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Hawaii. The islands of surf, sun, and of course, romance. The school trip was much needed respite for the Phantom Thieves. After dealing with Medjed and saving Futaba from her own demons, a vacation seemed like a great idea for some much needed fun. But for some members of the party, ulterior motives were in play.
During the flight over, Ryuji had constantly pestered Ren about how important it was to meet up with the local ladies of Hawaii, saying “What better reward for saving Tokyo than a lady for the night?” Despite Ryujis persistence on this point, Ren appeared disinterested in the whole idea. Besides, his heart was set on something else.
Makoto Niijima. Third year at Shujin Academy. Class President. And most importantly, a prominent member of the Phantom Thieves. When Ren first met her, it wasn’t on the greatest terms. She would constantly hound him and the other thieves by the order of the Principal, but ever since she joined the Phantom Thieves, they’ve become very close. Even so much to the point that they would text almost every day, whether it was about Phantom Thieves business, school work, their friends, or even how each others day was. But it wasn’t until recently that Ren’s feelings started to become far more complicated.
Her voice. Her smile. Just two of the many things about her that Ren couldn’t seem to get out of his head. He had never really thought about her this way, but now, he can’t even seem to imagine what it was like before he felt this way. But he knew he couldn’t pursue these feelings. After all, it had to be some unspoken rule about not dating within the team. He knew he couldn’t disrupt the balance of the team, not when they’re at the highest peak in their career.
However, all of this changed when, on the last night in Hawaii, he received a text from Makoto, asking if he’d accompany her for a walk.
Ren stared at his phone for what felt like an eternity. His mind racing with questions, like ‘Why is she asking me of all people? Does this mean something? Am I thinking too deeply about it? What if she only means a friendly walk? But why would she only ask me? Or maybe she didn’t just ask me, and I’m the last person she texted?’
He shook his head. He knew asking himself those questions wasn’t productive. He had to type up a response, and fast.
Sure.
“No…” he spoke to himself, promptly deleting that which he just typed. “Too aloof. I want her to know I’m interested.”
Of course! I’d love to :)
“Bleh, no.”
Would it just be the two of us?
“Jesus, now you just sound desperate.”
Of course, if it’s with you.
“That’s even worse…”
Finally, Ren came up with a message he could be satisfied with.
Sounds good. I’ll meet you there.
“Perfect.”
Tucking his phone away in his pocket, and taking in a deep breath, Ren pushed his way out of his hotel room and headed for the beach.
(Writers note: For redundancies sake, just rewatch the Hawaii date with Makoto for this part. I’ll link here: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=v-zAQZLTyjA)
A long walk on the beach with Makoto only sent Ren’s feelings for her to a much higher echelon. Concluding it with a gift from her and a sunset beach view while sitting on a bench together sent his feelings straight to the moon. The crashing waves distracted him from the pounding coming from both his head and his heart. The two of them sat there in silence, watching the tide come in, then roll back out, sometimes getting closer, sometimes farther. After all the talking they did through out the day, words were meaningless at this point. All Ren needed to be happy in that moment was to feel her presence at his side.
As the sun began to sink into the ocean, Makoto let out a gentle sigh, and stood up, causing Ren to quickly look over to her.
“We better head back before it gets dark.” she says. Although, while it could have just been in his head, Ren swore he heard a bit of disappointment in her voice. He wasted no time to seize the moment.
“W-wait!” he said with a stutter, admittedly not the smoothest start. “Just… a little longer… okay?”
Makoto smiled. “Well… I guess I can’t argue with that.”
She sat back down, sitting just a bit closer to Ren than before. Despite the temperature not changing, he felt his hands get just a bit sweatier.
‘Okay…’ he thought to himself. ‘We’ve been together for a few hours now… just the two of us. She gave me a gift. But she hasn’t made a move at all. Could she be waiting for me? Or… perhaps I’m over thinking this and she really only see’s me as a…’
Ren couldn’t take it anymore. He knew there was only one way to find his answer, no matter how unpleasant it may be in the moment.
“H-hey… Makoto-san?” he started, once again damning his stutter in his head.
Makoto giggled before he could continue. “No need for the formalities. Makoto is just fine.”
“R-right. Makoto.”
Ren visibly swallowed, causing Makoto to look at him more intently.
“Listen… why… why did you invite me out here?”
“Huh?” Makoto responded. “O-oh…”
Ren looked over at her. Her cheeks turned a light red, as she tucked her hair over her ear and began to look the other way.
“Am I… doing something wrong?” she asked, a somberness to her words.
Ren was taken slightly aback. Whatever possible responses he was expecting, this certainly wasn’t one of them.
“W-what?” he responded in a panic. “No, of course not! I just… wait… what do you mean?”
Makoto sighed, tilting her head down to stare at her folded hands that now rest in her lap.
“I… I dunno.” she started. “I was just… started to get these vibes from you, and I thought that maybe you might… you know… like… you know… y-you know?”
Before continuing, she put her hands over her face.
“Ugh, I’m so dumb. Aiko was right, I’m really no good at this stuff huh…”
“H-hey! Wait a second!” Ren quickly interjected. “You’re not doing anything wrong… I’m… I’m really happy you did. I’m having an amazing time with you. Honestly… this day has been my favorite since coming to Shibuya. And that’s all thanks to you.”
“O-oh…” Makoto replied, her cheeks turning even redder. “Well… I’m glad then.”
Silence fell between the two of them once again. This time, their faces turned opposite to one another, both with flushed cheeks from embarrassment. Ren’s mind swirled with thoughts, now more manic than ever. Despite her pretty much confirming her acknowledgment for his feelings, he was still unsure what she felt about him, or if she was only being nice to him to make him feel better. He knew there was so much more he had to ask, but he felt unable to break the silence.
