if you destroy the Baron… we will sign the treaty.
—I don’t want excuses —I replied.
—Nor technicalities.
—I want your signature in sealed geometry.
Coffee-Paws blinked with red light.
Between fear…
and respect.
—We accept.
No hidden clauses.
Withdrawal.
End of emotional conversion.
Permanent cancellation of contracts.
Aline whistled.
—Bea… did you just turn magical girls into a cosmic diplomatic power?
—No.
—I said, raising the light sword—
I just turned a troop of girls into the worst existential threat the Incubators have ever faced.
Renée clashed her blades together.
—I like your style.
✦ Second Phase: Breaking Mirrors = Breaking Memories
The Baron lunged.
His arms were columns of spiraling mirrors.
Every time he moved a finger, a dozen plates unfolded like cutting fans.
—Split up! —I shouted.
Valentina raised a barrier to cover the rear.
Irene traced blue-fire runes preventing the plates from closing around us.
Mika released drones that exploded on contact with mirrors, opening gaps for passage.
But every strike…
revealed another fragment.
Another memory.
One after another:
Maximiliano manipulating reports to hide a failure.
Maximiliano deleting recordings of Amara crying.
Maximiliano smashing a prototype and blaming the research team.
Maximiliano watching helplessly as his wife vanished in the proto-field.
“I wasn’t enough to save her.”
“I am not enough for my daughter.”
“I have to control everything… because nothing else can be controlled.”
“If she excels… then what am I for?”
Every phrase…
every scene…
made him less colossus and more human.
More tragic.
More broken.
And that made him more dangerous.
Because a monster aware of its ruin…
is a monster without limits.
The Crystal vibrated.
But this time…
not toward me.
Toward her.
Amara felt it before I did.
Her body stiffened.
Her shield glowed with a golden intensity I had never seen before.
The Baron slowly turned his head toward Amara.
And for the first time…
he trembled.
—My daughter…
(his voice shook)
…my greatest achievement…
…my greatest mistake…
Amara clenched her teeth.
—Neither an achievement.
—Nor a mistake.
—Just me.
She pushed forward.
She ran across a platform of mirrors rearranging beneath her feet.
The golden shield expanded like a solar wheel.
—YOU ARE NOT A GOD!
—YOU ARE A MAN WHO DISAPPOINTED ME!
She struck the third weak point directly in the chest.
The explosion of light was monumental.
A memory was released, not as an explosion…
but as a whisper:
Maximiliano, standing before the empty laboratory, murmuring:
“If she had fewer doubts…
if she were stronger…
if she were more…
like me…”
Amara roared.
—I DON’T WANT TO BE LIKE YOU!
The Baron shattered.
Literally.
The mirror plates began to tear loose, falling into the abyss like sharpened petals.
His voice distorted into multiple echoes:
—Enough enough enough—
—Not am not was not will be—
—She should be mine—
—She should be part—
—She should not—
—She could not—
—But if I absorb her—
I spun around sharply.
—AMARA, WATCH OU—!
Too late.
The mirrors behind the Baron opened, not like doors…
but like a dimensional fracture made of reflections.
A fractal mouth.
A trap.
The Baron extended both arms toward his daughter.
A human voice, sad, corrupted:
—If I integrate you…
—if I take you as part of me…
—if I keep you inside…
—then finally…
—I will be complete.
The vortex pulled her.
Amara fell to her knees, dragged by the force.
Her shield faltered.
Her fingers clawed at the air.
—Bea—! —she cried.
—AMARA!
I ran.
Jumped between shards.
Dodging living plates that tried to trap me.
But the vortex was closing like a fist.
The Baron spoke the phrase that froze my blood:
—I want to protect you…
—forever.
My fingers barely brushed Amara’s.
She vanished among the mirrors.
And I understood.
At last, I understood.
He didn’t want to kill her.
He didn’t want to destroy her.
He didn’t want to punish her.
He wanted to possess her.
To turn her into his eternal reflection.
He wanted to absorb his own daughter.
And that was worse than any death.
END OF CHAPTER 81
Chapter 82: The Card of the Fractured Colossus
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Chapter Text
Part I — “Heart in the Fracture”
The Baron of the Fracture did not roar.
He vibrated.
A deep, irregular tremor, as if his existence could no longer sustain its own weight.
The mirror plates that formed his body shifted and reshuffled without order, clashing against each other in different rhythms, as if several versions of him were trying to occupy the same form at once.
And at the center of that chaos…
Amara.
Trapped inside the vortex of mirrors that had closed like a fist around her.