Without warning, he felt a hand delicately brush his arm. It flinched at first contact, but after a moment of hesitation, wrapped itself around his bicep. His pulse began to quicken.
“You’re so warm.” Makoto said softly. Despite the rush of anxiety Ren was currently feeling, he was determined to maintain a cool composure. This task was quickly put to the test as her hand crept over his arm and rested on his chest, right over his heart.
“And your heart…” Makoto continued to observe. Ren could feel her breath hit his shoulder. “It’s beating so fast.”
Sweat started to beat down on his face. He knew that if he turned to look at her, he would be unable to keep himself calm. Faced with what felt like the most difficult task he had to overcome in his whole life, he was forced to admit defeat, as he turned his head back towards hers.
Sure enough, her head was but a few inches away from him. Her eyes were looking at his chest, as her hand gently rubbed at his pecs. Ren let out a quiet gasp. Given that they were both in their swimwear, there wasn’t much clothes between the two of them aside from his swim trunks and her skirted bikini. Suddenly, she raised her head up and met his gaze. Their eyes locked. At that moment, time appeared to have stopped. The once roaring waves fell silent. The constant chatter of the other tourists were gone. The seagulls no longer chirped. In that moment, everything was completely still and silent.
Whether it was only for a second, or if it lasted a whole eternity, Ren didn’t know. But he knew the moment ended, as before he knew it, he felt her warm, soft lips press gently against his. All at once, all of his feelings came rushing towards the front of his mind. Everything he felt was finally confirmed in that one, simple moment.
He finally knew what he felt.
Ren Amamiya was in love with Makoto Niijima.
All of the unpleasant interactions they had when he first met her drained from his mind like dropping a dime in a well. Instead, what came rushing to his head were all the memories they had made up to that point, from staying up late on the phone talking about their friends, to their many study sessions together, which Ren desperately tried to convince himself were actually about the school work. Even to all the moments they shared in the Metaverse, fighting side by side. The countless times they saved each other from danger from the evil Shadows. The only thing he could think of in that moment was her.
Without any warning, Makoto suddenly pulled herself back, gasping in shock as she quickly sprang to her feet.
“Oh my gosh!” she exclaimed. “I’m sorry, I’m so so sorry. I-I don’t know what came over me!”
Ren couldn’t believe what he was hearing. If he was being honest, he felt like he had blacked out that entire time, so he assumed in his half conscious state that he initiated the kiss. Given her reaction however, he was now led to believe that it was in fact her.
“H-hey! It’s okay!” Ren rushed up to his feet to reassure her. “It’s okay. You don’t have to apologize.”
To his surprise, Makoto continued to do just that. “N-no, I… I shouldn’t have done that. I was just so caught up in the moment that I… I…”
Once again, Makoto threw her hands over her face.
“Oh god, I can’t believe myself. I-I’ve never done something so… so…”
“Hey, Makoto…”
Ren, deeming this the moment that he could finally take charge, took Makoto by both forearms, pulling them down to his waist so he could once again see her face.
“It’s okay… I… really enjoyed it to be honest.”
Makoto let out a confused breath of air. “R-really?”
Seeing her face so pink with embarrassment, Ren smiled. He knew this was his opportunity to let out everything in his heart that he’s ever wanted to tell her.
“Makoto… recently, I find myself thinking about you more and more. At first I tried to pass it off as just… being really passionate about a friend. But every time you came to my mind, I could feel my heart begin to race. However, I… couldn’t find a way to truly confirm my feelings. That is… until today.”
Makoto gasped softly in surprise. Ren continued.
“The last few hours we’ve spent here have been… nothing short of incredible. You make every moment of my life so much brighter… and I’d like to ensure that you’re by my side for all of it.”
“Ren…” Makoto spoke quietly, her voice sounding breathy. “I… I’m…”
Before she could continue, she felt a single tear formulate in her eye. As it slowly built up and escaped her eye, Ren placed his hand on her cheek and allowed his thumb to catch the tear. She let out a small breath, and placed her own hand on his, ever so delicately.
“Oh Ren…” she speaks again, her voice a bit shaky. “You saying that… it makes me… so happy. You have no idea.”
Her eyes returned to meet his gaze. This time, Ren was certain that he was the one who pulled her in for another kiss, paired with a warm embrace, as her hands rested on his shoulders. The second kiss, Ren felt much more in control. Before, it had felt like the world was frozen for him, but now he could feel time once again. Now, he knew that he wasn’t going to take a single moment for granted. It didn’t just feel as simple as her lips on his. It felt like a whole body experience, from his toes curling in the warm sand, to his heart beating faster and faster, to his hands, with one still resting on her cheek, and the other now holding onto her hip. He then moved his hand to her back and pulled her deeper into the kiss. As he did so, he felt a gentle moan from her mouth enter into his. The two continued to let their lips explore each others.
The mood was interrupted at the sound of Rens phone going off. Regrettably, Ren pulled back from the kiss and looked towards his pocket. He then turned his eyes back to Makoto, who simply gave a reassuring smile in response.
“It’s okay, you can take that.” she said kindly. Ren replied with a weak, embarrassed smile, then quickly pulled his phone out to see an incoming call from Ryuji. With a heavy sigh, he answered the call, then put the phone to his ear.
“Hello?” Ren spoke.
“Yoooo!” Ryuji said, clearly loud enough, causing Makoto to chuckle and roll her eyes. “Me and Mishima are gonna go pick up some girls, you in?”
“Uhh…”
Ren fixed his gaze on Makoto, hoping she at least didn’t hear that last part. Given her facial expression, it seemed like she didn’t catch it.
Ren was unsure on what to do in that moment. He wasn’t sure if he should be public about what was transpiring between him and Makoto, but he definitely knew he didn’t want to go skirt chasing anymore with the guys. He had to think of some sort of excuse, and fast.
“Uh, sorry Ryuji, but… I think I’m just gonna go for a walk on my own tonight if that’s alright.”
“F-for real man?” Ryuji replied, seemingly disappointed. “I was really hoping you and I could… wait a minute… I see what’s going on here.”
Ren’s face turned red.
“You’re just scared I’m gonna get more girls than you, and you don’t wanna get embarrassed, huh?”
The maddening hypothesis was enough to make Ren laugh. “Y-yeah, you caught me Ryuji.”
“Hey, what the hell was that laugh for?! It could totally happen! And that’s the only logical explanation for you not wanting to go out tonight… well unless you found a girl already, but there’s no way THAT would happen.”
“Y-yeah, no. I’m just… kinda tired tonight. Sorry man.”
Thankfully, Ryuji seemed to lighten up a bit.
“Hey man, don’t worry about it. I’m just gonna go find Mishima and the two of us will patrol the beach. Heh, I definitely don’t gotta worry about losing any girls to HIM, amiright?”
“Y-yeah, definitely Ryuji. Look, I gotta go. Good luck out there.”
“Aight, later man.”
Finally, Ren hung up the phone, and placed it back in his pocket. He looked back up at Makoto, and despite him expecting her face to be filled with malice, she seemed surprisingly calm.
“I am so sorry about that Makoto… you know how Ryuji can be sometimes though, heh.”
“Eheh, yeah…” Makoto responded. “What was he asking about?”
“Oh, him and Mishima-kun are going out to try and hit on some girls or something I guess.”
Makoto laughed, seeming to have no difficulty believing Ryuji to want to try and pull that off.
“Yeah, that sounds pretty accurate.”
Ren laughed back. “Yeah.”
A moment of silence fell between the two of them. For a second, anxiety began creeping into Rens head once again, worried that the moment that he had been praying would happen for so long had just been ruined. His worry was lifted when Makoto broke the silence.
“S-so, um…”
She pushed her hair over behind her ear, looking back at the ocean waves rolling onto the shore. Ren waited for her to finish her sentence on baited breath, but another moment of silence came to. Thankfully, she once again broke it.
“M-Mishma-kun isn’t gonna be in your room, huh…?”
Unknowingly, Makoto really was testing the limit of how fast Rens heart could beat. Although he felt like she may have been just as nervous as he was. A plethora of thoughts and images rushed to the young mans head, her question presenting more than just one simple answer. He knew he had to seize this moment if he wanted this night to go just like how he had dreamed it would go. He didn’t want to come on too strong though and back her into a corner, so he decided to play it safe with his answer.
“Y-yeah, I… I guess not…”
To his surprise, the normally confident, outspoken young woman let out a heavy sigh.
“I-I’m sorry, I’m… God, this is so embarrassing. I’m older than you, I’m supposed to take charge in these situations, but… to be honest, I… I’ve never really been good at this stuff. I’ve never really had a… b-boyfriend or anything…”
That last part came as a complete shock to Ren. The fact that the most beautiful, intelligent, kind hearted woman in all of Shujin Academy’s entire history had never had a boyfriend was completely unimaginable. On top of that, the fact that she felt like HE would make for a proper candidate, after all the other talented and probably much less troubled men at school were still around. But after hearing that, despite his own lack of experience in the subject, Ren knew it was up to him to handle the situation. He reached out his hand and grabbed hers, giving it a tender squeeze, then looked her in the eyes as he offered her a warm, calming smile to reassure her that her worries could be washed away.
“Would you like to come up to my room then?”
Makoto’s face went a bright crimson, letting out a gentle shaky moan. She paused for a moment before giving a proper answer, taking the time to properly think of how she wanted to respond. Finally, she came to an answer.
“I… I think I’d like that.”
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With the swipe of a keycard, Ren opened the door to his hotel room, with Makoto right behind him. Fortunately, they didn’t bump into any of their friends, avoiding any unnecessary confrontation about why the two of them were alone together. Ren didn’t want to worry about his teammates right now. All that was on his mind that night was the wonderful girl that he brought to his room. The girl who’s lived in Ren’s head for the past few weeks. Seeing that the room was indeed empty, Ren gestured for Makoto to walk in first. She gave a courteous nod, then walked inside, with Ren right behind, closing the door behind them.
The tension was palpable. Neither of them wanted to ruin the moment, so neither of them wanted to be the one to start it. Ren shifted awkwardly, then looked at Makoto.
“So… what would you like to do now?” he asked, hoping go to gain some insight on what she’d be comfortable starting with.
“U-um… well…” Makoto muttered nervously. She looked down at the floor, grabbing her forearm and rubbing it gently. Letting out a sigh, she shook her head, clenched her fists, then turned to meet Ren’s gaze again, with a much more confident expression, shocking him a bit.
“I…” she continued, this time sounding much more confident. But as quick as it came, her bravado instantly dissipated, and she shook her head and covered her face again. “Why… why is this… so hard? It’s like I know what I want to say, but I just…”
Ren, once again feeling he had to save the situation, decided to make his move. He quickly closed the distance between the two of them, grabbing her face, and pulling her lips back onto his. She let out a shocked moan, then, once she had gathered what was going on, threw her hands behind his head and grabbed onto his fluffy black hair. The two of them passionately kissed, as Ren began to pull the girl of his dreams onto the bed. She laid down, her legs still off the edge of the bed partially, but the rest of her body laying against the admittedly scratchy hotel comforter, as Ren laid right beside her, continuing to press his lips to hers.