—AMARA! —I shouted, my boots striking a floating shard as I leapt toward the colossus— Grab onto something!
She stretched out her arm… but the vortex swallowed her completely.
As if an invisible mouth had decided that this daughter must belong only to her father.
The Baron shuddered, his form distorting with a sonic fracture that echoed in all our bones.
Suddenly, his silhouette stopped being symmetrical.
The plates on the right side twisted into a spiral.
Those on the left trembled like cracked ice.
He had become unstable.
He seemed to realize it himself.
—No… no… no… —he murmured, with a voice that no longer sounded human—
My daughter does not fit… does not fit does not fit no—
His fingers opened and closed in involuntary spasms.
The mirror plates that formed his face shifted position, displaying different emotions in irregular intervals: rage, sorrow, pride, emptiness.
—IT DOESN’T WORK! —he roared— I cannot… possess her!
It was the first time the Baron sounded afraid.
Sora grabbed my arm.
—Bea… what are we going to do?
I took a deep breath.
—We’re going to do what we came here to do.
Save you.
And seal him.
I raised the light sword. It vibrated as if responding to my determination, and the Radiesthesia Crystal released a blue pulse—so strong that the Incubators, even trapped inside their mirrors, shrieked.
Coffee-Paws appeared on my shoulder, trembling so much he nearly slipped.
—T-The critical phase is approaching. The Baron is losing coherence.
This is now or never. If he fully absorbs his daughter, his emotional core will become impossible to separate.
My hands clenched.
—Then I won’t allow it.
The Baron leaned backward like a tower collapsing in reverse.
From his chest opened a fissure: a vertical crack filled with broken mirrors reflecting not our present…
but our fears.
Sora, Valentina, and Renée stepped in front of me.
—Bea —Valentina said hoarsely—. If you go in there… we won’t be able to follow you.
—I know.
—And he can kill you —Renée added.
—I know that too.
Amara was inside that hell.
I could do nothing less.
—But I can bring her back.
I jumped.
The Baron screamed when my sword touched the edge of the fissure, as if the light itself burned him.
The opening sealed behind me.
Immediately, gravity disappeared.
I found myself suspended in a space that was neither white nor black.
It was an infinite reflection, where every surface showed a distorted version of me or Amara, or Maximiliano, or lives that never happened.
“Why did you come?”
“She cannot be saved.”
“You cannot save anyone.”
“Don’t you get tired of failing in every timeline?”
The quantum whisper surrounded me like serpents.
I felt them trying to cling to my skin… to my memory.
I clenched my teeth.
—My memory is mine.
My destiny is mine.
And my student… is mine as well.
The light sword ignited in a flare of blue and white.
The nearby mirrors recoiled, like animals burned.
The core was a labyrinth.
But not a physical one.
It was the interior of the Baron’s guilt.
And Amara was at the center.
I ran.
Every step formed a bridge made of mirror fragments.
Each mirror reformed to show monstrous versions of Maximiliano.
A broken hand, an eye crying blood, a mouth begging for help.
Until finally…
I saw her.
Amara was kneeling on a circle of fractal light.
Her shield was splintered on her barely intact arm.
Her breathing was uneven.
The plates around her vibrated like a heart beating out of control.
—Amara… —I said softly.
She lifted her head and her eyes widened.
—Bea…
She ran toward me—but a column of mirrors surged between us, forcing me back.
The Baron’s voice echoed from everywhere.
—She is not yours.
She is mine.
My legacy.
My perfect reflection.
A part of me…
Amara shouted:
—I AM NOT PART OF YOU!
And then she pulled something from her fractured shield.
A weapon.
A golden revolver, with protocore crystals embedded in the cylinder.
It was not a normal weapon.
It was an emotional weapon.
—Bea —she whispered, aligning the sight against the Baron’s echo—.
If I can’t break him from the outside…
I’ll break him from the inside.
The Baron screamed.
—YOU WILL NOT SHOOT YOUR FATHER!
Amara pulled the trigger.
BANG.
The shot pierced the internal plates.
A fracture opened.
And that was enough.
The System Awakens — Arcana Card
The Crystal in my pocket burned.
Literally burned, like liquid blue fire.
A holographic window emerged before me.
“Condition fulfilled: Unstable Core + Absolute Will.”
“Secret ability unlocked: Arcana Card – Card Seal.”
The air vibrated.
Before us appeared a card.
Not an ordinary card.
A celestial holographic playing card, whose edges were living fractals.
At the center was an empty space—as if waiting for a name.
The name of the entity to be sealed.