Feeling his phone buzz again, Ren quickly reached into his pocket and placed his phone on the bedside table. Makoto watched as he did this, giving him a concerned look.
“Um, are you sure you don’t want to check that?” she asked considerately. Ren shook his head in response.
“No, it’s okay.” he added. “Besides, the only thing I care about right now… is right here in front of me.”
Makoto blushed and smiled at him.
“Oh Ren…”
The two of them continued their loving embrace, letting their hands explore each others bodies. Seeking to test out her limits, Ren moved one hand over one of her breasts, rubbing it gently above her bikini top. She let out a few gentle moans into his mouth as he did this, giving Ren all the encouragement he needed to push even deeper. Pulling his hand off for a moment, he slide it down lower under her chest, then moved his hand back up, now under her bikini. He gave her breast a firm squeeze as he continued to rub her, letting his thumb glide across her nipple a few times over.
“A-ahh…” she moaned out. “R-Ren, that’s…”
“Hm?” Ren asked, meeting her gaze. “Is… this okay?”
Makoto nodded, now turning her head away from him, likely due to embarrassment. “It…it’s good…”
Taking the message, Ren continued to massage her breast, as he began to move his lips down her body, starting with her cheek, then onto her neck. Once he reached that point, Makotos reactions became more intense, her breathing getting louder.
Makoto was never exactly a shy girl. Given that she was the class president, she was no stranger to things line public speaking, talking to students she didn’t know personally, and, especially recently, she wasn’t one to back down from a fight. But for some reason, it seemed to Ren that in the field of romance and sexual interactions, Makoto was a completely different person. From the moment the conversation began to turn romantic, she went from the brazen, mafia busting Queen that the Phantom Thief leader had gotten to know, to a red faced stumbling mess. There was something about seeing this new side of her that intrigued Ren.
So much so that he was eager to see more.
Ren moved his hand from passed her bikini, and began to let it travel around her body, going lower, and eventually landing on her stomach for a moment. The two had let their lips meet once again, and continued their passionate embrace. Ready to escalate things, Ren moved his fingers to rim of her bikini bottom. In a flash, Makoto quickly grabbed his hand.
“W-wait!” she pleaded. “Th-that’s not…”
“It’s okay.” the leader reassured her, as he slid his fingers lower, going under her clothes, and between her legs. He extended his middle finger over her clitoris, taking notice of how wet it was.
“Gh-ahh…” Makoto moaned out. “R-Ren… I-Ha-ahh…”
She moved her hand off of his wrist and onto the bed sheets, clenching them hard, while her other hand rested on the back of Rens head.
“I can tell you’re enjoying this Makoto.” Ren spoke smoothly, a tone of pride along with it.
“D-don’t tease me…”
Ren laughed.
“I can’t help it. You’re so adorable, Makoto-senpai.”
“C-come on now… I… haaa…”
Ren continued to let his finger dance around on her, listening to the sounds of pleasure she let out, changing his pace and intensity at the sound of her voice. He began planting his lips on her neck over and over as well, occasionally letting his tongue slip out and licking her neck as well, something that, based on her reactions, she was enjoying as well.
“You’re quite sensitive down there.” Ren continued to tease. “Don’t tell me our polite, well behaved student council president has done this to herself before…”
“Wh-what’s this all of a sudden?” Makoto asked, her face flushed.
“Hmm… I wonder what gets you off…”
“S-stop that…!”
“Hm? You won’t tell me then?”
“O-of course not! That’s s-so embarrassing…”
Suddenly, Ren quickened his pace with his finger, causing Makoto to let out what could only be described as almost a yelp.
“H-hey!” she whined. “S-slow down! It’s t-too much!”
“Oh?” Ren teased. “I’ll slow down… if you answer my questions..”
“C-come on, seriously? I can’t j-just… haaa…”
“Have you done naughty things like this before Makoto-senpai?”
Makoto breathed heavily, contemplating whether or not she could muster up the courage to even answer his demands. While part of her knew she could never back down from a challenge, the other part knew she was completely outmatched her at the moment. Defeated, she gave Ren the answer he wanted to hear.
“Y-yes, okay? I… I have.”
Ren chuckled deeply. “You’re such a naughty girl, aren’t you?”
“S-stop it…” Makoto said, turning her head away.
“So… what turns you on then?”
“Th-this again?”
Without warning, Ren once again speeds up his finger, sending Makoto into a panic, gripping the sheets with all her might as her legs danced around, unable to stay still.
“I…I…don’t…know….”
“Come on now, we both know that’s not true…”
Makoto was outmatched in this fight. Despite it being what she assumed was his first time as well, he had already seemingly mastered her own body. A sudden bursting sensation took over her body, leaving her mind completely blank. She felt what was about to happen, and knew that, at this rate, there was nothing she could do to prevent it. There was no way around it.
“R-Ren… I’m g-gonna…”
Ren finished her sentence in his head, taking the hint. He continued to do exactly as he was doing, in order to bring her the greatest amount of pleasure. After just a few more seconds, Makoto gripped the bed with all her strength, lifted her hips up, and let out a powerful moan of pleasure. She then lay flat back onto the bed, shaking and breathing heavily. Ren removed his fingers from under her clothes, examining what gave the girl he loved such pleasure.
“My my…” he said teasingly. “Looks like you couldn’t resist my abilities. How…”
Before he could finish, he looked over at Makoto, who’s head was turned away from him. He noticed her shaking while holding her hands over her face. Ren began to worry. Perhaps his teasing was a bit too much for her, especially on their first time together. He knew he had to fix this.
“H-hey… is… everything okay?”