The Baron saw the card and his entire body convulsed.
—No…
No…
No, it’s not possible…
You cannot seal me!
I AM STURM!
I AM THE STRUCTURE!
I AM THE FOUNDATION!
The system ignored his quantum tantrum.
“Target status: CRITICAL.”
“Emotional core fractured.”
“Ready for containment.”
The card began to expand.
First to the size of a door.
Then a panel.
Then a glowing scroll falling from the fractured sky.
Amara grabbed my arm.
—Bea…
Bea, that thing…
That thing can trap him forever, right?
—Yes.
And only while he’s unstable.
She swallowed.
—Then…
we attack together.
I smiled.
—Together.
The core trembled.
The figure of the Baron appeared among broken panels.
His torso was incomplete.
His face shifted between versions of himself at 40, 20, 55…
his memories disordered, fighting to exist.
—Amara…
Amara, daughter…
Listen to me…
I only wanted to protect you…
Amara raised the weapon again.
—No.
You wanted to possess me.
She stepped forward.
The core reacted, showing a reflection of young Amara, hiding behind a door while he shouted at a team of scientists.
Amara inhaled deeply.
—I am not that child anymore.
And you are not my father anymore.
She fired.
The echo pierced the reflection.
The Baron screamed.
I stepped forward.
—Coffee-Paws! Is the seal ready?!
The Incubator appeared like a flicker of light, barely able to hold himself together.
—Beatriz… this ability is…
It is not human.
It is… conceptual.
If you use it…
if you seal him…
he will be trapped between memories he will never be able to repair…
—Exactly.
—But the price…
Beatriz…
the price is that you will be bound to the card as its owner.
I sighed.
—Better that than letting him destroy Amara.
Or the others.
Or Rametal.
Or… himself.
Coffee-Paws lowered his head.
—Then…
we accept.
The card rose like an inverted sun.
Internal Seal — External Seal
The core began to collapse.
A mirror fracture opened beneath Amara’s feet.
I grabbed her wrist just before she fell.
—Don’t let go! —I shouted.
—I’m not planning to!
The Baron extended his arms toward us, desperate.
—NO!
DON’T TAKE MY PERFECT PART!
DON’T TAKE MY DAUGHTER!
The sound of his voice was so torn that, for a second…
I felt pity.
Just for one second.
My light sword ignited.
The Crystal aligned with it.
The giant card formed a circle around us.
“Card Seal — Initiating.”
Light engulfed us.
The Baron screamed.
But it was not a roar.
It was a human scream, fractured, full of fear and regret.
—AMARA—
—DON’T LEAVE ME—
—DON’T ABANDON ME—
—I CAN’T—
—I DON’T WANT—
—I DON’T KNOW—
—WHY—
—IT DOESN’T WORK—
The card closed.
But one second remained.
A single second.
The Baron gathered all the remaining energy of his core and hurled it toward Amara, trying to fuse with her by force.
—IF I ABSORB YOU…
I WILL BE COMPLETE—
I WILL BE WHOLE—
I WILL—
Amara raised her weapon.
Her hand trembled.
But she aimed directly at the Baron’s heart.
—No.
You will not be complete.
You will be…
NOTHING.
BANG.
The shot echoed as if it had shattered a universe.
The Baron folded in on himself.
His form fractured.
The system emitted a luminous alarm:
“TARGET: ULTRA UNSTABLE.”
“SEALING POSSIBLE ONLY NOW.”
The card shone.
It was the moment.
—AMARA! —I shouted— JUMP!
She launched herself toward me.
I extended my hand.
The two of us.
Against a broken god.
The card closed over the Baron in an explosion of fractal light.
Chapter 83: Heart in the Fracture
Summary:
📌 Author's Note:
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Chapter Text
The Baron fell.
Not with an explosion.
Not with a roar.
But with a sound almost human:
a fractured sigh that dissolved into thousands of fragments reflecting lives he would never live.
The seal of the Arcana Card wrapped around him like a celestial-blue dome.
Runes glowed around the holographic scroll, each one synchronized with the pulse of the Radiesthesia Crystal that still burned in my hand.
—Bea… —Amara whispered, coughing— did we… do it?
I didn’t answer immediately.
Because the fractal colossus was still trembling.
Because part of him was still trying to hold together, dragging himself forward with fingers made of broken mirrors.
And because inside that trembling…
…a voice was heard:
—A…mara…
She closed her eyes tightly.
Not from fear.
From compassion.
I knew that gesture.
She was already thinking about saving him.
The Baron extended a broken hand toward her.
Just a reflection.
But it still had the shape of a father.
—Daughter…
don’t leave me alone…
Amara took a step.
I extended my arm and stopped her.
Firm.
Decisive.
—No.
Don’t go closer.
She looked at me like someone watching a door close in slow motion.
—Bea…
what if…?
What if we used your Second Chance?
Just… so he doesn’t end like this…
It was the most honest version of Amara.
The one who still wanted to believe that mistakes can be fixed with magic.
I took a deep breath.
I looked directly into her eyes.
—Amara… listen to me carefully.
I knelt down to her level.
I took her bloodied hand between mine.
—Saving him would close a circle that needs to stay open.
She frowned.
Confused.
Hurting.
—What… what do you mean?
—That he was the final failure of the system.
The point where the Incubators lost control.
If we save him… we give them back the excuse that “everything can be fixed.”
Her lip trembled.
—But… he’s my dad.
I nodded.
—And that’s why it hurts.
But listen to what I’m about to tell you… as your mentor.
Her breathing caught slightly.
She needed it.
So did I.
—Saving him now… would hand the Incubators a second chance to turn this error into an advantage.
It would allow them to say:
“See? Nothing was lost. The system works.”
I shook my head.
—They don’t deserve that.
Not after this.
Amara lowered her gaze.
—So… we let him die?
I swallowed.
Because that was the hard part.
—We are not the ones killing him.
He chose this path.
He chose to absorb a corrupted Soul Gem.
He chose to become something he couldn’t even control.
And he chose to treat you like a reflection of himself… instead of seeing you as a daughter.
Silence.
Long.
Splitting us open.
—Amara —I whispered—.
I’ve read and lived enough stories to know something:
when you try to save what was never meant to be saved…
the price never returns to your own hands.
She lifted her gaze.
There were tears, yes.
But also understanding.
—Then… we let him go.
I nodded slowly.
—Yes.
We let him go.
So that no one else inherits this power.
Not him…
not you…
not something worse.
Amara closed her eyes and breathed like someone releasing a ghost.
And when she opened them…
She was older.
Freer.
The collapse of the colossus
The mirror plates began to detach one by one.
The Baron raised his hand one last time.
—A…ma…ra…
She took a step back.
Not from rejection.
From acceptance.
I activated the Arcana Card.
Runes spun.
The scroll closed like a fractal seal.
A blue beam descended.
The Baron screamed.
But this time not from hatred.
From human fear.
Simple.
Naked.
Then the scream faded.
The plates pulverized into dust of light.
The emotional core dissolved.
The fractured colossus ceased to exist.
Only the card remained.
Now fully formed:
a celestial holographic card bearing the name:
BARON OF THE FRACTURE — SEALED.
The dimension trembled.
It was closing.
—Bea! —Renée shouted from outside— The rift is collapsing!
I took the card.
The scroll rolled itself up and floated around me like a ribbon of light.
I grabbed Amara by the wrist.
—Come on.
We have to get out before the core shuts down.
Aline opened a vibrational path.
Valentina held the plates.
Sora jumped toward us with the halberd transformed into a hook.
—Hold on! —she shouted.
We did.
And all together…
we escaped from the heart of the fractured colossus.
The ground returned beneath our feet.
Air filled our lungs.
Amara dropped to her knees.
So did I.
Nox was not there.
Aslan was not there.
Lucien was not there.
But their absences… no longer hurt the same way.
They hurt in a different way.
The kind that comes with fulfilled responsibility.
Patitas Café arrived first.
Floating clumsily.
Trembling.
And behind him…
three dozen Incubators, all in hologram mode, unable to fully materialize.
They were terrified.
One spoke.
His voice was a cold static.
—The error…
the error has been contained…
Another:
—The system… did not foresee this…
A third:
—Proceed with… your treaty request…
I raised the scroll.
The letters reorganized across its surface like living ink.
Amara looked at me, surprised.
—Is it… already ready?
I smiled.
—Yes.
It’s an interdimensional contract.
And they’re going to sign it.
Patitas Café lowered his gaze.
—We understand… that we have lost…
all capacity to negotiate.
—Exactly.
—I replied.
—Then… what do you demand?
I unrolled the card.
The light transformed it into a true scroll.
Immense.
Imposing.
Each clause shining like a divine sentence.
—I demand —I said firmly—
the total cessation of contracts.
The dissolution of the system.
The emotional purge.
The absolute withdrawal from this dimension.
One of the Incubators trembled.
—That is… impossible…
—No.
It is mandatory.
Aline raised her voice.
—Do you want this to happen again?