She didn’t respond for a moment. After a few seconds of silence, she spoke, her voice slightly shaky.
“I… I can’t b-believe… I just did that… in front of y-you… I’m so… embarrassed…”
A wave of guilt washed over the Phantom Thief leader. What was supposed to be playful sexual banter ended up making him feel like he was just picking on her. The thought that he may have ruined their first time caused his heart to drop into his stomach. He knew he shouldn’t have been so cocky, but he believed she might’ve been enjoying it. It at least brought her to climax. But what good would that be if she was horribly embarrassed by it? Ren had to save the situation. But before he could say anything, Makoto continued talking.
“I… I never knew sex could be so… so…”
Ren dreaded the adjective she was about to use to describe it. When she finished her sentence, it was safe to say it wasn’t one he was expecting.
“… Competitive.”
Slowly, she lowered her hands off her face. She then turned and gave Ren a sharp glare. He audibly swallowed, his face turning beat red.
“U-uhhh…” he stammered. “What… do you-“
Before he could continue, Makoto quickly pushed Ren down onto the bed, climbing on top of him, her knees resting on each side of his hips. Ren’s anxiety spiked as he prepared himself for whatever hell he had just set himself up for.
“You haven’t defeated me Ren Amamiya. Not even close.”
The moment she finished her sentence, she grabbed hold of Rens face and kissed him assertively. As the kissing became more intense, she began to grind on top of his hard member.
“M-Makoto…” he moaned out, as her lips moved to his neck.
“Come on, you can take more than just this can’t you?” she challenged. As she said this, she began to kiss her way down his body. Ren watched as her lips moved from his neck, onto his shoulders, down his chest, and finally his stomach. She pulled her head back, and reached her hand out to rub the bulge coming from in his swim trunks.
“Wow… you’re so hard Ren.” Makoto commented, a smile on her face.
“W-well…” Ren began to defend himself. “You’re the one who got me like this Makoto.”
Her gaze quickly caught his again, as she let out a shocked moan, her cheeks turning red. Suddenly, she shook her head, her demeanor changing back to a more confident and defiant look.
“G-good. Then… I’ll have to take responsibility and make you feel really good then.”
Unable to wait any longer, Makoto grabbed his trunks by the side and tugged them over his waist. As she did so, his large erection sprung out, making Makoto gasp in surprise.
“W-wow… So this is…”
Ren couldn’t believe his eyes. The girl of his dreams, staring right at his private area. He had imagined this scene in his head before, but he never expected it to ever happen in reality.
Makoto took hold of his cock, closely examining it.
“S-so now… I just…”
Instead of finishing her sentence with words, she began stroking his cock up and down between her fingers. Ren watched on, his face completely flushed. Her grip was firm, but not too tight, and her movement was slow and sensual. She looked up at Ren, watching his expression change as a way to help her gauge how he must be feeling.
“M-Makoto…” he said breathily. “C-can you… use your mouth?”
Makoto gasped in surprise. “Y-you want me to… u-use my mouth?”
Ren nodded.
Makoto paused for a moment, taking a moment to think. After a brief silence, her demeanor changed from looking conflicted and surprised back to her confident stare. She nodded back at him.
“I’ll do it. I-if it makes you feel good…”
She moved her face closer to his cock. She could feel the warmth radiate from it, the same way Ren could feel her warm breath on him.
“S-so I just…” Makoto asked, sounding unsure on what to do next.
“Just… start by licking from the bottom… then working your way up.” Ren requested.
Makoto nodded in response. After taking a second to mentally prepare herself, she gently stuck her tongue out, a soft moan coming out with it, and placed it against the bottom of Rens hard shaft. Ever so slowly, she dragged her tongue up roughly halfway up before lifting it away and starting from the bottom again, repeating this a few times to the sound of her new boyfriends moans. After enough teasing, the last stroke brought her to the tip, as she swirled her tongue around it.
“Ngh… Ahhh…” Ren moaned out.
Without warning, Makoto took the tip of his penis in her mouth, sealing her lips around it, then moving her head down, allowing him to reach closer to her throat.
“GAH!” Ren belted out in shock. Makoto quickly retracted her mouth from him in response and looked up at him with a panicked look on her face.
“A-are you okay?” she asked worriedly.
“Y-yeah, I just… wasn’t expecting it.” Ren answered truthfully.
“I-I’m sorry for taking initiative like that… Aiko told me that’s something she does to her boyfriends to make them feel good… was it… good?”
Ren stared at her for a moment. The moment happened then ended so quickly that he hardly had time to process the feeling of it. All he knew is he wanted to feel it again.
“P-please do it more.” he said sheepishly.
Makoto giggled, looking up at him. “You’re so cute Ren.”
Happy to oblige to his request, Makoto continued to suck on the tip of his dick some more, pushing it deeper in her mouth, then moving back up, continuing this back and forth motion. She started off slowly, letting our gentle moans as she did so, all while still stroking the lower half of his cock up and down along with the motion of her head.
Ren laid back, unable to suppress his shaky moans. The feeling of her soft lips wrapping around him, accompanied by her warm, wet tongue gliding up and down, and topped off with her breathy moans and synced up stroking. Ren was convinced that no other feeling in the world could ever top what he was experiencing in that very moment. The girl of his dreams, diligently pleasuring him felt like it had to be a dream. Were it one however, Ren hoped he would never have to wake up.
Suddenly, an intense sensation began rushing through his body and heading towards his waist. Realizing what was about to happen, he knew he had to warn Makoto.
“M-Makoto!” he grunted out, his words shaking like tree branches in a hurricane. “W-wait, I think I’m about to… to…”
To his surprise, she didn’t wait. In fact, if he didn’t know any better, it almost felt like she started moving faster. All out of options, Ren had no choice but to harness that rushing feeling.