Because what we saw today…
could multiply.
Sora rested her halberd on the ground.
—And this time you wouldn’t have anyone to blame.
Amara stepped forward.
Her voice, for the first time…
sounded like that of a leader.
—There will be no more errors.
No more girls sacrificed.
No more lies.
Valentina added:
—Either you sign…
or Beatriz opens the card.
The Incubators recoiled.
—No!
She cannot—
—Yes, I can.
—I interrupted.
And I raised the Arcana Card, which vibrated like a crystalline roar.
—If I break the seal…
he comes out.
And you face your monster again.
Absolute silence.
One of them spoke.
—We accept.
We will sign.
Under your geometry.
Without conditions.
The runes of the scroll ignited.
And one by one…
Each Incubator stamped its luminous mark.
Not as a voluntary signature.
As submission.
As defeat.
When the final signature appeared…
The scroll shone.
Folded.
Returned to the shape of a card.
And floated back to my hand.
Amara looked at it with a mix of relief and pain.
—Bea…
Do you think that someday…
it could have been different?
—Maybe.
—I replied—
But maybe he would have destroyed something greater than himself.
She lowered her head.
I placed my hand over her hair.
—You didn’t choose your father.
But you are choosing who you will be after him.
Amara broke into tears.
Not from guilt.
From release.
I hugged her.
—You let him go, Amara.
That takes more strength than destroying him.
She nodded against my shoulder.
The last mirror of the Baron fell behind us.
And with it…
an entire ancient system.
The final rift began to close.
Irene opened exit runes.
Mika deployed the drones to guide the route.
Lilith and Valentina created containment barriers.
We aligned.
One unit.
One soul.
Before crossing…
Amara took my hand.
—Beatriz…
Thank you for not letting me become his reflection.
I smiled.
—I was never much of a fan of mirrors.
I prefer real people.
She laughed through tears.
—Will we stay together… after this?
I looked straight at her.
—Yes.
And this is only the beginning.
We crossed the rift.
The real world received us.
The era of the Baron ended.
The era of free magical girls…
had just begun.
Chapter 84: Epilogue: Contract Unfolded
Summary:
📌 Author's Note:
This fanfic is inspired by Love and Deepspace, featuring well-known characters and creative twists. It does not strictly follow the events of the game.
The story addresses sensitive topics such as the characters' past and emotional growth. Your well-being is our top priority.🌟 Thank you for over +1248 reads! 💖
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Chapter Text
📜 Interdimensional Agreement Contract
Between:
📍 The Coalition of Incubator Emotional Harvesting Entities (hereafter, The Incubators)
📍 The Rebel Magical Delegation of Dimension Omega-Philos-09 (hereafter, the Magical Liberation Coalition, represented by Beatriz, leader of Ala Umbral)
✨ Purpose of the Agreement:
By virtue of the political, military, emotional, and magical power obtained after the eradication of the entity known as “The Baron of the Fracture,” both parties agree to the following:
📑 Clause 1: Cessation of Contractual Activity
1.1 The Incubators will immediately cease all recruitment, contracts, manipulation, observation, alteration, and emotional linkage with inhabitants of Dimension Omega-Philos-09.
1.2 The generation of new Soul Gems, the use of emotional conversion technology, or energy extraction based on wishes is strictly prohibited.
🧹 Clause 2: Data Purge
2.1 All information related to the Magical Girl system must be permanently eliminated. This includes (but is not limited to):
Digital data
Physical records
Images
Videos
Induced dreams
Memories directly or indirectly linked
2.2 The purge must be executed using quantum nullification technology, guaranteeing the impossibility of future restoration.
2.3 Any residual emotional trace will be encapsulated and sealed within planes inaccessible to physical, magical, or cognitive entities.
⚖️ Clause 3: Active Neutrality
3.1 The Incubators will maintain a position of active neutrality, meaning:
They will not intervene, assist, or benefit from any conflict, development, advancement, or event within Dimension Omega-Philos-09, directly or indirectly.
3.2 The delivery of technology, information, or assistance to third parties with interests in the dimension is strictly prohibited.
🧪 Clause 4: Universal Penalty
4.1 In the event of a violation of the agreement, the Magical Liberation Coalition reserves the right to:
Activate the “Inverted Reflection” Protocol, which will reverse the existential core of any Incubator involved, exposing it to an infinite human emotional cycle.
Disclose their existence as an interdimensional threat to other conscious dimensions, generating diplomatic blockades and coordinated attacks.