And then, all at once, releasing it.
“GYAH!”
Ren aggressively tore at the bedsheets with his hands, lifting his hips up slightly as cum shot from inside of him and into her mouth. Makoto let out a loud and sharp moan as she felt her mouth become coated with the reward she gained from pleasuring him.
After feeling confidant that he was finished, his hips lowering and his breath becoming softer, she removed her mouth from his cock, then quickly moving her hand over her mouth and forcefully closing her eyes.
“M-Makoto!” Ren said in a panic, looking up at her. “I-I’m so sorry, you can spit it out if you-“
To his surprise, Makoto shook her head. After a moment of her breathing heavily through her nose, she made a strong, audible swallow, then opened her mouth once again to breath, her tongue absent of any trace of him.
“Wow…” she said breathily. “I never imagined myself ever doing that but… wow. Was it… good?”
Ren nodded rapidly. “Y-yes… very good.”
Makoto giggled. “I’m glad.”
Silence filled the hotel room. The two young lovers awkwardly avoided eye contact, unable to find the courage to really discuss what had transpired. Which both of them considered quite ironic, given the many tasks they had already accomplished in the terrifying life and death situations in the Metaverse. Even after defeating monstrous Shadows and stealing the hearts of dangerous criminals, expressing their love for each other in a physical way felt like the scariest thing they had ever done, but at the same time, it was everything they could have ever wanted.
“U-um… you’re still…” Makoto muttered. Ren looked back and followed her gaze, noticing she was staring at his dick, still stiff as a board.
“O-oh… um… sorry…”
Makoto shook her head. “It’s okay. After all, at our age, it only makes sense that you would have so much energy.”
Ren smiled bashfully, his eyes darting to the side to avoid her sensual gaze.
“Lucky for you…” she continued. “So do I.”
Ren let out a small gasp, letting his eyes turn back to her. Makoto stood up on the side of the bed, taking the sides of her bikini bottom, and gently moving them down her legs, lifting one foot up to pull her leg out, followed by the other. Being the tidy woman she was, she carefully folded her undergarments before tossing them on the floor. Reaching behind her back, she untied her top, then moved her hands over to cup her chest as the strings of her bikini slid down her side. Her eyes turned to Ren, giving him an embarrassed look, and moving her eyes away. Taking the message, Ren quickly looked the other direction. As he did, he heard a gentle thud of the bikini hitting the hotel room floor.
Ren continued to stare at the hotel wall art. He wanted to look at the woman that he loved so badly, but he knew she was feeling a bit self conscious, so he used all his strength to keep his eyes away for the time being. As he did so, he felt a pair of hands on his hips, gripping once again at his swim trunks. Taking the hint, he lifted his hips up and let her slide his shorts off. Folding them as well, she placed them on the floor next to hers. He felt the bed wobble a bit as she began to crawl her way back towards him, his heart practically beating out of his chest.
Without warning, Makotos hand took hold of one of Rens, and guided it between her legs, placing his fingers by the place Ren wanted so desperately to be inside. She was sopping wet.
“S-see? I have a lot of energy too Ren.” Makoto said, almost as if she was trying to prove something, either to him, or maybe ever herself.
Before she could continue, a sudden realization struck Ren. Something he couldn’t forget to bring up.
“W-wait!”
Makoto stopped in shock as Ren quickly jolted his body up, turning his face to hers.
“We should… probably use protection, right?”
“O-oh! Right… of course… good catch on that.”
Fortunately, Ren had just remembered something the day before the flight.
As Ren was packing, Ryuji texted him saying he had a gift for him. When he came by, he gave Ren a few boxes of condoms he had purchased from the local drugstore. Not expecting to use them, but not wanting to waste them, Ren packed the condoms just in case. And now, current Ren was thanking Past Ren for his over cautiousness.
Awkwardly shuffling off the creaky hotel bed, Ren walked over to his bag and pulled the box and opened it, pulling out a small square wrapper with a circular imprint in the center. Tearing the wrapper, he pulled out the condom and properly wrapped it over his erection.
“T-there. Just to be safe.”
Makoto nodded, a smile on her face. She seemed happy that her partner was so considerate.
Ren crawled back onto the bed, once again laying down on his back. He looked back up at Makoto, who seemed a bit stiff at the moment.
“S-sorry… I kinda ruined the moment there, huh…?”
“N-no! It’s not that.” Makoto reassured. “I’m actually quite grateful that you thought of that… I just…”
Another moment of silence.
“I think…” she continued slowly. “I’m just surprised at myself. I was getting so involved in the moment that I almost did something q-quite dangerous for us. I feel like I haven’t been… really thinking clearly, I’ve just been acting on instinct… it’s… unlike me.”
Ren looked up at Makoto, unsure of whether or not she meant that in a good way or a bad way. Not wanting to push her in a direction she didn’t want to go in, he quickly tried to deescalate the situation.
“W-we can stop if you… need a moment.”
To his surprise, Makoto shook her head.
“No… in fact… I actually feel amazing. For so long, I always felt like every plan had to be completely mapped out. I could never do anything with out a clear idea of how it was going to happen. That’s how I thought… how I was told to live my life. But right now, I feel like I can just… do exactly what I want when I want without having to think about it too much.”
Ren stared as Makoto spoke with such passion behind her voice. Ever since she joined the Phantom Thieves, he’s had the pleasure of watching this young woman really grow and figure out who she was and what she wanted from life. He smiled at her.
“I’m proud of you Makoto. You’ve grown so much since I met you.”
Makoto smiled back. “It’s all thanks to all of you… Thank you… Ren.”