🐍 Clause 5: Exclusivity of the Serpent Miracle
5.1 The miracle known as “The Serpent” remains under the exclusive use of the Protagonist (Beatriz Delmar), without replication, distribution, or interference.
5.2 Any attempt at duplication, decoding, or containment will be considered an act of total magical war.
📌 Final Clause: Recognition of Systemic Defeat
6.1 The Incubators officially recognize that the existence of the Baron of the Fracture was the direct consequence of operational negligence, lack of oversight, and violation of their own emotional containment protocols.
6.2 Therefore, they declare themselves incapable of operating ethically under parameters of emotional free will, and renounce any future operational rights within Omega-Sigma-Philos-09.
👁️ Fine Print (invisible to Incubators with ego above 6D):
“This contract is binding even across alternative timelines, divergent realities, or reset worlds. Emotional and logical nullification is guaranteed by the ancestral seals of the Protagonist, who has been duly recognized as an entity of supreme free will under the universal law of ‘Enough is enough.’”
📜 Signed on the Day of the Fracture, under the testimony of the Silence of Infinity.
🖋️ Beatriz Solane Delmar
🖋️ High Authority of Existential Rewriting
🖋️ The Incubators (by obligation, not by pleasure)
Epilogue Contract:
CHAPTER 84 – The Echo That Never Existed
The dimensional rift closed behind us with a metallic sigh, leaving behind the white chamber, the remains of the Baron, and the scars of a world that no longer existed. The real air felt different: heavier, quieter.
Or perhaps it was us who had changed.
Aline dropped to the ground, exhausted.
Valentina let her shield fall.
Sora stared at her hands, as if the light still trembling in her fingers were an impossible memory.
Amara breathed slowly.
Not sad.
Not broken.
Just… rebuilding.
And then we heard it:
—Beatriz.
—Wait.
The Coffee-Pawed Incubator trotted up to the edge of the platform.
Floating beside him was another one, green, with hexagonal markings on its ears: a High Category Analyst.
—We have completed the process.
—said the green one, mechanical—
The treaty has been registered in the higher geometry.
The withdrawal is… irreversible.
Brown-Paws turned his head toward him.
—And… the provisional command now rests in my node.
—he admitted, almost shyly—
I am… responsible for supervising that none of this ever happens again.
Sora let out a low whistle.
—They promoted you?
—No. —I corrected, adjusting the Arcana Card on my bracer—.
They chained him.
That’s how they work.
Brown-Paws looked at me.
For the first time, not with fear.
Nor with calculation.
But with something closer to… openness.
—I know… we must withdraw.
I know we do not deserve another chance.
But if there is anything we can do to prevent… more energy collapses…
I should know now.
That was the moment.
I felt time settle around us, as if the entire dimension were holding its breath.
And I remembered.
I remembered my 17-year-old self.
My father Aslan, still very young after being reborn, those endless afternoons in the dining room where he and I solved what the science of the real world never could.
Cold Fusion.
The forbidden answer.
Energy without sacrifice.
The holy grail no one should touch.
I never revealed it.
Not once.
Because I knew what governments would do with it.
Or megacorporations.
Or armies.
But now…
Here…
In this universe…
With this Incubator…
Everything aligned.
It wasn’t power.
It was an echo.
A reflection of a self that never existed.
I looked at the Incubator.
—I have something.
A solution.
The light in his core flickered.
—For… the energy consumption of the universe?
I nodded.
—But I will only share it with you.
With no one else.
The Green Analyst floated a step forward.
—This is irregular.
It is not permitted that—
Brown-Paws raised a paw.
—I accept the conditions.
Proceed, Beatriz.
And then it happened.
I felt something in my Item Box vibrate.
Not a weapon.
Not a title.
Not a power granted by this world.
But something I brought from Earth:
my old advanced calculus notebook.
One I believed lost.
Yellowed pages.
Numbers.
Formulas.
Diagrams.
I took it out.
And handed it to him.
Brown-Paws held it as if it were sacred fire.
—This… —he said, astonished—
this alters the density structure of the vacuum…
the equilibrium of cold nuclei…
the efficiency of—
He was processing.
With difficulty.
As if something human had clung to him by mistake.
—Why… me? —he finally asked—
I am only… a defective node.
I smiled.
—Because you were the only one who doubted.
And in your species… doubt is the purest form of freedom.
The Incubator went still.
As if an entire algorithm had become silence.
—In my world…
I chose art.
The emotional path.
But I could have chosen this.
Science.
Calculation.
Cold logic.
I looked at the notebook, still glowing between his paws.
—Maybe I’m not the Beatriz who was meant to solve it.