After a moment of just staring into each others eyes, Ren sat up and placed a soft kiss on her lips, one she was more than happy to return.
“A-and now…” Makoto continued, as she slowly crawled on top of Ren, straddling his hips with her legs. “I know exactly… what I want…”
As she finished her sentence, she took hold of Rens cock and let it graze by her clitoris, then moving further down. Ren felt as she slowly guided him inside of her. After only the tip had entered, Makoto’s face tightened up. Ren took a hold of her face, bringing her eyes to meet his.
“It’s okay… take your time.” he assured her.
Makoto looked back at him, then nodded. Ever so slowly, she began moving her hips down, letting him reach deeper inside of her. Both of their breathing became heavier the deeper he went inside of her, their eyes locked onto each others.
Finally, with one last, hard push, she had finally welcomed all of him inside of her. As she did so, both of them let out fierce moans, both a mix of ultimate pleasure, yet discomfort at the same time, as their bodies slowly adjusted to each other.
“I-it’s in…” Makoto said, a bit of pride in her voice hidden behind her breathy moans.
“M-Makoto…”
Makoto smiled at Ren. “It’s… in… I’m so… so happy…”
A tear rolled down her cheek. Just like before, Ren caught it with his thumb.
“Makoto… I…”
Deciding actions would speak louder than words, Ren pulled her into a passionate kiss. After a few seconds, Makoto began to slowly lift herself up, then push herself back down, feeling his cock rubbing at her insides. Every movement she made caused both of them to squirm and moan in pleasure. She began to quicken her pace, sliding him up and down faster. Unable to hold back, Ren lifted himself up and wrapped his arms around her back.
“M-Makoto!” he moaned loudly. As he did so, he began moving his own hips up and down, putting in more force than Makoto had been previously.
“H-hey! W-wait, it’s t-too much!” Makoto moaned out.
The two of then moaned louder and louder as Ren moved harder and faster.
Both of them felt like they were at the apex of pleasure. Every inch Ren moved, both of them cried out in pleasure, as Ren pulled Makoto back into a kiss, letting them moan into each others mouths.
“R-Ren… I’m… I’m gonna… cum again…”
“D-do it Makoto! C-cum on my cock! P-please!”
After a few more powerful pushes, Makoto gripped tightly onto Rens back, moaning loudly by his ear.
“Ren… Ren… Ren… I’m c-cumming! I’m… AHH!”
With that, Makoto’s whole body tightened as she squeezed tightly onto her lover. A rushing sensation coursed through her, followed by a powerful release, an orgasm noticeably much stronger than the last one.
Ren stopped moving, letting her catch her breath as her face rested over his shoulder. Ren stroked the back of her hair, then placed a kiss on her sweaty cheek.
“Ren…” Makoto moaned softly.
“Makoto…” Ren mirrored.
Makoto pulled herself off of him, falling onto her back exhausted. Ren remained sitting up, but he looked like he could tip over at any moment with how heavy his breathing was.
“R-Ren…” Makoto spoke up again. Rens gaze turned to look at his girlfriend. As their eyes met, they let their eyes carry on a bit of the conversation before she spoke further.
“I… I want you… to cum again too…s-so… please…”
As she finished, she placed her fingers between her legs and gently spread herself open once again.
“P-please keep fucking me until you cum.”
Ren let a moan escape his lips once again, as he stared at Makoto in amazement. Wanting to adhere to both the request she made, as well as the request his own body was making, he nodded, then moved over his lover.
As he stared down at her, his cock once again rubbing against her pussy, he realized he couldn’t hold back anymore. He didn’t want one more moment to pass without her knowing exactly how he felt.
“Makoto… I… I want you to know that… I…”
Makoto looked up at him expectantly.
“I… I love you Makoto!” Ren exclaimed proudly.
Makotos face lit up like she was given the best news she had ever heard. Once again, her eyes began to fill up with tears.
“Ren… I love you too… I… I love you…!”
Unable to stop his body anymore, Ren moved his way back inside her, this time much quicker than before, causing her to let out a sharp moan.
“I… I love you Makoto!” he said, moving is cock in and out of her at a rapid pace.
“I love… you… R-Ren…”
“I love you!”
“Y-yes… don’t stop Ren… don’t… ever stop! F-fill me with… y-your love!”
“Makoto… Makoto!”
It wasn’t long until Ren felt a similar sensation to the one from before. He continued to push deep inside of her, giving her everything she wanted. Nothing was holding him back from how he felt anymore. Finally, the two of them were able to show their love for each other in the most physical and powerful way possible.
“Makoto… I’m gonna c-cum…”
“Yes Ren! C-cum inside of me… do it!”
After a few more powerful strokes, it was over. A warm blast came from inside of him and filled the end of his condom completely, as the both of them let out another loud and passionate yell of pleasure. After a few seconds of waiting to recover, Ren pulled his cock out, then flopped over beside Makoto, completely depleted of energy. The both of them laid there, heavily taking in as much air as their lungs could handle.
“Ren…” Makoto spoke softly, as she carefully wrapped her arm and leg around him, pulling him as close as he could be, before kissing his lips once more.
The two of them lay in each others arms. It could have been for seconds, or possibly hours. Neither of them could tell anymore. All that mattered is they were finally together. Nothing could possibly ruin the moment that they had created together.
Or so they had hoped.
Just over on the bedside table, Rens phone was loudly buzzing.
“You’ve got to be kidding…” Ren mumbled.
“It’s okay.” Makoto assured him, a faint, but still genuine, smile on her face. “It could be important.”
With a sigh, Ren reached over to grab his phone, only to see several missed texts from various people. Most notably, Ryuji, Mishima, and Futaba.