But someone, in some universe, will do it with you.
And that echo…
that future I will never see…
is the gift I leave you today.
Brown-Paws lowered his head.
A gesture that DOES NOT EXIST in his species.
—Thank you…
Beatriz of Ala Umbral.
Inventor.
Mentor.
And entity of free will.
The Green Analyst remained silent.
Unable to understand.
Amara approached, resting her hand on my shoulder.
—That was… like throwing a stone into the lake of destiny.
—Exactly —I murmured.
And I saw the ripple expand.
Invisible.
But inevitable.
An alternate future had just been born.
And none of us would ever be the same again.
Chapter 85: The Report That Never Existed
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Chapter Text
The world had a smell again.
After hours—or perhaps days—trapped in planes where time was a wounded animal capable of biting reality, crossing the membrane of the Rift again felt like being born once more:
the humidity, the trees, the earth…
everything was too simple to have ever been real.
Beatriz barely managed to take two steps out of the portal when something wrapped around her by surprise.
Not something.
Someone.
—Bea! —the voice broken, deep, desperate.
Lucien was the first to reach her, nearly stumbling over himself.
There was no elegant posture, no restraint, none of the ritual calm of the dragon.
He clung to her as if he had been drowning and had finally found air.
His arms—so enormous compared to her still exhausted body—were trembling.
His forehead pressed against her shoulder.
His breathing was irregular, like someone who had run for centuries just to reach that moment.
—You're alive… —his voice broke—
You're alive… please tell me you're alive…
Beatriz hugged him back.
Lucien still smelled of ash, ether, and contained storm.
He was still trembling.
She opened her mouth to answer, but another warmth wrapped around her back.
A larger embrace.
Heavier.
Stronger.
Aslan.
—I thought… —his voice thundered, low and rough—
I thought I had lost you again, daughter.
The force in his words had nothing to do with the power of the Archdragon.
It was the human vulnerability of a father who had seen the universe try too many times to take away what he loved.
Beatriz turned slightly and hugged him too, trapped between her two dragons.
She held them as best she could, even though her hands trembled.
—I didn’t get lost, Dad —she whispered—
Not this time.
A third small body crashed against her legs, clinging to her waist.
—Bea! —Nox’s broken voice, so fragile it hurt to hear—
I felt— I felt like you were leaving!
He buried his face against her abdomen like a child seeking refuge.
His ears were low.
His tail—hidden by the discreet camouflage—was visible only in the tense posture of his back.
Beatriz, shattered and relieved, let out a choked laugh.
She wrapped her arms around all three of them.
Her small universe.
Her three suns.
Lucien, trembling as if he were the one who had almost died.
Aslan, breathing as if he could finally lower his guard.
And Nox, clinging to her as if she were his only anchor to the world.
The four of them remained like that, in an embrace that seemed to be holding reality itself together.
The Forbidden Forest exhaled around them.
A soft breeze moved the leaves.
The sun filtered through the canopy.
It was so normal… that it hurt.
It was Amara who broke the moment, though she did so with slow, almost shy steps.
The girl—because she was still a girl, even though the world insisted on forcing her to become a woman—approached while hugging herself.
Her hair was messy, her face dotted with ash, the folded shield hanging from her arm as if it weighed a ton.
Her eyes… her eyes were red.
Not from crying.
From having seen too much.
Beatriz looked at her and nodded.
She knew what was coming.
—We need to talk —she said softly, gentle but firm.
Amara swallowed and stepped closer.
Lucien, Aslan, and Nox moved back slightly, giving the two space.
But none of them went far.
Beatriz took a deep breath.
—What happened inside the Rift… —she began—
cannot be told exactly as it happened.
Amara lowered her gaze.
Not out of shame.
Out of exhaustion.
—So… we’re going to lie? —she asked, her voice small, almost childlike.
Beatriz shook her head.
—We are not going to lie.
We are going to tell the truth…
but a truth the world can survive.
Amara lifted her gaze.
Her lips were trembling.
—And what “truth” could the world survive… after seeing what I saw…? —her voice cracked.
Beatriz stepped toward her and took her hands.
—We are going to say this, Amara.
Listen carefully.
The girl nodded, swallowing dry tears.
▪ First part of the report: The acceptable facts
—We were in the Forbidden Forest during a joint exercise —Beatriz said—
A private session, with partial authorization from Sturm Industries.
Amara repeated softly:
—Joint training… authorized.
—A Wander Rift opened —Beatriz continued—
A secondary-class one.
It was unstable.
We decided to enter to assess risks because both of us have Evol training.