“Oh man… I’ve been getting blown up that whole time and I didn’t realize.”
First, a lone text from Mishima.
Hey Amamiya! Um, if Sakamato asks where I am, tell him I got sick and went back to my room. I just met up with a really hot girl who apparently has a thing for Japanese men, so uh, prettttty sure I’m gonna be busy tonight! Don’t wait up okay?
Ren rolled his eyes at that. Next up was a pair of texts from Ryuji.
Hey man, have you seen Mishima? Dude totally flaked on me and I haven’t seen him all night! I know you’re on your walk or whatevs, so let me know if you see him, k?
The next text caused Rens stomach to twist in a knot.
Dude, holy shit man, you’ll never believe what just happened. I went back to your guy’s room, and I heard two people getting… it… ON in there! Don’t tell me Mishima ACTUALLY scored a hottie and didn’t tell me? That’s it, I’m gonna get myself a cute babe around my arm and bring her back to MY room and THEN we’ll see who has the last laugh!
“Oh no…” Ren said, covering his face with his hand.
“What? What happened?” Makoto asked worriedly.
“Oh… I guess Ryuji came by and… kinda… sorta heard us in here?”
“Wh-WHAT? Oh my gosh, that’s so-“
“It’s okay! It’s okay! I-I think he thinks it was Mishima in here, so we should be in the clear.”
“Oh… thank goodness then… I’m…”
Makoto trailed off for a moment before continuing.
“I’m… okay with the rest of the group knowing about… us. I just want them to hear it FROM us, when we’re ready, you know?”
Ren smiled and nodded. Knowing he didn’t have to keep something so important to him as a secret was an immense weight lifted off of his shoulders.
This unfortunately didn’t last after he read his many missed texts from Futaba.
Woah-ho-ho Ren! Putting the moves on Makoto I see? Very smooth! Your charm stat must be pretty high to pull that off!
Um… Ren, you know I can see and hear you from your phone right? Can you like… maybe turn it off if you go back to your hotel room? I mean like, I won’t judge or anything, I definitely ship you guys, but I don’t need to involved in this.
Oh my god you’re actually going back to your room, please turn your phone off.
REN PLEASE TURN YOUR PHONE OFF I DON’T WANT TO HEAR ANY OF THIS
OH MY GOD CLOTHES ARE GOING EVERYWHERE, OKAY, I’M TURNING THE CAMERA OFF. But if YOU GUYS END UP IN DANGER DON’T COME CRYING TO ME? ALIBABA OUT!
Rens face was completely red. Of all people, Futaba had to be near the bottom of the list of people he wanted to hear about this.
“Well… so much for telling them when we were ready.”
As he said this, opting out of explaining it, he instead handed his phone to Makoto. Once she finished reading it, she covered her face with her hands and let out a heavy groan.
“I’m so embarrassed…”
Ren looked away from her, a wave of guilt surging over him. What was supposed to be a romantic night of passion and love turned into a bit of a disaster. He knew how much of an organized person Makoto was, so not being able to give her a nice, peaceful evening was eating away at him.
“Listen, Makoto, I-“
Before he could finish, he was once again interrupted, this time by a knock at the door.
“Oh what NOW?”
Putting his shorts back on, Ren marched over to the door and slightly opened it, only to see one of his friends on the other side.
“Y-Yusuke?”
Yusuke looked at Ren with a shocked expression once he realized who was behind the door.
“Oh my. I apologize Ren, I didn’t realize this was your room.”
“Yeah, well… why did you knock then?”
Yusuke let out a chuckle. “Isn’t it obvious? I was captivated by the sounds of two lovers engaged in the most intense and passionate display of physical affection, and I had to know where the sound was coming from!”
Rens jumped back in shock at Yusukes proud proclamation.
“And now that I know it was you, this makes things much easier for me!” Yusuke continued excitedly. “If the sounds drew me in, then I knew that the sight must be absolutely breath taking. So if you would, please allow me to use the sight of your love making as the next great art piece for my-“
Before he could finish his request, Ren slammed the door in his face. After his anger subsided, the exhaustion really set in.
It had been a long day. Even though he found out that the girl that he loved loved him back, and even though they got to express that love through intensive physical acts, all the chaos that had just transpired was enough to give Ren a headache. He looked over at his girlfriend, her face still buried in her hands. He could only imagine the stress and embarrassment she must have been feeling at that moment.
“Makoto…” he said weakly, walking back over to the bed. “I’m… sorry, I didn’t expect things to turn out like-“
To his surprise, he heard a snicker coming from behind her hands.
“M-Makoto?”
She couldn’t hold back. Makoto laughed out loud, unable to stop herself. Ren looked on in utter confusion.
After her laughing stopped, she looked up at Ren, a smile on her face.
“Hey… it’s okay… really.” she said, walking up to her boyfriend and wrapping her hands around his head. “This night has been… incredible. It doesn’t matter about what Yusuke or Ryuji or anyone else thinks of this. All I know is I had the most amazing night with… with the guy that I love.”
Ren looked at Makoto in shock. The stuck up student council president really was lost to the past. She was a new person. And he couldn’t help but notice that right then and there, she looked the happiest he had ever seen her.
“Makoto… you’re right. This night… it will always be our night. I… I love you… Makoto.”
Makoto smiled, pulling Ren in closer.
“I love you too… Ren…”
And with one more kiss, their first night together had come to an end. It wasn’t perfect, and at times, it was pretty close to terrible realistically speaking. But in the end, they both were happy, because they knew that after today, every day from there on out was theirs to seize.
Together.
“Hello?… Should I go get my easel then? Are you still in there? Hellooo?”
FIN