Amara inhaled deeply and continued:
—And my dad…
—He entered after us.
Beatriz squeezed her hands.
—Yes.
That part is true.
Amara’s voice broke again.
—And… he…
—He was infected —Beatriz said gently—
With a Wander crystal.
Amara closed her eyes tightly.
Beatriz continued:
—He transformed.
Into an aggressive variant.
Impossible to contain.
We had to neutralize him.
There was a silence that even made Lucien tremble.
Amara murmured:
—Is that what we’re going to tell Astrae Lyris?
—Yes —Beatriz replied—
Because everything else…
cannot be known.
Not by her.
Not by anyone.
Amara lifted her gaze, broken but aware.
—And… officially —she whispered—
they will say he died… protecting me.
Beatriz nodded.
—Officially he died trying to save you.
Unofficially…
he entered by his own decision.
He exposed himself by his own decision.
And he died from the consequences…
of his own decisions.
Amara trembled.
Beatriz pulled her into a brief hug.
—It’s not your fault —she told her—
It never was.
He chose his path.
Amara nodded.
But it took her a moment to let go.
When Amara finally managed to steady her breathing, Beatriz continued:
—I’m going to tell you something important.
Listen carefully.
Amara looked at her.
—Remember, I have partial custody of you until you reach legal adulthood.
Legally, no one can force you into anything.
No one on your father’s Council can make decisions for you.
No one can use you as a bargaining chip.
I will make sure that no one touches you.
Amara opened her eyes in surprise.
—Partial… custody?
—Yes.
Your father signed those documents a few weeks ago, remember?
You are a minor.
And now you are under my protection.
Amara brought a hand to her mouth.
—I… I didn’t know that… was still active…
—It’s still active —Beatriz said—
And now it’s more necessary than ever.
Amara shuddered once more.
But this time… not from fear.
From relief.
—Thank you… —she whispered—
Thank you for… not letting go of me.
Beatriz gently stroked her hair.
—You are strong.
You truly are.
And now you’re going to decide what to do with that strength.
Amara lowered her hands.
She breathed.
And said:
—I want to research Wander infections.
I want to know how to stop them.
How to prevent them.
So that no one…
no one else…
ends up like my father.
Beatriz smiled.
—That could change the world.
And… I would like to help you.
Amara’s eyes shone, this time without tears.
—Really…?
—Really.
If you are my student…
then we will build together a future where this never happens again.
Amara hugged her tightly, with unexpected strength.
And Beatriz, for the first time since they escaped the fractured dimension… allowed herself to cry a little too.
The report for the Unicorn Hunters
When they separated, Beatriz turned toward Aslan, Lucien, and Nox.
—For the Unicorn Hunters —she said in a more formal voice—
we will give them a more tactical version.
Colder.
Amara inhaled, ready.
Beatriz enumerated:
—Maximiliano entered on his own.
He exposed himself to the Wander crystal.
He transformed into a Red-class aggressive entity.
Containment was attempted.
It was not possible.
He was eliminated.
Clean process.
No detectable anomalies.
Lucien murmured:
—That… is true.
Aslan added:
—And sufficient for the Unicorn Hunters.
Nox simply nodded, his ears still lowered.
When everything had finally been said, the Forbidden Forest fell into a strange silence.
Not tense.
Not dangerous.
Just… silent.
Amara looked toward the Rift, which was already closing.
The bluish light that had spilled all that tragedy was beginning to fold inward, like a flower wilting at dawn.
—Do you think… I did the right thing? —she asked softly.
Beatriz stepped closer and took her hand.
—Yes.
The right thing does not always feel good.
But it is still the right thing.
Amara nodded slowly, breathing deeply.
—It was wrong… but it was also right.
Beatriz smiled.
—That is the perfect definition of the world, Amara.
Lucien approached from behind with soft steps, his eyes still burning with concern.
—We’re leaving here —he said—
All of us need to rest.
Aslan placed a large hand on Beatriz’s shoulder.
—And you need to sleep for twelve hours.
Nox nodded with so much energy he almost fell over.
Beatriz took a deep breath.
—Let’s go.
We have a report to deliver tomorrow.
And a benevolent lie to build.
Amara exhaled.
—We go together.
And so the group—this strange intimate army—began to walk out of the Forbidden Forest.
Behind them remained the Rift, the echoes of the Baron of the Fracture, the roar of dragons, broken mirrors, interdimensional contracts, miracles and curses.
Ahead…
A truth that no one could know.
A secret that would never be told.
And a girl who, for the first time in her life…
was taking her first real step toward freedom.
